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写作笔记第一节课一、考试介绍（1个小时：20+40 两篇：150字+250字）1、写作要求：字数满足要求；回答所有问题；要有延伸拓展2、连词（灵活使用）（1）段落间连词：however/admittedly 让步反驳（2）段落内部连接词：首先—to begin with/in the first place/to commence with其次—secondly/in the second place/subsequently再次—in addition/additionaly/besides（3）结尾段使用的连接词：by way of conclusion/in conclusion/in summary3、词汇：有不常见词汇并进行替换、变换词性（1）不要拆字翻译（2）不要同义滥用（3）注意固定搭配解决：resolve = address = alleviate重要的：significant < crucial = critical = essential导致：give rise to = give birth to = contribute to新科技：advanced technology = cutting-edge technology犯罪：offence = (juvenile)delinquency环境污染：environment damage = environment contamination对词汇的要求：拼写准确；丰富多样；力求精确4、语法We had to purchase things in supermarkets in the past.（1）无灵主语：In the past, supermarkets were the only places to buy things.In the past, things can only be bought in supermarkets.（2）非谓语动词：In the past, going to a supermarket was the only way to buy things. （3）语法现象为思路：各种从句、被动语态、there be ……对语法的要求：语法精准；句式复杂（3种或5种以上从句的运用+简单句）；使用长句二、大作文1、文章类型和结构（1）Arguments and ReportsAgree or disagreeDiscuss and give your opinionAdvantages and disadvantagesCauses and solutions写作步骤：Analying（1min）Branstorming（2mins）Outlining（5mins）Writing（30mins）Checking（2mins）Analying：读题，词词读完，题材，题型，问题数量，限定范围第二节课一、文章开头1、Agree or disagree（1）引出话题There is a heated debate about …… recently.The issue of …… is increasingly becoming the focus of governmeng and citizens’concern around the globe.（2）改写观点Some people claim/deem/assert/maintain that ……Quite a few hold the view that ……（3）表明态度Overall（In general）, I agree（disagree）with this paint of the view.（不要抄题目！！！！）语言转换Entertainment = amusement = recreationNothing more than = merely = onlyAdvertising is unnecessary = there is no justification for advertisingEntertainment n. Entertains v.题目改写思路（1）同义替换（2）词性转换（3）其他方式：句式变换（主动被动、双重否定）2、Discuss and give your opinion（1）引出话题（2）改写双方观点Some people support that ……. However, others hold the opinion that …….Some would deem that ……, but others, on the other hand, take a view that …….（3）万能句Before offering my own opinion, I believe we need to take a glance at both sides.（7’以上的人在最后一句一定要表明自己的态度）改写过程（1）Introducing new technology can improve people’s quality of life in the developing countries. 词改写：introduce – bring in – import introductionNew technology – advanced technology – cutting-edge technologyImprove – promote – enhance improvementQuality of life – life quality – living standard句式：people’s living standard can be enhanced by the introduction of advanced technology. （2）free education should be offered高级句式运用方式：寻找简单词与高级词之间的对应关系Available – have/give/offer/provide/supply3、Advantages and disadvantages（1）对题目进行改写（同该观点的方法一样）（2）万能句In this article, I will compare the advantages and disadvantages of this idea/development.There are both benefits and drawbacks for this developments/idea.（7’以上：表明态度—利大于弊or利小于弊）4、Causes and solutions（1）引出话题（与同意与否相同）（2）改写题目（3）万能句In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this problem along with some possoble solutions to it.（7’以上：开头最后一句指明原因）对……有好处/很重要——积极句型词汇Be good to = be beneficial to = have positive offects on = be of considerable significance to = play an important role inImprove enhance promote strengthen develop help assist ……对……有坏处/无用——消极句型词汇Be detrimental to = have negative effects on = exert adverse influences to = pose a threat to = be of little significance to（不重要性）________是一种常见的现象/趋势There is a growing trend that …… = It is quite common these days for sb to do sth.