2019届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之十六(8页word版)

2019届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之十七[一]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【答案】1. that →where2. but去掉3. had →have4. honest→ honesty5. or→ and6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a9. our→ his 10. stead→steadily[二]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.【答案】1.how改为what2.chose改为choose3.take改为taking4.but改为and5.about后加the6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为should9.thought改为think 10.many改为much[三]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything andcould make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t under stand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 【答案】51.year—years52.worse—worst53.the去掉54.yourself—myself55.such—so56.tell—told57.freely—free58.wear—wearing59.to—for60.I ∧need[四]It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back ,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.【答案】 1.so---but 2.houseworks---housework 3.or---and 4.get---got 5.去掉on 6.her---his7.在in和kitchen之间加the 8.what---that/which(或去掉what) 9.favoritest---favorite 10.moving---moved[五]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I rchildemember well years late. Every time he arrived home at ∧end of the day ,later thewe’d greet herat the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing him were knowus,Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and th ey would talk about his day and hers.While they chat,my father would lift my sister a ndchattedme up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there！on exciting66.【答案】children改成child67.【答案】late改成later【解析】试题分析：late是形容词“迟的”，或副词“迟地”，但是“一段时间后面应该接later”，表示“……时间以后”。

2019届二轮复习短文改错近五年真题汇集2018年Correction 1 2018全国卷I，10分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.Correction 2 2018全国卷II，10分When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 3 2018全国卷III，10分It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ，10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ，10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ，10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2［2016·甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3［2016·丙卷（全国Ⅲ）］The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4［2016·四川］It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5［2016·浙江］When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains aregreen.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the housesare.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day，he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one."His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2018年Correction 1①考查冠词。

2019届二轮复习短文改错专题模拟试题10篇训练之一[一]When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically. And also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.参考答案：[二]Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and waterthe vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！参考答案：1.all改为both2.a改为an3.interesting改为interested4.that 改为which5.earlier改为early6.去掉for7. Beside 改为besidesrmations 改为information9.came 改为comes 10.pick 前加to[三]Today I am talking to my dad Matthew, my hero. The reason why I admire him is because he starts every day with smile. And his smile always brings happy to my families. He has been looked after us carefully since many years ago. He often encourages me to keep going and not give it up. What’s more, he real does care and show his love to everyone he meets. I believe that he is a true person of compassion or carefulness. He had so many good personal quality that we all respect him.参考答案：1.to改成about2.because改成that3.with smile之间加a4.happy改成happiness5.looked改成looking6.give it up中去掉it7.real改成really8.or改成and9.had改成has 10.quality改成qualities[四]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If3 I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.参考答案：1. side-sides2. from-of3.sit-sitting4.easy- easily5.is-was6. them-it7. 去掉not8. in hurry- in a hurry9. felt-feel 10.If-Although/Though[五]Dear Bob,I’m sorry to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on this Sunday, because something unlucky occurred to me in the PE class yesterday.I was playing basketball with my friends while I jumped highly to catch the ball. Another student struck me on a leg accidentally, that made me break my leg. The situation made everyone nervous. However, I was sent to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. The doctor suggested that I rested until next Friday. I hope the change will not cause you too much troubles.Shall I go on next Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time read and select books.Yours,Li Hua参考答案：1．去掉on 2. while---when 3. highly—high 4. a—the 5.that---which 6. However---Therefore 7. rested---rest 8.troubles---trouble 9. I ---we 10. 在time后加to[六]Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.参考答案：1. with ---about2. go---goes3. wait 后加for4. classmate ---classmates5. trying ---try6.calmly- calm7.a –the –you9. 去掉when 10. and—or[七]Dear Jeremy and Alice，Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo. We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose参考答案：1.去掉to2.time- times3.understanding-understand4.have-has5.beside- besides6.a- an7.starts- started8.closely- close9.our –your 10.figure 后加out[八]Which is more important, health and wealth? Not until I witnessed my uncle’s real life I realize that health is of great important.Devoting to his business, my uncle, a successful businessman, worked from morning till night every day with no spare time to relax himself. He often says, “I must earn much money so that I can get whatever I want”. As the consequence, he was serious ill. Rich as he was, he could do nothing but to die in the hospital bed.So I think health is more important than wealth. People can do nothing if they are always on 考点03 poor health, let alone live happily. If we are rich or not, we cannot ignore the importance of health.参考答案：1 and改为or2 life后加did 3. important改为importance 4. Devoting 改为Devoted 5. says改为said 6. the改为a 7. serious改为seriously 8. die前的to删除 9. on改为in 10. If改为 Whether。

