2018届二轮复习 短文改错模拟训练10篇之十六 学案(14页word版)

2018届二轮复习 短文改错专题训练10篇之九 学案【1】I really think the way most young people use modern technology arealmost anti －st week my cousin came over for the dinner.She’sseventeen and addicting to her mobile phone.All through dinner she wason her phone, send messages and chatting online.We were both therehaving a conversation, but she was in her own little world.It was quitestrange and annoyed.When I asked her about it, her reply was “Well, Ineed to stay touch with my friends”.However, I’m really not c onvincedthat this way of using technological really does this.After all, there hadlots of us there together but he wasn’t in touch with us at all!答案I really think the way most young people use modern technologyare is almost anti －st week my cousin came over forthe dinner.She’s seventeen and addicting addicted to her mobile phone.All throughdinner she was on her phone, send sending messages and chatting online.Wewere both all there having a conversation, but she was in her own littleworld.It was quite strange and annoyed annoying .When I asked her about it, herreply was “Well, I need to stay intouch with my friends”.However, I’mreally not convinced that this way of using technological technology really doesthis.After all, there hadwere lots of us there together butheshe wasn’t intouch with us at all!【2】One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoying to eating it. Unexpected, he saw his friend coming towards him, so he hurriedly hid the ice creams behind him. After he greeted his friend, they begin to talk. His friend had the dog with him. While he stopped to talk with my brother, his dog moving around. The dog was such glad to find the ice cream in my brother’s hand and it began to eat it with greater pleasure. My brother felt embarrassing that he hadn’t shared the ice cream with his friend, he gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.答案One day, my little brother bought an ice cream in the street, enjoyingto eating it.UnexpectedUnexpectedly，he saw his friend coming towards him, sohe hurriedly hid the ice creamscream behind him. After he greeted his friend,they beginbegan to talk. His friend hadthea/his dog with him. While he stoppedto talk with my brother, his dog moving moved around. The dog was such so gladto find the ice cream in my brother’s hand and it began to eat it withgreater great pleasure. My brother felt embarrassing embarrassed that he hadn’t shared theice cream with his friend, and /sohe gave the ice cream to the dog. Then he bought another two for his friend and himself.【3】My parents run the restaurant in our city. I often help out there afterschool every time when I am free. Yesterday afternoon I went there tohelp out as usually. While I was there, two foreigners from Australiancame to have a meal. Learned that they didn’t speak Chinese at all, I wentup and greeted them with simple English. I recommended some typicaldish and they did have a nice meal. After the meal, they expressed theirsatisfaction with the food and praised me for my English. It was the firsttime that I have communicated with foreigners. My parents felt proud ofmine and they encouraged me study English well.答案My parents run the a restaurant in our city. I often help out there afterschool every time when I am free. Yesterday afternoon I went there tohelp out as usually usual . While I was there, two foreigners from Australian Australiacame to have a meal. LearnedLearning that they didn’t speak Chinese at all, Iwent up and greeted them within simple English. I recommended sometypicaldishdishes and they did have a nice meal. After the meal, theyexpressed their satisfaction with the food and praised me for my English.It was the first time that I havehad communicated with foreigners. Myparents felt proud of mineme and they encouraged me tostudy Englishwell.【4】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen! Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. Take part in English speech competitions is helpful way to learn English. When we full prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities to listen and speak and developed a good habi t of reading. There’re some rules, to that you should pay special attention in the process of the competition. First, you should finish your speech in five minute. Second, you should try your best to express you in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronounce. I hope everybody shows off your speech talent or make friends with each other.Thank you!答案Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen! Welcome to this year’sEnglish speech competition. Take Taking part in English speech competitionsis ahelpful way to learn English. When we full fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities to listen and speak anddeveloped develop a good habit of reading. There’re some rules, t o thatwhich youshould pay special attention in the process of the competition. First, youshould finish your speech in five minute minutes . Second, you should try yourbest to express you yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have agood English pronounce pronunciation . I hope everybody shows off your speechtalent or and make friends with each other.Thank you!【5】Nowadays, many teenagers spend too many time on computers. Thenumber of students who come to school in the morning are alreadycompletely exhausting. The cause of this is staying late at night playingcomputer games and chat with their friends online. Most of them don’trealize just how damaging to their healthy this is, let alone the effect ithas on their grades. I recently read an article about the damage that playing computer games are doing to kids. The article claimed for that lots of the games kids play are extremely harmful. It said that at best they are turning teens into dull people which have no social life and at worst into potential killer!答案Nowadays, many teenagers spend too manymuch time on computers.TheA number of students who come to school in the morning are alreadycompletely exhaustingexhausted. The cause of this is staying uplate at nightplaying computer games andchatchatting with their friends online. Most ofthem don’t realize just how damaging to their healthyhealth this is, let alonethe effect it has on their grades. I recently read an article about thedamage that playing computer games areis doing to kids. The articleclaimed for that lots of the games kids play are extremely harmful. Itsaid that at best they are turning teens into dull peoplewhichthat/who have nosocial life and at worst into potential killerkiller s！【6】I’m gladly to receive your novel. Thank you for such lovely a gift, for Ihad been expecting it for a long time. This novel offers to me more understanding of American society and daily life. I know you’re interesting in Chinese festivals, and therefore I have chosen an album of paper cutting for you. Paper cutting is unique form of Chinese cultural relics, that is often used as a decoration for a joyful atmosphere. I hope it will bring happiness and lucks to your family as it always did in China.I’m expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture on person.I’m gladly to receive your novel. Thank you for such lovely a gift, for I had been expecting it for a long time.glad so haveThis novel offers to me more understanding of American society and daily life. I know you’re interesting in Chinese\interestedfestivals, and therefore I have chosen an album of paper cutting for you. Paper cutting is ∧unique form of Chineseacultural relics, that is often used as a decoration for a joyful atmosphere. I hope it will bring happiness and lucks towhichluckyour family as it always did in China.doesI’m expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture on person.in【7】Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and become a student in an ordinary school.Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patiently and considerate.Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.I decided make the best of it.I worked hard and got along good with my teachers and classmates.Whenever I had difficulties, they are always available.Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, and which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tell me that it is not what you are given but how you make use for it that determines who you are.答案：第一句：become→became第二句：Disappointing→Disappointed; patiently→patient第四句：decided后加to第五句：good→well第六句：are→were第七句：student→students; 去掉and第八句：tell→tells; for→of【8】It is true that famous schools have equipped with better teaching facilities.However, teachers there are excellent, who come from all over country and even abroad.They have a strong teaching ability to make classes more live and interesting, but students will be able to accept knowledge a bit more easily and better.However, not every student was fit to go to famous schools, in that there is fierce competition among students.And students there have to work much harder than these in ordinary schools.I hope the government will take effective measures to make sure all the schools to provide equally good educations.答案：第一句：have→are第二句：However→Besides/Moreover; co untry前加the第三句：live→lively; but→so第四句：was→is; that→which第五句：these→those第六句：去掉第二个to; educations→education【9】I still remember the first day I come to this new school.Everything was new to me, what made me realize I was no longer a small child.I hadto depend on me.Luckily, I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine.I had great English teacher, Maggie.She let me know the important of English.So I decided to learn English hardly.Although it was very difficult at first, but with the help of my teacher，I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”答案：第一句：come→came第二句：what→which第三句：me→myself第四句：friend→friends第五句：with→to第六句：great前加a第七句：important→importance第八句：hardly→hard第九句：去掉but或but→yet; rapidly→rapid【10】It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems.68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too.And a larger percentage lacks sleep.52% are short o f physical exercise.42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers.Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies.Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything.However, too much attention has been paid only on studies.As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities.Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.答案：第一句：clear→clearly第二句：surveying→surveyed; 去掉too 第三句：lacks→lack第五句：our→their第六句：student→students第七句：sound前加a第八句：on→to第九句：are→be; or→and。

第二讲短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

Ⅰ短文改错命题原则表——高考就考这些点短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进行查验。

见下表：A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Befo re getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up！”“Slow down！”“Turning left！” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.答案：In the summer holiday following myeighteen eighteenth birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard ∧the/myfirst day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so but/yet once I started the car, my mind goes wentblank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word words ， “Speed up ！”“Slow down ！”“Turning Turnleft ！” I was so much ＼ nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minuteslate later ， the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sudden stop just in the middle on ofthe road. B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!答案：Mr. and Mrs.Zhang /all both all ＼work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a an/one hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting interestedin planting vegetables in their garden, that which is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier earlyand water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside Besides ， they often get some useful informations information from the Internet. When summer came comes ， they will invite their students ∧ topick the fresh vegetables! C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high schooldays. 答案：When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of＼how fast time flies. I hadhave grown not onlyphysically, andbut also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo wastooktaken， Ientered my second year of high school and becomebecame a new member of the school music club.Around mein ∧this/thepicture are the thingstheythat/which were very important in my life at that time：car magazinesand musical instruments.I enjoyed studying differencedifferent kinds of cars and planes，playing popmusic，and collecting thelatelatest music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happymemories of yourmy high school days.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。

2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇训练之一【一】I like to play basketballs very much，so when I went to a middle school，I joined the basketball st week，our team had a match.We were against other school.All of us were so exciting and wanted to win.When the match began，our team works very slowly.We could not cooperate very good，because this was the first time of us to play.When half match time went，we lagged behind.Our team leader called us together and told us we must get united，so that we could have the chance win.Then we played hardly and cooperated so well.But we won the game in the end.答案：I like to play basketballsbasketball very much，so when I went to middleschool，I joined the basketball st week，our team had a match.Wewere againstotheranother school.All of us were soexcitingexcited and wanted towin.When the match began，our teamworksworked very slowly.We could notcooperate very goodwell，because this was the first timeoffor us to play.Whenhalf match time went，we lagged behind.Our team leader called us together and told us we must get united，so that we could have the chancewin.Then we played hardlyhard and cooperated so well.错误!we won thegame in the end.【二】I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldn’t have won firstprize in the English Talent Competition for high school student last week.I used to be poorly in spoken English. I was too shy to speak in class. Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class. Thanks to her, I have made great progresses. Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her. It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence. And I owe my success to her.Susan set me a good example. I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.答案：第一句：at→without; student→students第二句：poorly→poor第四句：teaches→taught; him→me第五句：progresses→progress第六句：去掉the第七句：which→that第八句：And→So第九句：Susan后加has【三】I can still remember I was once asked to make speech before the whole class at the age of 9. Y ou can imagine how shy I was when I thought of that with so many eyes fixed to me. I had no more choice but to prepare for it, though. The hardest part was my oral presentation from my memory, for reading from the paper wasn’t allowing. The real moment began before I stood on the platform with my legs trembling or my mind blank. But my listeners were waiting patient. Gradually, I found me back, giving my speech at last. After what seemed to be a long time, I heard all the listeners applauding loudly. Ever since then, my fear of speak before the audience had disappeared. Actually, now I’ve become a great speaker!答案：第一句：make后加a第二句：to→on/upon第三句：去掉more第四句：allowing→allowed第五句：before→when/as/after; or→and第六句：patient→patiently第七句：me→myself第九句：speak→speaking; had→has【四】Last month, I was told we would have our first military training. At first, I thought it will be hard to spend a whole week stayed away from school and home. The sunshine wouldbe very strongly during these days, or we could easily get sunburnt. Later, when I was in the camp, I found it was a lot fun. The training was hard for you all. But my classmates and I were treated very kindly by all the soldier. The food in the camp look simple, but tasted good. Now you never know how happy days we had in the camp. I think the experience has been made us stronger!答案：第二句：will→would; stayed→staying第三句：strongly→strong; or→and/so第四句：lot后加of第五句：you→us第六句：soldier→soldiers第七句：look→looked第八句：how→what第九句：去掉been【五】Life is an mystery and we will never know that what is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it’s the process of solving problems that help us grow.Make a speech used to be a big problem for me. With a strong accent and terribly pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn’t hold back. In the contrary, I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I’m confident enough to give my best speech to you all.My dear friends, don’t afraid of problems, but take advantage of it to be the best of ourselves!答案：第一句：an→a; 去掉that第三句：help→helps第四句：Make→Making第五句：terribly→terrible; competition→competitions第六句：In→On第七句：listening→listened第九句：don’t后加be; it→them【六】Sunny 31st, JulyIt was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying and the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The airwas fresh. In addition, I could clear see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.答案：第二句：come→came; relaxing→relaxed第三句：While→When; its→my第五句：clear→clearly第六句：grasses→grass; with→at第七句：Therefore→However第八句：去掉back第九句：such后加a【七】Last summer vacation, I went back to my hometown to visit my grandparent. They had several cows in their yard. One day, one of them were ill, but it didn’t want take any medicine. An animal doctor came and gave it an injection. After a while, and it seemed to be better, so I decided to feed it anything. I fed it carrots, which were cutting into small pieces. I also fed it milk powder with pills in them, just as a doctor told me. Although looking after an ill cow was a tired job, I felt a sense of achievement as it begins to recover.答案：第一句：grandparent→grandparents第三句：were→was; take前加to第五句：去掉and; anything→something第六句：cutting→cut第七句：them→it; a→the第八句：tired→tiring; begins→began【八】I am a student in Senior Three. Though I am busy with my study, I often imagine what my life will be like in the ten years. I will have graduated from the university by now. I hope I will find a job in an advertisement company which I will enjoy my work and get along well to my colleagues. I will do my best in whenever I do. I will get married and have my own family filling with love and happiness. I will keep the habit of taking regular exercises, such as running, swimming or various ball games. During my holidays, I would travel to my dreamlands. In a word, my life will be much richer and colorful.答案：第二句：去掉the第三句：now→then第四句：which→where; to→with第五句：whenever→whatever第六句：filling→filled第七句：exercises→exercise; or→and第八句：would→will第九句：and后加more【九】After school, I was about to enter into my apartment when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extremely weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy. So I decided to take him home. I gave him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energy and refreshed. What a lovely dog! When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprised and joy, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family and everyone had enjoyed his company. Looked at the cute and happy dog today, I realize that I was right to help him. I offered him a shelter and he brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.答案：第一句：去掉into; lie→lying第三句：of→with第六句：energy→energetic第八句：that→whether/if第九句：surprised→surprise第十句：become后加a; had→has第十一句：Looked→Looking第十二句：ourselves→us【十】Hi Eva，Sorry that I haven’t been in the touch for a while. But I catch a cold last week, and I’ve been in bed for four day. I’m feeling better today. Lucky my classes won’t start till next week.I have good news. I’m going to a conference in you town in May, from 16th to 20th. Could you recommend a hotel where is in the centre of the town? It needs to be somewhere not too expensive because the tight budget. I’ll have a freely half-day for sightseeing. Do you think you can showed me around?Looking forward to hear from you soon.Chris答案：第一句：去掉the第二句：catch→caught; day→days 第四句：Lucky→Luckily第六句：you→your第七句：where→that/which第八句：because后加of第九句：freely→free第十句：showed→show第十一句：hear→hearing。

2018届二轮复习短文改错解题技巧学案练与析一、分清错误的类型，对症下药1．缺词短文改错中所缺的词常常是冠词、介词、代词等虚词，它通常与词的搭配相关，比如：见到名词，应考虑是否缺了冠词；见到动词，可注意后面是否少了应与之搭配的介词或其他词；见到某些固定表达，如in fact，as soon as等，应考虑是否完整；还有某些短语加冠词与不加冠词意义不同，如in front of，in the front of；某些短语加介词与不加介词用法不同，如：as a result，as a result of。

