高三英语看图作文讲评

高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿10请根据图画和所给词语的提示，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。

然后，再根据此故事内容，发表你自己的感想（自拟），不得少于三点想法。

参考词汇：help, stop, knock…down, the fallen oil bottle, straighten, disagree, set a good example to, build up our society注意：不要受所给词语的限制要求：1．词数：100词左右；2．开头已给出。

One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over.______________________________________一、选择要点左边一幅图1.女孩跌倒2.小明要帮她3.小明的母亲阻拦他说：“不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。

”右边一幅图1.有一天，小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子2.小明说：“我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的”二、简译要点左边一幅图1.One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. （试题中已给出）2.Xiao Ming wanted to help the girl up.3.His mother stopped him and said, “Don’t do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.”右边一幅图1.Another day, the mother saw the fallen oil bottle on the ground.2.Xiao Ming said to his mother,(注意小明的话要用虚拟语气)“If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”三、增加要点,以使文章连贯1.小明的母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子，而小明却视而不见，心情如何：比如表示惊讶，震惊等2.小明的母亲看到这种情形后，可能对小明说些什么：比如：你为什么不把倒在地上的瓶子扶起来呢？翻译增加的要点（Another day,）the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be，saying to him,“Can’t you see the fallen oil?Why can’t you straighten it up?”四、自拟感想1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法：不同意2.我想：①父母应该为孩子树立好榜样②父母不仅要关心孩子的身体，还要关心他们的思想③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。

高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿8为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。

请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。

1、审题①体裁：日记文体。

②主要时态：一般过去时，描述我一天上午的经历。

③人称：第一人称④要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。

⑤注意日记的格式。

2、简译为迎接高考，“我”常常复习功课到深夜。

I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination．Picture 1:I woke up at nine o’clock this morning .Picture 2:I got dressed.I rushed into the living room .Mother was preparing breakfast there .Picture 3:I got on my bike .Picture 4:When I got to the school,I found the schoolgate was closed.3、衔接将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出来。

对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其原因：如：昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉。

Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 O’ clock．对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：（起来后）要洗漱：I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根据常识补出下列要点：图中的母亲有没有讲什么？（因为时间紧张，母亲没有来得及讲什么）我去上学肯定要拿什么？（书包）Before she could say anything，I got my school-bag…对于第三幅图，我们可以相象一下：“我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情害怕迟到受处罚，而拼命地骑车I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could. 对于第四幅图我们可以推测：因为车骑得快，因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就到了学校．It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.4、成文加上过渡词语、改变一些句式，整理成文。

高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评一下图叙述了你和父亲散步时所发生的事情。

请根据下面6幅图，用英语写一篇题为An Accident的短文。

短文必须包括以下内容：1.图中讲述了一个什么故事？2.女孩的言行说明了什么问题？3.你对此事有什么感想？注意：1.对于图中所发生的事情可以适当发挥想象，增加有关细节，但必须合理；2.词数：150左右（标题已经给出不计入总词数）。

An Accident①有一天，我和父亲在湖边散步；②一个女孩骑自行车路过（结合后面的图中所反映的内容可以推断女孩骑车的速度很快）。

我们要将第二、三两幅图连起来看，才容易提炼要点。

根据第三幅图可以看出是有人掉到湖里了。

根据第一幅图可以推测是骑自行车的女孩。

结合常识提炼出下列要点：①听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音；②转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎，在喊“救命啊！”。

对这幅图我们要展开合理的想象。

根据图中“我”头脑中的问号，可以推断“我”感到非常困惑。

为什么？结合常识“得到了别人的帮助，理应表示感谢”。

再根据图中“女孩已经骑车离去”可以推断女孩连声“谢谢”恐怕都没有说。

这样推断才能为后面谈谈感想埋下伏笔。

遣词造句（注意多重表达）One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake .A girl rode past at a very high speed.We heard a frightened scream.There was a big noise of something dropping into the water.Something dropped into the water, making a big noise.We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake.The girl was crying for help.We heard the girl crying for help.Dad and I ran as possible as quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water.Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and saved her.We also managed to get her bike which fell into the lake.We were also able to pull her bike out of the water.The girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂.I had thought the girl would say ＂Thank you＂to us before she left, but she said nothing and rode away.I felt quite puzzled at her behavior.I felt quite disappointed at her impoliteness.连贯成篇One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately,the girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness.围绕女孩的无礼行为自拟感想①对自己：为什么要帮助别人？帮助别人是明德，不是图别人的感谢；②对女孩的无礼进行评论：许多年轻人不懂礼貌，这对建设和谐社会非常有害。

