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.定语从句在写作中的运用背景分析：定语从句在英语学习中既是一个重点也是一个难点，且在写作中的作用尤为重要。
而在写作的过程中，同学们使用定语从句的时候出现了很多的错误。
通过必修一unit 1和unit 2, 已经分别把关系代词和关系副词讲解了。
所以，利用必修二unit1，把关系代词引导的定语从句运用到作文中，帮助同学们进一步正确使用好定语从句。
并且，可以依据这一模板，可以做一个关于名词性从句在作文中运用这类专题。
教学目标：1.明确定语从句中关系代词的位置和作用（复习必修一unit 4和unit5的语法知识）。
2.能够正确使用关系代词。
教学重难点:能够正确使用关系代词在作文中的应用。
教学步骤：Step 1 Revision复习定语从句的相关概念以及关系代词的用法。
Step 2 Lead in高考链接----单句改错(提示：找主句，先行词，在从句中充当什么成分，选用关系词) 1.I will never forget the days when we spent together. 2.English is a language shared by several diverse cultures, all of themuses it differently.3. Please send us all the information which you have about the candidate for the position.4.The books on the desk, which covers are shiny, are prizes for us.5.She reads a poem which Carver wrote it 4 years ago.6.Some people think that the great Chinese scholar Confucius, whichlived from roughly 551 to 478B.C, influenced the development of chopsticks.7.Which is reported, the number of smokers has dropped by 17 percentin just one year.（为名词性从句埋下伏笔）Step 3 Presentation合并句子例句：Those people are the happiest. Those people maker others happy. Those people who make others happy are the happiest.练习题1.Li Hua is a confident boy. All of the students like him very much..2.Li Hua will be an excellent chairman. He has many good personalqualities.3.Thanks for his assistance. I can’t make great progress in Englishwithout his assistance.4.He can get along with all the classmates. It makes us feel good.仿句练习1.他很热心肠，总是帮助那些有困难的人。
定语从句在写作中的运用1.contradiction n. Saying sth that conflicts with sth said or written by sb;disagreement反驳；矛盾2.obstacle n. Thing which stands in the way and prevents progress 障碍；阻碍3.approval n. Showing or saying that one thinks sth is good or acceptable or satisfactory赞成；承认4.revelation n. Making known sth that was secret or hidden;revealing 启示；揭示5.critic n. Person who evaluates and describes the quality of sth,esp works ofart,literature,music,etc 批评家；评论家6.sponsor n. Person who agrees to be responsible for sth; person who puts forward apreposal;sports eent, etc,usually in return for advertising 担保人；发起人；赞助者7.merchant n. Person who buys and sells goods in large quantities 商人8.Burglar n. Person who breaks into houses,shops,etc in order to steal 窃贼9.Sequence n. Order in which things or events follow one another 顺序；序列10.Squirrel n. Small tree-climbing animal with long furry tail that eats nuts and also storesthem for the winter 松鼠一、写作中常用的几种定语从句1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
广东高考解决方案—语法专题：定语从句概念关系代词关系词关系副词限制性定语从句分类非限制性定语从句关系代词+定语从句关系副词+定语从句句式介词+关系代词+定语从句as/which+非限制性定语从句只用that情况易错点只用which情况定语从句中的主谓一致分隔插入特殊结构多重省略内容 基本要求定语从句一、定语从句，先行词以及关系词的含义和用法； 二、限制性定语从句与非限制性定语从句的区别； 三、关系词中关系代词以及关系副词的区别和选用。
Task1:Happiness is a butterfly, which when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you will sit down quietly, may alight upon you.----Nathaniel Hawtrorne (1804-1864, American Writer)幸福就像蝴蝶，若去追捕，总难擒到，但静坐以待，却会翩然而至.Task2:I thought a thought. But the thought I thought wasn't the thought I thought I thought.If the thought I thought I thought had been the thought I thought, I wouldn’t have thought so much. 我有一种想法，但是我的这种想法不是我曾经想到的那种想法. 如果这种想法是我曾经想到的想法，我就不会想那么多了.Part A 定语从句基础知识高考要求 课前预习一、定语从句的概念定语可以由单词、短语来担任，也可以由一个句子来担任。
担任定语功能的句子称为定语从句。
定语从句所修饰的对象叫做先行词。
先行词通常是名词或代词，也可以是整个句子或句子中的某个成分。
定语从句在写作中的运用1.contradiction n. Saying sth that conflicts with sth said or written by sb;disagreement反驳；矛盾2.obstacle n. Thing which stands in the way and prevents progress 障碍；阻碍3.approval n. Showing or saying that one thinks sth is good or acceptable or satisfactory赞成；承认4.revelation n. Making known sth that was secret or hidden;revealing 启示；揭示5.critic n. Person who evaluates and describes the quality of sth,esp works ofart,literature,music,etc 批评家；评论家6.sponsor n. Person who agrees to be responsible for sth; person who puts forward apreposal;sports eent, etc,usually in return for advertising 担保人；发起人；赞助者7.merchant n. Person who buys and sells goods in large quantities 商人8.Burglar n. Person who breaks into houses,shops,etc in order to steal 窃贼9.Sequence n. Order in which things or events follow one another 顺序；序列10.Squirrel n. Small tree-climbing animal with long furry tail that eats nuts and also storesthem for the winter 松鼠一、写作中常用的几种定语从句1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
