书面表达专题练习——祝贺信
袁道铁
一.文体概述: 祝贺信是指在日常生活中，得知同学或朋友竞赛获奖、考上大学、结婚、过新年或重大节日等，给对方祝贺的信件。书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。祝贺信通常包括以下内容：祝贺事由→所取得的成绩→被祝贺人过去的努力→被祝贺人的优点→表达自己的愿望。
二.具体写作步骤：
1. Use the word "congratulations" early in your letter.
2. Mention the reason why you congratulate someone, such as graduation, promotion, honor, baby.
3. Tell how happy, pleased, proud or impressed you are and why.
4. If necessary, tell how you learned about the good news. If you read it the newspaper, enclose the clipping or photocopy of it.
5.Close your letter with wishes for the person or expressions of your confidence: wish the person continued success and happiness; express your confidence in a bright future; assure the person of your love, affection, admiration, warmth, interest, delight, pleasure or continued business support.
6.Contents: cause；what and when；best wishes.
三、常用语块
1.接受我最诚的挚恭喜/祝贺……
2. 很高兴听到……
3.很高兴得知你……
4. 我想表达我对……的祝贺
5.我为你……感到非常高兴
6.……是相当令人振奋的消息！
7. 我知道这肯定是因为……
8.是你非常值得的奖赏
9. 祝你一切顺利!
10.祝你心想事成!
四.套用句式
1.我很高兴你梦想成真。
2.我写这封信是为了表达我对你英语演讲比赛获得第一名的祝贺
3. 祝贺你高考成功。
4. 请接受我最诚挚的祝贺和对未来最良好的祝愿。
5.我希望你的未来是灿烂的。
6.我们都为你所取得的巨大成就感到骄傲。
五.模版Dear ______ ,
①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝贺事由）. ②
I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. ③You must be ______. ④And I feel very happy for you.
⑤ ______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥
I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝贺人过去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝贺人的优点）.
⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨询对方何时有空）.⑨I hope ______（表达自己的愿望）. ⑩My best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
六.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)
Dear Henry,
I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduation. As your close friend, I just want you to know what lucky I am to be able to share your pride and howpleased I was at your admission. In my views, you work hard and besides that, youare a very intelligence person. This admission is areward where you richly deserve. I am sure youwill make a greater progress in your study and obtain a brightly future in your life.
I wish you greater success in your school career and I am look forward to good news from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
七．范文展示:假如你是李华，你的好友魏芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据
以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1. 表达你的愉悦心情；2.向她表示祝贺； 3.请她介绍成功的经验；
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech Contest Dear Wei Fang,
I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of MiddleSchool Students, so I’mwriting to givemy sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news. As your best friend, I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression. It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest. Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.
I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
八.练习假定你是李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，给他写一封祝贺信，要点如下：
1. 天天练习讲汉语，从不会到流利，终于成功。
2. 继续努力，有机会来中国留学
3. 希望见面和交流。
注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：“汉语桥”世界大学生中文演讲比赛“Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
教师点评：
我的收获：1.常用词汇
2.常用句型
答案三1. Accept my sincerest congratulations
2.How happy I am to hear...
3.I have learned with delight that you…
I have learned with delight that you…4.I would like to express my congratulations on…5.I feel very happy for you (r)…6.…is quite exciting news 7.I know this is surely owing to…8.It is a reward that you richly deserve for your…9.Wish you all the best!10.May all your wishes come true!
四.1.I feel very happy for your dream has come true.
2. I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.
3. Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.
4. Please accept my warmest regards.
5.I hope your future will be glorious.
五1.congratulations后+on 2.graduation--graduate 3.what--- how 4.was--- am 5. Views---view 6.intelligence---intelligent7. Where--that/which或去掉8.去掉greater前的a 9.brightly--- bright10. Look -- looking
八．Dear Peter,
I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest. I know that you were not good at Chinese at first. However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day. As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”. Finally, you succeeded! In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student.