高考常考点具体如下表所示：典型例题：①In the car park there Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.答案及分析：在as后加a。

car是可数名词，此处表示“有一辆汽车冲了过来”，表泛指，故要用a。

②For example，how many times have you walked out of a room and left the lights or television when no one else was there?答案及分析：在television后面加on。

句意：例如，当那里没人的时候，有多少次你让电灯或电视开着就离开了房间？leave...on表示“让……开着”。

③There was one in particular I’d always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn’tlooking.答案及分析：在put后加it。

及物动词put后缺少宾语，代替“我特别想要的那个玩具”要用it。

2．多词短文改错中多余的词常常是虚词，如冠词、介词、代词、副词、连词等。

一种是根据涉及的名词、动词的特点等判断是否多了冠词、介词、副词或其他词；另一种是根据全句的结构和意义，判断是否多了连词或其他词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错典题训练10篇练与析【一】Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. All kind of pollution and the destruction of the environment could be see everywhere in our daily life.With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make much noise and gave off poisonous gases. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources have become less and less. Trees have been cut down, but waste water is being poured continuously into rivers and lakes. The whole ecological balance of earth is changing. Massive destruction of the environment have brought about negative effects in the ecosystem around the world and even become a great threat to man’s existence.We must face to the situation that exists and take immediate action to solving our environmental problems together. We hope all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthy environment so that we could live happy in a beautiful and harmonious world.答案：第二句：kind→kinds; see→seen第三句：gave→give第五句：but→and第六句：earth前加the第七句：have→has; in→on第八句：去掉face后的to; solving→solve第九句：happy→happily【二】Frank joined the army after middle school. He did quite well in everything besides shooting. One day, the new soldiers were practiced shooting. Frank performed poorly while the rest was doing quite well. After he had shot at the target nine times but had not hit once, the officer shouted, “I had never seen such a fool! Don’t waste away your last bullet! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it！” Frank went behind the wall, and a few seconds late the sound of a shot was heard by the officer and the other soldier. “Heavens！” the officer said. “Has that silly man real done so？” He ran behind the wall anxiously, only find Frank standing there straight, saying, “I’msorry, and I missed again.”答案：第二句：besides→except第三句：practiced→practicing第四句：was→were第五句：第三个had→have; 去掉away第六句：late→later; soldier→soldiers第八句：real→really第九句：only后加to; and→but【三】Dear Mike，You said you want to know a lot much about the English Club of our school. It was three years ago when the English Club was born. It was found to improve students’ interest in English. Those interested in English got together in the multimedia classroom every Saturday afternoon. There are many activities holding in it. Students can watch diversely English films. They can as well as learn to sing English songs, which can help them learn English word by heart. In addition, many topics can be discussed there in a language. What do you like our club? I’m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hua 答案：第一句：much→more第二句：when→that第三句：found→founded第四句：got→get第五句：holding→held第六句：diversely→diverse第七句：去掉第二个as; word→words第八句：a→the第九句：What→How【四】It was noon on Friday. Friday was Laundry Day, on that Kerry felt annoyed. Doing the wash was painful thing. He had to gather all the dirty clothes, turn the shirtsinside out of and empty all the junk out of the pockets of her clothes. Kerry piled all the clothes into the basket and goes downstairs. He was relieving because no one was using the machine. He put soap and clothes into the washing machine, but then set it at Regular Wash. When it was full of soapy waters, he walked back upstairs. Unfortunate, when he went downstairs again, he found the machine had been broke.答案：第二句：that→which第三句：was后加a第四句：去掉and前的of; her→his/the第五句：goes→went第六句：relieving→relieved第七句：but→and第八句：waters→water第九句：Unfortunate→Unfortunately; broke→broken【五】As we all know, travelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the internet before you set out. You needn't take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you'd better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.答案As we all know, travelling can be an excitedexcitingexperience. Let me give you someadvices advice that you have to pay attention ∧to. You can find out more about yourdestination by surfsurfing the internet before you set out. You needn't take too manymuchcash.SinceThoughit can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additionaladdition，it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of＼it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you'd better understand the cultural diversity. Keepthis it in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you hadhavea wonderful trip.【四】In the morning of November 18th, 1755, an earthquake shook Boston. John, professor in Harvard college felt a quake and woke up and found to be fifteen minutes past four. He hurried to downstairs to the clock. It had stopped three minutes ago. Except to stopping the clock, the quake had only thrown a key from the mantel (壁炉架)to the floor. The clock had stopped because John put some long glass tube he was using for an experiment into the case for safekeeping. The quake had been knocked the tubes over and blocked the pendulum(钟摆). So John had the exactly time of the earthquake.答案InOnthe morning of November 18th, 1755, an earthquake shook Boston. John,professor in Harvard college felt athe quake and woke up and found ∧itto be fifteenminutes past four. He hurried to＼downstairs to the clock. It had stopped threeminutes agobefore . Except toforstopping the clock, the quake had only thrown a key fromthe mantel (壁炉架)to the floor. The clock had stopped because John ∧hadput some long glass tubetubeshe was using for an experiment into the case for safekeeping. The quake had been knocked the tubes over and blocked the pendulum(钟摆). So John had the exactlyexacttime of the earthquake.【五】One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems. Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to buildmuch strong relationships with the family than we had before.