Actually, we can't succeed in everything that we try. (2014·福建高考满分作文)A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.(2013·福建高考满分作文)没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years (2011·福建高考满分作文).Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. (2014·辽宁高考满分作文)I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. (2014·湖北高考满分作文)People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes, which are the special food for this festival.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。
2．关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when，where，why引导的定语从句。
The reason why people celebrate the festival is that they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the whole year, and people will gather together eating mooncakes and appreciating the full moon.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们庆祝这个节日的原因是，他们相信这时候是一年中月亮最满、最亮的时候，人们聚在一起吃月饼、赏满月。
3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句Years of school life have taught me a lot of things, of which what strikes me most is that we should take care not to hurt others with our words, deliberately or by accident.(2013·湖北高考满分作文)多年的校园生活教会了我很多东西，其中使我印象最深的是我们应该尽量不要用言语伤害别人，无论是故意还是无意。
[即时演练]用适当的关系词填空1．Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.(2013·广东高考满分作文)2．As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.(2013·广东高考满分作文) 3．Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. (2014·辽宁高考满分作文)4．The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. (2014·安徽高考满分作文)5．She was educated at Beijing University, after which she went to have her advanced study abroad.二、定语从句的写法定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”：第一步：写出两个简单句。
第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个词在两个简单句中都有。
第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意引导词的选择。
[示例]第一步：写出两个简单句。
①The foreigner is from Canada.②He visited our class yesterday.第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：the foreigner。
第三步：用句②充当定语从句，the foreigner为先行词指人，句②中的代词he指代the foreigner且在句子中作主语，故用who或that作引导词。
The foreigner who/that visited our class yesterday is from Canada.[即时演练]把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句1．I've always longed for the days. I will be able to be independent then.I've_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent.2．I have a friend. Her father is an engineer.I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.3．They planted the trees. The trees didn't need much water.They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didn't_need_much_water.4．This is the best method. It can be used against pollution.This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution.5．They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them. The elderly always feel lonely.They_sent_some_fruits_to_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely,_cleaned_the_rooms_and_ had_a_good_chat_with_them.三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项1．误用关系词误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.正：I live in Beijing, which is the capital of China.误：I have a friend, who's name is Liu Mei.正：I have a friend, whose name is Liu Mei.2．句子残缺误：There were many students took part in the English competition.正：There were many students who took part in the English competition.误：Those who in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.正：Those who are in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.3．有多余词误：The film I saw it last night was really very good.正：The film I saw last night was really very good.误：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood.正：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood.4．定语从句与并列句的混淆误：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people's health.正：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which/and it does great harm to people's health.误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, it didn't help.正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, which/but it didn't help.[即时演练]单句改错1．Those have work experience can find a job easily.________________答案：Those后加who2．Some songs remind us of the people which we love.________________答案：which→ who(m)3．This is the factory we visited it last year.________________答案：去掉it4．She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area.________________答案：where→ which/that5．As a child, Jack studied in a village school, it is named after his grandfather.________________答案：it→ which或在it前加and[综合演练提升]I.用定语从句翻译短语1.一个叫做Tom的男孩_____________________2.教我们英语的老师_____________________3.昨天我妈妈给我的钱_________________________4.矗立在河边的楼房______________________________5.一位皮包被偷了的女士_________________________________6.我们在农场工作的开心日子__________________________________7.她工作的地方______________________8.她没有交作业的原因____________________________总结：定语从句可以修饰主句的不同成分—主语，宾语，表语非限制性定语从句，有时可以修饰整个主句。