短文改错（练）第一节短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.第二节短文改错（共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改错Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden. Since then for all these year we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!短文改错My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities .Forexample, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.短文改错I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.短文改错The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.短文改错（练）答案一、76．think—thought77．countryside前加the78．or—and79．on—with80．been去掉81．seriously—serious82．airs—air83．much—many84．found—find85．your—our二、71．parent改为parents72．on改为in73．very去掉74．looks改为looking75．where改为that或者去掉where 76．begun改为began77．telling改为told78．a改为the79．saw后加his80．terrible改为terribly【2014新课标Ⅰ】【小题1】before—ago【小题2】by—of【小题3】year—years【小题4】had—has【小题5】As/result—a【小题6】somewhere—everywhere 【小题7】taste—tasty【小题8】much—many【小题9】but—yet或去掉but【小题10】wonderfully—wonderful 【2014新课标Ⅱ】【小题1】They—There【小题2】didn’t—don't【小题3】many—much【小题3】many—much【小题4】with—for【小题5】hour—hours【小题6】1ook—1ooks【小题7】去掉the【小题8】sat—sit【小题9】listening后加to【小题10】helpfully—helpful 【2013新课标Ⅰ】1．holding—hold 2．passes—passed 3．much—well/clearly 4．shoulder—shoulders 5．towards—to/into 6．himself—him7．he前加and8．去掉fact前的a 9．during—when 10．never—ever【2013新课标Ⅱ】【小题1】去掉of【小题2】have—having【小题3】that—which【小题4】becomes—became【小题5】day前加the【小题6】interesting—interestingly 【小题7】by改为with\to【小题8】drank—drunk【小题9】cup—cups【小题10】grow改为growth短文改错（练）解析一二75．where改为that 或者去掉where found后面的宾语从句是陈述句,故where改为that或者去掉where.【2014新课标Ⅰ】试题分析:本文叙述了五年前,在父亲的帮助下,作者和姐姐在后花园里种植了一些圣女果,这些年以来,它的种子我们没有管过,在院子里随处疯长,结果院子里到处都是圣女果,于是我们就把它们分给邻居吃.感觉心里很高兴.【2014新课标Ⅱ】listening 后加to.考查固定短语.or sat by the lake listening music.Listen是不及物动词,后面不能跟宾语,固定短语listen to 意思是“听”,所以在listening后加to.helpfully →helpful考查形容词和副词.The teachers here are kind and helpfully .涉及知识:系动词后要跟形容词做表语,所以把helpfully改为helpful.【2013新课标Ⅰ】【2013新课标Ⅱ】。

短文改错短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

AMarch 29th,Dear Diary,I’m writing this at my room. It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep. I’m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem i s: I don’t know! My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand —to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun. Also I’m really bad at biology at the school. My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.BI have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party fiv e years before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go onholiday with them. It is great. We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage. Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town. Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.CDear Joe,How are you? Thanks to your post —good to know when you’re OK. I’ve got news too. I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school. We’re going to stay on a farm with four days! We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding. I’m sure I’ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hop e I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I’m going to finish homework —lots to do before the holiday! I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours,NadiaDPeople had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years. In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”. Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able tocommunicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.EYesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name. How a good man!FI read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way. They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.GLast weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel very happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way through the journey, the taxiwas broke down. I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!HMy name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.答案A1. ... at my room. at → in2. ... have to getting ... getting → get3. ... my parents asks ... asks → ask4. ... when you grow?” grow后加up5. And she doesn’t ...And → But6. ... not her idea of ... her → my7. ... at the school. 去掉the8. He knew I hate ... knew → knows9. ... I’m getting tiring ... tiring → tired10. ... I’m lain down. lain → lyingB1. We firstly met ... firstly → first2. ... five years before. before → ago3. ... to the music ... 去掉the4. ... go on holiday ... go前加to5. It is great. is → was6. ... beautifully beach. beautifully → beautiful7. ... a lot of funs. funs → fun8. ... changed her job ... her → his9. ... to other town. other → another10. ... in the phone ... in → on / overC1. Thanks to your ... to → for2. ... to know when ... when → that或去掉when3. ... next weeks with ... weeks → week4. ... with four days! with → for5. ... and doing some ... doing → do6. ... about the animals! 去掉the7. ... or the horses. or → and8. ... have some times ... times → time9. ... finish homework ... homework前加my10. ... to telling you ... telling → tellD1. People had always ... had → have2. ... what bees make. what → that / which3. In the fact ... 去掉the4. ... thousand of years. thousand → thousands5. ... recently past ... recently → recent6. ... working so hard. working → work7. ... we talk with ... with → about8. ... has a new reason ... has → have9. ... bees able to ... able前加are10. ... surprised facts ... surprised → surprisingE1. ... I had listened ... 去掉had2. ... by my earphones. by → with3. ... that I should ... that → where4. ... bus in hurry. hurry前加a5. ... to finding it ... finding → find6. ... the bus companies ... companies → company7. Fortunate, at the ... Fortunate → Fortunately8. ... I see my bag. see → saw9. ... and the staff ... and → but10. How a good man! How → WhatF1. ... an interested piece ... interested → interesting2. ... they do it in ... do → did3. ... a wide ranges ... ranges → range4. ... losing the weight ... 去掉the5. ... managed to meeting ... meeting → meet6. ... like “very successful.”like → as7. ... so much failed ... much → many8. ... and led by ... led前加were9. ... time on thinking ... on → in或去掉on10. ... what would happen ... what → thatG1. Last weekends ... weekends → weekend2. ... I feel very happy. feel → felt3. ... anything I needed ... anything → everything4. ... too much people ... much → many5. Then it was my ... Then → When6. ... wait the next bus. the前加for7. ... was broke down. 去掉was8. ... filled with angry ... angry → anger9. ... an emptier bus ... emptier → empty10. ... in a rain. a → theH1. ... I wanted to be ... wanted → want2. ... or easy-going. or → and3. ... have vary interests. vary → varied4. ... as well soccer. soccer前加as5. ... be always open ... 去掉be6. ... do the job good. good → well7. ... in our classes ... classes → class8. ... who is falling ... is → are9. ... among teachers ... among → between10. ... to this post. to → for短文改错专练（二）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

专题十《短文改错记叙类》考点01：冠词 3颗星考点02：代词 3颗星考点03：介词和介词短语 2颗星考点04: 名词 3颗星考点05：主谓一致 5颗星考点06：形容词和副词 5颗星考点08：非谓语动词 5颗星考点09：动词的时态和语态 5颗星考点10：定语从句 3颗星考点11 名词性从句 3颗星考点12 并列连词 4颗星考点13 状语从句 3颗星考点27短文改错记叙文 5颗星一、语法填空1阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。

For many young people,going to university is one of the most important ①(stage)of their lives.It is the time when young people will move out of ②(they)home to live with other people,often strangers.③(especial)in the U.S,people often travel very far④home to study.It is a time to be⑤(independence).At university,you will ⑥(teach)by lectures and professors who are leading figures in their study.The opportunity to learn from and to discu ss with them is ⑦drives some people to apply to university.Students are required to choose a major that they wish to study.Apart from the ⑧(academy)benefit,life at university also can allow students.⑨(develop)their interests in many fields.Therefore,university is a place ⑩you attain knowledge,to develop your values and to accept those who may be different.2阅读下列短文,在空白处填入1个适当的词或括号内单词的正确形式。

短文改错专题突破练16—专题突破练第43页1（2018河北石家庄教学质量检测）Dear Mom,r m now in the United States,a countiy so differently from China.Everything is fresh but interesting!! have made some friends there and they are very kind.Still,you know how much I miss you and your cooking.The mere thought of the dishes you prepare makes my mouth to water.My friends had some strange ways of describing their hungry.For instance/I can eat a horse!s a little confused,hmm?r m also sending you a few record of our daily conversations,from that you can hear real American English.lt may be useful to you as English teacher・答案Dear Mom,I' m now in the United States,a country so from China.Everything is fresh interesting!! have made some friends and they are veiy kind.Still,you know how much I miss you and your cooking.The mere thought of the dishes you prepare makes my mouth water.My friends some strange ways of describing their .For instance,"】can eat a horse!^It? s a little ,hmm?I' m also sending you a few of our daily conversations,from you can hear real American English.lt may be useful to you as English teacher・2（2018河北石家庄二模）When I was in high schoolj wanted to get a scholarship to a university! liked singing,so I try out for a scholarship for music.But I failed to get one.I was real upset.I felt like failure.I just kept feeling sorry for me.However,after a few dayj decided not to let one single loss to keep me from doing what I love.But I cheered up and devoted myself to sing again.I think that accepting failure is that we need to do first before we success eventually.When I was in high school,! wanted to get a scholarship to a university.I liked singing,so I out for a scholarship for music.But I failed to get one.I was upset.I felt like failure.I just kept feeling sorry for ・However,after a few J decided not to let one single loss keep me from doing what I love.I cheered up and devoted myself to again.I think that accepting failure is we need to do first before we eventually.3I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English.As we are all know,a good learning environment is vital unless we want to study English well.Classes teaching in English provide students with good environment. However,there are also some problem with this teaching method・ As we hadn' t mastered enough English words,sometimes we may find that difficult to follow the teacher.Slow learners may even lose interest on English.Practice makes perfect.To learn English well require a lot of practice. Therefore,! like my English classes to be taught complete in English・答案I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English.As we all know,a good learning environment is vital we want to study English well.Classes in English provide students with good environment. However,there are also some with this teaching method. As we mastered enough English words,sometimes we may find difficult to follow the teacher.Slow learners may even lose interest English.Practice makes perfect.To learn English well a lot of practice< ThereforeJ like my English classes to be taught in English ・4It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After registered in the classroom,the volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates,two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “Goodbye，，to my father,but he had to leave to home・ I suddenly realized I had grown up and that I had to look after me and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had real begun.答案It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I into my new high school. After in the classroom, volunteer took me to my dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates.two of arrived later. I got to know my new immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say "Goodbye，，to my father,/Bhe had to leave home・ I suddenly realized 1 had grown up and that I had to look after and live independently.Not until then I know my senior high school life had begun.One dayj was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings・ I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friendXisa. When we were talking on phone,the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas,opening all the windows,but then went out of the house・ In my surprise,two fire engine were outside my house. I was quite worry. I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking that it caused the heavy smoke・答案One dayj was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone • I went to answer it immediately, was my close friend,Lisa・ When we were talking on phone,the fire alarm sounded. 