雅思写作最全讲义分析整理版

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文 G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

大作文写作讲义大作文写作步骤●审题——1分钟●提纲——3分钟●开头——5分钟●中间——25分钟●结尾——3分钟●检查——3分钟●总共：40分钟审题：●杜绝看不懂题目！●杜绝跑题！通扫所有大作文题目：●写作教程P94-182:●议论文题型分析●精彩范文●最新范文●白皮书P118-144：●题目+ argument●同黄皮书P34-43●Broad topic—topic—specific topicWith computers, people can now shop, bank, work and communicate from home. The danger is that people could become isolated from each other and lost social skills which help them to get along with others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their opinion?科技——电脑——电脑与人际关系、社交技能●Circle/underline the key words!●写作针对specific topic! Otherwise it isIRRELEV ANT!例：There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon and offer some recommendations.●重点：原因分析——为什么越来越多跑题文章汇总：●教程●13●22●105●讲义●177●178●英文论文的写作原则●理清写作思路●确保清晰结构●论证有话可说1.文章风格2.结构3.POWER结构：●Beginning—view of point1.Background2.Transition3.View of point4.40 words-3 sentences●Body—supporting ideas: 2-31.Topic sentence2.Supporting ideas3.Transitional sentence4.180 words-10 sentences●Ending—repetition of the opening1.30 words-2/3 sentences注意点：1.There is no need for you to create a title; (讲义117)2.Be sure to present your view in the lastsentence of the first paragraph.3.Be sure the topic sentences can be identifiedas the first one of each paragraph in thebody.4. 3 to 5 complex sentences are indispensableif your want to get a band over 6范文阅读：●教程15—过渡痕迹明显●教程16●（讲义P171：专业招收男女生比例——聪明的借鉴）提高写作水平：1.Read extensively to broaden your horizon;(ideas + outline + 文章自读)2.Read intensively to learn sentence patterns;（范文阅读）3.Imitate to assimilate yourself to the westernstyle;4.PRACTICE!!!练开头/结尾练论证手法优秀句型造句Learn to summarize:●Many people believe that women makebetter parents than men and that this is whythey have the greater role in raising childrenin most societies. Others claim that men arejust as good as women at parenting.●Write an essay expressing your point ofview.1.Agree with the former.2.As a result of conditioning3.Less aggressive nature4.Better communication skills5.Conclusion提纲练习：●写作教程：choose 3 out of them●104——动物：肉乎？朋友乎？●118——汽车的作用●119——大公司/小公司？●128——科技导致文化趋同？●130——入乡随俗/我行我素？●137——体育与学习：孰轻孰重？文章阅读：●教程●35-38—比较阅读●18-太空研究值否？●26-大学学术/实用？●114-飞机的作用●126-女子学校？●127-科技与文化趋同●131-入乡随俗/我行我素●141-性格的形成●143-教育学术/实用●144-大学教育实用性●145-挑战权威●149-动物实验●150-动物园●153-老年人退休●156-竞争与合作●157-孩子犯罪谁负责●159-工作为钱/成就感●161-青年问题●162-女性参军●163-警察带枪●166-成功与理论知识●170-计算机的危害●174-全球化的利弊●176-动物还是人？●179-大学的功能●180-环境问题国际合作●182, 185, 186-广告文章欣赏：●教程●148——快乐的定义●160——能力与报酬●169——信息的审查●172——电子辅导●188——广告的作用●189——广告时代●可借用想法●不适合模仿Power●Plan●Outline●Write●Edit●RewriteBrainstorming●Many parents send their childrenabroad to study. Discuss theadvantages and disadvantagesabout this. Do you think whenwill be a suitable age to send themabroad.BranchingOutline:I.IntroductionII.BodyA. …1. …a. …i. …B. …C. …III.ConclusionBe sure that you have put two main ideas in different paragraphs.开头：●说明现状1.It is a fact of life that…2.It has been widely noted that…3.There is a growing tendencynowadays for some people to …●表明问题1.There is much discussionnowadays as to whether or not …2. A criticism often heard these daysis that…3.This raises serious doubts about…4.Some maintain…, whereas othersare convinced that…●作者观点1.To be frank, I am in high favourof …2.Personally, I am convinced that…3.For my part, I share the latterpoint of view and I will give twomajor reasons why this is so.4.Here I will discuss the pros andcons of the issue.结尾：1.重申2.让步3.谚语/格言4.建议5.All in all,6.To sum up,7.In a word,8.To cut a long story short,9.From what has been discussed above, wemay safely draw the conclusion that…10.Weighing the pros and cons of thedouble-edged sword, I’m inclined to agreewith the latter point of view.写作技巧：●Definition: happiness●Example:●Anecdote●Adage●Typical events●中国古代的例子不要出现●Comparison and contrast●Block to block●Point to point●Cause and effect●因果关系词●Statistics●Metaphor●My love is red, red rose.