2014届高三英语查漏补缺效果考核检测：短文改错突破 Word版含解析

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（25）含答案第一套短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。

并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/）划掉.修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起）不记分。

I’m a middle school student name Li Ming。

I’m writing to tell you something。

Recently Inoticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school.I went there too inthe other day。

I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films orchat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games。

The Internetis good if we make good use of it。

Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the localgovernment should take measure to make sure that students use cybercafes positively。

2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）含答案短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2。

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965．When I was a child，I dreamed of flyingin the sky．I joined the army in June, 1983．In 1992，I was sent to the air force base．In August, 1996，I was one of the first 14 members from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination．I worked hardly, because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 .I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circledaround the earth about 14 circle and then returned ．I was honored to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．参考答案短文改错1．farmer改为farmer，s2．去掉1965前面的in3．an air force base。

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专题22 短文改错2018年高考题【2018·全国I】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ),并在其下面写出该加的次。

删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：(1）。

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2)。

只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分.71。

During my last winter holiday， I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents。

I find a change there。

The first time I went there， they were living in a small house with dogs， ducks， and another animals。

Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also Iwent here again,they had a big separnte house to raise dozens of chicken。

2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错1.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断。

如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出所缺的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Are the years you spent at school best years of your life? 76.Personally , I found most lesson rather uninteresting. We had to 77.sit at our desks in silence and paid attention to what the teachers 78.were saying. They were used to write on the blackboard and ask 79.us difficult questions. We also had to do piles of homework , and 80.hand it on time. We had to wear school uniforms and obey lots of 81.rules. I left school as soon as I can and started work. I read books 82.at the public library , and late I decided to attend college. Now 83.I really enjoy study because I’m growing old and know what I 84.want it. When I was at school , I was just the wrong age! 85. ____2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

2014全国高考汇编改错一（2014大纲卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。

All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…，这是单个的动名词定语，做主语的时候，谓语动词要使用单数形式。

高中英语真题:2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（2）附参考范文短文改错专项训练此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

A foreign university exhibition fair held at Zhijiang1._____Hotel on March 18.Over 50 universities from 10 countries2._____open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to3._____continuing their further study. More and more middle school 4._____students have joined in the tide of going abroad. The5._____lower-aged group have become the new highlight of this tide.6._____And whether early entry into international education means 7._____better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family 8._____too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both9._____parents and educators. How do you think of this tide of10._____going abroad?参考答案1. exhibition是held的承受者,应该用被动语态,因此须在之前加was。

