02高考英语短文改错-高考一本

2015年全国卷I第一节短文改错（10分）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.短文改错：第一行：think改为thought 第二行：in与countryside中间加the第二行：or改为and 第三行：on改为with 第四行去掉been第五行：seriously改为serious airs改为air Much改为Many第六行：found改为find your改为our/the2015年全国卷II四、改错One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly2014年全国卷I第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

句子改错：1. This is all what I want to say.What is mentioned above, the number of the students in senior school is increasing.He won the game, what made us very happy.Which everybody knows, Taiwan belongs to China.Parents want to do everything for their children, which do no goodto them.We children should be encouraged to do all what we should do by ourselves.What he got the first place in this exam is a good piece of news.Beijing was quite different from which they had heard of.He will tell you his opinion which is usual as valuable as that ofthe adults.One of the surprising things about football in England is the great knowledge of the game which even the smallest boy seems to have it.A narrow bed is in the corner near the window that face south.Which I like most in my room is the tape recorder my parents gave meas my birthday present.It is the world of my own where I can do whichever I like.If you find any idioms that you can’t understand them, try to guessthe meaning from the context.As a beginner, you find difficult to learn English well.If you have difficulty in pronunciation, you should listen to someEnglish tapes every day.Why! I have nothing to confess. What is it you want me to say?We’ll do what we can mee t the needs of customers.There is no doubt whether we will win the game.He was very satisfied with that you have done.I feel an honor to have the chance to tell you something about our activities.We hope that we can have less homework and more time to join the activities.As soon as they know what to write about, they get down to work.All of us want very much to see these recommended m ovies, especially that you referred to just now.Having been told many times, but he still wouldn’t understand it.That worries his parents is that he often fails in the exams.America was where was first called “India” by Columbus.No matter who knows the truth will tell you about it.People in part of North China sleep on which they call “kang”．A new school has been built in which used to be a chemical factory.As is known to us all is that the earth is smaller than the sun.They reached which they thought was the place they’d been dreaming of.What is hard to get is that you will always treasure.Give this prize to who got the first place.The experts have decided to do all what they can to save the pictures.短文改错：（1）Most American businesses are open five days a week,and children attend school five days as well as. 1.____American families usually have two-day weekend, 2.____Saturday and Sunday. Over the weekends, people pay 3.____their time in many different way. Many families have 4.____a party at home. Many families take part in sports.Running, biking, playing the volleyball and swimming 5._____are popular with the summer. Skiing and skating are the 6._____favorite winter sports. Weekends are also a time 7._____for America families to work on something at home. 8._____Many families plant flowers and have vegetables 9.______gardens. Some families paint or repair our houses 10._____at the weekends.（2）Nowadays, watch TV has become part of people’s life 1._____in most families. Because there are excellent programs 2. _____for children, many people feel harmful to them. 3._____There are several reasons for this.Above of all, some programs are not good for 4. _____children to watch. Second, television can affect children’s 5. ____ eyesight. Third, if they watch TV too long each day, theywon’t be able to finish homework in time. Also, if they 6.____stay up too late at night watching TV, they will feel asleep 7._____ in class, and thus won’t be able to follow other. 8.______So watching television too much can be harmful tochildren, both mental and physically. Children must 9._____be under the control when they watch TV. 10.______（3）.In the afternoon of last Sunday, my friend and I were 1.______taking a walk along a river near my home, suddenly we 2._____heard a boy calling in help in the river. We jumped into 3.______the river and pulled the boy out. Then we made him 4.______breathe use mouth-to- mouth way. After the boy 5._______came to him, we sent him to the hospital at once and 6.______telephoned to the boy’s parents. The boy was saved. His 7.______ parents were very thankful to us and the doctors think 8.______high of our first aid. 9.______We r ealized that know first aid is very important. 10._____ AnAmerican company wants to build a paper factoryin our city. But opinions are divided on the question. 1.______Some think we should build a paper factory. If we do, 2.______many new jobs can created for the local people, and it 3.______will sure push the development of the city’s economy. 4.______What’s more, the factory will bring modern ideas ofmanagement and new machines, include 5._____equipments for protecting the environment. 6.______On the other hand, others insist on not have it built 7._______in the city. They believe that the factory will be produce loud8._____noises, will disturb people’s peaceful life. Besides, poisonous9.____gases from the factory will dirty the air we breathe in. 10.______The rivers will also be polluted by the waste water from the factory.短文改错1 Dear Sue,Well, I am here in the Beijing! I'm staying at a1. .very comfortable hotel the same like ours in Britain and2. .enjoy Chinese food, though I miss my English break-fast.3. .It has been very kind and helpful for everyone to 4. .help me everywhere. Yesterday I visited the Summer 5. .Palace where the Emperors were used to go in the 6. .summers. Today I'm off to see the Great Wall, it is one 7. .of the wonders m the world. In a word, all are very 8. .interesting, so I do wish you could go to visit China.9. .Hope everyone home is well.10. .Dan2）There is a small island in the Pacific Ocean, that1. .is near 8 miles long and 8 miles wide. It was once 2. .called "The Pleasant Island" but now it's national name 3. .was Nauru, "the happy little nation" in English.4. .Nauru was once owned the Germans in history.5. .Later, the Australians ruled the island people. In 6. .World War Ⅱ, the Japan took Nauru away from the7. .Australians. Now Nauru do not belong to Germany,8. .Australia and Japan. On January 31, the island Nauru9. .became new nation and had a new name.10. .3）Bill and Harry met at school the first time1. .at the beginning of term. Bill said firstly, "Hello,2. .I'm Bill. What's your name, please?" "My name is3. .Harry," other answered. Bill continued to ask which4. .school he had been the last year. Harry answered,5. ."Centre School" "Really? So is my good friend Bob6. . White. Do you know him?" Harry answered glad,7. ."Surely, We were in the same class then. " Bill took a 8. .look at his watch and say," Well, it's getting late. I9. .must be leaving now. Nice to have met with you. "10. .4）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school1. .sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a2. .fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers3. .attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the4. .100-metre race. He finish the race in 12..6 seconds5. .and broke in the school record. The sports meet6. .was really success. That was because we were7. .all trying to do my best.8. .Although I was not one of the winner,9. .I was proud of that we had done.10. .Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li Ping5）Dear Abby,How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.1. .I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my2. .further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam3. .for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However,4. .my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me5. .going them They say it is too far away that they will not see me6. .for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely.7. .They can't imagine a girl so young live alone They advise me to study8. .in the capital instead. Then I'II be able to continue living with9. .them How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?10. .Best wishes.Jane 6）Last week I wentto a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad 1. .movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little2. .boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich3.______family who had no child. The boy received a very good education4. .and twenty years later he became doctor. In his hospital, he had a5. .patient, who was an old lady. He did care too much about her,6. .for she could hardly afford for the medical care . One evening, the7. .lady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed the doctor found8. .a letter, in it he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great9. .mother. He had wanted to call her mother, but it was too late .10. .Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears. 7 Dear Li Xiaojun,I’m glad to receive your letter. I’d like to discuss the problem1. _______with you. It is true that some video games is good for your2. _______thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relaxed3. _______Therefore, you are spending too much time on that.4. _______You are not little boy any more. You should learn to control yourself.5.______Why not to try to finish your homework first every day6.________and then spend a little time play some video games. I think,7.________like a student, the most important thing is to study hard at school.8.________You should try your best to get good grade in your9. _______subjects and try to become a useful person for the future10. ______Yours, Editor 8 It was a long time since we last saw each other.You can 1. _______hardly imagine how I miss you. How are you getting with 2._______your first job? I remember you once tell me you were eager3.________to graduate and to become an English teacher. Now you must4.________have many first hand experience. How do you find your English5. _______ teaching? Is teaching kids English asinterested as you expected 6. _______in college? And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching?7.________Anyway, I believe you must be very popular with the kids, for8.________you are a born teacher. Hope y ou great success in your work! Yes, 9._______why not give me a call or come for get-together this weekend?10.________ 9 I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Everyevening then I am doing homework and at weekends 1.________when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs2. ________on tapes. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the3. ________colourfully world of music. Now and then I stop to follow the4. ________songs. Much often than not, my mother comes in, asking 5.________me to fix my attention on my work. She does 6.________not like pop music. Like the most grown-ups, she enjoys folk 7._______songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful8. ________life when she was young. It is true which people of different9. ________age understand music differently and enjoy different music 10._______ 10 During the summer holiday, I think I should dosomething 1. ________meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food2. ________restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day3. ________for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless.4. ________It made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway.5. ________After all, I stuck to it with determinations. Every day I started6. ________off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the7. ________evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term8. ________began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really9. ________a successful experience, which is worth remembering for ever. 10.________ 2006届高考总复习英语专项训练短文改错参考答案（一）1．the去掉。

