专业英语阅读与写作培训讲义
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Unit 8 Telecommunications第一次课在讲解精读文章之前,我想先讲一下阅读方法,(原因,可以联系做研究的调研,研究生新生不会调研看文献,而这需要专业英语的培养)(提问:大家一般怎么看文献,大学英语文章,四六级阅读文章,。
,联系到实际的文献阅读方法)我来总结一下我个人经常使用的专业阅读的方法,也是我这5、6年看专业英语论文的一些体会和经验,和大家分享一下,希望对大家以后阅读专业文献有所帮助。
这些方法和公共英语的阅读方法既有联系,也有区别,所以大家以后也可以结合自己阅读公共英语文章的方法,找出适合自己的专业英语阅读方法。
首先,讲解是专业英语文献的泛读。
泛读在专业英语中经常用到,它主要是为了抓取专业文献(或者是技术说明书等)的中心意思和核心内容,以及基本原理,基本方法等等。
如果是专业学术论文,泛读需要了解该论文所提出方法解决的问题,基本的原理和实验的结果。
如果是综述文章,我们一般需要通过泛读挑选需要精读的综述论文。
因为综述论文的内容都是一样的,我们只需要精度有价值的1到2篇同领域的综述文献。
第一个我觉得比较有用的泛读方法是问题式的阅读方法,带着问题阅读,找到自己需要的知识。
这让我想起四六级的阅读方法,就是先看后面的问题,再看文章。
这里也类似,就是说不是一上来就开始读,而是先想想你希望这篇文章帮你回答哪些问题,你希望从文献中看到什么概念,什么定义,或者什么原理,什么公式。
具体的技术问题每篇论文都不一样,但是有一些通用的问题。
专业学术论文我们就会问:1、该论文涉及的领域最先进的方法是什么?2、最先进的方法还存在什么问题,3、该论文通过什么方法和什么科学原理,利用哪些技术解决来该问题。
4、所提出的方法的实验结果在定性和定量方面与参考方法比提高多少?5、还有没有继续改进的空间,也就是所提出的方法还存不存在新的问题?综述性的论文我们就会问:所综述的技术是否可以根据某种原则继续分类?每个类别里的里程碑事件分别是什么?每个事件所提出的技术是什么时间、什么人所提出的?每个技术的基本原理是什么?每个技术的优缺点是什么?第二个我要讲的方法是分层次阅读。
大学英语写作专题培训(doc 64页)大学英语写作讲义四级写作总论一、课程安排:1、四级写作总论:1)考试流程2)复习计划3)学习方法4)大纲解读2、应用文:1)个人简历2)书信3)口头作文4)告示5)经典范文3、论说文:1)评卷实例2)万能句型3)最新真题4、翻译:1)最新大纲2)最新真题二、考试流程:08:45 验证入场(身份证、准考证、学生证缺一不可)09:00 发答题卡(答题卡1正面为作文题,背面写作文),9:00之后无法入场。
09:10~09:35 写作(09:35发试题册)写作时间分配:审题(3分钟)09:35~09:40 翻译09:40~09:55 快速阅读理解(在答题卡1背面作答)09:55~10:00 收答题卡1,建议快速浏览听力选项10:00~10:35 听力理解(以下在答题卡2作答)10:35~11:05 仔细阅读理解(选词填空或简答+篇章阅读理解)11:05~11:20 完形填空(11:05 监考教师提醒15分钟后交卷)三、复习计划:1、攻克词汇:1)词汇书:俞敏洪《四级词汇词根+联想记忆法》2)真题:最新10套四级真题2、精研真题:最新10套四级真题,尤其是2006年6月24日以后真题1)词汇:没有一个词汇不认识2)选项:没有一个选项不了解四、学习方法:(一)提高实力:背诵:10大必背范文1)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩2、考生可能带来的副作用3、我对考试的看法In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject.Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?2)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel. You should write at least 120 words and baseyour composition on the outline below:1、我最喜爱的小说是···2、该小说的内容3、我为什么喜爱My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne. The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days. It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life. We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.3)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我生活中最难忘的人是······2、为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀3、结论In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chucklesor loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.4)Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually:1)邀请他们参加晚会,2)说明举办晚会的原因,3)为他们安排了什么活动Dear Snoopy,I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2008.As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will performsome works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.ours sincerely,i Ming5)SpeechMr. President, ladies and gentlemen,Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of Motorola(China) Electronics Ltd.The following is my introduction to the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference fo International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company , I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive. .I was all of you enjoy yourselves during thisconference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.6)LetterDear Sir or Madam,I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.I am sure that I am qualified for it. Fist, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highlyappreciated.7)RESUMELi MingP. O. Box 237, Beijing University5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871 