二、主体段的写法1、中心句2、支持句3、总结句（可有可无）论证方法：解释、举例、对比It is comprehensible for people to believe that ……——引出某人的观点人们认为……是可以理解的解释论证关联词：It means, In other words, To put in another wayThere is no doubt that ……——引出总结句举例论证关联词：for example , for instance , take ……as an example , a case in point is that …… , such as对比论证关联词：in contrast , by contrast , conversely三、结尾1、Agree or disagreeFor the reasons started above, I maintain that ……结尾不与开头和题目重复2、Discuss and give your opinionTaking all the factors into consideration, I claim/deem that ……Haves and have-nots = the rich ang the poor3、Advantages and disadvantagesJudging from all the relevant evidence offered, I am convinced that the benefits/drawbacksof ……exceed its drawbacks/benefits.4、Causes and solutions最好不要结尾In reality, this problem is unlikely to be resolved in the short term. However, it is by no means insurmountable and I am convinced that ……第三节课一、Agree or disagreeThe issue of______has triggered a new round of heated debate recently.Some people think that______.In general, I agree with this opinion.Addmittedly, it is comprehensible for people to believe that______First,Secondly,However, as far as I am concerned, ________In the first place,In the second place,In the third place,In conclusion, I once again offirm my position that______将上面的框架进行改写，变成自己独有的Firstly/to begin with – one of my supporting ideas is that科技类话题：1、主要考点：工作、生活、教育利、弊工作：利—enhance/boost working efficiency , time-saving , work from home弊—difficulties for managers to supervise their staff , information insecurity生活：IM—Instant Messenger 聊天工具利—convenience in communication , transportation and shopping , afford variousentertainment弊—heavy traffic（environmental problem）, indifference, the spread of information containing pornographic scenes and violence教育：利—distance learning, multi-media devices弊—no interaction, pre-determined contents, not specific to each student2、Brainstorming（1）What：Individual animal organization government（2）Perspective 角度Efficiency&TimeEconomy&MentalityEmployment&CompetitionEnvironment&HealthEntertainment&Culture外国人的思维：Classification—supporting your ideaAdvanced technology – benefitsChildren—interesting, learning methodsTeenagers—various entermainmentAdults—enhance/boost working efficiencySeniors—advanced medical equipment二、Advantages and disadvantages1、……has offered（brought about）plenty/enormous/immenseconvenience/merits/benefits/advantages to ……2、convenience/merits/benefits/advantages can be found in ……3、I believe …… has plenty/enormous/immense convenience/merits/benefits/advantages段落论证套路：套句：……has brought about enormous benefitsTo begin with + 第一个优点To illustrate/For example（例子论证）A ……In contrast,B ……（对比论证）Because of ……（推因论果）Secondly + 第二个优点环保+动物：2008/2/2 2008/9/13 2011/4/16 2009/2/21 2010/3/20 = 胜经P126 2012/4/28 = 胜经P116 2013/4/18 = 胜经P125 2013/6/8Causes：1、chief among the causes of this problem is（that）……2、moreover/besides/in addition to this ……3、another contributing factor is（that）……4、finally/last but not leastSolutions：1、in order to overcome/handle/conquer this problem, I believe we must ……2、it is also important for us to ……3、another positive step would be to（do）……4、one further measure is that ……环保解决方案的提出语法使用：被动语态、定语从句、条件句教育2008/9/6 2007/7/7 2008/6/5 2009/5/9 2013/4/27 2013/2/2 2009/4/251、老师VS家长2、老师VS科技3、单科VS全科4、目的&意义第四节课犯罪类话题：2008/1/12 2008/9/18 2009/6/13 2009/9/17 2010/8/5 2011/1/22 2012/11/3 2013/2/6 2012/5/18 2005/6/181、出题角度（1）如何减少犯罪率：服刑、受教育、工作（2）人们犯罪的原因及解决方法：青少年、刑满释放人员2、Brainstorming（1）ReasonsIndividual：poverty, （emotional）frustrationFamily：inappropriate parenting, domestic violence（家庭暴力）Society：encounter injustice, uncensored information which contains pornographic scenes and violence（包含色情和暴力画面的信息/未被和谐的信息）（2）SolutionsGovernment：control media, education, job training, promote employment变态类文章：1、开头：引出话题+表明态度/介绍文章内容2、主体段：每段回答一个问题3、结尾：总结全文+重申/表明态度大作文写作技巧：唐僧大法复杂句总结：（1）简单句（2）细节（5W1H）（3）句型融合（4）修改一、小作文1、流程图写作（1）开头：题目改写Flow chart – diagramProcess – procedureStep – stage – phaseThe diagram/flow chart illustrates that the process /procedure of doing sth can be divided into X steps/stages/phases.（2）主体段①顺序连接词In the firsr/primary stage,The second stage first takes place in______In the final stage,然后：then, after that, next, before同时：at the same time, during the same period一……就：as soon as, once_____②语法变化定语从句、状语从句、被动语态、不定式（to do）例：瓶子在玻璃工厂被弄成碎片，之后放到熔炉（furnace）里加热。

