2020届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之八(6页word版)

第六讲代词一、改正下列句子中的唯一错误：1.31% of the students think it ridiculous. You argue that it does no good to helping people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English.【答案】You改为They【解析】根据上句中的"31% of the students"可知，该句陈述的是这些学生的观点，故该句主语用“They”，指代上句中的"31%of the students"。

2. Therefore, my fingers suddenly lost control of the chopsticks while he was picking up a piece of chicken.【答案】he改为I【解析】根据该句中的”my”并结合前文内容可知，该处陈述的是”我”的行为和动作，故用I3. At around 8:30, on the morning of February 8th, I found a lost suitcase near the exit of Heathrow Airport. I had no choice but to hand them in to the information center.【答案】them改为it【解析】此处表示我别无选择，只能把它交给信息中心。

此处用it指代前面提到的a lost suitcase,故把them 改成it4 . This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration .【答案】myself改为me【解析】动词helped的主语是visit,与其宾语所指不同，不能用反身代词5. As is known to us that knowledge starts with practice.【答案】As改为It【解析】题干的结构是”...is+过去分词+that...”，根据固定句型"It+be+过去分词+that..."可判断此处that引导的从句是真正的主语，应用It作形式主语。

2019-2020学年度最新高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错题库(精选篇)Word版(附参考答案)1．In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【答案】【小题1】had-- have【小题2】great--greatly【小题3】mean--means【小题4】live 前加to小题5】damaged --damaging【小题6】panda-- pandas【小题7】of 划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live后加in【小题9】can--can’t /cannot【小题10】Besides --However考点：短文改错2Dear mum and dad,I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year. I have toremind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008. Worrying about the journey,I was unsettled for the first a few days. As a result, I suffer from “time lag”. Thisis similar with the “jet lag” you get from flying, but it seems that you keep gettingflashbacks from your previous time period. So I was very nervous and uncertainat first. However, Wang Ping, my friend and guide, were very understanding but gave me some green tablet which helped a lot. Well-known for their expertise,transported me safely into the future in a time capsule.…Yours,Li Qiang【答案】【小题1】yourself—myself【小题2】real—really【小题3】Worrying-Worried 【小题4】去掉a【小题5】suffer--suffered【小题6】with--to【小题7】were--was【小题8】but--and【小题9】tablet--table【小题10】parents—parents’3．I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others．At school I1 / 27get along well with my classmates．Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time．It’s the relationship among my desk mate and me．He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well．But he’s a person with few words．What’s more, he got angry easily．I don’t know what to deal with him．Maybe that ’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts．I value our friendship．I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better．I do hope we will be close to each other than before.【答案】【小题1】加上to【小题2】Therefore--However【小题3】myself--me【小题4】among--between【小题5】rule--rules【小题6】got--gets【小题7】what--how【小题8】why--because【小题9】去掉with【小题10】close--closer5．【答案】【小题1】去掉the【小题2】has--had【小题3】passes--passing【小题4】her---him【小题5】warm---warmly【小题6】so---and【小题7【小题8】looked 后面加at【小题9】how---if /whether【小题10】child---children6．Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?【答案】【小题1】加上be【小题2】加上 of【小题3】their--our【小题4】would--will【小题5】去掉on【小题6】A--The小题7】invention--inventions【小题8】interested--interesting【小题9】Taking--Take【小题10】unless--if7．Miss Jones was math teacher. Her home not far from her school, but she always walked there in the morning. All the pupils in the school was very young. In a cold and windy morning, Miss Jones walked to the school, and the cold wind goes into her eyes. and big tear began to run out . she reached school. opened the door and going into the classroom. It was nice and warm here and Miss Jones was happily, but then a small boy looked at her for a few seconds, to put his arms around her and said kind. "Don't cry, Miss Jones .School isn't very bad."