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2024版省级公开课课件高中概要写作公开课课件

2024版省级公开课课件高中概要写作公开课课件

目录•课程介绍与目标•概要写作基础知识•文本分析与概括技巧•语言表达与写作技巧•实例分析与讨论•课程总结与展望课程介绍与目标0102 03提高学生概要写作能力通过本课程的学习，使学生能够熟练掌握概要写作的基本技巧和方法，提高写作效率和质量。

培养学生批判性思维概要写作要求学生能够深入理解文本内容，并对其进行客观、理性的分析和评价，有助于培养学生的批判性思维。

促进学生学术素养提升概要写作是学术写作的重要组成部分，通过本课程的学习，可以帮助学生提升学术素养，为未来的学术研究和论文写作打下基础。

概要写作课程的目的掌握概要写作的基本概念、原则和方法，了解不同文体的概要写作特点。

知识目标能力目标情感目标能够独立完成不同文体的概要写作任务，做到内容准确、语言简练、结构清晰。

培养学生对概要写作的兴趣和热情，提高学生的写作自信心和成就感。

030201教学目标与要求上课时间每周一次，每次2小时，共16周。

课程安排本课程共分为四个部分，包括概要写作基础知识、不同文体的概要写作、概要写作技巧和方法、实践训练与作品展示。

课程形式采用线上和线下相结合的方式，包括课堂讲授、小组讨论、个人练习和作品展示等环节。

课程安排与时间概要写作基础知识概要写作的定义与特点定义概要写作是一种对原文进行简洁、准确、全面概括的写作形式，它要求作者在理解原文的基础上，用简洁的语言表达出原文的主要内容和中心思想。

特点概要写作具有简洁性、准确性、全面性和客观性。

它要求作者在保持原文意思不变的前提下，尽可能简化语言，突出重点，同时避免主观色彩和个人观点。

ABDC理解原文在进行概要写作之前，首先要仔细阅读原文，确保充分理解原文的主要内容和中心思想。

突出重点概要写作应该突出原文的重点内容，包括主要观点、重要事实、关键细节等。

简化语言概要写作要求使用简洁的语言表达原文的意思，避免冗长和复杂的句子结构。

保持客观概要写作应该保持客观中立的立场，避免添加个人主观色彩和观点。

英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT

英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT

3. 要点衔接
英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT
承接词
英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT
如何找要点？
抓住文章主要信息，删除细节，删除具体事例， 只保留主要观点，避免重复。一段一个要点，使 用概括性语言，大篇幅写主要内容
• 1. 四种常见逻辑关系 （1）例子和细节：例子前（要保留一到两个例子的主要 观点）(for example, such as, first) （2）转折关系：转折词后（but, however, instead,while) （3）并列关系：同等重要(and, or, also,too) （4）因果关系：结果(so, therefore, as a result, lead to) • 2.问题后的解答 • 3.高频句 • 4. 总结词后
英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT
概要写作
英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT
英语高考新题型——概要写作 12张PPT
什么是概要写作？
• • 概要 •
概 （概括） 要（ 要点）
概括要点
如何概括要点？ 三步
1. 要点获取 找主题句、关键词
2. 要点转述
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最新高考英语写作专题概要写作PPT课件

最新高考英语写作专题概要写作PPT课件

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第二步：阅读材料，回答以下两个问题。 (1) 谁做了什么？Sam got to a boarding school and he felt homesick.
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［写作内容］ 1. 以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容； 2. 然后以约120个词写一篇读后感, 说明“诚 信的重要性”。
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高考英语之概要写作(精选课件)

高考英语之概要写作(精选课件)

高考英语之概要写作概要写作(Ｓummaｒy ｗriting），被称为“小作文".概要写作分值占据１5分，考查的是考生阅读和写作的综合能力。

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高考英语概要写作讲解+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

高考英语概要写作讲解+课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
并用自己的话简单地写出来。（一句话） ➢ 写下每个主要想法的关键支持点，不要涉及小细节。 ➢ 以符合逻辑的顺序组织主要和相关的支持点，实现连贯性的必要过渡。 ➢ 校对语法、拼写和标点错误等。
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
概要写作（小ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ文）
如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.

