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高一英语unit1建议信Dear Principal,I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to suggest some improvements that could enhance our school environment and student experience.Firstly, I believe we should consider adding more extracurricular activities. Clubs related to science, art, and sports can help students discover their passions and develop new skills. This would not only make school life more enjoyable but also encourage teamwork and creativity.Secondly, I suggest improving the school library by increasing the number of new books and providing more comfortable reading spaces. A well-equipped library can inspire students to read more and enhance their learning experience.Lastly, organizing regular workshops or seminars on topics like mental health and study skills would greatly benefit students. These sessions can provide valuable insights and support for managing academic pressure.Thank you for considering my suggestions. I believethese changes will greatly enhance our school community.Sincerely,[Your Name].中文翻译：亲爱的校长：希望您一切安好。
名师作文：Unit1 建议信的写作建议信的写作：写作典例：假如你是李华，请根据下表内容，给你校校长写一封100词左右的建议信。
现状：吃饭时人太多，排队要花很长时间；还有不少同学占位，这使很多同学吃饭时没有座位可坐。
措施：禁止占位；各年级轮流吃饭，如可以让高年级的同学晚十分钟去吃饭；有条件的话，再建一个食堂。
要求：1. 可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯、通顺；2. 开头和结尾已写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Headmaster,I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving the dining conditions of our school.Yours,Li Hua 写作指导1. 命题分析(1) 建议信是写信人为了向收信人提出建议或忠告而写的信。
(2) 建议信有可能是写给个人，写信人就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。
(3) 建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。
理由要人情人理，语气一定要礼貌。
因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
写建议信时应注意两个问题。
第一，这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。
第二，这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
建议信开头常用句式（照应材料，表明写作意图）：After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...I am very glad to hear that you want to...I know you have trouble in...after reading your letter.I am writing to you for the purpose of...I am writing to share some advice with you.过渡句：My suggestions are as follows.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.In my opinion, some effective measures must be taken to solve these problems. They can be listed as follows.This problem will be more serious unless we take some effective measures.结束语：I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into serious consideration.I’ll be very glad if you take my suggestions into consideration.2. 布局谋篇开头(beginning) ——开门见山，说明写信的理由主体(body) ——提出自己的建议结尾(ending) ——简单结束语，并希望对方采纳自己的建议必背短文模板：。
从容说课This is the fifth teaching period of this unit.The emphasis of this period is laid on developing the students’ writing ability.As to the part writing the teacher should first get the students to read the brief description about how to write a suggestive letter Writing is a higher stage of language learning. The teacher should frequently give students some assignments of writing. Only in this way, can students use what they have learned more freely.教学重点Doevelop the students’ writing ability by writing a suggestive letter教学难点Get the students to learn how to write writing a suggestive letter教学方法1. Task-based teaching and learning2. Cooperative learning3. Discussion三维目标Knowledge aims:Ability aims:1. Develop the students’ writing ability.Emotional aims: Enable the students to form the good habit of readingUnit1 writing----How to write a suggestive letterLearning aims:Let the students know the form o f a suggestive letter.Important points and difficult points ：Develop students’ writing ability by imitatinga suggestive letter .Learning guides: 1. Task-based teaching and learning2. Cooperative learning3. DiscussionEmotional aims: Enable the students to form the good habit of readingTeaching Procedures：procedures:【Topics】Li Hua has received a letter from Wang Ping, He is also asking some advice about how to read books . Think carefully and help Li Hua answer it according to your reading experience.(120 words)Step1 Find general ideas of the writing (A)确定文体：这是一篇所以写作中应注意的常规格式。
如何写建议信一：审题立意1.应用文范畴2.常用一般现在时；以第二人称为主3. 三段式：首段：提出对方问题；使用过渡句，引出下文。
主体段：针对其问题提出自己的建议/忠告（以三个左右为宜）末段：总结建议、表达自己的祝愿。
二：经典模板句子1.首段：（起始句）I am sorry to hear that you have trouble /difficulty (in) doing sth(问题)。
