2020版高考英语二轮复习35分写作规范练三20205

35分写作规范练(三)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

[2019·绵阳市诊断]Before Christmas our school hold a winter sports meeting. As it was the last one at school, we did what we could perform well in an opening ceremony. Greatly to our happiness, our show was very much successful. My classmates took part in various events, or our head teacher even joined us in the relay race. Except Wang Lin, several other athletes also ranked Top 5. Some brought cameras to record the excited moments. It was quite a wonderful experience and that we obtained was great fun. Those out­of­class activity in deed helped us relieve the pressure from learning, and promoted us enthusiasm for future study.答案与解析：Before Christmas our school a winter sports meeting. As it was thehold ①held last one at school, we did what we could perform well in opening∧ ②to an ③the ceremony. Greatly to our happiness, our show was very successful. My④classmates took part in various events, our head teacher even joined usor ⑤and in the relay race. Wang Lin, several other athletes also ranked TopExcept ⑥Besides 5. Some brought cameras to record the moments. It was quite aexcited ⑦exciting wonderful experience and we obtained was great fun. Those out­of­classthat ⑧what in deed helped us relieve the pressure from learning, and promotedactivity ⑨activitiesenthusiasm for future study.us ⑩our ①hold 改为held 通读全文可知，本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，时态应用一般过去时，故将hold 改为held 。

写作规范练(三)1．词数 100～ 120；2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Dear Sir/Madam，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours truly，Li HuaOne possible version：Dear Sir/Madam，I am writing to you to show my keen interest in the part­time job during the summer vacation in your company which you recently advertised in the local newspaper. I strongly believe I meet the qualification listed in your advertisement.I was born in June, 200 1 and I am going to graduate from high school next year. I'm good at communicating with others and have the ability to use the computer. Besides, I can speak English fluently and I won the oral English contest last year. I believe I am quite qualified for the position.I'm available for an interview anytime at your convenience. You can contact me at 1360 1869700 or e­mail at 1360 1869700 @ 163. com for further information. Thanks for your favorable consideration.Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours truly，Li Hua。

写作规范练(一)（建议用时：40分钟)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，五月份要去美国参加“国际文化周”，你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你赴美相关事宜。

请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1．活动时间、地点；2.活动目的、内容；3。

其他个人安排。

注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：International Culture Week 国际文化周________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要.Australians Eat Whole World’s FoodI can’t decide what I want to eat for dinner tonight.Do I feel like Italian food or Thai food? Indian or Chinese？American or Turkish? I don’t need to travel around the world；all these choices are available in a typical inner city in Australia。

写作规范练(二) 建议用时：35分钟写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节 短文改错(共 10小题；每小题 1分，满分 10分)(20 18·河北衡水中学第九次模拟)I'm Zhang Lei from China. I'm easy ­going and warm ­hearted, which makes its easy for me to make new friends. Energetic and responsible, I am a captain of our school football team. Reading is that I really love, both for fun and knowledge.If I'm luckily enough to be chosen as chairman of the Students' Union, I will spare no effort to live on to your expectations. More colourful after ­school activities will be organized, which will definitely reduced pressure but enrich our school life. Consider we are studying in an international middle school, communication should be given priority. So an international club will set up, thus enhancing the understanding between the students from different country. 答案：I'm Zhang Lei from China. I'm easy ­going and warm ­hearted, which makes its iteasy for meto make new friends. Energetic and responsible, I am captain of our school football team. Reading is tha t whatI really love, both for fun and knowledge.If I'm luckil y luckyenough to be chosen as chairman of the Students' Union, I will spare no effortto live on upto your expectations. More colourful after ­school activities will be organized, whichwill definitely reduce d reduce pressure bu t and enrich our school life. Consider Consideringwe are studying in an international middle school, communication should be given priority. So an international club will ∧beset up, thus enhancing the understanding between the students from differentcountr y countries.第二节 书面表达(满分25分)(20 18·合肥第三次质量预测)假定你是李华，你的美国网友Tom 得知你所在社区正在开展“美丽社区”创建活动，他对生活垃圾的处理很感兴趣。

写作规范练 ( 三)( 建议用时： 40 分钟 )第一节应用文写作 ( 满分 15 分)假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Josh 来信咨询你的暑期实践活动安排。

请回一封邮件见告你的打算。

内容包含：1．探望老人，学做家务； 2. 学打羽毛球； 3. 参加社区文艺演出。

注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 能够适合增添细节，以使行文连接。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节纲要写作 ( 满分 25 分 )阅读下边短文，依据其内容写一篇60 词左右的内容纲要。

