2019届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之五(8页word版)
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2019年高考英语短文改错专项练习(WORD版本真题试卷+名师解析答案,建议下载练习)Correction 1I went on a trip to Thailand during the winter holiday, it was wonderful because I tried something I have never experienced before. One morning when we were walking along the beach and enjoying sunshines, someone strongly advised us to go water skiing. Therefore, I didn’t dare to face the challenge because it seemed danger. My friends all encouraged me, so I finally joined in them. At first, I couldn’t stop scream in fright. Later I enjoyed myself and found it amazingly. From the ex-perience I learnt that we should brave enough to try something new. Only in this way can we find the better self to meet any challenge.解析①句意:寒假期间,我去泰国旅游了,因为尝试了以前从未有过的经历,所以这次旅游棒极了。
先行词为a trip,故用关系代词which引导非限制性定语并在从句中作主语。
也可加并列连词and,连接两个句子。
②根据句子的时态可知此处用过去完成时态,表示“过去的过去”。
③sunshine阳光,为不可数名词。
2019中考英语短文改错、首字母填空、阅读优享新题(4)一、阅读理解。
A(2019中考选练)Running in Cold Weather Improves PerformanceCold weather during winter months may keep many people from leaving home and running in the open air. However, a new study shows that the drop in temperature is a good reason to run. In fact, researchers say, running in cold weather helps improve one’s performance.Many people say running in winter can be difficult. Two reasons are the low temperatures and bitter winds. Yet many runners might find it easier than running in hot weather. That could be because lower temperatures reduce stress on the body. When you run in cold weather, your body loses less water than in warmer conditions. The body needs less water on a cold day than in warm weather. This information co mes from sports scientists at St. Mary’s University in London.John Brewer is a professor of applied sport science at St. Mary’s. For this study, he and other researchers put a group of people into a room they called an “environmental chamber”. The researchers then recreated summer and winter weather conditions in the room. The test subjects were asked to run 10,000 meters under both conditions. Brewer says he and his team recorded biological measurements(测量)of the runners. “We’ve got a group of subjects i nto the environmental chamber, we’ve changed the conditions to recreate summer or winter and we’ve got them to run 10km under both of those conditions and taken various measurements on each runner while they’ve been completing their 10km.”They found that the runners lost water by around 30.38% more in those hotter conditions. Besides, Brewer says every movement runners make produces heat. He explains that one way in which we lose heat is by sweating(出汗). He says the body also loses heat by transporting the blood to the surface of the skin. “That heat builds up in the body and can be really damaging unless you can lose that heat. And it’s much harder to lose heat when the environment is warm as well.” And they found their perception of heat was around a third lower when they were running in cold conditions. The body does not have to work as hard to pump blood to the skin’s surface.Several websites note that the most important thing for people who run in cold conditions is towear the right clothing. Keeping as dry as possible is the most important when exercising in low temperatures. So, if you are a runner, don’t let winter weather keep you indoors. Simply get ready for the low temperatures and start running.1.According to the passage, John Brewer probably agrees that .A.people should run 10,000 meters in winterB.running in winter is good for your heartC.people who run in winter like to wear thick clothingD.running in cold conditions is better than in warm conditions2.The underlined word “subjects” in Paragraph 3 probably means .A.students that are being discussedB.classes that you study at schoolC.people that are being testedD.runners that the artists paint3.What can we infer from the passage?A.Running can help us lose heat.B.Running in cold weather is beneficial to our body.C.The heat can’t damage our body.D.The body does not have to work to pump blood.4.What is the writer’s main purpose in writing this passage?A.To introduce a research on running by Brewer.B.To explain why running in winter is difficult for people.C.To encourage people to run outside during winter months.D.To advertise the new websites on running he created.【参考答案】1—4、DCBCB左栏是五个人将要扔掉的废品的描述,右栏是七个废品处理的措施。
短文改错)My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement My soccer coach retired inlast week. I wanted to do special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes anythingsomething the biscuits in the world, so I to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic ofbetter best decide decided step steps baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really . Mywellgood only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was packing them up.afterwhen/while At party ,my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them andathe joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”∧to My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits with happy enjoyenjoying laughter!B.(2015·四川卷)Hi, Janice ,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and。