So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition. If you
go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China. At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
高考英语专题系列-高考英语作文高分万能句子高考英语作文高分万能句子 天津卷常用句型 提出主题 There is a widespread concern overthe issue that… The topic of(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. …has attracted extensive(广泛的)attention of the society. There is no consensus (一致) of opinion among people as to the view of… 展开 Firstly…secondly(besides)…thirdly(finally) For one thing…for another…what's more… On one hand…on the other hand…moreover… 转折 On the contrary… however, a coin has two sides… You can't take your cake and eatit. 自己的看法 In my opinion As far as I am concerned From my point of view, With reference to my standpoint , 喊口号 I think / I firmly support… Only through…can we… 说明事物现状(一句带过) Nowadays, there is a widespreadconcern over (the issue that)作文题目. In fact, there are both advantagesand disadvantages in 题目议题. 事物本身的优缺点 Its advantages can be seen as follows…
应用文-----建议信 1．master＝have a good command of v．掌握 2. improve v．提高 3. pronounce v．发音 4. grateful adj.感激的 5. spelling n．拼写；拼法 6. usage n．使用；用法 7. standard n．标准 8. take notes 记笔记 9. take part in the English Corner 参加英语角 10. improve writing skills 提高写作能力 11. have a good knowledge of English 通晓英语 12. work hard at English 努力学习英语 13. step by step 逐步地；一步步地 14. be afraid of making mistakes 害怕出错 (2015·四川卷)【参考范文】 Hi Sharon, This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin. Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress. In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. Hope for you early reply! Yours Sincerely Li Xia (2015·淄博模拟)【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone! It's my honor to be here to make a short speech. Recently I have found that some of our classmates can't study effectively. Some can't help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health. As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let's spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well. That's all. Thank you for listening! 应用文-----邀请信 1．ancestor n．祖先 2．discovery n．发现 3．imagination n．想象力 4．technology n．技术 5．benefit n．益处；利益 6．ancient adj.古代的 7．vivid adj.生动的；形象的 8．civilized adj.文明的 9．fascinating adj.魅力无穷的 10．invent v．发明 11．present v．呈现 12．be located in... 坐落在…… 13．attract one's attention 吸引某人的注意力14．beyond imagination 超出想像 15．It is universally acknowledged that... 众所周知…… (2015·全国新课标Ⅰ卷) 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?
2011高考英语书面表达强化训练 历届高考英语书面表达中使用过的词组总汇 1.a boy of 14. 2.a brief discussion 3.a heated discussion about 4.a waste of time 5.a wilderness survival program 6.achieve this goal 7.after a short rest 8.after—class activities 9.agree with what sb says 10.air pollution 11.an English speech contest 12.arrive at an agreement 13.as far as I know 14.as for myself 15.as is shown on Chart 2 16.as we all know 17.as well 18.at home and abroad 19.at the age of 20.at weekends 21.attend classes 22.attractive and meaningful 23.be about to do---when 24.be against the idea of— 25.be available 26.be fond of 27.be healthier and more energetic 28.be on the point of doing sth when 29.be trained 30.Best wishes 31.break the rules 32.build a “harmonious society 33.catch sight of 34.charge fees for 35.chat with friends online about 36.cheating in examinations 37.collect stamps 38.get close to nature 39.cover the entrance fees 40.deal with this problem 41.develop its economy scientifically 42.develop rapidly 43.do a lot of harm 44.do endless homework 45.early in the morning 46.express thanks to 47.fail in the exams 48.follow one’s own interests 49.for one reason, for another reason 50.for this purpose 51.form/ develop/get into a bad habit 52.free of charge 53.get along well with 54.get better results 55.get cheated 56.get everything ready for 57get rid of/ kick off 58.get the free medical care 59.get the position 60.get well prepared for 61give sb a warm welcome 62.give sb some advice on how to do sth 63.give sb some wonderful performances 64.go to the countryside for a change 65.Good luck in your coming examination 