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无老师奥巴马作文模板【篇一：无老师讲攒模板】自从大学开始，英语就成了每一个人的必修课。
但是与高中不同，在大学一部分学会了荒废，一部分人学会了执着。
但是不管你是要荒废还是要执着，每个人都必须看一眼头上的达摩克利斯之剑——大学四六级考试。
虽然现在很多大学对于四六级已经没有了硬性要求，但是学习的最终目的还是为了就业，当就业单位还在拿着这把宝剑的时候，每个人就还只能转过身去，去找解决四六级考试的方法。
不知何时，“模板”这个词进入到了我们的眼帘。
太中国风！太分数至上了！而一个优秀的模板，考友们会想：不用担心老师会给我们的。
这个时候太多的人实在是太相信众多教育机构老师的精力了，别说每一个人做一个新模板，哪怕是每一个班级做一个新的模板都是不可能的，原因很简单：没那个时间！那么我们就只有求助于网络了，但是网络的传播性实在是太广了！一个模板刚刚出现，有可能明天就有100个人在用了，你想想当考官看到100个人写出来的作文都用同样的开头的时候，他将会是什么情景^_^当然这里指的是国外的考官。
国内的考官看到的时候可是很爽的，太棒了！又造出来一帮一模一样的学生，加分点明确，可以给分了！^_^当面对重重阻力的时候，很多人不禁产生了怀疑。
我们是否应该使用模板？使用模板是否会导致低分？我们到底该用什么模板？其实答案很简单，模板应该用，必须用，大胆用！但是有一个十分重要的前提性条件，那就是模板一定是要原创的！原创的？！开玩笑，我们这辈子从来就没自己思考过，一直都是老师喂到我们嘴里的！是的，这就是你一直咒骂中国式教育的起点。
其实很多满分作文都是使用了模板，但是由于使用的十分之精巧，同时再加上是原创模板，因此连考官也拿他没有办法，人家写的就是棒吗！ok，先来看两段例子！第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子。
——————————————————————————————perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. despite various responses people may have onthe topic concerning the issue regarding which thing shouldthe education aim at. i, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.作为阅文无数的无老师，当看到第一篇文章的时候，已经没有了当初得的兴奋，因为这样的文章实在是太常见了！首先nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“高级”单词-_-！！！无老师一直无法理解，为什么有的单词会更高级。
作文巨讲堂9月无老师优秀范例：Beyond e normous o bvious r easons, h owever, there l ies a m ore i n-‐depth c ause t hat n o o ne c an s uccess w ithout working h ard.You c an’t h ope t he s olution w ill c ome t o y ou b y i tself j ust because y ou a re c reative w hile y ou d on’t e ven h ave a p lan t o w ork i t o ut. Even t hose g reat m inds l ike N ewton a nd E instein, w ho h ave s uperior creativity t o a ll o f u s, m ade c areful p lan b efore t hey s tarting w orking o n some p roblems, o therwise t hey w ould b e j ust w asting t heir t alent. S o a s normal p eople w e a re, i t’s m ore i mportant f or u s t o h ave a c areful p lan before w e s tart.无老师优秀范例：但是，除了如此之多显而易见的原因之外，其实这里还有一个更深刻的原因，那就是没有一个人可以在不付出努力的情况下就取得成功。
你不要妄想解决方案自己出现在你眼前，仅仅因为你很有创造力，当你完全没有一个解决方案的时候。
哪怕是那些伟大的先贤如牛顿和爱因斯坦，他们都对于全人类有杰出的创造性，都会在开始解决问题之前做出详细的规划，否则，他们也只是在浪费自己的天赋。
2013年英语三级作文Title: The Importance of Learning English。
English, as a global language, plays a pivotal role in communication, education, and international relations. Its significance cannot be overstated in today's interconnected world. In this essay, I will delve into the reasons why learning English is crucial for personal and professional development.Firstly, proficiency in English opens doors to a plethora of opportunities. In the realm of education, English is the medium of instruction in many prestigious universities worldwide. Proficiency in English grants access to quality education and research resources, enhancing one's academic growth and career prospects.Furthermore, English proficiency facilitates communication on a global scale. In an increasingly interconnected world, English serves as a lingua franca,enabling individuals from diverse linguistic backgrounds to communicate effectively. Whether in business negotiations, academic conferences, or diplomatic discussions,proficiency in English fosters understanding and collaboration across borders.Moreover, English proficiency enhances employability in today's competitive job market. Multinational corporations often require employees who are proficient in English to engage with clients, partners, and colleagues fromdifferent parts of the world. Additionally, many industries, such as tourism, hospitality, and information technology, prioritize candidates with English language skills, recognizing the importance of global communication in their operations.In addition to its practical benefits, learning English also enriches one's personal development. Throughliterature, films, and music, English provides insightsinto diverse cultures and perspectives. By immersingoneself in English-language media, individuals gain adeeper understanding of the world around them, fosteringempathy and cultural appreciation.Moreover, learning English broadens one's horizons and fosters intellectual growth. It enables individuals to access a wealth of knowledge and information available in English, from scientific research to literary classics. By engaging with English-language content, individuals sharpen their critical thinking skills and expand theirintellectual capabilities.Furthermore, proficiency in English empowersindividuals to participate actively in global conversations on pressing issues such as climate change, human rights, and social justice. By expressing their ideas and opinions fluently in English, individuals can contribute to meaningful dialogue and advocate for positive change on a global scale.In conclusion, learning English is essential for personal and professional development in today's interconnected world. Its practical benefits, including enhanced educational and career opportunities, as well asits role in facilitating global communication and fostering personal growth, underscore its importance. Therefore, individuals should prioritize acquiring proficiency in English to thrive in an increasingly interconnected and competitive global landscape.。