2019届二轮复习短文改错近五年真题汇集2018年Correction 1 2018全国卷I,10分During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.Correction 2 2018全国卷II,10分When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the game for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.Correction 3 2018全国卷III,10分It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ,10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ,10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ,10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving. Correction 5[2016·浙江]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains aregreen.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, "I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace Correction10 [2015·浙江]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!Correction12 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Correction13 [2014·浙江]I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.Correction14 [2014·陕西]My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the housesare.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Correction17 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Correction19 [2013·陕西]My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one."His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2018年Correction 1①考查冠词。
2019届二轮复习短文改错专题模拟试题10篇训练之一[一]When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically. And also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.参考答案:[二]Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and waterthe vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables!参考答案:1.all改为both2.a改为an3.interesting改为interested4.that 改为which5.earlier改为early6.去掉for7. Beside 改为besidesrmations 改为information9.came 改为comes 10.pick 前加to[三]Today I am talking to my dad Matthew, my hero. The reason why I admire him is because he starts every day with smile. And his smile always brings happy to my families. He has been looked after us carefully since many years ago. He often encourages me to keep going and not give it up. What’s more, he real does care and show his love to everyone he meets. I believe that he is a true person of compassion or carefulness. He had so many good personal quality that we all respect him.参考答案:1.to改成about2.because改成that3.with smile之间加a4.happy改成happiness5.looked改成looking6.give it up中去掉it7.real改成really8.or改成and9.had改成has 10.quality改成qualities[四]My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If3 I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.参考答案:1. side-sides2. from-of3.sit-sitting4.easy- easily5.is-was6. them-it7. 去掉not8. in hurry- in a hurry9. felt-feel 10.If-Although/Though[五]Dear Bob,I’m sorry to tell you that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on this Sunday, because something unlucky occurred to me in the PE class yesterday.I was playing basketball with my friends while I jumped highly to catch the ball. Another student struck me on a leg accidentally, that made me break my leg. The situation made everyone nervous. However, I was sent to the nearest hospital as soon as possible. The doctor suggested that I rested until next Friday. I hope the change will not cause you too much troubles.Shall I go on next Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time read and select books.Yours,Li Hua参考答案:1.去掉on 2. while---when 3. highly—high 4. a—the 5.that---which 6. However---Therefore 7. rested---rest 8.troubles---trouble 9. I ---we 10. 在time后加to[六]Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.参考答案:1. with ---about2. go---goes3. wait 后加for4. classmate ---classmates5. trying ---try6.calmly- calm7.a –the –you9. 去掉when 10. and—or[七]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo. We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose参考答案:1.去掉to2.time- times3.understanding-understand4.have-has5.beside- besides6.a- an7.starts- started8.closely- close9.our –your 10.figure 后加out[八]Which is more important, health and wealth? Not until I witnessed my uncle’s real life I realize that health is of great important.Devoting to his business, my uncle, a successful businessman, worked from morning till night every day with no spare time to relax himself. He often says, “I must earn much money so that I can get whatever I want”. As the consequence, he was serious ill. Rich as he was, he could do nothing but to die in the hospital bed.So I think health is more important than wealth. People can do nothing if they are always on 考点03 poor health, let alone live happily. If we are rich or not, we cannot ignore the importance of health.参考答案:1 and改为or2 life后加did 3. important改为importance 4. Devoting 改为Devoted 5. says改为said 6. the改为a 7. serious改为seriously 8. die前的to删除 9. on改为in 10. If改为 Whether。
2019高考英语专题专练-《短文改错专题》10篇(解析版)2019高考英语-《短文改错》专题汇编Correction 1(2018东北三省三校一模)A few years before, my family went to a seafood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herself, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to close the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’s a good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear!解析:①before常与完成时连用,ago常与一般过去时连用。
句意:几年前,我们全家去佛罗里达参加了一次海鲜节。
②海鲜好吃,天气很好,坐船的经历也很棒。
三个分句之间为并列关系,而不是转折关系,故改but为and。
③句意:最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。
ride在句中意为“乘坐;搭乘”,为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故加冠词a。
