高三英语短文改错练习题30篇

短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme w ell on 76．achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy d ifferent from 79．most students is that they don’t go to school . In f act , 80．they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels a s if 82．they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．As many of the more than one million people w ho receive 84．home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．have gotten a good education .短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, 78．since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. B ut, you 81．may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．So I ran three miles to school only to discover t hat nobody 84．was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习（3）Get a good education is more important today than 76．ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．schools. Public schools are mainly found b y governments 78．through tax income. Students in Canada t aught in 79．English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．the school from age 5 to 16. There are s everal different 83．levels in the Canadian education system .The f irst was 84．called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习（4）Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill n ear to 76. our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77. girls were told to plant the young trees into t he pits. 78. All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were a ll wet 79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80.began to water it.The water was at the f oot of 81. the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82. of water from one to other up to the hill. 83. We did not finish water the trees until it 84. was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85短文改错练习（5）A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76.part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78. interested to begin studying another language. At t he first 79. class, the teacher asked us to do a p ronunciation exercise, 80.in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82. kept having me to say more words, and I finally a sked him 83. why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an 84. American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 85.短文改错练习（6）It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’t take many 76．friends with me because I wanted to row alone. 77．I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center o f lake. 78．A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds 79．were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the 80．paddles（桨）and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky 81．over me or green water around me I w as extremely 82．relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I 83．knew them. I came back home very late. I didn’t feel 84．tiring at all, for I had really had a good time. 85．短文改错练习（7）I was anxiously expected your letter, and a t last 76.it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that 77 everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78 Things here are same now as they were b efore. The 79 final examination will take place in next week. So 80I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’s nice 81to think that the summer vacation is coming 82 near. I can’t say much I want to see you a ll again. 83I am looking forward to spend summer days w ith you. 84 Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home. 85短文改错练习（8）One afternoon , when I was on my way home , t he sky 76．changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began 77．to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat 78．or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain . 79．Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling 80．me from behind . I turned to have a look and f ind that 81．he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He 82．offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all 83．the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I w ould have 84．got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help ! 85．短文改错练习（9）I worried about the missed bag all t he evening. 76．I tried to remember exact what I had done from the 77．time I left the store until at the time I got h ome. I 78．remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I 79．was having lunch. So I must have it when I l eft the 80．store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus. 81．But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus 82．to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I 83．was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages 84．lying on the floor. I should be much careful n ext time. 85．短文改错练习（10）A kind of little car may someday take place of t oday’s big 76．ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77．less pollution in there air . There will be more s paces for 78．parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79．driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80．per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81．will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82．are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83．for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84．the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85．fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习（11）Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though y ou find 76．something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you.If you 77．can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back 78．it. I’m sure you would want someone to do s ame for 79．you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep 80．it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office. 81．I went to the office and found the person to who it 82．belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and 83．gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two 84．rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in 85．my heart.Yours,Li Ming短文改错练习（12）Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us 76. chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he 77. taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. 78. Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict 79. to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework. 80. he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be 81. poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies 82. very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and 83. caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student. 84.As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all 85. the students.短文改错练习（13）I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76.that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77.reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78.when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79.fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80.water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81. became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82. glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anything, but this83. increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84.is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85.then I have been more frightened.短文改错练习（14）Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76．example from the animal world because there is a biological 77．basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78．fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79．to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80．father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t81．make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82．are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83．are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84．you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85．短文改错练习（15）Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76．make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77．all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78．go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79．lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80．talks about work and study . 81．Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82．what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83．do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84．be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85．短文改错练习（16）Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you . 76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77．further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78．for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79．my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80．going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82．can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83．in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84．them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ?85．Best WishesJane短文改错练习（17）I used to love science class—all of them—76．biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77．liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78．understand what the world works. For example, 79．when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. I n one 80．class, I learned why it rained. I think s cience classes 81．clear up mysteries. But then there is a lways more 82．mysteries look into. What was my least f avorite class? 83．That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84．Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85．saw how I could use it in my daily life.短文改错练习（18）Some Americans judge success on t he length 76．of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s77．vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80．get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．teachers who teach the three c lasses consider 82．themselves less successful than that w ho teach 83．only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．work Americans do , the less s uccessful they 85．consider themselves .短文改错练习（19）As is known, that is interesting to teach c hildren to 76．swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77．Florida and California have already run particularly l essons for 78．babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe f rom where, 79．in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80．the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81．The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82．water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83．can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the c hild can 84．master the technique and push him forward through t he water. 85．短文改错练习（20）Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76.where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77.if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78.the mistake about the price. You looked at t wo different 79.price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80.21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81.yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82.your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83.get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84.yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85.I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua短文改错练习（21）In many western countries heavy industry is high developed76．The difference between heavy and light industry are based on 77．the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce 78．machines while light industry uses machines produce the 79．smaller objects required for various purpose in our home80．and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on the81．general level of economic or industrial development. 82．In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To 83．decrease （减少）costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on 84．Local supplies of the coal or electric power for t heir operation 85．短文改错练习（22）It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street .76．I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road .77．Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to78．see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell79．down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes .80．She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel81．and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went t o82．apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me .83．The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action .84．And now ,after I do everything , I’ll think carefully whether85．it’s right or wrong . I’ll do my best to be in good habits and qualities .短文改错练习（23）Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters 76．in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So 77．he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua 78．University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle 79．school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. 80．He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a 81．lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in 82．physics but also speak English and Russian very well. 83．In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps 84．and listening music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted. 85．短文改错练习（24）Dear Lily,I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job 76.interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to 77.get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking78.for several week now and haven’t found anything.79.The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I80.am you, I’d take it. If you worked there a while, you81.could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, 82.but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you 83.decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you 84.can think about get a bike later. 85.Love短文改错练习（25）Dear Abby：How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my77．further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam78．for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore,79．my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my80．going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. T hey82．can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study83．in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them.84．How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?85．Best Wishes,Jane短文改错练习（26）I went to see film after supper. On my way to the 76.cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her 77.way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards 78.her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her 79.great change had taken place in the past few years and she 80.told me something about Britain and her family. 81.Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, 82.for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also 83.practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at 84.English, I would have been able to help her. 85.短文改错练习（27）I was anxiously expected your letter, and a t last 76.it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that 77.everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78.Things here are the same now as we were before. 79.The final examination will take place of next week. 80.But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to81.think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t82.say much I want to see you all again. 83.Looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84.Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 85.短文改错练习（28）Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76．us English when I attended training course two77．years before. Helen always made good preparations78．for the lessons, she tried her best to make her79．classes lively. I used to being poor in English,80．especially in written English. But now I’m able81．to write English letters and reports correct.82．I still remember how she helped me for my83．English patiently. Teachers’ Day’s come. I’m going to84．send to her a card and give her best wishes.85．短文改错练习（29）ow I'd like to tell you why I learnEnglish．76．I often read English aloud and try learn something 77．important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and78．form the good habit of thinking inEnglish．79．I listen to a lot and talk with others inEnglish．80．In this way, I was improved both my hearing 81．and my spoken English．I keep a diary in English every day but my 82．spoken English is becoming better and better．83．I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge．By this means, I can express itself 84．in English correct．That's the way I have been learning 85．English．I hope it will be useful toyou．That's all．Thank you．短文改错练习（30）I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could 76.never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend 77.several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant 78.cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to 79.make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then80.he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still 81.couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the82.microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something 83.and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked.“That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted,84.and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your85.eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”短文改错练习（31）One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he c ame, 76．she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. 77．The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. 78．She asked him what the trouble could be because she had never b efore 79．suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful e xamination, 80．the doctor said, “You are in a very bad state of health for a woman 81．of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just m atter of 82．old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble w ill mostly 83．clean up in spring!”“Nonsese,doctor!” she said, “My left knee is 84．perfect, and it is exactly same age as m y right.”85．短文改错练习（32）May I have you attention please? I have a few 76. things to tell you. When you have a class here i n the 77. language lab, please be here a little e arly. Change 78. your shoes before enter the lab. Don't b ring anything 79. here except your text books. When you are into, 80. please don't touch these machine without permission. 81. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In c lass you 82. should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders 83. can be used make a copy of the listening materials. 84.When class over, turn off your machines a nd leave 85. the lab one by one.短文改错练习（33）Dinner on Children's DayOn Children's Day last year, our city held an interested 76. activity, in which children and their parents play the rich 77. and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious 78. food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). 79. Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the 80.81. children. They hoped that their children could be taught thelesson from the dinner.Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.短文改错练习（34）We'll never forget the day which my classmates and 76.I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. 77. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It 78. looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, 79. grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some 80. workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We 81. talked to them and learned a lot. We understood 82. them further. On the way home we felt tiring. 83. We all thought that we had a very good day. We 84.85. really hoped that we could get more chances ofleave the school and learn social experience.短文改错练习（35）One morning Mrs Jenkins went to d epartment store 76. to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store 77. before she got there. She had to wait. Then a f at lady. 78. came in. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve 79. for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy 80.a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she c ouldn't do. 81. The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let M rs Jenkins 82. explain anything but insisted that M rs Jenkins 83. would do that right away because it was her job. 84. At last Mrs Jankins has to tell her that s he was 85.a customer herself and wanted to buy a coat, too.短文改错练习（36）If there are much more people in the world, t here must 76. have more food to feed the people. But food is already a 77. problem in today's world. One-third of the w orld's population 78. is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand 79. people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world 80. But in others parts of the world, people become ill or die 81. because they eat too much food, and they are very f at. Some 82. countries have no food, but the others have too much, and 83. they throw them away. How can tomorrow's world feed 84. its people? The world needs produce more food than 85. it does now.短文改错练习（37）There are strange similarities in t he life 76. of John F. Kennedy and the life of Abraham Lincoln. For 77. example, Kennedy became a president in 1960,while Lincoln 78. elected in 1860.This was exactly one hundred years 79. apart. Then both men were shot after, on a Friday and in 80. the presence of their wife. There is a nother very 81. strangely similarity. Kennedy's secretary, named Lincoln, 82. told him to go to Dallas. Lincoln's secretary, named Kennedy, 83. told him not to go to the Ford Theatre. But all of them went 84. and both were shot to die. 85.短文改错练习（38）A US-led War against Iraq broke out in March 20, 2003 76.without the agreement of the UN. They came less than two 77. hours after Bush's deadline for Saddam leave his 78. country has passed. There are about 250,000 US armies 79. around Iraq. There are also armies from another countries. 80. includes Britain and Australia, fighting with the American 81. soldiers. Their force is much more bigger than that of Iraq 82. But they met stronger resistance than they expected. 83. “These things are never easy. There will have some difficult84. times ahead so the War is going on as its plan,” said85. British Prime Minister Blair.短文改错练习（39）My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live 76. with us for many years of independence. We did 77. all the things we could make her feel comfortable, 78. in our home, including giving her the private line for 79. their bedroom. One evening we were having a party 80. while the phone rang. It was telephone operator, 81. who asked, “Do you have a grandmother on upstairs? 82. “Yes,what’s happened?” my husband replied.“Well,”the 83. operator again continued,“She can't remember. 84. your phone number, and she like a cup of tea.. ”85.短文改错练习（40）I'd like to tell you something more about the problem of 76. pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory 77. besides our school gives off heavy smoke all day 78. long. Very loud voices hurt our ears. Rubbish and 79. waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out 80. polluting water and poisonous gas. All this has 81. made a great harm to the health and study of the 82. teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little 83. has done to change the situation. I don't think we can 84. study well until the problem is solved. We do hope85. you'll help and support us.短文改错练习（41）Helen is one of my best friends. She has taught 76. us English when I attended training c lass two 77. years before. Helen always made good preparations 78. for the lesson, and she tried her best to make 79. her classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80. especially in written English. But now I'm able 81. to write English letters and r eports correct. 82.I still remember how she helped me for my 83. English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm g oing to 84. send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85.短文改错练习（42）The early morning fire damaged the historic Gallad H ouse today. 76 It destroyed the third floor of the building so fire fighters saved 77 the first and the second floors. There were only a few elderly people 78 living in the building at the time and they carried out to safety. 79 The Gallad House was built in 1718 and was used for a hotel f or over 80 150 years. George Washington stayed in here in 1782. The Gallad family 81 owned the building for the elderly. Several fire department were c alled 82 to the scene. When Fire Chief Andrew Bond asked when the fire 83 started, he answered that perhaps a burning cigarette caused it. 84 Chief Bond had promised to further examine the cause. 85短文改错练习（43）When passing the bus station on my way home，I found out alittle girl alone crying. Obviously,she was losing，looking for her mother. I came up and asked her why. When asked where her mother was,she just shook head and kept crying. Then I took her to the station broadcasting room for a help. "Anyone who lost a child please come to our broadcasting room..." which was soon heard again and a gain. Minutes later,a worrying mother came. The girl ran to her mother happily，tears still in eyes. The mother was very thankful and askedfor my name. With smile，I answered，" I'm only a League member.I have just done that a League member should do. It's my duty." 76777879808182838485短文改错练习（44）I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field looking for rabbits to draw. Losing in thought，I hadn't noticed a bull to running towards me. About 100 76777879。

