英语专业四级便条写作评分标准及

Section A:Composition (15%)能根据所给的作文题目、提纲或图表、数据等,写一篇200个单词左右的作文。

能做到内容切题、完整,条理清楚,结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺,表达得体。

考试时间35分钟。

Section B: Note-writing (10%)能根据所给提示写50至60个单词的便条、通知、请帖等。

能做到格式正确,语言得体。

考试时间为10分钟Section A: Composition评分标准:14分:切题。

表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本无语言错误。

11分:切题。

表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。

8分:基本切题。

表达思想比较清楚,文字上连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有少量严重错误。

5分:基本切题。

表达思想不够清楚,文字连贯性差,有较严重的语言错误。

2分:条理不清,思想紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多为严重错误。

交白卷者或作文与题目毫不相关,则以零分计算。

注:1.如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句,均不得计入所写字数。

2. 对于规定三段的作文,只写一段者:0—4分;只写两段者:0—9 分。

3. 按规定,考生作文若为0分,考试均作不及格处理;若作文分高于0分,低于6分,要在总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。

注:字数不足应酌情扣分。

*累计字数在150-170之间,扣1分。

*累计字数在130-150之间,扣2分。

*累计字数在110-130之间,扣3分。

*累计字数在90-110之间,扣4分。

*累计字数在90个以下,最多给5分。

作文命题英语专业四级命题作文的出题范围是根据考生的知识结构、年龄特点和文化背景而确定的,不外乎校园生活、社会生活等日常话题,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容校园话题:My Idea of a University Arts Festival (2005)Travel Broadens the Mind? (2001)The Importance of Extracurricular Activities (2000)社会话题1.社会生活The Benefits of Volunteering (2008)Saving Money or Spending T omorrow’s Money (2006)2. 环境与健康The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood (2003)The Best Way to Stay Healthy (2002)3. 科技与校园Is It Wise to Make Friends on the Internet? (2007)Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? (2004)A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising onTelevision (1999)Section B: Note-writing根据《大纲》,便条的满分为10分,评分主要参照作文格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。

四级作文评分标准及样卷 1．满分15分 2．分5等 2分：条理不清，思路四级作文评分标准及样卷1(满分15分.2(分5等2分:条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分:基本切题。

思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重的语言错误。

8分:基本切题。

思想表达比较清楚，文字尚连贯;但语言错误较多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分:切题。

思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分:切题。

思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语言错误或仅有个别小错。

注:如题目中给出主题句、起始句和结束句，均不得计入所写字数。

样卷分析:Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同3. 我认为。

1(Currently, campuses of many famous universities are becoming one of the popular tourist attractions. It is reported that more and morepeople enjoy their holidays by visiting famous universities, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University.This phenomenon has exerted heated debates concerning whether university campus should be open to tourists. They indicate that people’s opinions vary in a big way. Some peoplebelieve that it is a good thing to open university campuses to tourists while others argue that it is not.Personally speaking, I’m in favor of campus tourism. For one thing, tourists may derive lots of enjoyment from the beautiful scenes of famous universities. For another, the strong academic atmosphere may motivate tourists, particularly students, to work hard persevere with their dreams. Moreover, for famous universities, being open to tourists may serve as an effective approach to attract talents from all over the country. In short, campus tourism will not only benefit tourists but also develop the universities.2.At present, a large number of people choose to visit famous universities, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University. As a result, famous universities campuses have become one of the tourist destinations.But should the university campus be open to tourists? As to this question, people have different opinions. Some people think that university campuses should be open to tourists since tourists can learna lot of knowledge from them. Others think that they should not be open because universities are places for studying instead of touring.I’m one of the members who object to opening university campuses to tourists. First, if university campuses are open to tourists, the environment of the universities will possibly become dirty. Besides, many bad people will enter into the campuses and that will bring danger.3.Famous universities campuses are now becoming the touring places.Lots of people visit famous universities in their holidays. So shouldthe university campus be open to tourists?Different people have different ideas. For example, some peoplethink university campus should be open to tourists. Others think they should not be.How do I think of this question? I think university campus should be open to tourists. Universities are not only the places for their own students and teachers. They are public sources, too. So people should have the right to visit them. Many university campuses are beautiful. Tourists will enjoy them. Return back from the universities, students work hard to go into the universities. So I think universities should be open to tourists.4.Now people like visit famous universities. So famous university campuses becomes thetourists’ hot places.Should the university campus be open to tourists? Person does not have same ideas. Somepeople think the university campus should be open to tourists. Some people think they should not be open to.I think the university campus should not open to tourists. Because tourists will make the environment of campus bad. They harm students studying. Some have bad purpose, they do badthings. Though some tourists can learn something from the university campus, but I don’t thinkthat is the point. So I think it is not good to be open to tourists.真题作文分类解析一、原因分析型第一段:描述现象;第二段:解释这种现象产生或存在的原因;第三段:提出解决问题的建议或总结观点。

1. 听写15分15分钟2.听力理解30题30分15分钟3.完形填空20题20分15分钟4.语法和词汇30题30分15分钟5.阅读理解20题20分25分钟6.写作A 作文15分35分钟B 便条10分10分钟合计103题140分130分钟便条写作：日期date，称呼salutation，正文body，签名signature（省去了收件人地址，寄件人地址，甚至结束语）。

字数在50至60字之间，格式如下（格式中日期称呼结尾各一分）日期Dear称呼，正文Yours,签名日期：先写月份再写具体日期，如may7，2012。

一月Jan. January 二月Feb. February 三月Mar. March四月Apr. April 五月May. May 六月June. June 七月July. July 八月Aug. August 九月Sept. September 十月Oct. October十一月Nov. November 十二月Dec. December 注意：正规的英语中六月，七月，九月的缩写是4个字母，其他月份3个字母。

