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如何通过有效审题来提高写作速度!关于审题1. 30s 读懂题目生词: 现场—猜在家—通读机经2. 1m 判断题型—回忆结构—预计文章body段篇幅3. 3m-8m 列出body段的提纲(points/ideas)列出—筛选—对于驳论文决定立场—重新排序Brainstorming: 越多越好筛选: 没有词汇支持、很难讲清楚的、论证力度较弱的选择立场: 论据充分,容易写重新排序: 分段At home VS nursing house优点1. 与家人情感交流1. friends: topic & interest2. 方便照顾2. pro. Medical care→ Customized emergency3. 尽孝道→责任义务3. colorful life→ 单身4. share house work 4. we won’t be distracted→ adult children can 同左focus on career反方缺点5. 右边费用高5.子女工作忙,在家孤独服务不好排序1. pro medical care→ healthproblem→ facility+equipment+staff→ care→emergency→quicklyrespond→ accident/tragedy2. adult children don’t need to worryabout…→ focus on career3. friends+activity→ peers→ share same topic and interest→ psychological problems can be avoided. → children have little time→ job to dobody段1示范Most obviously and importantly, aged parents can be well tended in nursing houses. As is known to all, old people, usually suffering from the pain of diseases or the potential health hazards, can receive professional care in nursing houses, where first-class medical facilities are equipped and experienced staff are always available. Furthermore, when emergency happens, nursing houses will definitely responde more promptly than children who are not likely to be with their parents all the time, and for this reason, accidents and tradegy can be avoided. At a deeper level, adults don’t have to be distracted to worry about their parents, so they can better focus on their career, which benefits the society to some extent.Admittedly, staying in home and being taken care of by their own children can give old people a stronger sense of family bound. However, for most people, nursing houses offer more advantages and minimize the possible risks. Therefore, …重申立场Some people think that the use of aircraft is not practical and causes many problems thus should be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?***驳论文段落结构1. 开头段: 话题引入(背景句)+考题观点改写+ 本人立场中立--清晰写明2. body段(2-3paras): 支持/反对的原因3. 让步:(反方观点的理由) (yes and no 中立时应该和正面篇幅相当)4. 结尾段: 重申立场(yes or no/ A or B 可以和让步合并在一段)Some people think that the use of aircraft is not practical and causes many problems thus should be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?I. 开头段A: 背景句思路—话题引出Tips:1. 逻辑完整2. 可以借助功能句: 内容决定语言Nowadays, …are playing increasingly ***part/role in /when…⏹ In the present days, with the development of (thanks to ***)…, *** is becoming more and more *** …⏹ Today the way we do ……is heavily influenced by XXXX.⏹ Recent years has witnessed the great development/changes of XXX.3. 开头句思路从论据联想(把正文中可能不需要详细拓展的论据,写在开头段)4. 名人名言,举例,报道,新闻,故事。
真题示范:1.Tourism is becoming good source of revenue for many countries. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of exploiting this resource.2.What is your opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food?(2002,10;2003,1;2004,4)3.In 1995,an Englishman killed a burglar who broke into his house. He was sentenced. Do you think he should be sentenced ? How can we protect our property?4.With the development of a market economy. Advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry, despite the rich information brought by television. There still exists strong criticism against television advertisement. Write an article analyzing the positive and negative effects of television advertisement.5.作业:version:000121(2005年G类新题)Some people think that visitors to other countries imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views and give your own opinion.主体和方向例文讲解:真题重现:1.Some people think that people at the age of 55 and over should be encouraged to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. Do you agree or disagree?2.A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Give the reasons for this and a proposal for a solution.(2003) 主体相似方向不同:3.Computers are widely used for education and some people think that teachers will not play important role in the classroom. Disagree or agree?4.People use computers when they work, go banking and so on, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5.Some people think that traditional techniques and modern technology are incompatible.To what extent do you agree or disagree?6.Oriental session7.Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what should government do?8.Is it possible for a woman to be a good mother and a successful career woman at the same time? some people agree that government should pay some money to women so that they can stay at home to look after their children. Do you agree or disagree?9.Modern technology, such as fertilizer and machinery has changed our world so much.What are the advantages and disadvantages? Discuss10.There have been many technological developments in the 20th century. For example, computer and electric power. Choose either of them, describe the change it has brought about and discuss whether all the changes are positive.11.作业:What are the purposes of places, such as museums and how should they be funded?审题和构思后如何展开段落题目重现:首段展开1.电视对儿童的影响?正面还是负面?你的观点A.Television is the most popular form of entertainment in the modern household.(引入话题)people of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average offour hours a day.(发展话题)thus, television has had a tremendous influence on itsviewers, especially children.(缩小话题范围指电视对孩子的影响)scientists nowsay that children can be negatively effected by constantly watching television.(继续缩小范围至电视对孩子的负面影响)。
雅思写作A、G类大作文讲义主讲:何刚欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材学术类写作共两道题目,写作任务1和写作任务2。
你必须回答这两道题目。
任务2比任务1分值比重大。
近几年中国学生雅思总分5.4---5.5,写作5.1---5.2雅思议论文How are Task 2 answers assessed?Examiners assess the answers according to these criteria:Task Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective)∙Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organised and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ∙Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)∙Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)5分作文要求:对于任务的回应●只是部分回应题目要求,格式在有的地方不得体●有立场,但论证并不总是清晰,可能没写结论●提出了一些主要观点,但这些观点有限,论证不够充分;可能有无关细节连贯与衔接●信息的呈现有些组织,但缺少整体延续性●衔接手段的使用不充分,不准确或者过度●缺少指代和替换关系,导致重复●没有分段,或者分段不充分词汇资源●词汇有限,仅仅满足最低要求●在拼写和构词法方面有明显错误,以至于导致阅读的部分困难语法结构的范围和准确性●只能使用有限的句型●试图使用复杂句,但准确度不如简单句●语法和标点经常错误,这些错误导致阅读部分困难6分作文要求:对于任务的回应●回应题目要求,虽然有的部分涵盖不够完整●立场切题,虽然结论可能不清晰或重复●主要观点切题,但有的观点可能论证不够充分或不清晰连贯与衔接●信息和观点组织连贯;文章有延续性●衔接手段使用有效,但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械●指代关系可能不能总是清晰、合理地使用●有分段,但不总是有逻辑性词汇资源●使用适当范围的词汇●试图使用较不常见词汇,但有一些不准确●在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交际语法结构的范围和准确性●能使用简单和复杂句子结构●语法和标点出现一些错误,尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。
21.a rising crime rate 犯罪率上升22.drain of energy and resources 能源和资源消耗23.offer more job opportunities 提供更多的就业机会24.a rapid pace of life 快节奏生活25.stress-related illnesses 与压力有关的疾病26.high cost of living 高额生活费用27.pastoral life 田园生活28.class polarization 阶级两极分化29.social welfare 社会福利30.give special care to … 给予…特殊关照31.urban sprawl 城市扩张32.convenient transportation means 便捷的交通工具33.better medical services 更好的医疗服务34.pressure of modern life in city 城市生活压力35.be vulnerable to … 易于患上…36.melting pot 熔炉37.on the brink of … 处于…边缘38.pollutant 污染性物质39.waste disposal 废物处理40.put the blame on … 归咎于…41.be attrib utable to … 归因为…42.ways of consumption 消费方式43.suffer heavy losses 遭受重大损失44.citizen 居民45.be confronted with… 面临着…46.breed crimes 滋生犯罪47.vicious cycle 恶性循环48.a feasible measure 一种可行的措施49.give priority to … 优先考虑…50.city plan 城市规划。
6 艺术,娱乐艺术重要性1 艺术是一种特殊的语言regarded as a language that conveys information to the masses,传递一般语言所不能传递的东西(convey the ineffable)2 艺术是自我表现的一种方式a means of expression,用抽象的语言来表达复杂的观点和情感symbolize complex ideas and emotions in an arbitrary language3 艺术可以提高人们的逻辑能力reasoning 和想象力visualizing4 艺术关注当代生活focus on contemporary life, 帮助人们了解并接受社会新的特点help the masses to assimilate new features of society5 艺术展示了人和自然办界的关系humankind’s relation to the natural world反对限制艺术自由1 艺术丰富文化生活enrich cultural life,提高人们生活质量enhance the quality of life2 提高艺术鉴赏能力develop aesthetic appreciation 有助于鼓励艺术表演者,音乐人,艺术家和写手积极投入艺术创作encourage development, recognition and appreciation of local performers, musicians, artists and writers3 在作品中加入政治信息embed a political message in their work,让一些社会问题受到公众的关注place some issues under the limelight反对限制艺术自由1 有助于杜绝色情作品,暴力作品art works with violent images ,鼓吹种族主义的作品art works that promote racism 从而创造一个健康的艺术氛围语言1 语言反映文化 a particular language was born from a particular culture2 学语言的目的是有效地交流,而交流离不开对对方文化背景的了解understand the speaker’s cultural background3 学语言就要背单词学语法learn rules of grammar and memorize vocabulary4 学文化浪费时间learning culture is a waste of timeIn order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disgree?