（过渡句）However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.2.主体段：过渡词①first/firstly/first of all/to begin with②second/secondly/meanwhile/moreover/in addition/what’s more / furthermore③third/thirdly/finally/most important of all/last but not least3.末段①As long as you act as what is mentioned above, you will find the situation is not hard tosettle/resolve/solve/deal with.②They are only my personal suggestions. I hope they can do you a lot of good.③It’s only if you act as what is mentioned above and…….that you…….三：词汇积累1.对别人友好2有帮助的且忠实可信的全心全意地3乐于助人4.了解别人的喜好5.找到具有相同兴趣的朋友6参加讨论或更多的课后活动7不遗余力地帮助某人8患难见真情9万事开头难10按照上面所说的那样做11做某事有困难.12听取某人的建议13回以微笑14此外，另外15我认为关心别人胜过关心自己很重要16绝对不要根据外貌和衣着来看一个人17成为一个好的倾听者18不同意某人19做某事比作某事要好20众所周知21很重要22做某事没意义23这样做24处于麻烦之中25陪伴某人四：连词成句①如果你听取我的建议，这种状况是很容易改变的。
必修一英语第一单元导学案 Unit 1 FriendshipTopic Writing: a letter concerning suggestions【写作前奏曲】1. Read Xiao Dong’s letter on page 7 and answer: Qs: What is Xiao Dong’s problem?He’s not good at ______________ ________p eople. He finds it ________ to make friends with his classmates.2. Read the instructions at the top of page 7 and find out what you are required to do ？3. Your advice for Xiao Dong : _____________________.①To ask people their likes and dislikes ②To join in discussions③To share his feelings with others ④To show interest in others’ ideas【建议信的写作要领】(1)陈述建议的语言必须中肯：慎用must 等命令词汇，这样才能使对方高兴地接受你的劝告或建议。
例如：You must stop your meaningless work at once. 可适当运用虚拟句“If I were you,…”表述自己的建议。
常见的此类表达有：maybe; perhaps; probably; in my opinion; You could/might/had better…; It seems better that …; Why not …;(2)陈述建议必须有说服性：要想提出好建议，必须具有充分的理由，展示出自己独特的见解。
常见的表达有：If you think it twice, you will find…; As is well known,…; It is necessary/ important/certain that…; in spite of; on the contrary; in other words 等。
【建议信时态】多用现在时态即可能用到一般现在时，现在进行时或现在完成时等【叙述所用关联词】Illustration (阐述) I think, I believe, I suggest, in my opinion…Addition （递进）secondly, and then, besides, in addition… Contrast （转折）bu t, however, on the other hand… Summary(总结) in short, in a word, therefore, so…建议信一般采取“三段式结构”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly 或to begin with, then, later 等依次陈述建议。
【建议信结构】首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感谢，亦可表明自己的诚意。
中段：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，结构清晰、用语科学委婉地建议方法。
注意充分考虑到对方实际问题，表达时应选择得体用语。
切忌用语生硬强制，泛泛而谈。
尾段：简单予以希望。
希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。
【建议信常用句式结构】A ．建议信开头常用句式 (回应原信,表明写作意图)1）.I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 2）.I am writing to you for the purpose of -----3）. I am writing to share some advice with you.4）. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestion5）. I have just received your letter of… I am writing to express my views on…6）. I am writing to express my views concerning ……….B. 表达建议（主体，阐述具体建议）1） .I think it would be more beneficial if you could …2）. I would like to suggest/recommend that…3）. You may consider doing… 4）. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.5）. I wonder if you have considered the following.6.） When it come to such a situation , I would like to suggest that you can…C. 结尾（归纳总结，突出主题）1）. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.高一英语 编辑： 审核： 学案编号： 班2）. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3）. I will be more than happy to see improvements in …..4）. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. 5）. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.【参考文章】Dear Xiaodong,Thank you for your faith in me. I am writing to express my views concerning how to communicate with others.As we know, some people like talking with others while some people are upset to do it．If you fall into the second group, it can be hard to make friends．Here are some of my suggestions for your reference.Firstly, you could ask yourself what you are interested in. If you like basketball, for example, you could talk with some of your classmates who like basketball．The simplest way to start talking to people is to find something you have in common．Secondly, it would be wise to consider concern yourself with their discussion instead of ignoring it when standing by a group of your classmates who are discussing a topic. What you can do is to speak your mind or share their opinion. Once you’re able to start a conversation with one person, communication becomes so e asy!As far as I’m concerned, it’s so important to find one person you have something in common with in order to start a talk. It’ll be a pleasure to see your improvements in communicating skills.Yours,Editor【英语写作各档次的给分范围和要求】不得分：(0分)第一档(差)：(1-5分)1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第五档(很好);(21-25分)1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
