读写任务型 材料概括型作文 写作训练 高三英语
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第二讲如何写记叙文的主体一、题型特点读写任务型作文的主体部分一般要求写120词左右,通常包括两部分:一是衔接过渡语;二是论证自己的观点或描述类似的事例。
1.衔接过渡语:写完摘要后要用一句过渡性的语句引出自己的观点(赞成或反对)或类似的事例。
2.论证观点或描述事例:对文中的观点进行对比论证,并提出自己的观点;描述事例时要紧扣文章主题,所描述的事例能够与文章观点契合。
二、写作技巧出现在读写任务中的记叙文要求考生描述一件与原阅读材料有关联的事件,并说出自己从事件中得到的教训或对所描述现象发表自己的看法。
1.写作步骤衔接过渡描述事件发表看法2.常用过渡语句(1)This reminds me of the similar experience.(2)This story brings me back to an event many years ago.(3)I had a similar experience.【典例示范】请阅读下面的短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
(2018·盐城高三二模)Mountains.Thevillage.Cursingtos Mountains.The sun was setting when my car broke down near a remote and poor village.Cursing my misfortune,I was wondering where I was going to spend the night when I realized that the villagers who had gathered around me were arguing as to who should have the hohouse.Finallyhouse.While guest in their house.Finally, I accepted the offer of an old woman who lived alone in a little house.While she was getting me settled into a tiny but clean room, the head of the village was tying up his horse to my car to pull it to a small town some 20 kilometres away where there was a garage.table.Somehoney.Wee hens running free in my hostess’s courtyard and that night one of them ended up in a dish on my table.Some villagers brought me goat’s cheese and honey.We drank together a nd talked merrily till far into the night.When the time came for me to say goodbye to my friends in the village, I wanted to reward the old woman for the trouble I had caused her.[写作内容]1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;2.用约120个词谈谈你的感受;可以是自己亲身的经历,也可以用他人的事例。
广东高考英语基础写作训练一、写作的基本要求1、信息完整(所写的文章中一定要包含所有的写作内容)2、不超过5句话(句子的复杂性,多使用从句,非谓语动词和连词及一些复杂的句型)3、内容清楚连贯,逻辑性强(使用恰当的连词,使文章连贯)4、尽量减免语法错误二、写作技巧以及顺序A. 通篇浏览,把握整体。
浏览文章信息,并对其进行处理,将其分割成五句话,做到哪句话包含哪些信息心中有数。
B. 集中兵力,逐个击破。
在第一步的基础上,把五个句子逐一写清楚,包含所需信息。
在组织句子时注意以下几点:1. 一个句子首先要找清楚主谓宾,然后想办法拓展这句话,把其它的信息加进去。
2. 一个句子有且仅有一个谓语(并列谓语)。
3. 将多个句子并到一起,并且要做到只有一个谓语的话,有3种方法:1)使用各种连词。
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world. 句中用到and连接2个并列简单句,前后都可保留谓语,顺利将2句变成一句。
连词包括具有递进关系的并列句,如由and,then,besides,in addition, furthermore,moreover, what’s more等连接的并列句,具有转折关系的并列句,如由but,however,on the contrary, after all等连接的并列句,具有平行选择关系的并列句,如由both…and…,as well as,as well,neither…nor…or,either…or…,not only…but also…等连接的并列句。
2)使用从句。
包括含有名词性从句的复合句,含有定语从句的复合句,含有状语从句的复合句。
More than 50% of the students in China are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world.3)使用非谓语动词,及一些特殊句型。
2022高考英语广东省普宁二中读写任务练习6篇及解析练习1阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.One morning, a friend of mine set the breakfast table beside a huge window, which overlooked the Tred Avon River. Suddenly she leaned forward and cried out, “There i s a goose out there!”We saw the figure of a large Canada goose, very still, its wings folded tight to its sides and its feet frozen to the ice.Then in the sky, she saw a line of swans. They flew from the top of the sky downward and at last landed on the ice. My friend was on her feet, with one unbelieving hand against her mouth. As the swans surrounded the frozen goose, she feared that the poor goose might be pecked out by those great swan bills.Unexpectedly, those bills began to work on the ice. The long necks were lifted and curved down (弯下) again and again. They went on for a long time. At last, the goose was free and standing on the ice. And the swans stood nearby watching. Then, as if the goose was crying, “I cannot fly”, four of the swans came down around it. Their powerful bills chipped off the ice stuck in its feathers. Slowly, the goose spread its wings as far as they would go. Seeing the goose could freely move its wings, the swans flew slowly into the sky.This is a true story. Every time I thin k of it, I can’t help asking, “If so for birds, why not for man?”【写作内容】以约30个词概括短文的含义;以约120个词写一篇关于关心别人或同意别人关心的一次经历并包含以下要点:⑴叙述你在学习或生活上关心别人或同意别人关心的一次经历;⑵阐述你对这件事的感受与体会;【写作要求】作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直截了当引用原文中的句子;文中不能显现真实的姓名和学校名称。
非常实用的高考英语“读写任务”写作模板编者:罗妍【对比观点题型】(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
(写作步骤:1.有一些人认为……;2.另一些人认为……;3.我的看法……。