答案One of my happiest childhood memories werewashaving dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, ∧havingfound that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings theaweek for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays orand Fridays. After a couple of weekweeksof trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather to＼spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. GradualGradually，though, they began to see these evenings together forina very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems. SinceAftera few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strongstrongerrelationships with the family than we had before.【六】Nowadays, many teenagers spend too many time on computers. The number of students who come to school in the morning are already completely exhausting. The cause of this is staying at night playing computer games and chat with their friends online. Most of them don't realize just how damaging to their healthy this is, let alone the effect it has on their grades. I recently read an article about the damage that playing computer games are doing to kids. The article claimed that lots of the games kids play are extremely harmful. It said that at best they are turning teens to dull people which have no social life and at worst into potential killer.答案Nowadays, many teenagers spend too manymuch time on computers. TheAnumberof students who come to school in the morning are already completely exhaustingexhausted.The cause of this is staying ∧up at night playing computer games and chatchattingwiththeir friends online. Most of them don't realize just how damaging to their healthyhealth this is, let alone the effect it has on their grades. I recently read an article about the damage that playing computer games areisdoing to kids. The article claimed that lots of the games kids play are extremely harmful. It said that at best they are turning teensto into dull people whichthat/whohave no social life and at worst into potential killerkillers.【七】Last week our school held a sports meeting.Realizing it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it unforgettable experience.We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success.My classmates took part in various event such as running, the high jump and the long jump.Due to the hard training the athletes have Done before, their performance was very impressive.My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, so some raised their cameras to capture the excited moments.The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proud.This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.答案Last week our school held a sports meeting.Realizing it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it∧anunforgettable experience.We first attended the opening ceremony, for whomwhichour class had made a lot of preparations. Much fortoour excitement, our performance was a success.My classmates took part in various eventeventssuch as running, the high jump and the long jump.Due to the hard training the athletes havehaddone before, their performance was very impressive.My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, soandsome raised their cameras to capture the excitedexcitingmoments.The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts were＼paid off! Cup in hand, we took apicture together proudproudly .This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of themusas time goes by.【八】My father and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my father told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and a fish caught. Within the next few minute, my father also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.答案My father and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we gowent fishing at a lake. We took oursourfishing poles andheaded for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so＼we dropped the lines into the water.Before After waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatientlyimpatient. I wanted togive up, andbut my father told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there werewasa suddenpull at the pole and a fish ∧was caught. Within the next few minuteminutes，my father alsocaught a fish.FeltFeelinghungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.【九】Reading is not only a good habit but a enjoyable thing.Firstly, it's very easy to keep on reading. We can read anywhere and anytime unless we want. Secondly, we may communicate the wise men all over the world by reading. Not only do reading broaden our horizons but it brings us happinesses. Thirdly, read is useful for each of us. We can learn many knowledge from books to solve the problems we may meet them every day. Since reading is of greatly importance, I'm going to read more.In a word, books are our best friends and teachers. Do some reading and enjoying our life!答案Reading is not only a good habit but aanenjoyable thing.Firstly, it's very easy to keep on reading. We can read anywhere and anytimeunlessif we want. Secondly, we may communicate ∧withthe wisemen all over the worldby reading. Not only dodoes reading broaden our horizons but it brings us happinesseshappiness.Thirdly, readreading is useful for each of us. We can learn manymuchknowledge from books tosolve the problems we may meet them＼every day. Since reading is of greatlygreat importance, I'm going to read more.In a word, books are our best friends and teachers. Do some reading and enjoyingenjoyour life!【十】When I was 10，once my parents were away on business，but I had to stay at home alone for a day. I got up early in the morning，thinking about different activity I could do. The first idea was that I could play computer games all through the day without blamed by my mother. Minutes later，I said to me，“Why don't I do something meaningful？” So I planned to cook the meal for my parents. I tried to recall how my mother usually did in the kitchen and arrange everything on my own. With a whole day's effort，I finally made it. I felt it very happy when I saw my parents eating the meal cheerful. They couldn't help say that their son had grown up.答案When I was 10，once my parents were away on business，butand/soI had to stay at home alone for a day. I got up early in the morning，thinking about different activityactivitiesI could do. The first idea was that I could play computer games all throughthe day without ∧being blamed by my mother. Minutes later，I said to memyself，“Why don'tI do something meaningful？” So I planned to cook theameal for my parents. I triedto recall howwhat my mother usually did in the kitchen and arrangearrangedeverything on myown. With a whole day's effort，I finally made it. I felt it＼very happy when I saw myparents eating the meal cheerfulcheerfully . They couldn't help saysayingthat their son had grownup.。

2018届高考二轮复习之：短文改错Step1 Lead-in一、考点：把握“3+4+5”，共十二个考点一）三个必考点：1、名词的单复数；2、介词的误用、多用或少用；3、动词时态不一致；二）四个常考点：1、连词的误用、多用或少用；2、冠词的误用、多用或少用；3、词语辨析；4、词性误用三）五个可考点：1、代词；2、非谓语动词；3、情态动词；4、主谓一致；5、比较级，最高级二、考法:1. 8个改词1个添词1个删词，记住比例是：8:1:1（也有可能7:3）2. 每句有0--2 个错误3. 需要变形的词语通常是名词、动词、形容词、副词等;4. 少词一般是添加冠词，介词，连词，不定式的to, 以及物主代词；5. 多词一般是删掉冠词，介词，助动词等；三、解题三步骤:1. 浏览全文，弄懂全文；2. 逐句阅读，依据考点，逐句寻找错误；3. 重读全文，仔细推敲，解决个别难题Passage 1: 2015全国IWhen I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your enviro nment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it . Step 2 Practice and conclusionPassage 2:Our English teacher begin to teach us in 2015.She had been teaching English for more than ten year. She likes we, and she is very strict in all of us. Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully, but we consider her as our friend. She is really good teacher. We are love her very much. We're sure we'll get in well with each other.总结归纳：短文改错口诀:＿＿形，＿＿数; 还要注意__＿和＿_ ;＿＿＿，细辨别; ＿＿、＿＿要牢记;＿＿格，细领悟; ＿＿＿＿__多分析;＿＿＿＿常光顾; ＿___＿错误须关注.Step 3 PresentationI.动词形1 .She liked it very much and reads it to the class.2.Tony, together with his father and mother , were excited at the news.3.Many trees are planting in spring every year .II.名词数1.There are advantage for students to work while studying at school.2.He has rech working experiences3.Every means have been tried.4.He has made great progresses recently.III. 还要注意形和副1.This is a beautifully village.2.It is clearly that he likes you.3.He asked angry if we had finished the work.4.Fortunate,he passed the exam.5.He is recovering fast than expected.6.His father looks much more happier today.Ⅳ.非谓语，细辨别1.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found wherehis parents were missing.2.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.3.I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.Ⅴ.介词短语要记住1.The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money.2.He has only a small cold room to live.3.He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.Ⅵ.代词格，细领悟1.We took ours fishing tools and headed for the lake.2.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things went wrong,I gotangry and broke it.3.He found difficult to learn math well.4.I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teacher’soffice.Ⅶ. 句子成分多分析1.He turned around and found where his parents were missing.2.How do you think I should do?3.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt,tell your teacher immediately.4.I live in Beijing,that is the capital of China.Ⅷ. 冠词连词常光顾1.A woman saw him crying and told him to wait outside a shop.2.As result, the plants are growing somewhere.3.I like the coat,and it was more than I would like to pay.Ⅸ. 逻辑错误须关注1.Tom is a good boy. We all like her.2.He was the gentlest man I have never known.3.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. Step 4 PracticePassage 3：2014全国卷IMy dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.Step 5 Homework2017全国II卷Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.beside,they often get some useful informations from the internet.When summer came,they will invite their students pick the vegetables！2016全国I卷My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2016·全国卷ⅡThe summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the Peking University. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeed enjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son tolearn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my owndream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not onl y can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save peop le’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable with professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life,but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talk about with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star.答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之一【1】Last year, I spent my summer holiday at my uncles in Beijing, which I stayed for nearly one month. In the first two weeks, I visited some places of interest such as the Forbidden City. In the following days. what interested me most was explore several op universities, including the PekingUniversity. Deeply attracted by the beautiful sceneries and academic atmosphere, I found myself greatly inspire to study hard to be admitted by one key university in 2018. Additional, one of the most interesting but meaningful things was to teach my cousin to learn English. Even though we had much difficulty at first, neither of us improved much both in knowledge and patience. I indeedenjoyed that summer holiday, which have benefited me a lot from life and study ever since.答案【2】In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating from high school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may find the school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that they need a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It suggested that textbooks be recycled so that we can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in a time on how to remove their pressure proper.答案In recent years it seems to be a common practice which students tear up their textbooks when graduating fromthathigh school. There are some reasons of this. First, after buried themselves in lessons all day long , students may findfor buryingthe school life boring but want to do something interesting. Second, students are under so great pressure that theyand suchneed a way to relax.Personally, I don’t think students should tear up his textbooks. It/\suggested that textbooks be recycled so thattheir iswe can save up more tree and protect the environment. Meanwhile, schools should provide them with guidance in atrees删除atime on how to remove their pressure proper.properly【3】Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’t fit? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to the campus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when the lovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendliness pushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or you will find out people are more friendly than you think!