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学案(三) 求助信[题型技法] (学一学)写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。
因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。
[经典考题] (悟一悟)[典例] (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。
给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[满分范文]Dear Ms Jenkins，①I’m Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. ②I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. ③However, I’m not sure about the words and format.④Therefore, I’m writing to ask for your help and professional advice. ⑤Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? ⑥Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? ⑦Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. ⑧I’d be most grateful if you could do me a favor.⑨I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua [阅卷评点]③表示转折关系的过渡词，把前两句看似平淡的叙述提到了一定的高度，很好地为下句做了铺垫。
高中作文写作指导--描述《活动与过程》【典例1】万一计划失败,我们将采取其他的措施来解决这个问题。
If the plan were to fail,we would adopt other measures to solve the problem.If the plan should fail,other measures would be taken to deal with the problem.Should the plan fail,we would take other steps to settle the problem.If the plan to solve the problem failed,we would take other measures. [仿写]要不是妈妈心不在焉,我们就会省去一遍遍回去的麻烦。
(1)If Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.(2)Had mom not been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.(3)Mom was absent-minded,otherwise it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.积累:if+主语+should/were to do 表示对将来情况的假设【典例2】我们怎样克服这些困难呢?How is it that we get rid of the difficulties?How shall we overcome the difficulties?How shall we smooth away the difficulties?What measures/steps should we take to overcome the difficulties?What is it that we should do to get over the difficulties?[仿写]我们怎样解决自行车停放场地的问题呢?(1)How is it that we solve the problem with the parking place for bikes?(2)What measures/steps should we take to solve the problem with the parking place for bikes?(3)What is it that we should do to solve the problem with the parking place for bikes?积累:How/What is it that...?为强调句式take measures to do sth采取措施做某事【典例3】他突然想起一个好主意。
求助信写作及实战训练一、假定你是李华，最近，你在英语学习上遇到一些困难。
请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。
内容包括： 1. 你的困难； 2. 寻求帮助。
二、求助信三段可用词句：1. I find it difficult/challenging/demanding to learn English well. So I’m writing to ask you for help.2. I find it really a challenge/headache for me to learn English well. So I'd like to turn to for help and guidance.3. These days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, I badly need your help.4. Faced with the challenge of learning English well, I'm writing for your generous help and assistance.5. I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited vocabulary.6. I often fail to manage the proper use of English words, putting me in an embarrassing situation.7. Though having learned English for years, I find communicating with native speakers in English remains a big headache to me.8. I really have no idea how to improve my listening skills.9. What troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work.10. I would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance.11. I would appreciate it if you could give me a hand and I'm looking forward to your earliest reply.12. I would highly appreciate your timely/prompt reply. /Your timely/prompt reply would be highly appreciated.三、组句成篇：Dear Alex,How's everything going? These days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, I badly need your help.I have difficulty in remembering English words, which accounts for my limited vocabulary. Though having learned English for years, I find that communicating with native speakers in English remains a big headache to me.And what troubles me most is that I often perform poorly in English exams, however hard I work.I would be grateful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance.Y ours,Li Hua应用文参考：Dear Alex,With the college entrance examination approaching, my anxiety about the English learning is increasing, So I am writing to seek some guidance on how to improve it.English writing is really a big challenge for me.First of all, my vocabulary is not large, which makes it impossible for me to choose right and authentic words and phrases. Besides, English grammar becomes a bottle-neck of my English writing, the sentences I construct being much more like a Chinese sentence than an English one.Should you be kind enough to give me any help, I would be grateful to you.Yours,Li Hua四、求助信实战演练并连句成篇：假设你是高三学生李华, 正在忙着备战高考，但是发现很难集中精力学习，请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。
