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雅思强化写作精讲班第 14 讲讲义图表作文（二）You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.199621,8771,1671,90524,949199723,6611,5592,22727,447199824,5191,8232,48628,828You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the number of people at a London underground station from 6:00 to 22:00.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.Sample Essay 2The line graph illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6am to 10pm.As we can see from the line graph, the number of people using this station fluctuates over these 16 hours. More specifically, at first, at 6am the number of people at the station stands at only 100. Then, the number shoots up over the next two hours, peaking at 400 at 8am. After that, the number declines rapidly for two hours, bottoming out at 180 at 10am. The period between 10 o’clock and 12 o’clock experiences a slight growth in thenumber of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. Numbers in the following two hours level off at just under 300 people. From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2pm to 4pm. The next two hours experiences a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people. After 6pm,the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8pm. The period from 8pm to 10pm sees a slight rise, but finally the number of people declines again from 180 at 9pm to 135 at 10pm.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that the most people use the subway station during the rush hours in the early morning and the early evening.图表题的规律表示“分别”的副词respectivelyIn the 2004 Olympics, China and Chile won X and Y gold medals, respectively.表示“大约”的副词或者词组about ,around , approximately , roughly , just over , just underThe graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.Radio and television audiences in the UK, October – December 1992Sample Essay 3The line graph indicates the data of radio and TV audiences in 24 hours ( 6am to 6am the next day) in 1992.As can be seen from the line graph, there was a slight rise in the number of audiences from around 3% at 6am to about 7% at 8am. Then, from 8am to noon, it remained stable. After that, the number of audiences rose sharply until 8pm, peaking at just over 40%. From this point onwards, the number declined fast to around 4% at 6am the next morning.from 6am( 4%) to 8 am, reaching the highest point at 30%. Then, in the next 22 hours, the number decreased gradually, with a slight rise from 4 pm to 5pm and around 11pm.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that before 2pm, the number of people who listened tothe radio was larger than the number of people watching TV. After that, more UK residents chose to watchTV instead of listening to the radio. Overall, in these 24 hours, the TV audiences were larger than the radio audiences.The diagram below shows how The Australian Bureau of Meteorology Y collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.You should write at least 150 words.The diagram shows in four stages how the Australian Bureau of Meterlogy gets its weather information.In the first stage there is the “incoming information”. Raw data is collected from outer space, on land, or at sea, using satellite, radar, and drifting buoy respectively. Next, this data is analyzed and forecasted by experts. At this stage experts study satellite photos, radar screens, and synoptic charts to determine weather conditions. Stage three of the process is when the information is prepared for broadcast. This is done through computer which sends all necessary data to the fourth stage. At this point the weather data is broadcasted to the general public via TV, radio and telephone (recorded announcement).Thus, the process diagram shows how weather data is collected, studied, prepared, and finally broadcast.。

