现代大学英语四级写作资料

大学英语四级写作资料一、大学英语四级考试大纲（2006 修订版）对写作的要求写作选用考生所熟悉的题材。

考生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片或图表等，写出一篇不少于120词的短文。

写作要求是思想表达准确、意义连贯、无严重语法错误。

考试时间30分钟。

写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。

写作部分考核的技能是：A.思想表达1.表达中心思想2.表达重要或特定信息3.表达观点、态度等B.篇章组织4.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇C.语言运用6.运用恰当的词汇7.运用正确的语法8.运用合适的句子结构9.使用正确的标点符号10.运用衔接手段表达句间关系（如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等）D.写作格式11.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。

能掌握基本的写作技能。

”二、四级考试写作评分标准（1）本题满分为15分。

（2）阅卷标准共分四等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。

各有标准样卷1-2份。

（3）阅卷人根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可以加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分）。

但不得加或减半分。

（4）评分标准•2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或绝大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

•5分：基本切题。

思想表达不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语法错误。

•8分：基本切题。

思想表达清楚，文章尚连贯，但语法错误较多，其中有一些是严重错误。

•11分：切题。

思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语法错误。

•14分：切题。

思想表达清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语法错误。

提纲式作文提纲式作文1．对立观点式对立观点式 A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X，为什么？为什么？ B．有人认为X 是坏事，，为什么？是坏事， 反对X，为什么？ C．我的看法。

．我的看法。

of doing X. They Some people are in favor of the idea point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。

They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

的另一个原因。

 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 的第一个理由。

An example can give the details of 反对X 的第一个理由。

this argument: 一个例子。

一个例子。

. But I think the There is some truth in both argumentsadvantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。

的有一个坏处。

的有一个坏处。

2．批驳观点式批驳观点式 A．一个错误观点。

．一个错误观点。

B．我不同意。

我不同意。

 Many people argue that 错误观点。

By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。

An example they have presented is that 一个例子。

（一个例子。

（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。

一．The main types of guided writing:1. 提纲式作文：Directions:Women make a great contribution to the progress of modern society. But there are still some people who don’t agree with it.There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper based on the following outline.1. Role of women in modern society2. Prejudices and discrimination against women3. My commentY ou should write about 200 words within 40 minutes.Women play an important part in modern society. Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and factories. Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex. In addition, some of are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run completely by women. It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progress of modern society.There are, however, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in many ways. In the first place, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough. They believe that women are the weaker sex – both physically and emotionally. Thus, women are naturally suited, much more so than men, to the performance of domestic duties. According to them, a woman’s place is within the protective environment of the home. Secondly, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than do women.Personally, I’m firmly standing on the side of those women right defenders. Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing. (242 words)2. 提纲图表式作文：Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Study the following table care fully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. Y ou should quote as few figures as possible.Outline: 1. Changes in people’s daily expanses in the past five years2. Possible reasons for the changesIn the past five years, there have been great changes in people’s daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 2001. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 15% in 2001. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses.What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion, there are at least three good reasons. T o begin with, with the rapid development of agriculture in China, the output of grain, fruit, vegetables and milk has sharply increased, which contributes to the decline in their prices. Secondly, the family incomes of people both in the city and in the country have greatly risen so that people now can afford expensive clothing and some of them even want to dress in the latest fashion. Finally, as the living conditions improve, the demand for a variety of recreations is growing steadily, too.In short, with the incomes continuing to rise, people will no longer resign themselves to living a dull, monotonous life. They are eager to make their life interesting and exciting. Therefore, I am sure that people will spend more money on clothing and recreations. (219 words)3．规定情景式作文：Directions: Migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. In this part, you are to write within 40 minutes a composition of 200 words about “The Role of Migrant Workers”. Y ou can agree and/or disagree, completely or partially to above statement. But no matter which position you take, you should have supporting reasons.As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our work force. Most of them work on construction sites. There is no doubt that without migrant workers many of construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. In addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which enhances the consumption of food and daily items. This in turn helps to develop food industry and service trades in cites. All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.However, as a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. The same is the case with migrant workers. Firstly, most of them are not welleducated and professionally trained. Some of them have had very little schooling. As you know. Illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to make trouble, thus endangering social order. Secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they are ambitious for. Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society.In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them. (244 words)二、The structure of a paragraph and its development:1. Structure of a paragraph: topic sentence, development sentence andconcluding sentence.2. Ways of developing a paragraph:1) Comparison and contrast (对比法)2) Cause and effect (因果法)3) Exemplification (举例法)4) Generalization and qualification (概述法)5) Argument (议论法)三、Some sentence patterns commonly-used in controlled writing :---关于利弊、优缺点的句型：1. S + have (or has ) a lot of advantages over ….. (与….相比有许多优点)译：汽车与自行车相比有许多优点。