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（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。

短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard . They do extreme w ell on 76．achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy d ifferent from 79．most students is that they don’t go to school . In f act , 80．they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels a s if 82．they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．As many of the more than one million people w ho receive 84．home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．have gotten a good education .短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring, 78．since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. B ut, you 81．may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．So I ran three miles to school only to discover t hat nobody 84．was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday.短文改错练习（3）Get a good education is more important today than 76．ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．schools. Public schools are mainly found b y governments 78．through tax income. Students in Canada t aught in 79．English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．the school from age 5 to 16. There are s everal different 83．levels in the Canadian education system .The f irst was 84．called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．through grade 7 or 8.短文改错练习（4）Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill n ear to 76. our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77. girls were told to plant the young trees into t he pits. 78. All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were a ll wet 79.with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80.began to water it.The water was at the f oot of 81. the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82. of water from one to other up to the hill. 83. We did not finish water the trees until it 84. was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85短文改错练习（5）A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76.part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 78. interested to begin studying another language. At t he first 79. class, the teacher asked us to do a p ronunciation exercise, 80.in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 81. student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 82. kept having me to say more words, and I finally a sked him 83. why. “I find it great funs. It’s the first time I’ve heard an 84. American speak French with a German accent.”he explained it. 85.短文改错练习（6）It was fine yesterday. The sun was shining in thesky. I went boating by myself. I didn’t take many 76．friends with me because I wanted to row alone. 77．I hired a boat and rowed slowly to the center o f lake. 78．A fresh breeze was blowing, fish was swimming and birds 79．were singing. When I reached the center, I took up the 80．paddles（桨）and lie down in the boat. With the blue sky 81．over me or green water around me I w as extremely 82．relaxed. Over about two hours passed in this way before I 83．knew them. I came back home very late. I didn’t feel 84．tiring at all, for I had really had a good time. 85．短文改错练习（7）I was anxiously expected your letter, and a t last 76.it has reached to me. I am very glad to know that 77 everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78 Things here are same now as they were b efore. The 79 final examination will take place in next week. So 80I am now busy preparing for my lessons. It’s nice 81to think that the summer vacation is coming 82 near. I can’t say much I want to see you a ll again. 83I am looking forward to spend summer days w ith you. 84 Give my love to Father, Mother and anyone at home. 85短文改错练习（8）One afternoon , when I was on my way home , t he sky 76．changed suddenly . Dark clouds were gathered . I began 77．to feel worried because I didn’t have both a raincoat 78．or umbrella about me . It soon started to rain . 79．Just as I was hurrying home , I heard of someone calling 80．me from behind . I turned to have a look and f ind that 81．he was Liu Wei , a good neighbour of mine . He 82．offered to share his umbrella with me . We walked all 83．the ways home . Without Liu Wei’s help , I w ould have 84．got wet to the skin . How much thankful I was for his help ! 85．短文改错练习（9）I worried about the missed bag all t he evening. 76．I tried to remember exact what I had done from the 77．time I left the store until at the time I got h ome. I 78．remembered whether I had looked at the bag while I 79．was having lunch. So I must have it when I l eft the 80．store. I remembered showing it to a friend on the bus. 81．But I had the bag then. I came directly from the bus 82．to my house, and I must have forgotten it on the bus. I 83．was in hurry to get off and forgot to check the packages 84．lying on the floor. I should be much careful n ext time. 85．短文改错练习（10）A kind of little car may someday take place of t oday’s big 76．ones . If people drive such cars in the future ,there would be 77．less pollution in there air . There will be more s paces for 78．parking cars in cities . The streets will be less crowd . And 79．driving will be safer as these little cars can go only 65 km 80．per hour . The future cars will be fine for getting round acity , so they will not be useful for long trips . Little cars 81．will go 200km , before needing to stop more gas . If big cars 82．are still used along with the small ones , two sets of roadsthat will be needed in the future . Some roads will be used 83．for the big fast cars and another roads will be needed for 84．the slow small ones . It is said that third such little cars 85．fit in the space now needed for one car the usual size .短文改错练习（11）Dear Bob,I must say that I do agree with you. Though y ou find 76．something, but it doesn’t mean it belongs to you.If you 77．can find who it belongs to, you should try to return back 78．it. I’m sure you would want someone to do s ame for 79．you. Once I found a beautiful picture. I wanted to keep 80．it. Then I remembered see one just like it in an office. 81．I went to the office and found the person to who it 82．belonged. The lady was very happy to get back and 83．gave me delicious apples. So you see, Bob, I get two 84．rewards: one I could eat and another I could keep in 85．my heart.Yours,Li Ming短文改错练习（12）Mr Zhang is over sixty years old. He has retired（退休）.He is one of my respected teachers. He teaches us 76. chemistry when we were in senior Grade One. He was old, and he 77. taught us good. He tried his best to make his classes lively. 78. Mr Zhang usually made good preparations for the lesson and was strict 79. to us, too. Whenever we made mistakes in our homework. 80. he would ask us to correct them. At that time, I was used to be 81. poorly in chemistry. Mr Zhang often helped me with my studies 82. very patiently. With his help, I had made rapid progress and 83. caught with the class. He is always very kind to every student. 84.As an experienced teacher, he is respected and loved by all 85. the students.短文改错练习（13）I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back at my childhood experience, I think 76.that three reason might explain the fear. The first 77.reason is that I was not allowed to go near the water 78.when I was a child, for my mother had unreasonable 79.fear of it. So, even as a child I was taught see the 80.water as something danger. Second, my eyes 81. became bad ones when I was five. If I took off my 82. glasses in the water, I couldn’t see anything, but this83. increased my fear. The worst part of your experience 84.is that as a child I often see a neighbor drowned. Since 85.then I have been more frightened.短文改错练习（14）Most people who are ambitious and want to achievesomething live on stress. They need them. I like to use 76．example from the animal world because there is a biological 77．basis for what I say. If you take a turtle and force it to run with as 78．fast as a race-horse, you should kill it. So it’s useless to say79．to a turtle type human what he must achieve this because his 80．father was famous and his grandfather was successful. You can’t81．make race-horse out of a turtle. But the reverse is also true. If you 82．are the race-horse type, as more efficient businessmen and politicians 83．are, you have the urge to do many things and to express you. If 84．you told not to do anything, you are under terrible distress. 85．短文改错练习（15）Have you ever heard from the saying : All work and no play 76．make Jack a dull boy ? What this means is that if you study 77．all the times you will become a boring person . You must 78．go out and having fun with your friends , otherwise you will 79．lose him . No one wants to be friends with someone who only 80．talks about work and study . 81．Perhaps you have a confidence problem . Please try remember 82．what the work you do is for yourself but no one else . You 83．do not have to compete with your classmates . No one could 84．be happier in studying seven days and seven nights in a week . 85．短文改错练习（16）Deare Abby ,How are you ? Today I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you . 76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my 77．further education . One hundred and twenty students took exam 78．for it , but only a few was chosen and I was one of them . However , 79．my parents are not happy about it . They are strong against me 80．going there . They say it is too far away that they will not see me 81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely . They 82．can't imagine a girl so young live alone . They advise me to study 83．in the capital instead . Then I’ll be able to continue living with 84．them . How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up ?85．Best WishesJane短文改错练习（17）I used to love science class—all of them—76．biology, chemistry, geography or physics. I think I 77．liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 78．understand what the world works. For example, 79．when I was a child, the rain was a mystery. I n one 80．class, I learned why it rained. I think s cience classes 81．clear up mysteries. But then there is a lways more 82．mysteries look into. What was my least f avorite class? 83．That was math. After learn the basics of the subject, 84．Nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never 85．saw how I could use it in my daily life.短文改错练习（18）Some Americans judge success on t he length 76．of his vacations . The man who gets a month’s77．vacation each year consider himself more successful 78．than the man gets two weeks . Many people want 79．to be teachers because it is teachers who can 80．get three-month vacation every year . Some college 81．teachers who teach the three c lasses consider 82．themselves less successful than that w ho teach 83．only one or two , or none in all . In short , the less 84．work Americans do , the less s uccessful they 85．consider themselves .短文改错练习（19）As is known, that is interesting to teach c hildren to 76．swim while they are still babies. Most the large towns in 77．Florida and California have already run particularly l essons for 78．babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe f rom where, 79．in several countries, special courses are now offered to 80．the children who are from 7 to 24 month old. 81．The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82．water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he 83．can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the c hild can 84．master the technique and push him forward through t he water. 85．短文改错练习（20）Dear Mr. GreenI work in the Friendship Shop on Zhongshan Road 76.where you have often come to buy things. The other day 77.if you bought a vase at our shop with your wife, I made 78.the mistake about the price. You looked at t wo different 79.price of the same vase, one costing 30 yuan and the other 80.21 yuan. You took the 21 yuan one so I accepted 30 81.yuan from you. I found my mistake only after you and 82.your wife have left. Will you please come to our shop to 83.get in your change or to return your vase and get a 30 84.yuan one instead? I apologize you for it. 85.I’m looking forward to your coming earlier.Yours truly,Wang Hua短文改错练习（21）In many western countries heavy industry is high developed76．The difference between heavy and light industry are based on 77．the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce 78．machines while light industry uses machines produce the 79．smaller objects required for various purpose in our home80．and offices.The growth of industry in country depends on the81．general level of economic or industrial development. 82．In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. To 83．decrease （减少）costs, industrialists in an area usually depend on 84．Local supplies of the coal or electric power for t heir operation 85．短文改错练习（22）It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street .76．I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road .77．Short after that I heard a scream behind .I looked back to78．see what was happened .A little girl about 8 years old fell79．down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes .80．She stood up without cry .Then she picked up the banana peel81．and ran toward the dustbin .On that moment ,I realized my fault , and went t o82．apologize her for that ,but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me .83．The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action .84．And now ,after I do everything , I’ll think carefully whether85．it’s right or wrong . I’ll do my best to be in good habits and qualities .短文改错练习（23）Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters 76．in the height. He was born on November 4,1952. So 77．he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua 78．University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle 79．school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. 80．He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a 81．lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in 82．physics but also speak English and Russian very well. 83．In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps 84．and listening music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted. 85．短文改错练习（24）Dear Lily,I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job 76.interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to 77.get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking78.for several week now and haven’t found anything.79.The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I80.am you, I’d take it. If you worked there a while, you81.could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, 82.but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you 83.decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you 84.can think about get a bike later. 85.Love短文改错练习（25）Dear Abby：How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you76．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my77．further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam78．for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore,79．my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my80．going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me81．for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. T hey82．can’t imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study83．in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them.84．How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?85．Best Wishes,Jane短文改错练习（26）I went to see film after supper. On my way to the 76.cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her 77.way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards 78.her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her 79.great change had taken place in the past few years and she 80.told me something about Britain and her family. 81.Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, 82.for I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also 83.practise my spoken English. If I hadn’t worked hard at 84.English, I would have been able to help her. 85.短文改错练习（27）I was anxiously expected your letter, and a t last 76.it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that 77.everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. 78.Things here are the same now as we were before. 79.The final examination will take place of next week. 80.But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It’s nice to81.think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can’t82.say much I want to see you all again. 83.Looking forward to spend summer days with you. 84.Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home. 85.短文改错练习（28）Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught76．us English when I attended training course two77．years before. Helen always made good preparations78．for the lessons, she tried her best to make her79．classes lively. I used to being poor in English,80．especially in written English. But now I’m able81．to write English letters and reports correct.82．I still remember how she helped me for my83．English patiently. Teachers’ Day’s come. I’m going to84．send to her a card and give her best wishes.85．短文改错练习（29）ow I'd like to tell you why I learnEnglish．76．I often read English aloud and try learn something 77．important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and78．form the good habit of thinking inEnglish．79．I listen to a lot and talk with others inEnglish．80．In this way, I was improved both my hearing 81．and my spoken English．I keep a diary in English every day but my 82．spoken English is becoming better and better．83．I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge．By this means, I can express itself 84．in English correct．That's the way I have been learning 85．English．I hope it will be useful toyou．That's all．Thank you．短文改错练习（30）I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could 76.never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend 77.several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope at plant 78.cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to 79.make my professor angry. “I can’t see everything, ” I said. Then80.he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, but I still 81.couldn’t make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the82.microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something 83.and drew it quickly on the paper. “What’s that?” my professor asked.“That’s what I saw.” I answered. “No, you don’t!” he shouted,84.and he bent over and looking into the microscope. “That’s your85.eyes! You’ve fixed the lens so that it reflects! You’ve drawn your eyes!”短文改错练习（31）One cold day, an aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he c ame, 76．she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. 77．The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. 78．She asked him what the trouble could be because she had never b efore 79．suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful e xamination, 80．the doctor said, “You are in a very bad state of health for a woman 81．of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just m atter of 82．old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble w ill mostly 83．clean up in spring!”“Nonsese,doctor!” she said, “My left knee is 84．perfect, and it is exactly same age as m y right.”85．短文改错练习（32）May I have you attention please? I have a few 76. things to tell you. When you have a class here i n the 77. language lab, please be here a little e arly. Change 78. your shoes before enter the lab. Don't b ring anything 79. here except your text books. When you are into, 80. please don't touch these machine without permission. 81. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In c lass you 82. should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders 83. can be used make a copy of the listening materials. 84.When class over, turn off your machines a nd leave 85. the lab one by one.短文改错练习（33）Dinner on Children's DayOn Children's Day last year, our city held an interested 76. activity, in which children and their parents play the rich 77. and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious 78. food, but the poor could only have bread with porridge(粥). 79. Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the 80.81. children. They hoped that their children could be taught thelesson from the dinner.Now many people on earth don't have enough food and clothes. 82. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. 83. The activity was held to make the families understand the 84. differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents 85. know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.短文改错练习（34）We'll never forget the day which my classmates and 76.I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. 77. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It 78. looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, 79. grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some 80. workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We 81. talked to them and learned a lot. We understood 82. them further. On the way home we felt tiring. 83. We all thought that we had a very good day. We 84.85. really hoped that we could get more chances ofleave the school and learn social experience.短文改错练习（35）One morning Mrs Jenkins went to d epartment store 76. to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store 77. before she got there. She had to wait. Then a f at lady. 78. came in. She went to Mrs Jenkins and asked her to serve 79. for her. She told Mrs Jenkins that she wanted to buy 80.a coat. Mrs Jenkins said that she c ouldn't do. 81. The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let M rs Jenkins 82. explain anything but insisted that M rs Jenkins 83. would do that right away because it was her job. 84. At last Mrs Jankins has to tell her that s he was 85.a customer herself and wanted to buy a coat, too.短文改错练习（36）If there are much more people in the world, t here must 76. have more food to feed the people. But food is already a 77. problem in today's world. One-third of the w orld's population 78. is starving, because there is not enough food. Ten thousand 79. people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world 80. But in others parts of the world, people become ill or die 81. because they eat too much food, and they are very f at. Some 82. countries have no food, but the others have too much, and 83. they throw them away. How can tomorrow's world feed 84. its people? The world needs produce more food than 85. it does now.短文改错练习（37）There are strange similarities in t he life 76. of John F. Kennedy and the life of Abraham Lincoln. For 77. example, Kennedy became a president in 1960,while Lincoln 78. elected in 1860.This was exactly one hundred years 79. apart. Then both men were shot after, on a Friday and in 80. the presence of their wife. There is a nother very 81. strangely similarity. Kennedy's secretary, named Lincoln, 82. told him to go to Dallas. Lincoln's secretary, named Kennedy, 83. told him not to go to the Ford Theatre. But all of them went 84. and both were shot to die. 85.短文改错练习（38）A US-led War against Iraq broke out in March 20, 2003 76.without the agreement of the UN. They came less than two 77. hours after Bush's deadline for Saddam leave his 78. country has passed. There are about 250,000 US armies 79. around Iraq. There are also armies from another countries. 80. includes Britain and Australia, fighting with the American 81. soldiers. Their force is much more bigger than that of Iraq 82. But they met stronger resistance than they expected. 83. “These things are never easy. There will have some difficult84. times ahead so the War is going on as its plan,” said85. British Prime Minister Blair.短文改错练习（39）My husband 96-year-old grandmother came to live 76. with us for many years of independence. We did 77. all the things we could make her feel comfortable, 78. in our home, including giving her the private line for 79. their bedroom. One evening we were having a party 80. while the phone rang. It was telephone operator, 81. who asked, “Do you have a grandmother on upstairs? 82. “Yes,what’s happened?” my husband replied.“Well,”the 83. operator again continued,“She can't remember. 84. your phone number, and she like a cup of tea.. ”85.短文改错练习（40）I'd like to tell you something more about the problem of 76. pollution we are facing to. As we know, the factory 77. besides our school gives off heavy smoke all day 78. long. Very loud voices hurt our ears. Rubbish and 79. waste are thrown here or there. It also sends out 80. polluting water and poisonous gas. All this has 81. made a great harm to the health and study of the 82. teachers and students. But as time goes on, a little 83. has done to change the situation. I don't think we can 84. study well until the problem is solved. We do hope85. you'll help and support us.短文改错练习（41）Helen is one of my best friends. She has taught 76. us English when I attended training c lass two 77. years before. Helen always made good preparations 78. for the lesson, and she tried her best to make 79. her classes lively. I used to being poor in English, 80. especially in written English. But now I'm able 81. to write English letters and r eports correct. 82.I still remember how she helped me for my 83. English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm g oing to 84. send to her a card and give her best wishes. 85.短文改错练习（42）The early morning fire damaged the historic Gallad H ouse today. 76 It destroyed the third floor of the building so fire fighters saved 77 the first and the second floors. There were only a few elderly people 78 living in the building at the time and they carried out to safety. 79 The Gallad House was built in 1718 and was used for a hotel f or over 80 150 years. George Washington stayed in here in 1782. The Gallad family 81 owned the building for the elderly. Several fire department were c alled 82 to the scene. When Fire Chief Andrew Bond asked when the fire 83 started, he answered that perhaps a burning cigarette caused it. 84 Chief Bond had promised to further examine the cause. 85短文改错练习（43）When passing the bus station on my way home，I found out alittle girl alone crying. Obviously,she was losing，looking for her mother. I came up and asked her why. When asked where her mother was,she just shook head and kept crying. Then I took her to the station broadcasting room for a help. "Anyone who lost a child please come to our broadcasting room..." which was soon heard again and a gain. Minutes later,a worrying mother came. The girl ran to her mother happily，tears still in eyes. The mother was very thankful and askedfor my name. With smile，I answered，" I'm only a League member.I have just done that a League member should do. It's my duty." 76777879808182838485短文改错练习（44）I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field looking for rabbits to draw. Losing in thought，I hadn't noticed a bull to running towards me. About 100 76777879。

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?改错四Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward tohear from you soon.Yours, Li HuaTwo months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them，there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.改错六Dear Li Ming,I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Dear Sally,Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned mone y. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I was used to ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I have gained some so cial experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. In the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.改错八Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.No. 9I went to the Summer Palace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists.I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changeshad taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral EnglishNo.10My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I f elt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.No. 11Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing in free class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.No. 12Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.No. 13Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the aft ernoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing our good congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.No. 14In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study andthey do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.No. 15It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s reported that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.No. 16The Guangming Middle School is in west of the city, with the Chengxi River run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers.No. 17One morning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog r an here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!No. 18Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrot e “105”on the trademark with a pencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.No. 19One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal like that?” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I can do that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can do what I like with what was mine.”No. 20An old man was seating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a while, and he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came there?No. 21Show respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral value. As most of the students today are “the only child” in their family, they often regard them as the “centre” of the family, without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came. It is “Respecting parents programme”. Ten “Do’s” have worked out for the students to follow clearly and easily. They in clud: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best wishes to them; tell “hello” to your parents see them returning home; and tell your parents where you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully.No. 22Welcome to Holl and! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, for spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. You won’t be able to stop taking photograph! W e have many beautiful towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You don’t have to worry about language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come again next year.No. 23This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologi st, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for you row of judgment?” “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered replied. “I am like the monkey?” "Yes, you aren’t. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”No. 24I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates, I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encouraged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachers’desk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kinds of activities. All these helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.No. 25When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decided to find whether this was true or not. It was happened thatthere were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them lived for many years without any problem. The one who had to drink tea died in the age of 83 and the other lived even long. Therefore, Swede is one of the countries there much tea and coffee are drunk.No. 26My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We couldn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the Buckingham Palace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.No. 27One day I happened to find out a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expression. With time going by, I found I could even communicate some college students freely.No. 28The Internet is a computer network use the telephone system to link together million of computers around the world. Once you’re connected to the Internet, and there are lots of difference things you can do. You can send “e-mail” to your friends as long as they were on the Internet, or looking through all sorts of information on the World Wide Web. You don’t need know how the Internet works in order to use them. But if you understand the basics which may help you solve many problems you have and you can impress your friends by your Net knowledge !No. 29Mr. Huang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our chemistry when we were in Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. He usually made well preparations for the lessons and was strict with us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in chemistry. He often helps me with my study patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher he was respected or loved by all the students.No. 30Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him for a rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, an old lady. He doesn’t care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly and on her bed the doctor found a letter, in which he discovered truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wantedto call his mother, and it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.答案：改错一：who's 改为whose 2.正确 3.去掉but 4.on改为in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改为homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改为found 9.immediate 改为immediately 10.fire前加the改错二：the改为a 2.正确 3.see前加to 4.go改为going 5.去掉been 6.去掉had 7.去掉but8.去掉had 9.on改为at 10.him改为her改错三：1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改为been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数 5.study前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改为watch 9正确10.and改为or 改错四：1. learn 改为learnt或learned。

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（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burs t into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll me et you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class S ix, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with someeffectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance. Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighter s will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may al so get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on, "Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. Itis so a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course” I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they of fered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many home work. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I hadstudied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told t he artist he didn’t want to any sha dows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for s everal month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited t o learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to stu dy in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold t owards me. Many time, Iwanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and could n’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popu lar, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)Volunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should beresponsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。

(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As every one knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worriesmuch about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（三）I’m the captain o f our school team so with my fellow playerswe’ve won sever al games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much andreads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their wordwere a great encouragement to me.（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it do esn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So once you’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（一）第一行：two-days 改为two-day第二行：mountain 前加a 第三行：noon后加when第四行：them改为us 第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed 第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（二）第一行：with改为on第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of第四行：删去be；read改为reading第五行：programs 第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really（三）第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his（四）第一行：write后加in第二行：去掉第一个in第三行：anything改为everything 第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at 第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk 第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but 第八行：去掉about （六）第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what （七）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right 第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have（八）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy 第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（九）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime 前加a；are改为is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in 第八行：exist改为exists（十）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things 第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in 第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改为clearly。

