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高考英语书面表达必备6
1.【浙江省学军中学高三上学期第四次月考英语试题】
假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。
注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter．
答案：
Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter．
Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches.
Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence．
I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart
2.【浙江省宁波效实中学高三上学期期中考试英语试题】
假如你是来自美国的Peter，在中国留学期间，经常在马路上看到一些人不遵守交通规则，于是向某报社写信反映此情况，内容如下：
1．部分行人过马路时慢慢悠悠或攀爬护栏；
2．某些骑自行车的人擅闯红灯；
3．一些司机驾车时不系安全带；超速行驶；在开车时抽烟、打电话；
4．你的看法和建议……
注意：字数120左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数）
参考词汇：行人pedestrian；护栏 guardrail
Dear Editor,
I am a foreign student from America and I am studying in China. I find many people break the traffic rules here.
答案：
I am a foreign student from America and I am studying in China. I find many people break the traffic rules here. For example, some pedestrians cross the streets slowly and some jump over the guardrails in the streets. Some cyclists don’t stop when the traffic lights turn red. What’s worse, many drivers don’t fasten their seat belts while driving. Smoking, speaking on mobile phones and exceeding the speed limit while driving can be seen everywhere. In my opinion, these actions are very irresponsible and dangerous. It is our duty to obey the traffic rules. We must treasure our lives and protect the lives of others. So I suggest than those who break traffic rules should be fined or punished. Only in this way will they think twice about breaking traffic rules again.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Peter
3.【浙江省杭州二中高三上学期第三次月考英语试题】
近几年，很多广告都请明星代言，同时“明星代言”也出现了一些负面影响。请参考所给要点，写一篇有关明星代言的英语短文。
要点：1、明星代言现象很普遍。
2、明星代言广告存在一些问题。
3、你的看法。
注意：1、词数：100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
2、参考词汇：名人，明星 celebrity
假冒伪劣产品 fake commodities
有系统地调节、管制 regulate v．
Celebrities as the products’ spokesperson
In recent years, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokespersons or representatives for a wide variety of products．
答案：
In recent years, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokespersons or representatives for a wide variety of products．Celebrities’advertisements can be easily found on the Internet, televisions, newspapers, magazines and even on the walls of some buildings．
There are, however, some problems for celebrities and the consumers．To begin with, before representing, a star may know nothing about the product．Thus, the consumers may be misled. Even worse, some stars advertise for items with low quality,
even for fake commodities．In the case of Sanlu, the public image of stars involved was spoiled.
From my point of view, it is high time that measures were taken．Firstly, laws should be worked out to regulate celebrities’ advertising．Secondly, stars should be required to tell the truth to the public. Only by doing so can stars be trusted by their fans and can consumers benefit．
4.【浙江省杭州二中高三第二次月考】
请根据以下任务说明和写作要求，写一篇100--120词的英语短文。
假如你是李华，请就本校食堂服务（canteen service）的状况给校长写一封信。内容包括：
优点：食堂干净；饭菜可口；服务态度好
不足：价格偏高；种类偏少；等候时间较长
建议：……………
开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Principal,
I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school. ______________
答案：
Dear Mr. Principal,
I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about the canteen service in our school. In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look inviting and taste delicious as well. What’s more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.
However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high. Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
5.【余姚中学高三英语第二次质量检测试卷】
据报道，圣诞节这个原本是西方的传统节日在中国愈来愈受到青睐。为此，已有学者发出倡议，号召国人慎对圣诞，抵制西方文化扩张。请以“Do We Need to Fear the Popularity of Christmas?”为题，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，要点如下：
1．圣诞节已成为年轻人推崇的时尚。
2．中国传统的节日正渐渐淡出年轻人的生活。
3．你认为对待西方文化应持的态度。
Do We Need to Fear the
Popularity of Christmas?