应用文写作常用表达及写作模板一、求助信因寻求别人帮助而写的信件称为求助信。
1.写作格式首段：表明写信目的主体段：提出求助内容、陈述具体情况尾段：表示感激或希望2.常用句型(1) 说明写信原因①I am writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on ...①I wonder if you could help me with a problem.①Will you be kind enough to give me a hand with ...?①Hopefully you would be so kind as to give some suggestions on ...(2)描述遇到的问题①What bothers/annoys me most is that I don’t know what to do with ...①I still find it hard/difficult to ...①Faced with so many difficulties, I really don’t know how to solve ...①What makes things worse is that ...(3) 表示感激或希望①It would be appreciated if you could be so kind as to give me some useful tips/suggestions.①I’m eager to get your timely help.①I will be grateful if you can spare time to do me a favor.①I would like to thank you for your generous help in advance.3.写作模板Dear Sir/Madam，I'm________________.(自我介绍) I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I have some difficulty in doing ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.First, ...Besides, ...What's more, ...(分层次说明自己的困难)Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ...so that ...？(请求一) In the meanwhile, I beg you to ...(请求二) Also, I would like you to ...(请求三) (根据实际情况选择)I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor and ...(表示感激). Looking forward to your reply.(表达期望)Yours truly，Li Hua二、咨询信1.写作格式首段：自我介绍并说明写信目的主体段：咨询详情尾段：表示谢意，期盼回复【注意】要就收信人能够提供的信息进行咨询，语气要委婉2.常用句型(1)写信目的①I am writing to ask for information about ...①I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning ...①I am interested in ... Could you please provide me with more details about ...?①I am writing in response to your advertisement about ...(2)咨询具体事宜①To begin with, I’d like to get some details of ... Additionally, I wonder if ... What’s more, I hope ...①First of all, what puzzles me most is ... Second, I also wonder if you could ... Finally, I’d be grateful if you could ...(3) 表示感激，期盼回复①I’d be greatly grateful if you could provide me with the relevant material regarding the above aspects.①I am expecting to receive your early reply.①Your prompt and favorable reply would be highly appreciated.3.写作模板Dear ,I am .(自我介绍)I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding .(要询问的内容)First of all, what are ? Secondly, when will ? Thirdly, is ?(要咨询的问题罗列) I would also like to inquire . Could you be so kind to send me some relevent booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?(附加问题) Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.(表示感谢)Yours sincerely,________三、建议信1.写作格式首段：说明写信目的主体段：阐述建议尾段：表达希望[注意] 提出的建议要合情合理，建议的角度要多样化，语言要礼貌得体2.常用句型(1) 表明写作目的①Learning that you are ... I am glad to give you some useful suggestions on how to ...①I am very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I am writing to give you some advice on how to ...①I know you have trouble/difficulty in ... after reading your letter, so I would like to give you some advice.①I am sorry to learn that you ... Here are my tips for you to solve the problem(2) 提出建议并阐明理由①常用的列举方式：Firstly, Secondly ... Finally; Besides; What’s more; Moreover; In addition; Above all等①You should/You’d better...①I will be of great help for you to ...①In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following actions.(3) 表达希望①I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.①I hope that the suggestions are practical for you.①I will be more than happy if you can take my suggestions into consideration.①I would be happy to know if my suggestions have turned out to be useful in ...①表明写作意图②具体的建议及理由③指出采纳建议的好处3.写作模板Dear ________，(建议对象)I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to____________.(引出对方需要建议的主题)Here are a few suggestions.(引出作者建议) First, it is important to________.Then, it also helps to_______________.Besides, it should be a good idea to__________________.You can also________.I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.Yours sincerely，Li Hua四、申请信1.写作格式首段：表明写信目的主体段：陈述申请理由尾段：表示感谢、期待或决心[注意]陈述申请理由时应说明相关优势，内容要真实、语言要简洁，要多使用陈述句。