高考英语专题复习课件：概要写作课件

高考英语专题复习课件：概要写作课件

(3) 上下文的连贯性; (4) 对各要点表达的独立性情况。 5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方 面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以 考虑。 6. 如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一 个档次。
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
档次
描述
——理解准确,涵盖全部要点。 第五档 ——能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。 (21-25) ——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完
四、熟知评分原则，明确写作方向 (一)评分原则 1. 本题总分为25分, 按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时, 先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确
定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、 确定或调整档次, 最后给分。 3. 词数少于40的和多于80的, 从总分中减去2分。 4. 评分时, 应主要从以下四个方面考虑: (1) 对原文要点的理解和呈现情况; (2) 应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
三、常用连接词
1. 顺序 first…second…third… 首先……第二……第三……
firstly…secondly…thirdly…finally… 首先……第二……第三……最后……
to begin with…then…furthermore…finally 首先……然后……此外……最后……
成的概要结构紧凑。 ——完全使用自己的语言。
——理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点。 第四档 ——所使用语法结构和词汇可能有些许错误, (16-20) 但完全不影响意义表达。
——比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使 所完成的概要结构紧凑。 ——有个别整句抄自原文。
——理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点。 第三档 ——所使用语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但 (11-15) 不影响意义表达。
——应用简单的语句间连接成分,使上下文 内容连贯。 ——出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。

高考英语概要写作-范文指导(共42张PPT)

高考英语概要写作-范文指导(共42张PPT)

Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points the key points quickly and
correctly?
(如何快速、准确地捕捉要点)
抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.
You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. treasure spent much money on treat it kindly use it carefully
高考新题型
概要写作
Summary writing
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考 生基于该短文写出一篇60字左右的内容 概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容： (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况 (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性 (3)上下文的连贯性 (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况
概要写作评分标准第五档（21–25points）： contents 1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 (内容) 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 language skills (语言) 3. 完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W)
You spent much money on it and treasure it.
Para1.
Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.
topic sentence Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led characteristics directly to the “throw away society” which is a great result waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! detailed examples 忽略具体事例

高考 概要写作 公开课课件

高考 概要写作 公开课课件
详细描述
高考概要写作中明确规定不得抄袭原文，否则会被扣分。
总结词
考生在写作过程中，如果直接照搬原文句子而不进行改写或概括，很容易被判定为抄袭。为了避免被扣分，考生需要学会对原文进行改写和概括，用自己的语言重新表达文章要点。同时，考生还需要注意避免使用原文中的特定表述方式和词汇，以免被认定为抄袭。
详细描述
引入实际生活素材
教师可以将实际生活素材引入概要写作教学中，帮助学生理解现实生活中的问题和观点，提高概要写作的实际应用能力。
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学生需要具备较高的阅读理解能力，能够准确理解原文的主旨、结构和重要信息。
阅读理解能力
学生需要具备筛选和提炼原文重要信息的能力，能够准确把握文章的核心内容。
信息筛选能力
学生需要具备清晰、简洁的语言表达能力，能够将原文的主要内容用规范的语言表达出来。
语言表达能力
学生需要具备逻辑思维能力，能够合理地组织语言和段落，使概要内容条理清晰、逻辑严密。
逻辑思维能力
加强阅读训练
教师可以通过加强阅读训练，提高学生的阅读理解和信息筛选能力，从而提升概要写作水平。
强化逻辑思维训练
教师可以通过强化逻辑思维训练，帮助学生理清思路、组织语言，使概要内容更加条理清晰、逻辑严密。
注重语言表达
教师需要注重学生的语言表达训练，通过模仿、改写等方式，提高学生的语言表达能力。
在模拟考试中，严格按照考试要求进行时间分配，避免因时间不足而影响写作质量。
根据考试要求和时间限制，制定合理的写作策略，如先写主题句再展开论述等。
在模拟考试后进行反思和总结，针对不足之处进行有针对性的练习和提升。
高考概要写作展望
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【高考英语写作】概要写作专题与议论文写作讲解课件

【高考英语写作】概要写作专题与议论文写作讲解课件
eing a good neighbor old- -fashioned? In 1965, a power cut hit New York City, and thousands of people were left helpless.Suddenly everyone shared the same problem,and the largest city became a group of eight million neighbors.People with cars offered rides to those walking. Other people helped direct traffic.Trapped in elevators,people played word games and helped keep each other in good spirits. In times of trouble, people still depend on one another. As time goes on,people may once again feel that being a good neighbor is important.
要点提炼：邻居在我们的生活中非常重要。
Para.2 In the past,neighbors helped one another build houses and clear fields. They could offer timely help when someone was in trouble.Families depended on one another for friendship and entertainment. They shared happiness and sorrow from time to time,which brought a harmonious atmosphere.

高考英语复习专题概要写作课件

高考英语复习专题概要写作课件

2．精练简洁。精练指的是概括的内容要高度浓缩。学生可以利不必要的细节。简洁指 的是所使用的语言简练。学生可以用抽象的、概括性的语言代替具体形象的语 言。
3．灵活转换。语言转换就是用不同的词或句式来表达与原有表达内容相同 的意义，且重新表达后能做到简单易懂。灵活转换包括语言换说和句子重构。 语言换说可以通过同义、近义和反义变换来替换需要被替换的词汇；句子重构 可以改变原有句子中个别词和词组在句子中充当的语法成分或变换句式来实 现。
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking， cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet，it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea： Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer，surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt，however，gone too far?
5．修改、定稿。认真阅读初稿，对照原文，检查是否漏掉重要内容。检查 并确定拼写、语法、标点正确无误。检查是否符合规定的词数要求。