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雅思写作常犯语法错误总结

雅思写作常犯语法错误总结

雅思写作常犯语法错误总结写作考试往往能够将同学们的语法错误暴露出来，那么我们在写作中的常见语法错误有哪些?我们又该如何正确使用语法知识呢?希望以下内容对大家的雅思备考有所帮助!雅思写作常见语法错误之1：非谓语动词使用不当原：Comparing with the money people earns， the sense of achievement is more important。

改：Compared with the money people earns， the sense of achievement is more important。

评：此处是动词compare的.现在分词和过去分词使用混淆了。

在英语中，动词的现在分词往往表示的是主动的意思，过去分词则表示被动的含义。

原句想表达的是“将成就感与钱相比”，“把…与…相比”是明显的被动含义，因此应该使用compared。

雅思写作常见语法错误之2：时态混乱原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager， I always dreamed about having a job。

改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager， I always dreamed about having a job。

评：虽然雅思写作以议论文为主，为了表示客观性，基本上使用的都是现在时态，但是在举例的时候还是会涉及到一些过去时态，例如上面的句子，切记：主从句时态要保持一致。

雅思写作常见语法错误之3：表述累赘原：Internet plays an important and indispensible role in people’s life today。

改：Internet plays an indispensible role in people’s life today。

(完整word版)雅思写作必背短语以及精彩句型

(完整word版)雅思写作必背短语以及精彩句型

雅思写作核心语料库Part 11 offer a sense of job satisfaction and security带来工作的满意感和安全感2lay a solid professional working experience 累积扎实的工作经验3 reduce/cut down expenditure 减少支出4increase/generate job opportunities创建就业时机6promote talent introduction and exchange促令人材的引进与沟通7keep skills fresh and up-to-date 保证技术的不落后9lay a solid foundation for 确立坚固的基础10 pave the way for the future/development 为将来摊平了道路11foster a sense of competition and cooperation培育合作感与竞争感 12cultivate the spirit of team working 培育团队合作精神13master interpersonal skills 掌握人及关系技巧 14widen one ’ s knowledge拓宽知识面15enrich one’ s social and life experience丰富社会与人生经历16enlarge one’ s view/broaden one’拓s宽horizon视线17realize the value of life 实现人生价值18surmount /overcome / win over /master difficulties 战胜困难19grasp good communication skills 掌握人际沟通技巧20remove misunderstanding and discrimination 除去误会与鄙视21keep balance between work and family 保持事业与家庭的均衡 22raise the standard of living提升生活水平25enrich people ’ s spiritual丰life富人们的精神生活26promote social skills and competence提升交际技巧与能力 27strengthen the family ties促使家庭团结28cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培育激烈的责任感29bring joys and comforts to sb带来欢乐与舒坦30usher in a brand-new life-style引入崭新的生活方式31relieve the pressure of 缓解压力32maintain the community stability 保持社会的稳固33improve the utilization rate of energy resources提升能源的利用率34make full use of 充足利用35satisfy people ’ s needs/meet the demands of满people足人们的需求 36promote the development of relative industries促使有关家产的发展 37stimulate domestic needs刺激国内需求38 impel economic development促使经济的发展39generate jobs, income and tax revenues扩大就业时机，提升收入40enhance mutual understanding促使互相的理解41boost local development促使当地的发展42promote cultural exchange and cooperation促使文化的沟通与合作43enrich one’ s experience of丰life富人生经历44strengthen the ties with outside world增强与外面世界的联系 46foster a climate of peace and prosperity创建和平繁华的氛围 47stimulate our feelings of togetherness激发团结48maintain a natural balance 保持自然均衡 49reduce thelabor intensity 降低劳动强度50stimulate one’ s imagination and intereststh刺激人们的想象里与兴趣51accelerate