雅思强化写作精讲班第 14 讲讲义图表作文（二）You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.199621,8771,1671,90524,949199723,6611,5592,22727,447199824,5191,8232,48628,828You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the number of people at a London underground station from 6:00 to 22:00.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.Sample Essay 2The line graph illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6am to 10pm.As we can see from the line graph, the number of people using this station fluctuates over these 16 hours. More specifically, at first, at 6am the number of people at the station stands at only 100. Then, the number shoots up over the next two hours, peaking at 400 at 8am. After that, the number declines rapidly for two hours, bottoming out at 180 at 10am. The period between 10 o’clock and 12 o’clock experiences a slight growth in thenumber of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. Numbers in the following two hours level off at just under 300 people. From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2pm to 4pm. The next two hours experiences a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people. After 6pm,the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8pm. The period from 8pm to 10pm sees a slight rise, but finally the number of people declines again from 180 at 9pm to 135 at 10pm.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that the most people use the subway station during the rush hours in the early morning and the early evening.图表题的规律表示“分别”的副词respectivelyIn the 2004 Olympics, China and Chile won X and Y gold medals, respectively.表示“大约”的副词或者词组about ,around , approximately , roughly , just over , just underThe graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.Radio and television audiences in the UK, October – December 1992Sample Essay 3The line graph indicates the data of radio and TV audiences in 24 hours ( 6am to 6am the next day) in 1992.As can be seen from the line graph, there was a slight rise in the number of audiences from around 3% at 6am to about 7% at 8am. Then, from 8am to noon, it remained stable. After that, the number of audiences rose sharply until 8pm, peaking at just over 40%. From this point onwards, the number declined fast to around 4% at 6am the next morning.from 6am( 4%) to 8 am, reaching the highest point at 30%. Then, in the next 22 hours, the number decreased gradually, with a slight rise from 4 pm to 5pm and around 11pm.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that before 2pm, the number of people who listened tothe radio was larger than the number of people watching TV. After that, more UK residents chose to watchTV instead of listening to the radio. Overall, in these 24 hours, the TV audiences were larger than the radio audiences.The diagram below shows how The Australian Bureau of Meteorology Y collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.You should write at least 150 words.The diagram shows in four stages how the Australian Bureau of Meterlogy gets its weather information.In the first stage there is the “incoming information”. Raw data is collected from outer space, on land, or at sea, using satellite, radar, and drifting buoy respectively. Next, this data is analyzed and forecasted by experts. At this stage experts study satellite photos, radar screens, and synoptic charts to determine weather conditions. Stage three of the process is when the information is prepared for broadcast. This is done through computer which sends all necessary data to the fourth stage. At this point the weather data is broadcasted to the general public via TV, radio and telephone (recorded announcement).Thus, the process diagram shows how weather data is collected, studied, prepared, and finally broadcast.。

图表写作一总述1任务要求：考生在20分钟内完成150个单词的小文章。

2 内容：图表（line graph, bar chart, pie chart, table, diagram)3 文体：summary4考察能力：客观地描述图形信息；进行比较和对比；对非个人性的话题提供报告，不掺杂个人意见；使用图形描述语言。

Note: 这里涉及到考试三原则——objectivity客观性原则（考生进行描述是不能有任何脸型式的个人观点），carefulness 周密性原则（有时作文题会安排一个隐藏着的特征信息，考察考生的观察能力和横向比较能力，考生若能发现并加以描述，可以得到一个印象分，如没发现，则正常阅卷），accuracy 精确性原则（考生须用准确生动的语言对数据进行描述）。

5 考生对图表题所存在的三个问题：➢对于写作当中的套用句掌握不充分➢对于不同图表的破题思路存在问题➢连接方面存在困难二图表题总的认识2．图表作文结构•引言段：对图表主题作总介绍（关于什么主题的什么图/时间（1~2句）•正文段：•1）对图表进行总的概述或解说用（1～2 句）•2）对图表所包含的信息进项详细的分析和比较（2~3段）•结尾段：对所描述的图表信息进行总结（1~2句）•三、图表题写作 1．审题：• －先看文字信息－把握主题 • －再看图标信息－把握具体信息 • Eg.p28• 横坐标：时间1950－1996（时态？） • 纵坐标：数据（单位？）• 图表标题：world grain harvested area,1950-19962.Introduction 写作通过改写题目（同义词转换，句式结构改変，增减细节）完成引言段写作 • Eg.请改写P28的题目• 比较原题与改写后的introduction 有什么不同之处：• The graph below shows the area of land from which grain was harvested. • This line graph above illustrates the total world grain harvested areas inmillions of hectares between 1950 and 1996. • 同义词转换：show- illustrate ，reveal ，depict, demonstrate, compare, give someinformation about …,• 句式转换：the total grain harvested areas• 增加细节：in millions of hectares , between 1950 and 1996注意：为避免plagiarism,一定要对题目进行改头换面。