) The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一). What is more, ③-------------(理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ⑦------------------(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点。
“读写任务”议论文写作导练(一)阅读下面这篇短文,按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
No one can believe that the over 6,300-kilometer Great Wall might disappear some day. Believe it or not, the Great Wall is being destroyed by people. Less than 20 percent of the Great Wall built in the Ming Dynasty is still perfect, but about 80 percent is in danger. The Great Wall can be called ―great‖ mostly because of its amazing length. But we should realize that t he length was made up of one brick at a time. If we do nothing to save the Great Wall, it will become a series of separate wasteland rather than a historic site.The Great Wall is actually a series of walls built and rebuilt by different dynasties over the past 2,000 years. It began in the rule of China’s first emperor, Qin Shihuang of the Qin Dyna sty (221 BC—206 BC), and lasted into the Ming Dynasty. The parts built before the Ming Dynasty have nearly disappeared. The bricks on the Great Wall are carried off by countryside people to build their houses, sheep corrals and pigsties. Some were taken aw ay to build roads. Bricks carved with people’s names are put away as remembrances. Rubbish is spread over the battlements. The bricks can be sold for 15 yuan per tractor load. Those who destroyed and are destroying the Wall know its name, but are not clear about its cultural meaning. It will take a long time to let them know this. The local farmers not only carried off the body of the Wall but also dug out the entire base. [写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点;2)然后以约120个词就“如何保护我国的文化遗产”的主题发表看法,并包括如下要点:a)你是如何看待我国的文化遗产遭到破坏的现象的?b)保护文化遗产有何意义;c)保护我国的文化遗产的建议。
浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导(含范文)2022届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(二十)写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,按照其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you ever intended to be fully absorbed in your work but found yourself distracted(被分心)by e-mail, the Internet and other things throughout the day? "People often lose their concentration when they are bored or when they are engaged in several challenging tasks at the same time." says Peter Bregman. "They sometimes feel the need to escape from what's difficult or boring, so they jump out," he says.The part of the brain devoted to attention is connected to the brain's emotional center. Any strong emotion--quarrels with colleagues, problems at home –can interrupt our attention. Studies over the last decade have shown that too much work to do at a time can easily lead to distraction.Refocusing is hard for many people. Robert Epstein suggests the following, "Stop and listen to music for a few minutes. Go for a short walk or take a deep breath. While you breathe in deeply, count to five slowly, hold it and breathe out very slowly." This can blow out all the tension and the unwanted in your mind to restore your focus.Take more control of what you are doing. "Setting the phone alarm to go off(响起来) every hour is my way of creating awareness of my behavior," Mr. Bregman says. "You have to inform yourself that you'velost focus inorder to do something about it." Starting the day with a to-do list is important, such as when to eat, when to go to the gym or take a walk. But if it's overly ambitious(雄心勃勃的) you will put yourself in a state of anxiety, which makes it hard for the brain to concentrate. "Choosing three or four things as your priority(优先事项) for the day allows your brain to settle down and focus," he says.二、词汇讲解1. intend to do sth 决定…,想要做…It is still far from clear what they intend to do.现在还彻低不清晰他们毕竟想做什么。
读写任务型作文复习资料模板一[写作内容]以约30词概括短文的要点。
然后,以约120词就“感恩”主题发表你的看法,并包括以下的内容:1. 根据你的学习、生活经历,简述你的感受,表达你对朋友或父母的感恩和祝福。
2. 你认为中学生应学会感恩。
3. 你的同学对这观点有何看法和建议。