【原创】高中英语-概要写作课件10 (共21张PPT)

【原创】高中英语-概要写作课件10 (共21张PPT)

currents. He was inspired by what happened to the shoes in a shipping accident. He carried out an experiment. He turned to the beachcombers. With the data, he managed to learn a lot about
What is a summary?
简洁
完整
客观
It’s a concise, complete and objective restatement
of the key points of a passage in your own words.
No details/examples/repetition/comments
1) Read the passage for the style , structure and
key points.
2) Rewrite the key points in our own words
briefly and coherently.
简洁
连贯
What’s the style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Argumentation 议论文 C. Exposition 说明文
He has become a known expert in his type of research.
连贯
Brief; Complete; Correct; Coherent; No copying
Ocean expert, Curtis Ebbesmeyer
employs a new way to study ocean

高考-概要写作-公开课课件

高考-概要写作-公开课课件
led directlyst hr -“l odw-away society” which is
gareat waste of the earth’s resources.
Modern industry has convinced us that
products are not permanent.
past; Decades ago
were made to__b_e_us__e_d_f_o_r_a__lo_n_g_t_ime____.
to function well for a long time; durable
Decades ago, industrial goods were made d
Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why can’t we act before this happens? Why can’t we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is
Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldn’ t last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earth’s resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!

【原创】高考英语如何进行概要写作课件(共20张PPT)

【原创】高考英语如何进行概要写作课件(共20张PPT)

distraction to drivers.
Para 2: Argument (论点) 1 Para 3: Argument (论点) 2
Para 4: Suggestion Para 5: Conclusion
Para 1: Viewpoint
a fact
Para1 Cell phones are used everywhere, but on the road they are a dangerous distraction to drivers and should be forbidden.
Para 4: Suggestion
Q1：Before using a cell phone, what question should drivers ask themselves?
Is this call really that important?
Yes. Suggestion1：Use a phone wisely
Point2：Drivers using a cell phone were 4 times more likely to have an accident than those not using a phone.
Point3：Just like drunk driving, California need laws to restrict the use of cell phones in cars.
Para 2: Argument (论据) 1
1. Cell phones used on the road are a dangerous distraction to drivers.
Drivers using a
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Moustache（胡子） for Cash
“ “Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries including the UK, US and Australia grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money from friends, family and colleagues, with the
blokey: behaving in a way that is supposed to be typical of men , especially men enjoying themselves in
a group.
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
Since then it has gone global and raised lots of money. （要点4）
13+4=7
Movember is an annual event when men stop shaving to raise money for cancer charities. Some Australia men first started it to encourage men to do cancer checks regardless of discrimination. Thanks to social media, Movember spreads globally, resulting in advancement in cancer
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Its success is due to its way to have men visit their doctors with blokey jokiness. （要点5）
评分范例
内容部分 B. 能准确概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏个别主要信息。（4分) C. 能概括文章主旨大意，但遗漏部分主要信息。 （3分)
C目 录 ONTENTS
01 概要写作评分标准及得分要点 02 概要写作得分技巧
C目录 ONTENTS
01 概要写作评分标准及得分要点 02 概要写作得分技巧
评分标准
档次 A B C D E F
内容 5 4 3 2 1 0
语言 5 4 3 2 1 0
评分标准
1. 本题总分为10分, 其中内容5分, 语言5分。 2. 评分时应注意的主要方面: 内容要点、信息
discovery in the treatment of cancer.
In 2004, the foundation was set up. （要点3）
The issue of some men being too self-willed to visit their doctor for a checkup, or perhaps being raised
of male health by making it more accessible, meaning that men are more likely to visit their doctors. They
found a way to appeal to men in a way that other campaigns just don’t – with a sort of blokey① jokiness.
social media, Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide, having raised over
￡440 million since 2004. The effects of the fundraising are wide-reaching, which had made a significant
family to join them in growing a moustache in order to encourage men to get themselves checked for
cancer, which is seen as distasteful by some males. A year later, the group decided to set up the Movember
Foundation, asking friends and colleagues to offer donations of money to support their efforts, and raised a
massive A$54,000 which was shared between a number of health projects. With thanks most likely to
money going to cancer charities.
In 2003, two men started Movember. （要点2）
The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003, when a pair of men from Australia persuaded their
in a culture of “tough it out”, has led some males to neglect their health, which may mean it could be too
late if something potentially deadly did develop. However, Movember is helping to break down the shame
呈现的连贯性和准确性。 3. 词数超过60，酌情扣分。
评分标准
内容部分 A. 能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意, 并
涵盖主要信息。 语言部分 A. 能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。
Men grow moustache for money used for cancer charities in Movember.（要点1）