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.定语从句在写作中的运用背景分析：定语从句在英语学习中既是一个重点也是一个难点，且在写作中的作用尤为重要。
而在写作的过程中，同学们使用定语从句的时候出现了很多的错误。
通过必修一unit 1和unit 2, 已经分别把关系代词和关系副词讲解了。
所以，利用必修二unit1，把关系代词引导的定语从句运用到作文中，帮助同学们进一步正确使用好定语从句。
并且，可以依据这一模板，可以做一个关于名词性从句在作文中运用这类专题。
教学目标：1.明确定语从句中关系代词的位置和作用（复习必修一unit 4和unit5的语法知识）。
2.能够正确使用关系代词。
教学重难点:能够正确使用关系代词在作文中的应用。
教学步骤：Step 1 Revision复习定语从句的相关概念以及关系代词的用法。
Step 2 Lead in高考链接----单句改错(提示：找主句，先行词，在从句中充当什么成分，选用关系词) 1.I will never forget the days when we spent together. 2.English is a language shared by several diverse cultures, all of themuses it differently.3. Please send us all the information which you have about the candidate for the position.4.The books on the desk, which covers are shiny, are prizes for us.5.She reads a poem which Carver wrote it 4 years ago.6.Some people think that the great Chinese scholar Confucius, whichlived from roughly 551 to 478B.C, influenced the development of chopsticks.7.Which is reported, the number of smokers has dropped by 17 percentin just one year.（为名词性从句埋下伏笔）Step 3 Presentation合并句子例句：Those people are the happiest. Those people maker others happy. Those people who make others happy are the happiest.练习题1.Li Hua is a confident boy. All of the students like him very much..2.Li Hua will be an excellent chairman. He has many good personalqualities.3.Thanks for his assistance. I can’t make great progress in Englishwithout his assistance.4.He can get along with all the classmates. It makes us feel good.仿句练习1.他很热心肠，总是帮助那些有困难的人。
定语从句在写作中的运用1.contradiction n. Saying sth that conflicts with sth said or written bysb;disagreement反驳；矛盾2.obstacle n. Thing which stands in the way and prevents progress 障碍；阻碍3.approval n. Showing or saying that one thinks sth is good or acceptable orsatisfactory 赞成；承认4.revelation n. Making known sth that was secret or hidden;revealing 启示；揭示5.critic n. Person who evaluates and describes the quality of sth,esp works ofart,literature,music,etc 批评家；评论家6.sponsor n. Person who agrees to be responsible for sth; person who puts forwarda preposal;sports eent, etc,usually in return for advertising 担保人；发起人；赞助者7. merchant n. Person who buys and sells goods in large quantities 商人8.Burglar n. Person who breaks into houses,shops,etc in order to steal 窃贼9.Sequence n. Order in which things or events follow one another 顺序；序列10.Squirrel n. Small tree-climbing animal with long furry tail that eats nuts andalso stores them for the winter 松鼠一、写作中常用的几种定语从句1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
定语从句复习及定语从句在写作中的运用定语从句是用来修饰一个名词或代词的从句，常常用来提供更多的信息或限定名词的范围。
在写作中，定语从句可以用来丰富文章内容、加强句子的表达能力。
定语从句的结构是：关系词 + 主句。
关系词可以是关系代词（who, whom, whose, which, that）或关系副词（where, when, why）。
以下是定语从句的一些常用结构和运用方式：1.关系代词引导的定语从句：- 关系代词“who”用来修饰人，代替主语或宾语。
例：The woman who is talking to Tom is my sister.- 关系代词“which”用来修饰事物，代替主语或宾语。
例：The book which I borrowed from the library is very interesting.- 关系代词“that”既可以修饰人也可以修饰事物，代替主语或宾语。
例：The car that I bought last month is very fast.2.关系副词引导的定语从句：- 关系副词“where”用来修饰地点。
例：I want to visit the city where I was born.- 关系副词“when”用来修饰时间。
例：That was the day when I met my best friend.- 关系副词“why”通常用来修饰原因。
例：I don't understand the reason why he left.在写作中，定语从句的运用可以使得句子更加清晰和有层次感。
定语从句可以用来进一步描述一个名词或代词，提供更多的细节或背景信息。
它能够使句子的结构更复杂，增加句子的长度和表达的深度。
在使用定语从句时，需要注意以下几点：-确保定语从句和主句之间的逻辑关系清晰明确，不产生歧义。
-使用合适的关系代词或关系副词来引导定语从句，根据需要选择适当的修饰词。
定语从句之于写作的意义？一简单句合并●定语从句可将两个或两个以上的简单句进行信息的融合。
●三个以上的简单句往往会借助同位语，使句子表述变得简单自然。
S1：Harry Porter is a boy.S2：He has a scar on his forehead.S1+S2Harry Porter is a boy who has a scar on his forehead.2.三个句子的合并（适当运用同位语）John，my best friend，gave me a gift，which he bought from USA●Kate，a new student from a northern province，speaks a dialectwhich we find hard to understand.●Wangmeng，a girl of 25 , who was born in Hei Longing Provice，began her skating training at the age of 10.I phone，苹果公司制做，深受年轻人的欢迎。
●I phone，a kind of cell phone which is made by Apple，is quitepopular among teenagers.三.非限指代整句/先行词的使用我们不应该参加选秀节目，这会影响学习。
We should not take part in the talent show,and this has a bad effect on study.比较:We should not take part in the talent show, which has a bad effect on study.小结：1.指代整句话，丰富句子结构2.指代先行词，此句式可以对题目中没有说明的情况，进行细节补充，丰富先行词。
定语从句在写作中的运用定语从句在写作中的运用定语从句，一个简单句跟在一名词或代词后（先行词）进行修饰限定，就叫做定语从句。
下面是店铺为你带来的定语从句在写作中的运用，欢迎阅读。
1.The Chinese knots ,which I made by myself with red silk thread and other material, look really beautiful in the shape of diamond. （2013年广西卷）2. I will organize some campus activities, like “English Evening”, a platform where students can show their Engli sh （2013年天津卷）3.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. (2012全国卷 )4. In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. (2012·全国卷Ⅱ)5. My physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.（2012安徽卷）6. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life. （2012江苏）7. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. (2012·湖北)8. Dear friends , please actively take part in after-class activities , which will not only make your school life colorful , but also improve your learning.（2011四川卷）9. I have taken with me the two books (that) you asked me to return to the City Library. (2009全国I)10.The reason why we have to grow trees is that they supply us fresh air.11. I always miss the days when we were on the summer camp last year.12. It's time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. （2007年湖南卷）例子解读The Hungarian shadow-dancer gave us a performance at 2014 Spring Festival gala.I fell in love with the amazing and wonderful performance.