2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之十五 学案(11页word版)

第二讲短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

Ⅰ短文改错命题原则表——高考就考这些点短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进行查验。

见下表：A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Befo re getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following myeighteen eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard ∧the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so but/yet once I started the car, my mind goes wentblank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word words ， “Speed up ！”“Slow down ！”“Turning Turnleft ！” I was so much ＼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minuteslate later ， the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sudden stop just in the middle on ofthe road. B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr. and Mrs.Zhang /all both all ＼work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a an/one hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting interestedin planting vegetables in their garden, that which is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier earlyand water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside Besides ， they often get some useful informations information from the Internet. When summer came comes ， they will invite their students ∧ topick the fresh vegetables! C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high schooldays. 答案：When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of＼how fast time flies. I hadhave grown not onlyphysically, andbut also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo wastooktaken， Ientered my second year of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school music club.Around mein ∧this/thepicture are the thingstheythat/which were very important in my life at that time：car magazinesand musical instruments.I enjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes，playing popmusic，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happymemories of yourmy high school days.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇训练之一【一】I like to play basketballs very much，so when I went to a middle school，I joined the basketball st week，our team had a match.We were against other school.All of us were so exciting and wanted to win.When the match began，our team works very slowly.We could not cooperate very good，because this was the first time of us to play.When half match time went，we lagged behind.Our team leader called us together and told us we must get united，so that we could have the chance win.Then we played hardly and cooperated so well.But we won the game in the end.答案：I like to play basketballsbasketball very much，so when I went to middleschool，I joined the basketball st week，our team had a match.Wewere againstotheranother school.All of us were soexcitingexcited and wanted towin.When the match began，our teamworksworked very slowly.We could notcooperate very goodwell，because this was the first timeoffor us to play.Whenhalf match time went，we lagged behind.Our team leader called us together and told us we must get united，so that we could have the chancewin.Then we played hardlyhard and cooperated so well.错误!we won thegame in the end.【二】I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldn’t have won firstprize in the English Talent Competition for high school student last week.I used to be poorly in spoken English. I was too shy to speak in class. Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class. Thanks to her, I have made great progresses. Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her. It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence. And I owe my success to her.Susan set me a good example. I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.答案：第一句：at→without; student→students第二句：poorly→poor第四句：teaches→taught; him→me第五句：progresses→progress第六句：去掉the第七句：which→that第八句：And→So第九句：Susan后加has【三】I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. Y ou can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before the audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!答案：第一句：make后加a第二句：to→on/upon第三句：去掉more第四句：allowing→allowed第五句：before→when/as/after; or→and第六句：patient→patiently第七句：me→myself第九句：speak→speaking; had→has【四】Last month, I was told we would have our first military training. At first, I thought it will be hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine wouldbe very strongly during these days, or we could easily get sunburnt. Later, when I was in the camp, I found it was a lot fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple, but tasted good. Now you never know how happy days we had in the camp. I think the experience has been made us stronger!答案：第二句：will→would; stayed→staying第三句：strongly→strong; or→and/so第四句：lot后加of第五句：you→us第六句：soldier→soldiers第七句：look→looked第八句：how→what第九句：去掉been【五】Life is an mystery and we will never know that what is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it’s the process of solving problems that help us grow.Make a speech used to be a big problem for me. With a strong accent and terribly pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn’t hold back. In the contrary, I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I’m confident enough to give my best speech to you all.My dear friends, don’t afraid of problems, but take advantage of it to be the best of ourselves!答案：第一句：an→a; 去掉that第三句：help→helps第四句：Make→Making第五句：terribly→terrible; competition→competitions第六句：In→On第七句：listening→listened第九句：don’t后加be; it→them【六】Sunny 31st, JulyIt was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying and the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The airwas fresh. In addition, I could clear see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.答案：第二句：come→came; relaxing→relaxed第三句：While→When; its→my第五句：clear→clearly第六句：grasses→grass; with→at第七句：Therefore→However第八句：去掉back第九句：such后加a【七】Last summer vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparent. They had several cows in their yard. One day, one of them were ill, but it didn’t want take any medicine. An animal doctor came and gave it an injection. After a while, and it seemed to be better, so I decided to feed it anything. I fed it carrots, which were cutting into small pieces. I also fed it milk powder with pills in them, just as a doctor told me. Although looking after an ill cow was a tired job, I felt a sense of achievement as it begins to recover.答案：第一句：grandparent→grandparents第三句：were→was; take前加to第五句：去掉and; anything→something第六句：cutting→cut第七句：them→it; a→the第八句：tired→tiring; begins→began【八】I am a student in Senior Three. Though I am busy with my study, I often imagine what my life will be like in the ten years. I will have graduated from the university by now. I hope I will find a job in an advertisement company which I will enjoy my work and get along well to my colleagues. I will do my best in whenever I do. I will get married and have my own family filling with love and happiness. I will keep the habit of taking regular exercises, such as running, swimming or various ball games. During my holidays, I would travel to my dreamlands. In a word, my life will be much richer and colorful.答案：第二句：去掉the第三句：now→then第四句：which→where; to→with第五句：whenever→whatever第六句：filling→filled第七句：exercises→exercise; or→and第八句：would→will第九句：and后加more【九】After school, I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog! When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.答案：第一句：去掉into; lie→lying第三句：of→with第六句：energy→energetic第八句：that→whether/if第九句：surprised→surprise第十句：become后加a; had→has第十一句：Looked→Looking第十二句：ourselves→us【十】Hi Eva，Sorry that I haven’t been in the touch for a while. But I catch a cold last week, and I’ve been in bed for four day. I’m feeling better today. Lucky my classes won’t start till next week.I have good news. I’m going to a conference in you town in May, from 16th to 20th. Could you recommend a hotel where is in the centre of the town? It needs to be somewhere not too expensive because the tight budget. I’ll have a freely half-day for sightseeing. Do you think you can showed me around?Looking forward to hear from you soon.Chris答案：第一句：去掉the第二句：catch→caught; day→days 第四句：Lucky→Luckily第六句：you→your第七句：where→that/which第八句：because后加of第九句：freely→free第十句：showed→show第十一句：hear→hearing。

2018届二轮复习短文改错解题技巧学案练与析一、分清错误的类型，对症下药1．缺词短文改错中所缺的词常常是冠词、介词、代词等虚词，它通常与词的搭配相关，比如：见到名词，应考虑是否缺了冠词；见到动词，可注意后面是否少了应与之搭配的介词或其他词；见到某些固定表达，如in fact，as soon as等，应考虑是否完整；还有某些短语加冠词与不加冠词意义不同，如in front of，in the front of；某些短语加介词与不加介词用法不同，如：as a result，as a result of。

高考常考点具体如下表所示：典型例题：①In the car park there Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.答案及分析：在as后加a。

car是可数名词，此处表示“有一辆汽车冲了过来”，表泛指，故要用a。

②For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and left the lights or television when no one else was there?答案及分析：在television后面加on。

句意：例如，当那里没人的时候，有多少次你让电灯或电视开着就离开了房间？leave...on表示“让……开着”。

③There was one in particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’tlooking.答案及分析：在put后加it。

及物动词put后缺少宾语，代替“我特别想要的那个玩具”要用it。

2．多词短文改错中多余的词常常是虚词，如冠词、介词、代词、副词、连词等。

一种是根据涉及的名词、动词的特点等判断是否多了冠词、介词、副词或其他词；另一种是根据全句的结构和意义，判断是否多了连词或其他词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之七【一】I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to going there for long time. It is one of the beautiful city all over the world. There are many places of interests where you can learn something you can’t learn it in school. I’d also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunately, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, and I would have the chance to see them by himself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience.答案…are going to New York City this month. I had … am have… for^ long time. …beautiful city … a citiesplaces of interests …you can’t learn it in school. interest 删除it… were destroyed in September 11, 2001, onand I would have the chance to see them by himself. or myselfNow I am getting ready for the excited trip. exciting【二】Dear Peter,I am writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor. I want to havea pen friend, hopefully, a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. However, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling, taking care pets, or whatever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her countries. I am looking forward to hear from you soon.Best regards,LiHua答案1. that-if\whether2. similarly- similar3. he-she4. Interesting-interested5. However-Besides6. been7. care ∧ pets8. believed-believeof9.countries-country 10 hear-hearing【三】We are now living in a information age, in which TV, cells and the Web are wideused. It seem that many people cannot enjoy themselves without it. However, if Iwere to give up one of them,1 would turn off TV rather than to switch off my cell or cutoff the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows took my fancy and there are toomany commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are available elsewhere, either. As forcells and the Web, they are less necessary for me. I need a cell to keep in touch myfriend and my family.答案【四】It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failure. J ．K. Rowling, who wrote HarryPotter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”答案It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To Inmy opinion,it is hard to be successful. Challenges were area necessary part of your lifeas you grow up. And you won't necessarynecessarily succeed in everything for＼thefirst time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in theworld are the oneones who've had the most failurefailures. J．K. Rowling, whowrote HarryPotter, had her first Harry Potter book was＼rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed ∧fromhis high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and missmissed thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's becausewhyI succeed.”【五】With the development of people’s living condition, more and more people possess their own cars. Some of us think it is good to own a car. For instance, it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation. Moreover, it shows that people are becoming richer and the country is much more stronger. It also made relative businesses and industries develop faster.However, others have different opinions, thinking that cars give up waste gases and pollute the environment around. Too much cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents and crowdedness. Besides, lack parking lots is another big problem.As far as I’m concerned, we ought to think careful before buying cars. As if we have cars, we may use it less.【答案】1. condition 改为conditions 考查名词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错典题冲刺训练10篇（一）【一】Last summer, I got a part-time job as a waiter.I worked hard and very helpful.Everyone in a restaurant including some regular customer liked me.One day, a foreign couple in their fifties entered into the restaurant.I was happy to have a chance to practice their spoken English.I went up to greet them warm.After I took their order, I told them their food will be served quickly because we Chinese respect the elderly.After heard my words, a look of displeasure appeared on the wife’s face.Seeing my confusing look, her husband explained to me the Westerners disliked the description “old”．I apologized to them but realized the importance of knowing cultural differences.答案：第二句：very前加was第三句：a→the; customer→customers第四句：去掉into第五句：their→my第六句：warm→warmly第七句：will→would第八句：heard→hearing第九句：confusing→confused第十句：but→and【二】Dear Mom and Dad，In London at last, we are having great time!To stay in a hotel in an old castle, and we tried to make a reservation.However, that hotel was fully booked.So, instead, we get a couple of beds in a dormitory.Stay in a dormitory was a lot of fun because there were lots of people from various place.If you had come without us, you would have enjoyed Europe either.All of the paintings I’ve seen so far is fantastic.Now I think Van Gogh is his favorite artist.Is there anything specially I can bring you?Li Ming 答案：第一句：great前加a第二句：去掉and第四句：get→got第五句：Stay→Staying; place→places第六句：without→with; either→too第七句：is→are第八句：his→my第九句：specially→special【三】Tourism is booming in Tibet.More than 6.8 million Chinese and foreign tourists visit the region in the first half of this year.Tourism income during that period rose on to 7 billion yuan.More tourists are expected to traveling around Tibet in the second half of this year.The region is hosting the China Tibet Tourism or Culture Expo, featuring series of festivals.Currently, foreigners need a special travel permission to tour the region in addition for a Chinese visa.They have to wait for the permit patient.It is cheerful what the local authorities have promised us to shorten the time of obtaining it.