Tel: 62768888 Email: Liming@Career Objective: A position with managementpotential in the banking businessspecializing in internationalcorporate financingEducational Background:Sept 2003 to Beijing UniversityJuly 2007 Major in International Business ManagementMain courses include English,Computer,BusinessManagement,Accounting,InternationalCommercialLawWork Experience:July 2006 to Bank of ChinaJune 2007 Internship, Secretary to DeputyManager of MarketingDraft business correspondenceSchedule deputy manager’s appointmentsQualifications: University graduation certificate andbachelor degree to be conferred upongraduation (2007)College English Test Band 4 June2005Honors & Awards: Twice awarded scholarship byBeijing University 2005& 2006 Special Skills: Familiarity with Microsoft Word, ExcelAbility to work independentlyGood Organizational skills Experience: President of Student Union 2005-presentPersonal Data: Date of Birth: 9/17/1985Gender: FemaleMarital Status: Unmarried8)AnnouncementDirections:The Student’s Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:1) the purpose of the contest,2) time and place of the contest,3) what is required of the candidates,4) details of the judges and awards.Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature.Chinese-Speaking ContestJune 10, 2007To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (17june) at the Students’ Recreational Center. Those who are interested in talking part in it may sign up with the monitors of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be givenawards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ UnionDepartm ent of Chinese Language and Literature9)InternetOwing to the speedy economic development, the number of the people who use Internet has considerably increased. It is universally acknowledged that Internet playa a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of Internet. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of Internet. Unfortunately, if we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should cultivate the authorities to make strict laws to control Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of peoplethat Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet is essential to us. Only in this way can we solve the problem.10)Jobs for Graduates (1)Job hunting has always been a headache for college graduates. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I think the problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should researchthe market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students' attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to some small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the problem can be solved.参考译文1)在绝大多数大学里,考试都是作为衡量学生是否掌握某一课程的主要手段。
授课内容: 1.题型介绍及考查目标 2.辨文章结构、知出题题型 3.三个类别各有侧重,综合文章贯穿始终 4.阅读理解中的难点 5.教材重点文章讲解、各种题型了解 题型介绍 该部分考查应试者对不同体裁和不同题材语言材料的理解能力,以及通过阅读获取材料信息(主旨和细节信息)的能力。
要求应试者阅读3篇具有一定难度级别的文章, 每篇文章300-450词,每篇文章后有5道小题,应试者应根据文章的内容,从每题所给的4个选项中选择1个最佳答案。
考查目标 应试者应能综合运用英语语言知识和阅读技能来理解本专业的或一般内容的英语书面材料。
辨文章结构、知出题题型 ◆记叙文:讲述个人生活经历,并由一定的时间概念贯穿其中,或顺序或倒序。
一般不出现单纯的记叙文,大多是夹叙夹议。
例:The Barbie Dolls 常见题型:细节题,主旨题 ◆说明文:对某事物的特点、功能作用、发展等分别进行说明,根本目的在于让读者了解这些信息,重视信息的客观陈述。
行文模式:提出问题(或以一个事例引出问题)—— (专家)发现直接原因—— 分析深层原因——得出结论或找到出路。
特点:事实为主,观点为辅,细节详细(人物、地点、时间、情景、特点等)。
例:Late-night Drinking 常见题型:细节题,主旨题 ◆议论文:对某个问题进行剖析,或支持,或批驳,其根本目的在于说服读者接受自己的观点。
行文模式:主张——反主张模式。
首先提出一种或某些人认可的主张或观点,然后进行澄清,说明自己的主张或观点,或者提出反主张或真实情况。
特点:观点鲜明的开头,紧扣主题的结尾,有主题句且衔接自然的中间段落。
