高中英语写作公开课(共61张)

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species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）
I couldn’t have passed the physics exam but for your help.
a result of, for the reason that 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though,
in spite of the fact that 递进关系：what’s more, in addition, furthermore
on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系：if, unless, as long as, on condition that …
Conclusion
Personally,… in conclusion, in brief, From what has been discussed above,
we may draw the conclusion that ... In summary, it is wiser ...
The paragraph

theirtnoepstiscinsterneetseonrcheoles in the rocks. Other
species make their nests in holes in the ground. There are also varieties that do not live in groups at all…
A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.
I believe English is more important than other foreign languages for many reasons. First of all, English is spoken by a large number of people, and these people are the most widely spread across the world in a great many countries. Secondly, English is the most widely used language on the internet. It has become an on-line language. Thirdly, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in our country and English will be very useful. Lastly, …
Topic paragraph Supporting Paragraph 1 Supporting Paragraph 2 Supporting Paragraph 3
Concluding paragraph

Signature
六.写作训练 假设你是高中生李华，就读于光明中
学。你在英语学习中遇到了很多问题， 希望得到你的外教Miss Bruce的帮助。 请给Miss Bruce写一封信。内容包括 以下要点：
课文中生词太多，难记； 课文太长，难背； 希望Miss Bruce介绍一些英语学习 方法。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Introduce the purpose of writing the letter and your problems
Faced with___, I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____. Also, I would like you to ____.
I am writing to you to ask for some/ your help. Would you like to ____? In the meanwhile, I beg you to ___ so that/ in order that ____.
助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去 结构的倒装用法使用准确，强调了词典的重要，为本文增加了得分点。
求助信 一任务呈现 假设你是李华，留学期间寄宿在 Mr.Brown家里，回国后你发现你有一 本英语字典落在他家了。请参照以下 要点给Mr.Brown写一封信。内容如下：
一本英语词典忘记带回国,词典是美 国老师送的，非常珍贵；
词典很可能落在卧室的书架上； 邮资自付。
注意： 1.词数100左右(信的开头和结尾已给 出，不计入总词数）； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.参考词汇：邮资postage Dear Mr.Brown, _____________________________ ______________________________ ___________________

学生写作实例展示和点评
挑选出几个学生的作品进行展 示
点评：分析作品中的优点和不 足
鼓励学生们互相学习，共同进 步
引导学生们反思自己的写作过 程和方法
学生写作实践和交流
学生写作实践：学 生独立完成写作任 务，教师给予指导 和建议
学生交流：学生互 相交流写作思路和 技巧，分享作品并 评价
写作展示：挑选优 秀作品进行展示， 鼓励其他学生借鉴 学习
语法和用法：标点符号和拼写 的正确用法，以及常见的语法
错误和纠正方法
审题和构思
仔细阅读题目， 确定主题和写
作方向
列出写作提纲， 明确文章结构
和要点
根据要点，列 出需要用到的 关键词和短语
结合语法规则 和语言表达习 惯，将关键词 和短语组合成 句子，形成文
章初稿
草拟提纲和列出要点
确定主题和要点
句子单调乏味和解决方法
句子结构单一 缺乏丰富的表达方式
解决方法：学习多种句式，如简单句、复合句、复杂句等，增加句子的变化和丰富性 解决方法：积累词汇，尝试用不同的单词或短语表达同一个意思，增强表达的多样性
词汇贫乏和解决方法
问题：学生在 写作中常常因 为词汇贫乏而 无法准确表达
自己的意思
解决方法1： 通过阅读英文 文章、书籍等
反思总结：回顾本 次写作实践和交提供写作素材和要求 教师展示自己的范文并讲解写作技巧 学生模仿教师范文进行写作，教师进行个别指导 教师收集学生作品并展示点评
学生互评和反馈
学生在课堂上展示自己的写作作品 其他学生给予评价和反馈 教师点评和指导 学生根据反馈进行修改和完善
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汇报人：

Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice