高考英语二轮复习书面表达专项指导训练19(含解析)

考点8 书面表达—五年（2020—2024年）高考英语真题专项分类汇编一、【2024年新课标卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。

请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：1. 你完成的作品；2. 你的感想。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday. _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________Yours,Li Hua二、【2023年新课标卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。

请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 说明问题；2. 提出建议。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Ryan,I’m Li Hua from Class3._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Hua三、【2022年新高考卷】假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

1．提示形式固定。

近几年的书面表达多是以“文字提纲”的方式呈现，要点明确，任务具体，结构清晰。

文字提示已成为高考书面表达的主要命题形式。

2．体裁注重应用。

近几年书面表达的体裁大都是应用文，应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体，它最突出的特点是它的实际应用性。

应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同、稿件等。

应用文重在实用，语言规范，表达力求朴实、准确、简洁。

3．话题贴近学生生活。

近几年的书面表达都秉承了“让学生有话说”的原则。

内容来自于学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题，贴近生活、贴近学生、贴近时代，题目设置的情景真实可信，符合学生的年龄特点，话题易于拓展，让每个学生都有话说，易于动笔。

一、内容解读提纲作文是高考书面表达的考查热点之一。

命题者把材料分割成信息块，用独立的文字信息表示出来。

这类题型中有较多的文字说明，对考生的表述思路有较明确的规定。

形式以书信、报道、通知、日记等为主，内容贴近学生生活。

二、能力解读根据《考试大纲》中对于写作的要求，提纲类作文要求考生能够灵活运用英语知识，根据相关信息将试题要求的要点完整地表述出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。

这类题型的主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体。

考生极容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成翻译，造成语法结构和词汇使用上的单调。

要写好提纲式作文，应注意以下几点：1、细读提示，认真审题，把握体裁审题应包括：审体裁，高考书面表达题的体裁一般有记叙文、说明文和应用文等；审格式，特别注意掌握应用文(书信、通知、演讲稿等)的格式；定人称，根据命题内容需要，对人称进行合理的选择定位；定时态，英语的动词与汉语的动词用法有很大的差别，是考生常出错误的地方。

2、紧扣主题，组织要点虽然提纲作文的“要点”似乎已经定好了，但在认真审题，弄清楚题意的基础上，仍要逐个地、完美无缺地把内容要点列出来。

3、选词造句，初步成文在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序选词造句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。

专题六书面表达应用文写作常见8大文体(一)——普通书信/电子邮件一、写作架构要规范可根据作文要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。

具体写作结构为：二、靓点句式背一番(一)1．I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two days ago.我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。

2．There is nothing happier to me than to receive your letter.再也没有比收到你的来信更让我开心的了。

3．Sorry to reply to your letter so late.抱歉这么晚才给你回信。

(二)主体部分常用语1．I’ve been thinking about the question you wrote in the letter. In my opinion, you should ...我一直在思考你信中提到的问题。

在我看来，你应该……2．If necessary, we can arrange a face-to-face discussion sometime this week.如果有必要，本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。

(三)结尾常用语1．I’d appreciate it if you could make a response at your earliest convenience.如果您能在方便时尽早回信，我将非常感激。

2．Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。

三、润色完善很关键(2018·度过高三毕业后的暑假。

请你给Peter回复邮件，内容包括：1．对暑假的期盼；2．你的假期计划及理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