2020高考英语全国II卷词语填空+短文改错精读解析2020高考英语全国II卷“短文改错”【真题展现】Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.【逐句精解】第1处：what→which, 非限定性定语从句用"which"作关系代词，代指前面整个句子。

第2处：come to China，到达某地come需要和to连用，再接地名。

第3处：surely→sure，be动词后接形容词，搭配后半句宾语从句“我很确信你将会玩得开心”。

第4处：start→started，通过后面"when I was seven years old"确定句子时态为过去时。

第5处：for→but/yet，此处句义转折，意为“我7岁开始学功夫，但是很久没有练习了。

历年高考英语改错题集 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN英语短文改错Task 1:Today I visited the Smiths—my first time visit to a American family. They live in a small town. It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. They offered me coffee or other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year. (NMET 1996)Task 2:Dear Bob,Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.I go to Hongqi Middle School. They study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games What your favorite sport I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua (NMET 1997)Task 3:My Favorite SportMy favorite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind what we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience (服从). Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. （NMET 1998）Task 4:The Problem with TelevisionNow I can’t watch much television but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. I was often a little t ired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort. Unfortunate, there are too many people among my family. Some wanted to see the program while others preferred another. I am happy with any program, but the others spent a lot time arguing and there was no way of set the matter except by selling the TV set. Now someone at home reads instead. (NMET 1999)Task 5:Dear Peter,Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but had an examination on Monday morning. It is a very important exam but I can’t afford to fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you canunderstand. I’ll take chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day!Yours,Li Ming (2000 春季)Task 6:The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was in the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down. I did a good job and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (NMET 2000)Task 7:I used to love science class—all of them— biology, chemistry ,geography, physics. I think I like those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works. For example, when I was a child , the rain was a mystery (奥秘). In one class, I learned it rained. I think science classes clear up mysteries. But then there is always more mysteries look into. What was my least favorite classThat was maths. After learn the basics of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to me. I never saw how I could use it in my daily life. (2001春季)Task 8:Like most of my schoolmates, I have either brothers nor sisters—in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughterWhat things are in other homes, I wonder. (NMET 2001)Task 9:My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find it. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He does not care if something he did made people angry. For instance, on one night he played strong and loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons. (2002春季)Task 10:Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tiring that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (NMET 2002)Task 11:What should you do when your parents become angrily If your parents got mad, try to have a conversation with them about it . Remembering not to shout at them. They usually will try to change, but they will take some time because they get angry all their life, and that is all they know . You might have to change for your method a couple of times. Do any nice thing s for your parents that they don’t expect—like cooking, doing the dishes, washing clothes, or clean the floors. If this doesn’t work, bring in friend that you feel comfortable, and have him or her help you. (2002北京卷)Task 12:Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worried much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don’t real need. (2003春季)Task 13:When I first learned write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. They all said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me. (NMET 2003)Task 14:Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do (NMET 2004)Yours,Xiao WeiTask 15:There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. For most part, students working to earn money for their own use. Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything as if they please. They would have to ask their parents for money or for permission to do things by the money. Some students may also to save up for our college or future use. (NMET 2005)Task 16:At first I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just checked the results because I thought that was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball each other. Therefore, my father loves football. During World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch his favorite sport. Seeing his strong interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down to watch the game. I found the game excited, and my dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad! (2005浙江卷) Task 17:It is bad manners in the classroom to look for what our neighbor had written, and try to see what mark he has received without being permitted. It is good manners for them to help each other if we have the same desire and the teacher allows to it. In examinations and in certain kinds of written work, it is dishonest and foolishly to help or to ask help from others. When one student does so, much larger values are destroying. One may not agree to examination system, but at present it is basically the only measure that the teacher and the rest of the world can depend to decide if or not each of us meets the requirement. (2005重庆卷)Task 18:Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since long ago, many adults and children called their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of the reasons people like to play is that sports help them to live happy. In other words, they help to keep people strong and feel good. When people are playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities for their health. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. (2005湖北卷)Task 19:We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast because that they were going out early in the morning. They came back lately and had some tea. I came into the living room and saw one of them just to go through the kitchen door but turn on the light. He was looking for a glass the cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, ―What can I doWe are guests after all.‖ (2006全国卷1)。