改错一之杨若古兰创作I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class.Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.改错二I went to see the film after supper. On my waythe cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way.I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changesthat had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.改错三Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation."So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?改错四Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang.I’d like to your pe nfriend, and get to know more about your country.First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to HongqiMiddle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games?What your favoritesport? I look forward to hear from you soon.Y ours, Li Hua改错五yinthem.Mybrothergavemeanote whi chread, “My present hasput in your bedroom.” WhenIhurriedintomybedroom, Ifoundabox, inthattherewasanelectronicdictionary.Iwasverygladbutafewsurprisedtore ceivethesetwopresents.改错六Dear Li Ming,I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry abou t you.I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is thatyou have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting.I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I kn ow it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more andmore important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed.Do remember where is a will, there is a way.改错七Dear Sally,Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job, in it I work like a guide in a travel agency. This is the first time when I have earned money. I’ve realized what hard my parents work to support for the f amily. I was used to ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money or learn to share worry with my parents. I’ve learnt how to get along well with other. What’s more, I have gained some social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt fro m textbooks. In the word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.改错八Sports is fun and most people in the world, whether men or woman , boys or girls enjoy them. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend many hours play games. Why? One of the reasons is that sports help make them live happy. In the other words, they help to keep people strong and feeling good. When they were playing games, they move a lot. That is why sports are good activities for their healthy. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports with watching others play.No. 9I went to the SummerPalace on last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then webegan to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes had taken place in the past few years. After which, we went boating on a lake and had a good time. We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other on the future. They thanked me again and again. I was very glad to have a chance to practising my oral EnglishNo.10My classmate except me were in high spirits. At the coming party I would have to do some cleanings, for I wasn’t able to dance and sing. During the party, I tried to keep the room being clean. After the party I got rid the rubbish. Enjoying my classmates’ smiling faces, I felt their job worthwhile. When told the room will have been a dustbin without me I thought of a saying, "There must have a use for my talent." You may have no special talent, so as long as you try to do good in everything useful, you’ll find everything is beautiful at every corner of your life.No. 11Recently, we have had a discussing about if we should study by discussing in free class. Views vary from persons to person. Most of the students consider that it is of greatly help studying by discussing infree class, that, they think, can help to find better ways to solve problems. What is much, they believe that they learn by discussing can last longer in their memories. However, there are 35 percents of the students holding the opposite view it is not good. They insist that discussing mean lacking thinking and the loud noises is caused by it will disturb others.No. 12Our school lies on the foot of a mountain with a small river passes by. It used to be a quiet, clean and beautiful place for a school. It is a pity which things have changed after a chemical factory was built near our school one year ago. Every day the factory produces many waste water and some harmful gases. The terribly pollution is harmful to our health. What’s bad, the great noise from the factory had a bad effect on our activities. As a result, our school is no longer what it used to. Our teachers and students are miserable beyond the description.No. 13Now I’d like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we are all held together for our 18-years-old birthday. At the first we promised that like grown-ups we should be responsible for our society. Then we expressed thank to our parents who experienced hardships to bring us up and our teachers who educated us heart or soul. And our teachers also gave to us cards expressing ourgood congratulations and wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderfully performances.No. 14In the country now, there are many children do not attend the school. I think one of the reasons is that their families are very poor to send them to school. They had to stay at home to make money to support their families. Other reason is that many parents think it useless of the girls to study and they do not like them to go to school. A third reason is what some children are not interesting in their lessons. In my opinion, all children, included girls, have the chance to receive education. Everybody should pay attention for the education of the children.No. 15It is known to us, a severe tusnami occurred in the Indian Ocean in December 26, 2004. It’s report ed that more than 10 countries were suffered from the disaster. But it caused more than 200,000 deaths and left million of people homeless. Countless houses and schools have destroyed. Just imagine how the students here need help. Schools should be rebuilt so that they could return to classes soon. Here the Student Union calls for everyone to do something for them. We’ll have a voluntary contribution this week. Let’s give away our pocket’s money.No. 16The GuangmingMiddle School is in west of the city, with the ChengxiRiver run nearby. When you enter the school, you can see a big flower bed in the front of you, and two large buildings on both side: the library on your right and the teach building on your left. Walk on further, and you will find the sports building. Behind which, there are two basketball courts. On the north of them is the sports ground. On it’s east side stand two buildings: the dining hall, or the dormitory. All the buildings of the school is surrounded by bushes and flowers. No. 17One mor ning, Mrs. Smith’s dog was hunger. She took out a piece of paper, that read, “Give it half a pound of meat.” Then she gave it to the dog saying “Bring it to the butcher’s.” The dog ran here and gave the paper to the butcher. He read it and did. Soon, the dog came again and gave him other piece of paper. Without looking, he did so once more. Two hours late it came again. He wandered why Mrs. Smith gave it so much meat. He read the paper and found out there was not a single word on it. What a clever dog it was!No. 18Mr. Chen has a habit of drink. The best present to him, of course, is wine. His the eldest son brought him a bottle of Mao Tai. He was glad and drank them up. Then he wrote “105”on the trademark with apencil, meant he had already drunk 105 bottles the wine. Two days late, a stranger came and offered to paying 5 Yuan for the empty bottle. Mr. Chen was very pleasnt and sold it. Several days later, his second son brought him other bottle of Mao Tai. While enjoying it, he suddenly found out “105”----the very mark on it.No. 19One day a lawyer happened to see a man beat a donkey with a stick. “Why were you doing that?” asked the lawyer. “To make the donkey to go.” answered the man. “Have you right to beat the animal like that?” asked the lawyer once again. “Certain I have.” said the man. “It is my donkey and I can do that I’d like to with what is my”. The lawyer thought for a minute and took his own stick and beat the man. “Stopping!” cried the man, “Are you mad?” “Oh, yes. This is my stick and I can d o what I like with what was mine.”No. 20An old man was seating in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog sleep soundly. The old man decided to leaving home for a while, and he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog and let it fetched the shoes for him. Out of its expectation, the dog didn’t even stand, but just barked with two eyes closed again. He was complete puzzled. As he was wondering what washappening, a cat appeared in the front of him. Why do you think a cat came there?No. 21Show respect to parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral value. As most of the students today are “the only child” in their family, they often regard them as the “centre” of the family, without caring many about their parents. Our school start a programme when the new year came. It is “Respecting parents programme”. Ten “Do’s” have worked out for the students to follow clearly and easily. They includ: “Remember your parents” birthdays and express you're the best wishes to them; tell “hello” to your parents see them returning home; and tell your parents where you go when you leave home.” The programme has been successfully.No. 22Welcome to Holland! I hope you all enjoy your staying here. I’m glad you have come on April, for spring is certainly a best season to get to know Holland. I’m sure you will amazed by the color and variety of all the flowers. You won’t be able to stop taking photograph! We have many beautiful towns. I suggest you start by taking a boats trip on the Canals. It’s a relaxed way of visiting the old canal houses. Then you can visit to our museums and churches. You don’t have to worry about language problems there. Just have a pleased trip and come againnext year.No. 23This is said that Great biologist Darwin was a man with a sense of humor. Once he is invited to dinner. At the dinner, he happened to sit next a young good-looking woman. “Mr. Darwin,” the woman asked a biologist, “I heard of you have made a surprising conclusion which the person's ancestor is the monkey. I am suitable for you row of judgment?” “Certainly.” Darwin well-mannered replied. “I am like the monkey?” "Yes, you aren’t. And you were changed not from the ordinary monkey, but from the extreme attractive monkey.”No. 24I am shy when at school. I was afraid of speaking in front of the class. When I had to face such many classmates, I felt nervous but my voice and legs shook. My teachers helped me a lot of. They often encouraged me to answer question in class and to go to the teachers’de sk to read lessons. Sometime I felt I didn’t do so well but they spoke high of me. Meanwhile, my classmates kindly asked me to join them all kinds of activities. All these helped me with my confidence. Since then on I dared to do that I wanted to.No. 25When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Swede decidedto find whether this was true or not. It was happened that there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them lived for many years without any problem. The one who had to drink tea died in the age of 83 and the other lived even long. Therefore, Swede is one of the countries there much tea and coffee are drunk.No. 26My wife and me spent two weeks in London last year. We went here in autumn. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End. It was convenient as we do most of our sightseeing on foot. Taxis was quite too expensive. We coul dn’t understand the bus routes, but my wife didn’t like traveling by the underground. She said it made her to feel sick. We went to look at the places which all tourists see. We saw the BuckinghamPalace. We came shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money. What we liked most, though, was going to theatre.No. 27One day I happened to find out a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprise, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advices and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful wordsand expression. With time going by, I found I could even communicate some college students freely.No. 28The Internet is a computer network use the telephone system to link together million of computers around the world. Once you’re connected to the Internet, and there are lots of difference things you can do. You can send “e-mail” to your friends as long as they were on the Internet, or looking through all sorts of information on the World Wide Web. You don’t need know how the Internet works in order to use them. But if you understand the basics which may help you solve many problems you have and you can impress your friends by your Net knowledge !No. 29Mr. Huang is sixty years old and had retired. He taught our chemistry when we were in Grade One. He taught very well. He tried his best to make his classes live. He usually made well preparations for the lessons and was strict with us. Each time when we made mistakes in our homework, he would ask us to correct it. I was poor in chemistry. He often helps me with my study patiently. With his help I made great progresses. He was very kind to his students. As experienced teacher he was respected or loved by all the students.No. 30Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him for a rich family who had no child. The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor. In his hospital, he had a patient, an old lady. He doesn’t care too much about her, for she could hardly afford for the medical care. One evening, the lady died quietly and on her bed the doctor found a letter, in which he discovered truth and felt the love of a great mother. He wanted to call his mother, and it was too late. Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.答案：改错四：1. learn 改为learnt或learned. 2. to 后加be 或become. 3. 删去more.第一次告诉Bob 关于本人的一些事情，此处用 more 分歧逻辑. 4. where 改为 which.在此非限制性定语从句中，关系词在从句中作主语，故用 which. 5. 此行无错. 6. subject 改为 subjects.quits a few 意为“相当多”，润色可数名词复数. 7. use 改为 used.据下文 but now 可知，此处利用used to do 暗示“过去经常做某事”. 8. interesting 改为interested.be interested in…为固定短语，“对……感爱好”. 9. What 后加 is.此句无谓语. 10. hear 改为 hearing.look forward to doing sth.为固定短语.改错五：答案：76．去掉to短语错误.goa broad“出国”.77．present→presents名词的数错误.present“礼物”，是可数名词.78．去掉第二个were动词错误.interest在此是及物动词用法，意为“使……感爱好”.beinterestedin“对……感爱好”.79．buys→bought时态错误.由全文可知，用普通过去时态.80．√81．them→it代词错误.在这本书里有关于肢体说话的图片和分歧国家的说话风俗.用it指代这本书.82．put前加been语态错误.我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了.礼物是被放在卧室里，所以用自动语态.83．that→which定语从句关系词错误.介词后用which，不必that.84．but→and连接逻辑错误.前后是并列关系而非转机关系.85．few→little混淆错误.alittle与little可以用作副词，暗示“有点”“稍稍” ，润色动词、副词、描述词或介词短语.如：Heisalittletired.他有点累了.而afew不成用作副词.→→→→→改错六41. about→with/to 根据句意，可知此处是表达“和父母交谈”，而不是“谈论父母”.42. a s→even if 意为“好像”，与句意不符；根据句意，此处应是表达让步关系.故用even if ,意为“即使”.43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短语，意为“和…相片融洽”.44. √45. way→ways some在此处润色可数名词复数.46. walk前加a go out for a walk意为“出去散步”47. and→or 此处表选择关系.48. are→were “他们年轻时候”利用动词的过去式.49. our→their 和they坚持分歧.50. honesty→honest 描述词honest 作表语.—————and—others 8. something后加that 9. the word→a 10. wonderfully—wonderful改错八 1. Sports is→are 2. woman→women 3. called前加have 4. play games→playing5. happy→happily6. the other去掉the7. they were→are8. healthy→health9. make→makes 10. with→byNo.9 1. on last去掉on 2. America tourists→American 3. greeted him→them4. students travel →travelling5. busy with去掉with6. changes 后加that7. After which→ that 8. email address→addresses 9. on the→in 10. to practising→practiseNo. 10 1. My classmate→classmates 2. some cleanings→cleaning 3. and sing→or4. being clean去掉being5. rid后加of6. their job→my7. will have→ would8. must have→be9. so as→ but 10. do good in→wellNo. 11 1. a disscussing→discussion 2. from persons→person 3. greatly→great4. that→which5. much→more6. believe that→what7. percents →percent8. view后加that 9. mean→means 10. 去掉isNo. 12 1. on→at 2. passes→passing 3. which→that 4. after→since5. many→much6. terribly→terrible7. bad →worse8. had→hased to后加be 10. 去掉theNo. 13 1. took 前加that 2. are→were 3. 18-years-old→18-year-old4. 去掉first前面的the5. like→→thanks 7. or→and8. 去掉gave后面的to 9. expressing our→ their 10. wonderfully→wonderfulNo. 14 1. children前加who/that 2. 去掉attend后面的the 3. very→too 4. had→have5. other→another6. of→for7. what→that8. interesting→interested9. included→including 10. for→toNo. 15 1. It is→As 2. in December→on 3. were suffered去掉were 4. But→And 5. million→millions 6. destroyed前加been 7. students here→there8. they could→can 9. calls for→on 10. pocket’s→pocketNo. 16 1. west前加the 2. run→running 3. the front去掉the4. both side→sides5. teach building→teaching6. further→farther7. Behind which→it8. On it’s→its 9. or the→and 10.school is→areNo. →hungry 2. that read→which 3. Bring→Take 4. ran here→there5. and did后加so6. other piece改为another7. late改为later8. wandered→wondered9. found out去掉out 10. What→HowNo. 18 1. drink→drinking 2. His the去掉the 3. them→it 4. meant→meaning 5. bottles后加of 6. late→later 7. paying→pay8. pleasant→pleased9. other→another 10. found out去掉out bottle→bottlesNo. 19 1. beat→beating 2. Why were→are 3. to go去掉to 4. right 前加the5. Certain→Certainly6.do that→what7. is my→mine8. Stopping→Stop9. yes→no 10. was mine→isNo. 20 1. seating→sitting/seated 2. sleep→sleeping 3. leaving→leave4. and he→but5. fetched→fetch6. its expectation→his7. stand后加up8. complete→completely9. the front去掉the 10. think a →theNo. 21 1. show→showing 2. value→values 3. them →themselves 4. many→much5. start→started6. worked前加been7. your the去掉the8. tell→say9. see→seeing10. successful→successfulNo. 22 1. staying→stay 2. on April→in 3. a best→the 4. amazed前加be5. photograph→photographs6. boats→boat7. relaxed→relaxing8. visit to 去掉to 9. problems there→here 10. pleased→pleasantNo. →It 2. he is→was 3. next后加to 4. a biologist→the 5. heard of去掉of 6. conclusion which→that 7. you row→your 8. Yes→No9. And→But10. extreme→extremelyNo. 24 1. am→→so 3. but→and 4. a lot of去掉of 5. question→questions 6. Sometime→Sometimes 7. high→highly 8. join them后加in 9. Since→From10. that→whatNo. 25 1. was first→were 2. harm→harmful 3. find后加out 4. was happened去掉was5. whom→who/that6. others→other7. All→Both8. in the age →at9. long→longer 10. there→whereNo. 26 1. me→I 2. here→there 3. do→did 4. Taxis was→were 5. but my→and6. by→→went 9. many→much 10. theatre前加theNo. 27 1. find out去掉out 2. there→where 3. were better→was 4. than me→→advice 6. But→So/And 7. practise→practising 8. learned from去掉from 9. expression→expressions 10. communicate后加withNo. 28 1. use→using 2. million →millions 3. and there去掉and 4. difference→different 5. they were→are 6. looking→look 7.know前加to 8. use them→it9. which may→it 10. by→withNo. 29 1. had retired→has 2. taught our →us 3. live →lively 4. well →good5. 去掉when6. correct it→them7. helps →helped8. progresses→progress9. As后加an 10. or→andNo. 30 1. touched→touching 2. sons→son 3. very poor→so 4. him for→to5. late→later6. doesn’t→didn’t7. afford for去掉for8. quietly→quiet9. truth前加the 10. and it→but。

