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高三英语作文公开课

高三英语作文公开课

高三英语作文公开课Today in our English class, we had a really interesting and engaging public lesson on writing a composition for the senior three students. It was such a different experience, and I felt like I really learned a lot.The teacher started by talking about the importance of having a clear and engaging introduction. She explainedthat a good introduction should hook the reader right away and make them want to read more. She gave us some examples of strong opening sentences and we all tried to come up with our own versions. It was fun to see how everyone interpreted the idea differently.Then, we moved on to discussing the body paragraphs. The teacher emphasized the importance of supporting our ideas with examples and evidence. She showed us how to use personal anecdotes, quotes from famous people, or even statistical data to make our points more convincing. We practiced by brainstorming ideas for different topics andthen writing out short paragraphs.After that, we talked about the conclusion. The teacher said that a good conclusion should sum up the main pointsof the essay and leave the reader with a lasting impression. She gave us some tips on how to end our essays in a waythat feels satisfying and complete.The class was really interactive and everyone seemed to be enjoying.。

高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)

高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)

Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua

高三英语写作公开课

高三英语写作公开课

Ⅲ Use proper linking words
Dear Editor, As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house These books have many advantages.T_o__b_e_g_in__w_ith one of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students.
I realized Janet was a nice teacher only after I left school ． Only after I left school did I realize Janet was a nice teacher
We can live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings only in this way Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings
Chenjiale walked out of the classroom, followed by many girls
The kids were invited to the party and they were very excited
Invited to the party, the kids were very excited

高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)

高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)
Para.2
因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。
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补充细节：
语言表达：
连词成句：
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traditional Chinese art;
I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art, so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.
基本得体
基本清楚
6-10
漏掉主要要点
贫乏
错误较多，影响理解
不得体
混乱
1-5
未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关
要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰； 逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观
好作文标准：
好作文的写作步骤 (写作七步法)
审 题体裁时态人称要点
列提纲结构要点关键词
补充细节
语言表达准确地道词汇句式
连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇
(2019 全国1卷)
体裁人称时态 要求
一般现在时
120左右
gallery, art center
应用文（申请信）
第一人称
A Chinese painting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings, traditional Chinese art, the artworks.
Para.1Para.2Para.3
个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）

公开课 英语作文

公开课 英语作文

公开课英语作文I remember the first time I attended an open class in English. It was a new experience for me, and I didn't know what to expect. The teacher was very engaging and used a lot of real-life examples to explain the concepts. I found it very helpful and it made me more interested in learning English.One thing that stood out to me was the interactive nature of the class. The teacher encouraged us to participate and ask questions, which made the class more dynamic and engaging. I felt more motivated to learn and improve my English skills.Another aspect that I appreciated was the use of multimedia in the class. The teacher used videos, music, and other resources to make the learning experience more enjoyable and effective. It helped me to understand the language in different contexts and made the class more interesting.The open class also gave me the opportunity to interact with other students who were at different levels of English proficiency. It was inspiring to see how everyone was eager to learn and improve, and it created a supportive and collaborative learning environment.Overall, attending the open class in English was a positive experience for me. It not only improved my language skills but also gave me the confidence to continue learning and using English in different situations. I would definitely recommend attending open classes to anyone who wants to enhance their English abilities.。

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件

What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance

高考英语书面表达高分写作技巧公开课教学课件(共25张PPT)


二、忌次序混乱，连接词单一或缺乏
审完题后，不少考生虽已知道了要写的内容，却不能合 理地组织所给的材料，东一句、西一句，写得支离破碎， 文理不通，让人不知所云。考生最好能迅速地列出要点， 在这个过程中，要考虑一下先写什么，后写什么，句与句 之间，不得逐字或逐条翻译。 段与段之间最好能使用一些能清晰表达逻辑结构的连 接词或句子，如first of all , above all , secondly , next , in fact,besides, in a word , at last , the most important point is that…等等，使文章过渡自然、流畅，做到前后连贯、 层次分明、有条不紊。
注意：不能不 用，且不能少 用，但也不能 滥用。
一、怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him . 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
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六、忌充分自信、不回查
写出来的东西，很可能有不正确、不恰当的 地方，因此，在答完卷时，至少应从以下几个方 面认真检查：（1）对照题目要求，看全部要点是 否都已包括进去，有无遗漏或误解；（2）文体格 式是否正确规范；（3）词语使用是否合适、正确， 有无语法与用词上的错误， 表达是否符合英语表 达习惯；（4）单词拼写、字母大小写有无错误， 标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。 一句话，对书面表达应尽量做到：不跑题，不 漏点，语言精简合习惯，灵活表达要规范，书法 整齐词有限。