高考英语写作常考文体讲练提分秘籍养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
专题13 求助信1. 交代背景/ 询问对方，点明目的_；2. 叙述现状，描述困难，恳求帮助；3.寻求帮助，表示感谢，期盼回复。
模板①Dear ______ ,I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）.The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming模板②Dear________,My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter t o you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that ___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).Yours,Li Hua首段：请求帮助1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2024年高考英语读后续写冲刺：高分主题句——句式必备高分句式1：强调句：It is + 被强调部分+ that + 其他部分1. 困难和障碍使我们更强大。
Difficulties and obstacles make us stronger.It is difficulties and obstacles that make us stronger.2. 爱使世界转动。
Love makes the world go around.It is love that makes the world go around.3. 冷静和智慧帮助我们脱离危险。
Calmness and wisdom help us get out of danger.It is calmness and wisdom that help us get out of danger.高分句式2：This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that...From then on, I became/grew...1. 这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：只要我们不放弃希望，任何困境都有出路。
从那天起，我变得更聪明，更自信了。
(个人成长类/脱困类)The unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that there’s always a way out as long as we never give up our hope. From that day on, I grew wiser and more confident.2. 这段难忘的经历使我学到了一个道理：我们遇到困难时一定要有积极的态度。
从那天起，我变得更勇敢，更乐观了。
(个人成长类)This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we should have a positive attitude when facing difficulties. From that day on, I grew braver and more optimistic.高分句式3：Only then did sb. realize ...直到那时，他才意识到原谅和爱/善意/友谊的重要性。
第03周范文11 安慰考试失利的同学假设你叫李华，你的澳洲朋友Devin参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过，请你写一封信，安慰一下你的朋友。
内容包括：1.对考试失利的安慰；2.对汉语学习提出建议。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Devin,I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】语言学习是学生学校生活中最重要的活动之一，也是高考的命题热点。
本话题贴近高中生的生活实际，而且具有一定的开放性，使得每个学生都能够有话可说。
这符合高考的命题方向。
【必背范文】Dear Devin,I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, youshould learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese. Good luck next time.Sincerely yours,Li Hua范文12安慰中文交流有困难的美国朋友假定你叫李华，你的美国朋友Jack 来信，说他寒假期间要来中国交流学习。
高考英语求助信写作指导英语求助信往往是主人公碰到了难以解决的问题向某人求助。
因此，只要掌握这类作文的写作思路，辅以特定句型，一篇好的求助信便腾空出世。
一、基本框架1.阐述写信目的+向某人求助（这里可以提下该人擅长啥、有啥经验，做到求助有理有据）2.说明求助的具体内容，即困扰的问题，一般两点即可3.再次说明急需帮助，渴望一些建议4.结尾表示感谢二、相关句型句型一：先诉苦，博同情，夸对方Bothered/Troubled/Tortured by sth./how to do sth.for long.., I'm writing with the purpose of seeking your feasible advice and effective guidance given that you're experienced in sth.受某事/如何做某事困扰、折磨已久，我写信向你寻求可行的建议和有效指导，鉴于你在某事上富有经验。
【注】purpose还可换成：aim/intention/hope希望/expecation(期待)/anticipation期望等；given that也可用considering/in view of(in the light of) the fact that等替换句型二：列问题、讲影响1.First of all, what frustrates/discourages/dispirits me/ casts me down is my inability/failure to do sth., dealing a blow to my confidence and dampening my passion.首先，让我沮丧/泄气/气馁的是我没有能力/未能做某事，打击了我的信心和抑制了我的热情。
【注】inability、failure的替换词有：incapacity、incapability、incompetence、impotence 等词2.In addition, it is a headache/struggle for me to do sth., serving as a stumbling block to my progression to sth.此外，做某事对我来说是一件头疼的/难事，这是我前往.....的绊脚石。
高中作文写作指导--描述《困难与帮助》【典例1】父母应该尽力帮助孩子改掉上网玩游戏的坏习惯。
Parents should try their best/do as much as they can to help children give up their bad habit of playing computer games.Parents should do what/all that they can to cure their children of the bad habit of playing computer games.Parents should try to rid the children of their bad habit of playing computer games.Parents should try all possible means to help the children get rid of their bad habit of playing computer games.Parents should make every effort to help the children get rid of their bad habit of playing computer games.[仿写]我会努力让你多了解中国唐朝的历史。