1 ran back to the kitchen only to find the room full of smoke and the beef burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, all the windows, then went out of the house・ my surprise,two fire were outside my house・ I was quite . I told the firemen that it was my careless cooking that caused the heavy smoke.Dear Jacob,How are you doing?I m writing to invite you to climb Mount Qianshan.You had already been here for a month. So we think it' s the good opportunity for us get familiar with each other.Mount Qianshan has a good reputation for their brilliant scenery in different season. My friends and family is planning to make it at 8 o' clock in this Saturday morning at the school gate・ We are wondering that it is convenient for you. When arrived there,we1 11 climb mountains and admire the beautiful scenery in winter.That will certain leave a deep impression on you since everything is covered by snow.Looking forward to your reply.Li HuaDear Jacob,How are you doing?I m writing to invite you to climb Mount Qianshan.You already been here for a month.So we think it" s good opportunity for usget familiar with each other.Mount Qianshan has a good reputation for brilliant scenery in different ・ My friends and family planning to make it at 8 o' clock this Saturday morning at the school gate・ We are wondering it is convenient for you. When there,we' 11 climb mountains and admire the beautiful scenery in winter.That will leave a deep impression on you since everything is covered by snow.Looking forward to your reply.Li HuaLast winter vacation.my parents and I went back to our hometown,where I spend my childhood・Walking slow in the quiet small town reminded me of the good old day. I went from street to street,in the search of my childhood footprints. Suddenly」found me at the gate of the primary school on which I studied for six years. As I entered, I was surprised find that the old classroom building was gone. But it was filling with my childhood memories!I felt such sad that tears ran down my cheeks.lt was just like the feeling I had while a good friend left me forever.答案Last winter vacation,my parents and I went back to our hometown,where I my childhood. Walking in the quiet small town reminded me of the good old • I went from street to street,in search of my childhood footprints.SuddenlyJ found at the gate of the primary school which I studied for six years. As I entered, I was surprised find that the old classroom building was gone. But it was with my childhood memories!I felt sad that tears ran down my cheeks.lt was just like the feeling I had a good friend left me forever ・8This morningj got an email from the library・ It said the book I reserved was ready to be picking up. Because I had always been waiting to read it,so at that moment I was very exciting.Outside the libraryj saw the man driving around the small parking lot,try to find a parking space. He head for the disabled parking space,the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library book to return.Seeing thatj offered to return them to him. He thanked me and jumped quick in his car and drove off,keeping the disabled parking space free for someone needed it.This morningj got an email from the library. It said the book I reserved was ready to be up. Because I had always been waiting to read it, at that moment I was very .0utside the libraryj saw man driving around the small parking lot, to find a parking space・ He for the disabled parking space,the only one that was free. He got off his car with a pile of library to return.Seeing thatj offered to return them him. He thanked me and jumped in his car and drove off,keeping the disabled parking space free for someone needed it.9In the village where I grew up,everyone knew an old man,that spent all his time in painting.People that lived in the village used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends. Whether he was offered money,he would never take it. He said he painted for a pleasure・ He once gave one of his paintings to my father, who actually wasn? t interesting in art. Years later I found at our old house.By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his paintings as great work of art,which were worth lots of money.So an art gallery make me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it,so then I decided not to. It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didn' t real want to make money by painting ・口In the village where I grew up,everyone knew an old man, spent all his time in painting.People that lived in the village used to his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends, he was offered money,he would never take it. He said he painted for pleasure. He once gave one of his paintings to my father, who actually wasn' t in art. Years later I found at our old house.By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his paintings as great of a",which were worth lots of money.So an art gallery me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it, then 1 decided not to. It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didn' t want to make money by painting.10I was working in the garden while I felt so hungry that I went back to my house where I can get something to eat. My lovely little daughter was holding an apple in every hand. I softly asked her with smile to give me one. She looked up on me for some seconds,and then suddenly took an extreme quick bite at one apple. Then she did the same to the other. I felt the smile on my face to freeze. I tried hard not to have my disappointments shown.Then she handed one of her biting apples to me and said,“Mummy,here you are.This is the sweetest one：答案I was working in the garden I felt so hungry that I went back to my house where I get something to eat. My lovely little daughter was holding an apple in hand・ I softly asked her with smile to give me one・She looked up me for some seconds,and then suddenly took an quick bite at one apple. Then she did the same to the other. I felt t he smile on my face freeze• I tried hard not to have my shown.Then she handed one of her apples to me and said,“Mummy,here you are.This is the one.v。