高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿7 看下列六幅图,请你以Save Water为题写一篇120字以上的短文。

第一步：认真审图，了解大意仔细看图，图中出现了两个人物．为了叙述的方便，我们分别给他们取名为：李明和李冬．大意是：李明玩水，李冬看到了，及时纠正，提醒人们节约用水．第二步：围绕主题，提炼要点围绕确立的主题，仔细看图，初步列出每幅图的要点，并简要译出．图1：李明打开水龙头玩水，把水溅得满地都是．Li Ming turned on the tap to play with water and splashed water here and there on the ground. 图2：李冬正好路过，李明把水溅在他身上，李明被弄得浑身湿透．Li Dong happened to pass by when Li Ming splashed him with water and made him all wet. 图3：李明没有关水龙头就逃走了．Li Ming ran away without turning off the tap.图4：李冬走过去关上水龙头．Li Dong went over and turned off the water.图5：李冬写好布告贴在水龙头附近的墙上．Li Dong wrote a notice and put it up on the wall near the tap.图6：李明返回后看到布告，布告上写着“节约用水”Li Ming went back and saw the notice,reading “Save Water”.第三步：合理想象，补出要点将六幅图连起来并结合考虑每幅图中的各个细节进行想象，将隐藏的要点补出来,使故事连贯。

第一幅图：补出故事发生的时间：如放学后的某一天第四幅图：补出：李冬看到这一切……，怎么做（关上水龙头）；心里怎么想：非常生气，认为不应该浪费水．第五幅图：补出：写布告的地点．如：回家写第六幅图：补出：过了一段时间…..（李明返回，看到布告后的）愧疚心理．第四步：连句成篇，过渡自然Save WaterOne day after school, Li Ming turned on a tap and splashed water here and there on the ground. Li Dong happened to pass by when Li Ming played a joke on him to splash him with water and made him all wet. Li Ming was afraid that Li Dong would puish him so he ran away without turning off the tap. When Li Dong saw this, he went over and turned off the water. He was angry because he thought water shouldn‟t be wasted. Then he went home and wrote a notice,reading…Save Water‟.He put it up on the wall near the tap. After some time, Li Ming went back and saw the notice. He felt sorry for what he had done.江苏省石庄高级中学高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿8为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。

高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿4试题：假如你叫李华，2003年1月20日下午3:00去长城宾馆通知Smith先生去听演讲，不巧Smith先生不在，请你给他留个便条，按活动日程表简述活动内容，按所给路线图写明步行去科学宫的路线。

（词数：100左右）时间：明天上午8点地点：科学宫主讲人：南京大学王教授内容：污染问题（1）the Great Wall Hotel （2）traffic light（3）post-office （4）the Science Palace一、选择要点1、来通知你有关演讲的事，碰巧出去了,得留个便条给你。

2、交代演讲时间、地点、演讲人、演讲内容明天上午8点、科学宫、南京大学王教授、污染问题3、告诉到科学宫怎么去：步行去，出了旅馆左拐弯、沿路走，来到有交通灯的地方。

