2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 写日记改掉抱怨的坏毛病 讲义素材
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英语读后续写优秀作文3篇1Camping CousinsMy cousin Allen was the coolest person in all of Minneapolis. By the age of 19, he was a star football player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to be just like him. So when Allen asked me to join him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I said yes!After planning the trip, we gathered clothes and supplies and then set off on our adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest by early evening. On the way to our campsite, Allen pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was the ranger station(护林站)where the foresters worked.Allen knew all the tricks of an experienced camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest floor, he started the campfire using only stone and steel — no matches. After a day of travelling, we were very hungry. We ate beef and rice and some soup as well.Exhausted, we crawled into our sleeping bags early. Allen was still talking about his past camping adventures when a sadden wind picked up from the north. The temperature dropped and it began to snow. Allen knew of a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log from the woods, wrapped aluminum foil(铝箔)around the log and then placed it near the campfire. The heat from the fire reflected into the tent. Soon the tent was warm again and thoughts of lake fish filled my dreams.I was still dreaming when Allen woke me up in a panic. Our tent was on fire! The snow had stopped during the night, but the wind had fanned the flames of the fire towards our tent. Frightened by the flames, I ran out of the tent immediately. The tent collapsed with Allen inside. Without any hesitation, I reached into the burning tent, grabbed him, and dragged him to the icy lake. We checked each other to make sure neither of us were hurt.续写要求:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2024年高考英语写作短文故事续写文章Emily didn't want to be rejected again.so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr called,“Emily,you're next."Butler Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr Butler told her to do. Mr Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily. When Emily finished her testing performance,she thanked Mr Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning,her stomach was even in pain because of stress.范文一Her heart was pounding with high nervousness; she wasn't completely sure if she could do a good job. As she walked to the piano and practiced her performance, Mr. Butler noticed her anxiety, walked over to her, and gently said, "Just relax, you can do it well. I believe in you." Pleasure welled up in her heart. She held Mr. Butler's hand tightly, expressed her gratitude, and then dedicated herself to practicing once more.Emily dressed up and entered the choral room. She approached the piano and began to play. She felt all gazes fixed on her, and her nervousness gradually increased. Yet as her fingers moved across thekeys, her confidence began to build. Her hands were dancing gracefully along the piano keys, and the music flowed smoothly. When she finished playing the song, a round of applause erupted from the audience. Mr. Butler, among the audience, looked at her with a smile, his eyes full of pride and encouragement.范文二Her heart fluttered with unease, a gentle tremor of doubt questioning her ability to perform at her best. As she approached the grand piano, her steps tentative yet determined, Mr. Butler caught a glimpse of her inner turmoil. He approached with a comforting ease and said softly, "Take a deep breath, you're ready for this. Trust in your talent." Gratitude swelled within her, and with a grateful nod to Mr. Butler, she turned back to the keys, her spirit buoyed by his encouragement.Clad in her recital costume, Emily entered the choir room with a quiet confidence. She took her place at the piano and with a deep breath, allowed her fingers to begin their dance across the ivory. The room fell into an attentive hush, their eyes following her every move. As the melody unfolded, her initial nervousness was replaced by a growing sense of assurance. The music flowed from her with a natural grace, each note a testament to her dedication and skill. Upon the final chord, applause filled the room, a warm recognition of heraccomplishment. Mr. Butler's smile from the audience was a silent echo of his earlier words, now a proud affirmation of her success.她的心怦怦直跳,轻微的怀疑让她质疑自己是否能够发挥出最佳水平。
【读后续写Happy Ending】读后续写主题升华素材积累Class:__________ NO.__________ Name:____________每种类型挑选一个易背、易写、多用途的句子默写一、人与自我:自主觉悟,自主成长(一)永不言弃——希望见于坚持,梦想圆于不懈1. Never give up no matter what happens, no matter how hopeless. 1.无论发生什么,无论多么绝望,都不要放弃。