挂历上见到的Jun，Jul, Sep是错误的。

一般不写年份，但可以写星期几或星期几的上午或下午，还可以写具体时刻。

称呼指阅读便条者的名字。

后面冒号（美）逗号（英）都可以，一般用逗号，冒号更正式。

称呼前的dear一般不用写。

正文：邀请（接受/谢绝），致谢，请假，致歉，祝贺，出售，慰问，通知/启事，馈赠，留言，询问情况。

慰问：I am sorry to hear that ,It is really a pity that you failed in, Do not lose heart and you will be successful in the future. I understand it is due to , Do not worry and take it easy.约会：I’d like to discuss with you, I wonder if it would be possible for us to meet at, Please tell me if you find the time/place is convenient to you or not.道歉：I am really sorry that, it so happened that 原因, To make up for the mess I’ve made, I would like to, Allow me to apologize again for the inconvenience that I brought to you. I am writing to express my apology for, please accept my apology for,邀请：we will 内容,would it be possible for you to meet us 时间地点，we would be very happy if you could be with us, we look forward to your arrival. It’s next Sunday, may 15th, at six o’clock.[事由时间地点] If you have no other plans for .. will you join my dinner party?接受邀请：thank you very much for your invitation. We are delighted to accept, it is a great pleasure for me to come to your party on Sunday, may 15th, at six o’clock, at Xingu hotel. we are sincerely happy to join in,谢绝邀请：[说明原因，表示感谢，良好祝愿] thank you very much for your invitation. I do hope I could go to your party, but I am sorry to say I really can’t make it this time. I have promised my sister rose to.. and I can’t be back until next Sunday. But anyway, I am sure tocall you and wish you happy birthday at that time. Thanks you for thinking of me, I do hope you will give me the opportunity to say “yes” some other time.投诉：I am afraid I have to complain about, I can’t imagine that such a famous __like yours provides such bad __. To solve the problem, I suggest, I would appreciate it if you could, My complaint about sth is based on the fact that. It is high time that you take some measures to solve.. I sincerely hope such things will never take place again.请求：we are thinking to 说明原因，would you please 提出请求，I am eagerly waiting for your reply. Many thanks.祝贺：hearty congratulations on 祝贺的内容，表示对对方的肯定和赞美，let me again offer my good wishes for your,通知：in order to __ , __ is to organize. 时间地点要求等 . those who are interested in it are welcome to attend __.致谢：[感谢礼物]I don’t know how to thank you for such a beautiful pen, I had been longing for such a pen for quite some time. Please accept my sincere thanks and best wishes.结束语：结束语一般不用写，写就不要写错。