(一)准审题、准表达保基本分定体裁电子邮件定人称第一人称为主定时态一般现在时为主定要点定结构开头：引入话题，写邮件的背景(期盼暑假) 主体：假期计划及理由(去北京旅游、兼职等) 结尾：表达心情，并期待对方尽早回复[中档作文]Dear Peter，I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination❶.Then I can do a lot of amazing things❷.First❸，I plan to take a trip to Beijing❹.It is the center of politics and culture❺.It can not only broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture❻.❼I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good chance❽for me to promote myself.I belie v e❾the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I hope I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)Dear Peter，I’m more than delighted to hear from you.As is expected, I have been looking forward to the upcoming summer holiday after the College Entrance Examination, (1)during which I can do a lot of amazing things (❶❷句合并升级为定语从句)．(2)To start/begin with (词汇升级❸), I plan to take a trip to Beijing, (3)the center of politics and culture (❹❺句合并升级为名词短语作同位语)．(4)Not only can it broaden my view but also help me learn more about the Chinese culture (升级句❻为倒装句)．(5)What’s more(❼前加过渡词汇), I have applied for a part-time job in the city library.Summer holiday is a good (6)opportunity (词汇升级❽) for me to promote myself.I (7)hold the firm belief that (词汇升级❾) the job can help me make full preparations for the college stly, I’d like to read books as many as possible.I (8) do hope (升级句为强调句) I will have a full and colourful summer holiday.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua四、“一题两用”错不犯Dear Peter，You can’t imagine what glad I was when I received your letter asking me for the plans in summer holiday.Actually, I have been longing for a relaxed and meaningful summer holiday.The first thing coming to my mind is to get a driving license, what I think is a must for most college student in China.Apart from a completely relaxation, I also plan to take an English course to improve my speaking English.In addition to, I want to take active part in different social activities to better myself.I believe the holiday must be fascinating before I finish the College Entrance Examination.I can’t wait to enjoy them!Yours，Li Hua 答案：第一句：what→how第二句：relaxed→relaxing第三句：what→which; student→students第四句：completely→complete; speaking→spoken第五句：去掉第一个to; take后加an第六句：before→after第七句：them→it应用文写作常见8大文体(二)——邀请信一、写作架构要规范难。

第一编专题五第1讲写作增分练1词汇升级练Exercise 1利用高级词汇和过渡词提升下面的作文(2018·皖南八校二模)假定你是李华。

你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围”。

请你根据提示给他写一封英文回信。

内容包括：1．宣传标语用英汉双语；2．开设汉语角；3．邀请汉语外教来学校上课。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

考生作文Dear Tom，How are you doing？I’m very glad to hear from you. From your letter，I know that your class will develop the students’interest in Chinese learning. I want to share some advice with you.Firstly，all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English，which can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese. Secondly，you should set up a Chinese Corner in your class，where you can practice your spoken Chinese. Finally，your class should invite some Chinese teachers to come to school to communicate with students.I really hope my suggestions can be helpful for you. Looking forward to getting your good news soon.Best wishes！Yours sincerely，Li Hua 我来提升1．利用高级词汇升级文中加黑体词汇(1)very glad→ __more than delighted__(2)want to→ __would like to__(3)should→ __are supposed to__(4)be helpful for→ __be beneficial to/be of great benefit to__2．利用高级过渡词汇升级文中斜体的过渡词(1)Firstly→ __To begin with__(2)Secondly→ __In addition/Additionally/Besides/What’s more__(3)Finally→ __Last but not the least__Exercise 2根据写作内容，利用高级词汇和过渡词补全下面的习作(2018·江西临川二模)假如你叫李华。