高考短文改错精选及答案详解(25篇)1.Friendship is importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all 76.our lives we can’t live without friendship just like we can’t77.live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on 78.well with one another to go ahead under different kind of 79. difficulties in front of us. But real friendship is easy to 80.come by, True friendship must be sincerely and be based 81.on understand each other but not on benefits of each 82.other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. 83.By his advice we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore 84.more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. 85.2.Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 91. _______ the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 92. _______ long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 93. _______to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 94. _______like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 95. _______they help to keep people strongly and feeling good . When people are 96. _______playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 97. _______for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 98. _______Many people enjoy sports by watch the others play. In American 99. _______big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 100 _______3.Last week life didn’t look very well for heart transplant patient.76. Barry Brooks from London. He was told six month ago that he would 77. need the operation if he is to survive. He immediately planned to make 78. the across Atlantic journey to the hospital in Chicago to have the 79. operation on. While he was in transit（中转）at JFK airport in New York, 80. he received the news that his new heart had accidentally transported 81. to other hospital. Barry then had to get on a different plane to 82. convey him to the other hospital, there the operation was carried. 83. out in time. Barry is now gradually recovering from the transplant. 84. but he told us,“ I feel like being a new man-this new heart has”85. changed my life.”4.Have you ever asked you why children 76.go to school? You’ll probably say that they 77.go to learn their native languages and other 78.languages, physics, geography, history or all 79.the other subject. That’s quite true, but 80.why they learn these things? And are these 81.things all what they learn at school? 82.There is much in school education than 83.just learning knowledge. We go school, above 84.all, to learn how to learn, so that when we’ll 85.finish school, we can continue to learn.5.The Chinese diet is the healthy in the world. 61.It contains lots of fruit and green vegetables. 62.It's high at fibre and low in sugar and fat. 63.But the western diet contains too many 64.fat and sugar in form of creams, cakes and so on. 65.Because this, westerners very easily 66.put to weight. As a result, scores of people 67.die from heart illness, some suffer from 68.bad teeth. So the doctor suggests us not 69.to do that. We'd better to eat our healthy food. 70.6.Dear classmates ,Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English. 1. __I often read English aloud and try learn something 2. __ important by hearts , which helps me remember it easily and 3. __ form the good habit of thinking in English 4. __I listen to a lot and talk with others in English . 5. __In this way , I was improved both my hearing 6. _ and my spoken English. I keep a diary in English every day but my 7. ___ spoken English is becoming better and better. 8. ___ I also try my best to master the necessary grammarknowledge. By this means , I can express itself 9. ___ in English correct . That’s the way I have been learnin g 10. __ English . I hope it will be useful to you .That’s all . Thank you.7．Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to tell you a piece of excited news: 76.___________I won first place in the Spoken English Competition of 77.___________ our city . The achievement that I made it is due to your 78.___________ kind help. You spent so much time help me with my spoken 79.___________English that I made rapid progress, I remember you advice 80.___________" Speak slowly and clearly. " Thank you very much all your time 81.___________and advice . I heard that you and your wife will visit 82.___________our school before long. I'm very glad and look forward to 83.___________see you. I sent you a telescope as a small gift. 84.___________Please check the mail and I hope you will like them. 85.___________Yours Li Ming8．Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are 76_____ give to video games. Many of them spend all of their spare time 77_____ to the games, and some even stay at the game machines all day 78_____ long. The reason is that they can enrich their lives as well as 79_____ knowledge by playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing 80_____ after a day’s work and study , as video games can bring a fun to 81_____ people’s life. However, on the other hand , play video games too 82_____ much can waste time and money, and has an ill effect on 83_____ people’s eyesight and healthy .So, video games, like coins, have two sides. 84_____ The key point is that we should make of the games properly. 85_____9Henry Royce did not like his car, that ran badly and often 76.broke down. So he decided to make a best car himself, 77.and in 1904 he produced his first new model. Charles Rolls, 78.a car maker, was very interested in Royce' s car, but soon 79.Rolls and Royce go into business together. One of their first 80.model was the Silver Ghost. In 1907, a Silver Ghost broke the 81.world’s record by drive 14,371 miles without breaking down 82.once. After the drive, it was cost just over ￡2 to put the car 83.back into perfect condition. This is not surprising that the Silver 84.Ghost was regarded “the best car in the world”. 85.10．Most families in China hoped their single children will 61. ______have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 62. ______So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 63. ______homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 64. ______The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 65. ______wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 66. ______attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 67. ______already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 68. ______Shouldn’t we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 69. ______government is carry out a plan to solve the education problems. 70. ______11One day, on her way school, Li Lan found a small bag 76.________near a bus station. She opened it and found a lot of money 77.________as soon as a calling card inside. From the calling card, she 78.________ invented the owner’s address and his telephone number. 79.________She thought the owner must very worried. So she went 80.________to the public telephones and called the owner. Then she 81.________ waited for the bus station. The owner came by taxi very 82.________ soon, and Li Lan gave the bag to him. The owner is so grateful 83._________to her that he took out from 100 yuan to reward Li Lan, 84._________ But Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school. 85._________12Fishing is my favorite sport. I often fished for 76.________________hour without catching anything, but this doesn’t worry 77. ________________me. Some fishermen are unlucky. Instead catching fish, 78. ________________they catch old boots and rubbish. I’m even less luck. I 79.________________never catch everything—even old boots after having 80. ________________spent a whole morning on the river. So I always go home 81. ________________with empty bag. “Y ou should give up fishing,” my friends 82. ________________say, “It’s a waste time.” But they don’t realize one 83. ________________ important thing. I’m not real interested in fishing. I’m 84. ________________only interested in sitting in a boat and do nothing at all. 85. ________________13．Life is made up from success and failure. No 76. ______ one is always success and also no one is always a 77.______ failure. So it doesn’t make much different 78.______ whether you are successful or not. The most 79._-____ important thing is simply that you do before your success 80.______ or failure. If you lost heart when you fail 81.______ or show proud when you succeed, you will 82.______ never succeed. Instead, you should face to it 83.______ bravely and keep up with your courage when you 84.______ success, and then your failure can be changed into success. 85._______14．I went to the Summer Palace last week. At the gateI happened to meet some American tourists. I greeted to 76.