便条题型分析及写作技巧一便条题型分析便条是一种简单的书信形式，侧重于语言的实用性和功能性，检查考生日常运用语言的实际能力．要求学生仔细阅读和分析所给的情景，确定便条涉及的内容，如：写便条者与便条接收者的身份，两者之间的关系及情景的正式程度等．便条的特点在于内容简短，大多是临时性的询问，留言，通知，要求等．与正规书信相比，便条的语言更加口语化．有急事需要告诉别人而不能面谈时，就可以写便条，如请假条或留言条等．一般不写地址，结尾时也无需结尾礼词，只需要写上留便条者姓名．便条的日期一般可只写星期几，也可以写明上午，下午的具体时间．下面是1991年到2006年的全部便条题目，我们可以总结其类型，以便在写作中对症下药．1991: Your friend wants to go downtown to buy some Chinese folk music tapes and a jacket. You also want to go into town to do two things. Write a note of 60-80 words to him / her, suggesting some arrangements.1992: Your friends want to make a trip to … and you intended to join them in their trip. But now for some reasons you can’t go with them. Please state your reasons. 1993: You, Wang Ling, have just received a note from Zhou Wei, a close friend of yours, inviting you to her birthday party on the coming Saturday. Now write to inform her of your acceptance of the invitation.1994: You are supposed to hand in your book report for the Extensive Course on Monday, but you are two days late. Now you are outside Professor Lin’s office as you want to hand in your assignment, but he is not in. Write a note to him, apologizing and explaining why you did not give him your work on time.1995: Before you leave university you want to sell your bike. Write a note of about 50-60 words describing the condition of your bike, how much you would like for it, and where you can be contacted.1996: Your friend has just won the first prize in the Provincial English Speech Contest. Write a note of congratulations.1997: You are Peter / Mary. You had a party at your home recently but unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours, Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about.1998: You are Mark or Sally. You have got a ticket to a computer fair, but you now find that you are unable to go. Write a note to your friend, George, explaining why you are sending the enclosed ticket to him and telling him briefly how to get there. 1999: You’ve learned that your friend Jimmy is ill these days. Write him a note expressing your concern, asking after his health and giving your best wishes.2000: You’ve read on the notice board that the university library is looking for a part-time library assistant who can work at weekends. You think that your classmates, George, is a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview.2001: Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher,Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.2002: You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.2003: Your friend Clare has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her.2004: Your friend, Jane, has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.2005: You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band / orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda / Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her / him to come with you.2006: You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details related to the excursion.2007: Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the university’s swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.2008: Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper, and you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the newspapter.2009: Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy. Write her a note, telling her what the job is and strongly recommending it to her.2010: Your good friend , John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. You have to be specific about how you can help him.二便条评分标准(一)格式包括日期，称呼和结尾三部分．1. 日期：位置在右上角．正确格式：May 10th, 2006 May 10, 2006 10/5/2006 5/10/20062. 称呼：位置在日期下面一行左侧．正确格式：Dear Professor Wang, Respected Professor Wang3. 结尾：位置在便条结尾的右下方．正确格式：Yours sincerely (truly, faithfully, respectfully, ever, affec tionately…),Sally或者：Sincerely (Truly, Faithfully, Respectfully, Affectionately…) yours,Sally凡不符合上述格式或表达均要扣分．(一)内容必须按照便条的具体要求，完整写出各项内容，缺一项就会扣分；语言较差（包括语法和拼写错误）也要扣分．拼写错误超过3个扣2分．(三) 评分总体要求1. 语言没有什么错误，格式对，内容齐，字数符合要求，可给10分．2. 4分到10分从严掌握．3. 便条总字数（包括三部分格式在内）要求约为50-60词；不到40或者超过80扣2分．以2002年的便条为例，便条内容应该包括以下3项：(1) Expressing you interest in it(2) Asking Jack about its condition(3) Offering a price for it(1)Dear Jack,I heard that you would sell your walkman. You know, I want to buy a used walkman in order to do some listening exercises. I want to know if your walkman functions very well. And I offer 200 Yuan to buy it. Please give me some detailed information about it as soon as possible.Yours,Adam(2)Dear Jack,I’ve heard that you want to sell your walkman. As you know, my walkman is broken and can’t be repaired, so I am very int erested in yours. What I want to know is whether it’s in a good condition. If it is, I’d like to offer you 300 Yuan for it. Will it be all right? Please let me know soon.Best wishes.Yours sincerely,Mary三便条分类以及写作技巧英语专业四级考试中有可能出现的便条写作内容一般与学生的生活有关．便条按其功能可分为：邀请，祝贺，感谢，道歉，举荐，申请，告示，通知等．但不管哪一类便条都体现出较强的实用性，其目的都是利用简洁的非正规的书面语解决实际生活中的问题．因此，考生面对便条写作，必须仔细审题，明确考试要求，即能够回答这样的问题：我是谁，便条的收件人是谁，我希望收件人看了便条之后做什么，怎样去做？便条写作主要考＂特定的格式，特定的句式，特定的内容＂．特定的格式和特定的句式基本上是＂约定俗成＂的，考生必须熟练掌握．如果因不熟悉格式和句式而丢分，就太可惜了．至于特定的内容，便条写作中的提示是至关重要的．提示限定了便条写作的内容和对象，增加或删减内容都会导致失分．因此，认真阅读提示并按提示要求来写便条是获得高分的最基本前提．当然，考生也应该具备扎实的写作功底，较高的语言应用能力，才能在这一部分的考试中取得较好的成绩．具体地讲，要主要以下几点：首先，格式运用正确，不要漏掉日期，称呼，落款等．其次，语言得体，根据写作者和接受者的关系，运用恰当的语言．再次，内容完整但不啰嗦，条理清楚符合题目要求，语法正确．另外，便条就是留言条，不是信件，开头即可直奔主题，切忌啰嗦．否则会主次颠倒．最后，认真阅读提示中的每项信息，学会将提示中的信息转化成自己的语言，融进便条中，这样，一则便条就会很容易写出来，而且绝不会跑题．四各种便条的写作方法(一)邀请邀请是日常生活中比较常见的一种交际行为，邀请便条一定要写得明确完整，不可留下任何疑问使对方捉摸不定．场合，时间，地点要清楚．在考试中体现这一行为的关键词是＂invite”1. 邀请便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 诚挚邀请对方参加某一活动B. 概括介绍活动的内容和安排C. 盼望对方回复或再次表达诚意2. 常用表达方式Let’s go to … This is to bring to you a kind notice that … Shall we meet at … to talk about …? Is it possible for us to meet at … to discuss …? We are going to have a dance to celebrate …, and would you love to come? It would be a great pleasure to have you among the guests. I would be delighted if you could spare some time from your busy schedule to attend… We’d like to invite you to a spring picnic with us.3. 范例February 23, 2006Dear Tong,Next Monday is my 20th birthday. Imagine, there are already twenty years behind me! No wonder I feel old!My parents are giving a dinner party to mark the occasion. The first person they wish to invite is you, my childhood pal. Indeed, all of those 20 years are more or less associated with you.We’ll be expecting you any time after six. See you then.Yours,Dick(二)应邀写表示应邀的便条时，应该是欣然接受，对收到邀请表示高兴．在考试中体现这一行为的关键词是“accept”1. 表示接受的便条应该包括以下几个内容A. 表达收到邀请后的欣喜之情B. 表示感谢C. 确切表示会赴邀2. 表示应邀的表达方式有We are delighted to accept … We look forward with pleasure to joining you.It is with great pl easure … We are sincerely happy to join you …Nothing could give us greater pleasure than accepting your kind invitation.3. 范例May 15, 2006Dear Bill,I am happy to be informed of our alumni get-together. Surely I will meet many old friends and we will be able to chat over days long gone by. Incidentally, do you know that Prof. Chadi arrived in our city yesterday? I think his presence will make our meeting more memorable. He can be reached by phone no. 84123348.Yes, I’ll be prompt. I’m counting the days to see you all.Yours,Martin(二)婉拒在你被别人邀请参加某个活动或典礼，而你因故不能前往时，要礼貌地回绝对方的邀请．在写婉拒便条时，一定要表示自己的诚意，原因一定要真实可靠，要向对方陈述清楚，不然会造成误解．1. 拒绝邀请的便条往往包括以下几个内容A. 收到邀请B. 表示感谢C. 表示遗憾和良好的祝愿2. 