2020年高考英语书面表达专项训练八篇（二）
（一）
假定你是李华，想在假期去英国进行为期一周的观光旅游。请给你的英国朋友George写一封邮件。请他帮你推荐一个家庭旅馆。内容包括：
1．简要介绍行程；
2．求助内容——推荐家庭旅馆；
3．条件：交通便利、月费用不超过300英镑。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear George，
I'm excited to tell you that I will go on a sightseeing trip in England.As is planned, I will stay in England for a week, during which I will pay a visit to London, Cambridge and Oxford.Although I've learnt
a lot about England at school, yet I need your help.I'd be grateful if you can help me find a family hotel
which can provide WiFi and a breakfast.Any hotel whose monthly cost is less than ￡300 is OK as long as it's convenient to go to any of the three cities.
I'm looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
（二）
假定你是校学生会主席李华，今年暑假有一批来自美国的学生访问团将到你校访问参观。请你
写一封邮件，将本次安排告知该访问团的负责人Mr Smith，并征询他对安排的意见。活动安排：1．体验中国绘画；
2．品尝特色午餐；
3．观看地方戏表演。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Mr Smith，
I'm Li Hua, chairman of students' union in our school.We are very pleased to learn that you are
coming.Please allow me to tell you what we have arranged for your visit.In the morning, we will introduce
Chinese painting art to you and invite you to experience the traditional art form.At noon, we want to ask
you to try the local foods, a good chance, we think, to get some ideas of the local customs and a good
opportunity to know each other.If you like, our school's drama club will perform the local opera for you.We
are eager to know if our arrangements will satisfy you.
Looking forward to your reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
（三）
假定你是李华，前不久听了美国文学教授Mr Smith关于“读英语文学作品，提高英语运用能力”
的讲座，受益匪浅，但仍有一些问题不是很清楚，所以写信向他求助，内容包括：
1．自我介绍；
2．请教读文学作品时要注意什么；
3．请他为你推荐几本适合阅读的英语作品。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Mr Smith，
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student. The other day, I attended your lecture on “Read English
literary works to improve your ability to use English” which has benefited me a lot. But in some aspects, still need your help, so I'm writing to you today.
First, could you please tell me what I should mainly focus on when reading English literary works,
learning vocabulary, grammar, culture or something else? Besides, what's the correct order to deal with the
different aspects? What's more, I was wondering whether you could recommend some good works which
are suitable for senior 3 students.
I'd appreciate it if you could do me a favor! Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
（四）
(2019·衡阳市联考)最近，一部名为《厉害了，我的国》(Amazing China)的纪录电影火遍全国。
该片通过讲述普通中国人的生活变迁以及一个个超级工程背后的故事，向观众呈现了一幅全景中国。
假定你是李华，回复英国笔友Mary的来信，用自己的亲身经历来介绍中国近几年来发生的巨大
变化，并诚挚地邀请她来中国度假。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary，
Delighted to have heard from you recently,
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua 参考范文：
Dear Mary，
Delighted to have heard from you recently, I would like to express my thanks to you for your concern
for my motherland China.
China has entered into a new age of development and has refreshed her image home and abroad. Great changes have taken place in different fields. In addition to the newly constructed Hong
，namely Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge, what has affected me most is our “Four New Great Inventions”
high-speed rail, shared bikes, mobile payment and online shopping. Together with faster and better communication, these achievements have brought great convenience and improvement to our life. With economy increasingly developing, we are living a richly materialistic and spiritual life. I'm so proud to be a Chinese.
You are welcome to come and experience these changes in person straightaway.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
（五）
假定你是李华。你将代表学校参加国际高中生环境保护论坛。请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1．环境保护的紧迫性；
2．如何开展环境保护；
3．呼吁大家积极参与。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：论坛forum
参考范文：
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua, and very glad to be here to attend the international senior high students' environment protection forum to share my opinion on behalf of our school.
Nowadays, all kinds of pollution can be seen everywhere, air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution, which are threatening our health.Some strange diseases appear and are hard to cure.Even worse, some rare animals and plants are on the verge of distinction due to severe destruction of the environment.
So it's time for us to take action! Many ways are available for us to adopt, such as saving every drop of water, taking a bus or public transportation instead of driving private cars, recycling plastic bags, refusing
to use disposable chopsticks and so on.