______them in English and then we began to chat. I got know 77.______that they were college students travel in China. Most of 78.______them were found of Chinese medicine. They are busy taking 79.______pictures and were much impressed with the changes that 80.______had been taken place in the past few years as well. After 81.______that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time. 82.______We exchanged our email address so that we could write to 83.______each other in future. They thanked us again and again. I 84.______was very glad to have a chance to practicing my oral English. 85._______15．Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who both 76. ____work in same office. They often walk together to and 77. ____from work. Once they were walking to home together 78. ____while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly opened 79. ____his umbrella and said proud, “My wife really was great80. ____ foresight. She said this morning it would rain and tell 81. ____me to carry my umbrella.” Dick smiled and walked 82. ____up to him under the protection of the umbrella, said, 83. ____“Mine has even great foresight. She didn’t let me84. ____carry one as she knew you’d share yours with you.”85. ____16．Before he was a teacher , Bob told me what he 76 ___________ would like to be a lawyer when he was at school . 77 ___________ He worked very hard in his lessons and tried to 78___________ enter into a famous university , but something unhappy 79 ___________ happened in his family , which make necessary for him 80___________ to make for a living . As a young man , he had been a 81___________ bus driver ,a dustman and a salesman .But he spends his 82 ___________ spare time studying and finally becoming a college 83___________ teacher . “Young people,” he often said ,“full of wishes 84 ___________ and dream s before they step into the society” 85 ___________17．As is known , that is interesting to teach children to 76__________ swim while they are still babies . Most the large towns in 77 __________ Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for 78__________ babies . The idea has quickly spread to Europe from where, 79__________in several countries , special courses are now offered to 80 __________the children who are from 7 to 24 month old . 81 __________The first step is to have child get rid of fear of 82 __________ water . Next , he is teaching to float in water . Once he 83__________can do that naturally and can swim with fear , the child can 84__________ master the technique and push him forward through the water. 85__________18．At a party, it is quite normal of someone to have 1. ____a short conversation with you and then go on to talking 2. ____to other people! Don’t think they dislike you or they 3. ____are impolite. It has the custom at many parties 4. ____in Britain, particularly there people are standing up rather 5. ____than sitting down. Here are two ways of finishing conversation 6. ____at a party. "Excuse me. I think I’ll go and get another drinking. 7. ____See you later, perhaps?" "Oh. Excuse me. I’ve just seen 8. ____Mary Jennings over here. I’ve got to discuss a meeting we 9. ____are been having on Thursday. Would you excuse me for a moment?"" 10. ____19．There are advantage for students to work while 76. __________studying at school. One of them was that 77. __________they can earn money. For the most part, 78. __________students working to earn money for their own 79. __________use. Earning their own money allow them 80. __________to spend on anything as if they please. 81. __________They would have to ask their parents for 82. __________money or for permission to do things by 83. __________the money. Some students may also to save 84. __________up for our college or future use. 85. __________20My sister found a bird on the roadside. We named himJack and keep him for about three years. He would greet us 76.________ in a tree outside our bedroom, calling "Hello" as we lay in 77.________ bed in a morning. He also passed "Hello" to the cats when 78._______ they came into the room. We often played a trick on himself. 79._______ We'd throw a coin as far as possibly. Jack would fly away 80._______ and bring it back for us throw again. He would also catch 81._______ the food throwing to him from the other side of the room and 82._______ sing happily. But for the most wonderful thing about Jack 83.________ were his musical ability. Leaving him at home all day, we 84._______ would return at night to hear that he'd picked up from the 85._______ radio in the day21．My car just wouldn’t move any further .It was complete 76．________ dead, and I was a few miles far away from anywhere on a cold, 77．_______wet night .I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d 78．_______have to spend the night in the car .Maybe I can find a 79．________ telephone .Actually ,I didn’t have to walk far before I 80．________ found a small house standing on a field with a light 81．________ shone from the sitting room .I knocked at the door and 82．________ was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the 83．________ door but listened to my story carefully .He said he had 84．________no t elephone, and it wasn’t’ one within walking distance, 85．________but offered to come and look at my car.22You can find all kinds information in just 76. __________a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a77. __________huge library without have to walk around to find 78. __________your books. Recently even though, many people 79. __________have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. 80. __________They have been reports in America about people 81. __________trying to steal person information for bad purposes. 82. __________Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all 83. __________ information are good to society. For example, you 84. __________can find such information like how to kill people. 85. __________The problem will become more serious in the future.23．I often dream of a teacher , I dream of standing on the 76．platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys 77．and girls . I teach them , play with them , but watch them 78．growing up . I am always young when I was staying 79．with them . I know there is not easy to be a teacher . Y ou 80．have to learn in order to teach . Without enough knowledge, 81．you can never learn well .What is more , you have to 82．be friends with your pupils and take good care of him . 83．Only in this way can you be a good teacher and win 84．respect from them . Though I am a student now , I willwork as very hard to make my dream come true . 85．24．When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handingin the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied 76. _____________at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. 77. _____________I went through the test for many times but I could only answer 78. _____________ three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail 79. _____________ the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it 80. _____________ and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't 81. _____________ looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand 82. _____________ on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't 83. _____________ know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push for 84._____________ cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 85. _____________ 25．Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 76. __________ describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 77. __________it seems always difficult for roe to do things well as 78. __________ them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as 79. __________a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 80. __________Besides, I have few friends. I don't know that they 81. __________don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other 82. __________very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 83. __________ once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 84. __________seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 85. __________Yours,Tom答案1．76. important; 前加of 77. like--as 78. get 79. kinds 80. easy前加not 81. sincere 82. understanding 83. 正确84. persueded 85. more前加the 2．76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had 79. play- playing 80．正确81. feel-feeling 82. how-why 83. make-makes 84.watch+ing 85. sell-buy3．76. well-good/fine/nice/ok 77.month-months 78.is—was79.the—a 80.on 去掉81.had ∧been82.other—another 83.there—where 84.正确85.but—and4．76. 第二个you改为yourself。