2. Every cloud has a silver lining. / There is always light at the end of the tunnel. / Somebody sometime somewhere will shine a lamp of hope. 2.黑暗中总有一线光明。
/ 隧道尽头总有光明。
/ 某个地方的某个人会点亮一盏希望之灯。
3. There are no shortcuts to any place worth going. 3.任何值得去的地方都没有捷径。
4. As long as you have a dream, just go for it, and never give it up easily. 4.只要你有梦想,就去追求它,不要轻易放弃。
5. Be the flower that blooms, and butterflies will come. 5. 做那朵盛开的花,蝴蝶就会来。
6. Luck is what happens when preparation meets opportunity. 6.当准备遇到机会时会发生运气。
7. There is no elevator to success, only stairs. 7. 通往成功没有电梯,只有楼梯。
8. Where there is a life ,there is a hope. 8. 生命不息,希望长在。
阅读以下材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文My Best ExaminationOne day, while at work in a coal-mine in Malden, I happened to overhear two miners talking about a great school for poor people in Virginia. It was Hampton Institute. The school was established to provide opportunities for poor but worthy students who could work out all or a part of the cost of board, and at the same time be taught some trade or industry.I was on fire constantly with one ambition, and that was to go to school. I decided at once to go to that school. Finally the great day came and I started for Hampton. I had only a small, cheap bag that contained what few articles of clothing I could get. The distance from Malden to Hampton is about five hundred miles. I had not been away from home many hours before it began to grow painfully evident that I did not have enough money to pay my fare(路费) to Hampton.By walking and begging rides in some way, I finally reached the grounds of the Hampton Institute after a number of days, tired and dirty. As soon as possible after reaching, I presented myself before the head teacher for assignment to a class. Having been so long without proper food, a bath, and change of clothing, I was like a worthless loafer (游荡者).I did not, of course, make a very favourable impression upon her, and I could see at once that there were doubts in her mind about the wisdom of admitting me as a student. I tried to impress her in all the ways I could with my worthiness. How I wished that I could get a chance to show what was in me.After some time, the head teacher said to me, “The adjoining(隔壁的) classroom needs sweeping. Take the broom and sweep it."P1: It occurred to me at once that here was my chance.__________________________________________________________________P2: The head teacher went into the room and inspected the floor and closets.__________________________________________________________________ 1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写练习写作讲义素材读后续写I finally worked hard for my college试题呈现:Living in the shadow of my two elder sisters at college who already had their lives planned out since they were little, I was always undecided about everything. As a teenager, I was fickle(反复无常的). I would like one thing for a week and then hate it the next. But I was constantly searching for the beginning of the rainbow. Changing my dream from a vet to an astronaut, I thought there were various options available to me. However, my parents would shake their heads and repeatedly asked me such questions as, “Why can’t you be more like your sisters What are you going to do with your life Aren’t you interested in anything at all ” After a couple of shrugs(耸肩), my parents usually stopped talking. I was not sure if they gave up or anticipated my dull reactions. I often responded, “I couldn’t answer all of your questions now.”Actually, my parents just had high expectations that never seemed to be fulfilled. Plus, like other parents, they just wanted to give the best to me and expected me to achieve success. The arguments with my parents seemed childish. One day, my mother made her thoughts clear, “Yourgrades aren’t high enough. No schools are going to want you, dear. We didn’t pay so much money for nothing.” Hesitating for a while, I said, “No matter what you say, I believe I will enter a good college.” Still, I let my emotions control myself.Certainly, I had never planned not to go to college. After another debate with my mom, I decided to make a change. No longer would I sit back and let my parents mistake me for a bad boy. It was time to take action.I knew it was a crucial year at high school. Releasing my feelings, I began to collect all the knowledge I had learned and review it with all my heart. I didn’t argue with my parents any more, but instead turned to my sisters for help and tried my best to study. Finally, I took the national college entrance examination with ease and confidence.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2024届高考英语二轮写作复习读后续写练习写作讲义素材读后续写练习写作讲义试题呈现:“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their sonwould be back to visit. Poppy didn’t.