答案：
6【温州中学二○○九第一学期第二次月考】
目前， 学校存在少数考生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文， 标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”.请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。开头已给出。（120 words ）
内容要点如下： 主
要原因 考试偏多 不用功 取悦父母，老师
答案：
7、【慈溪中学高三第二次月考英语试卷】
写一篇短文，题目是Do “ Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?，词数100-120
左右，要求包含下面的内
容：1、有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。
2、我认为数字与运气无关。
注意：开头已经写好
Do “ Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
My friend Mary was born on June 13, 1986. She is always dissatisfied with her birthday because 13 is a bad number. _______________________
答案：
8【浙江省金华一中高三年级12月月考】
随着人们生活水平日益提高和手机收费不断降价，手机已经成为人们日常生活中的必需品，也开始大量涌入中学校园。由此引发一场观念碰撞：中学业生该不该带手机？请你围绕“Is it necessary for a middle school student to carry a mobile phone?”这个问题，参考所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1．带手机的好处；
2．带手机的不利因素；
3．我的观点是：
注意：
1．词数100~120，短文开头已给出（不计词数）
2．参考词汇：convenient 方便的 the electric wave radiation电波辐射
答案：
Today I was a success! Not only did I challenge the strength that a runner needed but also I learned that by trying my best would really make a difference.
Possible version:
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular in China. As is said, there are more than 500 million mobile users in our country. Sometimes you can even see students using them.
Mobile phones have brought people a lot of benefits, but the most important is that they are convenient. If there is a sudden accident at school, It is much quicker for us to dial for help.
However, mobile phones can also bring people problems. The most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users’ brain. Another problem is the when we are having a lesson, the ring of the mobile phone may interrupt us. Last but not the least, students may spend a lot of time playing games in the mobile phone as well as sending short messages.
In my opinion, because there are more disadvantages than advantages, it is not necessary for us students to carry a mobile phone at school.
9.【白云中学第一学期第二次月考】
假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你
理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
年龄；性别；爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。
注意：1．词数100 左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语已
为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
Best regards,
Li Hua
答案：
10.【风华书院高三第二次阶段性考试英语试题卷】
你校某研究性学习小组正在开展关于“学生与家长、老师、同学之间的关系处理”的调
查。请你就这一话题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：
1．现状：关系处理总体情况较好，但仍存在一些问题，如与同学吵架、不听家长和
老师的教育等。
2．你个人的改进意见(至少两条)．
注意：词数100-120，文章的开头已给出(不计词数)。
A survey about the relationship between students and teachers，family members
or classmates is being made by a research study group of our school．
答案：
H o u r s s p e n t p e r w e e k o n a v e r a g e
65
4321
Age groups
16-1813-1510-1207-9
11.【浙江省桐乡一中高三上学期12月英语试题下面的柱状图（bar chart ）显示了
不同年龄段孩子与父母谈心的情况。
Time spent in talking with parents
根据上图信息，请以“Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents ”为题，用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。要求如下：
1. 简要描述图中信息；
2. 说明原因（如忙于学习或工作、缺少共同话题……）；
3. 谈谈你的看法。
注意：文章的标题和开头已给出（不计词数）。
Heart-to-Heart Talks with Parents
答案：
In my opinion, children should let their parents know more about what they are interested in. At the same time, parents should spend more time talking with their children and sharing opinions with them. Only in this way can they better understand each other.