(2017·全国Ⅰ,书面表达) (1)I’ll do what/all that I can to help you know more about the history of Tang Dynasty in China.(2)I’ll try all possible means to get you exposed to more about the history of Tang Dynasty in China.(3)I’ll try my best to help you learn more about the history of Tang Dynasty in China.积累:try all possible means to do sth想尽一切办法做某事make every effort to do sth尽全力做某事get rid of去除【典例2】我的车坏了。
My car is out of order.My car doesn’t/won’t work.There is something wrong with my car.Something is wrong with my car.Something has gone wrong with my car.My car has broken down.[仿写]然而,半路上出租车出故障了。
(1)However,the taxi was out of order halfway home.(2)However,there was something wrong with the taxi halfway home.(3)Halfway home,however,the taxi broke down.积累:be out of order/break down出故障there is something wrong with...……出故障了【典例3】我们如何能用更多的方法处理这个问题呢?What can we do with the problem by using more methods?How can we deal with/cope with the problem with more methods? How can we handle the problem in more ways?How can we solve/resolve/settle the problem by more means?[仿写]我们如何用更好的方法来解决这个问题呢?(1)What can we do with the problem by using better methods?(2)How can we deal with/cope with the problem with better methods?(3)How can we solve/resolve/settle the problem by better means?积累:do with/deal with/cope with处理solve/resolve/settle解决【典例4】我们最好利用这次机会来提高我们的英语口语水平。
We had better take (full) advantage of the opportunity to improve our spoken English.We might as well make (full/good) use of the opportunity to improve our oral English.We may as well make the most/best of the opportunity to improve our spoken English.[仿写]我希望你最好利用这个机会进一步学习中国的传统文化。
(2017·全国Ⅱ,书面表达)(1)I wish you had better take (full) advantage of this chance to learn traditional Chinese culture further.(2)I wish you might as well make (full/good) use of this chance to learn traditional Chinese culture further.(3)I wish you may as well make the most/best of this chance to learntraditional Chinese culture further.积累:had better/may as well最好;不妨take advantage of/make use of/make the most of利用【典例5】他现在正处于困境,我们必须帮他渡过难关。
He is in trouble now,and we must help him out.He is in difficulty now,and we must help him out.We must help him out of the trouble he is suffering.He is faced with many difficulties.It is necessary/essential/a must that we (should) help him pull through.[仿写]它们现在处境危险,我们必须帮助它们。
(1)They are now in danger,and we must help them out.(2)They are faced with danger.It is a must that we (should) help them out. 积累:in danger处境危险help sb out 帮助某人摆脱困境be faced with面临【典例6】虽然有许多方法能解决这个问题,但是我们还是不能断定哪一种是最合适的。
Although/Though there are many approaches to solving the problem,wecannot judge which one is the most suitable.While there are many ways of solving the problem,which one is the most suitable still remains to be decided.We still cannot decide which is the most proper method among those that can be employed to settle the problem.There is many a method/more than one method that can be used to deal with the matter.However,it still needs to be seen which is the most suitable.[仿写1]虽然找回保罗叔叔农场的方案有很多,但是不确定哪一种是最好的。
(2018·6浙江,读后续写)(1)Although /Though there are many ways to find Uncle Paul’s farm house,we cannot judge which one is the best.(2)While there are many ways of finding Uncle Paul’s farm house,we cannot judge which one is the best.[仿写2]学好汉语的方法有很多。
(2017·全国Ⅰ,书面表达)(1)There are many approaches to learning Chinese well.(2)There are many ways of learning Chinese well.积累:the approach to doing sth ……的方法ways of doing sth ……的方法【典例7】他似乎是一个难以接近的人,但是当别人遇到困难的时候,他总是很愿意帮助别人。
He seems difficult to get close to.However,when others are in trouble,he is always willing to help.It seems that he is a person difficult to approach,but he is more than willing to help others out when they meet difficulties.Although he is seemingly unapproachable,he always gives a hand with great pleasure when others are faced with trouble.Though seemingly not easy to approach,he always willingly comes to their assistance/aid when seeing others in trouble.He,who gives others a seeming impression that he is hard to approach,is always willing to help those who fall into trouble.[仿写]彼得似乎难以接近,但在别人有困难时,他总是乐于助人。