答案：第二句：visit→visited第三句：去掉on第四句：traveling→travel第五句：or→and; series前加a第六句：permission→permit; for→to第七句：patient→patiently第八句：what→that; us→them【四】In the village where I grew up, everyone knew an old man, that spent all his time in painting.People that lived in the village used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends.Whether he was offered money, he would never take it.He said he painted for a pleasure.He once gave one of his paintings to my father, who actually wasn’t interesting in art.Years later I found at our old house.By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his paintings as great work of art, which were worth lots of money.So an art gallery makes me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it.So then I decided not to.It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didn’t real want to make money by painting.答案：第一句：that→who第二句：admiring→admire第三句：Whether→If第四句：去掉a第五句：interesting→interested第六句：found后加it第七句：work→works第八句：makes→made第九句：So→But第十句：real→really【五】During my second month of nursing school, our professors gave us a quiz.I had smoothly finished the others’questions when I got stuck on the last one: “What’s the first name of the woman who clean the school？” I had seen, many times, the woman, tall and in her fifty, but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper, leave the last question blankly.After a class ended, one student asked for the answer for the question.The professor said, “As you know, that in your careers you will meet many people.Y ou should respect them and care about them, even you just smile and say ’hello’to them.”答案：第一句：professors→professor第二句：others’→other; clean→cleans第三句：fifty→fifties第四句：leave→leaving; blankly→blank第五句：a→the; 第二个for→to第六句：去掉that第七句：even后加if/though【六】The World Health Organization said that 92 percent of the world’s population live in areas of high air pollution.Experts say much of that pollution comes from vehicles fueling by diesel.Many cities in Europe have called for end the production of diesel cars.They hope to replace them with electric vehicles but their quality has improved.London is one of the most heavy polluted cities in Europe.Levels of harmful gases in the city are regularly higher than limits set by the European Union.Martin Williams says pedestrians (行人) often do not realize how close they are to air pollution sources because they cannot see it.He says people across Great Britain have being died too early because the pollution.Experts say electric cars could offer a answer to air pollution in most city.They add, however, that the electricity should be created by using renewable energy.答案：第一句：said→says第二句：fueling→fueled第三句：end→ending第四句：but→because第五句：heavy→heavily第七句：it→them第八句：去掉being; because后加of第九句：a→an; city→cities【七】Being a teacher is always believed to be one of greatest occupations, because teachers make great contributions for the st week, I got a chance to experience teaching students.Our school asked us to teach some kids live in the countryside.The kids was so happy that they gave me a warm welcome.I teach them English and after class, we played games happily.We had a lot of funs together.When I returned back to school, I missed the students so much.They like me but some of them have kept in touch with me ever since.I felt so proudly of being a teacher.答案：第一句：greatest前加the; for→to第三句：us→me; live→living第四句：was→were第五句：teach→taught第六句：funs→fun第七句：去掉back第八句：but→and第九句：proudly→proud【八】Li Ming is a friend of mine.I’m glad he changed greatly in the past two years.I clearly remember he was quite fat two years before.He got tired so easy that he couldn’t take exercise, that made him very ter, he realized unless he went on like that, he would end up achieve nothing.So he made up his minds to make a change.He went running every morning and played the basketball every afternoon.Besides, he followed a diet of more vegetables or less meat.Gradually he began to lose weight.He is now an energetic boy in good health.So when faced with problems, we should overcome it with great determination and strong willpower.答案：第二句：changed前加has第三句：before→ago第四句：easy→easily; 第二个that→which或在第二个that前加and第五句：unless→if; achieve→achieving第六句：minds→mind第七句：去掉the第八句：or→and第十一句：it→them【九】Alice, my best friend, devotes many energy to her lessons.She is always one of the top student in our class.She loves the music so much that she made it a rule to enjoy songs in herspare time.Alice is always willing to help other, and she often helps us with our lessons.As a volunteer, she has successful organized some voluntary activities.We paid a visit a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school.That we did was warmly welcomed.Win honor for our school, Alice is well known to our classmates.答案：第一句：many→much第二句：student→students第三句：去掉the; made→makes第四句：other→others第五句：successful→successfully第六句：visit后加to; so→and第七句：That→What第八句：Win→Winning【十】Last weekend, I helped my grandparents preparing their trip to Beijing.On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched for the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beijing, and some hotel informations.In the afternoon, I go to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was long queue.After dinner, I put the thing my grandparents would need into the suitcase, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, or a map.The next morning, I went to the station to see him off.Waving goodbye with them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.答案：第一句：preparing→prepare第二句：去掉第一个for; informations→information第三句：go→went; long前加a第四句：thing→things; or→and第五句：him→them第六句：with→to; happily→happy。