目录 突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达 (1) 第一讲提升英语写作的“三板斧” (3) 第二讲熟练写作的10类体裁 (18) 《突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达》 【高考命题规律】 1.语用目的——讲好中国故事，增强文化自信 高考书面表达的情境设置真实，任务要求符合考生能力水平，又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容，能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，增强文化自信。 2.文体形式——以应用文为主，主要考查书信/电子邮件 从近几年高考全国卷来看，书面表达主要考查应用文，其中以电子邮件为主，邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多，只有2018年全国卷Ⅱ考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体，近几年来，当仁不让地成为了命题专家的最爱，而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。 3.提示类型——以提纲作文为主，试题的开放性越来越强 近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主，但提示越来越简洁，试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示，又留有供其自由发挥的空间，既让低水平的考生有话可写，又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会，保证试卷的区分度。 【掌握备考策略】 ●普通作文VS高分作文——找出差距才能目标明确
●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧 2018-08-10英语：高考书面表达解析及写作技巧一、解读书面表达书面表达是一个综合性题目，要求考生根据所给图画、图表、提纲(或者开放性)等，运用所学知识将提示信息组成句子，句子连成段，段连成篇。 它不断要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。 它也是一种融形式、文体、交际三位于一体的试题，所考查内容都体现在表达和传递信息的交流能力，因此，书面表达有交流性、实用性、合理性等特点。 近几年来高考书面表达正在一步步地向考试要考语言运用能力这一方向改进，并采用了新的评分标准，因此要求考生语言的准确性和得体性，注重上、下文连贯，注重表达方式多样化。 新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过渡性词汇增强文章连贯性。 如果考生在表达中只是运用了简单句，虽然表达了要求的信息，那么得分也不会高。 因此，近几年高考要求考生掌握词汇要丰富，句式表达要复杂，适当地使用情感性语言。 二、各种题型的应试对策1图画作文要求考生首先仔细观察，读懂图意，抓住要点，按图片顺序编拟提纲，同时要注意图片所给的时
间、背景等相关信息，确定写作的人称、时态和语态。 在写作时还要适当地使用一些关联词、过渡句来加工润色，使文章层次清楚、通顺畅达。 这种作文的难点在于要求考生能自己编拟出合适的要点，并且表达上要连贯。 2图表作文要求考生能分析把握该图表要表达的内容，确定主题，然后从图表中归纳出相应要点来写作。 这种作文能有效考查考生的篇章结构组织能力，要求写作具有逻辑性。 3提纲作文要求考生首先将所给出的要点进行组织，按照一定的逻辑顺序用明白、恰当、得体的语言来表达；要尽量消除汉语式的英文表达。 这种作文切忌逐字逐句汉译英，使得文章支离破碎，不忍卒读。 相对来说，这种作文难度相对较小。 4（半）开放性作文要求考生能根据相当简短的提示来写作；或者要求续写一段文字，或者写出你的感想等等。 这种形式为考生张扬个性提供了空间，答案不唯一，淋漓尽致地考查了考生发散思维和创新思维能力。 它还可能包括改写、缩写等其他形式。 近年来不少自主命题省（市）的高考试题有向（半）开放性过渡的趋势。
2011高考英语书面表达强化训练 历届高考英语书面表达中使用过的词组总汇 1.a boy of 14. 2.a brief discussion 3.a heated discussion about 4.a waste of time 5.a wilderness survival program 6.achieve this goal 7.after a short rest 8.after—class activities 9.agree with what sb says 10.air pollution 11.an English speech contest 12.arrive at an agreement 13.as far as I know 14.as for myself 15.as is shown on Chart 2 16.as we all know 17.as well 18.at home and abroad 19.at the age of 20.at weekends 21.attend classes 22.attractive and meaningful 23.be about to do---when 24.be against the idea of— 25.be available 26.be fond of 27.be healthier and more energetic 28.be on the point of doing sth when 29.be trained 30.Best wishes 31.break the rules 32.build a “harmonious society 33.catch sight of 34.charge fees for 35.chat with friends online about 36.cheating in examinations 37.collect stamps 38.get close to nature 39.cover the entrance fees 40.deal with this problem 41.develop its economy scientifically 42.develop rapidly 43.do a lot of harm 44.do endless homework 45.early in the morning 46.express thanks to 47.fail in the exams 48.follow one’s own interests 49.for one reason, for another reason 50.for this purpose 51.form/ develop/get into a bad habit 52.free of charge 53.get along well with 54.get better results 55.get cheated 56.get everything ready for 57get rid of/ kick off 58.get the free medical care 59.get the position 60.get well prepared for 61give sb a warm welcome 62.give sb some advice on how to do sth 63.give sb some wonderful performances 64.go to the countryside for a change 65.Good luck in your coming examination 66.group discussion 67.have some trouble doing sth 68.have a discussion about 69.have a history of 200 years 70.have confidence in oneself 71.have much knowledge in many fields 72.head west 73.hear from 74.hold a party 75.heavy traffic 76.improve one’s English study 77.improe our study methods 78.in favor of 79.in one’s early/late thirties 80.in rush hour 81.in the past ten years 82.introduce sb to sb 83.it is convenient for sb to do sth 84.It’s one’s duty to do sth 85.It is pretty hard for sb 86.it’s been a dream for sb to do sth 87.join sb in doing sth https://www.doczj.com/doc/1811160094.html,y a solid foundation for 89.learn more about nature 90.let one’s imagination fly 91.let out a cry of joy 92.lie to the east of 93.listening and speaking abilities 94.living condition 95.look forward to 96.make a trip to 97.make arrangements 98.make friends online 99.make one’s decision as soon as possible 100.May I have your attention ? 