因果关系词：选5个造句Not because A but because BReading work:●写作教程P41-50：●关联词的运用●文章的连贯性不能容忍的错误：1.Plural and singular forms 单复数/主谓一致Nowadays anyone who study at university need to learn how to use computer.1.Part of speech 词性The develop of personal computers effect on people’s lives because small businesses can easy afford them and this makes their work more efficiency.1.Tense 时态The number of household utility consumption was rising between 1990 and 2000.1.Preposition 介词He appears to be very experienced with dealing with people.Have a knowledge and sensitivity of the culture of the recipient, and you will have an invaluable chance to earn respect and establish a durable relationship.5.及物/不及物动词He rose the matter at the meeting.6.副词的位置Success only can be achieved through hard work.6.冠词Horse is a useful animal to human beings.6.There be句型There are many people would agree with this statement.6.Spelling 拼写: monk—monkey7.Punctuation 标点The money should be spent improving facility in old homes, that will help provide a more comfortable environment for old people.(写作教程P21)不同句式：1.In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully andwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(副词短语+并列句)2.The goats grazed peacefully in the farm andwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(并列句)3.The goats were grazing peacefully in thefarm, unaware of the approaching hunter.(简单句+形容语短语)4.Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farmwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(现在分词+简单句)5.As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm,they were unaware of the approachinghunter. (原因从句+主句) 组成长句：The graph is about student numbers in the UK.The number of students in higher education has risen. The rise has taken place over the last five years.Students were asked how much they expect to earn when they start work.40 per cent of them expect to earn about 21,000.2 per cent expect to earn 40,000 or more.A typical police force in Britain has 2500 officers.A typical town has a population of 180,000.At any one time, there are only 10 officers patrolling the streets of a typical town.Drink-driving laws vary from country to country.In Poland it is illegal to drive with more than 20 mg of alcohol in your blood.In Italy it is illegal to drive with more than 80 mg of alcohol in your blood.1. A student acquires knowledge mainly fromthe textbook and in class.2.When he graduates from school he can donothing.3.Everything is different from what teacherstold them.4.He may be disappointed.5.He may be frustrated.6.He may be afraid to face the real world.7.Our universities have turned out people ofno use.1.Frans Mesmer was a physician.2.Frans Mesmer was from Germany.3.Frans Mesmer invented hypnotism.4.Hypnotism was invented in the eighteenthcentury.5.Hypnotism remained an amusing gimmick.6.It remained a gimmick for over a century.7.The gimmick was for nightclub acts.8.The gimmick was for parlor games.9.Physicians now use hypnotism.10.Dentists now use hypnotism.11.Psychiatrists now use hypnotism.12.Hypnotism is used to treat various ailments.13.Hypnotism is used to control chronic pain.14.Hypnotism is used as a replacement froanesthesia.用词：1.写不出想表达的词2.同一个词反复用3.好词但不知用法——放弃！！！e a simple substitute!5.Try another way:1.Negation vs. affirmation2.General vs. specific6.Abandon the idea and try for a new one.7.Accumulate your bank of vocabulary,especially of synonyms.●名词间的转化：higher education, senior education, advanced schooling, college education, academic study…●名词—动词：go to university/college, go for further study●形容词—副词：a good swimmer●变换句式：简单句/从句被动/主动语态非谓语形式倒装/虚拟/强调特殊结构：so that…, too…to, not A but B, A rather than B使用插入语注意点：1.使用齐头式：讲义176、1772.Make your writing as legible as possible;3.Make your paper as clean as possible;4.If you write task 2 in the wrong place, writedown on the margin:●Sorry for the inconveniencebrought to you because I havewritten task 2 in the wrongplace.e British English in spelling●Labour/behaviour●Metre●Cheque●Travelling etc.模仿：●Choose a topic and write an essay followingthe models provided on pages:●写作教程●95 opinion—科技与生活●97 discuss—医疗系统●98 problem + reason + solution—学校第一天●99 agree/disagree—不乖的学生●101 advantage/disadvantage—广告的利弊考虑问题的思路●经济决定一切（政治、文化、教育、基础设施）●生理走向心理（马斯洛需要层次：跳槽/养老院）●客观先于主观（全球化导致文化丧失）●有关对象排排号（孩子教育的负责人/环境治理）●内部关系先切断（国际性语言/服装与爱国/烟草）●两边谈谈折中走●正反论证好说话●追根溯源挖本质（教程19+27）●观点变态没关系●自圆其说为真理。