2014届高三二轮专题强化训练：短文改错（真题+模拟）(一)(2013·全国Ⅰ)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案：I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding holdme on her knees and sing old songs.I was only four when she passes passedaway. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much well/clearly . He was tall, with broad shoulder shouldersand a beard thatturned from black toward to/into gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself himapartfrom others in our small town, ∧andhe was strong and powerful. In a ＼ fact, he even scared myclassmates away during whenthey came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was thegentlest man I have never everknown.(二)(2013·全国Ⅱ)The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.答案：The book I'm reading of ＼ talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have startedin the early 1800's. Have Havingtea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that which might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes becameanother meal of ∧the day. Interesting Interestingly ， it had a connection by withthe British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank drunkfrom cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain,there was a crying need for good cup cupswith handles to suit British habits. This made for thegrow growthin the porcelain industry.(三)(2013·浙江)Dear Diary ，Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained ，“He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours ，Rosemary答案：Dear Diary ，Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far ＼ away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move movedlast week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained ，“He was lucky to findother another one.” H is new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate classmates ， my school or andjust everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad worse， now I have to share a room withmy younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is ∧the/my first day of school. I am awfully tiring tired， butI know I'll never fall sleep asleep.Good night and remember you, dear diary, is aremy only souvenir from my past life and myonly friend.Yours ，Rosemary(四)(2013·辽宁)Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案：Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with onhis work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so ＼he works from morning till night. Hard work have hasmade him very i ll. “He has ruined his healthy health . We are worried about him.” That is which whatother teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid ∧avisit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to seehim, but outside her his room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step steppedinto the room.I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture pictureswe had taken together. I understoodthat he missed us just as many muchas we missed him.(五)(2013·陕西)My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious. 答案：My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go went fishing at a lake. We took ours ourfishing poles and headed forthe lake. As soon as we arrived, so ＼ we dropped the lines into the water. Before Afterwaiting forabout half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently impatient . I wanted to give up, and butmygrandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were wasa sudden pull at the poleand ∧a fish was caught. Within the next few minute minutes， my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt Feelinghungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious. (六)(2013·四川)Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?答案：Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty difficult ， but I tried hardly hardto doit. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking asked me to let her to ＼ copy my answers. After think thinkingforsome time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all bothof us were called to the teacher'soffice. The teacher was angry because we had ∧the same answers in the tests test. We were warnednot to cheat again so orshe would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat.I was just helping a friend. Why does didshe punish me ？题型2 高考模拟题组(七)(2013·宁波市二模)Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.答案：Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother brothers . He has been died deadfor a year. WhenI was a teenager, he taught us me how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used usingthe hours before dawn.We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in ∧alocal restaurant forbreakfast, and then travel travelled on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after beforedawn, he wouldfind the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and ora movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but ＼ I learned to be brave and patiently patientthroughthe experience.(八)(2013·许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.答案：My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I ∧havehad the dream of becominga teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses progress.There is no doubt whether that teachers play an important role in children children'sgrowth. Not only doteachers pass on knowledge for tochildren, but they also teach children how to behave themselves.Comparing Compared with other jobs, teaching is hard harder and the pay is lower. And Butto me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to ＼ feel young forever. Because SoI'll study harder andtry my best to realize my dream.(九)(2013·昭通市统检)I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late? If you are available that time, please inform me.Thank a lot!答案：I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in ＼ next weekend, just because my elder sister would willcome to visit us while my parents are very busy. They takeit for granted what that I should pick him herup . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. Andshe is eager to seeing see what has great greatlychanged in our city.I want to express my apologize apologyagain for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hopethat I can get another chances chanceto go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Areyou free two weeks late later？ If you are available that time, please inform me.Thank Thanksa lot!(十)(2013·绍兴市二模)I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I becamethe senior high school student.When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it.Thank you so much for your great help in your class.答案：I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the asenior high school student.When I started senior English, I found ∧it much more difficult than that whatwe learned injunior school and I almost lost my ＼ heart. Later, I realized the important importanceof English, so Igot up early every morning, recite recitedEnglish word, listened to English tapes and did a lot ofexercise exercises . I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to oflearning English. Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But And I'm getting more and more interested with inlearning it.Thank you so much for your great help in your class.(十一)(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there ，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out ，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.答案：Yesterday, Li Mei goes wentto a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there ，she ∧wasrefused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it backif unless she showed him the receipt. Thinking it therewas no way out ，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard guardsstopped her and began to search for ＼ her. They foundthe shirt in the bag and looked at it careful carefully . Many eyes were staring at her, what whichmade LiMei very embarrassing embarrassed . Luckily, a thesalesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.(十二)(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.答案：I'm a senior student from China, aging agedseventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have foundthat your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly greatinterest, I'd liketo apply for them it . I'm an outgoing girl who like likes communicating with others. I could canspeakEnglish well. My written English is excellent, either too. I wish to join in the activities. Forone thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over ∧theworld; for another,I expect to learn from ＼ more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend friends. Thechance is so precious as thatI'm really looking forward to your approval.(十三)(2013·琼海市质监)When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.答案：When I first learned to write in English, I run raninto many difficulties. The main problemwas in ＼ that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything everythinginto English. Myteacher advised me to keep my a diary. I followed her advice so andput down 100 words or so eachday. Soon I began to enjoy talk talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me myselfin simpleEnglish. One day I wrote a little story and showed ∧itto my teacher. She liked it very muchand reading read it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word wordswere a greatencouragement to me.(十四)(2013·石家庄市二模)Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.答案：Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to ∧anursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day.At On their arrival, they were warm warmlywelcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept sweepingthe floor.Everything done, they sit satin the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for thevolunteer volunteersto leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua werevery happy because of ＼ what they did bring brought joy to others. It also enriched our theirown experience.They made a promise which thatthey would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.(十五)(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.答案：It's reported that many people died dieof traffic accidents each year. Road safety hasaroused the widely wide attention of the public. Many rules have ∧beenmade to reduce the trafficcrashes, especially for ＼ the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make takeroad safety seriously in our daily life. While used usingthe road, we must walk on the pavementand learn to protect us ourselves . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that whichis bothgood for themselves and others.In the a word, obeying the traffic rules are iswhat all of us should pay attention toparticularly. After all, life is not a small matter.(十六)(2013·齐齐哈尔市二模)Dear David ，I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can't stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self­confidence. It's time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you couldoffer me some advice.Looking forward to your reply!答案：Dear David ，I have recently felt guilty, stay staying sleepless at night. You may wonder how why. To tell youthe truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom oftencheat in exams and I just can't stopme myself . In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer answers. Besides, I sometimes referred them ＼ to my notebooks so and copied something. As you know, cheating do doesmuch harm to our learningand self­confid ence. It's time that I take took action to stop it. I would appreciate it ∧ifyoucould offer me some advice.Looking forward to your reply!(十七)(2013·宝鸡市三模)Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.答案：Jack has ∧beenregarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jackwas going home by bike as usual while whenhe heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was ridingquickly towards in the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping stoppedby a manwith a knife in her his hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a animmediate dive for the robber andcontrolled him by held holding him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman policemencameand took the robber away.Slight Slightlywounded as he was in the left hand, but ＼ since then he hasbecome well known as a young hero all over the town.(十八)(2013·长春市第四次调测)I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.答案：I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in ∧a school for student studentsfrom Wenchuan. As we were ＼ all left home of atan early age, we met lots of problems in our dailylife. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us ourselves. However, we seldom felt lonelyor helplessly helpless . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will wouldplay basketball on theplayground, swimming swimin the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family.We treat treated each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when sincewe graduated, butthose memories are as sweet as ever before.(十九)(2013·甘肃省二诊)Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown­ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.答案：Many teachers ∧areworried about the effects of television on young people. According tostudies, any manychildren spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because∧of so much viewing, children may not be ＼ develop the habit of read readingand the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program programsyoung people listen to, althoughradios can be very noise noisy.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On Inone year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown­ups to make children to ＼ want things that they don't real reallyneed.(二十)(2013·乌鲁木齐三诊)Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind ，it is real positive in our life. On one hand ，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.答案：Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind ，it is real reallypositive in our life. On one hand ，it is great exercise. It not onlybuild builds up our strength and endurance and butit also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands hand ， it allows us to get outside ∧to enjoy nature. For those of them uswho spendour days outside insideworking or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in naturecan be quite refreshed refreshing . For Inconclusion, it is a ＼ good to go climbing at least once a month.Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.(二十一)(2013·昆明市适应性检测)We had a discussion on “overnight­fame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all kn ow “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.答案：We had a discussion on “overnight­fame” last week. Nowadays, many people were arecrazyabout instant fame and wealthy wealth . To be honest, it is not bad ∧tobe famous or have a lot ofmoney, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the an example. Only after his hard works workdid he becomesuccessful. Or And we can list more similar cases if need needed. What I do believe is that ＼ the processin which you wetry our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that wetreasure and enjoy mostly most.(二十二)(2013·浙江省五校联考)A young man called Low­Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low­carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.答案：A young man called Low­Carbon Brother become becamea hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggestsliving a l ow­carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help。