常用的表达方式有I have much pleasure in accepting your invitation, but deeply regret having refused owing to a previous engagement.I would have been so much delighted to be with you, but…Nothing would please me more than to join you for dinner, but unfortunately…I shall have to say no to your kind invitationUnfortunately, I am not well / it will be impossible…Because o f …, we find we cannot …I do hope you would accept my sincere apologies for my absence.3. 范例May 6, 2006Dear Mr. Smith,We are very appreciative of your so warmly including us among your selected guests for Wednesday. Most unfortunately, however, we shall be unable to avail ourselves of your kind invitation on account of a previous engagement for the same day. I have ordered the Xinxin Department Store to deliver you a trifle. Please accept as a humble token of our felicitation on the party.With best wishes for a very jolly home dinner.Yours sincerely,Li Hong(四)致谢致谢便条通常是对别人的帮助，问候，款待等表示感谢，是我们日常生活中使用频率较高的一种信函．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词是“thank, appreciate”1. 致谢便条往往包括三个部分的内容A. 表示感谢之情B. 解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处C. 再次表示真挚谢意2. 常用的表达方式I don’t know how to express my gratitude for you …I’m writing to tell you how much I enjo yed the weekend in your village.The note is just to express my appreciation for all that you did for me during my visit in Beijing.I thank you from the core of my heart for your sending me the gift.Thank you so much for the favor / your warm wishes / greetingsMany thanks for inviting us to the grand dance.It’s most kind of you to share your experience. Please accept my warmest thanks.3. 范例April 3. 2006Dear Prof. Johnson,Thanks to you, I am now a post-graduate of the English Department of Hopkins University. Dr. Smith has read your letter over again, and he is very satisfied with me.I don’t have to tell you that I’m sincerely grateful for all your help in recommending me as a post-graduate. The mailman will bring you a package tomorrow, which is a small token of carload of appreciation.Cordially,Robert(五)祝贺表祝贺的便条有多种，如节日，生日，乔迁，病愈，入学，毕业，就业，比赛，考试等．在考试中体现这一关键词的有“congratulate”1. 祝贺便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 得知喜讯的愉悦之情B. 对成功的评价和对对方的钦佩C. 热烈的祝贺和美好的祝愿2. 表示祝贺的表达方式I am so happy to learn / to know… I am so pleased / delighted to hear that…My heart is filled with joy to learn about…It’s such a pleasure to find your name on the pass list.Congratulations on your success. It gave me a great deal of pleasure to learn…I wish to congratulate you on your finishing high school and entering Peking University.It’s the k ind of news I like to hear, because it proves once again a hard-working man always gets ahead. Let me offer my warmest congratulations. I know you are going to be a great success in …You really deserve it because… It is really a splendid achievement and we are all proud of you. This has meant years of your hard work, and it’s an achievement You will have a brilliant future. With every good wish.I believe that your school life will be more colorful.3. 范例April 12, 2006Dear Shelly,I’m so excited to learn that you’ve been admitted by Peking University as a graduate. Warm congratulations on the realization of your dream. This has meant years of your hard work, and you can really be proud of it. Your success is really an encouragement to me and I wish we could meet there next year.You will have a brilliant future.Yours,Li Hua(六)致歉由于行为不当，比如违约，做错了事，说错了话，或是因服务不周造成了某种不良后果，当事人必须为此道歉．表道歉的便条要求写条人态度一定要诚恳，真实．在考试中体现这一要求的关键词是“apologize”1. 道歉便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 表示歉意B. 陈述犯错的原因，即让对方谅解的理由C. 弥补方法D. 进一步道歉2. 表示道歉的常用表达方式有I am writing to show / express my apology for…I would like to express my apologies for not being able to…I write to apologize for having caused… I regret I have caused …Please accept my sincere apologies for… I’m sorry to say…Excuse me for … With many apologies. Do please forgive me.I want to ex tend my personal apologies again for … Thank you for your patience.It would be very kind of you to give me another chance to …3. 范例March 16, 2005Dear Lucy,I am terribly sorry for not returning the book you lent to me two weeks ago until now because I have been reading it all the time. I found it very helpful to my paper writing. Without your book, I would not have finished my paper. Please accept my apology for not returning your book a bit earlier.Yours,Linda(七)慰问对同事，亲朋好友所遭遇的不幸或失败，如生病，车祸，考试不及格等表示慰问，即表示关心和同情，给予鼓励．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词有“condolence, sympathy”慰问便条一般应该包括以下内容1. 表达得知对方所遭受失败或不幸后的遗憾或悲痛之情A. 给予安慰和鼓励B. 表示慰问的常用表达方式有2. 引入话题的用语：I am extremely sorry to learn / hear… It is really a pity that you failed in…I was with profound shock that you will have to stay in the hospital for some weeks. It has distressed me to hear of your injury.It was with great sadness that I learnt about your failure in the examination.3. 表示安慰和鼓励的用语：We share in your sadness. Please accept my sincerest sympathies.If there is anyone you need to turn to, I will be most willing to lend an ear.We are sure it won’t be long before you’re back on your feet again.Don’t lose heart; with…you will be successful in the future.I hope yo u’ll take heart to note that you’ve done everything that was possible.4. 范例April 5, 2005Dear Harold,Gary told me yesterday that you are down with the flu. To tell you the truth, I was a little surprised. You never used to be sick. Then I recalled that you’d been extraordinarily busy with your work recently. You must have been weakened physically somehow. You do need a good rest. I’m sure you’ll be up and around soon. Take care and best regards.Yours,Hong(八)抱怨投诉对所遇到的困扰，恶劣的服务态度，劣质的产品等提出抗议和改进的意见．内容有理，批评有节．在考试中体现这一行为的关键词有“complaint, dissatisfaction”1. 抱怨投诉便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 抱怨投诉的内容B. 要求纠正，弥补，赔偿C. 希望弥补，纠正，赔偿等能很快得到关注和解决．2. 表示抱怨投诉的表达方式有(1)引入话题的用语I write to show my great anger at your… I’m writing to reflec t the problems with your…I am writing to protest against your… I am writing to complain about…I wish to register a complaint about… I am sorry to point out the defect in the oven…My complaint about your…is based on the fact that(2)表示期望得到关注和解决的用语I am not willing to put up with the situation any more.I hope you can address this problem soon.I hope you would send your salesman to replace the mentioned product of yours.It is high time you took some measures to solve…By now I am running out of patience. Can you contact the company and speed up the process?If you can’t give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consumer Association.3. 范例July 4, 2005Dear Kate,I am writing to tell you I really cannot bear the loud noise of your sound system atmid-night. You know I am a poor sleeper and very sensitive to noises. Even slight sound at night will keep me awake. I would quite appreciate if you could stop playing your sound system at such late hours.Sincerely yours,Kitty (九)申请申请便条的目的可能是申请入学，申请奖学金，申请就业，请假等．应注意语气诚挚友好，措词严谨，无强求之意，但期望得到的心情要清楚地表达出来．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词是“apply”1. 申请便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 申请的目的B. 申请的原因C. 对自身情况的介绍D. 表明希望得到机会，并提供具体的联系方式2. 表示申请的常用表达的方式(1)引入话题的用语：In / Through today’s newspaper I noticed your advertisement for…I have learnt that you are hiring…It has come to my attention that the position of… is now open.With reference to your advertisement on the local newspaperI beg to offer myself for the position as an accountant.I am interested in the post that w as advertised in…Please consider my application for the position of tour guide.I should very much like to be considered for the post of…I should like to apply for one of the scholarships that your department may be offering.Therefore, I request you to grant me leave for 2 days.