Do your part and it can make a big difference!
（六）
(2019·合肥模拟)假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter来信说他对中国家族文化很感兴趣，想进一步了解。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．家族文化的重要性；
2．传统观念(光宗耀祖、尊祖敬宗等)；
3．新时代价值(不少于两点)；
4．好书推荐：Customs and Traditions of China。
注意：1.词数100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
Glad to receive your last letter, where you said that you were very interested in Chinese family culture and wanted to know more.Here I'd like to share something concerned with you.
As you know, family culture has been playing an important role in Chinese history, through which many great minds were developed and made great contributions to the society.Some traditional notions, such as upholding the family honor and respecting ancestors, are greatly valued and handed down generation after generation, which are an eventually essential part of Chinese culture.In new era, new ideas, such as fairness and freedom, have been put forward to guide us to strive for a new life.Additionally, a good book in this aspect named Customs and Traditions of China can tell you more.
Looking forward to your reply and feedback after your reading the book.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
（七）
(2019·福建省高三毕业班质检)假定你是李华，获悉你的英国朋友Henry想参加为外国人举办的
汉语演讲比赛。请给他写一封邮件，告知参赛信息。内容包括：
1．演讲时间、地点；
2．演讲主题：最美家庭；
3．演讲注意事项。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：演讲比赛speech contest
参考范文：
Dear Henry，
I am glad to hear that you have great interest in the Chinese speech contest intended for foreigners.I'm writing to tell you some details.
The contest, due to start at 9 am on March 16, will be held at the hall of Dalian University.The topic is
the Most Beautiful Family.I believe you have a lot to share because family matters much wherever we are from.
When delivering the speech, please speak loudly and clearly without referring to your notes, but with a smile on your face! Keep in mind that you have only five minutes for it.
Hope everything goes smoothly.Looking forward to your good news.
Yours，
Li Hua
（八）
假定你是李华，请你根据以下提示向国际野生动物组织写一封投诉信，反映非法捕猎海洋生物
的现象。
1．非法捕猎越来越严重；
2．由于在全世界鲸鱼成为非法捕猎的对象，五年来它的数目在急剧减少；
3．我们曾经毁掉森林，带来了干旱和洪水；如果不能阻止非法捕猎海洋生物，我们将失掉家园。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am writing to complain that the illegal hunt for ocean creatures is becoming bad to worse. As a result, the past five years have witnessed the sharp decrease of the whale because it has been the main target of the illegal hunt in the whole world.
The balance of nature destroyed, we will suffer a lot. There was a time when we were not aware of the importance of plants, and then drought and flood went hand in hand. If we did not stop the illegal hunt in
the ocean, we would lose our home.
We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence
of this kind.
Yours，
Li Hua
目录 突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达 (1) 第一讲提升英语写作的“三板斧” (3) 第二讲熟练写作的10类体裁 (18) 《突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达》 【高考命题规律】 1.语用目的——讲好中国故事，增强文化自信 高考书面表达的情境设置真实，任务要求符合考生能力水平，又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容，能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，增强文化自信。 2.文体形式——以应用文为主，主要考查书信/电子邮件 从近几年高考全国卷来看，书面表达主要考查应用文，其中以电子邮件为主，邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多，只有2018年全国卷Ⅱ考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体，近几年来，当仁不让地成为了命题专家的最爱，而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。 3.提示类型——以提纲作文为主，试题的开放性越来越强 近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主，但提示越来越简洁，试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示，又留有供其自由发挥的空间，既让低水平的考生有话可写，又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会，保证试卷的区分度。 【掌握备考策略】 ●普通作文VS高分作文——找出差距才能目标明确
●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
第三节题组训练 6（半）开放式 作文 1 假如你是李华，你的美国网友David给你写信，询问近年来多次袭击中国华北的雾霾情况。请你给他写封回信，感谢他的关注，简述雾霾的危害并谈谈你的看法。 注意： (1)词数不少于100； (2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：雾霾smog Dear David， I’m glad to receive your letter. Yours， Li Hua 参考范文 Dear David， I’m glad to receive your letter.Thank you for your concern about the heavy smog in North China.Now I’d like to tell you something about it. Since the winter last year，the smog has occurred a lot of times，which has brought much inconvenience to our daily life and done great harm to people’s he alth.Many traffic accidents have happened just because of the heavy smog weather.In addition，