【答案】【小题1】加上a【小题2】but--and【小题3】was--were【小题4】In--On【小题5】goes--went【小题6】tear--tears【小题7】going--went【小题8】happily--happy【小题9】去掉 to【小题10】kind--kindly8．I noticed the old man in a wheel chair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you.You are generously. I’d like any orange juice, ple ase.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, and helping him out. I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day, either.【答案】【小题1】waiting后面加for【小题2】the改为an【小题3】and改为but/except【小题4】go改为went【小题5】去掉if后面的that【小题6】generously改为generous【小题7】any改为some【小题8】saying改为say【小题9】days改为day【小题10】either改为too9．helped the president do something important. At the same time, my mother was in the final stages of the cancer. I worked during the day and drive 40 miles home to be with her every night. It was tired, but it was that I wanted to do. I didn’“Alice, I hear your mother is very ill.”I was caught by surprise and burst into tear. He just gentle said a sentence I will never forget: “Whatever you need.”【答案】【小题1】helped ---helping【小题2】the cancer【小题3】drive – drove【小题4】tired---tiring【小题5】that --- what【小题6】someone---anyone【小题7】Therefore--- However【小题8】her --- his【小题9】tear---tears【小题10】gentle---gently10．Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her3 / 27choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!【答案】【小题1】that--when【小题2】which--that【小题3】is--was【小题4】tiring--tired【小题5】去掉 for【小题6】safe--safely【小题7】choosing--chosen【小题8】write--writing【小题9】woman--women【小题10】greatly--great11．This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day Ihad passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.【答案】【小题1】去掉a【小题2】minute----minutes【小题3】and --but【小题4】with ---on【小题5】when --- than【小题6】waited前面加had【小题7】other-- another【小题8】do --did【小题9】possible --- possibly【小题10】lose---losing12．My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.【答案】【小题1】have--are【小题2】didn’t—don’t【小题3】many--much【小题4】去掉an【小题5】hour--hours【小题6】look--looks【小题7】去掉the【小题8】sat--sit【小题9】加上to【小题10】helpfully--helpful13We’ll never forget a day when my classmates and I paid a visit a chemistry factory. It is a large one with nearly 20, 000 workers. It looks like a garden but we saw colorful flowers, grass and trees there. We also visited some workshop and found workers working hard. We talked to them and learned a lot of. We understood them farther. On the way home we felt very tiring, but we both thought we had a very good day. We really hoped what we could get more chances of learn about society.【答案】【小题1】a the【小题2】visit后加to【小题3】but and【小题4】workshop workshops【小题5】去掉of【小题6】 farther further【小题7】tiring tired【小题8】both all【小题9】去掉what或改为that【小题10】learn learning14．Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university ?” Some students prefer to consider majo rs first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion , a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, becaus e no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.【答案】【小题1】student → students【小题2】去掉by【小题3】and →or【小题4】在interested 后加in【小题5】impossibly→ possible【小题6】believes→believe【小题7】graduate →graduating或graduate前加who【小题8】a→ the【小题9】can→ can't 或后加not【小题10】they →we。

2020届高考英语二轮复习短文改错提升练习冠词一、改正下列句子中的唯一错误：1.In word,e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.【答案】.在In后加 a【解析】in a word为固定短语，意为“总而言之”2.I volunteered to do it by saying"my deskmate is overweight boy whose clothes never fit him." 【答案】在overweight前加an【解析】此处表示“一个超重的男孩”，故应overweight后加an。

3.There was once a elderly woman in a nursing home.【答案】第一个a→an【解析】elderly的读音以元音音素开头，其前应用an。

4.Up to now,he has become member of our family and everyone has enjoyed his company.【答案】在become后加 a【解析】member是可数名词，意为“成员”，其前加不定冠词a表示‘—’5.Third,for the sake of our safety and the others' safety, we should obey the traffic rules.【答案】删除第二个the【解析】此处“其他人”是泛指，故前面不用加the。