20XX年高考英语专项—--改错题一、题型解读：短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平，考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力.二、命题特点：1)错误类型相对稳定（错词、多词、缺词三种类型）2）考点覆盖面广、分布合理3）难度保持平稳。

三、考查类型：错词、多词、缺词四、考点分布近三年高考短文改错考点分布表五、应试技巧：通读全文，掌握大意；分句阅读,整句找错;反复通读，复查验证。

六、解题注意要点:1. 核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1:8"的比例.即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。

2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。

因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。

3. 核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号，忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。

20XX年高考改错真题汇编【2015·新课标全国I】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there。

Now I am living in a city， but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean 考试卷or the mountains are green。

Unfortunately， on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out。

2020年高考英语全国卷II短文改错试题及答案详解（全国卷II适用地区：重庆、陕西、甘肃、宁夏、青海、新疆、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、内蒙古、海南）请看试题：第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.请看译文：谢谢你的来信，这真的令我很高兴。

短文改错1.It was Monday morning，and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent，wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity；others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework，but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment，I remembered that my father once said，“The c lassroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks，and mistake as well.” Immediate，I raised my hand.2.I still remember my middle school life in Yibin. I was then in a school for student fromother places. As we were all left home at an early age, we meet lots of problems in ourdaily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning but shopping by us. However, we seldom feltlonely or helpless. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we would play basketball onplayground, swim in the pool or going for a picnic in the park. We were living in a bigger family.We treated each other as brothers and sisters. It has been one year when we graduated, butthose memories are as sweetly as ever before.3.More and more foreigners like to come to China. Last Friday the foreign teacher was invited to our school give a lecture to the students of Senior Grade Two. We found his lecture lively and interestingly. I learned a lot of from him. The teacher talked to us freely with easy English. He spoke so slowly that we understand him very well. Sometimes he repeated that we didn't understand. My classmates were all active in the class. To my joys, I understood everything the teacher said. And I was able to ask question in English . I was deeply encouraged. I think if we practise like this, to learn spoken English well will be easily for us.4.Dear diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as mom explained, he was lucky to find other one. His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfull y tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep. Good night and remember, you, my dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.5.Dear the teachers and schoolmates, it's a great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you．I want to learn English good to take good job, so I learn English in some difference ways．In class, I learn new words, useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher． After class, you do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination． I also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source． I have a lot of fun specially when learning English with cartoon movies．st weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries. Three hours ago, with full bags of goods in both hands, she headed for nearby bus stop, tired and hungry. She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain. After what seemed ages, came a bus, crowded of passengers. When it was her turn to getting on the bus, someone said, “ Sorry, no more rooms.” Quite disappointed, my sister had to take a taxi. Half way home, however, the taxi broke out. Hardly had he got out of the taxi when a bus passed by. It was empty, but she had been missed it! What an unluckily day!7.In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday，I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders，so once Istarted the car，my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word，“Speed up！” “Slow down！” “Turning left！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late，the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.8.The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.9.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.10.I’ve had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple，it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like “Tang Dynasty”．In the cafe，customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one，I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.11.It is five years now since I graduate from No. 3 High School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on helda get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further study, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.12.My mom and I am fighting. We used to get on so well, and these days, she has been arguing with me about my not coming to home. She thinks I should spend more time help her with the housework instead going out a lot. In her eyes, I’m just a lazy boy whom only loves playing. The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon, so I want to spend as many time as I can with them. I knew I should try to understand the situation from her point of view. But I hope she can understand what important these friends are to me.13.Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time，they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden，that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside，they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came，they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!14.Dear schoolmates,In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest．A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st．Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student．The answer sheet must cut from thenewspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline．Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time．Students' Union15.When I look at this picture of myself，I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically，and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time：car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes，playing pop music，and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.九、任务型阅读(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)十、阅读表达(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)十一、七选五(共0小题,每小题2.0分,共0分)十二、语法填空(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)十三、课文理解(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)十四、词法突破(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)十五、句法应用(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)十六、语法应用(共0小题,每小题10.0分,共0分)答案解析1.【答案】【解析】1. 句法错误。

高考英语短文改错题20篇短文改错练习（1）Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high schoolstudents . They study hard 。

They do extreme well on 76．achievement tests . And next year ，Rowena will attending 77．Harvard University 。

Billy ，her younger brother ，hoe to go 78．to Cornell 。

That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79．most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact ，80．they've never been to school 。

Since a kindergarten ，they 81．have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82．they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．As many of the more than one million people who receive 84．home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．have gotten a good education 。

短文改错练习（2）Did you enjoy yourself yesterday？I suppose you do。

But I’d 76．like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday。

高考英语短文改错方法大全英语短文改错对考生的要求较高，是对语言知识综合运用能力的考查，检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考查学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平。

接下来是小编为大家整理的高考英语短文改错方法大全，希望大家喜欢!高考英语短文改错方法大全一1.形容词与副词的误用。

如exciting与excited，hard与hardly，possible与possibly，here与there等，以及形容词与副词的比较级与最高级。

2.名词的单复数误用。

如在several，many，various，different，afew，oneof等之后，常用名词的复数，在every与each之后常用单数。

3.代词的误用。

如you与your，it’s与its，it与they或them，one与ones，宾格(如me)与反身代词(如myself)等的误用。

4.介词的误用、缺少或多余。

常见的如in与on，to与for，instead与insteadof，because与becauseof等的误用。

5.时态的错误。

看一篇文章，要有一种大局观，要上前下挂，看看上下文的时态是否一致。

6.连词的误用。

如or与and的误用，and与but的误用，so与but的误用，because或since与so连用，though与but连用等。

7.第三人称单数后的动词形式。

8.一些固定结构的误用。

如so.。

that被误用作very.。

that，too.。

to被误用very.。

to，as.。

as被误作so.。

as等。

9.定语从句中，which，that，when，where等混淆不清。

10.一些常用词，如what与how，except与besides，any与some以及它们的合成词如any-thing与something，anywhere与somewhere等混淆不清。

高考英语短文改错方法大全二形成整体意识!首先明确，英语短文改错的体裁以记叙文为主。

定额市鞍钢阳光实验学校2013高考英语（二月）短文改错精选（1）及答案维B 短文改错(每题1.5分，满分15分)下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Angela works at a university as adviser.Students can come and ask her for many problems if they need help or advices.Most of them are worried about their studies and exams.Some of them have problems connect with renting flats，though the biggest problem wasloneliness.Universities are excited places but some students find difficult to make friends.They miss their families but feel lost in the new environment.They're upset.Angela's job is to listen to and try to understand whether they are thinking about.And of course she also gives practical advice when she is needed.答案Angela works at a university as ∧anadviser.Students can come and ask herfor many problems if they need help or advicesadvice.Most of them are worriedabout their studies and exams.Some of them have problemsconnectconnectingwithrenting flats，though the biggest problemwasisloneliness.Universitiesareexcitedexcitingplaces but some students find∧itdifficult to makefriends.They miss their familiesbutandfeel lost in the newenvironment.They're upset.Angela's job is to listen to\/∧themand try tounderstandwhetherwhatthey are thinking about.And of course she also givespractical advice whensheitis needed.*********************************************************结束维B 短文改错(每题1.5分，满分15分)下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of 第四行：删去be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really（三）I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow playerswe’ve won several games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his (四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much andreads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their wordwere a great encouragement to me.(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything 第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at 第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk 第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but第八行：去掉about（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as 第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So onceyou’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere 第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things 第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改为clearly。