多元文化1 必然的,不可逆的趋势inevitable an irreversible trend2 提升人们生活质量improve people’s living standard3 加强了不同文之间的相互沟通,理解,尊重enhance communication, appreciation and respect among different cultures4 移民语言障碍,文化冲突immigrants’ language barrier, culture shock5 歧视,宗教矛盾,公共治安部问题discrimination, religious conflict, public order issue Multicultural societies, which are a mixture of different ethnic groups, bring more benefits than drawbacks for a country. To what extent to you agree or disagree?词汇unique 独一无二的representative 有代表性的poem sculpture 雕刻pursuit 追求beijing Opera 京剧cross-talk 相声vocabulary 词汇grammar 语法dialect 方言idiom 成语memorize 记住effectively and efficiently 有效的和有效率的repetitive learning 重得记忆learn by rote 死记硬背inevitable 不可避免的,必然的multicultural 多元文化的interdependent相互依赖的ethnic种族的religion 宗教,信仰discrimination歧视culture shock 文化冲突assimilate 使同化Subjective 主观的objective 客观的abstract 抽象的mindset 思维方式ideology意识形态virtue 美德outdated values 过时的价值观life goal 人生目标attitude 态度Reality 现实Creative artists should be given freedom to express their ideas through words, pictures ,music or films. Some people nevertheless think that the government should restrict artists’freedom of expression. To what extent do you agree or disagree?The advance of science and technology has a significant impact on people, but the role of artists is also important, such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?艺术和科学的区别体现在以下一些方面1 艺术取决于人对事物欣赏的角度one’s perspective, individuality and context, 而科学是客观的。
Cause and EffectCause:because ofas a result ofdue tothanks toowing tobecauseassinceforResult:as a resultas a consequenceaccordinglyin this waythushencesotherefore妇女不应该当兵,因为她们的体力不如男子。
Women should be join in the armyWomen should not be a member of the armyWomen should not take up a military careerbecause they are not as strong as menbecause they are inferior to men in physical strengthbecause of their physical inadequaciesIn many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?范文:Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whatever they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from.在许多国家,由于出生率的下降,家庭规模越来越小。
第一章雅思写作话题范围分析——写作话题范围的固定性•老百姓话题•政府话题•人与周围世界的关系雅思写作要求考生在限定时间内就给定的话题以英文表达自己的想法,目的是考察考生的英文写作能力和分析问题、逻辑思维能力及论证能力。
因此所给的写作话题不带任何专业色彩,是为广大考生所熟悉的话题。
雅思作文G类题目都很简单,就是大家日常生活中经常接触的话题;A类作文80-90%的话题与G类相同,只是问题方式难度增加,另外还有一些话题,如国家之间的关系问题,只出现在A类题目中。
实际上A类话题更广泛、更学术一些。
尽管雅思作文题层出不穷,纵观数学考题,我们可以把所有题目归纳为以下三大类话题;•老百姓话题•政府话题•人与周围世界的关系考生一旦了解这些常考话题,平时就可以随时有针对性地积累写作素材,为考场的写作做充分的准备。
下面我们就具体地分析一下各大类话题所覆盖的题目,使考生全面了解范围。
一、老百姓话题上述三大话题中出题数量最多,考题最贴近考生生活的是关于老百姓的话题。
仔细分析,这部分话题又可以做出如下的划分:1.个人一生中各个年龄段遇到的需求权衡利弊、全面考虑之后做出抉择的问题。
我们一生当中,在各个阶段会遇到不同的棘手问题需要我们费心思考、花时间和精力解决。
这些问题和我们的生活密切相关,因此完全是大家熟悉的话题,当然也是雅思写作常考话题。
备考的学员可以按照人从小到老的顺序,想一想哪些问题需要我们个人解决,哪些大事需要我们决定。
如此一想,雅思作文2/3的题目已经在大家的准备之中了。
从成年人的视角来看,在孩子上学之前,最大的麻烦事找人看孩子、送孩子入托的问题。
这个问题在现实生活中是如何解决的?在我们国家,很多家庭是有爷爷、奶奶、姥姥、姥爷们帮忙把孩子带到上幼儿园的年龄。
但这种做法的利与弊雅思作文并不考,原因很简单:西方国家不存在这种现象。
不能依赖老人帮忙,还能怎么解决呢?于是不少母亲放弃职业在家带孩子(考题),也有越来越多的家庭把很小的孩子就送去上幼儿园(考题)。
第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习) 1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopardy) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard tofight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)Poor children can face problems when they grow up.2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. TakeChina for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films. 亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影. Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could oftenperform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧X,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.Supposition假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly likethe buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.