66.group discussion 67.have some trouble doing sth 68.have a discussion about 69.have a history of 200 years 70.have confidence in oneself 71.have much knowledge in many fields 72.head west 73.hear from 74.hold a party 75.heavy traffic 76.improve one’s English study 77.improe our study methods 78.in favor of 79.in one’s early/late thirties 80.in rush hour 81.in the past ten years 82.introduce sb to sb 83.it is convenient for sb to do sth 84.It’s one’s duty to do sth 85.It is pretty hard for sb 86.it’s been a dream for sb to do sth 87.join sb in doing sth https://www.doczj.com/doc/4718231.html,y a solid foundation for 89.learn more about nature 90.let one’s imagination fly 91.let out a cry of joy 92.lie to the east of 93.listening and speaking abilities 94.living condition 95.look forward to 96.make a trip to 97.make arrangements 98.make friends online 99.make one’s decision as soon as possible 100.May I have your attention ? 101.miss the good/golden chance/opportunity 102.noble spirit 103.opinions are divided on the question https://www.doczj.com/doc/4718231.html,anize a tour around the city 105.pay a visit to 106.prepare lunch 107.promote the students’ abilities 108.recommend 109.reduce learning load 110.result from 111.result in 112.satisfy one’s needs 113.sb be required to be there on time 114.school rules 115.shortly after 116.show interest in 117.show one’s love for 118.show one’s talent 119.show sb around 120.sign up 121.sign your name 122.solve the problem 123.spare no efforts to do sth 124.sports activities 125.spread Chinese culture 126.start school 127.sth is drawing near. 128.stick to the post 129.take advantage of
干货——高考英语书面表达高分套路(后附范文) 高考日益临近，大家准备好迎战了吗？最近大家看到关于写作的内容比较多呢，但是你会发现侧重的角度不同。今天小编也针对高考写作给大家准备了不可多得的好东西，掌握这些，让你对高考写作胜券在握，还不快来抢先收藏？别忘了，好东西大家一定要记得分享啊。 ◆开头段：四大内容(1、问候；2、自我介绍；3、写信缘由；4、写信目的。)； ?中间段：具体问题(主题句) +具体分析(拓展句)； ?结尾段：客套话。 ◆开头段： 1、问候。 How are you doing? / How is everything going? 2、自我介绍。 由于我们在考场上的身份几乎每年都是李华，李华的个人情况是可以由自己设定。如：I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy studying in … senior high school. / I am Li Hua, who ... 我们可以用上一些能给阅卷老师留下深刻印象的词汇，如：hardworking, diligent, optimistic, positive, helpful, take part in … competition, won the … prize in… competition, worked as a volunteer …等等。 3、写信缘由。 I heard that ... / My teacher told me ... / I am informed that ... / I learned that ... / I read in your newspaper / website that ... / You said in your last letter that ... 4、写信目的。 最常见书信/ 电邮的“写信目的”的最佳表述： 自荐信：Now, I am writing to apply for the job / position. 感谢信：Now, I am writing to show / express my deep gratitude to you. 邀请信：Now, I am writing to invite you to ... (as our guest / judge / instructor). 建议信：Now, I am writing to give you a hand / some suggestions that may help you. 求助信：Now, I am writing to ask you for help / to do me a favor. 道歉信：Now, I am writing to show / express my sincere apology to you.
书面表达高级词汇 1. 意识至U realize f be aware As a member of society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. 2. 即将来临be coming soon f around the corner/ at hand An exciting event “Innovations（创新；革新） on Campus”is around the corner. 3. 认真地carefully f attentively We stood around him and watched attentively. 4. 此外besides/what 'smore f in addition/ additionally In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. 5. 得至get f acquire/obtain The moral （寓意）of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. 6. 对... 有好处be good/ be helpful f be of
great benefit/be very beneficial/be rewarding Sports are beneficial to building our bodies. 7. 改善improve f better Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment. 8. 结果as a result f as a consequence As a consequence, children become so reliant （依赖的；可信的）on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. 9. 令人担忧worrying f of great concern Such a situation is of great concern. 10. 擅长；精通be good at f have a good command of/have a good knowledge of Having been exposed to English for many years, I have a good command of English. 11. 表达express f convey I'm writing to convey my gratitude to you. 12. 重要be important f count/matter What matters most in learning English is enough practice.