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Paragraph 2:A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.优秀作文1:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy was a little cautious at first, backing away as the little creature struggled to get out of the box. But after sniffing the air for a while, she got a bit closer, and then let out a cheerful bark as she started licking the little dog happily. Itseemed that she had got out of the shadow that moment, filled with joy and excitement. So had the parents who watched her every move."Seems like we've got it," said Mom, exchanging a delightful smile with dad .“It really will be a great surprise for our son.”A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university: Imagine how surprised he was when he opened the door, as he was not only greeted by poppy's warm hug, but also “attacked” by a tiny creature.“Wow,Mom and Dad, you've got a partner for poppy," said the boy as he hugged his parents tightly. That afternoon, the three played happily in the living room, tossing toys here and there, as the parents started to prepare their evening feast. That evening the family sat happily. enjoying the delicacies and most importantly, the time together. Though the time may be slow, it would last in everyone's memory, forever.优秀作文2:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. A dark brown nose shakily stretched to the opened side of box before the face after it could be exposed. Air squeezed in and out of the holes on it as if a button was breathing. It clearly failed to prepare for its sudden meeting with a large nose. The air froze a bit as the noses hit and separated. Sharp barking came out of the box as Poppy poked its nose inside again. It did not touch the little dog. Poppy’s tongue did. She stepped an inch nearer to make herself closer to the forting it with licking rather than watching wasperhaps the friendliest way of communication between puppies. Dad hugged Poppy a bit and put the box gently on the floor. He has not expected for what happened next. Poppy took the handle of his box by her mouth. Trembling from the little Corgis inside seemed to be slightly visible when Poppy jogged and took it away with the box. A fat tail danced tripping on her way.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. His sight swept around for his lovely Poppy. The tip of her tongue led the long way to her young owner. She had waited for half a year. Pupils on the boy’s sharp face shone while capturing the rounded Poppy marching quickly to him. It became too bulky to run. A tiny Corgis shyly hid at the back of his large female Labrador as they appeared. It saw the boy coming forward and shared his cuddling with Poppy who kissed his hands repeatedly.优秀作文3:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. A warning look floated in the pupils of Poppy when she saw the little creature. She stepped half an inch forward. Odor brought by the air ruled her nose as the organ of walnut size shook slightly. It belonged to another dog. Bearing the existence of a dog who shared the love of her owners with Poppy was the last thing she would do on earth. Sharp teeth of Poppy completely exposed as she roared to the poor puppy. Staring from a wolf and voice of a tiger were the first gift Poppy gave out to welcome herlittle friend. It was never expected to meet an end till mum hugged Poppy in her arms. Warmth still belonged to Poppy. She did not mind to see dad getting the tiny Corgis out of its box. Mum cuddled the shaky little puppy together with her Poppy and walked to the sofa. A large cookie for dog was the weapon she used to shut Poppy’s watery mouth. The little dog which spent all its strength hiding at the back of mum received a tiny soft biscuit. It trembled again when Poppy gave it a glance. She took a piece of cookie and turned her head to the Corgis. That piece of dessert did give mum too much time to react when it was given to the little dog. Poppy dropped the cookie before its mouth and licked its fur. It was possibly soft and a bit salty.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He has imagined how cheerful it would be to see his parents and Poppy again. What he had no idea about was the appearance of Poppy when he arrived. She took a baby puppy to him with her mouth. These lives could be misunderstood as a mother dog and her baby only if they looked more similar. The boy took the puppies in his arms. His sapphire pupils questioned the emerald ones of Poppy. What the lady did was to kiss his hands. The little Corgis did the same as if being taught by its princess.