Small talk. Chitchat. These are the short conversations we have at parties, while we wait in line at the store, at family events or work. Sometimes we make small talkwith people we already know but not well. Often we have to make small talk with complete strangers. Many people find such small talk about random topics difficult. Somepeople say they hate it. Others say small talk is a waste of time. They may even call itidle chitchat or idle chatter, meaning it doesn ’ t do anything. They consider smalltalk not important. However, small talk is important.Small talk can open doors that may lead to larger, more meaningful conversations. Whenyou first meet someone or talk to someone you don’ t know well, it would be awkward to begin a conversation about a really deep topic such as war, politics or the meaning of life.Small talk also gives you the chance to decide if you want to get know that person better or not. Let ’ s say you make small talk with someone at a party. But they onlywant to talk about cats. You may not want to build a friendship with them unless youreally, really love cats.Small talk can also increase your feeling of understanding, or empathy, towardpeople you know but not well. Chatting with a colleague about their child may helpyou to understand more of their life outside the office. This could help build healthy work relationships.Small talk could even help your larger communities—your relationships with neighbors. Exchanging recipe with a neighbor i n your apartment building may make her noises upstairs easier to live with.And small talk may make us happier!In 2011, most commuters( 搭车来回于两地之间的人) in the city of Chicago said they would enjoy“quiet cars” where they sat alone and did not talk to anybody.Researchers at the University of Chicago then asked some participants in a study to talk to people while commuting to work on a train. They found that those who madesmall talk with strangers were happier than those who sat alone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作规范练 ( 三 )第一节应用文写作One possible version：Dear Josh ，I ’m glad to hear from you again and really appreciate your summer plans. Actually, I ’ ve already informed my parents of my schedule, which they think highly of.What I want to do first is have a good stay with my grandparents, learning howto do housework, like cooking and cleaning out a room.Badminton is my favorite game,and I will learn from Wang Lei, the best player in my class, and practise with himin the nearby gym three times a week. Most excitingly, I am chosen to perform in theart center of our community every Friday evening. As a young pianist, I feel it myhonor to show my talent in the neighborhood.Hope you will enjoy your summer vacation too!Yours ，Li Hua 第二节纲要写作One possible version：Although small talk is disliked by many people, it is actually of vital importance in our daily life.(重点1) Firstly, small talk can not only lead to meaningfulconversations but also help you decide whether to further your relationship.(重点2) Besides, through small talk, you can build better relationships with yourcolleagues and neighbors.(重点3) What’s more, researchers also find that small talk can make people happier！(重点4)。

写作规范练 ( 四)( 建议用时： 40 分钟 )第一节应用文写作 ( 满分 15 分)假设你是李华，外国互换生Tony 想参加你校的社团以学习中国文化。

请你给他写一封邮件，内容包含：1．校社团状况介绍； 2. 活动的时间、地址； 3. 报名方法。

注意： 1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 能够适合增添细节，以使行文连接。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节读后续写 ( 满分 25 分)阅读下边短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之组成一个完好的故事。

It was Mother ’ s__Day and I was shopping at__the__local__supermarket with my son who was five years old，Tenyson．As we were leaving after finishing our shopping，we realized that only minutes earlier an elderly womanhad fallen__over at the entrance and hit her head on the ground badly.Her husband was with her，but there was blood everywhere and the woman was embarrassed and clearly in shock.Fortunately，a lot of people stopped to help out.While we were walking towards the scene，Tenyson became very worried about whathad happened to the elderly couple.He said to me，“ Mom，it’ s not much fun fallingover in front of everyone.” Seeing that there was a flower stall(摊位) at the frontof the supermarket ， he added，“ Why shouldn ’ t we buy the lady a flower ？ It will make her feel better.” I was amazed that he’d come up with this sweet idea. So we wentover and told the flower seller what we wanted. “Just take it ，” she replied.“ I can’t take your money for such a__wonderful__deed．”By now medical__staff had arrived，and were looking after the injured woman.There we saw the old man was also in great horror，but he tried to comfort his wife andheld her hands tightly to encourage her to be strong.We gave the flower to the woman’s husband and I told him it was from my son.At that，the old man started crying andsaid ，“Thank you very much.”He then turned to me，“ You have a wonderful son.Happy Mother ’ s Day to you.”The man bent down and gave his wife the flower，telling her who it wasfrom.Regardless of being badly__hurt，the old lady looked up at Tenyson with loveand appreciation in her eyes and gave him a little smile.And my son went down hisbody to the injured lady and tenderly said，“ Happy Mother’s Day to you，too. ”注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2．起码使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的重点词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。

限时规范训练(三十五) 写作板块——练规范(满分35分，限时30分钟)Ⅰ.短文改错(10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Saturday I had a trip to a new opened park called Guangfulin Relics Park. When I got there I found the environment was perfect and that there was various birds flying around. That attracted me most was the strange building. It looked like a flooding house, the roof of which was above the water, and indeed it's “body ” was under the water. People could get there by going down the stair. In the building there was an exhibition which was very much great, for there were plenty architecturalmodels and exhibits.In a word, this park is a place worth visited again.答案：opened park called Guangfulin Relics Park.new newlyLast Saturday I had a trip to a variouswas wereWhen I got there I found the environment was perfect and that there strange building. It looked likethe aattracted me most was That What birds flying around. ”y bod “ it's itshouse, the roof of which was above the water, and indeed flooding flooded a . In the buildingstair stairswas under the water. People could get there by going down the∧ofgreat, for there were plenty much ﹨ there was an exhibition which was very architectural models and exhibits.again.visited visitingIn a word, this park is a place worth Ⅱ.书面表达(25分)假定你是李华，外国交换生Tony 想参加你校的社团活动以学习中国文化。