(2)表示期望和感激的用语：I hope you will sincerely consider my application.I look forward to receiving your good news.I would appreciate an opportunity for an interview with you.If my application is successfu l, I should / would like to …I shall be very grateful for your kindness.I should be most grateful if you would give my request your favorable consideration.(3)表示申请人素质和经历的用语I feel I am well qualified to…for the following reasonsI have experience of…the refore I may have the ability you are looking for.My interest and skill in…contribute to my qualification for this job.范例June 15, 2006Dear manager,Just learnt on the newspaper that your company needs an English interpreter. I think I am fit for the post. I have got the certificate for TEM-8 and I am good at spoken English. I just want to know more about your company. Would you please provide me with more information about it? If possible, e-mail me with the following address: Lucyluck@.Looking forward to your replay soon.Sincerely yours,Lucy (十)举荐和介绍举荐或介绍某人做某事在日常生活中是比较常见的一件事．举荐或介绍要简明扼要，语言中肯，既要实事求是，又要做到举荐或介绍有力．在考试中体现这一要求的关键词是“recommend, introduce”1. 举荐便条一般要包括以下内容A. 写明举荐或介绍什么人做什么事B. 介绍被举荐人或被介绍人的资格和优点C. 表示希望举荐成功并表示感谢2. 表示举荐或推荐常用的表达方式(1)引入话题的用语：I take pleasure in recommending to you Mr. Liu Wei who hopes to attend your college for postgraduate studies…Please allow me to recommend Chang Ling as a candidate, who, in my opinion, is qualified for…It is my pleasure to recommend George Blake for your consideration as he applies for…in your com pany.I have the honor to introduce to you… This is to introduce to you…I take the liberty to introduce… Allow me to introduce…(2)表示被举荐人或被介绍人素质和经历的用语：When he studied in my university, he passed all courses with either excellent or good marks.He now intends to engage in further study in this field. He is practically good at…His graduation thesis shows that he has considerable ability to analyze and solve problems.He is a fast learner. She is skilled in… She is a wonderful girl.She possesses both character and industry. Rest assured that he would excel in his position(3)表示期望和感谢的用语：Any courtesy you may show him will be considered a personal favor to me.I will be very grateful if you would be so kind as to accept him as your postgraduate student3. 范例June 1, 2006Dear Mr. Sulivan,This is to introduce Mr. Hu Ming. He is a linguistics student at our university. He has a brilliant capacity for learning new things and will do well in whatever field he applies himself to. Mr. Hu Ming is looking for a teaching assistant’s post. Any assistance rendered him would be highly appreciated.Thank you.Yours sincerely,Geoffrey Jackson(十一)布告、通知将某一特殊事情以告示或通知的形式，及时告知有关人员，如宣布召开会议、举办晚会、放映电影、举行各种比赛等．布告、通知有一定的格式，要言简意赅，事件、时间、地点要交待清楚．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词是“notice, inform”等．1. 布告，通知便条一般应该包括以下内容：A. 涉及的事件B. 事情的举办方，召集方C. 事件发生的具体时间，地点，参加人员D. 呼吁参加2. 布告，通知便条常用表达方式有This is to announce / declare th at… This is to inform you of …I’d like to announce that … I wish to inform you of my new address.…is organized by…to… To enrich our school life, a ball will be held by……will organize a… We will hold a …at the Students’ Center at 7 pmIt is advocated and sponsored by…to… Come and enjoy ourselvesAll the party members are welcome to take part in…Those who…will benefit / learn a lot from…3. 范例March 12, 2004Dear fellow students,There will be an English corner this Saturday evening. It will begin at 7:30 in the dining hall of English department. This English corner is organized all by the students and some senior professors are invited to be present. Those who are interested in spoken English are warmly welcome.English Department(十二)转让、求购在大学校园里转让、求购等简洁的广告随处可见．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词有transfer, for sale等．1. 转让、求购便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 转让、求购的原因B. 转让、求购的内容C. 转让、求购物品的具体状况D. 转让、求购的价格商定2. 表示转让、求购的常用表达方式有Before I leave this college, I’d like to sell my computer.I will graduate and leave campus soon. I’d like to sell my…because of the inconvenience to carry with. I have a computer for sale.In need of money, I want to sell my lovely bag at a low price. The bag is still in good condition.We can bargain about the price / have a face-to-face negotiation about the price.I will charge only 200 Yuan for it.In order to improve my listening comprehension, I want to buy a second-hand walkman to study English.What I care most is whether it is in good condition, rather than how new it is.I can pay it for at most 50 Yuan.3. 范例A Second-hand Bicycle for SaleJuly 8, 2006Dear schoolmates,I will graduate soon. Before I leave this university I’d like to sell my bicycle. I bought it last year, and it is still in good function. If you have interest in it, you can come to my dorm to see if it satisfies you or not. We can also have a face-to-face discussion about the price. My address is: Room 203, Building 111 and my telephone number is 133********.Lu Tao (十三)转告转告类似日常生活中的留言．一定要向当事人交待清楚涉及到的人和事，千万不要引起歧义．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词有take a message等．1. 转告便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 转告所涉及的人B. 转告所涉及的事2. 表示转告的常用表达方式有I am writing to ask you to do / tell… Would you please tell…that…I just want you to tell… Xiao Li asked me this morning to tell you…3. 范例April 5, 2003Dear Xiao Li,I have to be absent from Professor Wang’s class tomorrow morning because myfather will have a surgical operation. I must go to the hospital to be with him and take care of him. So I want you to tell Professor Wang that I can’t attend his class and I will make up what I have missed. I will appreciate if you do this for me.Truly yours,Zhang Wei(十四)咨询为了了解更多的有关信息，向有关部门及有关人员询问相关内容．询问的内容一定要详细且重点突出．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词有inquire等．1. 咨询便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 被咨询的部门及有关人员B. 咨询的目的C. 希望给予答复并表示感谢2. 表示咨询的常用表达方式有With reference to your advertisement on the local newspaper I want to know more about…I have learnt from…that you will…I just want to know specifically about…It is reported that…Would you please be so kind as to give me more i nformation about…I’m writing to ask whether you could send me some information about…I would appreciate very much if you can provide me with more details about…I would be very grateful to you if you let me know…We are expecting a reply at your earliest convenience.3. 范例June 8, 2005Dear sir,With reference to your advertisement on the local newspaper that your company will start an intensive computer class. I want to be enrolled in that class but I don’t know what specific courses will be offered, who will give the lessons and how much I should pay for the whole training. Would you please be so kind as to let me know more about it? I will be very grateful if you provide me with more details.Sincerely yours,Helen (十五)留言留言条是日常生活中比较常见的一种交际行为．在考试中体现这一行为要求的关键词有take a message等．1. 留言便条一般应该包括以下内容A. 留言人的名字B. 留言的确切时间C. 留言内容D. 留言人的要求2. 留言便条的常用表达方式有Xiao Li called and left a message for you, saying…A Mr. Li came to see you.Xiao Li says she will be very grateful to you if you…You are requested to ring him up at 8 tonight.3. 范例10 am, March 1Prof. Johnson,Prof. Smith called at 9:50 am. He said his rheumatism prevented him from leaving the house in this nasty weather. So he would not be able to come to discuss the energy project with you and your colleagues. He asked to be excused. He sent his regards to Mrs. Johnson.Mary。