高考英语：短文改错精选18篇请修改下面的短文。

短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

一、I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others．At school I get along well with my classmates．Therefore, I havea problem that troubles myself all the time．It’s the relationship among my desk mate and me．He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well．But he’s a person with few words．What’s more, he got angry easily．I don’t know what to deal with him．Maybe that ’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts．I value our friendship．I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better．I do hope we will be close to each other than before.【答案】【小题1】加上to【小题2】Therefore--However【小题3】myself--me【小题4】among--between【小题5】rule--rules【小题6】got--gets【小题7】what--how【小题8】why--because【小题9】去掉with【小题10】close--closer二、In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.【答案】【小题1】had-- have【小题2】great-- greatly【小题3】mean--means【小题4】live 前加to【小题5】damaged --damaging【小题6】panda-- pandas【小题7】of划掉【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live后加in【小题9】can--can’t /cannot【小题10】Besides --However三、Dear mum and dad,I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year. I have toremind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008. Worrying about the journey,I was unsettled for the first a few days. As a result, I suffer from “time lag”. Thisis similar with the “jet lag” you get from flying, but it seems that you keep gettingflashbacks from your previous time period. So I was very nervous and uncertainat first. However, Wang Ping, my friend and guide, were very understandingbut gave me some green tablet which helped a lot. Well-known for their expertise,his parents company transported me safely into the future in a time capsule.…Yours,Li Qiang【答案】【小题1】yourself—myself【小题2】real—really【小题3】Worrying--Worried【小题4】去掉a【小题5】suffer--suffered【小题6】with--to【小题7】were--was【小题8】but--and【小题9】tablet--tablets【小题10】parents—parents’四、Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experiences.【答案】【小题1】去掉a【小题2】minute----minutes【小题3】and --but【小题4】with ---on【小题5】when --- than【小题6】waited前面加had【小题7】other-- another【小题8】do --did【小题9】possible --- possibly【小题10】lose---losing五、Miss Jones was math teacher. Her home not far from her school, but she always walked there in the morning. All the pupils in the school was very young. In a cold and windy morning, Miss Jones walked to the school, and the cold wind goes into her eyes. and big tear began to run out . she reached school. opened the door and going into the classroom. It was nice and warm here and Miss Jones was happily, but then a small boy looked at her for a few seconds, to put his arms around her and said kind. "Don't cry, Miss Jones .School isn't very bad."【答案】【小题1】加上a【小题2】but--and【小题3】was--were【小题4】In--On【小题5】goes--went【小题6】tear--tears【小题7】going--went【小题8】happily--happy【小题9】去掉to【小题10】kind--kindly六、One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.【答案】【小题1】去掉the【小题2】has--had【小题3】passes--passing【小题4】her---him【小题5】warm---warmly【小题6】so---and【小题7】come---go【小题8】looked 后面加at【小题9】how---if /whether【小题10】child---children七、Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?I have something important to tell you. Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain. Now I will introduce their plan for today. we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning. A school has a history of 85 years. Then we’ll go to an exhibition of some new invention. I think it will be interested. The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel. We’ll set out at 8:30. Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time. You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions. Thank you for listening.【答案】【小题1】加上be【小题2】加上of【小题3】their--our【小题4】would--will【小题5】去掉on【小题6】A--The【小题7】invention--inventions【小题8】interested--interesting【小题9】Taking--Take【小题10】unless--if八、Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheel chair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and go over to his table and asked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said, “Thank you. You are generously. I’d like any orange juice, please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by the old man’s table to saying goodbye. He thanked me again and told me I had made his days, coming over and helping him out. I gave him a hug and told him he had made my day, either.【答案】【小题1】waiting后面加for【小题2】the改为an【小题3】and改为but/except【小题4】go改为went【小题5】去掉if后面的that【小题6】generously改为generous【小题7】any改为some【小题8】saying改为say【小题9】days改为day【小题10】either改为too九、I was working in a beer company, helped the president do something important. At the same time, my mother was in the final stages of the cancer. I worked during the day and drive 40 miles home to be with her every night. It was tired, but it was that I wanted to do. I didn’t want to bother the president with my trouble, yet I felt someone at the company needed to know about it. So I told a friend and asked him not to share the information with someone. Therefore, the president called me into his office one day. He faced me from across her large desk, looked at me and said, “Alice, I hear your mother is very ill.” I was caught by surprise and burst into tear. He just gentle said a sentence I will never forget: “Whatever you need.”【答案】【小题1】helped ---helping【小题2】the cancer【小题3】drive – drove【小题4】tired---tiring【小题5】that --- what【小题6】someone---anyone【小题7】Therefore--- However【小题8】her --- his【小题9】tear---tears【小题10】gentle---gently十、Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!【答案】【小题1】that--when【小题2】which--that【小题3】is--was【小题4】tiring--tired【小题5】去掉for【小题6】safe--safely【小题7】choosing--chosen【小题8】write--writing【小题9】woman--women【小题10】greatly--great十一、This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a Patience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.【答案】【小题1】去掉a【小题2】minute----minutes【小题3】and --but【小题4】with ---on【小题5】when --- than【小题6】waited前面加had【小题7】other-- another【小题8】do --did【小题9】possible --- possibly【小题10】lose---losing十二、My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only ourteachers but also our friends.【答案】【小题1】have--are【小题2】didn’t—don’t【小题3】many--much【小题4】去掉an【小题5】hour--hours【小题6】look--looks【小题7】去掉the【小题8】sat--sit【小题9】加上to【小题10】helpfully--helpful十三、The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.【答案】【小题1】made改为makes；【小题2】at改为to；【小题3】movie改为movies【小题4】去掉the；【小题5】How改为What；【小题6】different 改为differently【小题7】加to；【小题8】fallen改为fall；【小题9】Beside改为Besides；【小题10】keeping改为kept；十四、Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university ?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion , a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.【答案】【小题1】student → students【小题2】去掉by【小题3】and →or【小题4】在interested 后加in【小题5】impossibly→ possible【小题6】believes→believe【小题7】graduate →graduating或graduate前加who【小题8】a→ the【小题9】can→ can't 或后加not【小题10】they →we十五、It is three years now since I graduate from Jixing High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places【答案】【小题1】graduate→graduated【小题2】on→in【小题3】time 后加to【小题4】properly→proper【小题5】a→the【小题6】remember→remembering【小题7】they→we【小题8】which→that【小题9】去掉abroad前面的to【小题10】card→cards十六、I’m an senior high school student. I’m upset these days because my parents. They pay too much attention on my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades, they will be happy and satisfied. But if not, they will be worrying about me, especially my mom. I never want to let them down, but she has made a plan for my future. I was very bored with it and don’t know how to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledges is important for everybody. Therefore, I can’t stand they are always making me to study. I really expect they can understand me.【答案】【小题1】an→a【小题2】because后加of【小题3】on--to【小题4】worrying—worried【小题5】them—her【小题6】was—am【小题7】how--what【小题8】knowledges—knowledge【小题9】Therefore –However【小题10】to study去掉to十七、There are lots of experience in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. I’m interested in English. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally，I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidentthat makes people successfully.【答案】【小题1】experience→experiences【小题2】holding→held【小题3】been∧chosen【小题4】me→myself【小题5】such→so【小题6】a去掉【小题7】do→did【小题8】in→with【小题9】confident→confidence【小题10】successfully→successful/succeed十八、My next vacation will be wonderfully for me. I will go to Maryland to visit my friends. I have known her for eleven years since I am in high school. Right now, she is studying English at the University of Maryland. When I visit her, she will have to go t o her classes, but we will have lots of free time together either. When we go to high school together, she didn’t study very much hard. She wasn’t getting very good grades. And now she is a very good student in American. She know that she should study hard to success. We will have a great time together this summer.【答案】【小题1】wonderfully--wonderful【小题2】friends→friend【小题3】am→was【小题4】either→ too【小题5】go→went【小题6】去掉much【小题7】and→ but【小题8】American→ America【小题9】know→knows【小题10】success→succeed。