无老师作文巨讲堂【篇一：无老师作文巨讲堂 2012 】2012 年 01 月号无老师优秀范例： a more realistic and rational criterion to value teachers ‘ work (and therefore decide their salary) should include factors such as comprehensivedevelopments of students, teachers ‘ own capacity to cultivate and educate, and parents ‘ f ebeadc k . yet my disagreement does not suggest that students ‘ performance should be abandonedbut rather included along with other indispensable factors in evaluating teachers ‘ work, since school report is still among most parents ‘ top concerns and students ha ve to use it as anchor when applying for further studies. also, it is reasonable that teachers who can enhance students ‘ performance shouldbe paid better, as the measure would moderately motivateteachers to work hard.无老师优秀翻译：一个衡量教师工作，同时也可以决定教师工资的更为现实的，同时也是更为理性的标准应该包括如下这些因素，比如对于学生的全面发展，教师自己的提升及教学能力，以及对于家长的反馈。
无老师满分范例：The last factor that has made our age so uncomfortable is the abusive use of technology. Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human – we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices. We rush to metro station in order to catch an early train, sit in front of radioactive computers all day long in order to get our work done, and stay in air-conditioned rooms all summer without experiencing the natural changes outside thick cement walls. Several decades ago, people could still live closer to nature and make rational use of modern technology, which to me is the essence of human living experience.无老师优秀中文翻译：最后一个使我们这个时代如此的不舒服是对科技的滥用。
虽然它带来了很多便利，但是他本质上来说改变了我们的生活。
我们不再是工具的主人，恰恰相反，我们变成了工具的奴隶。
我们匆忙地奔向地铁站，就是为了赶上早班的火车，整天坐在辐射的电脑屏幕前，为了把我们的工作做完，夏天整个呆在空调房里面，而没有享受厚厚的混凝土外墙外的自然的变化。
无老师新托福作文巨讲堂【篇一：无老师ibt新托福作文巨讲堂(2014)】无老师ibt新托福作文巨讲堂（2014年01月号）来源: 本站浏览: 我要评论(3条) 字号: 大中小无老师优秀范例：the major reason for my propensity for space technology is the potential of scientific research. no matterhow the impact it occurred, from the moment of its very advent, scientific research had become the very dictator of our future.it is by these researches that human beings, the only creature with intelligence on earth, began to soar their wings of aspiration. and more importantly, it had indeed done a great good for the humankind. can you imagine getting access to the world wide web at your desk if there were not for the researchof millions of computer ancestors? similarly, it is highly probable that the great-grandchildren of your great-grandchildren would be enjoying a trip across the ―worm hole‖ while giving thanks secretly to his forefathe r, you, who voted for the expenditure on scientific research. in a word, the space project enjoys great potential, and should therefore be taken into account in top priority to ensure a better future of mankind.无老师优秀翻译：我非常支持空间技术的最大的原因是他的科研上的潜力。
无老师优秀范例：First of all, young adults are increasingly selfish. As they are exposed to much better material life since they were young, some of them take all of these for granted, believing that naturally they should wear fashion clothes, eat fancy dinner and be equipped with iPhone and iPad. Thus, when the time comes that they are asked to sacrifice for others, it is unlikely they are willing to give their good life up. Even a poor little child asks for 2 dollars for lunch might be rejected because the young adult thinks, without these 2 dollars he cannot order the steak he is supposed to eat. The belief of inherit privileges occupies them, making them unwillingly to make any sacrifice for others and, less helpful.无老师优秀翻译：首先，年轻人现在越来越自私。
自从很小的时候，他们就有更多更好的物质生活，他们之中的一些人觉得这些是理所当然的，相信他们就应该穿很新潮的衣服，吃很梦幻的晚餐，有iPhone和iPad可以用。