英语专业四级考试便条写作评分标准（2006）便条满分为10 分，从格式、内容、语言以及语言得体性四方面进行评分。

2006 年英语专业四级考试的便条写作为例，其要求是：“Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and ask for information on two details related to the excursion.”2001年5月专业四级考试：Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note ofλ about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λλ2003年5月专业四级考试：Write a note of about 50 - 60 words based on the following situation: You have heard that your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.λ英语应用文写作之便条写法(03/02)λ便条是一种简单的书信。

2. Accepting an invitation
A note of accepting an invitation a. appreciation of being invited b. his/her certainty if having a good time c. his/her assurance of being punctual, his/her apology for having to be late d. his/her offer help e. his/her looking forward to the occasion
9. The help you give me is sincerely valued. 10. I hope everything will be well with you. 11. Please let us know if you want more information. 12. I hope you always enjoy yourself. 13. I wish you every success in the coming year. 14. Please remember me to your family. 15. With best regards to your family. 16. All the best. 17. With love and good wishes.
Workshop 4 You are Kate, write a note of accepting your friend, Rebecca’s invitation to her birthday/Christmas party/housewarming party.

千里之行，始于足下。

202X年专四写作评分标准202X年专四写作评分标准考试评分标准如下：1. 题目理解与分析（15分）：能准确理解题目并分析要求，确定文体和写作手法，确保文意明确、答题完整。

2. 逻辑思维与组织结构（20分）：能够清晰地组织文章结构，合理运用段落与连接词，使论述逻辑清晰、结构合理。

3. 内容信息与掌握（30分）：能够充分展开观点，论证充实，材料丰富，信息准确，观点立场明确，策论论述正确全面。

4. 语言表达与运用（25分）：语言准确、得体，词汇丰富，句式结构多样，语言流畅自然，避免重复和句式单一。

5. 语法与拼写（10分）：能正确使用语法规则、拼写单词，避免严重的语法错误和拼写错误，注意书写规范。

总分：100分每一部分的具体评分标准如下：1. 题目理解与分析：- 完全理解题目，分析要求明确，文体和写作手法准确选择，答题完整（15分）；- 有一定理解题目，分析要求不够明确，文体和写作手法选择基本正确，答题尚完整（10-14分）；- 部分理解题目，分析要求不明确，文体和写作手法选择不准确，答题不够完整（5-9分）；第1页/共3页锲而不舍，金石可镂。

- 未理解题目，分析要求模糊或错误，文体和写作手法选择错误，答题不完整（0-4分）。

2. 逻辑思维与组织结构：- 思维清晰，结构合理，段落过渡自然，连接词使用恰当（20分）；- 思维基本清晰，结构基本合理，段落过渡基本自然，连接词使用基本正确（15-19分）；- 思维不够清晰，结构不完全合理，段落过渡不够自然，连接词使用不准确（10-14分）；- 思维混乱，结构不合理，段落过渡不自然，连接词使用错误（0-9分）。

3. 内容信息与掌握：- 内容充实，观点立场明确，有论证和解释，材料丰富，信息准确，论述正确全面（30分）；- 内容基本充实，观点立场基本明确，有基本论证和解释，材料基本丰富，信息基本准确，论述基本正确全面（22-29分）；- 内容不够充实，观点立场不明确，缺乏论证和解释，材料不够丰富，信息不准确，论述不完全正确（15-21分）；- 内容空洞，观点立场模糊或错误，缺乏论证和解释，材料不丰富，信息不准确，论述不正确（0-14分）。