2019届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之十[一]Natural disasters often cause a lot of deaths and make people shocking. Take the Tangshan earthquake for example. Actual, many strange things were happened in the city several days before the earthquake. And people did not think much of the events. Most of them were asleep as usually. It was because the earthquake happened at 3:42 am when thousands of people were killed during sleep. An earthquake nearly destroyed the whole city. Lucky，people came rescue those trapped under the ruins. The killed were buried. The injured was helped by the doctors. All hope was not lost.参考答案：1.shocking—shocked2.Actual--Actually3.去掉were4.And-ually--usual6.when-- that7.An --The8.came 后面加to9.Lucky---Luckily10.was--were[二]Last Saturday I went camping with several friends. In the later afternoon, we put up our tent in the middle of the field. Then we cooked a meal over an open fire. The food smelt good. After a meal, we told story and played games by the camp fire. At the eleven o’clock we felt tired but we put out the fire and got into our tent. Lied in our warm sleepingbags, we slept soundly.At midnight one boy woke up and began shouting. The tent was full water! We got out of our sleepingbags and hurried outside. It was raining heavy. A stream had formed in the field, thatwound its way across the field and flow right under our tent.参考答案：Last Saturday I went camping with several friends. In the later late afternoon, we put up our tent in the middle of the field. Then we cookeda meal over an open fire. The food smelt good. After a the meal, we told sto story ries and played games by the camp fire. At the eleven o’clock we felt tired but so we put out the fire and got into our tent.Lied Lying in our warm sleeping bags, we slept soundly. At midnight one boy woke up and began shouting. The tent was full of water! We got out of our sleeping bags and hurried outside. It was raining hea heavy vily . A stream had formed in the field,w that hich wound its way across the field and fl flow owed right under our tent.[三]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.参考答案：第一句:visit→visited第二句:but→so/and;去掉anywhere前的to第三句:comfortably→comfortable第四句:were→was第六句:for→with;taking→taken第七句:dish→dishes第八句:such后加a;me→mine[四]I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long,a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.参考答案：第二句:去掉had;noise→noisy第三句:comes→came第四句:but→and第五句:searching后加for;his→its/the第六句:a→the第七句:previous→previously第八句:strangers→stranger第九句:on→in[五]John, a little boy living next door to me, liked fast food very much.His parents was so busy that they had a little time to cook for him at home.So they often took him eat fast food.That's because John became overweight.My mother had always told his parents that too much fast food was harmful, and they ignored my mother's advices.Recently, the doctor warned him never to eat fast food any more after the poor boy has a physical examination.Her parents came to realize what a terribly mistake they had made.Now John's mother often comes to ask my mother for advice in how to make healthy food.答案：John, a little boy living next door to me, liked fast food very much.His parents waswereso busy that they had a little time to cook for himat home.So they often took him ∧to eat fast food.That's becausewhyJohnbecame overweight.My mother had always told his parents that too much fastfood was harmful, andbut they ignored my mother's advicesadvice.Recently, thedoctor warned him never to eat fast food any more after the poor boy hashada physical examination.HerHis parents came to realize what a terriblyterriblemistake they had made.Now John's mother often comes to ask my mother foradvice inon/abouthow to make healthy food.解析：71．第二句中was→were。