第19天/name—occupy(训练日期月日) Ⅰ.单词拼写1．There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby (在附近)．2．In my opinion, the Internet has negative (负面的) effects on our lives.3．In addition, what may interest you most is that I am really nervous (紧张的) and upset when taking the exam.4．A notice (布告；通知) was put up in order to remind the students of the changed lecture time.5．Nowadays (如今，现在) people separated their waste to make it easier to be reused.6．I’m going nowhere (任何地方都不) until you are back.7．Soldiers are expected to obey (服从) orders without questioning them.8．Those national parks obtained(得到)financial support from tourist companies last year.9．It is obvious (显而易见) that China will make a difference in the world today and tomorrow.10．Occasions (时机，机会) are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day with my kids.Ⅱ.用括号中单词的适当形式填空1．I took part in a national (nation) speaking contest on behalf of our school and won first place.2．We are planning a trip to Yuntai Mountain in Henan Province, which is famous for its beautiful natural (nature) scenery.3．Charles Dickens is one of England’s most famous novelists (novel)．4．He is always too busy with his work that he has no choice but to go to see his parents occasionally (occasion)．5．The children used to play noisily upstairs and the noise could be heard far away. The neighbours were very annoyed about the noisy environment.(noise)6．Grey decided to move to the countryside and his mother made no objection to it, while his father objected to it.(object)7．She had an outstanding ability of observation, and she observed a letter on the table which read “Please observe the local customs.” (observe)8．He occupies an important position in a company, and is occupied with all kinds of activities, so his occupation brings him great fame and fortune. (occupy)Ⅲ.根据括号中的汉语提示完成句子1．Jack studied in a village school, which is named after (以……的名字命名) his grandfather.2．We should help those who are in great need if necessary (如果有必要)．3．When they got there, they found the people suffering the storm were in need of (需要) food and water supplies.4．He sat down at a table next to (紧挨着) the front window.5．In order to get ready for the examination, the students are studying day and night (日夜)．6．The first prize winner nodded to/at (向……点头示意) his supporters in the crowd.7．The crisis has passed and life will return to normal (恢复正常) soon.8．Your son has a good nose for (对……有敏锐的嗅觉) stories, so he will become a good journalist before long.9．Next time you chat with a friend, take note of (注意) how you are sitting.10．John’s success has nothing to do with (和……无关) good luck.It is years of hard work that has made him what he is today.11．Now that (既然) you have a good command of English, you can apply for the job.12．I have been so occupied with (忙于，专心于) work that I haven’t had time for social activities.Ⅳ.写出加黑部分在语境中的词性及含义1．narrow (熟义：adj.狭窄的)Parents and children should communicate more to narrow the gap between them so that they can understand each other better. v t.缩小，使变窄2．nobody (熟义：pron.没有人)I want to be somebody, and I’m tired of being a nobody. n.小人物，无足轻重的人3．note (熟义：n.笔记)①He played the first few notes of the tune. n.单音；音调②I noted that her hands were dirty. v.注意；留意4．nurse (熟义：n.护士)While nursing her ill elder sister throughout the years, Charlotte discovered she had an interest in medicine. v t.照料，护理5．observe (熟义：v.观察)The traffic rules should be observed strictly；otherwise you will get into trouble. v.遵循Ⅴ.用括号中动词的适当形式填空1．I asked him if he would help me and he nodded (nod)．2．(2016·江苏高考书面表达) Therefore, rules of Internet voting should be worked out and strictly observed (observe)．3．Occupied (occupy) in looking after three children at home, she no longer has time to enjoy the various activities in the club.Ⅵ.改正下列句子中的唯一错误1．The performer was waving his stick in the street and it narrow missed the child standing nearby.narrow→narrowly2．As we all know, pandas are native for China.for→to3．When I graduated from high school, I joined in the navy.去掉in4．One of our neighbour kept a very beautiful garden.neighbour→neighbours5．The research group produced two reports based on the survey, but none contained any useful suggestions.none→neither6．When we’re happy, our body works normal and we feel relaxed and positive. normal→normally7．Today the number of people learning English in China are increasing rapidly.are→isⅦ.用括号中的参考词汇表达句子1．因此，我认为很有必要采取行动缓解日益增长的压力。

专题六书面表达
[ 三年考情分析]
[命题规律]
1．体裁以书信类为主，近三年全国九套卷有八套考的是书信类，需注意2018年全国卷Ⅱ为通知，这是继2014年辽宁高考后再一次考书面通知。

书信和通知都属于应用文。

2．近三年的书信类以及今年的通知都没有给出开头或结尾，这就要求考生注意书信和通知的格式。

3．命题形式主要是提纲式，有文字提示，但开放性在增大，有些也可归类为半开放式。

4．话题贴近考生的日常生活，常涉及中学生的学习、生活以及他们所熟悉和关注的话题，特别是弘扬中国传统文化，突出中国传统价值观。

[命题趋势]
1．预计2019年全国卷高考对书面表达的考查仍将是文字提示类作文，以书信类为主，但为了使考生发挥出写作水平，试题将保持较大的开放性，给出的提纲会高度简洁、概括，为考生留有较大的发挥空间。

2．话题选取与考生的学习、生活、价值观等密切相关，包括学校生活、人际交往、社会活动、传统文化等，重在考查实际生活中的书面表达能力。

[书面表达解题四步骤]
第一步：认真审题
(1)审体裁，避免格式错误；(2)审时间，避免时态错误；(3)审语气，避免直白生硬。

第二步：拟全要点
研读题目要求中的关键词，用汉语将其写在稿纸上并作为扩展句子或段落的根据，拟点时要求考生仔细审题，对题目要求中的文章提示要仔细研读，确保要点全面。

第三步：适当补充
由于高考作文的文字提示比较简单，为了行文连贯和满足词数要求，必须适当补充细节，需注意的是在增加细节时一定要适当，切忌任意发挥，画蛇添足。

第四步：成文
合理使用过渡词和关联词，使作文条理清晰、结构层次分明、语言自然流畅。

1．提示形式固定。

近几年的书面表达多是以“文字提纲”的方式呈现，要点明确，任务具体，结构清晰。

文字提示已成为高考书面表达的主要命题形式。

2．体裁注重应用。

近几年书面表达的体裁大都是应用文，应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体，它最突出的特点是它的实际应用性。