101.miss the good/golden chance/opportunity 102.noble spirit 103.opinions are divided on the question https://www.doczj.com/doc/1811160094.html,anize a tour around the city 105.pay a visit to 106.prepare lunch 107.promote the students’ abilities 108.recommend 109.reduce learning load 110.result from 111.result in 112.satisfy one’s needs 113.sb be required to be there on time 114.school rules 115.shortly after 116.show interest in 117.show one’s love for 118.show one’s talent 119.show sb around 120.sign up 121.sign your name 122.solve the problem 123.spare no efforts to do sth 124.sports activities 125.spread Chinese culture 126.start school 127.sth is drawing near. 128.stick to the post 129.take advantage of
2009年高考书面表达分析指导（三） 第三篇写初稿 要点列出后，就可以着手写初稿了。写作时，应考虑以下问题： 一、句子的正确性 正确性是句子最基本的要求，比如及物动词要接宾语，应接动名词的动词后不能接不定式，如admit 等。常见的句子错误有： 1. 结构不完整我们学过简单句的六种基本类型： 1. S+V（主语+谓动）； 2. S+V+P（主语+系动词+表语）; 3.S+V+0（主语+谓动+宾语）; 4. S+V+0i+0d（主语+谓动+间接宾语+直接宾语）; 5. S+V+O+Oc（主语+谓动+宾语+宾补）； 6. There be 句型。 结构不完整是指句子的成分残缺，不符合上述六种基本句型的要求。例如： I ' d like to friends with you缺少动词，friends 前应力卩be 或make） En glish is so i nteresti ng that I like very much. （like 为及物动词，后缺少宾语，应补上it） He kn ocked the door quietly, so I did n （kno'ckt 为e不及物动词，不能直接 接宾语，需使用介词at） The teacher expla ined us the senten ce. （explai 不能接双宾语，向某人解释某事”为explain to sb. sth. 或explain sth to sb.） They supplied us some new computers. （suppl 不能接双宾语，为某人提供某 物”为supply sb. with sth. 或supply sth. to sb.） 2. 不合乎语法规则 正确的句子必须是合乎语法规范、无语法错误的句子，既要合乎词法，又要合乎句法。中学生常犯的词法错误有：名词数、格的错误;形容词、副词级别、词序错误;动词的时态、语态、语气、非谓语动词错误等。例如： You can find a lot of informations on the Internet. （information 为不可数名词，没有复数形式） Which is the second longer river in China? （第二长的”应使用最高级，即the second longest） He is eno ugh tall to pick the apples on the tree. （enoug 修饰形容词或畐寸词时应后置） How many satellites did China send up so far?与so far连用应使用完成时） My hometown grows cotton. （该句应使用被动语态，改为：Cotton is grown in my hometown.） To have no money with me, I didn a c ny t hbinugy. （不定式作状语只能表示目 的，或与only连用表示意外的结果。此处表示原因，应使用现在分词，改为：Havi ng no money with me, …）
2013—2017全国卷高考英语书面表达真题及参考范文汇总 2018年高考在即，笔者收集从2013年至2017年全国卷高考英语书面表达12份，并提供参考范文。从历年高考真题汲取营养是十分重要的，要学着从命题者的角度来揣摩高考英语书面表达是怎么命题，从参考范文来学高分表达。 《2018年高考英语考试说明》对书面表达的要求第五档（很好）（21－25分）：完全完成了试题规定的任务：覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力。有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。 从以上要求可以看出，五档作文有以下特点：（1）内容要点全；（2）使用了较高级的词汇；(3) 使用了较丰富的句式；(4).使用了恰当的连接词；（5）书写工整，卷面干净整洁。 问题来了：怎么利用这些书面表达真题呢？看题目，学着罗列要点，并设计每段的亮点，接着再对照范文来检测自己所列的要点是否全面，再看看范文当中有没有自己可以学习的表达，把这些好的表达吸收起来，这样就会慢慢地进步。 衷心希望同学们能够从真题中悟出一些道道，在高考英语书面表达中取得优异成绩！ 1、2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(课标全国卷Ⅰ) 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明: 李明:高个子,戴眼镜 航班号:CA985 到达:8月6日上午11:30 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 第二节书面表达 [写作提示]
安徽 假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文 刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下： 表示赞成。 提出你喜欢的栏目。 简要说明理由。 注意： 1．词数100左右。 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4．参考词汇：栏目一column ﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡ June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ Yours faithfully Li Hua June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. I would like the magazine to have three columns : News, Teachers' Advice and Students' V oice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools. In Teachers' Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students' V oice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies. I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 北京 第一节情景作文（20分） 假设你是李华，要给英国笔友Harry写封信，介绍你班两位同学精选班长的 过程。请按下图顺序描述。 注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60. 提示词：竞选班长monitor election