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1(2013·哈尔滨模拟) Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days in my whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor did well in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straight A’s, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”Victor’s dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation, and then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw some snow on the trees. We began to play snow! No one in my family had ever touched snow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other.2The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In the other hand, I can make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.3As we know, when senior students finish their school, most of their reference books are thrown away, which are still in good conditions. What a great waste it is!I suggested that we should recycle all this books. On the one hand, recycling them can save a lot of natural resources, which are used to make textbooks. On the other hand, the notes on the books are helpful to whoever need them.In fact, recycling textbooks has been increasing popular in such countries as America and Australia. We should learn from them, but make every effort to build energy-saving society. In my opinion, it is of many benefit both to our present and to our future.4Nowadays Grade 3 students are general faced with a lot of pressure, which is rather common. The followed suggestions may help reduce it. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it.Secondly, set up a goal what is not too high, in another words, don’t put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen to music, go swim or just simply go walking. Lastly, make friend with others, such as, your classmates, your teachers, your parents. They will understand you and come to your help when you are really in the trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”.答案解析1答案:Skiing is my favorite sport, even though I had only skied for four days inhavemy whole life! Last year my father promised that because my brother Victor didifwell in his exams, he would bring us for a special holiday. When Victor got straighttakeA’s, Dad said, “I promised a special holiday. I think I should keep my words. ”word Victor’s dream was to see really snow. So we flew to Seoul at Christmas vacation,real forand then took a bus to Muju Resort. As we climb up the mountain, we saw someclimbedsnow on the trees. We began to play ∧snow! No one in my family had ever touchedwithsnow before. We were all like the little children. We picked it up, made snowballs, and threw it at each other.them1. 【解析】第一句had→have。