答案Going to college can be terrifying. When I first arrived at my college, I was extreme nervous. What if I couldn’textremelyfit∧? What if I couldn’t make friends? … All these thought just could not stop float in my mind. When I got to thein thoughts floatingcampus, I was shocked at how outgoing everyone seems. I had only been on the campus for a few minutes when theseemedalovely girl came up and started a conversation with me, which later became one of my best friends. His friendlinesswhoHerpushed me out of my comfortable zone and made me to open up faster than I had expected. So please reach out or删除to andyou will find out people are more friendly than you think!【4】I woke up lately yesterday because my alarm clock didn't ring. With no time for the breakfast, I rushed out of my house. I had intended to catch the 7: 30 subway, and I didn't make it. Have a little time left, I take a taxi instead. I arrived at the school only find, with great sadness mixed with some relief, that the school where should have been full of students was empty. It was Saturday. However, our ill luck showed no sign of coming at an end. When I returned home, I found myself lock out. I had forgotten to bring the key. Just my luck.答案第一句lately--late;第二句breakfast前the去掉；第三句and---but;第四句Have--Having,take---took 第五句find前加to,where---which;第六句at---to第七句lock--locked【5】I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothing was more excited than communicating with people.From this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.答案I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an exhibition as ∧reporter last term. Theconfidence a exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible forannuallyinterview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. Oneinterviewing them thoughtlady even praised me but asked her son to learn from me. I realized the experience was in great value and nothingand ofwas more excited than communicating with people.excitingFrom this experience, I am fully aware that we should take real action if our personality that needs improving.删除that【6】Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. Andothers talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I had always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. I must learn as much as I can get into a good medical college, which I can prepare myself fully for the job of a doctor.答案Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Somementioned the inspired Chinese Dream that was put forward by President Xi. And othersinspiringtalked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We are all believetheirthat this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I hadhave always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they arelivesdoing a respectably job. Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their respectable withprofessional knowledge. To realize my dream, I should try to work hardly from now on. Ihardmust learn as much as I can ∧get into a good medical college, which I can prepareto wheremyself fully for the job of a doctor.【7】When my grandfather left school, he got his first job as a office worker. In those days, he was extreme thin. He paid very little, so he could not afford to eating a lot. I have one or two photos of her from that time, and he looks just like me, but a lot thin! When he grew older, he worked at all sorts of thing, such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman. He worked hardly all his life, but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed, like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home.答案71. ... a office worker. a → an72. ... extreme thin. extreme → extremely73. He paid ... paid前加was74. ... eating a lot. eating → eat75. ... photos of her ... her → him76. ... a lot thin! thin → thinner77. ... sorts of thing ... thing → things78. ... worked as a ... worked → working79. He worked hardly ... hardly → hard80. ... found out time ... 去掉out【8】The first time I went to the zoo was several years ago, with parents. Yesterday I went to the zoo with some classmates. Arriving here, we got a guidebook and started walking round a zoo. We all got pretty exciting about visiting the animals. But something in their eyes made me to think they might enjoy live in the wild rather than be kept in a cage. One classmate might have guessed what had come in my mind, as he tells me at least in this way we had a good chance to know more about the animals. I don't know. Maybe some days there will have a better way to see and study them.答案71. ... with parents. parents前加my72. Arriving here ... here → there73. ... round a zoo. a → the74. ... pretty exciting about ... exciting → excited75. ... made me to think ... 去掉to76. ... enjoy live ... live → living77. ... come in my mind ... in → to / into78. ... he tells me ... tells → told79. Maybe some days ... days → day80. ... will have a ... have → be【9】Last week, I went out with my family for the meal in a restaurant. The food is not very good though. For my first course, I chose a dish calling “Cook's special”, turned out to be a kind of pizza. Generally, I enjoyed fast food, and this meal was quite disappointed because it wasn't very tasty. The rest of my families didn't enjoy their food very much either. Personal, I think we would have enjoyed us more if we'd cooked a meal at home. After all, we always have had plenty of food in the fridge.答案71. ... for the meal ... the → a72. ... food is not ... is → was73. ... a dish calling ... calling → called74. ... turned out to ... turned前加which75. ... and this meal ... and → but76. ... was quite disappointed ... disappointed → disappointing77. ... my families didn't ... families → family78. Personal, I think ... Personal → Personally79. ... enjoyed us more ... us → ourselves80. ... have had plenty ... 去掉had【10】It's hard to make friends if you stayed at home alone all the time. Instead, you should get out of the house and does things that will put you touch with others. Joining a club or play a sport. Go to meetings of different group in the neighborhood. It's a lot easy to make friends when you have similarly interests. Plan things to talkabout with others people. Find out that what's in the newspaper, listen to the top CDs, and get to know something interesting about my favorite TV or movie star. 答案71. ... stayed at home ... stayed → stay72. ... and does things ... does → do73. ... put you touch ... touch前加in74. Joining a club ... Joining → Join75. ... of different group ... group → groups76. ... a lot easy ... easy → easier77. ... similarly interests. similarly → similar78. ... with others people. others → other或去掉people79. Find out that ... 去掉that80. ... my favorite TV ... my → your。