应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同、稿件等。

应用文重在实用，语言规范，表达力求朴实、准确、简洁。

3．话题贴近学生生活。

近几年的书面表达都秉承了“让学生有话说”的原则。

内容来自于学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题，贴近生活、贴近学生、贴近时代，题目设置的情景真实可信，符合学生的年龄特点，话题易于拓展，让每个学生都有话说，易于动笔。

一、内容解读提纲作文是高考书面表达的考查热点之一。

命题者把材料分割成信息块，用独立的文字信息表示出来。

这类题型中有较多的文字说明，对考生的表述思路有较明确的规定。

形式以书信、报道、通知、日记等为主，内容贴近学生生活。

二、能力解读根据《考试大纲》中对于写作的要求，提纲类作文要求考生能够灵活运用英语知识，根据相关信息将试题要求的要点完整地表述出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。

这类题型的主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体。

考生极容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成翻译，造成语法结构和词汇使用上的单调。

要写好提纲式作文，应注意以下几点：1、细读提示，认真审题，把握体裁审题应包括：审体裁，高考书面表达题的体裁一般有记叙文、说明文和应用文等；审格式，特别注意掌握应用文(书信、通知、演讲稿等)的格式；定人称，根据命题内容需要，对人称进行合理的选择定位；定时态，英语的动词与汉语的动词用法有很大的差别，是考生常出错误的地方。

2、紧扣主题，组织要点虽然提纲作文的“要点”似乎已经定好了，但在认真审题，弄清楚题意的基础上，仍要逐个地、完美无缺地把内容要点列出来。

3、选词造句，初步成文在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序选词造句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。

2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习书面表达训练（1）应用文型基础写作1—1专题导读应用文是指日常生活和工作中为某种具体的实用目的而写的文体，主要有书信、通知、海报、请柬、请假条、便条、日记、启事、祝辞、履历表等。

应用文的语言力求平实、准确、简洁，表达的内容结构严谨，且易于理解掌握。

写作时要注意以下几点：1. 正式的应用文有比较规范的格式，但高考中的基础写作至今尚未考查过格式，只要求表达正文内容。

2 •注意时态，如日记常用过去时态，通知、请柬通常要用将来时态，而履历表用现在时 ^态。

3 .应用文的写作往往有一些特定的习惯语句或套话，这些语句在考试中可能会考查到，所以要重点掌握。

典例导练【xx •四川卷改编】最近，某中学生英文报开设了" After-class Activities ”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

【写作内容】1•你校开展课外活动的情况；2•你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；3•为同学选择课外活动提出建议；4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议。

【写作要求】1•只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2•文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总句数。

【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯One possible versionAfter-class ActivitiesNowadays，after-class activities are being more and more popular in high schools.In our school ，there are various kinds of activities ，which we enjoy very much.Playing football and reading stories are my favorites.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge ，they also free me from the heavy work of study.As a student ，you' d better choose the activities which interest you and on the other hand，the school should organize more activities for students and leave them more time for activities by giving them less homework.Dear friends ，please actively take part i n after-class activities.新题预测（一）【写作内容】假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter 找一个英语笔友。

专题07 优选精炼应用文写作1．（2023·黑龙江牡丹江·高三牡丹江市三中校考）假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办以“The Fruit of Labor Is the Sweetest”为主题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 劳动的益处；2. 简要介绍自己经常参加哪些劳动；3. 呼吁大家热爱劳动。

注意：1. 词数应为80词左右；2. 请按如下格式作答。

The Fruit of Labor Is the Sweetest___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________2．（2024上·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你所在的俱乐部下周将举办一场京剧(Beijing Opera)演出，请给你的外国京剧发烧友Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.告知活动详情；2.邀请他线上参加。

2019届高考英语二轮复习高效书面表达专题卷19（含解析）1．书面表达（满分30分）阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.Dear Editor:I am a new student at Haining Hongda Senior High School. My home is far from Haining, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldn’t help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do?Your early reply is expected.RegardsAmy请根据以上内容，写一封回信（信的开头已为你好。

词数120左右）。

回信应包括如下要点；1．鼓励Amy坚定求学信心，志存高远，四海为家。

2．就Amy的目前状况，提两到三个建议。

Dear Amy:Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.2．书面表达（满分30分）最近，有关食品安全报道屡见报端。

例如2009年奶粉中的三聚氰胺事件。