短文改错英语30篇短文改错英语30篇1. Last week, I have gone to the cinema with my friends and watched a new movie. The film was so interesting that kept me engaged from beginning to end. The actor's performance was amazing and the special effects were spectacular. However, there was a few scenes where the plot seemed confusing. In overall, I have really enjoyed the movie and I highly recommend it to others.2. Yesterday, I had visited my grandparents who live in the countryside. The weather was so nice, so we have had a barbecue in the garden. After that, we have went for a walk and enjoyed the beautiful scenery. We have also played some outdoor games, that was a lot of fun. I really enjoyed the time spent with my grandparents.3. My sister and me loves to travel to different countries. We have visited many places around the world, including France, Italy, and Australia. Each country have its own unique culture and traditions. We have learned so many things from our travels and it has broadened our horizons. Traveling is definitely one of the best things in life.4. Yesterday, I have decided to clean up my room. I havestarted by organizing my desk and throwing away any old and unnecessary items. Then, I have swept the floor and dusting the furniture. Finally, I have made my bed and rearranged the shelves. Now my room looks much cleaner and more organized.5. Last weekend, my family and I have went for a picnic in the park. We have packed some sandwiches, fruits, and drinks. When we have arrived, we have found a nice spot under a tree and spread out our blanket. We have enjoyed the delicious food and played some games. It was a wonderful day spent with my loved ones.6. When I was younger, I have played the piano for several years. I have taken weekly lessons and practiced every day. However, after a while, I have lost interest in playing the piano and have stopped taking lessons. Looking back, I have regretted stopping because playing an instrument is a valuable skill.7. Last summer, my family and I have went on a camping trip. We have packed all the necessary camping gear, including tents, sleeping bags, and cooking utensils. During the trip, we have explored the beautiful nature, went hiking, and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings. It was a memorable experience that we will cherish forever.8. Yesterday, I have gone shopping with my friends. We have visited different stores and tried on various clothes. Finally, we have bought some new clothes and accessories. It was a fun and exciting day spent with my friends.9. Every morning, I have went for a run in the park. Running is a great way to start the day and it helps me to stay fit and healthy. I have enjoyed the fresh air and the beautiful scenery during my runs.10. Last night, I have cooked dinner for my family. I have prepared a delicious meal with chicken, vegetables, and rice. We have sat together at the dining table and enjoyed the homemade food. It was a satisfying and enjoyable evening.11. During the summer vacation, I have read many books. Reading is a wonderful way to relax and escape from reality.I have traveled to different worlds and experienced various adventures through the books I have read.12. Yesterday, I have went to the beach with my friends. We have swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The weather was perfect and we have had a great time.13. My brother and me have been studying English for many years. We have taken English classes and practiced speaking, listening, reading, and writing. Our English skills haveimproved significantly.14. Yesterday, I have finished reading a fascinating book. The storyline was captivating and the characters werewell-developed. I have been engrossed in the book from the beginning to the end.15. Last week, I have visited a museum with my classmates. We have learned about different periods in history and admired beautiful artworks. It was an educational and inspiring trip.16. Yesterday, I have gone for a hike in the mountains. The scenery was breathtaking and I have enjoyed the fresh air. It was a challenging but rewarding experience.17. My family and I have been planning a trip to Europe. We have booked flights, reserved hotels, and created an itinerary. We are looking forward to exploring new countries and experiencing different cultures.18. Last weekend, I have attended a music concert. The band's performance was outstanding and the atmosphere was electric. I have danced and sang along with the crowd.19. Yesterday, I have spent the day gardening. I have planted flowers, trimmed the hedges, and watered the plants. It was a rewarding and relaxing activity.20. During the summer break, I have volunteered at a localcharity organization. I have helped organize events and fundraisers. It was a fulfilling experience.21. Last night, I have watched a thrilling soccer match. The teams played with passion and the game was intense. I have cheered for my favorite team and celebrated their victory.22. Yesterday, I have baked cookies for my friends. I have followed a recipe and decorated the cookies with icing. My friends loved the homemade treats.23. My siblings and me have been learning to play a musical instrument. We have taken lessons and practiced together. It has been a fun and bonding experience.24. Last weekend, I have spent time with my grandparents. We have shared stories, played games, and cooked together. It was a heartwarming and memorable time.25. Yesterday, I have attended a dance class. I have learned new moves and danced to upbeat music. It was a fun and energetic session.26. My friends and me have started a book club. We have chosen a book to read each month and discussed it together. It has been a great way to share our love for reading.27. Last week, I have visited an art exhibition. I have admired the beautiful paintings and sculptures. It was aninspiring and thought-provoking experience.28. Yesterday, I have gone to a theme park with my family. We have enjoyed thrilling rides and indulged in delicious snacks. It was a day filled with laughter and excitement.29. My classmates and me have been practicing for a school play. We have memorized our lines and rehearsed the scenes. It has been a fun and collaborative project.30. Last weekend, I have attended a photography workshop.I have learned new techniques and captured stunning images. It was a creative and inspiring event.。