the flow of information 加快信息的流动52prvide more business opportunities 供给商机53increase the productivity 提升生产力54create more opportunities for education创建受教育的时机55improve educational conditions 改良教育条件56release people from hard manual work令人们从沉重的体力劳动中解脱出来57speed up technical innovation 加快技术改革58better the development of human society完好人力资源的发展60bring immeasurable economic benefits 带来巨大的经济效益Part2 缺点1put sb or sth at risk 使---冒风险3be lack of a sense of job security 缺乏工作的安全感 4distract sb from doing sth 是某人从某事中分心5impose a heave strain on 来巨大的力 6beexaggerated and cheating夸张且欺的7be the invasion of privacy 入侵私8violate rights of free speech入侵言自由的利9endanger social stability and safety危害到社会的定与安全10restrain sb from doing 限制某人做某事14go astray 入歧路15undermine local culture 破当地文化16jeopardize the safety and stability of the society损坏社会的安全与定17set a bad example to立坏的榜18lead to the extinction of some species 致一些物种的 19resultin shortage of energy and natural resources致能源的欠缺21 to cause the estrangement/isolation/alienation between A and B 致了 A 与 B 之的疏22bring disgrace on sb ---来羞耻23suffer heavy losses 失沉重24easily cause stress-related illnesses简单致与力有关的疾病25lack basic infrastructures 缺乏基施26break the ecological balance破生均衡27lead to extravagant waste of public funds致公共金的极度浪28make⋯ in disorder 使杂乱30be harmful to our physical and mental and health害身心健康31lead to degradation of social atmosphere世日下32further widen the gaps between the rich and the poor 一步加大富之的差距 33be the drying up of our limited natural resources and the deterioration of the environment 有限的自然源的枯竭和境的化34contaminate environment 染境37 be a root of all evils 万恶之源38be easily taken in by 简单被欺诈39aggravate the traffic jams and worsen the crowdedness使交通拥塞和拥堵更加恶化40will pay a high price for this negative development of 为。

雅思写作必背经典句子,雅思写作经典句子汇总三篇

雅思写作必背经典句子,雅思写作经典句子汇总三篇

雅思写作必背经典句子,雅思写作经典句子汇总三篇雅思写作必背经典句子,雅思写作经典句子 176、One needsthings to be truly happy living in the world: some thing to do, some one to love, some thing to hope for. 要得到真正的快乐，我们只需拥有三样东西：有想做的事，有值得爱的人，有美丽的梦。

77、When the whole world is about to rain, let's make it clear in our heart together. 当全世界约好一起下雨，让我们约好一起在心里放晴。

78、Cut it out. 省省吧。

79、She had a bad cold．她患了重感冒80、Love is not a maybe thing. You know when you love someone. 爱不是什么可能大概也许，一旦爱__，自己是十分清楚的。

81、His argument doesn't hold water. 他的论点站不住脚82、It's up to you. 由你决定83、Still water runs deep大智若愚84、Try to have a mind of your own做有主见的人85、No matter how bad your heart has been broken, the world doesn't stop for your grief. The sun es right back up the next day. 不管你有多痛苦，这个世界都不会为你停止转动。

太阳依旧照样升起。

86、This is in way over my head. 对我而言这实在太难了。

87、I lied when I said I didn't like you. I lied when I said I didn't care. I lie every time I try to tell myself I will never fall for you. 我说不爱你，那是假话；我说不在乎，那是假话；我告诉自己对你再不会有感觉了，那也是假话。

新东方雅思笔记汇总 共40页

新东方雅思笔记汇总 共40页

新东方ielts笔记汇总一．雅思考试介绍听力：听力教材、英语中级听力阅读：整理难句笔记本——摘抄分析写作：图表作文——柱状图、饼状图、曲线图、表格——上面有百分比、数据、固定的时间段，善于从现象中发现规律，趋势，提炼，升华，得出结论——科研能力口语：1.自信：不要太介意语音语调，语法，允许犯错误，关注内容，体态语言，2.小心陷阱。