短文改错短文改错专练(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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AMarch 29th,Dear Diary,I’m writing this at my room. It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep. I’m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem i s: I don’t know! My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand —to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun. Also I’m really bad at biology at the school. My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.BI have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party fiv e years before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go onholiday with them. It is great. We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage. Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town. Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.CDear Joe,How are you? Thanks to your post —good to know when you’re OK. I’ve got news too. I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school. We’re going to stay on a farm with four days! We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding. I’m sure I’ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hop e I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I’m going to finish homework —lots to do before the holiday! I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours,NadiaDPeople had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years. In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”. Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able tocommunicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.EYesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name. How a good man!FI read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way. They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.GLast weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel very happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way through the journey, the taxiwas broke down. I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!HMy name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.答案A1. ... at my room. at → in2. ... have to getting ... getting → get3. ... my parents asks ... asks → ask4. ... when you grow?” grow后加up5. And she doesn’t ...And → But6. ... not her idea of ... her → my7. ... at the school. 去掉the8. He knew I hate ... knew → knows9. ... I’m getting tiring ... tiring → tired10. ... I’m lain down. lain → lyingB1. We firstly met ... firstly → first2. ... five years before. before → ago3. ... to the music ... 去掉the4. ... go on holiday ... go前加to5. It is great. is → was6. ... beautifully beach. beautifully → beautiful7. ... a lot of funs. funs → fun8. ... changed her job ... her → his9. ... to other town. other → another10. ... in the phone ... in → on / overC1. Thanks to your ... to → for2. ... to know when ... when → that或去掉when3. ... next weeks with ... weeks → week4. ... with four days! with → for5. ... and doing some ... doing → do6. ... about the animals! 去掉the7. ... or the horses. or → and8. ... have some times ... times → time9. ... finish homework ... homework前加my10. ... to telling you ... telling → tellD1. People had always ... had → have2. ... what bees make. what → that / which3. In the fact ... 去掉the4. ... thousand of years. thousand → thousands5. ... recently past ... recently → recent6. ... working so hard. working → work7. ... we talk with ... with → about8. ... has a new reason ... has → have9. ... bees able to ... able前加are10. ... surprised facts ... surprised → surprisingE1. ... I had listened ... 去掉had2. ... by my earphones. by → with3. ... that I should ... that → where4. ... bus in hurry. hurry前加a5. ... to finding it ... finding → find6. ... the bus companies ... companies → company7. Fortunate, at the ... Fortunate → Fortunately8. ... I see my bag. see → saw9. ... and the staff ... and → but10. How a good man! How → WhatF1. ... an interested piece ... interested → interesting2. ... they do it in ... do → did3. ... a wide ranges ... ranges → range4. ... losing the weight ... 去掉the5. ... managed to meeting ... meeting → meet6. ... like “very successful.”like → as7. ... so much failed ... much → many8. ... and led by ... led前加were9. ... time on thinking ... on → in或去掉on10. ... what would happen ... what → thatG1. Last weekends ... weekends → weekend2. ... I feel very happy. feel → felt3. ... anything I needed ... anything → everything4. ... too much people ... much → many5. Then it was my ... Then → When6. ... wait the next bus. the前加for7. ... was broke down. 去掉was8. ... filled with angry ... angry → anger9. ... an emptier bus ... emptier → empty10. ... in a rain. a → theH1. ... I wanted to be ... wanted → want2. ... or easy-going. or → and3. ... have vary interests. vary → varied4. ... as well soccer. soccer前加as5. ... be always open ... 去掉be6. ... do the job good. good → well7. ... in our classes ... classes → class8. ... who is falling ... is → are9. ... among teachers ... among → between10. ... to this post. to → for短文改错专练(二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
专题十《短文改错记叙类》考点01:冠词 3颗星考点02:代词 3颗星考点03:介词和介词短语 2颗星考点04: 名词 3颗星考点05:主谓一致 5颗星考点06:形容词和副词 5颗星考点08:非谓语动词 5颗星考点09:动词的时态和语态 5颗星考点10:定语从句 3颗星考点11 名词性从句 3颗星考点12 并列连词 4颗星考点13 状语从句 3颗星考点27短文改错记叙文 5颗星一、语法填空1阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。
For many young people,going to university is one of the most important ①(stage)of their lives.It is the time when young people will move out of ②(they)home to live with other people,often strangers.③(especial)in the U.S,people often travel very far④home to study.It is a time to be⑤(independence).At university,you will ⑥(teach)by lectures and professors who are leading figures in their study.The opportunity to learn from and to discu ss with them is ⑦drives some people to apply to university.Students are required to choose a major that they wish to study.Apart from the ⑧(academy)benefit,life at university also can allow students.⑨(develop)their interests in many fields.Therefore,university is a place ⑩you attain knowledge,to develop your values and to accept those who may be different.2阅读下列短文,在空白处填入1个适当的词或括号内单词的正确形式。