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IthinkIwould behappy there.NowIamlivinginacity,butI missmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountain saregreen.Unfortunately, onthe developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpol luted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthat globalwarming hasalready become averyseriouslyproblem. Theairswebreathe inisgettingdirtieranddirtier. Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaysto protectyourenvironmenfailtodoso,we’ll live to regretit.Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedSomecherry tomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen-foralltheseyears-wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwherethey please.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere. Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Thereareso muchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors. Althoughweallowtomato plantstogrowinthesame place yearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydisea搜索引擎优化rinsectattackproblems. Wearegrowingwonderfully tomatoesatnocost!218全国2WhenI was little,Friday’snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesof all sort inthesittingroom.Asthekid,I lovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesI askedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottolet me.Theywouldsayto usthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillI unwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.I di dn’trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereI was achildturnedouttobe veryusefullaterinmylife.217全国2Mr. andMrs. Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakes themaboutahourand ahalftogotowork everyday.Intheirspare time,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden, that isontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealso boughtforsomegardeningtools.beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet.When summercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables！216全国2Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday. Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedto spendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyou viewandgainknowledges wecannotgetfrombooks. Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterest nearby.I thoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnot costmany,yetwecanstilllearn alot.Oneday,littleTony wenttoashopping centerwithhisparenasverycrowded. Tony sawatoyona shopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsome time,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansa whimdryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetosee youagain!DadandIwereterribleworried. ”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain. 2014全国2Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandt wo intheafternoon.Wedi dn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-school activitie example, wecando readingforoneanda halfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden .Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaround theclassroom buildings.We canlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachers herearekindand helpfully.Theyarenot onlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.2018全国3ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowould be calledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclass activity,otherswerenervousandanxiouhaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospea k infrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthat moment,Irememberedthat myfatheroncesaid,"Theclassroomisa placeforlearningandthatincludeleaningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell."Immediate,I raisedmyhand.2017全国3WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself.Irealizeofhowfast timefliehadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalso mentally inthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonth afterthisphoto wastook,Ienteredmysecond yearofhigh schoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub. Around meinpicture arethethingstheywerevery importantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments. Ienjoyedstudyingdifference kindsof carsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispicture oftenbringsbacktome manyhappymemoriesof yourhighschooldays.2016 全国 3Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworse yearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,m y parents didn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhat todoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmy parentscouldn’tunderstand mesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependent by wearstrange clotheamleavinghometocollege. Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemy parentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.2018全国1During mylast winterholiday,Iwentto∧ the countrysidewithmy father tovisitmygrandparen find foundabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,they werelivinginasmall house withdogs, ducks, andhereanother otherchickenstwinterwhenIwent∧ there which again,th eyhada bigseparatehousetoraisedozensof .chickensTheyalsohadasmallpondsell或theyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquiteain where happily lotby selling thefish.Ifelt happy thattheirlifehadimproved.Attheend ofourtrip,Itoldmyfather thatI plannedtoreturn for everytwoyears, butheagreed.a n d2017全国1 Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteen eighteenthbirthday,Itookdrivinglessonstillrememberhowhard ∧ the/my firstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,I thoughtI hadlearnedthe instructor ’sorders,sobut/yet onceIstartedthecar,mymind wordgoes went blank .Iforg otwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.TheTurninginstructorkeptrepeating thewords,“Spee dup!”“Slowdown!”“ late Turn left!”Iwasso much nervous thatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleffewminutes suddenly later on,theinstructor asked metostopthecar.It wasa reliefandI cametoa sudden stopjustinthemiddle oftheroad.2016全国1 71. that →where72. but 去掉 73.had →have 74.honest →honesty75. or →and76. using →used 77.becoming 前加of 78. the →a79. our →htead →steadily2015全国176. think –thought 77.countryside 前加thr —and 79. on —with 80.been 去掉81. seriously —serious 82.airs —air 83.much —many 84. found —find 85. your —our2014全国12018全国2WhenIwas little, Friday ’s Fridaynightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplay card gamesof all so rtsorts inthesittingroom.Asthe a kid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhow manytimes Iaskedtowatching watchthem,myp a r e n tswo uldn otto letme.The ywoulds aytothat playingcardgameswould helpmybrain.StillIwas unwi llingtoplaythegames forwith themsometimedi dn’trealizehowrightmyparents are were untilI enteredhighschool.Thegamesmy parentstaughtme where when Iwasac hildturnedout tobeveryusefullaterin mylife.2017全国2Mr.andMrs.Zhangallbothworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemabout a hourandahalftogotowork everyday.Intheirsparetime,they areint erestinginplantingvegetablesinan /one int ereste dtheirgarden, thatwhichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.T heyof tenget up earlie r earlyandwaterthevegetablestogether. 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Section 16 短文改错两年高考真题演练A(2023·新课标全国Ⅰ)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.B(2023·新课标全国Ⅱ)One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.C(2023·浙江高考)My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left－hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.D(2023·陕西高考)My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!E(2023·四川高考)Hi, Janice，It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.GraceF(2023·新课标全国Ⅰ)Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then － for all these year－we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!G(2023·新课标全国卷Ⅱ)My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m.and ends at 3：30 p．m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore，we have more time with after－school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.H(2023·浙江高考)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket－owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.I(2023·四川高考)Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don't panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soonthe firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it's a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately.J(2023·陕西高考)My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky－they were looked like rain！