6.Naturally,I made a rapid progress in English.【答案】删除 a【解析】progress意为“进步”，为不可数名词，前面不能用a修饰。

7.I think it good habit that in our spare time we read more books of great use.【答案】在good前加a【解析】habit意为“习惯”，是可数名词，此处为泛指，故用不定冠词a修饰。

2020年高考英语短文改错考专题训练题集（共10套80页附答案）短文改错练习1一、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jim is one of my close friend. Two months ago, his mother buy a computer for him as a birthday present. She hoped Jim will study hard under the help of the computer. To his surprise, Jim just wasted plenty of time play computer games every day. Now she regrets buying the computer. As matter of fact, a computer can do a lot of everyday jobs for us. It is wide used in factories, hospitals, banks and so on. Many computer scientists are now trying to make the computer to “think” like a man. In my opinion, the key is what we should use it wisely.二、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

2020届高考英语二轮复习题型精准练11-短文改错（2）1、When I was a young boy, my father save my life. Although I do not remember an incident，it is a story that has told many times in my family. I was two years old at one time，and my brother was four. We were with my father when he was feeding the cattles on our family farm. He didn't notice that my brother and I had wandered off until my brother，scared and out in breath，but came running to him. My brother could hard speak. He struggled to saying，“Rolfe’s in the cave!”2、Since I was a kid，I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First，I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then，when I was in the five grade，I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.3、The photo was taken during the sixty anniversary of our school. The elderly man on the picture attended our school 50 years ago, shortly after it founded. It was the first time he has been back to our school since he graduated and he was deeply impressed by his look. Once a young student， the elderly man now has gray hair or wrinkles，while our school has a new and modern look. After all these years，he’s still emotional when talking about that how proud he is of once be a student of our school. I was great t ouched by the scene. I know someday I’ll have a same feeling as this lovely man.4、 When I was very young, my parents teach me the value of writing thank-you notes. Whenever they asked me to, I would roll my eyes and write them after birthdays and some festivals unwilling. Only after my grandmother passed away I realize the impact. My mom and I had the task of clean my grandmother's house. I opened a drawer in her bedside table when I found a beautiful wooden box. I opened it but was shocked to see every card I had ever written to him. The impact of a moment stayed with me all my life. When my children grew, they had learned the value of writing thank-you notes and still do so, even as grown adult.5、 I'm a high school students in China. History is one of my most favorite subjects. My friends always laugh me because they don't understand why I'm such enthusiastic about history. They say it's bored and it’s the useless subject. But I don't think so. In their opinion, history taught us who we are and where we come from. I enjoy look back at points in the past and thinking about why certain decisions were making.I believe I can develop the skill of making decisions through studying history.6、 Smartphone apps certainly makes our life easier. And now, it seems that they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a various of study aid apps aimed at student. Most of these apps allow users to take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smartphones. Convenient they are, these apps present problems with both parents and teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps to chat with others. Therefore, this isn't to say that study aid apps should be completely ban. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students to take the advantage of the study aid apps' strengths and avoid their weaknesses.7、 As we all know it, health is very important to us students. Here are some tips on what to grow up healthily.Some students at home were too addicted to smartly phones and computers, which does harm to their health. Therefore, every student is strong advised to get rid of them and spare some time to exercise on a regular basis to make them energetic and relaxing. Above all, attach great importance on making friends and communicate with others. Taking active part in various voluntary activities can also be of great benefit.I hope that the suggestion above will make a difference.8、 When he was 12, I believed honest should always be rewarded. One afternoon,I was playing football with my companions when accidentally I kick the ball througha nearby apartment's window. The crashing sound was followed by kids running from all directions and screamed, "Run! No one will tell." Instead of running away, I went to the apartment owner without hesitation expecting praise for being honest,so he laughed, saying. "I've never seen a kid inform against(告发) himself. What silly boy!" I felt bad hurt. When I get home，my mother said, "Remember: regardless of what he said, pride in yourself will always be your reward." This is an experience I will never forget it.答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：When I was a young boy, my father savesavedmy life. Although I do not rememberantheincident，it is a story that has been told many times in my family. I was twoyears old atonethe/thattime，and my brother was four. We were withmyourfather when hewas feeding the cattlescattleon our family farm. He didn't notice that my brother and Ihad wandered off until my brother，scared and out inofbreath，but came running tohim. My brother couldhardhardlyspeak. He struggled tosayingsay，“Rolfe’s in the cave!”解析：2答案及解析：答案：Since I was a kid，I’ve considered different jobjobsI would like to do.First，I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coollycool. Then，when I wasin the fivefifthgrade，I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teachertoovery/somuch. When I studied chemistry high in/at school, I reconsidered my goalor and decided to be a doctor.TheyTherewere two reasons for the decision. One was thatI was amazingamazedat the fact that a sick person could feel much more better afterseeing a doctor. And the otheriswasthat I wanted to help people in need.解析：第一处：job→jobs。