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●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
组合练3 语法填空＋短文改错＋书面表达 Ⅰ.语法填空 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。 I'm sure you know from your own experiences that laughter brings people together.Humor helps to solve difficult situations.It makes you more 1.________ (charm) and others more entertained.It 2.________ (reduce) stress.I've even read research up to now 3.________ says laughter makes our internal organs work better! I'm not humorous，so over time，I had to learn how to be a 4.________ (humor) speaker.When I was funny on stage，it was an accident.I still very clearly remember I 5.________ (give) a demonstration (展示) of body language at then.I was falling my shoulders in 6.________ (disappoint) and then I said，“I'm very happy to be here today.” Everyone was amused and laughed loudly and I was thinking，“Huh，what 7.________ (do) I just do that was so funny？” I thought I was just demonstrating a funny thing.I happened to be delivering 8.________ same presentation that very same afternoon，and sure enough，again，at that same point in the talk，the audience laughed.You don't know 9.________ excited I was that I had accidentally figured out a way to bring 10.________ (enjoy) to the audience and make them laugh. 【语篇解读】作者以自己通过搞笑的体态语让观众笑出来的亲身经历，讲述了一个道理：幽默其实很简单。 1．解析：此处指幽默的行为让他人着迷，用形容词charming。 答案：charming 2．解析：陈述现在的情况，用一般现在时，主语是it，谓语用单数形式。 答案：reduces 3．解析：此处是定语从句，从句中缺主语，用关系代词that或which。 答案：that/which 4．解析：此处是形容词修饰名词。
高考英语书面表达佳句及高分范文 告知信结构 2019年全国II卷 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛 内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
『佳句赏析』 ?描述写信背景、目的的佳句 ?A fierce volleyball match will take place in our school stadium on the first Sunday of next month. ?As the captain of our school volleyball team, I'm writing to invite you to participate in our game. ?I'm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball competition next month. ?描述赛前准备的佳句 ?For good performance for the competition, we must make full preparations and practice hard. ?As a member of the team, proper preparations on your part will be appreciated. ?So starting tomorrow, we all need to train for 2 hours after school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training. ?描述诚邀参赛、表达期望的佳句 ?Knowing that you're excellent prayer, I really hope you can be the member of our team. ?With you on our team, we have every hope of defeating them. ?Only if you join our team will we be the strongest team that we can win this fierce match. ?With you participating, we will win the competition. 2019年全国 I 卷 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括: 1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Sample 1 Recently we have launched a survey among the students in our school and their parents to find out whether parents are proud of their children. It turns out that 80% of the parents take pride in their children, while only 60% of the students think their parents are proud of them. The difference indicates that from the students’ perspective, they are not that good to live up to their parents’ expectations. One reason may be that parents are often strict with their children. They expect their kids to be outstanding, to be better and better. Even if their children fulfill a goal, they will not give their children any chance to be carried away by the temporary success. Therefore, what children hear is mostly criticism and requirements from parents. As for another reason, we Chinese people typically tend to contain our feelings. This is the nature of our nation, to some extent. We are not used to expressing our feelings, especially compliments, directly. So most parents do not praise their kids or sa y al oud " I’m proud of you" even when they do love their children deeply and think they have done a great job. As we can see, many factors contribute to the result. We appeal to parents to express their feeling frankly and we hope a better understanding between parents and children can be formed. After all, family is a place for love and expressing love! Sample 2
一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
书面表达高级词汇 1.意识到realize→be aware As a member of society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. 2.即将来临 be coming soon→around the corner/ at hand An exciting event “Innovations(创新；革新) on Campus” is around the corner. 3.认真地 carefully→attentively We stood around him and watched attentively. 4.此外besides/what’s more→in addition/ additionally In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. 5.得到 get→acquire/obtain The moral（寓意） of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.
6.对……有好处 be good/ be helpful →be of great benefit/be very beneficial/be rewarding Sports are beneficial to building our bodies. 7.改善 improve→better Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment. 8.结果as a result→as a consequence As a consequence, children become so reliant（依赖的；可信的）on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. 9.令人担忧worrying→of great concern Such a situation is of great concern. 10.擅长；精通 be good at→have a good command of/have a good knowledge of Having been exposed to English for many