高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作 一. 教学内容： 书面表达讲解与训练 开放性写作（北京卷） 开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。 写作注意要点： 1. 审题要准，定位要清。 即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。 2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。 要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。 要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。 3. 内容充实，详略得当。 要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。 考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。 4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。 【典型例题】 ［开放性写作分类与解析：］ 1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect） 根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。 注意：词数不少于30。 You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. Possible version: I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
高考英语书面表达题型分析 书面表达是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识的综合能力，这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在高考英语卷中占25分，约占全卷分值17%，是重要题型。而在听、说、读、写四项技能中，“写”是最令学生头疼，有些学生对书面表达题束手无策，无从下手。在日常的书面表达作业处理上，很多老师不注重及时给予批改或提供反馈信息；而在平常的考试测验中书面表达题很多时候被老师们看成是“调节剂”，即根据试卷的难易程度来判分，间接导致学生不能客观对待自己的写作能力。在对书面表达的订正往往老师仅局限与把范文读给学生听或张贴。久而久之学生对写作持敷衍态度，良好的写作习惯没有养成，导致书面表达题又成为高考失分的主要方面。 因此，在高中阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培养学生的英语书面表达能力是极为重要的。 一、高考书面表达题型分析 高考书面表达旨在考查学生的书面运用语言的能力，看其是否能运用所学的知识和所掌握的技能进行思想交流。从历年的书面表达题来看，要求所写的题目形式多样，有记叙文(Narration)、说明文(Exposition)、描写文(Description)、日记(Diary)、书信(Letter) 、通知(Notice)和便条(Note)等等，所涉及的内容繁多。根据《高考英语科考试说明》，书面表达的题目要求考生根据所给情景（包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等）和提供的形式（图画、图表、提纲等）写一篇100字的短文，文章要切中题意，语言要准确得当，条理清楚。在体裁与题材上要多加注意。 本文就怎样做好书面表达题提出本人的几点看法。 【样题】假设你是李华，你上个星期去市图书馆看书发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr.Li 反映： 1、新书太少； 2、书架上的书比较混乱； 3、阅览室的一盏灯坏了； 4、管理员工作时彼此闲聊。 注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
历年上海高考英语作文及参考范文 1999上海高考作文及范例 一些学生认为学英语很重要；一些学生则认为不必学英语；我认为。。。。。。（观点、理由） Some students think it is very important to master English. They believe “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”, Others consider English useless. They feel lear ning English is nothing but a burden to them. In my opinion, English is one of the most important subjects we learn at school. Of all subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why English is my favorite subject. First, English is one of the most widely used languages of the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the world’s technical materials are in English, thus a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly，it is believed that good English also leads to greater chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible. (166words) 2000年上海高考作文及范例 1。我最难忘的一课2。具体说明为何难忘3。感想 An Unforgettable Lesson In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident. One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come t o teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her. She sat on a chair and began her lesson. She spoke slowly but forcefully. She prepared her lecture quite well and demanded that we do the same. Towards the end of the lesson, we got lots of homework from her. A good teacher is many things to many people. Everyone has definite ideas about what a good teacher is. In my opinion the teachers who demanded the most from the students are perhaps liked best. (210 words)
【关键字】活动、作文、英语、要点、发现、研究、支撑、环境、标准、任务、关系、取决于、规范 任务型阅读与书面表达组合练(三) (限时40分钟) Ⅰ.任务型阅读 (2017·南京、盐城高三二模)“HELL is a city much like London，” said Percy Bysshe Shelley in 1819. Modern academics agree. Last year Dutch researchers showed that city dwellers (居民) have a 21% higher risk of suffering from anxiety disorders than do their calmer rural countrymen, and a 39% higher risk of suffering from mood disorders. But exactly how the inner workings of the urban and rural minds cause this difference has remained unclear —until now. A study just published in Nature by Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg of the University of Heidelberg and his colleagues has used a scanning technique called functional magnetic-res onance imaging (机能性磁共振成像，简称fMRI) to examine the brains of city dwellers and countrymen when they are under stress. In Dr Meye r-Lindenberg's first experiment, participants lying with their heads in a scanner took maths tests that they were bound to fail (the researchers had designed success rates to be just 25－40% ). To make the experience still more embarrassing, the team provided negative feedback through headphones, all the while checking participants for indications of stress, such as high blood pressure. The city people's general mental health did not differ from that of the rural countrymen. However, their brains dealt with the stress caused by the experimenters in different ways. These differences were noticeable in two regions: the amygdalas (杏仁核) and the perigenual anterior cingulate cortex (前扣带皮层，简称pACC)．