2020届高三英语短文改错汇编（1）2020届湖南省永州市高考第二次模拟英语试题One morning that I was in primary school, I tried cooking for first time. As my parents weren’t in, I have to cook something to eat. I took an egg from the refrigerator, putting some oil in the pan and cracked an egg into it. After a few second, I tried to turn the egg over in case it would get burnt. Unexpectedly, it caught fire. Not known what to do, I screamed but rushed out of the kitchen. After a while, I realized I should put out the fire, so I returned back, only to find something but a black burnt egg. I’ve learned that I can’t be too carefully while cooking.【答案】that→when for后加the have→had putting→put second→seconds known→knowing but→and删除returned后的back something→nothing carefully→care ful【语篇解读】这是一篇记叙文。

文章主要讲述了作者小学时独自在家煎鸡蛋，不小心把蛋煎糊了，还差点儿酿成火灾的故事。

【详解】1. 考查定语从句关系词。

（2020·全国II卷）Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.（2020·全国III卷）My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.Passage 1As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of interest in China. Everybody wants to go there, but I am no exception. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followedbehind. After two hours’ bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. At that moment, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. Indeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.Passage 2Last week, we watched an excited basketball match in our school. It is between Grade 1 and Grade 2 students. During a match, the players from all teams played very hard. Grade 2 was a stronger team. However, for our surprise, Grade 1 won at last. The player jumped and hugged to celebrate their success. Just then, the players from the other team that approached and said “Congratulations!” to them.They wore smiles on faces and you couldn’t tell from their expressions that they had lost the match. We were touching by the scene and felt what important a role sport plays in daily life.Passage 3Four months ago I was walking on the campus while I heard two students saying that Mrs. Wu, our English teacher, would retire next month.I returned to the classroom and shared the news for my classmates. To express our thanks to Mrs. Wu for her patient teaching, we agreed on a celebration after a heating discussion.After school we began to make fully preparations. I went to a flower shop, where I bought a bunch of flowers, represents our love and respect for our dear teacher. One of my classmate had some PowerPiont slides made, which included many photos recording the touching moments we spent them together.When she came into the classroom on Wednesday morning, all of us stand up. I presented the flowers to him. With tears in her eyes, Mrs. Wu was greatly moved by what we do! She said her feelings were beyond words.Passage 4In general, our houseparents(学生宿舍管理员) are annoying for boys students in dormitories.I didn’t begin to like our houseparents until one night in last week. I was asleep when my alarmclock drops onto the floor and were broken into pieces. After the while, the houseparent on duty opened the door and rushed in. Instead blaming me, he asked me anxious what was going on. Before making sure I was OK, he asked me to go back to sleep and cleaned up itself. Since then, I have completely changed my opinion of our houseparents. They are like our parents, kept all of us safe.Passage 5I don’t think this wise that the school requires us to have some extra classes on weekends. In our view, we should be allowed more time of our own. It might be true that adding some extra classes would be of some helpful to a few passive students. However, we cannot always expect rely on someone else to decide for us which is necessary for our success. Besides, the place that we are weak varies great from person to person. What our teachers do in the class can rarely meet the needs of individual students. Thus, if we can have more free times, we can focus on our weaknesses and balanced our energy on different subjects.（2020·全国II卷）【答案】1.第一句，what改为which2.第二句，在come后加to3.第三句，surely改为sure4.第四句，start改为started5.第四句，for改为but/yet6.第五句，vocations改为vocation7.第六句，such改为so8.第六句，删掉on9.第七句，yours改为your/you10.第八句，sooner改为soon【解析】本文为一篇应用文，介绍了自己学习功夫的经历。