优秀作文4:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Then the box tipped over sideways, and out came the little dog. Poppy was amazed tosee the little one. She watched it, wagged her tails and then barked with joy. The little one was not shy and immediately started running and jumping around the older dog. “That didn’t take long,”remarked Mom, as both dogs went running around the house cheerfully. Dad laughed.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had missed Poppy and his parents and was looking forward to seeing them. When he bent down to give Poppy a big hug, he fell over in surprise as the little dog suddenly appeared and raced up to lick his face too. “Oh my god, who is this ” the boy asked. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his face and said, “That’s Pee-wee, a new friend for Poppy.”优秀作文5:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. “Meet your little new friend!” Dad announced merrily, as the little one squirming its way out of the box to Poppy, who was now exhilarated with her once droopy eyes opening wide out of surprise and elation. She came to life immediately as she befriended the newcomer. They accompanied each other when the boy was absent. The house was now filled with an air of joy, where barks of happiness could be heard from time to time. Bright smiles appeared on parents’ faces, as they earnestly waited their son.A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university: No sooner had he stepped into the house than Poppy and the little dog dashed forward to greet their long-expected owner, with his parents watching by the side,grinning. His eyebrows lifted high as the surprise hit him, but then they soothed as the dogs warmly nestled against his feet, wagging their tails, waiting to be stroked“Thank you for finding Poppy a friend!" Words of appreciation and merriment flooded out of the boy, as he cupped the little creatures and hugged his parents in the arms.优秀作文6:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy poked his round head out of the box. and looked around out of curiosity. The sudden arrival of a new friend animated Poppy, who barked excitedly and licked the little dog in rapture. The poppy was a bit numb owing to the unexpected welcome ceremony. “Look! My dear, she loves our new member!” Mom laughed. Soon the puppy got used to his new home, beginning to chase Poppy with great pleasure, or be chased by Poppy delightedly. Parents were exceedingly happy to see poppy become cheerful again.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university: Upon arrival, he received the rapturous welcome from poppy.“Hey! It's been a long time, isn’t it " He chuckled at the dog as he closed the door. Unexpectedly, Poppy abruptly ran away and then dragged another puppy to him. The puppy seemed reluctant when approaching the stranger.“Poppy was extremely depressed after you left, so we bought her a new friend,"explained Mom to the confused boy. A winsome smile lit up theboy's face.“I can receive one more piece of love then.” He rubbed the two dogs’ head affectionately. “So can you, Poppy.”优秀作文7:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. How Poppy's eyes sparkled with delight and curiosity when the lovely furry dog bumped into her sight, who immediately captured her whole attention! And it was not long before Poppy and the little dog were merrily bounding across the yard and in cheerful chase. The house rang with excited barks again and the parents were content with this new way to please Poppy.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. The instant he flew into the door, the boy was first greeted enthusiastically by Poppy, who sprang towards him and showed her joy by wagging her tail. His mom hugged him affectionately and nearly kissed away all his tears! Pointing to a small dog, mom said it was Poppy’s new playmate and Poppy had developed the habit of staying in front of his bedroom to keep watching every night since he went to university, which touched the boy deeply. Could anything else describe the boy half the happiness he left at this moment.优秀作文8:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Pure white fur, dotted with dark spots, the tiny dog put her paws on the box's edge,glancing around in curiosity. Poppy stepped aside, sniffed, then approached near observing. As solid connection was abruptly formed between them and they stuck to each other everywhere and every time, poppy’s sorrow was driven away by the lovely creature, devoting all her time to accompanying her. The parents were relieved as they got along well, and brought back some energy in their house as different tones of barks appeared every day, which were always in a merry tune.