[衡水二轮英语]第1部分 专题5 第3讲
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第3讲概要写作概要写作作为浙江英语高考新题型,就是对所读过的文章简要概括,写出文章的中心大意,也称之为摘要。
写概要时,读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来,而不是抄袭文章的原句,更不是把细节性信息作为中心,而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换,对文章的具体信息进行概括,再用合适的语言表述出来。
这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力,同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。
因此,概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达的,是二者的有机结合体,是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。
[选材特点]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;2.所选材料体裁没有限制,以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。
[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;3.上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况。
注意:理解准确,涵盖全部要求,完全使用自己的语言,准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇,得分相应比较高。
相反,如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象,得分档次将会大大降低;所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。
[写作步骤]1.阅读首先要通读全文,对文章的体裁和大意有所了解。
阅读时要快速地找到主题句,以便抓住中心,理解全文。
学生还需要根据文章内容列出一个简单的提纲,以便在写作过程中不会遗漏要点,总结全面。
2.写出初稿在写作过程中,学生要注意词数要求,使用精炼的句子概括文章的要点,可以引用所给阅读材料的重要词语,但不可过多,否则便失去了概要的意义;学生还需谨记:概要必须全面、清晰地表达所给阅读材料的信息,客观、准确地反映所给阅读材料的真实意图,不可随意添加或增减内容。
3.修正定稿初稿完成后,要将其与所给阅读材料核对一遍,看原材料中的要点是否在概要中都得到了体现,语句间的衔接是否符合逻辑,同时还需要检查句子是否有错误,时态和语态的使用是否正确,标点、格式、大小写是否有误等。
第3讲通知、留言、演讲稿,措辞得体突重点◆2018年全国Ⅲ卷、2014年辽宁卷考查通知,留言和演讲稿很可能会有所考查。
(2018·全国Ⅱ) 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Gro w ing Together,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 满分作文第一步认真审题谋篇布局体裁人称时态结构要点通知第二人称一般现在时和一般将来时活动目的→要求→具体细节①通知主题;②欢迎参加;③放映时间地点;④欢迎提意见。
第一编专题五第1讲写作增分练1词汇升级练Exercise 1利用高级词汇和过渡词提升下面的作文(2018·皖南八校二模)假定你是李华。
你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围”。
请你根据提示给他写一封英文回信。
内容包括:1.宣传标语用英汉双语;2.开设汉语角;3.邀请汉语外教来学校上课。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
考生作文Dear Tom,How are you doing? I'm very glad to hear from you.From your letter, I know that your class will develop the students' interest in Chinese learning. I want to share some advice with you.Firstly, all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English, which can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese.Secondly, you should set up a Chinese Corner in your class, where you can practice your spoken Chinese.Finally,your class should invite some Chinese teachers to come to school to communicate with students.I really hope my suggestions can be helpful for you.Looking forward to getting your good news soon.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua 我来提升1.利用高级词汇升级文中加黑体词汇(1)very glad→_more_than_delighted__(2)want to→_would_like_to__(3)should→_are_supposed_to__(4)be helpful for→_be_beneficial_to/be_of_great_benefit_to__2.利用高级过渡词汇升级文中斜体的过渡词(1)Firstly→_To_begin_with__(2)Secondly→_In_addition/Additionally/Besides/What's_more__(3)Finally→_Last_but_not_least__Exercise 2根据写作内容,利用高级词汇和过渡词补全下面的习作(2018·江西临川二模)假如你叫李华。
A假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友William寒假期间要来中国游玩,行程中计划在你家住三天,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.住宿条件;2.活动安排;3.其他事项(气候差异、着装提醒等)。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:Dear William,I am delighted to know that you are coming to China,and especially excited that you will stay in my house. Now,I’d like to tell you some relevant information about your stay here.The bedroom in which you will live is bright and pleasant. A variety of books as well as a computer are available. Of course you have easy access to the network. What’s more, I intend to show you around my city where you can visit some places of interest. By the way, we are having a cold winter here. So, be sure to bring your winter clothes.I am sure you will have a wonderful experience here. Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li HuaB假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom将来你家共度除夕,你打算当天下午去地铁站接他。
第一编专题四第3讲(2019·全国卷Ⅲ) I've had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.答案:I've had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opensopen a cafe.Though it mayappear simple,it requiredrequires a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just anordinarilyordinary cafe buta very special one.I want my cafe ∧tohave a special theme such as like“Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselvesthemselves in the historical environmentwhatthat/which is created for them.If Isucceed inmanagemanaging one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many differentcitycities.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and ana unique style.文章大意:本文是一篇记叙文,主要介绍了作者要开办多家咖啡馆的梦想。
[情态动词]Ⅰ单句语法填空1.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)Even worse, I had unthinkingly bought way too much; I ________ have made six salads with what I threw out.答案:could此处指他本可以用扔掉的菜做六份沙拉,could have done“本可以做某事,但是实际上却没有做”,故填could。
2.(2022·全国甲卷)In humans, babies ________ put a round shape in a round hole from around one year of age.答案:can句意:在人类身上,婴儿从一岁左右就可以把一个圆形的物品放进一个圆形的洞里。
