高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作
一. 教学内容：
书面表达讲解与训练
开放性写作（北京卷）
开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。
写作注意要点：
1. 审题要准，定位要清。
即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。
2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。
要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。
要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。
3. 内容充实，详略得当。
要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。
考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。
4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。
要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应
有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。
【典型例题】
［开放性写作分类与解析：］
1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect）
根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。
注意：词数不少于30。
You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?”
You tell him what happened.
Possible version:
I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
she asked me to get a book from the bookshelf for her. It was a hardcover and a little thick. I got the book and decided to throw it to her. But she missed it, and it broke the window.
Cause and effect type：
?Now please tell us why you have refused it.
?You tell him what happened.
2. 2003高考北京试卷
聚集性思维（convergent thinking）
给出语境陈述计划、打算(planning )
根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字，词数不少于30。
You are talking with one of your close friends about your plans for the summer vacation. You say to him, “I’m going to enjoy myself in the vacation.” He asks, “What exactly are you going to do to have fun?”
You tell him what you want to do to make your vacation great fun. Be sure to use one or more examples to show what you mean.
Possible version:
I’ll go to a beach to see the seabirds flying in the dark-blue sky and drive a motorboat, sailing through clear water toward the rising sun. Then I’ll surf the “https://www.doczj.com/doc/0c11385920.html,” website, play games on “FreeEnglish. com”,or chat with friends online about hot movies like “The Lord of the Rings” and “Harry Potter”.
Planning type:
?Your parents suggest that you stay in Beijing for your advanced education. Do you agree with them? Explain your reasons.
?What would you take and why?
?Tell at least two or three choices
?Tell what you will choose and why.
3. 2004 春季高考北京试卷
发散性思维（divergent thinking）
给出问题寻找解决方法(problem solving)
根据下面提供的情景，写出你的想法。词数不少于50。
On a sunny morning, Xiao Hong from Orange Town was on her way to her friend’s house in Green Hill, a small town she had never been to before. At a crossroads, she found the signpost (路标) showing the directions had fallen over. She got lost.
How could she find out which way to go? Consider two or three different ways of working out the problems.
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Possible version:
First of all ,Xiao Hong could ask a passer-by for directions. Since it was a sunny day, she could also use the position of the sun to tell the directions. And finally she could replace the
signpost so that it correctly named the direction she had come from. Then it would be correct for all the other directions.
Problem solving type:
?Point out some problems( at least two) …and give helpful suggestions as to solve the problem.
?How should the land be used? Give your design.
?Your grandpa retired…unhappy and depressed…trying to make him cheerful.
?Make two or three suggestions on how to improve the traffic in Beijing.
［范文及学生习作分析讲解］
1. When your mother comes home from work, she finds the living room in a terrible mess. She asks you the reasons. You tell her what happened.
学生习作：
1）When I got home, I found that there was a mouse eating an apple on the table. I put down my bag slowly and wanted to give it a sudden attack ,but the mouse saw me and ran away. So I began to run after it here and there .But I couldn't catch it. So you see the living room was in such a terrible mess.
2）When I came back, I found the door open. I was very puzzled because I knew at that time my parents still at theirs office. Suddenly I saw a thief in our living room, searching for some money. So I dialed 110 for help. A minute later, two policemen came, and caught the thief. Luckily, he didn’t find anything useful .
答案：This afternoon I was doing my homework when my neighbor Aunt Zhang came in with her little son Xiao Ming. She asked me to look after him for a while as she was out.
Shortly after his mother left, Xiao Ming began to cry. I brought out all the toys and played with him. Soon he stopped crying and began to play with me. He ran about happily in the room and scattered the toys on the floor and made a mess. It was he who made the room like this.
2. You have been given a chance to design a class meeting. You can choose whatever topic to make the meeting meaningful and instructive. What might be your topic? Why would you choose this topic? Give two or more reasons to explain.
学生习作：
1）I would like to choose the topic “believe in yourself.”First, if people believe themselves, they will have the confidence to do better in their work or study. Secondly, when people meet the difficulty in their lives, they need “believe in themsel ves” to help them solve those difficulty.
2）I prefer to talk about traffic in Beijing with my classmates. Because there are too many cars on the road and many people especially middle school students didn’t follow the traffic rules. We must pay attention to this. It is do a lot of harm to our life. And in 2008, Beijing will be held Olympic Games. When a foreigner saw a Chinese people didn’t follow the traffic rules, they will have a bad impression. In addition, I want to encourage my classmates to take buses so as to ease the traffic flow.