短文改错短文改错专练(一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
AMarch 29th,Dear Diary,I’m writing this at my room. It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep. I’m thinking about my future! Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know! My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand —to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun. Also I’m really bad at biology at the school. My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed. I can think about my future in bed. I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.BI have known my friend Rebecca for a long time. We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five y ears before. We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place. We listened to the music together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them. It is great. We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach. We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs. Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town. Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.CDear Joe,How are you? Thanks to your post —good to know when you’re OK. I’ve got news too. I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a f riend from school. We’re going to stay on a farm with four days! We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding. I’m sure I’ll love it. You know how crazy I am about the animals! I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too. Well, right now I’m going to finish homework —lots to do before the holiday! I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours,NadiaDPeople had always been interested in bees. This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make. In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years. In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey. They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard. Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees. In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”. Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees. They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other. Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.EYesterday afternoon, I took the No. 6 bus to go home. It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones. Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry. When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus. My ID card and ten books were in the bag. I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help. Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag. I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name. How a good man!FI read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today. According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way. He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification. Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or descr ibed their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way. They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.GLast weekends, I went shopping by myself. It was a sunny day and I feel very happy. When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus. Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop. Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room. I had to wait the next bus. Suddenly, it started to rain. I had no choice but to call a taxi. Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down. I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by. Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain. What an unlucky day!HMy name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor. I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going. I enjoy serving others. Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer. I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions. I am confident that I can do the job good. Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies. For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up. Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students. Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax. I believe I am the right person to this post.答案A1. ... at my room. at → in2. ... have to getting ... getting → get3. ... my parents asks ... asks → ask4. ... when you grow?” grow后加up5. And she doesn’t ...And → But6. ... not her idea of ... her → my7. ... at the school. 去掉the8. He knew I hate ... knew → knows9. ... I’m getting tiring ... tiring → tired10. ... I’m lain down. lain → lyingB1. We firstly met ... first ly → first2. ... five years before. before → ago3. ... to the music ... 去掉the4. ... go on holiday ... go前加to5. It is great. is → was6. ... beautifully beach. beautifully → beautiful7. ... a lot of funs. funs → fun8. ... changed her job ... her → his9. ... to other town. other → another10. ... in the phone ... in → on / overC1. Thanks to your ... to → for2. ... to know when ... wh en → that或去掉when3. ... next weeks with ... weeks → week4. ... with four days! with → for5. ... and doing some ... doing → do6. ... about the animals! 