Topics of Task 2 （2008～2009.11.21)一、教育（共25题，占%）1. In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (08.01.26)不同意：中学教育是一个重要的德育阶段，如果在这个时候中断，带来的不仅仅是失业这样的问题，还有青少年犯罪等社会问题vital stage for moral education. If it was interrupted, numerous of social problem/headaches may create as juvenile delinquency. (正如马克吐温说：你每关闭一所学校，你就必须开设一座监狱。

Every time you stop a school, you will have to build a jail ）教育能够帮助培养个人素质；提高劳动力的素质，从而提高生产效率，推动社会发展，从根本上解决失业的问题。

do a favor to/be beneficial（advantageous, preferable) to personal quality, enhance/boost/promote the quality of the labor force, thereby increase production efficiency, social development, solve the problem of unemployment从长远来看，如果受过更高的教育，则有更多的机会找到好的工作。

雅思写作精编2011上半年讲义——张凯轩目录I. 写作评分标准II. 小作文类型介绍III. 小作文线状图及变化IV. 小作文表格图及变化V. 小作文多图结合VI. 小作文地图流程图VII. 大作文类型介绍VIII. 大作文常用学术词IX. 大作文单边论现象题句型，思路及范文X. 大作文单边论观点题句型，思路及范文XI. 大作文双边观点题句型，思路及范文XII. 大作文原因解决论句型，思路及范文XIII. 大作文杂论（个性化议论文）句型，思路及范文XIV. 张老师2011年下半年总预测24题，部分题思路分解XV. 对学员的期待和继续学习的方法XVI. 附件一：小作文图集XVII. 附件二：大作文真题集写作评分标准以及考试要求知己知彼我们首先了解雅思写作考试方需要什么IELTS Writing 首先分2个sectionSection I: Figure Writing or Diagram or Maps通常评分比例：40%考试理想时间安排10-15minutes 最多耗时不超过20minutes 字数要求：150Section II：British Essay Writing通常评分比例：60%考试理想时间安排30-40minutes 最多耗时不超过45minutes 字数要求：250雅思作文有4大评分标准Task Response Coherence &CohesionLexicalResourceGrammaticalRange & AccuracyBand5.5 6 5 5 5.5average performance by Chinese participants6. 6 5.5 5.5 68 6 7 6 78 8 7 8 8Task Response就是回答问题，具体来讲，在最理想的状态下要做到以下3点1. 明确主题2. 全面论证3. 事实论证观点以下题为例2010-12-04: In the past, important knowledge about culture and history was stored in museums. Nowadays, information is freely available on the Internet. Therefore, there is no longer any need for museums.To what extent do you agree or disagree?明确主题：不太同意全面论证：有正方—确实有越来越多的‘虚拟博物馆’，他们还有好处…；另外也有反方—传统博物馆除了让人看，还保存文物，有些还是历史性或地标性建筑…。