答案：I think I may design a class meeting entitled “Helping the Disabled.”First of all, being disabled is challenging in society. Disabled people need society’s respect and help. So the class meeting can pass on some information about showing respect to them. Secondly, if people all try to help the disabled, it can reduce the burden on society, which may influence the development of the whole society in many ways.
3. About fifty students from Hong Kong are coming to your school next week. You will show them around it. Please tell us how you will introduce your school to them.
答案：First, I will invite those students from Hong Kong to pay a visit to our schoolyard. During the visit, I will tell them something about our school life. Then I will take them to the headmaster’s office and introduce the history of our school to them. Finally, I am going to tell them our plan in the future.
4. On the morning of June 7, Li Hua is taking a bus on his way to take the entrance examination. Unfortunately, he is caught in a traffic jam because of an accident. How can he manage to there in time? Please think out two or three ways for him.
答案：First of all, he can persuade the bus driver to allow him to get off so that he can walk out of the heavy traffic jam to take another bus or a taxi. Or he can get off and ask an assistant in a nearby shop to lend him a bike. Since it is an important day for the high school graduates, dialing 110 and getting help from the police is one of the choices as well.
【模拟试题】
1. Yesterday when you got home all in wet, your mother was very surprised and asked ,“what’s the matter with you?”
Please tell us what happened.
2. Yesterday you went to school by bus as usual. But you rushed out of the bus at the second stop .
Please tell us what happened.
3. One day while Li Ming was walking along the street, he noticed a lot of people looking into the sky.
Suppose you are Li Ming ,please tell us what happened.
4. One day when you came to my house, I found you walking with a limp. What happened to you?
Please tell me.
5. Yesterday you and your friend went to buy some lottery tickets. Your friend as ked , “If you won one million yuan, what would you do with so much money?”
Please tell him .
6. Traffic jams are a very serious problem in Beijing. The streets are full of cars, buses, and bikes almost every day. To make matters worse, some people do not follow the traffic rules.
Suppose you are discussing this problem in your English class. Please make two or three suggestions on how to improve the traffic in Beijing.
7. Suppose we are having a free talk in an English class. The topic is the best way of transport in Beijing when we are out getting around. To take a bus, the cityrail, a taxi or to ride a bike?
Please tell us your choices) (at least two or three) and why you prefer them.
8. Your are in the sitting room talking to your good friend over the phone and crying. Your mother also feels very sad. This is what you tell your friend.
9. This morning you received a letter from Beijing Medical University saying that you had been admitted to the University.
Please tell us what you think of it and what you want to do then?
10. You are talking with one of your close friends about Chinese Festivals. You say to him, “I like the Mid-autumn Day best.” He asks, “ Why?”
You tell him why and be sure to give him your reasons.
11. Last week your parents were both on a business trip and you were left home alone for a few days. Tell your friends that a difficult (or a happy) time you had during those days.
【试题答案】
1. Yesterday when I was walking along the bank on my way home after school, suddenly I heard someone crying for help. I rushed towards the riverside and saw a boy struggling in the water. At that time I jumped into the water without hesitation. With the help of some other people, the boy was saved. And I went home immediately without being seen.
2. I was unlucky yesterday .The bus broke down on the half way . The bus driver began to repair it. Ten minutes passed, and I became impatient with waiting. So I rushed out of the bus and had to wait for another one. What was worse, when I got to the school ,the class had already began.
I was late for school.
3. I stopped and looked up too. There! A young man was standing at the top of a hoist. He threatened to jump off it. How dangerous the situation was! Soon the police arrived. After thirty minutes persuasion, the young man finally gave up his mind. Not until then did I calm myself down.
4. I was unlucky this morning. I had just stepped out of the bus when a young man rode hurriedly and knocked me down. Luckily, I wasn’t hurt badly except my ankle. I had seen the doctor before I came here. The doctor told me it was nothing serious. Don’t worry. I’ll be all right soon.
5. One million yuan! That sounds g reat to me! You know, I’m expecting it for a long time. Of course, it would be wise to put away some money for the future. However, the first thing I want to do is to make my mother’s dream come true. My mum has always had a wish for taking a journey around the world, but her income could never afford it. If I won the money , I would be very pleased to help her.
