人教版英语必修一 Unit1 Writing 建议性写作优质课件

5.Third(ly),it would be a good idea if you...By doing this,you will... 第三,如果你……将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会…… 6.I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) iபைடு நூலகம்vite 邀请
(2) as for
至于
(3) pay attention to
注意
(4) be cautious about 对……谨慎
(5) advise sb.to do 建议某人做……
(6) of great value
有价值的
(7) make sense
有意义;明智的
Let them know ahead of time that you need a fork or spoon.
(2)词句升级 ⑦把第①句变成被动语态 I hear you are invited to have dinner at your Chinese friend’s house. ⑧用I don’t think作主句把第②句变成宾语从句 I don’t think there is much for you to pay attention to. ⑨把第③句变成宾语从句 I strongly advise that you should arrive 5 minutes earlier. ⑩把第⑤句和第⑥句用or合成一个并列句 You’d better practice using chopsticks in advance or let them know ahead of time that you need a fork or spoon.

建议信
是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。
建议信有可能是写给某个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观 点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。
提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。建议信要写得简明扼要 、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在 时和一般将来时。 具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陈述建议，具体为：
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter). _______________________
Tell the reader you understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reasons. Tell the reader what you think will happen.
A.I know what the problem is. Your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
B I understand how you feel. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
Read the passage on Page 18 again and figure out the organization of the letter Write down the sentences from the passage that match the following points.

• Last but not least , you should make more friends with Chinese people. By doing this, you can practice your spoken Chinese with them.
• I hope you will find these ideas useful. • •
3. 让陌生人不管在何处，都能感受到你的善意。 要关心别人胜过关心自己. Thirdly, it would be better if you can let strangers feel your kindness. You can care for others more than yourself.
grateful if you could give me some advice.
Paragraph one
Dear Xiao Dong ,
I’m glad to receive your letter(简单表示感谢) . I
am really sorry you are having trouble in making
4. 与别人有分歧时，不要争吵，要商讨。 Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的), do not argue with others but talk with them when you are disagree with each others.
不要相信那些在朋友有难时离开的人，因为“患 难之交才是真正的朋友”。（A friend in need is a friend indeed.）
In a word, don’t trust/ believe in those who choose to leave when friends are in trouble. Because a friend in need is a friend indeed.

步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形 现
（1）我们不能用电脑室的电脑上网。 We _c_a_n_n_o_t_u_s_e__th_e__co_m__p_u_te_r__ in the computer classroom to get on line. （2）这让我们很不安。 It __m__a_k_e_s_u_s__v_e_ry__u_p_se_t____. （3）我们不能搜索我们需要的信息或阅读新闻。 We _c_a_n_’_t _s_e_a_rc_h__fo_r_t_h_e_i_n_fo_r_m_a_t_io_n___ we need or read news.
假如你是李华，外教Jerry老师给你上课已一个多学期，他希望同学们对他 的教学提出意见和建议。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他写一封建议信 。 1. 讲课语速再慢点； 2. 将西方文化与教学相结合； 3. 组织课外活动； 4. 其他建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 请分段，书写规范，卷面整洁。
Dear Jerry, My classmates and I really enjoy your excellent
teaching, but ____________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________