2018届二轮复习短文改错专题10篇训练之八【1】I am doing a project on behalf of my school about global warming.Sometimes I felt that individuals can not have any effect at such huge environmental problems.Anyway，I’m not sure where to start it with my project.So I would love to get any suggestion.It is suggested that we took many measures.For example，we can buy things making from recycled materials.Planting trees is also good way.Important，we can ask your family and friends to work together with us.We can get our parents to buy products that are made to save energy.Remembering—our contribution counts.答案I am doing a project on behalf of my school about globalwarming.Sometimes I feltfeel that individuals can not have any effectatonsuch huge environmental problems.Anyway，I’m not sure where to start itwith my project.So I would love to get any suggestion suggestions.It is suggestedthat we tooktake many measures.For example，we can buy thingsmakingmadefrom recycled materials.Planting trees is also ∧a good way.ImportantImportantly，we can ask yourour family and friends to work together with us.We can getour parents to buy products that are made to save energy.Remembering Remember—our contribution counts.【2】Exercise can have a surprised number of benefits.It is important way to keep fit.Not only can it help you achieve beneficial weight loss ，and every time you exercise ，it helps to reduce the risk of disease more efficiently.By exercising regular ，you look better and feel more confident ，which have a positive effect on both physical and mental well-being.While you exercise ，especially in some challenging sports ，you often work as a member of a team.In this way ，it also teaches us how to work with others.A healthy ，fit brain means you can answer questions more quickly ，think more clearly and developed a better memory.Have a healthy brain is useful for no matter what point you are at in your life.For these reasons ，we students should take exercises.答案Exercise can have a surprised surprising number of benefits.It is ∧animportant way to keep fit.Not only can it help you achieve beneficialweight loss ，and but every time you exercise ，it helps to reduce the risk ofdisease more efficiently.By exercisingregularregularly，you look better and feelmore confident，which havehas a positive effect on both physical andmental well-being.While you exercise，especially in some challenging sports，you often work as a member of a team.In this way，it also teaches usyou how to work with others.A healthy，fit brain means you can answer questions more quickly，think more clearly and developeddevelop a better memory.HaveHaving a healthybrain is useful for no matter what point you are at in your life.For thesereasons，we students should take exercises exercise.27．答案surprised→surprising解析考查形容词。