People living in the countryside had the lowest levels of activity in their amygdalas. Those living in towns had higher levels. City dwellers had the highest. In the case of the pACC, however, what mattered was not where someone was living now, but where he or she was brought up. The more urban a person's childhood, the more active his pACC, regardless of where he was dwelling at the time of the experiment. The amygdalas thus seem to respond to the h ere-and-now while the pACC is programmed early on, and does not react in the same, flexible way as the amygdalas. Second-to-second changes in its activity might, though, be expected to be connected with changes in the amygdalas, because of its role in regulating them. fMRI allows
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values. During winter, the sky is still dark at 6：30 a．m. when the first－year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165－acre campus and it can take up to an hour. Mr. Sun, the university official, said labor is good for building character and promotes “the spirit of hard work.”Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus. They never litter because they've been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others. Some students, however, are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction. Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms. 【写作内容】 1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。 2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1) 支持或反对这个学校的做法；(2) 用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 【写作要求】 1. 可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据。 2. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句。 3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 4. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 支持： One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits. Some people support the program while others do not.(30) Generally, I am in favor of the practice. To begin with, through their effort, students provide a clean and comfortable environment, which, as a result, is an assurance of their successful academic life. Moreover, cleaning and labor can not only serve to build students' character but also contribute positively to students developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits. Last but not least, by enjoying the fruits of others' labor, students will develop the awareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor. In short, carrying out the cleaning program is crucial. The significance for students of participating in it means more than academic success. It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as the campus. (120) 反对： It is required by one university in Zhengzhou that students should clean the campus every morning to achieve class credits. Opinions on the practice vary widely from person to person.(30) I am strongly opposed to the practice for the following reasons. First of all, cleaning tends to take up too much time, which becomes a distraction for students and discourages them from focusing on their academic performances. Then, students can be encouraged to maintain clean living areas but it's unreasonable to relate the cleaning with the academic credits. As students, they should put more efforts into their studies to achieve class credits instead of sweeping the campus. Furthermore, though someone claims labor can contribute to developing the spirit of hard work, it should by no means be achieved through daily floor－sweeping. In conclusion, there is no sense in students sweeping the campus, for it benefits neither their character nor study.(120)