=in many fields. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked on the information era. –he has embarked on the road of committing crimes.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句 2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the advantages brought about by the profound social changes have come some sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.Please analyze causes of traffic congestion, and give some solutions. Accompanying all the conveniences brought about by violent social changes have come some negative effects, and traffic congestion is the most pressing one / the most serious one.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.Traffic offenses have become a problem confronting modern people, please give some suggestions of how to deal with it effectively.With the incidence of traffic accidents hovering at high level, many people, especially sociologist and anthropologist, have shown great concern.7) In this day a nd age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. Many of them cannot spare some time to take care of their children,which has led to some serious social consequences. This essay will make some analysis concerning this phenomenon.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.Juvenile delinquency is an issue/topic worth our concern / discussion / analysis.Efforts will be made to analyze this topic in this essay.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into public attention / widespread concern.10) Howev er, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.Some people hold that the experimentation on animals is justified. However, others believe that this practice is a reflection of cruelty. From my perspective, it is advantageous to some degree whilst its drawbacks can never be overlooked. / As for some experiments, animals are irreplaceable subjects but I think we should be kind as possible as we can when carrying out these experiments. /I think this practice is to some extent cruel and unjust to animals but at least in the near future we cannotget rid of it completely.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. Accompanied by the dramatic development of society, women crimes have been growing at an alarming rate. Such a grave situation has aroused widespread concern, especially sociologist and educationists. In essay attempts will be made to explore the causes of this issue and provide some feasible solutions.12) Whether…has triggered /aroused heated debate / discussion.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…is a controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/ argue/hold/maintain/claim/assume that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lowercosts.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople throughout the world can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.Flight to transport fruits to places where there is no such fruits or not in season.Mobile phones can bring about some drawbacks such diseases. Whether we should avoid using mobile phones.People throughout the world / in every corner of the world can profit from the advancement of information technology. Nowadays we can keep in touch with each other and communicate with our friends or clients quickly by means of mobiles phones. However, some research reveals that mobile phone may cause some medical complaints and thus it is suggested that we should cease using them. In my viewpoint, the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3,S omething plays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4, Enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new societysuccessfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can have access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilize somethingIn this day and age, many individuals can have access to the Internet via /by means of computer or mobile phone.