去掉the7. ... or the horses. or → and8. ... have some times ... times → time9. ... finish homework ... homework前加my10. ... to telling you ... telling → tellD1. People had always ... had → have2. ... what bees make. what → that / which3. In the fact ... 去掉the4. ... thousand of years. thousand → thousands5. ... recently past ... recently → recent6. ... working so hard. working → work7. ... we talk with ... with → about8. ... has a new reason ... has → have9. ... bees able to ... able前加are10. ... surprised facts ... surprised → surprisingE1. ... I had listened ... 去掉had2. ... by my earphones. by → with3. ... that I should ... that → where4. ... bus in hurry. hurry前加a5. ... to finding it ... finding → find6. ... the bus companies ... companies → company7. Fortunate, at the ... Fortunate → Fortunately8. ... I see my bag. see → saw9. ... and the staff ... and → but10. How a good man! How → WhatF1. ... an interested piece ... interested → interesting2. ... they do it in ... do → did3. ... a wide ranges ... ranges → range4. ... losing the weight ... 去掉the5. ... managed to meeting ... meeting → meet6. ... like “very successful.”like → as7. ... so much failed ... much → many8. ... and led by ... led前加were9. ... time on thinking ... on → in或去掉on10. ... what would happen ... what → thatG1. Last weekends ... weekends → weekend2. ... I feel very happy. feel → felt3. ... anything I needed ... anything → everything4. ... too much people ... much → many5. Then it was my ... Then → When6. ... wait the next bus. the前加for7. ... was broke down. 去掉was8. ... filled with angry ... angry → anger9. ... an emptier bus ... emptier → empty10. ... in a rain. a → theH1. ... I wanted to be ... wanted → want2. ... or easy-going. or → and3. ... have vary interests. vary → varied4. ... as well soccer. soccer前加as5. ... be always open ... 去掉be6. ... do the job good. good → well7. ... in our classes ... classes → class8. ... who is falling ... is → are9. ... among teachers ... among → between10. ... to this post. to → for短文改错专练(二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2019届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之五[一]Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. Now theself-taught English learnerhas been admitted to one of China’s top foreign language university, S i c h u a n I n t e r n a t i o n a l S t u d i e sUniversity, that he used to deliver food to students. Mao once workeda d e l i v e r y m a n f o r arestaurant. And he chatted happy with English learners online during her s p a r e t i m e.T h e r e w e r emuch grammatical mistakes, but that didn’t prevent him from chatting. To s e i z e e v e r y c h a n c e t ostudy English, he would memorize words while wait for customers. Mao said t h a t h o w h e h o p e d v e r ymuch to become an interpreter. Whoever have a dream and dares to seek it is the loveliest person.答案:Mao Zhaomu drop out of high school several years ago. Now the self-taught English learnerdroppedhas been admitted to one of China’s top foreign language university, S i c h u a n I n t e r n a t i o n a l S t u d i e suniversitiesUniversity, that he used to deliver food to students. Mao once worked ∧ad e l i v e r y m a n f o r awhere as restaurant. And he chatted happy with English learners online during her s p a r e t i m e.T h e r e w e r ehappily hismuch grammatical mistakes, but that didn’t prevent him from chatting. To s e i z e e v e r y c h a n c e t o manystudy English, he would memorize words while wait for customers. Mao said t h a t h o w h e h o p e d v e r ywaitingmuch to become an interpreter. Whoever have a dream and dares to seek it is the loveliest person.has[二]When I was young, I was terribly poor in Chinese. Be afraid ofexpressing myself was one of the reasons that I rarely did well in school.I once failed in a mid-term exam. When I got the papers, I realized thingscould have been better if I listened to the teacher much more attentive.So I turned to my teacher for helps and he told me, “Where there is awill, there is a way. If we are devoted to learning Chinese, you’ll makeit.” I couldn’t agree much. From then on, I began to work harder. Outof my expect, I made a great progress soon. Today, Chinese is where mystrength lies. And I’m grateful for my Chinese teacher.参考答案When I was young, I was terribly poor in Chinese. Be afraid ofexpressing myself was one of theBeingreasons that I rarely did well in school. I once failed in a mid-term exam.When I got the papers, I realizedwhythings could have been better if I ∧ listened to the teacher much moreattentive. So I turned to my teacherhad attentively for helps and he told me, “Where there is a will, there is a way. Ifwe are devoted to learning Chinese, helpyou (或者把后半句的you改成we)you’ll make it.” I couldn’t agree much. From then on, I began to workharder. Out of my expect, I made amoreexpectation(s)great progress soon. Today, Chinese is where my strength lies. And I’mgrateful for my Chinese teacher.to[三]Last Sunday I went to a animal hospital to help the doctors there. I arrived at the hospital early in the morning, And there were already much work to do:giving the pets food and water,and even giving them kisses on the heads.At first , they looked at me with frighting eyes. A doctor say to them,”Don’t worry,and everything will be OK.” I washed a dog’s hurt leg. I worked careful t make sure I didn’t hurt him. I wished he could know we were just trying help him. It was a long day and the work made me tired,and I was very happy. I knew I loved animal. And the animals knewI loved him . They enjoyed about my care with love!1 第一句:a 改为an2 第三句:were改为was3 第四句:frightening 改为frightened4. 