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. It was Poppy that first darted to him with its tail wagging cheerfully. Dragging his sleeve, Poppy led him to the box. Scarcely had the boy taken off his shoes when he found a puppy dog barking soundly in it. “What a surprise!” he turned to his parents. “We bought her to comfort Poppy.” answered his parents wearing bright smiles, hugging him tightly. On the dinner table, they chatted about the university life and many adventurous experiences, which pushed the atmosphere to the peak and everyone’s face was reddened by the warmth including the two cheerful dogs. What a harmonious reunion!优秀作文9:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Coated with brown curly hair, it looked everywhere, eyes sparkling with curiosity and a little uneasiness. When Poppy approached, it backed a bit. Dad knelt down, gently stroking its curly hair and comforting,“No worry, you will get usedto the new family.”His magical words seemed to lessen its anxiety. Meanwhile, Poppy’s eyes were full of eagerness and excitement. Early next morning, the noise of dogs wakened them. Mom threw on clothes and rushed out.“You guess what ”She screamed,“They are playing so happily”. Since then, the quiet house was filled with fun again and the parents finally burst out a sign of relief.A few weeks later,the boy arrived home from university. For several weeks he had been picturing Poppy’s lonely and miserable life and exhilarated eyes upon seeing him. Entering the house, however, he was surprised to find playing so cheerfully on the floor were just his Poppy and another dog, completely absorbed in their happy world. Then he felt a gentle pat on his shoulder. It was mom with a smile, “Amazing they get along so well and the once energetic Poppy came back again.”Instantly, moments of loneliness in the university flashed across his mind.“I should also learn to get along with others and adapt to new environment, just like them,”he murmured.优秀作文10:Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. “Poppy, isn’t it a sweetdog It’s for you!”Mom said in a soft voice.“It’s your companion.”Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Poppy had forgotten her old friend.A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy, growling and sniffing at his feet. Immediately, he bent down, stroked its head and asked,“What an adorable puppy! Whose is it ”His parents smiled and replied, “We got it for Puppy because...” Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms. Tears blurred his vision as he murmured, “Poppy, I miss you, too.” And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like a baby in his arms.第11页共11页。
读后续写练习写作讲义读后续写试题呈现:阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage - I carried an 85 -pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year. Old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it,like a cork(软木塞)forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. "I'm going to set it down, now," I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. "I can't get it out!" I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成篇完整的短文。
I'll admit it. I can be a complainer. After all, there's so much in this life to complain about: the dirty clothes that don't make it into the basket, that annoying neighbor's loud music, my husband's shoes spread out at the front door, rainy days, traffic...我承认。
我可以抱怨。
毕竟,这辈子有太多可抱怨的事情:脏衣服进不了篮子,那个烦人的邻居大声的音乐,我丈夫的鞋子铺在前门,雨天,交通。
Complaining is a habit I cultivated since childhood, a skill I developed through the years. My parents didn't seem to mind—they were great complainers, too—though I do recall some eye-rolling and long-drawn sighs from friends and schoolmates when I would voice my negative opinions. In fact, I can distinctly recall the exact moment when I first realized my complaining habit reached its expert level.抱怨是我从小养成的习惯,也是我多年来养成的技能。
我的父母似乎并不介意——他们也是很爱抱怨的人——尽管我确实记得当我发表负面意见时,朋友和同学们会翻白眼,长叹一口气。
事实上,我清楚地记得我第一次意识到我的抱怨习惯达到专家水平的确切时刻。
One day, as I reminded ray husband once again to remove his bills from the dining-room table, put his shoes away, and lower that bothersome radio, he put up his hand." Stop! You’re your complaining. It's driving me crazy."有一天,当我再次提醒雷丈夫把账单从餐桌上拿下来,把鞋子收起来,放下那台烦人的收音机时,他举起了手。
“住手!你在抱怨。
这快把我逼疯了。
”I looked at him blank-eyed.He took a deep breath. "You never hear me complaining, do you?""Well," I answered, "you're complaining about my complaining, so actually, yes, I am hearing you complain right now."His eyes widened. A drop of sweat formed his upper lip. Then he grabbed his car keys and ran out of the door.我茫然地看着他。
他深吸了一口气。
“你从来没听我抱怨过,是吗?”“嗯,”我回答,“你在抱怨我的抱怨,所以实际上,是的,我现在听到你在抱怨。
”他的眼睛睁大了。
他的上唇出了一滴汗。
然后他抓起车钥匙跑出了门。