大学英语四级作文范文30篇范例一1. 如今大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做And some day we‘ll benefit from it.点评： 2023 年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待； 2023 年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门” 事件；近几年，中小学教师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。

本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活亲密相关。

范例二For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic: Students’ Rating of TheirTeachers。

You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1. 学生给教师打分已经普遍2. 人们对其持不同态度3. 我的看法Students‘ R ating of Their TeachersNowadays, it has bee as mon in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as forteachers to grade students. In some universities students‘ rating has even bee the only source of information onteaching effectiveness..Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what isshown on students‘ rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up todate or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which isbest left for the teachers‘ colleagues.I think students‘ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shedmeaningful light onteach ers‘ performance. Instead of rating theteachers‘ knowledge on the subject, studentsshould be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course,and to report on such things as a teacher‘s abilityto municate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arousestudents‘interest in the subject.点评：越来越多的高校采取让学生给教师打分的形式来理解教学反应，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。

Topic 1 On Skipping Classes 关于逃课Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Skipping Classes by commenting on the phenomenon that quite a few college students skip classes. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Nowadays in a Chinese college classroom, chances are that you won’t see full attention. Skipping classes is not uncommon for college students.Why does such phenomenon occur? Today, college students face pressure from both school and society. In school, they have to get enough credits and a high GPA in order to graduate with an impressive resume. However, when they are hunting for jobs, social experience also counts a great deal. So sometimes students have to sacrifice school to social activities such as noviciates.In my opinion, students should learn to balance the time spent in classrooms and on social activities. Both academic knowledge and social experience are necessary for their future career, but school should always come first for a student.◇写作思路这是一篇议论文，要求对“逃课”这种现象进行观点阐述。

大学英语四级写作范文（4篇）大学英语四级写作范文篇一For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.1．有人认为大学里应独自生活2．另一些认为大学里应与别人同住3．你的看法Living alone or Living with RoommatesNowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion among the college students as to whether they should live alone outside the campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory. Opinions are divided over the matter.Those who are in favor of Living alone maintain that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they can have easy access to the Internet.But others argue that living with roommates has attractions of its own. With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talking to one another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to rent an apartment outside the campus.大学英语四级写作范文篇二Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones .You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1. 描述上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况2. 出现这种情况的原因3. 对此现象作出评价Cell PhonesAs is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China. In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million. And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.There are many factors contributing to this development. Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily. Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages. Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.The wide use of cell phones has made them more and more indispensable in people’s daily life. The functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.大学英语四级写作范文篇三Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topicAdvertisement. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 广告的作用2. 广告的形式多样3. 广告的夸张性AdvertisementAdvertisements are forcing their way into people’s lives. People refer to advertisements in their daily lives because they are consumers. The advertisers are usuallymanufacturers, retailers and salesmen. Their merchandise needs to be advertised to bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus nearly every product is advertised in some way. To a large extent, good advertising leads to success while bad advertising can mean failure.There are many ways to advertise and ‘ads’ come in different forms. Newspapers carry advertisements. Some products are publicized on TV and radio which bring them into notice of a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising. Advertising is a big industry now and many agencies have been set up to furnish a variety of forms..However, advertising is not always truthful. A product is often misrepresented. The advertiser exaggerates the benefits of the merchandise he wants to sell. Thus, he misrepresents the truth. The consumer falls victim to such advertising. Millions of people have bought advertised products and have been dissatisfied with them.大学英语四级写作范文篇四Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus. You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你是李明，请你写一封信给校长，建议改善本校体育设施状况，内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重要性，对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬，可以提出批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

大学英语四级写作-48(总分：100.00，做题时间：90分钟)一、{{B}}Writing{{/B}}(总题数：6，分数：100.00)1.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the old and sick living in nursing homes.You should base your essay on the graph and the outline (given in Chinese) below. You should write at least {{U}}120{{/U}} words but no more than {{U}}180{{/U}} words.(1)描述图表的变化趋势。

(2)说明发生这些变化的原因。

(3)得出结论。

（分数：15.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________正确答案：([参考范文]The Old and Sick Living in Nursing HomesFrom the graph, we can see that the percentage of the old and sick placed in nursing homes has been increasing rapidly since 1990. In the past twenty years, it has gone up by over 10 times, reaching nearly 52 percent in 2010.Several reasons may account for the increase. Firstly, with the quickening pace of the modern life, adult children are often too busy with their own families and work to take good care of the old and sick parents. Secondly, the old and sick living in nursing homes can receive better services and more intensive care from professional nurses, which will be beneficial to their health. In addition, they will be much happier in nursing homes, where they won't suffer boredom and loneliness. They can have people of their own age to talk and spend time with.Therefore, it has become a tendency for the old and sick to live in nursing homes. We can predict that more and more old and sick people will be willing to spend their old age in nursing homes.) 解析：2.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the picture, and then express your view on A Boom in Adult Education. You should write at least {{U}}120{{/U}} words but no more than {{U}}180{{/U}} words.（分数：15.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________正确答案：([参考范文]A Boom in Adult EducationWhat is clearly illustrated in the drawing above is that the woman chooses to attend a computer class in her leisure time, wishing to improve her computer skills so that she can get a promotion next year. The picture implicitly suggests a new trend, that is, the percentage of people who register for adult education has largely increased in recent years.There are chiefly three reasons for this increasing trend. Firstly, people in increasing numbers have realized the importance of knowledge and dived into the sea of knowledge in order to perform better in life. Secondly, with the development of economy, people's former knowledge is no longer as applicable as it was. Finally, regular schools could accommodate only a fixed number of students,while a larger number of people would like to continue their education. Adult education is an effective way of solving the problem.However, there are some flaws in adult education. For example, the curricula are monotonous. Hence, how to provide people with more occupational and theoretical training is still a challenging task.) 解析：3.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the picture, and then express your view on Study Abroad or in China? You should write at least {{U}}120{{/U}} words but no more than {{U}}180{{/U}} words.（分数：15.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：([参考范文]Study Abroad or in China?As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above, two students are discussing about whether to study abroad or in China. Obviously, there is no consensus of opinions.Some people are of the opinion that the youths should go overseas for further study if possible. They believe that diverse cultural backgrounds can broaden students horizon. Meanwhile, overseas study can help cultivate students' independence and shape their personality because they are forced to cope with various difficulties by themselves. Nevertheless, some other people advocate domestic education. They argue that the quality of education has been largely improved in China. They also point out that it is convenient and economical to receive domestic education. Personally, I am in favor of the former opinion. For one thing, overseas students can strengthen their abilities to understand and communicate with people from other countries. For another, they can learn advanced knowledge in world-famous universities. When everything considered, we may reasonably draw the conclusion that studying abroad is advisable.)解析：4.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Job Application. You should write at least {{U}}120{{/U}} words but no more than {{U}}180{{/U}} words.（分数：15.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：([参考范文]A Letter of Job ApplicationOctober 8, 2014Dear Sir/Madam,I would like to be considered as a candidate for the part-time assistant position advertised in the Xi'an Evening on September 28, 2014.I am a student of Xi'an Jiaotong University, which is only five minutes' walk from your shop. According to the advertisement, the job demands a multi-lingual person with sales experience. Chinese is my mother tongue and I have a good mastery of English. As a keen traveler, I have learned some Japanese and French and have acquired an understanding of the cultures of the two countries.I have also gained some sales experience since I once worked part-time as a waiter in a pizza hut. My customers were quite satisfied with my service. I feel that my qualifications and work experience make me a suitable candidate for the job. Incidentally, could you please inform me of the payment?I hope you will take my application into consideration favorably and entitle me to an interview at your convenience. I can be reached at 88836254. I am looking forward to speaking with you then.Yours sincerely,Wang Hai )解析：5.Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter of Apology.You should write at least {{U}}120{{/U}} words but no more than {{U}}180{{/U}} words.（分数：20.00）__________________________________________________________________________________________ 正确答案：([参考范文]A Letter of ApologyDecember 18, 2014Dear Wang Juan,How are you getting on recently? I'm writing this letter to give my apology to you.Two months ago, you lent me several magazines on computer. You asked me to give them back as soon as I finished reading, for you would also use them. I am really sorry that I have delayed it so long. I had been engaged in preparing for a class presentation before I could manage to find time to read them all. That's why I did not return them to you until this month. I suppose I've already held up your work. So please accept my apology and I hope my delaying has not caused any loss. Another thing I want to mention is that there are so much useful knowledge covered in these books and I have really learned a lot from them. These magazines may be of great help when I start programming computers. Therefore, I would like to give my appreciations to you for lending me these magazines.Well, so much for the writing and wish you everything goes well.Yours sincerely,Zhang Fang )解析：6.Directions:Suppose your English teacher Professor Smith will return to his country after teaching you for one year, please give a speech to send him off. You are allowed 30 minutes to write the send-off speech and you should write at least {{U}}120{{/U}} words but no more than {{U}}180{{/U}} words based on the outline given blow in Chinese.(1)从Professor Smith的授课中所得到的收获。