6. To improve traffic in Beijing, I think, first, we should widen or build more roads to provide better traffic conditions. Second, the government should encourage more people to use public transport and bicycles so as to ease the traffic flow. Third, everyone in Beijing, especially those who drive or walk on the street, should follow the traffic rules.
7. As far as city transport is concerned, I prefer buses because they are cheapest way to get around. On the other hand, compared with the cityrail, there are many more bus routes throughout the town, which make any trip easy. As the expense of using taxis is much greater, I seldom take them. Sometimes I ride a bike because by this means I am free to go wherever I would like to, the places which buses or the cityrail do not reach.
8. Today I am feeling very sad because our pet dog, Huanhuan, is missing. Whenever I got home, he would run over to the door and welcome me by shaking its tail. Then he would bring my slippers to me. But yesterday I could not find it anywhere. The whole family started a search for it, but in vain. I am thinking of looking for it again after school.
9. When I heard from it, I was feeling quite excited. I have been dreaming of becoming an excellent doctor from my childhood. I want to help the sick and save them. Now I would have my dream come true.
I am sure that I will keep on working hard with my future studies so as to achieve my goals.
10. First, the mid-autumn Day comes in a beautiful season. Autumn is a time of harvest and everyone feels happy. Second, the day is a time of family reunion. All the family members get together to share their happiness. Third, the delicious moon cakes are also a reason for my favor for the day. The beautiful moon tale also adds some fun to this day. We can enjoy the round moon at the same time having the moon cakes.
11. I really had a hard time last week. You know, my parents would wake me up every morning, but during those days I had to get up myself. On the first night I set the alarm at 6:00, but it did not wake me up at all the next morning. I was scolded by my teacher. Afterwards, I was bought three new clocks and set them all together. What noisy morning I had!
2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧 2018-08-10英语：高考书面表达解析及写作技巧一、解读书面表达书面表达是一个综合性题目，要求考生根据所给图画、图表、提纲(或者开放性)等，运用所学知识将提示信息组成句子，句子连成段，段连成篇。 它不断要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。 它也是一种融形式、文体、交际三位于一体的试题，所考查内容都体现在表达和传递信息的交流能力，因此，书面表达有交流性、实用性、合理性等特点。 近几年来高考书面表达正在一步步地向考试要考语言运用能力这一方向改进，并采用了新的评分标准，因此要求考生语言的准确性和得体性，注重上、下文连贯，注重表达方式多样化。 新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过渡性词汇增强文章连贯性。 如果考生在表达中只是运用了简单句，虽然表达了要求的信息，那么得分也不会高。 因此，近几年高考要求考生掌握词汇要丰富，句式表达要复杂，适当地使用情感性语言。 二、各种题型的应试对策1图画作文要求考生首先仔细观察，读懂图意，抓住要点，按图片顺序编拟提纲，同时要注意图片所给的时
间、背景等相关信息，确定写作的人称、时态和语态。 在写作时还要适当地使用一些关联词、过渡句来加工润色，使文章层次清楚、通顺畅达。 这种作文的难点在于要求考生能自己编拟出合适的要点，并且表达上要连贯。 2图表作文要求考生能分析把握该图表要表达的内容，确定主题，然后从图表中归纳出相应要点来写作。 这种作文能有效考查考生的篇章结构组织能力，要求写作具有逻辑性。 3提纲作文要求考生首先将所给出的要点进行组织，按照一定的逻辑顺序用明白、恰当、得体的语言来表达；要尽量消除汉语式的英文表达。 这种作文切忌逐字逐句汉译英，使得文章支离破碎，不忍卒读。 相对来说，这种作文难度相对较小。 4（半）开放性作文要求考生能根据相当简短的提示来写作；或者要求续写一段文字，或者写出你的感想等等。 这种形式为考生张扬个性提供了空间，答案不唯一，淋漓尽致地考查了考生发散思维和创新思维能力。 它还可能包括改写、缩写等其他形式。 近年来不少自主命题省（市）的高考试题有向（半）开放性过渡的趋势。
2017年高考全国英语新课标卷I/II/III书面表达及满分范文 2017年高考全国英语新课标卷I 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： 1. 时间和地点； 2. 内容：学习唐诗； 3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1. 包括以上要点； 2. 不要逐字逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节； 3.字数100左右。 满分范文 Dear Leslie, I am writing to inform you of our next class, which is about poetry of the Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building6. In order to learn it better, you need to do the following things before the next class. At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in our literature. You can find some original poems of famous poets, such as Li Bai and Du Fu. Besides, knowing the history of the Tang Dynasty will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems. You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply. Yours, Li Hua. 2017年高考全国英语新课标卷II 假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
书面表达 一、内容解读 提纲作文是高考书面表达的考查热点之一。命题者把材料分割成信息块，用独立的文字信息表示出来。这类题型中有较多的文字说明，对考生的表述思路有较明确的规定。形式以书信、报道、通知、日记等为主，内容贴近学生生活。 二、能力解读 根据《考试大纲》中对于写作的要求，提纲类作文要求考生能够灵活运用英语知识，根据相关信息将试题要求的要点完整地表述出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。 这类题型的主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体。考生极容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成翻译，造成语法结构和词汇使用上的单调。要写好提纲式作文，应注意以下几点： 1、细读提示，认真审题，把握体裁 审题应包括：审体裁，高考书面表达题的体裁一般有记叙文、说明文和应用文等；审格式，特别注意掌握应用文(书信、通知、演讲稿等)的格式；定人称，根据命题内容需要，对人称进行合理的选择定位；定时态，英语的动词与汉语的动词用法有很大的差别，是考生常出错误的地方。 2、紧扣主题，组织要点 虽然提纲作文的“要点”似乎已经定好了，但在认真审题，弄清楚题意的基础上，仍要逐个地、完美无缺地把内容要点列出来。 3、选词造句，初步成文 在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序选词造句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。 4、仔细审核，查漏补缺 写作时，由于时间仓促，加上心情紧张和粗心，难免出现错漏现象，如漏掉内容要点，字母大小写不准确，单词拼写有误，习惯用语搭配不当，时态混乱，主谓不一致以及母语干扰造成的中文式英语等。所有的这些问题，都值得考生在定稿前认真检查、仔细核对、及时修补，力争做到全文信息齐全、结构合理、语句表达准确。 三、提纲作文的常用模版句型 1．开篇句 With the development of economy...随着经济的发展……