欧阳语创编(1)Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It camesudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, Iwent into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, andall is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk fly high into the airand some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catchthem, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came backinto house, it was raining harder and harder. I triedvery hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudlycrashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ranout to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke thetop of the back room.(2)I have been planning to join in our college basketball teamnext year, so now I am spending as more time as I canwith other people who likes to play. They are teachingme the most important rules and technologies of the game,and I am getting the better all the time. We have aneighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing againstone of the best teams in the city, but I think we canbeat them if we won't make any mistakes.(3)Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor,director and teacher ofBeijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part ofChina and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteenor seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his studentsthat it is much more relaxing than the one he used tostudy in. He thought that an actor should relax himself whenperforming. Yet his students deep respect him and henever needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing.For his opinion, actors should go on even when theyfeel they had made a mistake in their performancesbecause the moment is already gone but people can neverbe back to it. . . So art is always changing and developing.(4)Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water had come back inthe evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class.After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I gotto home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I mustreview all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities,that include Chinese, English, Politics and History aswell. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.(5)I was recent told that listening to loud music is graduallymaking people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already beenhappened to my neighbor. For years he has turned a deafear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave aparty she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyonecan dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist hasdiscovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects onrats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) withlegs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing themout by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen tomy neighbor someday.(6)Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for threeyears. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstlyto express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letterhe said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us waitto see until we have any chance after graduation." Soafter graduation I telephoned to him, asking him aboutgo out . But he said he didn't want to. He justwanted to sleep and watched TV.How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?(7)Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White,said to her class, "Don't leave your seats. Read your books on yourselves. You would study hard and be good students. " As soonas the teacher went away, the classroom becomingnoise. One boy drew a picture of the teacheron the blackboard. Another boy began to make facejust to make the other students to laugh.The boyput his finger close to his mouth and tell theclass that Miss White is coming back. All thestudents sat down their seats and the classroombecame quiet again. The door open and in came Miss White.(8)Once there lived a boy was very fond ofreading. But he was so poor to buy any books. So he had to borrow them of a rich manlived far away. The boy always triedhard to finish read the books and returned them to the owner within the giving time. Sothe rich man was ready lending him any of thebooks he wanted them. In this way he read a lotand late became a well-known writer of his time.However, the rich man's son who didn't like to studyremained a man with a little knowledge.(9)Our four-years-old son came into the houseproudly to showed me a caterpillar(毛毛虫)that wascrawling up his arm. Trying hard to hiding mynauseating feeling(掩饰我的恶心), I say, "Mark,why don't you take them back outside Its motherwill be looking for it, but it will miss its mother. "I was feeling rather pleasing at the way I hadhandled the situation. And a few minutes later Mark returned back to the house with two caterpillarsand said excitedly , "Look, I founded the mother!"(10)Like most my schoolmates, I have neither brothers norsisters---in any other words, I am an only child. My parentslove me dearly of course and will do all they can make surethat I get a good education. They did not want me to doany work at family; they want me to devote all my time tomy studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. Wemay be one family and live under a same roof, but we donot seem to get much time to talk about together. It looksas if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do theyreally understand their own daughter What things are inother homes, I wonder.(11)March22nd , Tuesday , cloudyI watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could notgo over my lessons. This morning I got up very latethat I had to hurry school without breakfast yet Iwas late of the first class. When I entered theclassroom, the maths teacher has to stop explainingan important problem, and all the eyes fixed uponme. My face turned to red. Something even worsehappened to me in the English class. The teacher askedme to recite the text, but I could speak nothing butsorry, as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons.The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stoodat my bench without daring to raise my head. Whata terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this.(12)A king liked to write stories. One day, the king showed some his storieswith a famous writer. The writer said that these stories were bad. The king get angry with him and sent him to the prison. After some time the king felt pity for a writer and set him freely. When the writer wasout prison, again the king showed himsome stories and asked how he thought them. The writer turned into the soldiers and said,"Take me back prison. "(13)At beginning of term I introducedmy teacher for my parents. Our teacherMr. Wang asked my parents of mysummer holiday. To my parents' opinionI have a good time with my classmates.I told my teacher that I have finished homeworks at home. Then I helpedmy father in the farm. We went onwork by the lights of the tractors.Father had only two and three young men working for him at harvest time.(14)Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second halfof senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little morethan three months before I graduate middle school. Atthe present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order totake the college entrance examination. I hope to go toBeijing University, that is one of the best universities notonly in China but also in the world. I'll try my betterto turnmy dream to reality. Most of my classmates are alsostudying very hard to realize our wishes.I do believe everyonewill be able to enter a very good university and college.(15)Once, lately at night, an Englishman came outof his room into a passage of the hotel and askthe servant to bring her a glass of water. The servantdid as he asked. The Englishman returned his room,and a few minutes later he came into the passage againand once more asked the servant a glass of water.Every a few minutes the Englishman would come outof his room and repeated his request. After half an hourthe astonishing servant decided to ask the man whathe is doing with the water. "Nothing," answered hecalmly. "It's simply that the room is on fire.(16)I gave my housekeeper an old pair trousers to washand went in the study to read. My housekeeper usuallylooked through my pocket before wash my clothes,but for some reasons she failed to do so thistime. As I was reading, I suddenly remember thatthere was a five-pounds note in the back pocket ofthe trousers I had told her to wash it. I droppedmy book and rushed into the bathroom, but it is toolate. My housekeeper says that my trousers had beenin washing machine for fifteen minutes already.(17)One afternoon on April, 1912 , a new ship set off fromEngland to America on it first trip.It was one of thelargest and first ship at that time. It was cold,but the ship was pleasant and people areenjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. Peoplecould see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly,the man on watch shouting "Look out! Iceberg!"It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to astop, there that was a very big hole in the ship and waterbegan to come. Slowly the ship started to go down.(18)I've a friend who has a big police dog is named Jack.Every Sunday afternoon my friend takes Jack a long walk inthe park. Jack likes these walks in the park very well.One Sunday a young man dropped in my friend. He stayeda long time. He talked and talked. Soon it was the time for myfriend to take Jack for his walk, but the visitor still sat talking.Jack became worried his walk in the park. He walkedaround the room several times but then he sat right infront of the visitor and looked him. But the visitor paidnone attention. He continued talking. Finally Jack couldstand it no longer. He hold the visitor's hat in his mouth.(19)June 12,Sunday FineToday is Sunday, I didn't get up early as usually. In themorning after I finished my homework, I do some washing.Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited himto see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinemaat3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out.Then we went back to school and played the football.After this, when we were about to go home ,we saw ourEnglish teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English. this termHe also suggested that we should read more and wrote more.We promised him that we would listen his advice.(20)In autumn of 1935,when I was a young man, I wastraveling in the north of Indian. One evening,after hunting in the forest all day, I was returningto the place which I had put up my tent. It was gettingdark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I sawtwo eye glaring at me from among the trees. What can I do? Should I jump into the riverto save my life? Then I looked at the right.In the river there had a big crocodile waiting towelcome me with its mouth was wide open. (21)Cats are animals of habit. They like to go to sleepabout same time every day and for a certain length of time. Theyseem to have natural clock inside them that tells themwhen sleeping. Besides their regular sleep, cats take naps(打盹).Some scientists think that people should also take cat nap. Thehabit would do good for people's health. Cat naps helped build up energy in the body.Since cats have moods(情绪) like these of people,scientists believe that people can improve their moods withcat-napping. People might become more happier and more active.(22)A man shot two students died and woundedfive other at an Australian university on Monday,after he was overpowered by classmates of the victims(受害者). The two dead were both male of Asianappearance in his early 20s. The othershave being treated for minor(未成年的)injuries.The man, in his mid-30s and is of Asian appearance,was seized several students inclassroom at Monash University, Melbourne and was late arrested.(23)When I first learned to write in English , I run intomuch difficulties.The main problem was that I always thoughtin Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed heradvice and should put down 100 words or so each day.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I waslearning to express me in simple English. One day I wrotea story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very muchand reads it to the class. All said that the story wasa good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me .(24)Dear Xiaohua,It is four days since Mother accepted the operation.She is feeling much more better. The doctors told methe operation was successful, but because her old ageshe had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. Thedoctors also say it was quite necessaryfor her todo so. We expect to get a full report in two and threedays. Please tell the good news to the rest of familyas soon as possible. You needn't to come here. I'mable to look after Mother myself. You'd bettersend flowers to Mother. She will feel happily.Yours,Xiaohui(25)Tom had retired and lived lonely a longway from town. He hardly never left his home. Butone day he went to town buy some things in themarket, and after he had bought it , he wentinto a restaurant and sit down at a table by himself.When he looked around, he saw several old peoplesput on glasses after reading their newspapers. Soafter the lunch he decided to go to a store to buyhimself a pair of glasses, either, He walkedalong a wide street and fast found a store.(26)My parents were all standing there, shouting at each other.The word "divorce(离婚)" was repeated and broke my heart each time.I had trapped between them and didn't know what to do.A million thoughts rushed into my mind, but nothing of them could ease my feelings.I rushed back to my room, seated down in silence and stared out of the window. The leaves were floating in air. They struggled trying to catch the wind and finally they had to fall on the ground.I knew I was not the only one had gone through this. ButImust learn to fight against this. Later in the day I took up with a pen and wrote down "It is until Itake a step back and look at my family that I can real appreciate this thing has helped me grow strong and mature(成熟)." (27)Dear editor,In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. Inorder to build house and grow more crops, people cut downmore and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest wasalmost destroyed. Gradual,the green hills have changed intowasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, fromwhich we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people shouldrealize the terribly result of not caring about our environment.What's more, they should take good care of the forests and planttrees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.(28)When I found out that my train would three hourslate, I changed my idea and would get a bus instead.I was about to rush out of the train station while awell-dressed old man took me by my arm, "Younglady," said the gentleman, "Shouldn't I find outthe bus schedule (时刻表) before you rush out catch thebus ". I stared at him with my mouth opened. How didhe read my mind? Before I can say a word, he added,"You see, my train is also running late. A same ideacame to me. But I think a good conversation that canhelp pass the time. Before you know it, your train will be there."(29)Dear Kang Li,I haven't heard you for a long time. Howare you? I had just finished the exams. Now I'mglad I have time to write for you. Our teachertells us that China is a big country has themost population in the world. It's on the otherside of the world. Now the sun is shining brighthere and perhaps you're sleeping in the darknight. I wish to know anything more about theChinese way of living. I wonder at if you cantell me about it in your the next letter. Please write soon.(30)I visited the zoo yesterday, and I was veryunhappy and angry about the things what I saw.The large animals was in small cages. The lionwas walking back and forth. It was completelybored. The tiger fell asleep all the afternoon. I seepeople feeding the fish. They were throwingrices and meat into the pond,which couldkill the fish, but no one tried stop them. When I had the drink at the zoo restaurant, the waiter served me rude. Outside the restaurant,the rubbish bins were full and rubbish was blowing everywhere. It seems that the zoo doesn't look the animals or the visitors very well.(31)Once a man got on a bus for New York. Hehid in toilet, because he did not want to pay.But a passenger saw her. She tapped theperson infront of her on the shoulder and say, "There's abum(流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver."The message was past from person to person. But anywhere along the way, it changed. The busdriver was told that there was a bomb in the toilet.He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned thepolice. When the police came in, they told thepassengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Thenthey closed the highway. This soon causeda 15-miles-longtraffic jam. Under the help of a dog, the policesearched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb!参考答案11. sudden--suddenly2. hotter---hot3.is--was 4. flew 5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the 8. loudly---loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken21. 去掉in2. more → much3. likes → like4. technologies → techniques5. 去掉the6. play → plays7. rest前加the8. improved → improve9. but--and 10. won't → don't31. part- parts2. a-the3. hope∧to4. 去掉 it5. thought-thinks6. deep-deeply7. hearing-heard8. For-In9. had--have 10. but-and41. On→In2. have→had3. 在cut前加上been4. after→until5. the→a6. tired→tiring7. 去掉to8. subject→subjects9. That--which 10. terribly→ terrible51.recently2. 去掉been3. He-she4. gave---gives5. isn't---doesn't6. in---to 7. 去掉 a 8. with后加their 9.trembled---trembling 10. tail---tails61. be--been2. firstly--first3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to5. until-- if / whether6. 去掉to7. go--going8. watched--watch9. How--what 10. and—or71. on-by2. would-should3. becoming-became4. Noise-noisy5. face-faces6. 去掉第二个to7. tell-told8. is-was9.down-down on 10. open-opened81. boy后加 who2. so-too3. Of--from4. lived-who lived5. read-reading6. giving-given7. lending-to lend8.去掉them9. late-later 10. 去掉第二个 a9.1.years-year2. showed-show3. hiding-hide4. Say-said5.them-it6. but-and7. pleasing-pleased8.And-But9.去掉"back" 10. founded-found101. Of去掉2. any3. can后加to4.did-do 5. family-home 6. subject-subjects 7. a –the8. 去掉about 9. and-or 10. homes-families111. watch--watched2.very---so3.hurry后加to 4.of--for 5. Has-had 6.eyes后加were 7.to 去掉 8.speak—say 9.as--for 10.coldly--cold.121.some→some of2. with →to3. get→got 4. the 5. A-the 6. freely →free 7. out→ out of 8. thought→ thought of 9. into→ to 10. back→ back to131. At→ At the2. for→ to3. of→ about4. To→ In5. have→ had6. Have-had7. homeworks→ homework8. in→ on9. work→ working 10 and→or141.As—like2.realized-realize3.graduate∧ from4.去掉the5. examination---examinations6.that—which7. Batter-best8. to—into 9. our—their 10. and—or151. lately-late2. ask-asked3.her-him4.he asked---he was asked5. and-but6. servant-servant for7. 去掉 a8. repeated-repeat9. astonishing-astonished 10. Is--was161. pair-pair of2.in-into3. wash-washing4. reasons-reason5. remember-remembered6.pounds-pound7.去掉it8.is-was9. says-said 10. In 后加调和171.on→in2it→its3.ship→ships4.are→were5.cold→colder6.or→and7.shouting→shouted8.a→thecome→come in181.去is2.Jack→Jack for3.well→much4.in→in on 5. He→They6. right7. worried→worried about8.but→and 9. looked→looked at 10.none→no191. usually---usual2. do→did3. classmate ---classmates4. And ---But5.had∧ been6. the 去掉7. correct8. have---had9. wrote---write 10. listen---take/follow201. In-In the2. Indian-India3. right4.in ∧which 或which改为where 5.but-and6.eye –eyes7.can –could8. at –to9.had-was 10.去掉was211. right2. same-the same3.have-have a4. sleeping-to sleep5. nap-naps6. for–to 7. helped-help8. these-those 9. with-by 10. 去掉more221.died-dead2.other--others3.after--before4. male--males5. his--their6.have—are7. Is去掉8. seized后加by 9. ∧a 10. later231.run=ran2.many—much3.anything--everything4.my—a5.去掉should6.talk--talking7.me--myself8.to前加it 9.reads--read 10.word—words241.accepted---received2.去掉more3. of4.other---another5. said6. or7. family前加 the8. 去掉to9. myself前加by10. happy251. Lo nely→alone2. never→ever3.buy前加to 4. it→them5. sit→sat 6.peoples→people 7. After-before8.去掉the 9. either→too 10. fast→quickly261.all→both2.had→was3.nothing→none4.seated→sat或后加myself5.air前加the6.and→but7.had前加who8.去掉with9.until前加not10.real=really271.去掉was2.去掉in3.house→houses4.With→As或went →going 5.Gradual=Gradully6.struck→strike7.However→So8.terribly→terrible9.they→we10.instead后加of281.would后加 be2. get→ take3. while → when4. my→ the5. I=you6. catch前加 to7. opened →open8. can→could9. A→The 10. 去掉 that291. heard后加 from2. had---have3. for---to 4. has前加that 或which；has---with5. most---largest6. bright---brightly 7. and---but 8. anything---something 9. 去掉at 10. The去掉301.and→but2.去掉what或把what改为that/which3.was=were4.see→saw5.rices→rice6.tried后面加to7. the→a或去掉the 8.rude→rudely9.blowing→blown 10. look后加after311.in → in the2. her → him3. say → said4. past → passed5.anywhere → somewhere6. immediate → immediately7.去掉 in 8. or → and 9. miles → mile 10. Under → with时间：2021.03.01 创作：欧阳语。

英语短文改错精编版高考训练试题（30题含答案及解析）【英语短文改错精编版】高考训练试题（30题含答案及解析）1、短文改错（10 分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.2、短文改错（10 分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高中短文改错英语30篇带解析下面是30篇高中短文改错英语，每篇短文均有一处错误需要改正，并附有解析。

1. I have just finished reading a interesting book about history. The book tells the story of how the Great Wall in China was built.Correction: an interesting book解析：单词开头是元音音素i，应该使用不定冠词an。