倒退类1…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by severe pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impe ls somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.With the acceleration of living tempo, modern people are confronted with many physical and psychological problems. Among them, stress is the most prominent one. This has brought about numerous negative social consequences and aroused widespread concern especially among psychiatrists and sociologist. This essay focuses on exploring the causes and providing some ways to relieve stress.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the organization / association / institution /union / scientist reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in water scarcity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a large number of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live,play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned ratherthan condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者something is of paramount/ overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessit ates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.8 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看… 3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something,prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for第二讲十大全真版本X文,词汇与模板Education 类Some peoplethink students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating theteachers to improve their lectures.Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure of students' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is in the best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分X文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (X文里用横线标明) 关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱,名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there has been no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational. Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largely grow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement) First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiences of parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financialstrains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams. Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all thedisadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get their families upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabs on their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience in comprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) andemotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/ upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill 3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas,theorems and laws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake 5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv) 6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学生disruptive/ unruly students 8) 理论只是theoretical knowledge 通才generalist 专才specialist 全面发展的well-rounded /versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献contribute to societal well-being/ welfare (注意这里welfare不是"福利"的意思)9) 大学学科的分类可以分为:人文学科(包括文学,历史,语言学等)humanities 社会科学(包括政治,经济,社会学等)social sciences 艺术(包括音乐,雕塑等)arts 文科的总称也可以称为liberal arts 或者liberal studies 理科(包括物理,化学,生物等)sciences 工科(包括工程,自动化等)engineering 大学里的任何一个学科都可以叫做一个discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育primary-level education 中学教育secondary-level education 大学教育tertiary-level education 职业教育vocational education/ training 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youthsEducation 类模板1 In this day and age, it is universally acknowledged that education is one of the key determinant of individual success. 众所周知,在当代教育是一个人成功的决定因素之一.2In contemporary society, education plays a pivotal role in individual development. 在当代社会,教育在个人发展中扮演着至关重要的角色.Technology & media 类科技类2/26 people today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole开头段(不少于3+1句)The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This。