说明：该项目满分15分。

根据考生的思想与表达、语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分。

分项可以打0.5分。

“思想与表达”满分为7分，按考生的表现赋分：1------2------3------4------5------6------7较差一般良好优秀“语言运用能力”满分为6分，按考生的表现赋分：1------2------3------4------5------6较差一般良好优秀“写作规范”满分为2分，按考生的表现赋分：0.5------1------1.5------2较差一般良好优秀空白卷、仅写了一些与任务无关的字句、仅仅照抄指导语得0分。

说明：该项目满分15分。

根据考生的思想与表达、语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分。

分项可以打0.5分。

“思想与表达”满分为7分，按考生的表现赋分：1------2------3------4------5------6------7较差一般良好优秀“语言运用能力”满分为6分，按考生的表现赋分：1------2------3------4------5------6较差一般良好优秀“写作规范”满分为2分，按考生的表现赋分：0.5------1------1.5------2较差一般良好优秀空白卷、仅写了一些与任务无关的字句、仅仅照抄指导语得0分。

TEM4 便条评分标准（2011-2013）说明：根据格式、内容和语言分别打分，总分为10分。

“格式”满分为2，按考生的表现赋分：0------1------2“内容”满分为2，按考生的表现赋分：0------1------2“语言”满分为6，按考生的表现赋分： 1------2------3------4------5------6较差一般良好优秀空白卷、仅写了一些与任务无关的字句、仅仅照抄指导语得0分。

TEM4 (2012) 便条评分细则I．格式（占2分）包括日期、称呼和结尾两部分，每部分完全正确得1分。

具体评分如下：1.日期（Date）：1分正确：April 20th, 2012; April 20, 2012; April 20; 20 April, 2012; 4/20/2012;20/4/2012（缩写Apr. 也可以，写任何一个日期都可以）位置在右上角或左上角，日期与称呼写在同一行，没有分行，扣一分。

Marks will be awarded for contents, organization, grammar and appropri, 2008
Dear Jane,
拼写错误
Hearing you want to subscribe an English-languge newspaper. I
• 2)假设情景、灵活处理人际关系、圆满解决实际问题。
• 语言得体内容和语言是一个统一体。内容抓住后，应以恰 当的语言来表达。一般来说，便条的语言要简单明嘹，用 词平易。当然，语言风格还应与情景一致，不同的对象， 所使用的语言应有所不同。相对来说，对上级、长者、不 熟悉的人的语言较为正式，对亲朋好友的语言则较为随便。 不过，不管对方是谁，行文中都应体现态度诚恳礼貌。
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2.称呼
April 22, 2014 Dear Professor Wang,
I’m very sorry I didn’t keep the appointment with you yesterday because of my sick roommate. As his close friend, I had to look after him the whole day. I wonder if you’d mind having another appointment with me at your office at four o’clock tomorrow afternoon.
I’m expecting your reply. Yours sincerely, George
1.日期 3.正文
5.署名
4.套语
Part I: Note-writing(便条写作） ---格式

英语专业四级评分标准总括听写15 分听力30题15分,0.5分一个完型20题10分,0.5分一个单选30题15分,0.5分一个阅读20题20分，1分一个作文15分便条10 分听写评分原则1.听写共分 15小节，每节 1 分，扣分一律写在试卷右边的空白处。

大错误下面画线。

小错误用圆圈表示，重复错误用三角记号表示。

2.每节最多扣 1 分。

3.重复错误，仅扣一次分。

4.错误共分两类：小错误(minor mistakes)和大错误(major mistakes)，分别扣 0.25 分和 0.5 分。

A. 小错误：1)单词拼写错一到两个字母。

例： steadily → staed；ily harbor → hab两or个字母以下的词、次序颠倒算小错。

2)标点符号错误 (含大小写)。

例：World War I → world warone, and then adopted → . And then adopeted→ until beginnpinagr;e nt 3)冠词、单复数错误。

例：until thebeginning→ parents4）小错误扣分标准：小错误在一节中出现一次，留作总计；出现两次：扣 0.5分；出现三次：扣 0.5分后留作总计；出现四次：扣 1分。

5）未扣分小错误的扣分标准：累计 2 ~ 4 个：扣 0.5 分累计 5~ 8 个：扣 1分。

B. 大错误：漏写、加词、造词、换词（冠词作小错计）、大移位、时态错误，每个错误扣 0.5 分。

例： loved → love；task— test； trip — trap； flee — flea；have finished — finsh（ed）5. 一些特例的扣分标准：下列情况不扣分： World WarI → World War Onerace car → racecarwell-balanced → well balanced90 percent → 90%6. 总分只有 0.5 分时，以 1 分计算；其余总分中如含小数点的，小数舍去，保留整数，如 12.5 →1；2 7.5 → 7. 空白卷一律打 0分2011年TEM 4 专业四级考试题型卷别序号题号各部分题数考试时间（分钟）名称题型I听写主观题1 15听力理1-3II解15A 对话客观题10B 陈述客观题 1031-C 新闻完型填空客观题客观题10III5020 1551-语法及IV客观题30 1580词汇81-阅读理V客观题20 25100解写作A 作文主观题1 35VIB 写便主观题 1 10条合130计2010年TEM4 专业四级评分要求(a)要求学生在全面理解内容的基础上逐字逐句写出全篇短文。