2. She has been working as a nurse at the hospital for ten years, and she is a good nurse.Correction: no error解析：该句无错误。

3. My sister is going to joined a book club at the library next week. She hopes to meet other people who enjoy reading. Correction: join解析：go to意为“去参加某活动”，后跟动词原形，而join表示“加入”，应该用被动语态joined。

4. The movie was so bored that I fell asleep halfway through it.Correction: boring解析：bored是“无聊的”的意思，而boring是形容词“令人无聊的”的形式，应该用boring。

5. Tom is the tallest of all the boy in his class. He can reach the top of the bookshelf easily.Correction: boys解析：该句应该用复数形式boys。

6. I have to call my friend before I forget, because I am always forgetful.Correction: no error解析：该句无错误。

Last Sunday I saw the worst storm in years. It camesudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I 1. _____ went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and 2. _____all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my 3. _____ room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air 4. _____and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch 5. _____ them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back 6. _____into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried 7. _____very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly 8. _____ crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran 9. _____out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the 10. _____top of the back room.(2)I have been planning to join in our college basketball team 1. ______ next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can 2. ______ with other people who likes to play. They are teaching 3. ______me the most important rules and technologies of the game, 4. ______ and I am getting the better all the time. We have a 5. ______ neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area. 6. ______ One of my neighbors is helping rest of us 7. ______ improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against 8. ______ one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can 9. ______ beat them if we won't make any mistakes. 10. _____(3)Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher ofBeijing Opera Theatre. Most of his students are from other part of 1. ______ China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen 2. ______or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students 3. ______ that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to 4. ______ study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when 5. ______ performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he 6. ______ never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. 7. ______For his opinion, actors should go on even when they 8. ______ feel they have made a mistake in their performances 9. ______ because the moment is already gone but people can never 10. ______be back to it. . . So art is always changing and developing.(4)Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the 1. _____ morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because 2. _____ the water supply had cut off. The water had come back in 3._____ the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a 4. _____ short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. 5.______ After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got 6. _____ to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must 7. _____ review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, 8. _____ which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as 9. _____ well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water. 10. _____I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually 1. ______ making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been 2. ______ happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf 3. ______ ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a 4. ______ party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone 5. ______ can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has 6. ______ discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on 7. ______ rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with 8. ______ legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them 9. ______ out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to 10. _____ my neighbor someday.(6)Dear Ralph,I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three 1. ______ years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly 2. ______ to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter 3. ______ he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait 4. ______ to see until we have any chance after graduation." So 5. ______ after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about 6. ______ go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just 7. ______ wanted to sleep and watched TV. 8. ______ What do you think I should do? Do you think 9. ______I should continue to love him and give up Sheila? 10. ______(7)Before leaving the class, the teacher, Miss White,said to her class, "Don't leave yourseats. Read your books on yourselves. You 1. _____ would study hard and be good students. " As soon 2._____ as the teacher went away, the classroom becoming 3._____ noisy. One boy drew a picture of the teacher 4._____ on the blackboard. Another boy began to make face 5._____ just to make the other students to laugh. The boy 6._____ put his finger close to his mouth and tell the 7._____ class that Miss White is coming back. All the 8._____ students sat down their seats and the classroom 9._____ became quiet again. The door open and in came Miss White. 10.____(8)Once there lived a boy was very fond of 1.______ reading. But he was so poor to buy any 2.______ books. So he had to borrow them from a rich man 3.______lived far away. The boy always tried 4.______hard to finish read the books and returned 5.______them to the owner within the giving time. So 6.______the rich man was ready lending him any of the 7.______books he wanted them. In this way he read a lot 8.______and late became a well-known writer of his time. 9.______ However, the rich man's son who didn't like to studyremained a man with a little knowledge. 10._____Our four-years-old son came into the house 1.______ proudly to showed me a caterpillar(毛毛虫)that was 2.______ crawling up his arm. Trying hard to hiding my 3.______ nauseating feeling(掩饰我的恶心), I said, "Mark, 4.______why don't you take them back outside Its mother 5.______will be looking for it, but it will miss its mother. " 6.______I was feeling rather pleasing at the way I had 7.______ handled the situation. And a few minutes 8.______later Mark returned back to the house with two caterpillars 9.______and said excitedly , "Look, I founded the mother!" 10._____(10)Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 1._____ sisters---in any other words, I am an only child. My parents 2._____ love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 3._____ that I get a good education. They did not want me to do 4._____ any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to 5._____ my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We 6._____ may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 7._____ not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 8._____ as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they 9._____ really understand their own daughter What things are inother homes, I wonder. 10._____(11)March 22nd , Tuesday , cloudyI watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could not 1.______go over my lessons. This morning I got up very late 2.______ that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet I 3.______ was late of the first class. When I entered the 4.______ classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explaining 5.______an important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon 6.______ me. My face turned to red. Something even worse 7.______ happened to me in the English class. The teacher askedme to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but 8.______ sorry, as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons. 9.______ The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stood 10.______at my bench without daring to raise my head. Whata terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this.(12)A king liked to write stories. One day,the king showed some his stories 1.______ with a famous writer. The writer said that 2.______ these stories were bad. The king get angry 3.______ with him and sent him to the prison. After 4.______ some time the king felt pity for the writer 5.______ and set him freely. When the writer was 6.______out prison, again the king showed him 7.______ some stories and asked how he thought them. 8.______ The writer turned into the soldiers and said, 9.______ "Take me back prison. " 10.______(13)At beginning of term I introduced 1.______my teacher for my parents. Our teacher 2.______ Mr. Wang asked my parents of my 3.______ summer holiday. To my parents' opinion 4.______I have a good time with my classmates. 5.______I told my teacher that I had finished 6.______ homeworks at home. Then I helped 7.______my father in the farm. We went on 8.______ work by the lights of the tractors. 9.______ Father had only two and three young men 10.______ working for him at harvest time.(14)Time flies as an arrow. I'm already in the second half 1.______ of senior grade 3 before I realized it. It is only a little more 2.______ than three months before I graduate middle school. At 3.______ the present, I'm busy reviewing my lessons in order to 4.______ take the college entrance examination. I hope to go to 5.______ Beijing University, that is one of the best universities not 6.______ only in China but also in the world. I'll try my best to turn 7.______ my dream to reality. Most of my classmates are also 8.______ studying very hard to realize our wishes. I do believe everyone 9.______ will be able to enter a very good university and college. 10.______(15)Once, lately at night, an Englishman came out 1.______of his room into a passage of the hotel and ask 2.______the servant to bring her a glass of water. The servant 3.______did as he asked. The Englishman returned his room, 4.______and a few minutes later he came into the passage again 5.______and once more asked the servant a glass of water. 6.______ Every a few minutes the Englishman would come out 7.______of his room and repeated his request. After half an hour 8.______the astonishing servant decided to ask the man what 9.______he was doing with the water. "Nothing," answered he 10._____ calmly. "It's simply that the room is on fire.(16)I gave my housekeeper an old pair trousers to wash 1.______and went in the study to read. My housekeeper usually 2.______ looked through my pocket before wash my clothes, 3.______but for some reasons she failed to do so this 4.______ time. As I was reading, I suddenly remember that 5.______ there was a five-pounds note in the back pocket of 6.______the trousers I had told her to wash it. I dropped 7.______my book and rushed into the bathroom, but it is too 8.______ late. My housekeeper says that my trousers had been 9.______in the washing machine for fifteen minutes already. 10._____(17)One afternoon on April, 1912 , a new ship set off from 1.______ England to America on it first trip. It was one of the 2.______ largest and first ship at that time. It was cold, 3.______ but the ship was pleasant and people are 4.______ enjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People 5.______ could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly, 6.______ the man on watch shouting "Look out! Iceberg!" 7.______ It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to a 8.______ stop, there that was a very big hole in the ship and water 9.______ began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down. 10._____(18)I've a friend who has a big police dog is named Jack. 1.______ Every Sunday afternoon my friend takes Jack a long walk in 2.______ the park. Jack likes these walks in the park very well. 3.______ One Sunday a young man dropped in my friend. He stayed 4.______ a long time. He talked and talked. Soon it was the time for my 5._____ friend to take Jack for his walk, but the visitor still sat talking. 6.______ Jack became worried his walk in the park. He walked 7.______ around the room several times but then he sat right in 8.______ front of the visitor and looked him. But the visitor paid 9.______ none attention. He continued talking. Finally Jack could 10._____ stand it no longer. He hold the visitor's hat in his mouth.(19)June 12,Sunday FineToday is Sunday, I didn't get up early as usually. In the 1.______ morning after I finished my homework, I do some washing. 2.______ Then I telephoned one of my classmate and invited him 3.______ to see a film. And unfortunately, when we got to the cinema 4.______ at 3:00 p.m. we found all the tickets had sold out. 5.______ Then we went back to school and played the football. 6. ______ After this, when we were about to go home ,we saw our 7. ______ English teacher, Mr. Wang, coming into the school gate.He told us we have made great progress in English. this term 8.______ He also suggested that we should read more and wrote more. 9.______ We promised him that we would listen his advice. 10._____(20)In autumn of 1935,when I was a young man, I was 1._____ traveling in the north of Indian. One evening, 2._____ after hunting in the forest all day, I was returning 3._____ to the place which I had put up my tent. It was getting 4._____ dark, but I was walking along a road. Suddenly I saw 5._____ two eye glaring at me from among the trees. 6._____ What can I do? Should I jump into the river 7._____ to save my life? Then I looked at the right. 8._____ In the river there had a big crocodile waiting to 9._____ welcome me with its mouth was wide open. 10.____Cats are animals of habit. They like to go to sleep 1._____ about same time every day and for a certain length of time. They 2._____ seem to have natural clock inside them that tells them 3._____ when sleeping. Besides their regular sleep, cats take naps(打盹). 4._____ Some scientists think that people should also take cat nap. The 5._____ habit would do good for people's health. 6._____ Cat naps helped build up energy in the body. 7._____ Since cats have moods(情绪) like these of people, 8._____ scientists believe that people can improve their moods with 9._____ cat-napping. People might become more happier and more active. 10.____(22)A man shot two students died and wounded 1.______five other at an Australian university on Monday, 2. ______after he was overpowered by classmates of the victims 3. ______(受害者). The two dead were both male of 4. ______Asian appearance in his early 20s. The others 5. ______have being treated for minor(未成年的)injuries. 6. ______The man, in his mid-30s and of Asian appearance, 7. ______was seized several students in 8. ______ classroom at Monash University, Melbourne 9. ______and was late arrested. 10. ______(23)When I first learned to write in English , I ran into 1.______much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought 2.______in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 3.______My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her 4.______ advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 5.______Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was 6.______ learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote 7.______a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much 8.______and reads it to the class. All said that the story was 9.______a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me . 10.______(24)Dear Xiaohua,It is four days since Mother accepted the operation. 1. ______She is feeling much more better. The doctors told me 2. ______the operation was successful, but because her old age 3. ______she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The 4. ______ doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to 5. ______do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three 6. ______ days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family 7. ______as soon as possible. You needn't to come here. I'm 8. ______able to look after Mother by myself. You'd better 9. ______send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily. 10. ______Yours, XiaohuiTom had retired and lived lonely a long 1.______way from town. He hardly never left his home. But 2._______one day he went to town buy some things in the 3._______ market, and after he had bought it , he went 4._______into a restaurant and sit down at a table by himself. 5._______When he looked around, he saw several old peoples 6._______put on glasses before reading their newspapers. So 7._______after the lunch he decided to go to a store to buy 8_______ himself a pair of glasses, either, He walked 9._______along a wide street and fast found a store. 10.______(26)My parents were all standing there, shouting at each other. 1.______ The word "divorce(离婚)" was repeated and broke my heart each time.I had trapped between them and didn't know what to do. 2.______ A million thoughts rushed into my mind, but nothing of them could 3.______ ease my feelings. I rushed back to my room, seated down in 4.______ silence and stared out of the window. The leaves were floating in air. 5.______ They struggled trying to catch the wind and finally they had to fall 6.______ on the ground.I knew I was not the only one had gone through this. But 7.______ I must learn to fight against this. Later in the day I took up with a pen 8.______ and wrote down "It is until I take a step back and look at my family 9.______ that I can really appreciate this thing has helped me grow strong and 10._____ mature(成熟)."(27)Dear editor,In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. 1.______ Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In 2.______ order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down 3.______ more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was 4.______ almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into 5.______ wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, from 6.______ which we suffer a lot. However, I do hope all the people should 7.______ realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 8.______ What's more, they should take good care of the forests and plant 9.______ trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 10._____(28)When I found out that my train would three hours 1.______late, I changed my idea and would get a bus instead. 2.______I was about to rush out of the train station while a 3.______well-dressed old man took me by my arm, "Young 4.______ lady," said the gentleman, "Shouldn't you find out 5.______the bus schedule (时刻表) before you rush out catch the 6.______bus ". I stared at him with my mouth opened. How did 7.______he read my mind? Before I can say a word, he added, 8.______"You see, my train is also running late. A same idea 9.______came to me. But I think a good conversation that can 10.______help pass the time. Before you know it, your train will be there."(29)Dear Kang Li,I haven't heard you for a long time. How 1._______ are you? I had just finished the exams. Now I'm 2._______ glad I have time to write for you. Our teacher 3._______ tells us that China is a big country has the 4._______ most population in the world. It's on the other 5._______ side of the world. Now the sun is shining bright 6._______ here and perhaps you're sleeping in the dark 7._______ night. I wish to know anything more about the 8._______ Chinese way of living. I wonder at if you can 9._______ tell me about it in your next letter. Please write soon. 10.______(30)I visited the zoo yesterday, and I was very 1. _____ unhappy and angry about the things what I saw. 2. _____ The large animals were in small cages. The lion 3. _____ was walking back and forth. It was completelybored. The tiger fell asleep all the afternoon. I see 4. _____ people feeding the fish. They were throwingrices and meat into the pond, which could 5. _____ kill the fish, but no one tried stop them. 6. _____ When I had the drink at the zoo restaurant, 7. _____ the waiter served me rude. Outside the restaurant, 8. _____ the rubbish bins were full and rubbish wasblowing everywhere. It seems that the zoo 9. _____ doesn't look the animals or the visitors very well. 10. _____(31)Once a man got on a bus for New York. Hehid in toilet, because he did not want to pay. 1.______ But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in 2.______ front of her on the shoulder and say, "There's a 3.______ bum(流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver."The message was past from person to person. 4.______ But anywhere along the way, it changed. The bus 5.______ driver was told that there was a bomb in the toilet.He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the 6.______ police. When the police came in, they told the 7. ______ passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then 8. ______ they closed the highway. This soon caused a 15-miles-long 9. ______ traffic jam. Under the help of a dog, the police 10. _____ searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb!参考答案11. sudden--suddenly2. hotter---hot3. is--was4. √5. out--out of6. drop—drops7. house前加the8. loudly---loud9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken21. 去掉in2. more → much3. likes → like4. technologies → techniques5. 去掉the6. play → plays7. rest前加the8. improved → improve9. √ 10. won't → don't31. part- parts2. a-the3. hope∧to4. 去掉it5. thought-thinks6. deep-deeply7. hearing-heard8. For-In9. √ 10. but-and41. On→In2. have→had3. 在cut前加上been4. after→until5. the→a6. tired→tiring7. 去掉to8. subject→subjects9. 正确10. terribly→ terrible51.recently2. 去掉been3. 正确4. gave---gives5. isn't---doesn't6. in---to7. 去掉a8. with 后加their9. trembled---trembling 10. tail---tails61. be--been2. firstly--first3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to5. until-- if / whether6. 去掉to7. go--going8. watched--watch9. 对10. and—or71. on-by2. would-should3. becoming-became4. √5. face-faces6. 去掉第二个to7. tell-told8. is-was9.down-down on 10. open-opened81. boy后加who2. so-too3. √4. lived-who lived5. read-reading6. giving-given7. lending-to lend8.去掉them9. late-later 10. 去掉第二个a9.1.years-year2. showed-show3. hiding-hide4. √5.them-it6. but-and7. pleasing-pleased8.And-But9.去掉"back" 10. founded-found101. √2. any3. can后加to4. did-do5. family-home6. subject-subjects7. a –the8. 去掉about 9. and-or 10. homes-families111. watch--watched2.very---so3.hurry后加to4.of--for5. √6.eyes后加were7.to 去掉8.speak—say9.as--for 10.coldly--cold.121.some→some of2. with →to3. get →got4. the5. √6. freely →free7. out→ out of8. thought→ thought of9. into→ to 10. back→ back to131. At→At the2. for→ to3. of→ about4. To→ In5. have→ had6. √7. homeworks→ homework8. in→ on9. work→ working 10 and→ or141.As—like2.realized-realize3.graduate∧ from4.去掉the5. examination---examinations6.that—which7. √8. to—into9. our—their 10. and—or151. lately-late2. ask-asked3.her-him4.he asked---he was asked5. and-but6. servant-servant for7. 去掉a8. repeated-repeat9. astonishing-astonished 10. √161. pair-pair of2. in-into3. wash-washing4. reasons-reason5. remember-remembered6. pounds-pound7.去掉it8.is-was9. says-said 10. √171. on→in2.it→its3. ship→ships4. are→were5.cold→colder6. or→and7.shouting→shouted 8. a→the 9.去掉that 10. come→come in181. 去掉is2.Jack→Jack for3. well→much4. in→in on5. He→They6. right7. worried→worried about8.but→and9. looked→looked at 10.none→no191. usually---usual2. do→did3. classmate ---classmates4. And ---But5.had∧been6. the 去掉7. correct8. have---had9. wrote---write 10. listen---take/follow201. In-In the2. Indian-India3. right4. in ∧which 或which改为where5.but-and6.eye –eyes7. can –could8. at –to9. had-was 10.去掉was211. right2. same-the same3.have-have a4. sleeping-to sleep5. nap-naps6. for –to7. helped-help8. these-those9. with-by 10. 去掉more221. died-dead2. other--others3. after--before4. male--males5. his--their6.have—are7. √8. seized后加by9. ∧a 10. later231.√2.many—much3.anything--everything4.my—a5.去掉should6.talk--talking7.me--myself8.to前加it9.reads--read 10.word—words241. accepted ---received2. 去掉more3. of4.other---another5. said6. or7. family前加the8. 去掉to9. √10. happy251. Lonely→alone2. never→ever3.buy前加to4. i t→them5. sit→sat6.peoples→people7. √8.去掉the9. either→too 10. fast→quickly261.all→both2.had→was3.nothing→none4.seated→sat或后加myself5.air前加the6.and→but7.had前加who8.去掉with9.until前加not10.√271.去掉was2.去掉in3.house→houses4.With→As或went →going5.√6.struck→strike7.However→So8.terribly→terrible9.they→we10.instead后加of281. would后加be2. get→ take3. while → when4. my→ the5. √6. catch前加to7. opened →open8. can→could9. A→The 10. 去掉that291. heard后加from2. had---have3. for---to4. has前加that 或which；has---with5. most---largest6. bright---brightly7. and---but8. anything---something9. 去掉at 10. √301.and→but2.去掉what或把what改为that/which3.√4.see→saw5.rices→rice6.tried后面加to7. the→a或去掉the8.rude→rudely9.blowing→blown 10. look后加after311. in → in the2. her → him3. say → said4. past → passed5. anywhere → somewhere6. immediate → immediately7.去掉in8. or → and9. miles → mile 10. Under → with。