大作文写作讲义大作文写作步骤●审题——1分钟●提纲——3分钟●开头——5分钟●中间——25分钟●结尾——3分钟●检查——3分钟●总共:40分钟审题:●杜绝看不懂题目!●杜绝跑题!通扫所有大作文题目:●写作教程P94-182:●议论文题型分析●精彩范文●最新范文●白皮书P118-144:●题目+ argument●同黄皮书P34-43●Broad topic—topic—specific topicWith computers, people can now shop, bank, work and communicate from home. The danger is that people could become isolated from each other and lost social skills which help them to get along with others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their opinion?科技——电脑——电脑与人际关系、社交技能●Circle/underline the key words!●写作针对specific topic! Otherwise it isIRRELEV ANT!例:There is an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. Analyze the possible causes of this phenomenon and offer some recommendations.●重点:原因分析——为什么越来越多跑题文章汇总:●教程●13●22●105●讲义●177●178●英文论文的写作原则●理清写作思路●确保清晰结构●论证有话可说1.文章风格2.结构3.POWER结构:●Beginning—view of point1.Background2.Transition3.View of point4.40 words-3 sentences●Body—supporting ideas: 2-31.Topic sentence2.Supporting ideas3.Transitional sentence4.180 words-10 sentences●Ending—repetition of the opening1.30 words-2/3 sentences注意点:1.There is no need for you to create a title; (讲义117)2.Be sure to present your view in the lastsentence of the first paragraph.3.Be sure the topic sentences can be identifiedas the first one of each paragraph in thebody.4. 3 to 5 complex sentences are indispensableif your want to get a band over 6范文阅读:●教程15—过渡痕迹明显●教程16●(讲义P171:专业招收男女生比例——聪明的借鉴)提高写作水平:1.Read extensively to broaden your horizon;(ideas + outline + 文章自读)2.Read intensively to learn sentence patterns;(范文阅读)3.Imitate to assimilate yourself to the westernstyle;4.PRACTICE!!!练开头/结尾练论证手法优秀句型造句Learn to summarize:●Many people believe that women makebetter parents than men and that this is whythey have the greater role in raising childrenin most societies. Others claim that men arejust as good as women at parenting.●Write an essay expressing your point ofview.1.Agree with the former.2.As a result of conditioning3.Less aggressive nature4.Better communication skills5.Conclusion提纲练习:●写作教程:choose 3 out of them●104——动物:肉乎?朋友乎?●118——汽车的作用●119——大公司/小公司?●128——科技导致文化趋同?●130——入乡随俗/我行我素?●137——体育与学习:孰轻孰重?文章阅读:●教程●35-38—比较阅读●18-太空研究值否?●26-大学学术/实用?●114-飞机的作用●126-女子学校?●127-科技与文化趋同●131-入乡随俗/我行我素●141-性格的形成●143-教育学术/实用●144-大学教育实用性●145-挑战权威●149-动物实验●150-动物园●153-老年人退休●156-竞争与合作●157-孩子犯罪谁负责●159-工作为钱/成就感●161-青年问题●162-女性参军●163-警察带枪●166-成功与理论知识●170-计算机的危害●174-全球化的利弊●176-动物还是人?●179-大学的功能●180-环境问题国际合作●182, 185, 186-广告文章欣赏:●教程●148——快乐的定义●160——能力与报酬●169——信息的审查●172——电子辅导●188——广告的作用●189——广告时代●可借用想法●不适合模仿Power●Plan●Outline●Write●Edit●RewriteBrainstorming●Many parents send their childrenabroad to study. Discuss theadvantages and disadvantagesabout this. Do you think whenwill be a suitable age to send themabroad.BranchingOutline:I.IntroductionII.BodyA. …1. …a. …i. …B. …C. …III.ConclusionBe sure that you have put two main ideas in different paragraphs.开头:●说明现状1.It is a fact of life that…2.It has been widely noted that…3.There is a growing tendencynowadays for some people to …●表明问题1.There is much discussionnowadays as to whether or not …2. A criticism often heard these daysis that…3.This raises serious doubts about…4.Some maintain…, whereas othersare convinced that…●作者观点1.To be frank, I am in high favourof …2.Personally, I am convinced that…3.For my part, I share the latterpoint of view and I will give twomajor reasons why this is so.4.Here I will discuss the pros andcons of the issue.结尾:1.重申2.让步3.谚语/格言4.建议5.All in all,6.To sum up,7.In a word,8.To cut a long story short,9.From what has been discussed above, wemay safely draw the conclusion that…10.Weighing the pros and cons of thedouble-edged sword, I’m inclined to agreewith the latter point of view.写作技巧:●Definition: happiness●Example:●Anecdote●Adage●Typical events●中国古代的例子不要出现●Comparison and contrast●Block to block●Point to point●Cause and effect●因果关系词●Statistics●Metaphor●My love is red, red rose.