During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.2017 全国1In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.2016 全国1My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2015 全国1When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming hasalready become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted Some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then- for all these years-we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste. There are somuch that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2018 全国2When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we wouldplay card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. Theywould say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I di dn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very usefullater in my life.2017 全国2Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. Whensummer came, they will invite their students pick thevegetables！2016 全国2The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn littleabout world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman sawhim drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice tosee you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2014 全国2My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We di dn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day .My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends .2018 全国3It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.2017 全国3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown notonly physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2016 全国 3The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything a nd could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2018 全国1During my last winter holiday, I went to∧thecountryside with my father to visit mygrandparents. Ifindfounda big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, andhereanotherother chickenanimals. Last winter when I went∧therewhichagain, they had a big separate house to raisedozens of.chickensThey also had a small pondsell或they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite ain wherehappilylotby selling the fish. Ifelt happythat their life had improved. At the end of our trip, Itold my father thatI planned to return for every two years, buthe agreed.and 2017 全国1In the summer holiday following myeighteeneighteenthbirthday, I took driving lessons. I stillremember howhard∧the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned theinstructor’s orders,so but / yet once I started the car, mymindwordgoeswentblank. I forgot what he had said to mealtogether. TheTurninginstructor keptrepeating the words , “Speed up!”“Slowdown!”“lateTurnleft!” I was so muchnervousthat I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutessuddenly lateron, the instructor asked me to stopthe car. Itwas a relief and Icame to a sudden stop just in themiddleofthe road.2016 全国171. that →where 72. but 去掉73. had →have 74. hone st→ honesty 75. or→ and范文范例指导参考76. using →used 77. becoming 前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily2015 全国176. think –thought 77. countryside 前加the 78. or—and 79. on—with80. been 去掉81. seriously—serious 82. airs—air 83. much—many 84. found—find 85. your—our2014 全国1范文 范例 指导 参考2018 全国 2When I was little,Friday ’s Fridaynight was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games ofal l sor t sort sin the sittingroom. Asthe akid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked towatching watchthem, my parents would not to letme. The y wou ld say tous methat playing card games wouldhelp my brain. 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Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. Aftersupper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.【2017年全国Ⅱ卷】Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!【2016年全国Ⅱ卷】The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledgeswe cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.【2015年全国Ⅱ卷】One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【2014年全国Ⅱ卷】My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and hopefully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.参考答案【2019年全国Ⅱ卷】Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do.jobsFirst, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then,coolwhen I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked myfifthEnglish teacher too much. When I studied chemistry ∧high school, I very/so in/at reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasonsand Therefor the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick personamazedcould feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that Iwas wanted to help people in need.【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. AfterFridaysupper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As thesorts a kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that watch me playing card games would help my brain. Still I ∧unwilling to play thewasgames for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until with wereI entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was awhenchild turned out to be very useful later in my life.Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from thebothschool, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.anIn their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in theirinterestedgarden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and which early water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.Besides informationWhen summer came, they will invite their students ∧pick the fresh comes to vegetables!【2016年全国Ⅱ卷】The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at what choosehome and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no taking andneed to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about ∧world.theIf we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledgesour knowledge we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places或改为shouldof interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many,thinkmuchyet we can still learn a lot.One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It wasparentsvery crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so veryinmuch that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy forlookingsome time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.that 或者删除whereTony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and tellingbegan told him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw ∧parents. Momthe hissaid,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tonyterriblypromised her that this would never happen again.【2014年全国Ⅱ卷】My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They areThere three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need todon’tdo so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school much for activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour andhours play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of thelooksflowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening∧ music. The teachers here are kind sit toand hopefully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.hopeful。