基础写作系列之 地点.ppt

Writing suggestions
审题：文体，主体时态和人称； 考虑篇章结构; 确定要点，写出相关英语词语； 根据所列词语，写出句子(表达变化)； 连句成篇，恰当使用过渡词语和适当
增加细节。
Hainan Island
When you come to Hainan, the second largest island in China, you will find it mild all the year round and the places of interest there are really a feast for eyes.
People there get many ways to earn their living, for example, growing rice, fishing and so on. Tourism is also developing fast with its vast coastline and natural harbors.
It covers an area of 35,000 square kilometers with a history of over 6000 years. The population of it is 7.11 million, which consists of 10 ere is mild all the year around. 四季温和
常用语句：useful expression
5.其他（other things）
transportation convenient
economy
prosperous
environment harmonious

✓2、说明顺序。一般从基本情况（地理位置、人口、面积）到 延伸内容（政治文化等）。
✓3、避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定背景， 避免用it做主语引导，第1句应该具体写出描述的对象，如The Great Wall，Hong Kong等。
【常用语块】
1、与……为领/接壤 2、由……组成 3、坐落在 4、充当/用作…… 5、高度发达的 6、著名景点 7、官方语言 8、第三大城市
……It is convenient for you 对你来说会很方便。
【优秀作文范本】
假定你是学生李华，你去参加英语夏令营，老师 要求每个学生介绍自己的家乡。请你写一篇介绍 稿介绍你的家乡。
要点如下：1.地理位置。2.人口历史。3.其他情况。
注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Dear friends, I would like to introduce my hometown to you. My hometown, neighboring Hong Kong, is located in Guangdong Province of
China. It has a history of more than 300 years and a population of two million. With its highly-developed economy, the people in my hometown are leading a happy life. It offers children modern education and 90% of the high school leavers are admitted to universities.

常用词组及句子
• 5. 历史: 1)有五百多年的悠久历史：
have/with a long history of more than 500 years
2) 起源于：
originate from/in…; have ito…/date from… (只用于主动态)
Local products:
1) Sp. is rich/ abundant in… 2) …be famous/well-known for… 3) …be home to …
Taishan
Local products:
seafood
rice
Taishan is rich in rice and seafood.
常用词组及句子
• 2). 地位: 1)政治/经济/文化中心：
the political/economic/cultural center
2) 在…上发挥重要作用：
play an important/essential role in…
3) 是…的省会/首都：
is the capital of …
4) 世界第二大国家：
Conghua City
从化以温泉为名，吸 引众多游客周末于此 度假。
hot springs
Known for its hot springs, the city of Conghua attracts numerous visitors to spend their holiday and enjoy themselves here.
dry/ humid(damp) / mild
2) 雨量充沛：
have/with adequate rainfall

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Step3 Polish sentences 合并润色(小组讨论)
1. Shan wei is located in the east of Guangdong. It is a coastal city with a long history.
①用并列句 ②分词短语③同位语④.定语从句 2. It covers an area of 5200 square kilometers.
It has a population of about 360 million. ①With结构 ②分词短语 3. The climate here is pleasant.
It is rich in natural resources. not only…but also 4. Every year, the famous places of interest such as Feng ShanTemple and Red Bay attract many tourists at home andabroad. ①.There be…定语从句/ 分词短语 ②....be famous for …so that ③.With ..., it is no wonder that
坐落于 be l_o_c_a_t_ed in/ on / to /… 由…包围__b__e_s_u_r_r_o_u_n_d_e_d by 坐落于 stand _a_t _th_e__fo_o_t__o_f脚下

6. 物产： …丰富 / 盛产
be rich in /be abundant in 自然 / 旅游资源
natural / travelling resources 7. 特色：
以…闻名
be famous for/ be well-known for 8. 景观：
风景名胜
places of interest 吸引世界各地的游客
Part 2 范文解析
Basic Writing — Dan Xia Mountain
• The information you need is as follows.
地理位置 韶关北部，距离广州280千米
面积 215平方千米，列广东众山之首
人口 170，000
气候 夏热冬凉，秋季为最佳旅游季节
have/with a population of..., the population of … is…
the climate is..., enjoy the nice weather
have/with a history of...
Characteristics: be famous/known for/as, place of interest, be rich in...
170,000.
History历史:
• ⑹ 丹霞山拥有超过1400年的历史。
• Dan Xia Mountain has a history of more than 1400 years.
Combine the two sentences, can you?
Dan Xia Mountain has a population of 170,000, and it has a history of more than 1400 years.

year.
4.It _c_o_v_e_rs__a_n__a_re_a__o_f10,000 square kilometers
_w_i_th__a_p_o__p_u_la_t_io_n__o_f (人口) over 2million.
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Ⅲ. 面积
词汇:__c_o_v_e_r_/h_a_v_e__a_n_a_r_e_a_o_f_…__s_q_u__a_re__k_il_o_m_e_t_e_r_s, __ta_k_e__u_p_…__s_q_u_a_r_e_k_i_lo_m__e_t_e_rs_/_m_e_t_e_r_s_…_____
people
hospitable,friendly,kind…
with 56 ethnic groups （…少数民族）
capital city of the country/ province （国家首府/省会城市）
eye-catching scenery with four distinct (clear-cut) seasons.四季分 明
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句型
1. Guangzhou, __c_a_p_it_a_l_o_f_G__u_a_n_g_d_o_n_g__P_r_o_v_in_c_e__
(广东省会), _l_i_e_s_i_n__(位于) the south of China .
2. The temple s_t_a_n_d_s_on the top of/at the foot of the mountain. (stand)
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写作训练：请你用5句话介绍我国首都北京。
[写作内容]
1. 北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政 治、文化中心。
2. 全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口1400余万， 是全国第二大城市。

