2019江苏高考英语读写类作文讲评-PPT课件

一. 审题到位 二. 语言丰富 三. 示范有效
目前，某某学校正在开展推选“校园形象 大使”(image ambassador on campus) 活动 。假定你是该校的一名学生，请以书信的 形式向校长推荐一位同学或者进行自荐， 并结合具体事例阐明推荐的理由。
开头段：
1. From my perspective, the most suitable person is my roommate, Sophia, who has really taught me what the word “excellence” means .
如何提高学生英语写作能力
一. 审题到位 二. 语言丰富
各类从句、强调句、倒装句、分词…
2017年1月高考作文题：
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友 李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的 海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住 宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也 可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十 小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿 的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见，写 一封回信，内容须包括：
3. It is possible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a good study method. It is not impossible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a good study method.
4. My recommendation is a top student in my class named Jack, who enjoys a good reputation among all the students of our school.

S1: I _q_u_a_rr_e_ll_ed__w_it_h my parents and I
feel they only care about my __s_tu_d_y__
S2: __M_y__w_e_i_g_h_t _keeps increasing and My classmates often_l_a_u_g_h_t_a_t me.
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
2. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions. I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
You should not only concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports. Not only should you concentrate on your study but also you are supposed to pay attention to doing sports.

1.用约30个单词概述中国不同家庭收入的学龄儿童营养与健康状况 的现象; 2.分析出儿童肥胖的原因;
3.提出对这一问题的解决方法。
典题引领
栏目索引
参考范文: The chart shows that family income greatly affects the health problems of school-age children.With the family in come increasing, their malnutrition rate has been falling, while the obesity rate has been rising. 高考导航 There are some reasons accounting for this phenomenon. On the one hand, parents with higher income spoil thei r children to such a degree that they tend to provide their children with delicious fatty foods, but ignore the importa nce of their balanced diets.On the other hand, parents with lower income cannot afford expensive nutritious food d ue to their economic squeeze, which leads to their children's malnutrition. As for the solutions to this phenomenon, parents of high-income families should increase their awareness of the s evere problem of obesity and help their children develop healthy eating habits.Meanwhile, parents of low-income f

具体事例：
1. Moreover, it was her warm heart that had left me a deep impression. There was once a classmate of hers who had trouble in getting along with others. He was so frustrated that nearly tried to commit suicide. Fortunately, thanks to Sophia’s company and patience, he was inspired to walk out of the darkness. He told me that she seemed to be an angel to him who delighted his whole world.1.Βιβλιοθήκη 对此事的明确态度； 2.你的理由。
I'm glad to hear that you have access to participate in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community aging hospital to gain a chance to stay in it for free. My reasons are as follows.
there is no better suitable person for this great honor in my heart. 2. As is known to all, the image ambassador on campus is the symbol of the whole school students. 3. Therefore, it’s necessary for him or her to get good marks in both studying and sports. 4. Another reason, which is also very important, is that he has charming appearance and elegant behavior.

*用好否定
1. The mayor is very satisfied in her work. The mayor is never dissatisfied in her work.
2. When I hear of the bird’s song, I always think of the springtime. I never hear of the bird’s song without thinking of the springtime.
I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion.
Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must have been high if you choose it. Staying in the aging hospital, the contrast couldn't be greater. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our spare time we will also spend time helping others in our society teaches us to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose it?

*用好插入语
1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold. There are people, I am sure, who will say that the water is too cold.
2. His words are right. His words, to some extent, are right.
*用好排比
1. From my observation, many people today spend their time receiving more and more education, working more and more hours, and making more and more money.
2. A leader who has respect for other people at all levels of an organization, for the work they do, and for their abilities, desires and needs, will find that respect is returned.
*用好否定
1. The mayor is very satisfied in her work. The mayor is never dissatisfied in her work.
2. When I hear of the bird’s song, I always think of the springtime. I never hear of the bird’s song without thinking of the springtime.

thinking over. 4. What he did yesterday was dissatisfactory.
What he did yesterday, by no means, was
satisfactory. 5. There is little hope of winning.
There is little, if any, hope of winning. 第七页，共十九页。
the water is too cold. 2. His words are right.
His words, to some extent, are right.
3. The question deserves thinking over.
The question, from my point of view, deserves
opportunities for promotion. I am in favor of equal rights for women,
especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as
2. 你如此建议的理由；
3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。
第六页，共十九页。
*用好插入语
1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold. There are people, I am sure, who will say that
volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our

5. There is little hope of winning.
There is little, if any, hope of winning.
*用好副词
Most researchers believe that, in theory, mobile phones are absolutely safe. 1. Tourism may promote the mutual understanding among nations. Tourism, frankly, may promote the mutual understanding among nations. 2. Comparing all the candidates, I dare to say he is the best choice. Obviously, comparing all the candidates, I dare to say he is the best choice. 3. Technological changes will lead to unemployment. Technological changes will inevitably lead to unemployment.
3. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms．They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.