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文 G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构) Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据) Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构) 1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument.The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument.People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day. The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic （灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）, 2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do. Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streetsare teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense. Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

雅思写作语法全讲解Crack Your Grammar Puzzles Once And For All从5.5-6到6.5-7的变化前言雅思写作的低分可能是多方面原因的结果，包括词汇量有限，对题目内容没有想法，字体太丑，甚至人品太糟以至遇到了考官前天晚上和媳妇某方面不和谐！但是不管是哪个原因，写作的基本要求就是能写出正确和有逻辑的单句或复合句。

本课程的目标是为了拯救在语法部分挣扎折磨的考生。

你们也许已经重复了好多次系统语法的学习，各种复杂语法现象。

可是，你从来不知道那些语法书的内容是native speakers都看不懂的。

你报的高价班可能给你安排了基础语法课程。

可是，你从来不知道语法课的老师从来没想过好好教你，因为Ta觉得你无可救药，讲什么你都不懂，与其从你的角度来分析弱点，还不如把用了几百年的课件再讲一遍。

终于，我来了。

我通过批改几千份学生作业，挑选最具普遍性的语法错误，让你通过别人犯过的错误来提醒自己不要如此低级，从而保证自己的语法正确度。

我们能培养你母语一样的语法能力！目录第一章：主语错误 (2)第二章谓语动词错误 (7)2.1 缺少谓语(常见的情况是误用介词或者形容词当作动词) (8)2.2 太多动词造成谓语混乱 (9)2.3 时态问题 (12)2.4被动错误 (14)2.5情态动词使用错误 (16)2.6对Be动词毫无感情 (17)第三章修饰名词的错误 (20)3.1 第一种类型：形容词+名词 (22)3.2 第二种类型：名词(介词短语) (23)3.3 第三种类型：名词(定语从句) (24)第四章：比较级和最高级错误 (26)第五章：名词的错误 (29)第六章：从句的基本错误 (34)6.1 在前面的章节里我们已经讨论过了名词被修饰的情况。

其中一种方法就是使用定语从句来修饰名词。

这一节里，我们来看三个定语从句最基本的位置和形式。

(35)6.2. 从句经常出现没有主语的情况 (40)6.3. 经常出现的主句没主语的现象 (40)6.4. 从句之间标点错误 (41)第一章：主语错误出错可能：五颗星错误程度：低级到考官想弄死你俗话说得好：万事开头难！很多同学的写作和口语难以提高，主要问题就在于对一个完整句子的主语形式不够了解。

2010年冲刺班雅思A类写作讲义主讲：刘巍巍第一讲雅思高分写作思路总览雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上第一节的内容：1．雅思写作的整体介绍2．高分写作的要求3．解决问题的方案4．课程的总览一．雅思写作的整体介绍General Introduction听力、阅读考试之后60分钟Task 1 and Task 2A类和G类的区别：task 2 议论文task 1 A：图表作文G：书信评分：以Task 2 为主二：高分写作的要求评分标准：Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Communicative Quality(交流质量)Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)1.避免使用过于低级的单词The problem becomes worse by the poor effects we made.The problem was compounded due to the ineffective measures we had taken.They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an incorrect argument. The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a lame argument. People face violence and crimes on TV and films every day.People are bombarded by violence and crimes on TV and films every day.The kind of growth may lead to very bad results.The kind of growth may lead to dire consequences.consequence:far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,2.避免过分重复同一样的单词Mothers enjoy the same right for career advancement as fathers do.Mothers are just as entitled to career advancement as fathers.Mothers are empowered to career advancement as fathers.3.尽可能展示多变的句型定语从句：China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, the evidence of which can be seen in all major cities whose streets are teeming with thousands of vehicles of all kinds.倒装句：Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.伴随状语：It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week because they have to sit through one extra class after another.It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.设问句：Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。