2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之四【1】Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom ，I found the teachers patient.Besides ，I enjoyed the friend atmosphere in class.I decided to make the best it.I worked hard and get along well with my teachers and classmate.Whenever I had difficulties ，you were always available.Soon ，I became one of the most best students in my class.My experience tells me that it ’s not what you are given and how you make use of it which determines who you are.答案Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a an ordinary school.Disappointing Disappointedas I felt at the shabby campus and the poorlyequipped classroom ，I found the teachers patient.Besides ，I enjoyed the friend friendlyatmosphere in class.I decided to make the best ∧of it.I worked hard and get got along well with my teachers and classmate classmates.Whenever I had difficulties ，you theywere always available.Soon ，I became one of the most best students in my class. My experience tells me that it ’s not what you are givenand but how you make use of it which thatdetermines who you are.28．答案 a →an解析 ordinary 是以元音音素开头的单词，要用不定冠词an 修饰，故把a 改为an 。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the Peking University. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeed enjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son tolearn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my owndream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not onl y can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save peop le’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable with professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life,but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talk about with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star.答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the PekingUniversity. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeedenjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. Andothers talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Somementioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable withprofessional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talkabout with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star. 答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之一【一】Dear Mrs.Li,I am a student of Class Six,Grade One.The day before yesterday,I had borrowed a dictionary from the library.Fortunately,my schoolbag with the dictionary got stealing yesterday in a bus,which made me very angry.The dictionary belongs to the library after all.It is with great regret which I am writing this letter of apology to you.I feel terrible sorry for it.I do hope that what I did doesn’t give you such much trouble.As middle school student,I shouldn’t be responsible for what I did.I will compensate(赔偿) according to the loss and I want to know whether I can buy a new one that is the same as I lost to replace them.Sincerely,Wang Xia 答案与解析1.第二句中的had去掉考查时态。

根据时间状语the day before yesterday前天,可知用一般过去时。

2.第三句中的Fortunately改为Unfortunately考查行文逻辑。

根据句意―前天,我从图书馆借了一本词典。

不幸的是,在一辆公交车上装有这本词典的书包被盗了……‖,可知unfortunately恰当。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题训练10篇之六学案【1】My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.答案1. was 改为am。

2.删去for3. match 改为matches。

4. Play 改为Playing5. give 改为gives。

6. keep后加in。

7. instead 后加of8. important 改为importance9. captain 前加the10.they 改为we。

【2】Now I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot timearguing and there was no way of settle the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead.答案1删去much2删去was3watch 改为watching4. Unfortunate 改为Unfortunately5. among 改为in6. the 改为one7am 改为was8 a lot 后加of9settle改为settling10 someone 改为everyone 或everybody【3】Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you can understand. I’ll take this chance wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!Yours,Li Ming答案1. on 改为for。