【参考范文2】 Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels.These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers’ purchase
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating
means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping.For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both
One Day in 2016.At Home. Son：Mum，shall we go and see a film tonight? Mother：Why bother？We can stay at home and watch films online.It’s convenient with
3.不必写标题。

I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion.
你是王华，临近寒假，你的好朋友刘伟写 信向你咨询他的寒假计划。目前有三个备 选方案，一. 去美国某高中参加冬令营; 二. 应征某历史博物馆临时讲解员；三. 提前学 习下学期的高中课程。请给刘伟写回信， 谈谈你的看法。信中必须包括： 1. 你建议的方案； 2. 你如此建议的理由； 3. 你对于执行此方案的建议。
*用好否定
1. The mayor is very satisfied in her work. The mayor is never dissatisfied in her work.
2. When I hear of the bird’s song, I always think of the springtime. I never hear of the bird’s song without thinking of the springtime.
Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must have been high if you choose it. Staying in the aging hospital, the contrast couldn't be greater. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our spare time we will also spend time helping others in our society teaches us to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose it?

*用好否定
1. The mayor is very satisfied in her work. The mayor is never dissatisfied in her work.
2. When I hear of the bird’s song, I always think of the springtime. I never hear of the bird’s song without thinking of the springtime.
1.你对此事的明确态度； 2.你的理由。
I'm glad to hear that you have access to participate in an overseas communication activity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community aging hospital to gain a chance to stay in it for free. My reasons are as follows.
*用好插入语
1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold. There are people, I am sure, who will say that the water is too cold.
2. His words are right. His words, to some extent, are right.

如何提高学生英语写作能力
一. 审题到位 二. 语言丰富
各类从句、强调句、倒装句、分词…
2017年1月高考作文题：
假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你的好友 李宏今年暑假将赴英国参加为期两个月的 海外交流活动。如果选择主办方安排的住 宿，他需要额外支付较高的费用。但他也 可以通过为当地社区养老院提供每月三十 小时的义工服务，获得在养老院免费住宿 的机会。李宏通过邮件向你征求意见，写 一封回信，内容须包括：
*用好排比
1. From my observation, many people today spend their time receiving more and more education, working more and more hours, and making more and more money.
there is no better suitable person for this great honor in my heart. 2. As is known to all, the image ambassador on campus is the symbol of the whole school students. 3. Therefore, it’s necessary for him or her to get good marks in both studying and sports. 4. Another reason, which is also very important, is that he has charming appearance and elegant behavior.
3. The question deserves thinking over. The question, from my point of view, deserves thinking over.

*用好排比
1. From my observation, many people today spend their time receiving more and more education, working more and more hours, and making more and more money.
2. A leader who has respect for other people at all levels of an organization, for the work they do, and for their abilities, desires and needs, will find that respect is returned.
3. The question deserves thinking over. The question, from my point of view, deserves thinking over.
4. What he did yesterday was dissatisfactory. What he did yesterday, by no means, was satisfactory.
I hope that you will take my advice, best wishes that you will have a good time there, it is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation. In short, enjoy yourself. (18分)
there is no better suitable person for this great honor in my heart. 2. As is known to all, the image ambassador on campus is the symbol of the whole school students. 3. Therefore, it’s necessary for him or her to get good marks in both studying and sports. 4. Another reason, which is also very important, is that he has charming appearance and elegant behavior.

2. Hearing the activity of selecting an image ambassador on campus, I’d like to recommend my classmate, Sophia, who is our spiritual leader.
3. From my perspective, Jack is significantly better than any other candidate in our school.
3. The question deserves thinking over. The question, from my point of view, deserves thinking over.
4. What he did yesterday was dissatisfactory. What he did yesterday, by no means, was satisfactory.
4. My recommendation is a top student in my class named Jack, who enjoys a good reputation among all the students of our school.
中间段： 1. He has so many admirable personal qualities that
Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you can reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must have been high if you choose it. Staying in the aging hospital, the contrast couldn't be greater. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It sounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our spare time we will also spend time helping others in our society teaches us to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things at the same time”, so why not choose it?

I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion.
*用好插入语
1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold. There are people, I am sure, who will say that the water is too cold.
2. His words are right. His words, to some extent, are right.
3. The question deserves thinking over. The question, from my point of view, deserves thinking over.
4. What he did yesterday was dissatisfactory. What he did yesterday, by no means, was satisfactory.
3. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms．They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.