quite a lot of flights have to be put off and a great number of people have to stay at home to avoid the poisonous air.What’s worse，many people have suffered from bad coughs，sore throats and other serious diseases caused by the smog.Personally，I think not only the government but also everyone should try to make a difference.I strongly approve of the idea that we can try to drive less and buy environmentally-friendly products.Only when everyone has the awareness can we have cleaner air. Hoping to hear from you soon. Yours， Li Hua 2 假定你是李华，你的班级决定组织同学们5月30日端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival) 一起骑自行车去西湖观看龙舟比赛。请你给外教史密斯先生写封邮件邀请他上午8：00 在学校门口集合，一同前往，感受中国传统文化。 注意： (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考范文 Dear Mr Smith， How is everything going? Our class is planning to cycle to the West Lake to watch the dragon boat race on May 30，when the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated nationwide.We’ll gather at our school gate at 8：00 am.I’d lik e to invite you to go with us and experience this unique Chinese culture. The dragon boat race，originally held in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan，has now become a common practice and developed into a sport.I’m sure it will be exciting and enjoyable.Your presence will certainly add to our pleasure.Do come and have fun. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours， Li Hua
高考英语书面表达想得高分，这篇秘籍不得不看！ 现在高考都是电脑阅卷，关于高考阅卷老师进行英语作文阅卷的速度，相信大家都很清楚了，可能只有十几秒。在这么短的时间内，如何能迅速吸引阅卷老师的眼球拿到高分？ 我们先来看看两篇高考书面表达学生的高分文章。 作文1 （2016年高考河北省满分作文） 这篇书面表达字迹工整、清晰，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。仔细阅读，不难发现这个学生用了很多高级词汇，还有很多地道的词块。 作文2 （2018年高考山东省24分作文）
这篇书面表达虽然因为一个小硬伤被扣了1分，但是令人惊叹的是满篇的词块，甚至还有些非常高级的词块小编都想不起来用。 那么我们来总结一下，除了书写、布局谋篇，其实在书面表达中，学生对词汇的运用能力，尤其是高级词汇和词块的运用，是影响阅卷老师在非常有限的时间内评分的很重要的一个因素。 那今天，我们就来讲讲词块。 到底什么是词块？词块，也叫作搭配，它是在词汇和句子之间存在着同时兼有词汇和句子特征的半固定结构。如下图所示： 英语里，有很多词块（搭配），对英语学习者来说，尤其是高中生，学习搭配非常重要。这是为什么呢？ 我们看看下面两幅图，比较一下哪种盖房子的方式效率更高呢？ 盖房子就像我们学英语。我们把词块作为整体输入大脑，这样不仅可以提高阅读理解的速度和精准度；再把词块作为整体输出，就可以提高口头表达和书面表达能力，促进语言输出的流利性、地道性和准确性。说的再直接一点，词块稍微加上一点语法，就能生成句子了。
既然词块这么重要，而考纲要求掌握的词汇还有许许多多的词块，那怎么能让教学更有效率，学生能记得更牢又会用呢？ 我们推荐老师根据词块的不同特点，用以下几种方式教学： 方法一：词源（文化背景） 2018年全国I卷完形填空中有这样一个词块ring true： Ten years after my chess class with Ashley, I’m still putting to use what he taught me: “The absolute most important skill that you learn when you play chess is how to make good decisions. On every single move you have to analyze a situation, process what your opponent (对手) is doing and evaluate the best move from among all your options.” These words still ring true today in my role as a journalist. 词块ring true高阶字典上给的解释是：听起来真实。这个词块，即使配上大量的例句，学生估计也不会很容易理解和掌握。 其实，老师给学生讲这个词块时，不妨试试给学生讲讲ring true背后的故事。 从前用金币、银币的时代，人们怕拿到的硬币纯度不参够，常会两枚互敲一下，听听声音是否清脆悠长。ring指的就是敲击的声音，ring true这个动词词组是指硬币敲击声听起来成色十足，引申为“（事情、说法等）真实可靠”。 看到这里，是不是立刻想起电视上看到的，在过去人们吹银元的情景？ 教这种“有（词源）故事”的词块，尝试讲个故事给学生，不仅能活跃课堂气氛，更重要的是学生会理解得更深刻且不容易忘记。
十年高考英语书面表达之中华传统文化-汇编
十年高考书面表达之中华传统文化汇编（附传统文化词汇） 2017全国I卷 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Leslie, I’m writing to tell you about the plan for your next Chine se lesson. We’ll still meet at my school at three on Saturday afternoon. The learning will last a little longer this time since I’d like to introduce to you poetry of Tang Dynasty. These poems are popular among Chinese people and also attract lots of foreigners. I believe you will like them too. Of course, you’d better make some preparation for it, so I suggest you learn about the brief history of Tang Dynasty, which will surely help with your learning of the poems. Yours， Li Hua 2017全国II卷 假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点； 2.展览内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Henry, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student of yours. I’m writing to invite you to join me in visiting a
高考英语书面表达背诵 范文25篇 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN
高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇 ---多背范文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 范文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know th at the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@https://www.doczj.com/doc/6b16195646.html,. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2
2021年天津高考英语作文要求同学们写一封关于成人礼的电子邮件，以下是小编给 大家整理的天津高考英语作文题目及范文，供参考。 天津高考英语作文题目 假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津，你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动。你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括： （1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）； （2）对活动的感受； （3）对自己未来的展望。 注意： （1）词数不少于100； （2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： 成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony 信管肺炎 COVID-19 Dear Chris I’m very glad to hear from you. Yours Li Jin
天津高考英语作文范文 Dear Chris I’m very glad to hear from you.I am writing t o you to introduce the following adult ceremony activities organized by our school on June 8. The coming-of-age ceremony, usually at the age of 18 for boys and girls, symbolizes the march towards adulthood. In the bar mitzvah, usually in some parts of China, the bar mitzvah also popular Han clothing, worship Confucius and other customs. We knelt on our knees/kneel on the ground to express our gratitude to our parents for their upbringing. rite is designed to make us understand maturity and sense of responsibility. At the event scene, we watched the video of alumni anti-epidemic, deeply moved. As a new generation of teenagers, I must be motivated to study hard, grow up to become a useful person for the country to society. Yours Li Jin
2019-2020年高考英语书面表达万能模板15通知 Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. （称呼语及开场白）________________. （正文部分，说明具体通知事项） All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes./Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Make sure you’ll come on time and don’t be late.（说明通知对象和注意事项）___________________ Please come and join in it./ Everybody is welcome to attend it./I hope you’ll have a nice time here.（重申希望大家参加之情）_______________________________ That’s all. Thank you.（结束语） 口头通知 口头通知要注意以下几点： (1) 要有称呼用语。如：在正式场合用的Ladies and gentlemen,对学生用的Boys and girls 等。 (2) 要有开头语。常用的开头语有： May I have your attention, please? Be quite. There is something important I have to tell you. You need to know. I have something to tell you. (3) 时态问题。口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动，因此要以一般将来时为主。 (4) 人称问题。口头通知常用第二人称表示被通知的对象。 (5) 要有结束语。常用的结束语有： That’s all. Thank you. Any questions? Does everyone understand? 书面通知 书面通知具有以下特点： 标志。 (1) 书面通知的正文上面的正中有NOTICE或ANNOUNCEMENT
全国各地高考英语书面表达汇总9套 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
【关键字】活动、作文、英语、要点、发现、研究、支撑、环境、标准、任务、关系、取决于、规范 任务型阅读与书面表达组合练(三) (限时40分钟) Ⅰ.任务型阅读 (2017·南京、盐城高三二模)“HELL is a city much like London，” said Percy Bysshe Shelley in 1819. Modern academics agree. Last year Dutch researchers showed that city dwellers (居民) have a 21% higher risk of suffering from anxiety disorders than do their calmer rural countrymen, and a 39% higher risk of suffering from mood disorders. But exactly how the inner workings of the urban and rural minds cause this difference has remained unclear —until now. A study just published in Nature by Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg of the University of Heidelberg and his colleagues has used a scanning technique called functional magnetic-res onance imaging (机能性磁共振成像，简称fMRI) to examine the brains of city dwellers and countrymen when they are under stress. In Dr Meye r-Lindenberg's first experiment, participants lying with their heads in a scanner took maths tests that they were bound to fail (the researchers had designed success rates to be just 25－40% ). To make the experience still more embarrassing, the team provided negative feedback through headphones, all the while checking participants for indications of stress, such as high blood pressure. The city people's general mental health did not differ from that of the rural countrymen. However, their brains dealt with the stress caused by the experimenters in different ways. These differences were noticeable in two regions: the amygdalas (杏仁核) and the perigenual anterior cingulate cortex (前扣带皮层，简称pACC)．People living in the countryside had the lowest levels of activity in their amygdalas. Those living in towns had higher levels. City dwellers had the highest. In the case of the pACC, however, what mattered was not where someone was living now, but where he or she was brought up. The more urban a person's childhood, the more active his pACC, regardless of where he was dwelling at the time of the experiment. The amygdalas thus seem to respond to the h ere-and-now while the pACC is programmed early on, and does not react in the same, flexible way as the amygdalas. Second-to-second changes in its activity might, though, be expected to be connected with changes in the amygdalas, because of its role in regulating them. fMRI allows
滚动题组25 阅读理解+阅读表达+书面表达 (时间:60分钟总分:80分分数:) 滚动题组第36页 Ⅰ.阅读理解 A (2019·江苏卷) The 65-year-old Steve Goodwin was found suffering from early Alzheimer’s(阿尔兹海默症).He was losing his memory. A software engineer by profession,Steve was a keen lover of the piano,and the only musician in his family.Music was his true passion,though he had never performed outside the family. Melissa,his daughter,felt it more than worthwhile to save his music,to which she fell asleep each night when she was young.She thought about hiring a professional pianist to work with her father. Naomi,Melissa’s best friend and a talented pianist,got to know about this and showed willingness to help. “Why do this?”Steve wondered. “Because she cares,”Melissa said. Steve nodded,tears in eyes. Naomi drove to the Goodwin home.She told Steve she’d love to hear him play.Steve moved to the piano and sat at the bench,hands trembling as he gently placed his fingers on the keys. Naomi put a small recorder near the piano.Starts and stops and mistakes.Long pauses,heart sinking.But Steve pressed on,playing for the first time in his life for a stranger. “It was beautiful,”Naomi said after listening to the recording.“The music was worth saving.” Her responsibility,her privilege,would be to rescue it.The music was still in Steve Goodwin.It was hidden in rooms with doors about to be locked.
2021高考英语书面表达强化提高教学案 书面表达五大基本原则 1. 主题句原则 书面表达一定有主题句，否则就会给人造成“群龙无首”的感觉！把主题句写在文章的开头（保险型），让别人一目了然。如：Now, I want to tell you something about mylife at Senior High school. In the past few years,great changes have taken place in the means of communication. In the past, we usedto write letters….. 总说“改变”——分说(先写“过去”，然后写“现在”进行对比) 2. 一二三原则 老师阅卷必然会通过关键性的“标志”，来看你的作文是否要点齐全，结构清楚，条理自然。要点齐全，一目了然，自然会增加“印象分”。方法很简单，选用以下其中一组，加在要点前。 （1） first, second, third, last （2） firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally （3） in the first place, in the second place, inthe third place,lastly （4） to begin with, then, furthermore, finally （5） to start with, next, in addition, finally （6） on one hand, on the other hand （7） for one thing, for another thing 3. 短语优先，多实少虚原则 1) 写作时，使用短语有两个好处。其一，为文章增加亮点——又可以为作文加分！其二，字数明显增加。 I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达为： I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达为： I am looking forward to it. 2) 写作文应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。比如我们说一个人好的时候，不应该只说good, nice这样空洞的词，应该使用形象一点，具体一点的词,诸如generous,humorous, interesting, smart,gentle, warm-hearted, etc. 常用过渡短语：1）作比较：onthe other hand,on the contrary, in/ by contrast,
十年高考书面表达之中华传统文化汇编（附传统文化词汇） 2017全国I卷 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Leslie, I’m writing to tell you about the plan for your next Chinese lesson. We’ll still meet at my school at three on Saturday afternoon. The learning will last a little longer this time since I’d like to introduce to you poetry of Tang Dynasty. These poems are popular among Chinese people and also attract lots of foreigners. I believe you w ill like them too. Of course, you’d better make some preparation for it, so I suggest you learn about the brief history of Tang Dynasty, which will surely help with your learning of the poems. Yours， Li Hua 2017全国II卷 假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点； 2.展览内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Henry, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student of yours. I’m writing to invite you to join me in visiting a paper-cutting exhibition, where you can have a close look at traditional Chinese culture as you always
