【新高考题型读后续写】素材库之环境描写系列(5)The Description of

高考英语读后续写环境描写精选一、日月星辰、城市霓虹1.The sun kissed the vibrant green fields, casting a warm and golden glow over the surrounding landscape.太阳亲吻着生机勃勃的绿田，将温暖而金色的光芒洒在周围的景色上。

2.I caught the sun rising through the clouds, sending streaks of fire from one end of the world to the other.正赶上太阳冲破云层，把火焰般的光束洒向世界的每一个角落。

3.The sunshine slanted through the window, moistening our hearts and easing all the misunderstanding between us.阳光透过窗户，湿润了我们的心，缓解了我们之间的误会。

4.The sun was at its highest, baking the ground with its flames and making the air still and unbearable.太阳处于最高点，用火焰烤着地面，空气静止、令人难以忍受。

5.The moon shone brightly in the midnight sky, casting a silvery glow that reflected off the calm surface of the lake月亮在午夜的天空中熠熠生辉，投射出银色的光芒，在湖面上闪烁。

6.The starry night sky twinkled with countless celestial diamonds, illuminating the world below with their ethereal beauty星空闪烁着无数的天上钻石，在下方的世界上闪耀出它们空灵的美丽。

专题01 The Description of Snow——本专题聚焦于雪景、适用于冬日户外的环境描写•1-1 The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees that lined our street. Overnight, snow had nudged its way into every crack and gutter.街上白雪皑皑，天空一片湛蓝。

雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在我们街两旁发育不良的桑树枝上。

一夜之间，雪就挤满了每一个裂缝和水沟。

glistened闪光; 闪亮; glisten的过去分词和过去式；这里形容雪铺在路上亮晶晶的样子blameless无过错的; 无可指责的；blameless blue 湛蓝，蓝得毫无瑕疵blanketed以厚层覆盖; blanket的过去式，blanket有毯子的意思，隐喻雪像一层毯子weighed有…重; 重; 称重量，量体重; 认真考虑; 权衡; 斟酌; weigh的过去分词和过去式这里指雪压弯了树梢。

nudged轻推，轻触; 轻推，渐渐推动; 用胳膊肘挤开往前走; nudge的过去分词和过去式stunted发育不足的; 生长不良的; 未能充分发展的; 阻碍生长; 妨碍发展; 遏制; stunt的过去分词和过去式rooftop屋顶外部; 外屋顶mulberry桑树; 桑葚; 深紫红色gutter檐沟; 天沟; 路旁排水沟; 阴沟; 恶劣的社会环境; 道德沦落的社会最低阶•1-2 The park was covered in a thick blanket of white, statues peeked out under their new white caps, footsteps and paw prints crisscrossed each other around the labyrinth of paths. Aside from the brown of the denuded trees, the only other color was the vivid saffron staining around the base of each lamppost, tree and shrub.公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖，公园里的雕像从它的崭新的白色帽子下露出头来，在迷宫般的小路上，足迹和爪印交错。

专题01 The Description of Snow——本专题聚焦于雪景、适用于冬日户外的环境描写•1-1 The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees that lined our street. Overnight, snow had nudged its way into every crack and gutter.街上白雪皑皑，天空一片湛蓝。

雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在我们街两旁发育不良的桑树枝上。

一夜之间，雪就挤满了每一个裂缝和水沟。

glistened闪光; 闪亮; glisten的过去分词和过去式；这里形容雪铺在路上亮晶晶的样子blameless无过错的; 无可指责的；blameless blue 湛蓝，蓝得毫无瑕疵blanketed以厚层覆盖; blanket的过去式，blanket有毯子的意思，隐喻雪像一层毯子weighed有…重; 重; 称重量，量体重; 认真考虑; 权衡; 斟酌; weigh的过去分词和过去式这里指雪压弯了树梢。