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• 加拿大是世界第二大的国家，面积约9976000平 方公里，人口约3000多万。
• 它位于北美大陆的北部，东临大西洋，西临太平 洋，南面与美国接壤。
• 英语和法语是加拿大的官方语言。 • 渥太华Ottawa 是世界最美的首都之一，是人们
定居的好地方。 • Calgary 以赛马会闻名世界，每年有很多牛仔来
resources。 • 中国是一个有丰富的自然资源的国家
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• 名胜：
• place of interest 名胜古迹，名胜风景 • with many tourist attractions 有许多旅游景点 • Be famous for … 以…而闻名 • Be famous as… 作为……而闻名
down.
• Calgary is famous for the Calgary Stampede, when
cowboys from all over the world come to compete
there.
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• summary
• what have you learned today? • Can you introduce a place to your friend now ?
• be rich in ……丰富 ，盛产……
• be famous for … 以…而闻名
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1. 加拿大约占世界四分之一陆地面积，是世界第 二大国。（含定语从句）
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1. 加拿大约占世界四分之一陆地面积，是世界第 二大国。（含定语从句）
Canada, which covers about a quarter of the world’s land area, is the second largest country in the world.

history of over 20 years , it 4_w_a__s_r_e_b__u_il_t_(build) in
2008. When 5_w__a_l_k_in_g__(walk) through the garden,
you can see 6_v_a_r_io__u_s__(vary) kinds of beautiful flowers, trees and herbs. Not only 7_c_a_n__/d__o_e_s the
实战演练二
◆Rewrite the following passage:
Our Zengcheng lies to the west of Guangzhou . It
has a population of 800,000. It covers an area of about
1,741square kilometres . It has a a warm climate and
be rich in place(s) of interest
Task1: Correct or rewrite(改写)the following sentences, and then give explanations by the students whose answers are right. (1-3 by group1-4; 4-5 by group5-9)
5. Our school has a botanical garden and it has
an area of about 1000 square metres and it is
located at the south-west corner of our

Useful words and expressions:
位置 占地面积 平方公里 人口 宜人的气候 多风 雨少 年平均气温 悠久的历史 富饶的 矿藏 水产 旅游城市 举办城市 一年一度 国际风筝节 be located in cover an area of square kilometers a population of a pleasant climate windy little rain yearly average temperature a long history be rich in mineral resources seafood products tourist city host city annual International Kite Flying Festival
Translate the following sentences:
潍坊位于山东半岛中部. 潍坊位于山东半岛中部. 潍坊的总面积1.59万平方公里. 万平方公里. 潍坊的总面积 万平方公里 潍坊的人口863万. 潍坊的人口 万 潍坊气候宜人. 潍坊气候宜人. 潍坊春季风多雨少. 潍坊春季风多雨少. 潍坊的年平均气温摄氏12.3度. 潍坊的年平均气温摄氏 度 潍坊有着悠久的历史. 潍坊有着悠久的历史. 潍坊有富饶的矿产和水产资源. 潍坊有富饶的矿产和水产资源. 潍坊是中国优秀旅游城市. 潍坊是中国优秀旅游城市. 潍坊自1984年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节. 年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节. 潍坊自 年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节
Welcome you to Weifang! Located in the middle of Shandong Peninsula, Weifang covers an area of 15.9 square kilometers with a population of 8.63 million. The climate here is pleasant and enjoyable, especially in spring when it is windy and has little rain. And the average temperature of Weifang is just 12.3°C. What's ° more, as an outstanding tourist city with a long history in China, Weifang is rich in both mineral resources and seafood products. Therefore, Weifang has been the host city of the annual International Kite Flying Festival since 1984. I wish you a pleasant stay here!

4. Our school , which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size.
Surroundings (周边环境) 1) stands, 2) surrounded by,
3) faces…
1.The beautiful town is located /situated on the west of the lake / to the west of the mountain / in the west of the province. 2. West of the city stands a tall building. 3. Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces to a clear river on the east.
练习：请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个 规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。
新丰县位于广东省北部，历史悠久，是一 个山区县，自然资源如矿产、森林、农产 品等非常丰富，总面积2015平方公里， 人口约24万，气候宜人，夏天不是太热， 冬天不是太冷。云髻山是新丰县的风景胜 地之一,每年吸引大量游客。
第一步，提取信息：
Transport (交通): 1) It is very convenient for 2) The best way to experience… is 3) It takes … to take a bus from…
to…
4) … is only a few bus stops from
downtown.
Places of interest (名胜) 1)The places around our city are rich in natural resources. 2)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 3)The city is well-known / famous for its…/as… 4)The city is home to … 5) … is a must-see for tourists, as…