高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件(34张)


遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
（3）老百姓
• old hundred sex
X
• the general public
• ordinary people
• people from all walks of life
四喜丸子
four happy meatballs X
meatballs √
遇到不会写的单词怎么办？
Possible version
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
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Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt
6. 绕/爬过小山
6. to the other side of hill
7. 我们在（湖畔）小树林里 7. in small woods, by lake
•三“变”为变要点为句子。
Expand the key points have a picnic, in People’s Park We will have our picnic in the People’s Park. We are going to the People’s park for a picnic. We are going to the People’s park, where we will have a picnic.

高中英语高考英语作文之环保省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件

6/41
preserve our natural resources 保护自然资源
•It is highly important to preserve the environment. •维护自然环境至关主要。
7/41
Greenhouse effect温室效应
•This adds to the power of the greenhouse effect, making the planet even warmer.
develop a habit of form a habit of keep a habit build a habit
15/41
with the development of
•Certainly, with the development of science and technology, more and more plastics will come into use.
。
•We must take steps to control air pollution.
•我们必须采取些办法来控制空气污染。
18/41
climate change •Global warming refers to an average increase in the Earth's temperature that, in turn, leads to climate change.
35/41
water
• 1. It’s our duty to save water
• 责任节约用水是我们责任。
• 2. As we know , water is very important to man, • 我们知道，水是非常主要人， • 3. We can’t live without water. • 我们生活离不开水。

高中英语作文复习公开课课件-(共31张PPT)


Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned../from my point of view
I. would appreciate… I would you will think of /take…into consideration….
结尾 信息5 总结，意愿……
In my opinion/ as far as I we am should concerned../from my point of view From my point of view, do what we can to make
. I would appreciate… full use of the stadium. I you will think of /take…into consideration…. I would would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration In a word…
③你想写一些建议
Want to write some advice/Would like to give you some advice
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How to write based on cartoons?
1. 读图(topics)
2.解意(theme)
3. 谋篇(organization)
Ⅰ.读图：Topics of cartoons
Environmental problems
Attitudes towards life
Topics of cartoons
5. … …
Sentence structures:
1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society. 2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… 4.The picture indicates that we…/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
Picture2
Protect animals. No buying, no killing.
Picture 3
People can’t afford heavy medical fees.
Picture 4
One false move may lose the game. Think twice before we do anything.
Picutre5
Money can’t buy everything. Health is the best wealth.
Picture6
Children suffer from too heavy burden.
Ⅲ.谋篇 ---Organization
Step1. Description
发现问题
The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.
Example 2
角度 criticize 主旨
Students and parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.
The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who manage to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, schools in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem.
Sentence structures:
As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,
In the picture, there are…
……
As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are… ……
Sentence structures:
1.As far as I’m concerned, /In my opinion, Can you think /From my point of view,… of some 2. It is high time we took some measures sentence structures to form to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should your last paragraph?be taken to… 3. The government should make laws to… 4. We should raise people’s awareness of… 5. Everyone should make great efforts to… Only in this way can we…
Let’s have a competition
Judge the themes of the following cartoons as quickly as possible.
Come on! Choose me!
1 4
2 5
3 6
Picture1
People lack communication.
高考英语作文公开课
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Hale Waihona Puke Daily SpeechI Shall Not Live In Vain --Emily Dickinson If I can stop one heart from breaking, I shall not live in vain; If I can ease one life the aching, Or cool one pain, Or help one fainting robin Unto his nest again, I shall not live in vain. What’s the theme of the poem?
Sentence structures: 1.Reading the cartoon, we think of a common phenomenon of our society.
2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, it is very common in our daily life. 3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… 4.The picture indicates that we…/ Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that…
Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析)
( facts / reasons/results…)
Clues：描述一下他 们的不同境遇，并
就如何解决此问题
发表你的看法。
(referring to the
given Chinese words)
Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of… comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates in rural country worsen the problem
Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of… comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates in rural country worsen the problem
a country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of modern education
As is vividly shown in the picture, a country boy is crying helplessly in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education. In contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits of modern education .
Step 3 Solutions
(your opinions /suggestions)
the government all citizens Individual (从大到小)
be aware of Only in this way social justice harmonious society (从意识到行动)
cartoon
poster
80% 70% 60% 50% 40% 30% 20% 10% 0%
76% 70% 67% 62%
graph
韩国 日本 美国 中国
photo
Let’s develop our writing skills in cartoons!
What is a good writing？