nudged轻推，轻触; 轻推，渐渐推动; 用胳膊肘挤开往前走; nudge的过去分词和过去式stunted发育不足的; 生长不良的; 未能充分发展的; 阻碍生长; 妨碍发展; 遏制; stunt的过去分词和过去式rooftop屋顶外部; 外屋顶mulberry桑树; 桑葚; 深紫红色gutter檐沟; 天沟; 路旁排水沟; 阴沟; 恶劣的社会环境; 道德沦落的社会最低阶•1-2 The park was covered in a thick blanket of white, statues peeked out under their new white caps, footsteps and paw prints crisscrossed each other around the labyrinth of paths. Aside from the brown of the denuded trees, the only other color was the vivid saffron staining around the base of each lamppost, tree and shrub.公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖，公园里的雕像从它的崭新的白色帽子下露出头来，在迷宫般的小路上，足迹和爪印交错。

高考英语读后续写环境描写语句汇总专题01 The Description of Snow1-1 The street glistened with fresh snow and the sky was a blameless blue. Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of the stunted mulberry trees that lined our street. Overnight, snow had nudged its way into every crack and gutter.[译文]街上白雪皑皑，天空一片湛蓝。

雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在我们街两旁发育不良的桑树枝上。

一夜之间，雪就挤满了每一个裂缝和水沟。

1-2 The park was covered in a thick blanket of white, statues peeked out under their new white caps, footsteps and paw prints crisscrossed each other around the labyrinth of paths. Aside from the brown of the denuded trees, the only other color was the vivid saffron staining around the base of each lamppost, tree and shrub.[译文]公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖，公园里的雕像从它的崭新的白色帽子下露出头来，在迷宫般的小路上，足迹和爪印交错。

除了光秃秃的树的棕色外，唯一的另一种颜色是每个灯柱、树和灌木底部的鲜艳的橘黄色。

1-3 The wind howled, piling up snow in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust.I walked bend over against the cold, protecting my eyes with my arms. Trees, posts, cowsheds loomed into my vision, then vanished, swallowed in white.[译文]风呼啸着，堆着阵阵飘动的雪，用雪白的颗粒蒙蔽了黑夜。

2021年新高考英语高考读后续写素材之九：The Description of Night and Moon——本节聚焦于夜景,以及夜晚典型景物月亮有关的环境描写3-1 The moon appeared momentarily, her disk was blood-red and half-overcast：she seemed to throw me a bewildered, dreary glance ,and buried herself again instantly in the deep drift of cloud.译文：月亮出现了片刻，她的月轮略带点血红色，半遮着脸：她似乎向我投去一个迷茫、沉闷的目光，然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里。

3-2 Then the moon appeared in all its elegant whiteness, lightening up the cloudless sky ;finally, moving more slowly, it cast on the surface of the river a large parch of light which glittered like an infinity of stars.译文：然后，月亮在其其优雅的白色光芒的映衬下出现，照亮了无云的天空；最后，它慢慢地移动，在河面上投下一大片光，像无数星星一样闪闪发光。

技法讲解：融情于景——如何在环境中融入人物的内心状态不难发现，3-1所表达的气氛沉闷萧瑟，可以推测出主人公内心的烦躁、不安或是迷茫；3-2所表达的气氛静谧安详，可以推测出主人公内心的喜悦、宁静或是欣慰，同样是写夜晚的月亮，却传达出不同的情感，这就是环境描写之融情于景的威力，那么，这是如何做到的呢？我们并未直接写3-1中主人公内心的沉闷、烦躁、无所适从，而是说（The moon）throw me a bewildered, dreary glance（月亮向我投来一个迷茫、沉闷的目光），表面上写月亮迷茫、疲惫，实际上是在说主人公内心沉闷迷茫或是困乏疲惫，and buried herself again instantly in the deep drift of cloud.（然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里）其实也反映了主人公内心世界的孤闭。