高考英语书面表达最后精选 城市生活的利与弊 某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为Living in the city的有关城市生活的利和弊的 文章，根据下面提示，写一篇词数为100左右的短文。 Advantages Disadvantages 找工作容易生活消费高 交通便利人口多，拥挤 有公园、饭店等休闲场所空气污染、居住环境差 要求：1．覆盖以上内容，可作适当发挥。2．词数100左右。 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax. However, living in a city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside. 说明文-English Summer Camp 假如你是李辉，参加了1998年7月25—30 日在山东烟台由英语辅导报社举办的全国中学 生英语夏令营活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇100—140 字的报导，以便刊登在«英语通»上。 提示：1、来自全国各地的100多名中学生参加了活动； 2、有来自国内外的30多名英语教学专家； 3、营员们必须用英语交流； 4、举办了一系列活动：1）第二届全国中学生英语辩论赛； 2）第三届全国中学生英语演讲比赛； 3）参观了名胜古迹； 4）举办了英语晚会。 思路指津：注意：1、应包括自己参加夏令营的体会。 2、参考词汇： 1）英语辅导报社：English Coaching Paper Office 2) 1998年全国中学生英语夏令营：1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students (1998 NESCMSS); 3) 辩论：debate 4) 演讲比赛：speech competition 5) 主办：sponsor 6) 英语通： An Express Way to English 3、不要逐句翻译提示，可增加适当有关细节，使文章连贯。 范文： 1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students As a lucky student, I attended the 1998 NESCMSS held in the beautiful seaside city of Yantai from July 25 to 30, which was sponsored by the English Coaching Paper Office. Over 100 students all over the country and 30 English teaching experts from home and abroad took part in the activity. All the campers were required to speak English. During the four days, a series of English activities were held including the Second National English Debate for Middle School Students and the Third National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students. We also visited some places of interest. A colourful English evening was held on July 29. The camp provided us with a valuable opportunity to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. I found my English much improved at the end of the camp. Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in Yantai. 上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗
如何突破写作，获得高分，成为广大师生关注的问题。下面就写作中如何运用高级表达提 出以下几点建议，供广大师生参考。 1.使用复合句 复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。高考写作中用到的复合句 包括下列几种： (1) 定语从句 Mary is a girl in Class 1. She speaks English very fluently. → Mary is a girl in Class1 who speaks English very fluently. (2) 状语从句 The doctor arrived there in time. The boy was saved. It was not too late. → The boy was saved because the doctor arrived there before it was too late. (3) 名词性从句(包括主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和同位语从句) Xiao Ming was always late for school. His te acher didn’t know why. → His teacher didn’t know why Xiao Ming was always late for school. 如果考生驾驭句子的能力较强，则还可以恰当使用复杂的复合句（就是从句中还包含从句）。例如： I want to know whether you want to meet Miss Tang when she comes back from Japan where she works as an engineer. (本句包含3个从句) 2.使用某些惯用句型 写作中如果能恰当运用英语中某些常见的惯用句型，可以使文章显得富有“洋味”。例如： (1) The boy was so brave that he led the enemy into our ring of encirclement (包围).(so…that… 句型) (2) So brave was the boy that he led the enemy into our ring of encirclement (包围). （倒装结构） (3) I did not realize the importance of learning English well until then.（not…until…） (4) Not until then did I realize the importance of learning English well.(not until的倒装句) (5) It was not until then that I realized the importance of learning English well.（强调句） 3.使用高级词汇 ⑴巧用习语(idiom) 英语中有大量习语，如果运用得当，则可大大增加文章的感染力。考生要在平时的学习过 程中不断积累。例如： ① What she explained doesn’t hold water. 她的解释站不住脚。 ② Many families struggle to make ends meet. 很多家庭只能勉强维持生计。 ③ I don’t know why she is always in low spirits. 我不知道她为什么总是情绪低落。 ④ He turned a deaf ear to what I said. 他对我的话一点也听不进去。 ⑤ This sentence doesn’t make sense. 这个句子讲不通。 ⑵用短语代替单词 英语中同义词众多，在表达的时候，尽量用短语代替单个的词。例如： ① I have made up my mind to study English better this term. (同义词：decide) ② I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同义词：don’t know) ③ A burning cigarette end resulted in/led to the big fire. (同义词：cause)