2019届二轮复习短文改错模拟试题10篇训练之十一[一]Mike, a famous writer, lives just next door to me. He is always ready give a helping hand to others, but he enjoys great popularity in the neighborhood.He often teaches us how to write stories and encourages me about his own experience. He told to me he was born in a poor family. As a little boy, he has a dream to become a famous writer. He worked hardly and overcame thousands of difficulty. Finally, he entered a university in that he wrote many story books. Up till now, aging only forty, he has been very famous around the country.参考答案：Mike, a famous writer, lives just next door to me. He is always ready ∧togive a helping handto others,butand/so he enjoys great popularity in the neighborhood.He often teaches usme how to write stories and encourages meaboutwith his own experience. Hetold to＼me he was born in a poor family. As a little boy, he hashad a dream to become a famouswriter. He worked hardlyhard and overcame thousands ofdifficultydifficulties. Finally, he entered a universityinthatwhich he wrote many story books. Up till now,agingaged only forty, he has been very famousaround the country.[二]Train travel is quite a different experience today. Little things can match China’s high-speed rail system, especially the speed at that it is still developing. The speed known as “China speed.”China speed means a lot of to the country. The Past 30 years had seen China’s rapid development in various areas, like economy and technology. We have seen dozens of tall building spring up almost overnight, with roads and highways reached every corner. Besides, mobile payments and online shopping are playing increasing important roles in everyone’s life. With so great achievements, China speed is now a model admired by a whole world.参考答案：Train travel is quite a different experience today. Little things can match China’s high-speed r a i l s y s t e m,Fewespecially the speed at that it is still developing. The speed ∧known as “China speed.”which isChina speed means a lot of to the country. The Past 30 years had seen China’s rapid d e v e l o p m e n t i n v a r i o u s删掉of have / hasareas, like economy and technology. We have seen dozens of tall building spring up almost o v e r n i g h t,w i t h r o a d s a n dbuildingshighways reached every corner. Besides, mobile payments and online shopping are playing i n c r e a s i n g i m p o r t a n treachingincreasinglyroles in everyone’s life. With so great achievements, China speed is now a model admired by a whole world.such the[三]When I was about twelve, I sudden developed great interest in writing poems. If a lesson not interest me, I would take out my notebook but start writing poems in class. One day while I was busy write a poem in a geography lesson, I looked up find the teacher standing by. He tore the poem up, warning me not to waste time in his class. I had written so a good poem that in the evening I wrote it out again by memory. Weeks later, I read about a poetry contest and I decide to send out my poem. After a month, I accepted a letter informing me I had won a first prize. Everyone at school was glad, except the geography teacher.参考答案：第一句:sudden→suddenly第二句:not前加did;but→and第三句:write→writing;find前加to第五句:so→such;by→from第六句:decide→decided第七句:accepted→got/received;去掉第三个a[四]Boys and girls，May I have your fully attention，please? I have announcement to make.To welcome our friends in the United States，the Student Union was going to hold a party on Saturday evening，February 20.As never，the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building.They willbegin at 7 pm. There will be music ，dancing ，singing or exchange of gifts.Will everyone please to bring along a small gift for this purpose ？Remember to pack it up ，sign your name and writing a few words of good wishes. Don 't miss the party ，where I believe we will have a lot of funs. Everyone is welcome.That 's all. Thank you.答案：参考答案：Boys and girls ， May I have your fully full attention ，please? I have announcement to make. To welcome our friends in from the United States ，the Student Union was isgoing to hold a party on Saturday evening ，February 20.As never ever，the party will be held in the lecture hall of the Main Building. They It will begin at 7 pm. There will be music ，dancing ，singing or andexchange of gifts. Will everyone please bring along a small gift for this purpose ？Remember to pack it up ，sign your name and writing writea few words of good wishes. Don 't miss the party ，where I believe we will have a lot of funs fun.Everyone is welcome. That 's all. Thank you.[五]I usually go to school by bike. And this morning I went on foot. On the way to school, I happen to witness an accident. A middle-aged woman was knocked down by a car while crosses the street. Seeing that was happening on the scene, I made rush for the woman to help. One passer-by got out of his cellphone and called the police. I helped to carry the woman to safe and dress her wound. Around ten minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took him to hospital. I continued my way to school ，feeling happily that I could offer some help in time.