常见题型:细节题,主旨题,词汇题,推理判断题,作者态度/目的题 三个类别各有侧重,综合文章贯穿始终 1.阅读理解三篇文章,由易到难,分别与另两个级别过渡; 2.三篇文章中,有一篇取自教材,但会有改变; 3.三篇文章中,有一篇为综合、理工、卫生共有,通常为综合类文章; 4.阅读理解考题考点呈现多样性; 5.文章后面问题的设置顺序通常是按照文章的发展顺序设置。
《专业英语阅读云写作》教学大纲一、课程基本信息Reading and Writing in Specialized 课程代码3120912 课程英文名称English课程性质选修课程类别专业教育学分数 3学时数48 理论学时48 实验学时0 上机学时0 实践学时0 先修课程大学英语后续课程毕业设计适用专业电气工程及其自动化执笔人高锋阳审核人李亚宁编写日期2012年06月二、课程性质和目的专业英语阅读与写作是电气工程及其自动化专业的专业英语课程,是将专业知识的学习与英语的学习有机地结合起来,在基础英语知识的基础上,侧重了专业英语的阅读与翻译技巧的训练。
通过本课程的学习,使学生能够熟练阅读本专业外文教材,掌握专业英语翻译技巧和英文写作的基本要求,为从事相关工作打下坚实的基础。
三、课程教学的基本要求1.熟悉一般科普类英语的文体,掌握科技英语浏览和阅读的基本技巧;2.掌握科技词汇的一般构词和使用方法;3.掌握英文正式书信和其他常用应用文的描述与写作方法;4.掌握英文中图、表和曲线的描述与写作方法;5.熟悉专业英语文体、阅读及翻译技巧。
6.熟悉专业英语文献的基本结构,如摘要、引用、时态、参考文献等,借鉴IEEE文献格式,掌握专业英语中写作的一般方法。
四、课程教学基本内容1.科技英语阅读电气工程及其自动化专业科技英语阅读包括三个阅读单元,每个单元由一篇核心阅读内容(CRT)和一篇补充阅读内容(SRT)构成。
每个单元附有大量的阅读练习,包括科技词汇、语法、阅读理解和翻译等。
每单元4学时。
(1) CRT:Stampede on the SuperhighwaySRT:The Complete Survival Guide to the Information Superhighway(2) CRT:Traffic Technology Drivers to clear the roadSRT:Factors in the Development of Transportation(3) CRT:Once and Future LandfillsSRT:Water Resource Management System2.科技英语写作包括科技英语单句写作技巧,英文正式书信及常用应用文写作方法,科技英文图、表和曲线的写作方法。
英语阅读与写作常见问题及例释1,阅读理解中如何处理难于理解的长句子?例1:Places that until recently were deaf and dumb are rapidly acquiring up-to-date telecommunications that will let them promote both internal and foreign investment.步骤一:确定句子的主干, 或主句Places that until recently were deaf and dumb are rapidly acquiring up-to-date telecommunications that will let them promote both internal and foreign investment. Places are rapidly acquiring up-to-date telecommunications.步骤二:根据各从句的关系词语,判断它们的性质,继而确定各从句的性质a. that until recently were deaf and dumbb. that will let them promote both internal and foreign investment.以上两句中,that 均作关系代词,分别是动词were 和will let 的主语,由此可知,两个句子都是限定性定语从句,可以理解为(……的……)的结构步骤三:判断从句与主句(主句中的某些成分)的关系a. that until recently were deaf and dumb 是修饰先行词placesb. that will let them promote both internal and foreign investment. 是修饰先行词telecommunications步骤四:理解(a. that until recently were deaf and dumb=以往通讯闭塞的)地方(places)已经快速获得了日新月异的而且(b.that will let them promote both internal and foreign investment.=可以提高国内外投资量)的通讯方式(telecommunications).例2:All these developing regions see advanced communications as a way to leap over whole stages of economic development.步骤一:确定句子的主干All these developing regions see advanced communications as a way.步骤二:根据非谓语动词成分(不定式短语、分词短语、动名词短语或独立结构),判断它们的性质,继而确定各成分的性质to leap over whole stages of economic development.动词不定式to leap over 做的是修饰性成分步骤三:判断这些成分与主干中相关成分的关系as a way to leap over whole stages of economic development.动词不定式短语修饰的是先行词way步骤四:理解很多发展中的地区都把先进的通讯方式看作是一种(to leap over whole stages of economic development=完全超过经济发展水平的)方式(way).例3:Widespread access to information technologies, for example, promises to condense the time required to change from labor-intensive assembly work to industries that involve engineering, marketing, and design.步骤一:确定句子的主干, 或主句Widespread access to information technologies promises to condense the time.步骤二:根据非谓语动词成分(不定式短语、分词短语、动名词短语或独立结构),判断它们的性质,继而确定各成分的性质步骤二:根据各从句的关系词语,判断它们的性质,继而确定各从句的性质过去分词短语required to change from labor-intensive assembly work to industries关系代词that引导定语从句:that involve engineering, marketing, and design. 步骤三:判断这些成分与主干中相关成分的关系过去分词短语required to change from labor-intensive assembly work to industries修饰的是the time关系代词that引导定语从句:that involve engineering, marketing, and design. 