然后右拐弯，穿过第一个十字路口，往前走，穿过第二个十字路口。

看到一家邮局，科学宫就在邮局的对面。

二、简单翻译1. come to inform you of a speech,happen to be out,leave you the note2.a lecture /a speechat 8:00 tomorrow morning,in the Science Palace,Professor Wang from Nanjing University, on/about pollution3.walk there/go there on foot,get out of the hotel,turn left,walk down/along the street,come toa traffic light,turn right,cross the first crossing,go forward/straight ahead,go across the second crossing，see a post office, the Science Palace right opposite to it/on the other side.三、扩展成句I came to inform you of a speech.You happened to be out.I have to leave you the note.There will be a speech on pollution in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning.It will be made/given/dilivered by Professor Wang from Nanjing University.You can go there on foot.Get out of the hotel.Turn left.Walk down the e to a traffic light.Turn right.Cross the first crossing .Go forward.Go across the second crossing.See a post office. The Science Palace is right opposite to it /on the other side of the street.四、合并要点I came to inform you of a speech but you happened to be out.So I have to leave you the note. There will be a speech on pollution given by Professor Wang from Nanjing University in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning.You can go there on foot.When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you come to a traffic light,and there turn right,cross the first crossing and go straight ahead.Then go across the second crossing and you’ll see a post office. The Science Palace is right opposite to it.五、增加要点If you are interested in the lecture, please get to the Science Palace before 8:00./You are expected to listen to the speech.The Science Palace is not far from the Great Wall Hotel六、整理成文（注意便条的格式）January 20, 2006Dear Mr. Smith,Today I came to inform you of a speech but you happened to be out.So I have to leave youthe note.There will be a speech on pollution made by Professor Wang from Nanjing University in the Science Palace at 8:00 tomorrow morning. If you are interested in the lecture, please get to the Science Palace before 8:00.The Science Palace is not far from the Great Wall Hotel. You can go there on foot.When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you come to a traffic light,and there turn right,cross the first crossing and go straight ahead.Then go across the second crossing and you’ll see a post office. The Science Palace is right opposite to it.Yours trulyLi Hua。

高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评四请根据下列两幅图写一篇短文，短文内容应包括以下几个要点：①妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩；②儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理；③写作时要适当地发挥，语言连贯，要写出妈妈的惊诧，还要写自己对此幅漫画的感受和观点；④词数：150左右。

认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。

这是在家庭教育中比较常见的现象：家长用双重标准去教育自己的孩子。

根据基本的价值观，我们可以归纳出图画所要表达的主题是：As can be seen from the cartoons, it is a story about a bad example of family education .围绕确立的主题，仔细看图和文字，列出图中的要点。

人物：小男孩、妈妈以及跌倒的小女孩情景和动作：小男孩要去帮助小女孩，妈妈阻止儿子去扶摔倒的女孩,并对儿子说：“不要扶，否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。

”人物：小男孩和妈妈情景和动作：妈妈看到儿子对于倒了的油瓶置之不理；小男孩对妈妈说：“我扶了，你会说是我碰倒的”妈妈很是震惊。

遣词造句（注意多重表达）A boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground.A boy wanted to give a hand to a girl who fell over on the ground.His mother prevented him from helping the girl.His mother persuaded him not to do so.She said to his son “Don’t do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known”.She said to his son “If you did that, others would think it was you who knocked her known”.（注意虚拟语气的运用）Mom saw that her son ignored the fallen oil bottle on the ground .The boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet.The boy said to his mother, “If I had lifted the oil bottle, you would think that it was me who brought it down.”The boy explained to his mother that had he lifted the oil bottle, she would think that it was him who brought it down.（注意虚拟语气的运用）Hearing his son’s explanation, Mom was shocked/astonished/surprised.连贯成篇As can be seen from the cartoons, it is a story about a bad example of family education. In the first picture, a boy was trying to help a girl who fell over on the ground while his Mom prevented him from doing so, saying “Don’t do that, otherwise others would think it was you who knocked her known”. In the second picture, the boy was seen sitting leisurely with an oil bottle lying on the ground besides his feet. “Why can’t you straighten it up?” she asked angrily, but she was greatly shocked by the explanation from the boy, “IfI had lifted the oil bottle, you would think that it was me who brought itdo wn.”围绕漫画主题自拟感想①我对漫画中母亲的做法看法：不同意②建议（解决的办法）父母是孩子的第一任老师，应该为孩子树立好榜样；父母不仅要关心孩子的身体，还要关心他们的思想；父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。