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高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇 ---多背范文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 范文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know th at the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@https://www.doczj.com/doc/0c11385920.html,. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2
2011高考英语书面表达强化训练 历届高考英语书面表达中使用过的词组总汇 1.a boy of 14. 2.a brief discussion 3.a heated discussion about 4.a waste of time 5.a wilderness survival program 6.achieve this goal 7.after a short rest 8.after—class activities 9.agree with what sb says 10.air pollution 11.an English speech contest 12.arrive at an agreement 13.as far as I know 14.as for myself 15.as is shown on Chart 2 16.as we all know 17.as well 18.at home and abroad 19.at the age of 20.at weekends 21.attend classes 22.attractive and meaningful 23.be about to do---when 24.be against the idea of— 25.be available 26.be fond of 27.be healthier and more energetic 28.be on the point of doing sth when 29.be trained 30.Best wishes 31.break the rules 32.build a “harmonious society 33.catch sight of 34.charge fees for 35.chat with friends online about 36.cheating in examinations 37.collect stamps 38.get close to nature 39.cover the entrance fees 40.deal with this problem 41.develop its economy scientifically 42.develop rapidly 43.do a lot of harm 44.do endless homework 45.early in the morning 46.express thanks to 47.fail in the exams 48.follow one’s own interests 49.for one reason, for another reason 50.for this purpose 51.form/ develop/get into a bad habit 52.free of charge 53.get along well with 54.get better results 55.get cheated 56.get everything ready for 57get rid of/ kick off 58.get the free medical care 59.get the position 60.get well prepared for 61give sb a warm welcome 62.give sb some advice on how to do sth 63.give sb some wonderful performances 64.go to the countryside for a change 65.Good luck in your coming examination 66.group discussion 67.have some trouble doing sth 68.have a discussion about 69.have a history of 200 years 70.have confidence in oneself 71.have much knowledge in many fields 72.head west 73.hear from 74.hold a party 75.heavy traffic 76.improve one’s English study 77.improe our study methods 78.in favor of 79.in one’s early/late thirties 80.in rush hour 81.in the past ten years 82.introduce sb to sb 83.it is convenient for sb to do sth 84.It’s one’s duty to do sth 85.It is pretty hard for sb 86.it’s been a dream for sb to do sth 87.join sb in doing sth https://www.doczj.com/doc/0c11385920.html,y a solid foundation for 89.learn more about nature 90.let one’s imagination fly 91.let out a cry of joy 92.lie to the east of 93.listening and speaking abilities 94.living condition 95.look forward to 96.make a trip to 97.make arrangements 98.make friends online 99.make one’s decision as soon as possible 100.May I have your attention ? 101.miss the good/golden chance/opportunity 102.noble spirit 103.opinions are divided on the question https://www.doczj.com/doc/0c11385920.html,anize a tour around the city 105.pay a visit to 106.prepare lunch 107.promote the students’ abilities 108.recommend 109.reduce learning load 110.result from 111.result in 112.satisfy one’s needs 113.sb be required to be there on time 114.school rules 115.shortly after 116.show interest in 117.show one’s love for 118.show one’s talent 119.show sb around 120.sign up 121.sign your name 122.solve the problem 123.spare no efforts to do sth 124.sports activities 125.spread Chinese culture 126.start school 127.sth is drawing near. 128.stick to the post 129.take advantage of
安徽 假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文 刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下： 表示赞成。 提出你喜欢的栏目。 简要说明理由。 注意： 1．词数100左右。 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4．参考词汇：栏目一column ﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡ June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ Yours faithfully Li Hua June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. I would like the magazine to have three columns : News, Teachers' Advice and Students' V oice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools. In Teachers' Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students' V oice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies. I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 北京 第一节情景作文（20分） 假设你是李华，要给英国笔友Harry写封信，介绍你班两位同学精选班长的 过程。请按下图顺序描述。 注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60. 提示词：竞选班长monitor election