第五句:say改为said 5 第七句:careful改为carefully 6 第八句:help前加to7 第九句:第二个and改为but 8 第十句 animal改为animals 9 第十一句:him改为them10 第十二句:去掉about[四]I’m a senior student and I’m now in the need of your help although I can’t stand the great pressure.Every day I have to have lesson at school for nine hours and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home. Our teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves, but we hardly have any time to do that we want. Beside, we don’t even have enough sleepy.There seem to have three cases about the overload: the pressure of examinations, too many homework and high expectations from the parents. We often warned that if we don’t do our best we won’t have the chance to go to university. The pressure often makes me awake at night.改错:1. the need10. we∧often: are[五]I am Li Bing and studying in Guang Ming Middle School. I want to be the member of the Youth Volunteer Organization. I like all sport very much, especially basketball. I’m also interested in read and I am good at English.I thought friendship is very important to us, though I like making friends. At school, I’m a member of the “one help one” study project in which I help others and get help others . I was used to give books and money to the children in poor areas. I hope you can get more opportunities to serve others and develop my abilities. So I will do that I can to help other.答案1. the – a2. sport – sports3. read – reading4.thought- think5. though –so6. help-helps7. help后加from8. 去掉was9. you – I10. that – what[六]We have always had the idea which we should do something for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestion. Some students thought that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or everything else for the school. Others students think th at it’s not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feeling proud of us.In my opinion, we don’t have to spend money. We can do something meaningfully without money. For an example, we can do some voluntary workto beautify the school and try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will proud of us.参考答案:We have always had the idea which(that) we should do something for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have different suggestion(suggestions). Some students thought(think)that we can collect money to buy some books for the school library or everything(something)else for the school. Others(Other)students think that it’s not necessary to spend money. We can study hard and make our school feeling(feel) proud of us.In my opinion, we don’t have to spend money. We can do something meaningfully(meaningful) without money. For an example, we can do some voluntary work to beautify the school and(or) try to get better results in the coming exams so that our school will^be proud of us.[七]Last weekend, there was art festival in our school. Our headmaster plan to makeit a feature of our school. I was so excited, for it was the first time for me to join in it.Early in the morning, I saw such many people come to our school, made it so lively.The students gave a warm welcome to the guest. I walked around or appreciated thepaintings. All of the works were from the students and I was very impressed by it.There were also some handcrafts, that were so creative. Though they were busy withtheir study most of the time, some students still managed to develop their hobbies. Ishould learn to them and develop a hobby as well as.参考答案:1. was art festival在was后添加an2. plan--planned3.such—so4.made—making5.guest--guests6. or--and7.it--them8.that—which9.to--from 10. as well as第二个as删除[八]I always think my mother is also your good friend. When I lose my first tooth, when I found a friend, and when I fell off from my bike, she was there. She was proud when I succeeded but supportive when I failed. She always listened me. She seemed to know when I was asking for advices and when I just needed a good cry. We actual shared experiences, hopes, sadnessand fears. She made me felt that my opinions were never small and silly.She never forgot to tell me what she believed in me. Now my mother is facingwith some difficulties in life. I want to tell her everything will be OKand I believe in her, too.参考答案:71. your改为 my; 72. lose改为 lost; 73. 去掉 from;74. but改为and;75. me 前加 to; 76. advices改为advice; 77. actual改为actually; 78.felt改为feel;79. what改为that或者删除what; 80. facing改为faced. 或去掉with[九]On last Friday, evening fell, but my parent didn’t come b ack home yet. Thought about the supper, I stopped doing my homework and deciding to makea meal for my family instead of just waiting.It was my first cooking. I surfed Internet with my cell phone to getthe detailed informations on how to do homely dishes. With thestep-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. Then I triedto cook another. Until my parents came back home, they couldn’t believehis eyes ,seeing the dishes made by me. While my mum was taken pictures,my dad couldn’t wait to h ave a taste and gave me the thumbs up.I would like to prepare more meals to my familyOn last Friday, evening fell, but my parent didn’t come back home yet. 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