2020年高考英语二轮复习专题9 短文改错1.【2020届青海省西宁市六校（沈那、昆仑、总寨、海湖、21中、三中)高三上学期期末】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

After supper, Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema we saw the little girl sitting by the roadside cry. We bring her a cake to stop her crying. But when we asked where she had lived, she said she did not know. So we took her to the police station and asked the police to take care for her. After this, we went to the cinema, but when we got there, the movie was near at its end. Though we missed the movie, we did a good deed. We felt very happily.【答案】1.go前加to2.In→On3.the→a4.cry→crying5.bring→brought6.去掉had7.for→of8.this→that9.near→nearly10.happily→happy【解析】这是一篇记叙文。

重难点08 短文改错【命题趋势】高考短文改错题是在给出一篇约100词的短文，文中有10处错误，要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错误将其改正。

错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等方面的错误。

每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

高考短文改错着重考查考生的语言基本功和正确使用英语进行表达的能力。

此题型不仅要求考生牢固的掌握一定的词汇和语法知识，还要求考生具有一定的阅读理解和逻辑推理能力。

它针对考生平时学习英语过程中，尤其是在写作中常犯的错误而设计的，考生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。

一般来说，短文改错的语言材料通常来自考生文章或类似于考生习作的文章。

所选材料篇幅较短，约100词左右，10—12个句子；难度不大，基本上无生僻的词汇和语法结构。

短文改错的话题较常见，通常是叙述一个事情或说明一个事物。

从体裁上看，历年高考试题中的短文改错以记叙文和应用文为主，兼顾说明文和议论文。

通常从词法，句法和行文逻辑三个角度设题，错误类型有多词，缺词，和错词三种，比例一般为错词：多词：缺词=8（7）：1（2）：1【满分技巧】专题一错误类型：错词、多词、缺词错词、多词和缺词三者的比例大致为：8: 1: 1。

其中，错词主要针对实词，多词和缺词主要针对虚词。

实词包括动词、名词、代词、形容词、副词；虚词包括冠词、介词、连词。

一、错词1.冠词：固定搭配、序数词、最高级等。

2.名词：单复数、所有格等。

3.代词：（1）代词指代不一致的错误。

代词的指代一致性包括数、格和性三方面的统一。

（2）连接代词、疑问代词、关系代词的误用等。

4.谓语动词：时态、语态、语气、情态动词、固定搭配、主谓一致等。

5.非谓语动词：现在分词与过去分词、不定式之间的用法区别，非谓语动词的时态语态误用等。

6.形容词、副词：（1）两种词性的混用。

（2）比较等级及修饰语的误用。

7.介词：固定搭配的误用。

8.连词：关联词的误用。

包括并列连词（and, but, or, so, when）和从属连词（各种从句的引导词）二、多词1.冠词：名词前是否多了冠词。

(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of 第四行：删去be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really（三）I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow playerswe’ve won several games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his (四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much andreads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their wordwere a great encouragement to me.(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything 第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at 第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk 第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but第八行：去掉about（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as 第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So onceyou’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere 第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things 第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改为clearly。