高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作 一. 教学内容： 书面表达讲解与训练 开放性写作（北京卷） 开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。 写作注意要点： 1. 审题要准，定位要清。 即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。 2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。 要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。 要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。 3. 内容充实，详略得当。 要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。 考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。 4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。 【典型例题】 ［开放性写作分类与解析：］ 1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect） 根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。 注意：词数不少于30。 You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. Possible version: I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
全国各地高考英语书面表达汇总9套 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values. During winter, the sky is still dark at 6：30 a．m. when the first－year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165－acre campus and it can take up to an hour. Mr. Sun, the university official, said labor is good for building character and promotes “the spirit of hard work.”Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus. They never litter because they've been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others. Some students, however, are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction. Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms. 【写作内容】 1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。 2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1) 支持或反对这个学校的做法；(2) 用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 【写作要求】 1. 可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据。 2. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句。 3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 4. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 支持： One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits. Some people support the program while others do not.(30) Generally, I am in favor of the practice. To begin with, through their effort, students provide a clean and comfortable environment, which, as a result, is an assurance of their successful academic life. Moreover, cleaning and labor can not only serve to build students' character but also contribute positively to students developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits. Last but not least, by enjoying the fruits of others' labor, students will develop the awareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor. In short, carrying out the cleaning program is crucial. The significance for students of participating in it means more than academic success. It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as the campus. (120) 反对： It is required by one university in Zhengzhou that students should clean the campus every morning to achieve class credits. Opinions on the practice vary widely from person to person.(30) I am strongly opposed to the practice for the following reasons. First of all, cleaning tends to take up too much time, which becomes a distraction for students and discourages them from focusing on their academic performances. Then, students can be encouraged to maintain clean living areas but it's unreasonable to relate the cleaning with the academic credits. As students, they should put more efforts into their studies to achieve class credits instead of sweeping the campus. Furthermore, though someone claims labor can contribute to developing the spirit of hard work, it should by no means be achieved through daily floor－sweeping. In conclusion, there is no sense in students sweeping the campus, for it benefits neither their character nor study.(120)
2017年高考英语作文全国卷6篇精选 高考已经进入了倒计时，你知道今年有哪些高考英语预测作文吗?下面是给大家精心挑选的2017年高考英语作文，希望大家喜欢!供你参考和阅读! 为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展，某学校开 展以“How to behave well”为主题的英语作文，请你以一名中学 生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。 内容包括：1。守时，不说脏话;2。礼貌待人，热心助人;3。遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾; 注意：1。文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2。内容可适当扩充。 [优秀满分范文] How to behave well As a student in Yibin，we should behave well。 First，I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises。Never lie to others or say dirty words。Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need。Then we’d better not talk loudly in public。Don’t throw litter or spit about。And remember to obey traffic rules。 Finally，learn to work with others。We need good team