Be Grateful For Our ParentsThe writer tells us a story that (上文作者告诉我们)he had an experience of recalling his old friends Michael suddenly(他突然回忆起他的朋友迈克的经历), and later they met each other at such moment that made him feel grateful to life anddidn’t feel lonely.This story reminds me of an similar experience of (这个故事让我想起了自己的一个类似经历)forgetting my mother’s birthday.On the evening of April 9th , I was watching TV while my mother was busy preparing for dinner in the kitchen. How attentive I was watching TV program when the telephone rang(当电话铃响起的时候我正聚精会神地看电视). It was from a friend of my mother’s, who wanted say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to my mother . “Today is my mother’s birthday?”I was a little puzzled(疑惑). “How come that I have forgotten all about it”I thought to myself, feeling ashamed.At the story, I got deeply shocked and ashamed.(在这件事上,我感到很震惊和羞愧)It is not easy for parents to bring us up.(养育我们)They give us lots of love and care, while/however we don’t care for them enough. Now it’s never too lateto realize this and show our love and care for them. In fact, every one of us wishesour parents to be healthy and happy, so it is with me. So , we really should expressour endless thanks (无尽的感谢)to our parents. And my classmates share my opinion. To sum up, we should be grateful for our parents because of their greatest love and unselfish care.(总之,我们应该对我们父母伟大的爱和无私的关怀表示感恩。
“读写任务式作文”写作训练Focus: 30词的摘要怎么写?(限时训练十五作文)阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pres sure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
【忌照抄原句!忌添加自己观点!30词左右!】1. 以约120个词对“春运”进一步叙写,内容包括:(1)自己亲身经历或者听闻的一次火车春运的状况;【第一人称,过去时】(2)“网上售票”引起人们不满的原因;【乘客主体是农民工,不懂购票;系统本身不够先进。
其实这两点可以从阅读材料中找到,但是必须用不同方式来表达】(3)给铁道部或者农民工提出解决“网上购票”问题的合理化建议。
【针对上一段提出的两方面问题来写】[写作要求]1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或者虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语句连贯。
【请你练习】划出每段关键词;替换成不同表达方式;关键词:transport during the Spring Festival period”,solutions,selling tickets on-line,However, passengers,blame范文:Although it is as crowded as usual during the “transport during the Spring Festival period”, many solutions have been raised. But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many passengers are dissatisfied.Last year, I, together with my parents, went to our hometown by train. At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket. Worse still, it was raining and we had to wait in queue patiently for our turn to buy tickets. This year, things are much better. We can buy tickets through Internet. However, some other problems appear.Reasons for the problems of buying tickets on-line are divided. For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. Also, the ticket-selling system is not advanced enough to cope with difficult situations.To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.一、读写任务所提供的短文体裁多样包括:议论文、记叙文(如用一个故事引出一个话题或道理)、新闻报道/说明文(说明一种现象)等。
题材多为当今社会热点问题,难度不会太高。
用大约30词来概括这篇短文的意思,不能抄袭原文中的句子。
要求概括精炼、到位。
二、概括部分包含几种能力1、看清文章的体裁和结构,反映出原文中作者的观点。
2、具有意义筛选的能力,学会区分事实和观点、重要和次要、普遍与特殊、相关与不相关、原因和结果等复杂的逻辑关系。
3、有用英文解释英文的能力,用自己简单的语言解释比较复杂的语言文字,不能抄袭原文。
三、不同文体的概括方式1、议论文----找出论点、结论,再补充论据议论文的要点:①论点②论据③结论有的议论文是对两种不同观点或相反观点的论说,我们在作文时要把两种观点的内容都概括进去。
解题指导:步骤1.认真阅读全文,确定议论文的基本结构,划出短文的论点和结论。
More and more students are doing part-time jobs in holidays. There are many advantages in students’ doing part-time jobs. For example, earning some money can support them. They can also learn a lot which can’t be learned from textbooks. They will learn to get along with different kinds of people, get useful work experience and learn to value money. Thus they will apply themselves to society more easily.However, some people think there are also some disadvantages. Too much work may reduce students’ study time when they should get the best of their school life. Thus it will have a bad effect on gaining knowledge. Another disadvantage is that money earned, if not proper used, may lead to some bad habits, or even greed.即:There are many advantages in students’ doing part-time jobs.步骤2.在文中找出各论据,改写。
论点:There are two different opinions about whether students should take a part-time job in holidays.论据一: Earning some money can support them.论据二: They will apply themselves to society more easily.论据三: It will have a bad effect on gaining knowledge.论据四:Money earned, if not proper used, may lead to some bad habits, or even greed.现在,练习用英文对上面的句子进行paraphrase (用英文解释英文),完成对原文的概括。