雅思写作A、G类大作文讲义主讲：何刚欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材学术类写作共两道题目，写作任务1和写作任务2。

你必须回答这两道题目。

任务2比任务1分值比重大。

近几年中国学生雅思总分5.4---5.5，写作5.1---5.2雅思议论文How are Task 2 answers assessed?Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria:Task Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective)∙Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organised and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ∙Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)∙Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)5分作文要求：对于任务的回应●只是部分回应题目要求，格式在有的地方不得体●有立场，但论证并不总是清晰，可能没写结论●提出了一些主要观点，但这些观点有限，论证不够充分；可能有无关细节连贯与衔接●信息的呈现有些组织，但缺少整体延续性●衔接手段的使用不充分，不准确或者过度●缺少指代和替换关系，导致重复●没有分段，或者分段不充分词汇资源●词汇有限，仅仅满足最低要求●在拼写和构词法方面有明显错误，以至于导致阅读的部分困难语法结构的范围和准确性●只能使用有限的句型●试图使用复杂句，但准确度不如简单句●语法和标点经常错误，这些错误导致阅读部分困难6分作文要求：对于任务的回应●回应题目要求，虽然有的部分涵盖不够完整●立场切题，虽然结论可能不清晰或重复●主要观点切题，但有的观点可能论证不够充分或不清晰连贯与衔接●信息和观点组织连贯；文章有延续性●衔接手段使用有效，但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械●指代关系可能不能总是清晰、合理地使用●有分段，但不总是有逻辑性词汇资源●使用适当范围的词汇●试图使用较不常见词汇，但有一些不准确●在拼写和构词法上有错误，但这些错误不至于影响交际语法结构的范围和准确性●能使用简单和复杂句子结构●语法和标点出现一些错误，尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

simon雅思写作讲义摘要：I.引言- 介绍Simon的雅思写作讲义- 讲义对于雅思写作的重要性II.Simon的雅思写作讲义概述- 写作任务和评分标准- 写作技巧和方法- 常见错误和解决方法III.写作任务和评分标准- 写作任务类型- 评分标准IV.写作技巧和方法- 观点陈述- 逻辑展开- 语言表达V.常见错误和解决方法- 语法错误- 词汇错误- 逻辑错误VI.结论- 总结Simon的雅思写作讲义- 强调讲义对于提高雅思写作成绩的重要性正文：【引言】在众多的雅思写作讲义中，Simon的讲义以其全面、深入和实用性受到了广大考生的推崇。

本文将对Simon的雅思写作讲义进行详细的介绍和分析，以帮助考生更好地理解和应用讲义，提高雅思写作成绩。

【I.Simon的雅思写作讲义概述】Simon的雅思写作讲义系统全面地阐述了雅思写作的任务和评分标准，以及应对这些任务和标准所需的写作技巧和方法。

此外，讲义还详细分析了考生在写作过程中常见的错误，并提供了解决这些问题的方法。

【II.写作任务和评分标准】在Simon的讲义中，写作任务主要分为两大类：议论文（Argumentative essay）和报告（Report）。

议论文要求考生对某一问题提出自己的观点，并通过论据和例证进行论证；报告则要求考生对某一现象或问题进行描述、分析和解释。

评分标准主要包括：任务完成（Task Achievement）、连贯与衔接（Coherence and Cohesion）、词汇资源（Lexical Resource）和语法范围与准确性（Grammatical Range and Accuracy）。

【III.写作技巧和方法】1.观点陈述：在写作过程中，明确自己的观点至关重要。

考生应在文章开头段落明确表达自己的立场，并在后续段落中保持一致。

2.逻辑展开：文章的逻辑结构是评分标准中的重要一项。

考生应学会使用各种逻辑连接词，如因果关系（cause-and-effect）、转折关系（contrast）和递进关系（progression），以使文章条理清晰。