work in our life。 高考英语作文篇2假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。 时间：下周六上午8:00----11:00 内容：采摘苹果报名：办公室，下周四下午5:00前提示：戴帽子，手套。欢迎踊跃参加。 范文： Hi, everyone , We’ll have an important activity;picking apples. The picking will go on from 8:00 am to 11:00 am next Saturday and welcome all of the people in our community to join in the activity . To join in the activity , you should sign your name in the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday ,which is the deadline ! Don’t miss it ! Attention! It is suggested that all the people who will join in picking apples should wear a hat and a pair of gloves because there will be a lot of leaves or dirty things that will otherwise fall on your head and make your hands dirty . Be active , everyone in our community ! The community board 高考英语作文篇3你(Li Hua)在互联网(Internet)上看到美国高中生Tony希望结识一位中国朋友的信息，请你用英文给他发一封电
2020届新高考英语书面表达内容概要高三作文模拟写作指导与解读 一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 It is quite reasonable to blame traffic jams, the cost of gas and the great speed of modern life, but manners on the road are becoming horrible. Everybody knows that the nicest men would become fierce tiger s behind the wheel. It is all right to have a tiger in a cage, but to have one in the driver's seat is another matter. Road politeness is not only good manners, but good sense. It takes the most cool-headed drivers great patience to give up the desire to beat back when forced to face rude driving. On the other hand, a little politeness goes a long way towards reducing the possibility of quarrelling and fighting. A friendly nod or a wave of thanks in answer to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of good will and becomes so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such behaviors of politeness are by no means enough. Many drivers nowadays don't even seem able to recognize politeness when they see it. However, misplaced politeness can also be dangerous. Typical examples are the driver who waves a child crossing the street at a wrong place into the path of oncoming cars that may not be able to stop in time. The same goes for encouraging old ladies to cross the road wherever and whenever they want to. An experienced driver, whose manners are faultless, told me it would help if drivers learnt to correctly join in traffic stream without causing total blockages that give rise to
高考英语书面表达最后精选 城市生活的利与弊 某英文报社准备刊发一篇题为Living in the city的有关城市生活的利和弊的 文章，根据下面提示，写一篇词数为100左右的短文。 Advantages Disadvantages 找工作容易生活消费高 交通便利人口多，拥挤 有公园、饭店等休闲场所空气污染、居住环境差 要求：1．覆盖以上内容，可作适当发挥。2．词数100左右。 Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages. It is often easier to find work. There are always many choices of public transport. Besides, there are a lot of interesting things to do and places to see. You can eat in good restaurants, visit museums, go to cinemas and go to parks whenever you want to relax. However, living in a city is often very expensive. You must find a well-paid job, otherwise, you will not be able to afford the things you will do. What's more, the city is always crowded, noisy and dirty. It is very difficult to find a good place where people can enjoy peace and fresh air as in the countryside. 说明文-English Summer Camp 假如你是李辉，参加了1998年7月25—30 日在山东烟台由英语辅导报社举办的全国中学 生英语夏令营活动。请根据所给提示，用英语写一篇100—140 字的报导，以便刊登在«英语通»上。 提示：1、来自全国各地的100多名中学生参加了活动； 2、有来自国内外的30多名英语教学专家； 3、营员们必须用英语交流； 4、举办了一系列活动：1）第二届全国中学生英语辩论赛； 2）第三届全国中学生英语演讲比赛； 3）参观了名胜古迹； 4）举办了英语晚会。 思路指津：注意：1、应包括自己参加夏令营的体会。 2、参考词汇： 1）英语辅导报社：English Coaching Paper Office 2) 1998年全国中学生英语夏令营：1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students (1998 NESCMSS); 3) 辩论：debate 4) 演讲比赛：speech competition 5) 主办：sponsor 6) 英语通： An Express Way to English 3、不要逐句翻译提示，可增加适当有关细节，使文章连贯。 范文： 1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students As a lucky student, I attended the 1998 NESCMSS held in the beautiful seaside city of Yantai from July 25 to 30, which was sponsored by the English Coaching Paper Office. Over 100 students all over the country and 30 English teaching experts from home and abroad took part in the activity. All the campers were required to speak English. During the four days, a series of English activities were held including the Second National English Debate for Middle School Students and the Third National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students. We also visited some places of interest. A colourful English evening was held on July 29. The camp provided us with a valuable opportunity to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. I found my English much improved at the end of the camp. Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in Yantai. 上大学是高中生唯一的出路吗