合成定语从句I fall in love with the wonderful performance that / which the Hungarian shadow-dancer gave us at 2014 Spring Festival gala.They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.The elderly always feel lonely.合成定语从句They sent the elderly who always feel lonely some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them.I'd like to attend the English lecture.I can get more information on British and American culture from the English lecture.合成定语从句I'd like to attend the English lecture, from which I can get more information on British and American culture.They showed us around the farm.we saw many beautiful flowers on the farm合成定语从句They showed us around the farm where we saw many beautiful flowers.The reason is not clear.He refused the invitation for the reason.合成定语从句The reason why he refused the invitation is not clear.I've always longed for the days.I will be able to be independent then.合成定语从句I've always longed for the days when I will be able to be independent.练习：1.我将把我所知道的每一件事都告诉你。
定语从句在书面表达中的使用一、定语从句的类型1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who, whom, whose, that, which, as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。
①I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.②Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.③Only those who spare no effort to confront problems can achieve what they long for.④As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass.2．关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when, where, why引导的定语从句。
①During holiday seasons, I will live in the countryside, where air is fresh and people are friendly.②I think the reason why you are always angry may be the high pressure of study3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句①Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.②I bought a great many books, on which I spent all my money that I saved.1．因此，我认为我能得一个高分，这个分数能使我进入一个理想的大学。
①So I suppose I can get a good mark,________________________________________________________________________.②_____________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)。
3. 分词做状语______________________________________________________________________2．我们都喜欢我们的英语老师，我们已向她学习了很多东西。
①We all like our English teacher.________________________________________________ __.②_________________________________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)3．我总是盼望着我独立的那一天。
①I've always longed for the days, I ________________________________________________.②____________________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)4．事实上，我来这儿拜访我叔叔，目前他碰巧在你们城市工作。
①As a matter of fact, I am here visiting my uncle.____________________________________________________________________________.②_______________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)5．在几次我班的英语活动中我已帮助她，这受到老师和同学的欣赏。
①I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class. ________________________________.②I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, ______________________________.二、定语从句的常用句型1．As we all know.../As is known to all...众所周知……众所周知，小孩和老年人都需要温暖和关心。
_________________________________________________________.2．As sb. puts it...按照某人所说的……按照他常说的，大学教育决定一个人的命运。
_________________________________________________________ 3．such...as...像……这样的；诸如此类的……信不信由你，世界上没有免费午餐之类的事情___________________________________________________________ 4．As the old saying goes, ……常言道…….常言道，熟能生巧。
________________________________________________________________________.5．the same...as.../the same as...像……一样的她对他的方式和态度与以前完全一样。
Her manner and attitudes towards him were quite the same ___________________________________.6．one of the＋复数名词＋定语从句……中的一个据我所知，你妹妹是通过考试的学生之一。
__________________________________________________________.7．the only one of the＋复数名词＋定语从句……中唯一的一个格林先生是这些工人中唯一被邀请去北京的。
________________________________________________________.1．另外，正如古老的谚语所说，“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。
_____________________________________________.2．使我非常高兴的是，Michael在我同学面前高度评价了我的好成绩，这使我感到自豪。
Much to my delight, Michael sang high praise for my great achievements before my classmates, _____________________________________________________________________________.3．我们大家都知道，这幅画讲述的是古代中国的一个故事。
____________，the picture tells a story of ancient China.4．据我所知，她就是这样一个总是乐于助人的女孩。
As far as I know, she is ____________ always ready to help others.5．长城是吸引大批游客的世界著名的建筑之一。
The Great Wall is ____________________________ lots of visitors.三、定语从句写作时需避免的几种情况1．误用关系词误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.改：__________误：I have a friend, who's name is Liu Mei. .改：__________2．句子成分残缺误：There were many students took part in the English competition. .改：__________误：Those who in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands. .改：__________3．有多余的代词或副词误：The film I saw it last night was really very good. .改：__________误：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood. .改：__________4．混淆定语从句与并列句误：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people's health. .改：__________误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, it didn't help. .改：__________即学即练(单句改错)1．We can hear birds singing happily all around. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting.________2．John invited about 40 people to his wedding, most of who were family members.________3．The yellow house which windows face south is the place where I spent my childhood.________4．She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area.________5．As a child, Jack studied in a village school, it is named after his grandfather.________1. 我希望你能帮助我们班的学生更多地了解英语和西方文化，这能增进我们的理解并有助于我们建立良好的关系。