要时刻注意沟通，符合生活逻辑。

不要忘记提问卡上的问题逻辑顺序。

3.3.争取主动。

4.4.有备而来。

在很大程度上可以预测。

二：写作总的指导5堂课：1.总的知道2.写作流程，问题极其对策（审题）——重点第二篇3.审题，指令，展开。

4.书信作文。

5.图表作文。

本身内容和语言。

最后总的串讲。

范文作用：吸取语言的营养，不能机械背诵。

三：写作总论1．用书面语言2．题目中有单词不认识：它可能是不重要的，或联系上下文可以知道意思，实在看不明白就抓住看得懂的部分做文章。

3．时间概念很重要。

重点在第二篇。

先写第二篇（写对位置）。

4．字数：第一篇至少140字（10到12句话）。

第二篇至少250字（15到18句话）。

5．四大原则：1.图表作文重点在描述，不要随意解释，根据文字可以复原图表。

2.要让考官觉得你的思路非常清晰，要有“路标行标”，承上启下的短语结构词。

3.中心论点由几个分支论点支持。

并提供证据。

4.7分必须有复杂句子结构（并列句、复合句、非谓语动词形式）；用词面宽一点，尽量不要多次重复。

第一篇用3个复杂结构，第二篇用5—7，个复杂结构。

四：作业21页task5 versionC(多少个字，多少句话，每一段由几句话组成，找语法错误，评论结构布局) 74页task2 严格按照40分钟写。

针对十个问题的思考1．情感分段和逻辑分段首先晾出观点，罩住一个自然段，2．文章中心思想句是读者体会（中文）还是作者交代（英文）——第一段就说3．3．引言段（开头第一段）是开门见山（英文）还是层层剥开（中文）议论文不可以太长，第一段只能3——5句话4．段落主题句有（英文）没有（中文）不要把每个主题句分散在不同处，在第一句写5．线性段落（英文）还是螺旋性段落（中文）说出来——为什么这样说6．人证（中文）与法证（英文）强调事实、数据、普通人事件、该领域专家7．一般具体（英文）还是曲折前进（中文）8．段内连贯：过渡词语（英语）还是词义重复（中文）英语：形式语言中文：意合语言for,obviously,turnout,asaresult,and,intheend英语靠过渡词的衔接、词汇的纽带、语法的照应9．段落之间的连贯：形和义10．结尾部分是概括（英文）还是训导（中文）新东方雅思阅读笔记Summary做法I．确定summary的首末句在原文中的位置;根据题目要求&#61548;;&#61548;根据首末句来判断II．分析每个空格的可能语法属性III．根据空格前后的相关信息回原文锁定答案1.Summary中的以下成分不会改变：A.专有名词B.时间状语、时间C.地点D.人名E.数字及百分比F.金钱符号G.特殊印刷体及标点符号2．如果是动词+名词，名词是空格，则回原文定位该动词3．如果是动词+介词+名词，名词是空格，则回原文先定位介词，再定动词+介词结构4．如果是动词+介词+名词+定状补或同位语a.同3b.空格后的成分在原文中不会改变5．名词+谓语+宾语，a.回原文定位与空格后的谓语一致的语法结构b.宾语一般不会改变完成句子做法I．分析需完成部分的语法结构II．分析已给出句子的中心词，分为定位中心词及句意关键词1．定位中心词a)专有名词b)时间及地点c)人名、数字及百分比d)金钱符号、特殊印刷体、特殊标点符号2．句意关键词a)句子的主语和谓语b)空格前的介词及助动词c)空格前的情态动词d)空格前的形容词e)句子中的比较成分f)句子中的否定及肯定成分III．回原文定位填空选项式I．类型：1．须完成部分的语法属性单一2．须完成部分的语法属性多元II．做法：1．分析每个选项的语法属性2．分析题目的语法属性3．进行选项与题目的语法归类4．如有可能回原文定位TrueFalseNotGiven(audiy)I.做法1.准确理解题意a)语法主谓宾确定b)是否有好坏、优劣、快慢判断c)是否有only判断d)是否有比较e)是否有范围比较2．预设否命题（Alternative）(audiy)3．划出已给出句子的中心词回原文定位4．阅读比较5．中心词分为定位中心词及句意关键词：见前笔记II．基本概况1．是语言考试而非逻辑判断2．不涉及比喻及修辞3．不涉及文化差异4．不涉及复杂的时态与语态变化5．范围考点只有only,all及most6．IELTS中TFNG中的所有金钱符号、时间及数字都只涉及精确程度而非范围判断7．范围判断：NG：a.Timewilltellb.