雅思小作文图表题主体段讲义1. Before writing – planning1.1 What to write – content1.1.1. Summarize Features, not list data•a1, a2, a3, … , an•Trend•Max / Min•Slope1.1.2. Comparisons within the chart or between the charts1.1.3. Select Main Features (recreates the picture in the examiner’s mind)1.1.4. Supporting Data1.1.5. Report facts, not opinions1.2 How to write – structure1.2.1. How to Paragraph?•New idea, new paragraph•Introduction – Main body -- Conclusion (if needed)1.2.2. Paragraphs•Multiple Charts/graphsIntroductionChart 1Chart 2…Comparison•Single Chart/graphIntroductionFeature 1Feature 2…Conclusion (if needed)2. Writing例题1. 剑四p100You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The chats below gave information about travel to and from The UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.Planning – structure:Introduction – graph 1(line graph) – graph 2(bar chart) – comparison 2.1. Introduction (paragraph 1)2.1.1. words⏹chart = graph = diagram （注意单复数）•line, curve•bar, column•pietable = figures = statistics⏹give information about （时态：一般现在时，是否是三单）•reveal•indicate•demonstrate•show⏹the UK = Britain⏹popular•favorite / fashionable / stylish⏹UK residents to visit•UK travelers / visitors / tourists⏹(Time)•in 19992.1.2. sentence structure⏹Passive Voice•The chart shows A. (do)• A is shown by the chart. (be done)E.g. The line chart reveals visits to and from the UK.Visits to and from the UK are revealed in the line chart.⏹Compound SentenceE.g. The line chart reveals …, and the bar graph indicates …The line chart reveals …, and …are indicated in the bar graph.2.1.3. sample writingThe line chart reveals visits to and from Britain and UK travelers’top 5 favorite nations in 1999 are indicated in the bar graph.2.2. Main body2.2.1. Linking devices⏹Between paragraphs•According to the chart,line chartupper / lower chartchart 1chart of visits to and from the UK⏹Between Features•also / besides / in addition (用在句首) / and / as well as / while (用在句中) •but / however / conversely / on the contrary / (用在句首) /•in particular / particularly / to be more exact2.2.2 Sentence structure⏹Basic Structure 1The visits increased greatly from about 12 to 57 million from 1979 to 1999.(1) (2) (3) (4) (5)(1) Subjects•SynonymsUK visitors / travelers / tourists•it / theyThe visits increased from 1979 to 1999. In particular, they increased most quickly from 1985 to 1988.(2) Verbs (注意时态)•increase: decrease / rise : fall•go up: come down•climb: slide•ascend: decline•rocket: collapse•keep / remain unchanged / constant / stable• fluctuate•double / triple / quadruple•is expected / predicted to increase （未来预测）(3) Adverbs•sharply / rapidly / swiftly•slowly / gradually / tardily•greatly / vastly / considerably•slightly / marginally / minutely(4) Numbers•about / around / roughly / more or less•from about 12 to 53 million(5) Time•from 1979 to 1999•between 1979 and 1999during the 20 years / two decadesstarting from 1979⏹Basic Structure 2 (there be 句型)There was a sharp increase in the visits from about 12 to 53 million from 1979(3) (2) (1) (4) (5)to 1999.⏹Basic Structure 3 （名词做主语）A sharp increase was seen in the visits from about 12 to 53 million from(3) (2) (6) (1) (4)1979 to 1999.(5)(3)(2) noun subject (adj+n)• a sharp / slow / great / slight increase•an upward / rising / increasing tendency• a downward / falling / decreasing trend(6) verb (被动语态)•show / prove / witness (was shown/ was proved/ was witnessed)(2) 名词主语•decline/fall/drop/decrease•increase/riseGraph 1Sample writing:•According to the line chart, both UK tourists abroad and overseas ones to the UK went up from 1979 to 1999 and the former climbed more markedly than the latter. In 1979, UK visitors were only around 2 million more than their overseas counterparts, being approximately 12 and 10 million respectively. However, two decades later, they almost doubled the foreign travelers to Britain (roughly 53 and 27 million separately). Graph 2Sample writing:•The bar graph demonstrates that France and Spain were the favorite countries for UK tourists in 1999, which attracted around 11.0 and 9.5 million UK visitors respectively. Remotely following were the USA, Greece and Turkey with 4.0, 3.5 and 2.0 million travelers separately.2.3 结尾段: Comparison•What is also worth mentioning is that France and Spain alone accounted for almost 40 percent of UK tourists abroad in 1999, if the two diagrams are considered as a whole.3. After writing – check3.1 spelling大小写、标点符号3.2 grammatical mistakes主谓一致（三单）动词：时态、语态名词：单复数。