2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之十七【一】Henry’s job was to examine the cars which crossed to the border. Every day, he would see a man coming toward him, pull a bicycle. When he arrived, Henry used to examine him careful. After that, he would look in each of the man’s pocket. Henry never foundsomething. He was sure that the man was bringing something into the country, he c ouldn’t imagine how it could be. Then one day, after he examined a man as usual, he says to him, “Today is my last day on duty. Won’t you tell me what you’re bringing?” There had a brief silence. Then the man said quietly, “Bicycles”.答案Henry’s job was to examine the cars which crossed to the border. Every day, he would see aman coming toward him, pull a bicycle. When he arrived, Henry used to examine him careful.pullingcarefullyAfter th at, he would look in each of the man’s pocket. Henry never foundsomething. He waspocketsanythingsure that the man was bringing something into the country, ∧he couldn’t imagine how it could be.butwhatThen one day, after he examined aman as usual, he says to him, “Today is my last day on duty.the saidWon’t you tell me what you’re bringing?” Th ere had a brief silence. Then the man said quietly,was“Bicycles”.【二】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【答案】1. that →where2. but去掉3. had →have4. honest→ honesty5. or→ and6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a9. our→ his 10. stead→steadily【三】The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.【答案】1.how改为what2.chose改为choose3.take改为taking4.but改为and5.about后加the6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为should9.thought改为think 10.many改为much【四】The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.【答案】51.year—years52.worse—worst53.the去掉54.yourself—myself55.such—so56.tell—told57.freely—free58.wear—wearing59.to—for60.I ∧need【五】It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popula r in China now.Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.Iasked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.【答案】 1.so---but 2.houseworks---housework 3.or---and 4.get---got 5.去掉on 6.her---his 7.在in和kitchen之间加the 8.what---that/which(或去掉what) 9.favoritest---favorite 10.moving---moved【六】When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.When I was a very young children,my father created a regular practic e IChildremember well years late.Every time he arrived home at ∧end of the day ,later thewe’d greet herat the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to k nowinghim wereknowus,Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared din ner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat,my father would lift my sister andchattedme up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening tobe up there！on exciting【七】Do you often talk with your parents? A recently survey shows that nearly half of the high school students doesn’t like to talk with their parents. 43.3% of them have trouble communicate with their parents. What was worse, 82.8% of them don’t want to share their secrets their parents. Actually, it is important for us to communicate with our parents though they are the dearest people in our life, whom care for us all the time. By letting them know that what we think, we can get practicaladvice from them, which can help us to deal with many problem in life.In this way, we can feel more confident about us and live happily.【答案】1.recently改成recent2.doesn’t改成don’tmunicate改成communicating4.was改成is5.secrets后面加with6.though改成because/as/since7.whom改成who8.know that what改成know what9.problem改成改成ourselves【八】In our lif e, we often regret what we did and which we couldn’t do. Actually, it doesn’t benefit us at all. As for most of us, we missed many chance to earn more money, to get a high position and to realize our dreams. We often regret that we don’t seize those opport unities, thus feel upset. Although we do know regretting the Past is no benefit, but we still can’t help doing itTo avoid the problem below, we need to pay more attention to what you are doing now, making us busier and having no time to recall the past. Moreover, we’d better set reasonably goals one by one. Only by doing so can we struggle for our future better.【答案】1. which改为what2. chance改为chances3. high改为higher4. don't改为didn't5. feel改为feeling6. is后面加of7. 删除but 8. below改为above 9. you改为we 10. reasonably改为reasonable【九】An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784. High over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up. The two men threw all their equipments into the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise higher again. So it was still too close to the water. Finally, the men threw away most of his clothes to save themselves. The crowd waiting for to greet them in England were very surprised see this when the balloon landed in front of them.【答案】71.the→a72.discover→discovered73.keeps→keeping74.up→down75.equipments→equipment76.light→lighter77.So→But78.his→their79.去掉for.80.surprised后加to【十】It was extreme cold last Monday morning. While I was walking in my way to school, I noticed two street cleaner sweeping the street. Seeing them are working so hard on such a cold morning, I was moved and made up my mind do something for them. After arriving at school, I discussed with some classmates that we could do. The next day, we got up early and preparing porridge at home. When we handed the cleaners the hot porridge and expressed us appreciation for their hard work, they looked a little surprising at first. And then they took the porridge and thanked us happily. Since it was very cold, we all felt warm at that moment.【答案】1.extreme--- extremely2.in---on3.cleaner ---cleaners4.去掉them后面的are5.在mind和do 之间加 to6.that---what7.preparing---prepared---our9.surprising--- surprised10.Since--- Though/Although/While。