参考答案：I usually go to school by bike. And Butthis morning I went on foot. On the way to school, I happen happenedto witness an accident. A middle-aged woman was knocked down by a car while crosses crossing the street. Seeing that whatwas happening on the scene, I made ∧a rush for the woman tohelp. One passer-by got out of cellphone and called the police. I helped to carry the womanto safe safety and dress her wound. Around ten minutes latelater，an ambulance arrived and took himherto hospital. I continued my way to school，feeling happilyhappythat I could offer some help in time.[六]In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sits at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in her reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. A boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, but he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledges and never get discouraged easy no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but also that is reflected in the story that count. Hard work pays out off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.参考答案：In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sits at a shabby wooden table with a pile ofsittingbooks on it. A weak ray of light came through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in herin his reading.This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. A boy, being poor, couldn’t affordtheeven a candle, but he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at sonight. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledges and never get discouragedknowledgeeasy no matter how difficult the situation may be.easilyOf course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but also that is reflectedwhatin the story that count. Hard work pays out off. We should take pains to improve ourselves countsthrough learning and get prepared for the future.[七]It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there. The sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a little disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from a nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team won game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and went home. We really had fun.参考答案：It was warm and sunny, so we decide to go for a swim. When I reached to the beach, my friends were already there.decided 删除theThe sea was perfect, appearing as smoothly as a mirror. I felt quite pleased with it, and my friends were a littleSmooth but disappointing as they liked huge waves. When we got hungry and thirsty, we bought some hotdog and drinks from adisappointed hotdogs nearby shop. After that, we became energetic enough for a football game. It surprised all was that my team wonWhat^game. Then we relaxed for a while, sleep on the beach. At about half past four, we packed up my things and wentthe sleeping our home. We really had fun.[八]Dear miss Wang:I was having some troubles with my classmates at the moment. I’m gettingalong well a boy in my class. We often do homework together and you enjoy help each other. We have became really good friend. But other students have started gossiping. They say that this boy and I have fallen in love. This has made me angrily. Although I don’t want to end the friendship, but I hate others gossiping. How should I do?YoursLisa 参考答案：Dear miss Wang:I was having some troubles with my classmates at the moment. I’m getting am troublealong well∧ a boy in my class. We often do homework together and you enjoy help with we helpingeach other. We have became really good friend. But other students have started become friendsgossiping. They say that this boy and I have fallen in love.This has made me angrily. angryAlthough I don’t want to end the friendship, but I hate others gossiping. How should删除 WhatI do?YoursLisa[九]Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables！【答案】1. all→both 2. a→an 3. interesting→interested 4. that→which5. earlier→early6. 去掉for7. Beside→Besides8. informations→information9. came→comes 10. students后加to[十]When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.【答案解析】1.talk改为talking。

2019年高考英语二轮复习【短文改错题解题指导及训练】高考英语短文改错技巧第一步必须熟悉设错方式1. 必须熟悉设错方式：多词、少词、错词。

⑴多词现象大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。

⑵少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。

⑶错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、连词、词形。

2. 平时应加强基本功训练，用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出现的错误归纳一下，以便考前复习。

第一步加强基本功训练短文改错与书面表达一样，最能反映一个人的语言功底。

大家在该题上失分最厉害，因为此题而影响英语总成绩的占大多数。

第二步对全文宏观把握大家应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解，这样能对短文有个宏观把握，对上下文有全面的了解。

在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，分析判断，上下兼顾，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样可以缩小包围圈，也有助于对全文的进一步理解。

第三步从语法角度审查1. 查看时态是否一致。

My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. 全文都是用的一般现在时，此句中的was显然与上下文语境不符，应改为am。

2. 查看主谓是否一致。

Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. cost应改为costs，因其主语是it(为形式主语)，且上下文均为一般现在时。

3. 查指代是否一致。

The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语the Smiths表的是Smith一家人，因此指示代词his应改为their。

4. 查平行结构是否平行一致。

由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., as well as 等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。