此处表示能力,故填can。
3.(2021·天津高考)It used to be that you ____________ drive for miles here without seeing another person, but now there are houses and people everywhere.答案:could句意:以前你可能在这里开了几英里,都没见过别人,但现在到处都是房子和人。
此处表示对过去客观可能性的推测。
故填could。
4.(2022·江苏省南京市、盐城市高三二模)I believe he ________ take your condition into careful consideration.答案:will此处指主语的意志和意愿,故填will。
5.(2022·湖南省郴州市高三阶段测试)If you want to be successful in your life, you ________ believe in yourself.答案:must句意:如果你想在生活中取得成功,你必须相信自己。
第一编专题五第3讲[层级一真题题组]A通知假定你是学生会主席李华.学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动.请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.参考词汇:校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prize-giving________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】NoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus”is around the corner . Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.Note that your innovations must be school things. Along with your wonderful innovation, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym. Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony?Sure! It'll be held from 15:00 to 17:00 on June 18. So don't miss thechance of being the winner. Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success. For any questions, call Li Hua at 44876655.Come on, everybody ! It's your show time.Students' UnionB发言稿(天津卷) 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津.一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动.现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞.请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿.(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);(2)谈谈收获或感想;(3)表达祝愿与期望.注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.Dear friends,How time flies!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Thank you.【范文赏读】Dear_friends,How_time_flies!Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program,which we all have benefited from.During these two weeks,we have studied and lived together,which gives us the opportunity to promote our friendship. Doing sports as a team has enabled us to know each other better. Your art skills are excellent and admirable, which leaves me a deep impression. I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and the various activities.Now,on behalf of my schoolmates,I wish you a safe return.I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.Thank_you.[层级二模拟题组]1(2019·山西省八校联考) 假定你叫李华,是班上的英语课代表.你班外教Peter因外出开会请你代他在班上发一个关于课后作业的英语通知,内容如下:1.写一篇关于中国茶文化的短文;2.同学间交换并修改错误;3.作业上交的时间.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】NoticeDear classmates,Our teacher Peter is at a meeting,so he asked me to tell you about the writing assignment today.Here is something for your attention.First of all,the topic of our writing is about our Chinese tea culture based on the text we have just learnt.We are supposed to write the essay in about 100 words.Secondly,after finishing writing,we need to exchange it with our partners,and correct each other's mistakes if stly,the deadline for handing our corrected essays in is this Friday morning.Should you have any question about it,please don't hesitate to ask me.Li Hua2(2018·广州市二模) 假定你是李华.英国姊妹学校将来你校进行文化交流,你将作为学生代表在欢迎仪式上发言.请用英语写一篇发言稿,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.介绍一项中国传统文化;3.表达祝愿.注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【范文赏读】Good morning, everyone! My name is Li Hua and it's my great pleasure to welcome our guests from our UK sister school.①It's exciting to meet so many new friends.As this is a cultural exchange program, I'd like to talk briefly about Chinese traditional culture, specifically Chinese painting. Traditional Chinese painting known as “guo hua”, is an enduring art form with a 2,000-year-long history.②In contrast to western oil painting, it's usually done on Chinese art paper(宣纸) or thin silk, using various brushes and black or colored ink. With subjects ranging from landscapes to flora and fauna(动植物), these paintings not only reflect the Chinese conception of artistic beauty but also embody the principles of Chinese philosophical thinking.③We're planning several visits to our city's art galleries so you can see for yourself.I hope you'll have a fantastic time during your stay with us and enjoy the activities we have organized.Thank you.【一句多译】①表达方式一:How excited I am to meet so many new friends!表达方式二:Meeting so many new friends is very exciting.②表达方式一:Different from western oil painting, it's usually done on Chinese art paper(宣纸) or thin silk, using various brushes and black or colored ink.表达方式二:Not similar to western oil painting, it's usually done on Chinese art paper(宣纸) or thin silk, with various brushes and black or colored ink.③表达方式一:There will be several visits to our city's art galleries for you to enjoy yourself.表达方式二:Several visits to our city's art galleries will be planned for you to get their points.。