设问句而不做回答;a+1&#61619;nolessthana相当于8．原文中有itispredicted(expected,anticipated)that题目中有real,truth,fact则答案为：False9．原文中有条件状语从句或表明条件的固定搭配If(Providedthat),butfor(exceptfor)Ifnot(Unless),butthat(exceptthat)或表明条件限制的介词短语及形容语短语题目中去除任何条件限制答案为：False10．Only原则A．原文有三个形容词：various,versatile,complete题目中部分，则答案为FalseB．原文中A+B+C，题目中只有A、B或C，则答案为FalseC．原文中A事物或A状态题目中只有A事物或A状态答案：NG11．原文中有vow,promise,swear,pledge+动作状态题目中去除以上的限定，则答案为：NOTGIVEN(audiy)12．原文对理论学科加以限定（领域及范围、人名、国名及时间）题目中去除以上限制，答案为：FalseMatching题：一、类型1．人名及理论2．概念及定义3．完成句子的Matching二、各种类型的题的做法1．人名及理论a．首先分析意义理论的中心词b．回原文按人名的排列顺序阅读，理论一般在固定动词后的宾语从句中段落首末的人名及理论是重要考点c．中心词对应，原文及题目的中心词对应2．概念及定义a．首先确定概念在原文中的方位概念的排列对应原文段落顺序递增b．分析每道题目的意义中心词c．回原文按照概念的顺序阅读d．中心词对应Listofheadings类型1．10个选项，5-6个段落，选项标在段落后面2．5-6个已给出标题，段落标号写在题目后面注意：1．阅读主标题2．任何选项在真实考试中都只有一次选项，首先将example选项划去主要做法一、首先分析选项以及已给出标题哪些选项是文章超始段落选项哪些选项是文章结尾段落选项1．起始选项a．名词+of+文章主标标concept,conception,definition,explanation,notion,core,essence,justification, whatis+文章标题b．动词+文章主标题，代表文章首段标题defy,justify(audiy)c．形容词+名词+of+文章主标题basic,intrinsic,fundamental+factors,elements2．结尾选取项名词+of+文章主题effect,impact,consequence,generalization,conclusion3．哪些选项是文章的中间段落选项A．所有的比较选项都是中间选取项Compare,contrast,similar,match,coincide…with,contraryto,oppositeto,versus,akin…to,alien …toB．金钱符号指示词Wage,income,cost,expense,expenditure,revenueC．统计数字指示词data,figure,demography,demographic,statistic,censusD．百分比指示词rate,ratio,percentage,proportion,density(audiy)E．时间指示词decide,generation,ages,longtime,longterm,longtradition,longprocess,longprocedureF．分岐概念的定义及补充说明一定在中间段落二、如何阅读首末段1．阅读首末句，要关注首末句的语法成份A．主谓宾分布B．肯定与否定关态C．比较级状态D．是否定定义句型2．如果首末句是疑问句或都是描述性语句都要忽略不记，要其后的论点句作为标题选项的重要依据3．如果段落中有example或者example句型，要example前的论点句及其后的总结句4．如果段落中有人名及理论，则该理论也是标题选项的主要依据三、如何阅读整段1．要注意段落中的特殊印刷体及特殊标点符号（），“”2．要注意段落中表明转折的连词yet,but,however3．要注意段落中表明顺序的连词4．要注意段落中表明因果的固定搭配resultin,resultfrom,derivefrom,stemfrom,describeto.新东方听力笔记这是一套最新新东方听力笔记，希望有时间的朋友还是多研习一下，在方法上还是有很多提高成绩的捷径的。