因果关系词:选5个造句Not because A but because BReading work:●写作教程P41-50:●关联词的运用●文章的连贯性不能容忍的错误:1.Plural and singular forms 单复数/主谓一致Nowadays anyone who study at university need to learn how to use computer.1.Part of speech 词性The develop of personal computers effect on people’s lives because small businesses can easy afford them and this makes their work more efficiency.1.Tense 时态The number of household utility consumption was rising between 1990 and 2000.1.Preposition 介词He appears to be very experienced with dealing with people.Have a knowledge and sensitivity of the culture of the recipient, and you will have an invaluable chance to earn respect and establish a durable relationship.5.及物/不及物动词He rose the matter at the meeting.6.副词的位置Success only can be achieved through hard work.6.冠词Horse is a useful animal to human beings.6.There be句型There are many people would agree with this statement.6.Spelling 拼写: monk—monkey7.Punctuation 标点The money should be spent improving facility in old homes, that will help provide a more comfortable environment for old people.(写作教程P21)不同句式:1.In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully andwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(副词短语+并列句)2.The goats grazed peacefully in the farm andwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(并列句)3.The goats were grazing peacefully in thefarm, unaware of the approaching hunter.(简单句+形容语短语)4.Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farmwere unaware of the approaching hunter.(现在分词+简单句)5.As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm,they were unaware of the approachinghunter. (原因从句+主句) 组成长句:The graph is about student numbers in the UK.The number of students in higher education has risen. The rise has taken place over the last five years.Students were asked how much they expect to earn when they start work.40 per cent of them expect to earn about 21,000.2 per cent expect to earn 40,000 or more.A typical police force in Britain has 2500 officers.A typical town has a population of 180,000.At any one time, there are only 10 officers patrolling the streets of a typical town.Drink-driving laws vary from country to country.In Poland it is illegal to drive with more than 20 mg of alcohol in your blood.In Italy it is illegal to drive with more than 80 mg of alcohol in your blood.1. A student acquires knowledge mainly fromthe textbook and in class.2.When he graduates from school he can donothing.3.Everything is different from what teacherstold them.4.He may be disappointed.5.He may be frustrated.6.He may be afraid to face the real world.7.Our universities have turned out people ofno use.1.Frans Mesmer was a physician.2.Frans Mesmer was from Germany.3.Frans Mesmer invented hypnotism.4.Hypnotism was invented in the eighteenthcentury.5.Hypnotism remained an amusing gimmick.6.It remained a gimmick for over a century.7.The gimmick was for nightclub acts.8.The gimmick was for parlor games.9.Physicians now use hypnotism.10.Dentists now use hypnotism.11.Psychiatrists now use hypnotism.12.Hypnotism is used to treat various ailments.13.Hypnotism is used to control chronic pain.14.Hypnotism is used as a replacement froanesthesia.用词:1.写不出想表达的词2.同一个词反复用3.好词但不知用法——放弃!!!e a simple substitute!5.Try another way:1.Negation vs. affirmation2.General vs. specific6.Abandon the idea and try for a new one.7.Accumulate your bank of vocabulary,especially of synonyms.●名词间的转化:higher education, senior education, advanced schooling, college education, academic study…●名词—动词:go to university/college, go for further study●形容词—副词:a good swimmer●变换句式:简单句/从句被动/主动语态非谓语形式倒装/虚拟/强调特殊结构:so that…, too…to, not A but B, A rather than B使用插入语注意点:1.使用齐头式:讲义176、1772.Make your writing as legible as possible;3.Make your paper as clean as possible;4.If you write task 2 in the wrong place, writedown on the margin:●Sorry for the inconveniencebrought to you because I havewritten task 2 in the wrongplace.e British English in spelling●Labour/behaviour●Metre●Cheque●Travelling etc.模仿:●Choose a topic and write an essay followingthe models provided on pages:●写作教程●95 opinion—科技与生活●97 discuss—医疗系统●98 problem + reason + solution—学校第一天●99 agree/disagree—不乖的学生●101 advantage/disadvantage—广告的利弊考虑问题的思路●经济决定一切(政治、文化、教育、基础设施)●生理走向心理(马斯洛需要层次:跳槽/养老院)●客观先于主观(全球化导致文化丧失)●有关对象排排号(孩子教育的负责人/环境治理)●内部关系先切断(国际性语言/服装与爱国/烟草)●两边谈谈折中走●正反论证好说话●追根溯源挖本质(教程19+27)●观点变态没关系●自圆其说为真理。