We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!K(2023·辽宁高考)Dear Jeremy and Alice，Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors，we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word，your dog－Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely，Jack and Rose一年模拟试题精练A(2023·河北衡水中学一调)Good morning，everyone.It's great honor for me to speak here.My name's Li Xiaojun，born in a harmonious family.My father and mother are all high school teachers.Influenced by them，I read widely during my early age，but I've developed a great interest in arts and sports.I'm easy－going，get along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over all my classmates' friendships，and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life.Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me.I dream constantly that I，along with mine classmates，will study happy with the help of the respectable professors.I dream that I will swim freely in the sea，enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future.Thank you.B(2023·河南新乡许昌平顶山二调)Dear Mr.Green，I am very exciting to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes its success.I would like a magazine to have three columns.News，Teachers' Advice or Students' Voice.From the News column we can learn about what was going on in both of our schools.In Teachers' Advice，our teacher can give us such help that we may not be able to get in the classroom.Students' Voice will allow us to free express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen between our ties，and I am looking forward to read it.Yours faithfully，Li HuaC(2023·海南三校联考)Nowadays，the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular.Some students regarded it as a great helper.Because there has a lot of information on line，so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library.This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet.Moreover，other students think that there is some information on line which is not good for students.In addition，spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health.Therefore，we should make properly use of the Internet.It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.D(2023·山西四校联考二)One day I pushed my cousin Li Dong in wheelchair on an especial narrow sidewalk.We struggled along with one wheel on the sidewalk or the other on the road.Suddenly，a man riding his motorcycle past us rapidly，missing Li Dong by several inch.Immediately，he turned round，stopped his motorcycle and came over.We were worried she would blame us for have stood in his way.To our surprise，he said nothing at all and helped out push the wheelchair until we reached a slightly wider sidewalk.Then he left after we could say thanks to him.We were leaving ashamed of what we thought.E(2023·辽宁实验中学分校期中)It's very kind for you to let me know about your beautiful city.Now I'd like to tell you something about your beautiful hometown.It located on the bank of a river and it is a beautiful place to live in.Its economy has been developing rapid in the past two decades.More schools and hospitals are available to people.Besides，there are some problems，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffics in rush hours.In my opinion，my hometown should develop its economy scientifically.Something must be doing to prevent water and air pollution or the growth of its population should be brought under the control so that we'll have a better hometown.F(2023·河南六市一模)Dear Sir/Madam，I'm glad to hear that you will organize an adventure trip.I'm interested on adventure and extreme sports so much.When travelling，we will enjoy ourselves and learn everything from the exploration，which attracts me very much.But I wonder that if the trip will be exciting and relaxing.Personally，I think it's important that there will an experienced guide in the group，whom will be helpful to us.Beside，how can you make extreme sports like bungee jumping easy accepted and even more attractive?I hope that all the adventure would be interesting，fascinating but meaningful.Yours sincerely，Li HuaG(2023·甘肃甘谷一中检测)Yesterday was my mother birthday.My father and I planned to give him a surprise.In the morning，like usual，my father and mother went to work but I went to school at eight o'clock.My mother seemed to have forgotten her birthday.At four o'clock in the afternoon my father bought a bunch of flowers as well a lot of good food my mother likes to eat.I bought my mother large and beautiful birthday cake.When my mother got home，she was greatly surprised by that she saw.All that we had done made her very happily.After supper，I asked my mother to sit down and watched TV.My father began to clean the floor and I set out to doing the washing－up.H(2023·云南昆明质检)April 23rd is World Reading Day，this reminds us of the importance of reading.We are supposed to read more in that special day.But the situation for we to read nowadays is not satisfying.For example，when we are at home，we would rather to watch TV or go on the Internet than read books.As a result，we spend such little time on books.However，reading books have many advantages.Not only can our abilities and skills be improving，but also we can get some information from reading.Beside，reading can bring us happiness.I think it good habit that in our spare times we read more books of great use.I(2023·哈尔滨师大附中东北师大附中辽宁省实验中学联合模拟一)Of all my teachers，Mr.Smith is the one who impresses me most.Because he is 54，he looks very young at his age.And he's one of the most popular teachers in our pared with other teacher，Mr.Smith pays more attention to his way of teaching.He tries various ways to make his class lively and interestingly.In his opinion，we would not only know “what”，but also understand “why”．So，instead of giving us answers immediately，he encourages us to think by themselves whenever he puts forward questions.With his help，we learned how to analyze and settle down problems.What a wonderful world of “what” he leads us to！He is such a learning person that we all admire him very much.J(2023·黑龙江、齐齐哈尔一模)Dear Mom，Mother's Day is coming.I'm sorry that I am abroad and can't send your flowers in person，but I'm writing to you.Mom，I know I have never expressed my thank to you before.But on today，at this special time，I just want to tell you loud：I love you，Mom！Thank you so much by not only giving me life，but also teach me how to be a good person.Thank you for all you had done for me.Mom，though I may often say it，I do love you.Nobody can take your part in my heart.Whenever I am，I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day!Your little girl，JenniferK(2023·大连二十四中月考)My brother Donald didn't do well in math.When the day of the exam comes，Donald sat next to Brian，which was always good at math.Donald careful copied Brian's answers.At end of the exam，the teacher collected the papers and graded it.Then she decided to give a prize to the student who got the high grade.But it was a bit of difficult for her to make a decision，because Donald and Brian got the same grade.The teacher thought about that and made on her mind to give the prize to Brian.Donald said it was unfair.“That's true，” the teacher said.“Therefore，Brian's answer to Question 18 was ‘I don't know’．Your was ‘Neither do I’．”Section 16 短文改错【两年高考真题演练】A1．解析考察动词的时态。

（全国通用）2024年高考英语专项分类复习——短文改错（真题试卷模拟）短文改错1．（2024届青海省西宁市大通高三三模试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

School life has taught me a lot, of them I think honesty is the most important. When I was in Senior One, I caught cheating in the final exam. I feel everyone in my class looked down upon myself. I was very ashamed that I decided to run away from school. Upon know this, my teacher paid a visit to my home in person but had a long chat with me. He made me to come to know that being brave enough to recognize one’s mistakes and overcome them are a basic quality for a man. Since then, I’ve made up my mind to be honesty and work hard.2．（2024届宁夏银川一中高三三模试卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高考英语改错经典十篇（附答案）一、（大纲卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。

All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…，这是单个的动名词定语，做主语的时候，谓语动词要使用单数形式。