专题05 The Description of Noon and Sun——本章节聚焦于正午、烈日、夏日等环境的描写•5-1 The sun was at it’s highest, like a vicious unblinking yellow eye stares down at me from the cloudless sky.The heat beat down on my head like I was bacon under the grill. I could almost smell myself cooking.太阳处于最高点，就像一只恶毒的、不眨眼的黄眼睛从无云的天空中凝视着我。

我的头热得像烤架下的熏肉一样。

我几乎能闻到自己被烤熟的味道。

vicious恶毒的，刻薄的unblinking不眨眼的; 目不转睛的beat down on烤炙bacon咸猪肉; 熏猪肉grill烤架; 一盘烧烤食物; 烧烤，炙烤; 烧，烤，焙;·5-2 In England it's usually cold but not this day, today the sun was at full blast, and I just wished that someone would turn it down, I was dripping sweat from my head to my toe.at full blast以最大音量; 以最大功率dripping湿淋淋的; 油; 滴下; 滴出; 滴水; 含有; 充满; 充溢; drip的现在分词from the head to the toe 从头到脚，这里形容浑身是汗的样子·5-3 In the unrelenting glare of midday the only shadow is that which pools at my feet. The strong sun on my white hair will burn me in minutes if I don't find shelter.几分钟后就会把我烧焦unrelenting持续的; 不缓和的; 势头不减的; 不留情的glare怒目而视; 发出刺眼的光; 刺眼的光; 怒视，瞪眼shadow阴影; 影子; 昏暗处; 背光处; 阴暗处;•5-4 In this heat even the trees appear defeated. Leaves that should be firm and upward tilting droop, flaccid as old lettuce. The soil isn't simply dry, but powdery to the touch.在这么热的天气里，连树都显得颓败了。

专题11 The Description of River，Lake and Ocean——本章节聚焦于与河流、湖泊、海洋有关场景的描写•11-1 The expanse of blue water stretched in every direction to the horizon, frothy waves lapping at a sand beach.an expanse of一大片，广阔，宽广，浩瀚stretched拉长; 伸展; stretch的过去分词和过去式horizon地平线; 范围，眼界frothy有泡沫的; 起泡沫的; 华而不实的; 夸夸其谈的; 花架子的; 轻薄精巧的lapping拍打; 舔食; 舔着喝; 领先一圈; lap的现在分词•11-2 The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering.mirror反映; 映照; 反射blameless无过错的; 无可指责的shimmering发出微弱的闪光; 闪烁; shimmer的现在分词•11-3 The lake was surrounded by minor mountains and it sat like the regal crown of the earth.surrounded围绕; 环绕; 包围，围住; 与…紧密相关; surround的过去分词和过去式minor较小的; 次要的; 轻微的sat坐; 使坐; 使就座; 处在; 坐落在; 被放在; sit的过去分词和过去式regal帝王的; 王室的; 豪华的crown王冠; 皇冠; 冕; 王国政府; 王国; 王位; 王权; 为…加冕; 形成…顶部; 给…•11-4 The turbid water, swollen by the heavy rain, was rushing on rapidly below; and all the other soundswere lost in the noise of it's splashing and eddying against the green and slimy piles.绿色和粘糊糊的堆上旋转。