饰的是industries步骤四:理解广泛引用信息技术可以进一步节约(required to change from labor-intensive assembly work to industries=用于从劳动密集型产业转向that involve engineering, marketing, and design.=包括工程技术、市场营销和设计)的新产业(industries)的时间(the time).例4:Many experts think Vietnam is going too far by requiring that all mobile phones be expensive digital models, when it is desperate for any phones, period.步骤一:确定句子的主干, 或主句Many experts think Vietnam is going too far步骤二:根据非谓语动词成分(不定式短语、分词短语、动名词短语或独立结构),判断它们的性质,继而确定各成分的性质步骤二:根据各从句的关系词语,判断它们的性质,继而确定各从句的性质介词短语by requiring关系词that引导宾语从句that all mobile phones be expensive digital models, 关系副词when引导状语从句when it is desperate for any phones, period.步骤三:判断这些成分与主干中相关成分的关系介词短语by requiring是主句的方式状语从句that all mobile phones be expensive digital models是requiring的宾语关系副词when引导状语从句when it is desperate for any phones, period.是主句的时间/条件状语步骤四:理解(when it is desperate for any phones, period.=当使用电话还是比较遥远的奢望的时候)越南的技术革新有些超前了(by requiring that all mobile phones be expensive digital models,=还是通过让所有的手机都成为昂贵的数字化机器)2,阅读理解中如何处理不认识的单词?例文:That leaves private industry—computer, phone, and cable companies —to move into the vacuum left by the government’s absence. And while these industries are pioneering the most exciting new technologies, some critics fear that profit-minded companies will only develop services for the wealthy. “If left in the hands of private enterprise, the data highway could become little more than a synthetic universe for the rich,” worries Jeffrey Chester, president of the Center for Media Education in Washington D.C.Advocates for the poor want the companies building the data highway to devote a portion of their profits to insuring universal access. Advocates of universal access have already launched a number of projects of their own. In Berkeley, California, the city’s Community Memory Project has placed computer terminals in public buildings and subway stations, where a message can be sent for 25 cents. In Santa Monica, California, computers have replaced typewriters in all public libraries, and anyone, not just librarians, can send correspondence via computer.步骤一:确定生词的词性1, cable 在原文中位于computer, phone, and cable companies 可以得出cable company 是与computer company和phone company并列的,可知cable 为名词2, vacuum前有the,并且含有名词后缀-um,为名词3,pioneering 前有系动词are, 自身又是-ing形式,可知是现在进行时形式的动词4, profit-minded “x+N.-ed”结构表明此合成词为形容词,如warm-hearted 5, enterprise在“A of B”结构中,为名词6,synthetic “a synthetic universe”短语,说明synthetic为形容词(有形容词后缀-ic)universe 为名词7,universe 同上8,Advocates 做动词want的主语,是名词9, portion 前有冠词a,并且有名词后缀-ion,为名词10,launched 处在助动词have之后,是动词的过去分词,为完成时态的动词11,terminals 做动词has placed 的宾语,为名词12, typewriters 做have replaced的宾语,为名词13,correspondence 做can send 的宾语,为名词步骤二:根据生词的词性,寻找上下文搭配关系线索1, cable 在原文中位于computer, phone, and cable companies 可以得出cable是与computer和phone有类比意义2,根据原文the vacuum lef t by the government’s absence可知,vacuum 与absence意思有关3,根据原文…are pioneering the most exciting new technologies可知,pioneering 与new 有关4,根据原文profit-minded companies will only develop services for the wealthy可知profit-minded与wealthy有关5, 根据private industry 和private enterprise的表达,可知enterprise 与industry和company有类比意义6,7,根据原文data highway could become little more than a synthetic universe for the rich可知,synthetic universe是由data highway变来(become)的8,9, 根据原文Advocates for the poor want the companies building the data highway to devote a portion of their profits to insuring universal access.可知advocates是一类人,且支持穷人(for the poor);portion 是被贡献的利润(devote…their profits)的属性10,lauched 的宾语是a number of projects of their (advocates) own11,根据原文has placed computer terminals in public buildings and subway stations,可知terminals是与computer有关的安装(have placed)在公共建筑和地铁站(public buildings and subway stations)的东西12, typewriters是图书馆里被电脑(computer)替换(have replaced)的东西13, 根据原文can send correspondence via computer.可知,correspondence 是一种由电脑(computer)发送(can send)的东西答案:1, cable n.有线网络2, vacuum n.空缺3,pioneer vt.充当……先锋;试制4, profit-minded a.利润至上的;只关心利润的5, enterprise n. 产业;企业6,synthetic a. 合成的;制造的7,universe n. 宇宙;世界;环境;……的整体8,Advocates n. 鼓吹者;支持者9, portion n. 部分;份额10,launch vt. 发射;开发11,terminals n. 终点站;终端设备12, typewriters n. 打字机13,correspondence n. 信件;邮件;通讯方法与原则1,寻找动宾关系,可以依据搭配意义,猜动词和做宾语的名词、2,依据类比关系,可以猜词3,根据上下文无法翻译的词,可以知道大概意义的域3,如何在写作中完成规定的字数?例: Shopping on Internet1,当前有很多人在网上购物2,网上购物既给人们带来了方便,也可能会产生一些问题3,谈谈你的看法学生原文问题分析:More and more people go shopping on Internet. But shopping on Internet has some disadvantages. Some of people don’t accept shopping on Internet.A number of people think that shopping on Internet can acquire some conveniences. Sometimes, goods on Internet are a lot more than that of markets. And, goods are cheaper on the Internet. So more and more people like shopping on Internet, but the others don’t like shopping on Internet, because some of goods don’t have good quality on the Internet. And we don’t know if the goods that you buy are similar to those on Internet.I think that we can buy goods on the Internet, because shopping on the Internet have a lot of conveniences. And shopping on Internet more and more conform to our modern life. (131 words)问题1:重复的词语频率过高,如More and more/ shopping on Internet问题2:复合句或表达意思充分的长句过少问题3:用词过于简单,以至于表达意思不甚明确,如:goods/ quality/ similar/ don’t like/ some of/ the other问题4: 文章重点不突出范文及解决方法:Recently,①there is a big trend that more and more people go shopping on Internet. However,①There are some disadvantages for ①it. ③A fairly large portion of people ②doubt if it is really perfect of shopping on Internet.A number of people think that ②some conveniences can be acquired in ①this way. Sometimes, ③merchandises exhibited on Internet shops are a lot more than that ③in the real-life markets. Furthermore, goods are ③usually cheaper on Internet. In a sense, ①a group of people like shopping on Internet. However, t he others don’t like shopping on Internet, because sometimes ③things sold on Internet don’t have good quality.②Comprehensively speaking, it is obvious that young people are more likely to do shopping on Internet of the reason that they are fonder of fashionable things and living style commonly disregarding the endurability and quality of the things they buy. By the way,we don’t know if the goods that you buy are similar to those on Internet.Consequently, I think that we can buy goods on the Internet, because ①doing this kind of shopping has a lot of conveniences. And ①this trend conforms much more to our modern life. (197 words)符号①:因为短语词数较多不易重复,所以通过使用短语来替代过于常用的口语化表达符号②:使用两到三个融合有复杂句子成分的长句来使得意义表达更完整符号③:通过清楚讲出使用的名词的概念,既避免重复,又使意义更清楚用关联词语(文中斜体部分)讲清楚句子与句子之间的逻辑联系,突出文章重点4,如何分析写作的题目和安排文章结构?例:My View on Modern College Education1,大学教育随着时代的变化、文化的发展而变化2,当前的大学教育考试占有非常重要的地位,同时也有人认为大学教育应该是纯粹的素质教育3,谈谈你的看法题干分析:题干1:主要讲这个文章的基本主题,可以看作是topic sentence,可以根据它展开论点题干2:规定了主题下具体讨论问题的方向,文章的主要阐述部分应该围绕这个方向展开段落结构:第一段,确定基本的论点,如本文可以是“Both the examination oriented education and the quality education are terms that happen in specific historical period, and they will also change with the social and cultural development.”;再确立基本论点的基础上,可以用1~2句话对论点进行说明第二段,根据题干2确立的方向进行讨论,详细解释各个涉及到的概念,及概念间的相互关系。