短文改错练习题及答案高三高三是学生们备战高考的重要阶段，而短文改错练习题是提高英语写作水平的有效方法之一。

下面是一些高三学生可以尝试的短文改错练习题，以及相应的答案供参考。

练习题一：Dear Peter,I'm write to you to tell you about my school life. I am really enjoy my time at school. The teachs in my school are nice and kindly. They always help us when we have difficulties. The student in my class are very friendly, too. We often help each other on study and have a lot of fun in our spare time.But there are a few problems in my school need to be solved. First, the library in my school is too small and there are few books in it. We need a larger library with more diverse books. Second, the school cafeteria only serve fast food, which is not healthy for us. We hope to have more nutritious food options.I hope my school can soon make some changes for the better. I'm looking forward to hear from you.Yours sincerely,Tom答案：Dear Peter,I'm writing to you to tell you about my school life. I am really enjoying my time at school. The teachers in my school are nice and kind. They always help us when we have difficulties. The students in my class are very friendly, too. We often help each other with studying and have a lot of fun in our spare time.But there are a few problems in my school that need to be solved. First, the library in my school is too small and there are few books in it. We need a larger library with more diverse books. Second, the school cafeteria only serves fast food, which is not healthy for us. We hope to have more nutritious food options.I hope my school can soon make some changes for the better. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Tom练习题二：My family is very important for me. They gives me love and support, and I can always rely on them. I am the oldest child in my family, so my parents expects a lot from me. They want me to do well in school and set a good example for my younger siblings.However, sometimes we have disagreements. My parents often tell me what I should doing and how I should behave. I sometimes feel that they don't trust me enough. I think they should give me more freedom to make my own decisions.Despite these disagreements, I know my family loves me deeply. We always make up quickly after an argument and forgive each other. I appreciate everything they does for me and I don't know where I would be without them.答案：My family is very important to me. They give me love and support, and I can always rely on them. I am the oldest child in my family, so my parents expect a lot from me. They want me to do well in school and set a good example for my younger siblings.However, sometimes we have disagreements. My parents often tell me what I should do and how I should behave. I sometimes feel that they don't trust me enough. I think they should give me more freedom to make my own decisions.Despite these disagreements, I know my family loves me deeply. We always make up quickly after an argument and forgive each other. I appreciate everything they do for me and I don't know where I would be without them.通过以上两个练习题，可以帮助高三学生们在写作中注意常见的错误，如动词时态、主谓一致以及动词和名词的搭配等问题。

短文改错高考真题练习令狐采学高考短文改错 1普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.高考短文改错 2普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady,around three perweek. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction filmabout visitors from outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study all such reports,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remainedabove the previous level.高考短文改错3普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷)Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I cameacross a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camerawith me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I gotback，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seeneverywhere．I was reallydisappointing and about to leave when he walked outa building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him， but he signed his name on my shirt!高考短文改错 4高考英语试题（新课标卷）My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend， he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.高考短文改错 5浙江高考英语试题Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident andhit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I didnot tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because Iwas so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told theminterested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think thatit was the right thing to do.高考短文改错 6普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷) Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least sixmile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.Much loveFiona高考短文改错7全国英语高考真题陕西卷My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably doubleroom with a big bath. What I liked best were the free highspeed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.高考短文改错 8普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. Fromthe time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. Iwas happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry andbroke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they beganto see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.高考短文改错 9普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her tocopy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?高考短文改错 10高考英语试卷真题Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything elseI love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but Iknow I will never fall sleep.Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary 高考短文改错 11普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷) Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.高考短文改错 12普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西）My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.高考短文改错 13普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷) The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank fromcupswithout handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.高考短文改错 14普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷) I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.高考短文改错 15高考辽宁卷Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’rehoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.高考短文改错 16陕西卷My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up andshot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!高考短文改错 17新课标二卷My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with afterschool activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.高考短文改错 18新课标一卷Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!高考短文改错 19四川高考试题Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead usback to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.高考短文改错 20全国新课标卷第II卷All of us need friendship. The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes，“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendshipshould able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can.The more friends we have，the more we can learn forone another, but the more pleasure we can share together.高考短文改错 21高考浙江卷I was ta king a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone i nthe carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.高考短文改错 22全国一卷When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail todo so ,we’ll live to regret it .高考短文改错 23高考陕西英语试卷短文改错My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire agai n next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!高考短文改错 24全国二卷One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so verymuch that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.高考短文改错 25四川高考短文改错Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.高考短文改错 26浙江卷My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the lefthand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.高考短文改错 27全国卷三The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me .They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.高考短文改错 28全国卷二The summer holiday is coming. My Classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. Itdoes not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.高考短文改错 29全国卷一My uncle 13 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.高考短文改错 30In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”“Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.高考短文改错 31全国英语卷3When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically. and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.高考短文改错 32全国卷2Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from theschool, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！答案一1.cousin –cousin’s2. rich – richer3.on in4.put put it/that5. enjoy to enjoy6.faced face7. Late Later8.slow slowly9. knows knew 10. ever never二第1个考查主谓一致，were—was;第2个考查名词单复数 weeksweek第3个考查介词从外面来，介词应该用from.第4个考查冠词 thea第5个考查非限制性定语从句注意be responsible for 表示对什么负责。