新高考读后续写素材库之关于恶劣环境的
描写
环境描写对于文章的情感和场景设置非常重要，它可以增加文章的真实感和立体感。

下面我们来看看如何描写风和雨的情景。

风的描写：
1.这个冬天异常寒冷，没有风，整个世界似乎在这一刻停滞了，连河流也停下了脚步。

2.月光照在积雪上，朔风呼啸，让人感到忧伤。

3.外面刮起了大风，树枝摇曳不定，地上的灰尘四处XXX，让人睁不开眼睛。

雨的描写：
1.雨下得非常大，好像是猫狗在下雨。

2.由于下大雨，他上学迟到了。

3.昨天放学的时候下了一场大雨，我回到家已经全身湿透了。

4.星期四一整天都在下着雷暴雨。

5.天气预报说明天会有一场大暴雨。

文章已经没有格式错误，只需删除问题段落和改写每段话即可。

我们两人都没带伞，到达晚会的时候看上去像落汤鸡。

真不幸，XXX在雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。

夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。

刚才还是XXX，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，狂风暴雨起来了。

可仿写例句：
1.空气炎热得让人透不过气来，没有一丝风，仿佛整个世界都被烤焦了。

2.热得连地狱都要融化了，我几乎无法呼吸。

专题10 The Description of Tree——本章节聚焦于与树木有关场景的描写•10-1 The tree stood erect from the grass, its pink blossom blew away with a large gust of wind as graceful a dancing ballerina. The new leaves sparkled with the morning dew.中闪闪发光。

erect垂直的; 竖直的; 直立的; 勃起的，坚挺的; 建立; 建造; 竖立; 搭起; 创立; 设立a large gust of wind一阵狂风graceful优美的; 优雅的; 雅致的; 得体的，有风度的sparkled闪烁; 闪耀; 生气勃勃; 热情奔放; 神采飞扬; sparkle的过去分词和过去式blossom n.(尤指果树或灌木的)花朵，花簇v.开花;变得更加健康(或自信、成功)ballerina芭蕾舞女演员•10-1 The treetops reached high above the ground, almost touching the sky. The thin branches swayed easily, translucent green leaves flapping around uncontrollably. The limbs looked like they were about to break when the plump young bird sat on one of the uppermost branches, seemingly completely oblivious to the winds battering about its sky high domain.满的小鸟坐在最上面的一根树枝上时，它的四肢看起来好像要折断了，似乎完全忘记了风吹拂着它的天空高地。

读后续写背诵素材环境描写目录第一部分积累篇 (2)Part 1 (2)Part 2 (3)Part 3 (4)Part 4 (5)Part 5 (6)Part 6 (6)Part 7 (7)第二部分实战篇 (8)1、环境描写使用场景 (8)2、环境+主观感受烘托气氛 (9)3、表达技巧训练 (9)读后续写作为高考新题型，无疑增加了考试的难度，学生们为了取得高分一定要重视这个题型。

不仅需要加强练习，更需要积累一些写作素材。

环境描写是指对人物所处的具体的社会环境和自然环境的描写。

其中，社会环境是指能反映社会、时代特征的建筑、场所、陈设等景物以及民俗民风等。

自然环境是指自然界的景物，如季节变化、风霜雨雪、山川湖海、森林原野等。

通过对环境的描写，能够向读者交待故事的背景，衬托人物，渲染气氛，从而推动情节发展。

环境描写是必不可少的，作者可以通过环境描写向读者间接的表达着故事中主人公的内心情感变化。

环境描写可以从客观和主观两个角度展开：客观为从环境事物本身入手展开描写；主观则从观察者角度描写入手。

通常在描写时主客观交替进行。

第一部分积累篇使用建议：先试着翻译，然后比较和答案的差异，最后把这些句子都背下来，在平时的练习中有意识地加入这些描写。

Part 11.冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。

2，鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。

3.野生动物开始咆哮。

4.树叶在风中沙沙作响。

5河水汩汩地流淌着。

6.远处雷声隆隆。

7.这脆弱的小树啪地一下被狂风吹断了，倒在了地上。

8.他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喧喧声。

9湖水澄蓝，波平如镜，阳光照在湖上熠熠生辉。

10.太阳开始下山，那些摇摇欲坠的房子的裂缝中，渗出闪闪的红色斜晖。

1.The frozen snow crunched under our feet.2.Birds were chattering/twittering somewhere.3.Wild animals started to roar/howl.4.The leaves rustled in the wind.5. The river gurgled and burbled.6. The thunder was rumbling in the distance.7.The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild howling wind.8. They heard the twitter/chatter of birds among the bushes.9.The water was a deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.10.The sun was beginning to set,glitteringred through the cracks between the ramshackle buildings. Part 211.他们听到远处传来一声低沉的狮子的怒吼。