题型训练写作（三）第一节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

WeChat is becoming increasing popular with people. Recently I have made a survey among my classmate about the use of WeChat. According to a result, 45% of the classmates admit they often use it because comparing with other means of communication, WeChat has more advantages. It was cheap, convenient and easy to send all kinds of messages around. Besides, 35% of whom are against using it, saying it will affect their study. Not using WeChat, the rest has no opinion about it. As far as I'm concerned, since WeChat offers us great convenience, it should be made good use. We should not be slaves to it or let it to govern our minds and behaviour.第二节书面表达假定你是李华，市电视台将举办《中国诗词比赛》(Chinese Poetry Contest)国际友人专场，你想邀清对文化感兴趣的外教老师Adam一同观赛。

写作规范练(三)(建议用时：40分钟)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Josh来信询问你的暑假实践活动安排。

请回一封邮件告知你的打算。

内容包括：1．看望老人，学做家务；2.学打羽毛球；3.参加社区文艺演出。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二节概要写作(满分25分)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Small talk. Chitchat. These are the short conversations we have at parties, while we wait in line at the store, at family events or work. Sometimes we make small talk with people we already know but not well. Often we have to make small talk with complete strangers. Many people find such small talk about random topics difficult. Some people say they hate it. Others say small talk is a waste of time. They may even call it idle chitchat or idle chatter, meaning it doesn’t do anything. They consider small talk not important. However, small talk is important.Small talk can open doors that may lead to larger, more meaningful conversations. When you first meet someone or talk to someone you don’t know well, it would be awkward to begin a conversation about a really deep topic such as war, politics or the meaning of life.Small talk also gives you the chance to decide if you want to get know that person better or not. Let’s say you make small talk with someone at a party. But they only want to talk about cats. You may not want to build a friendship with them unless you really, really love cats.Small talk can also increase your feeling of understanding, or empathy, toward people you know but not well. Chatting with a colleague about their child may help you to understand more of their life outside the office. This could help build healthy work relationships.Small talk could even help your larger communities—your relationships with neighbors. Exchanging recipe with a neighbor in your apartment building may make her noises upstairs easier to live with.And small talk may make us happier!In 2011, most commuters(乘车往返于两地之间的人) in the city of Chicago said they would enjoy “quiet cars” where they sat alone and did not talk to anybody.Researchers at the University of Chicago then asked some participants in a study to talk to people while commuting to work on a train. They found that those who made small talk with strangers were happier than those who sat alone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作规范练(三)第一节应用文写作One possible version：Dear Josh，I’m glad to hear from you again and really appreciate your summer plans. Actually, I’ve already informed my parents of my schedule, which they think highly of.What I want to do first is have a good stay with my grandparents, learning how to do housework, like cooking and cleaning out a room.Badminton is my favorite game, and I will learn from Wang Lei, the best player in my class, and practise with him in the nearby gym three times a week. Most excitingly, I am chosen to perform in the art center of our community every Friday evening. As a young pianist, I feel it my honor to show my talent in the neighborhood.Hope you will enjoy your summer vacation too!Yours，Li Hua 第二节概要写作One possible version：Although small talk is disliked by many people, it is actually of vital importance in our daily life.(要点1) Firstly, small talk can not only lead to meaningfulconversations but also help you decide whether to further your relationship.(要点2) Besides, through small talk, you can build better relationships with your colleagues and neighbors.(要点3) What’s more, researchers also find that small talk can make people happier！(要点4)。

35分写作规范练(五)写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

[2019·豫南九校联考]My grandmother is 73 year old. She is a great reader, but she reads only newspapers. He has a very good habit of reading the newspaper daily. After her morning housework, she sat down to read the newspaper for at least an hour. She doesn't like to be disturbing at that time. In fact she is so much updated that everyone else in the house relies her for the daily important news, national or international. My grandmother's habit of reading newspapers are a great help for other members of my house, especial my parents. As they both are working very hardly, they have very few time to read the news.答案与解析：My grandmother is 73 year ①yearsold. She is a great reader, but she reads only newspapers. He ②Shehas a very good habit of reading the newspaper daily. After her morning housework, she sat ③sitsdown to read the newspaper for at least an hour. She doesn't like to be disturbing ④disturbed at that time. In fact she is so much ④updated that everyone else in the house relies ∧⑥onher for the daily important news, national or international. My grandmother's habit of reading newspapers are ⑦isa great help for other members of my house, especial ⑧especiallymy parents. As they both are working very hardly ⑨hard , they have very few ⑩littletime to read the news. ①year 改为years year 作“岁”讲时为可数名词，此前有数词73修饰，应用复数形式，故将year改为years。