17 April, 2011
Apr(.) 17,2011
17/4/2011
4/17/2011
April 17th
Apr(.)17
凡不符合上述正确格式或要求均扣1分。结束语和谦称在同一行，人名没写或用××表示等均扣0.5分，最多扣3分。
称呼
在日期下一行左侧，
Dear Jimmy,
Dear Jimmy:
细节安排混乱，读者不得要领
语
言
语
法
20％
没有句子结构上的重大错误。拼写、标点、大小写等正确或有个别错误。引用原文适度，不超过作者文章的10％
句子结构基本正确，错误之处并不造成误解。拼写、标点、大小写有些错误，但无伤大体。引用原文适度，不超过作者文章的15％
句子结构错误较多，但能表达主要内容。拼写、标点、大小写错误较多，使读者理解内容有些困难。引用原文略多，达作者文章的25％－30％
有些词用的不正确或不恰当，但尚能表达内容
用词不确切，表达不清楚
用词不正确，表达不清楚，有的造成误解
用词不正确，生硬地从汉语出发找对应词，使读者不得其解
得
体
5％
语言得体，语气恰当，以理服人，有说服力
语言较得体，语气也比较恰当，有一定说服力
文章语气不够恰当，说服力稍差
文章语气不恰当，含糊其词，缺乏说服力
Jimmy,
Jimmy:
结尾
右下方，
Yours sincerely,
Sincerely yours,
Yours,
内容
3
涵盖三点提纲
少一点扣1分，最多三项内容扣3分。
语言
3
语法、词法正确
严重词法、句法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误两个扣1分，最多扣3分。

专业四级写作评分标准满分15分，分项可以打0.5分。

A. 思想与表达(ideas and argument) 7分满分7分，其中6-7分为优秀，4-5分良好，3分一般，1-2分较差。

1. 思想内容（idea content）a. 内容切题b. 内容充实c. 观点明确d. 论据支持论点e. 有独到见解2. 表达效果（effectiveness）a. 表达清晰b. 有说服力3. 篇章组织结构（rhetorical organization）a. 每段有主题句b. 句间衔接自然c. 段间过渡自然d. 第一部分明确提出观点e. 最后一部分自然得出结论f. 段落排列合理B. 语言运用能力(language use) 6分满分6分，其中6分为优秀，4-5分良好，3分一般，1-2分较差。

1. 准确性（correctness）a. 语法正确b. 句子结构正确c. 固定搭配正确d. 用词准确2. 丰富性（richness）a. 词汇丰富b. 句子形式多样3. 得体性（appropriateness)a. 语气恰当b. 语言地道4. 流利度（fluency）完成规定词数超出200词过多扣一分；完成规定内容，字数少于170词扣一分；未完成任务的不仅扣字数分，也要从内容上扣分。

只有topic sentence, 没有supporting points，一般只能得3-5分C. 写作规范(mechanics) 2分满分2分，其中2分优秀，1.5分良好，1分一般，0.5分较差a. 单词拼写正确b. 标点符号正确c. 大小写正确d. 书写美观e. 卷面整洁。

TEM4(2007)便条评分标准一. 格式：（占3分）包括日期，称呼，和结尾三部分，各占一分。

1.日期(date):正确：April 24th ,2007/ April 24, 2007/ April 24/24 April 2007/4/24/200724/4/2007(Apr.也可以，任何一个日期都可以)2.称呼（Heading）:正确：(Dear)Mike:(,)/ (Dear)Hilda:(,) (缺逗号或冒号，扣0.5分)位置在日期下面一行左侧。

3. 结尾（Ending）:正确：Yours sincerely,/Yours,/ Sincerely yours,/ Sincerely, (缺逗号，扣0.5分) Sincerely, Mike, Hilda (若在一行扣0.5)Yours sincerely （两个单词的首字母都大写扣0.5）若名字没写或人名XXX（或Mike/ Hilda）扣1分。

4.格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，扣1分。

凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣分。

错一部分扣1分。

最多扣3分。

二.内容（占2分）本便条必须包括如下内容：1.拒绝（1分）2.理由（1分）三.语言（占5分）1．首句需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣1分。

2．5分中有一分是语言的得体性。

语言风格与情景不一致，扣1分（如：Yours truly,Truly yours,If you consent , etc）. 只有语言较好才得分。

四．评分总体要求：1．语言没有严重错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求（<80,>40）, 可给9—10分。

2．便条总字数（包括三部分格式在内），要求在50—60字；不到40或超过80字扣1分。

3．请写出三部分的小分，如2+2+4（格式+内容+语言）4．不要出现0.5 分。

5．要求大家阅卷时做到认真仔细，不漏改卷，漏填分数或漏签名。

请在每份卷子的错误部分划线，以便复校。

Note writing 便条写作项目简介1.学生在10分钟之内完成大约50-60词的便条写作，要求做到格式正确，内容完整，语言得体。

2.与作文写作有所不同：便条项目侧重于语言的实用性和功能性，检查学生日常运用语言的实际能力。

而大作文检验考生的正规写作能力，强调内容完整，条理清楚，结构合理，语法正确，语言通顺恰当。

Note writing 评分标准●2006年真题/p-74053758312.html●（2009年评分标准大致如下）1．格式1）日期（1分）April 21st, 2011 / April 212）称呼(1分) Dear Mike, / Mike,3）正文4）署名（1分）Yours,Lily (根据题目要求写，题目没有要求则任意选用一个英文名；若用XXX或者汉字扣0.5分)正确位置在便条正文下面空一到两行右侧。

2．正文内容与语言1）语言表达较差（包括语法和拼写错误），扣0.5-1.5分，拼写错误超过3个要扣1分。

2）语言没有严重错误，格式正确，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求(<80, >40), 可给5分；3）便条总字数要求约50-60字；一般不到40或者超过80扣1分。

●缺少日期●Yours 写成yours●署名和结束语写在同一行●署名用XXX或者中文●署名后加句号●字数太多或者太少●内容不完整●语言文体不得当（formal style / informal style）例题例一：例二：例三：Your friend has just won the first prize in the Provincial English Speech Contest. Write a note of congratulations.(1)明确假设的写作人与接收人之间的关系，确定用何种语体。

to whom(2)确定便条的功能，即表明写便条的原因。

why(3)将提示中提到的场景转换成自己的语言，自然融进便条内容中去。