Perhaps I'd gone too far, I thought. Maybe I really did complain too much. But, what to do about it? After all, it had been a lifetime habit. And habits are hard to break.I took a break and sat down to think about solution. When I felt annoyed, I could lock myself in the bathroom and scream. No. The neighbors would probably hear me. Phone a friend? She probably wouldn't be a friend for very long. Then it hit me.I'd been in the habit of keeping a journal for most of my life. It provided a sort of timeline for me,and I liked to review past entries occasionally to review the path I had been on at that point. Journaling kept me honest with myself, and I liked it for that reason. Perhaps, I though, a complaint journal might be the answer I was seeking.也许我走得太远了,我想。
也许我真的抱怨太多了。
但是,该怎么办呢?毕竟,这是我一生的习惯。
习惯是很难打破的。
我休息了一下,坐下来思考解决方案。
当我感到恼火时,我可以把自己锁在浴室里尖叫。
不,邻居们可能会听到我的。
给朋友打电话?她可能不会成为很长时间的朋友。
然后我想到了一个主意。
我一生中大部分时间都有记日记的习惯。
它为我提供了一种时间线,我喜欢偶尔回顾过去的条目,以回顾我当时所走的道路。
记者让我对自己保持诚实,因此我喜欢它。
也许,我想,一本投诉日志可能是我想要的答案。
注意:1.续写词数应为l50左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:That day, I decided to give it a try.Besides the improved relationship with my husband, I saw other effects soon.文本分析:文章大意--我是一个喜欢抱怨的人,从小到大都是如此。
一天,我丈夫受不了我的抱怨,冲出门外。
至此我开始反思自己的行为,开始寻找好的替代方法来避免抱怨。
冥思苦想之后,我终于想到了一个好主意。
当我有抱怨和生气的时候,我就记日记,把自己的不满和牢骚统统写到日记里。
续写情节发展:第一段--我开始尝试在负面情绪的时候,写下我的不满和沮丧。
这让我非常放松且放下了心里的负担。
这种发泄的出口没有伤害到任何人也不再引发争吵,效果非常好。
丈夫和我的关系开始缓和。
第二段--效果非常明显,我和朋友邻里的关系日益融洽。
当我们发现自己有坏习惯的时候,只要勇于想办法克服,一定就可以实现目标,取得成功。
参考范文:That day, I decided to give it a try. Without hesitation, I got a pen in my hand and unloaded all my dissatisfaction and disappointment about my husband onto the paper. It felt so good and relaxing to say exactly what was on my mind without anyone judging mc or my thoughts. With the last word put down, I felt relieved as if a heavy weight had been lifted off my shoulder. Later, each time I found myself feeling the urge to voice a petty irritation, I promised myself to write it in my complaint journal that evening. Gradually, without fear of triggering a quarrel, my reserved husband opened up to me more and our relationship got better.Besides the improved relationship with my husband, I saw other effects soon. Old friendships became deeper, and new friendships appeared. Neighbors became more neighborly. Overall, I started to just feel happier and less stressed. When I looked back on some of my initial entries, I had to laugh out loud. Some of my complaints appeared truly ridiculous when read in hindsight Those few moments' when I could sit down and free myself of whatever is bothering me made a big difference for the better in my life. Reflecting on this experience, I firmly believed that with determination and smart approaches, I could not only break a bad habit but also achieve anything.下水文1:That day, I decided to give it a try. Each time I found myself feeling the urge to voice a petty irritation, I promised myself to write it in my complaint journal that evening —no holds barred. At first, I couldn’t wait to get that penin my hand and really unload onto the paper. It felt so good, so freeing, to say exactly what was on my mind without anyone judging me or my thoughts.Besides the improved relationship with my husband, I saw other effects soon. The initial benefit was immediate. Without fear of recrimination, my generally reticent husband opened up to me more. Other benefits took more time to become apparent, yet I eventually became aware of them all the same. Old friendships became deeper, and new friendships appeared. Neighbors became more neighborly. Overall, I started to just feel better —happier and less stressed.下水文2:That day, I decided to give it a try. Without hesitation, I quickly took a pen and wrote down my dissatisfaction and disappointment with my husband on paper, letting my thoughts flow out with the tip of the pen. Writing my thoughts without anyone judging or caring about them feels relaxed and relieves the burden in my heart. Finally, I felt a sense of relief, as if the burden on my shoulders had been lifted. Later on, every time I found myself impulsively expressing a little anger, I would immediately write it down in my log. Gradually, without worrying about sparking an argument, my reserved husband opened up to me, and our relationship became more harmonious.Besides the improved relationship with my husband, I saw other effects soon. After no longer complaining, my interpersonal relationships are getting better and better. The neighbors have become more friendly. Since writing a diary to release my negative emotions, I have started to feel happier and less stressed. When I looked back at some of my initial complaint diaries, I had to burst out laughing. After the fact, some of my complaints seem really ridiculous. The moments that made me sit down and get rid of my troubles made my life better. Looking back on this experience, I firmly believe that with determination and smart methods, I can not only break bad habits but also achieve success.。