无老师满分范例：Another reason is that modern people are more effective than those in the past. And great efficiency is one fundamental way to success. We are able to make use of many tools increasing productivity today. For instance, the computer plays an important role in our life in terms of efficiency. As I want to search material concerning the “nuclear energy”, all I have to do is to type this term on Google and a great number of sources will pop out on the screen. Given the past, I had to go to the library and bury me a couple of days looking for the information on nuclear energy without the assistance of computers. The distance is conspicuous, thus modern people with advanced technology would succeed more readily.无老师优秀翻译：另外一个原因是现代的人比之前的人效率会更高。
更好的效率是成功的一个关键因素。
我们今天可以更好地使用工具来提高我们的效率。
比如，电脑就在增加我们效率这方面上起到了很重要的作用。
2013年12⽉7⽇A类⼤作⽂范⽂（来⾃环球雅思张嵩⽼师），童鞋们强势围观咯！2013年12⽉7⽇A类⼤作⽂范⽂——来⾃环球雅思张嵩⽼师题⽬：In recent years, “responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environment of the places they visit. However, some people say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(Word count=295)范⽂：Being responsible travelers, to a great extent, means to be environmentally friendly to scenic destinations and protective to local cultures and traditions. However, this essay believes that travelers can achieve the former, but are culturally harmful.There is little to no difference for travelers to protect the environment of the places they visit as they do with their motherland and their own home. Admittedly, destination areas/countries are at different levels in terms of environmental protection because of the stage of development they are in. However, that should not be the reason why tourists do not hold the highest standards for themselves to protect local environment, be it better or worse than where they come from. In that case, it is totally within the tourists’ ability to preserve the local environment, and the key is to enhance environmental awareness by themselves or local authorities.The cultural side of the problem might not be as optimistic. For the tourists, they inevitably bring in exotic cultural aspects to the destination areas/countries. Tourists speak foreign tongues despite the phrase book(s) they carry; they are most likely dressed in a way they feel comfortable or in accordance with their own traditions; their life-long behaviours and mindsets are not possibly changed for and during the days/weeks on the way. Moreover, the attractions and local governments are catering their travelling facilities and operations to the convenience of travelers. A good example would be that European shops are increasingly hiring Chinese-speaking sales assistants for the sake of Chinese tourists.In sum, it is possible for tourist to watch out for the preservation of local environment on their trips, but every now and then, influences from tourists and hospitable efforts by the local government, however insignificant they may seem, are eating into local culture.。
无老师优秀范例：Besides, young people right now are all excellent supporters, but never activists. Along with the spread of Facebook and Twitter, you can quickly advocate a claim or support each other with …Like‟ or tweets. It is a high-return investment: with just a single click, you can represent your support to reform, care about the environment and love for minorities and at the same time, relieve your own guilt for not doing anything. “I‟ve already done my best.” You can comfort yourself like this. However, ev en though the minorities are flattered with your support, they are still fighting alone. Support is important, but what we value the most is action. Sometimes we miss old times teenagers, those built barricades in the streets of Paris in French Revolution or took off his own coat and gave it to you in a cold winter night, 1940‟s Beijing. They couldn‟t learn others‟ difficulties quickly and comprehensively like we do today. However, once they met a person in need, they would lead a helping hand.无老师优秀翻译：除此之外，年轻人现在是很好的支持者，但是并不是行动者。
2013年1月无老师精析：其实当我们在阅读作文的时候，总是会发现，我们与优秀作文的差距貌似不简简单单是用词的差距。
而是同样的一句话，我们是这么说的，但是人家是那么说的。
我们写的方式总是把我们脑中的中文，逐字的翻译成英文。
但是实际上，慢慢的我们应该做的是将我们脑中的意思，找到英文地道的表达方式，然后直接表达出来，这是一个循序渐进的过程。
无老师满分范例: Also, students would easily become disoriented in the huge sea of information. Although modern technology could equip us with easy access to information, the huge amount of resources would actually leave us discombobulated. Therefore, it is only left to possess information more quickly rather than learn it more quickly. An illustrating example is my experience with a HK digital library which stores almost all the books I desire. At first I enjoyed downloading them from the database. However, one month later I ended up with hundreds of books stored in my hardware yet none of them finished or ever clicked.无老师优秀中文翻译: 同样的,学生将会很容易的变得没有方向,在海量的信息面前。
虽然当代的技术使得我们可以很容易的接触到信息，但是大量的信息会使得我们乱了方向。
因此，我们只是更快的获得了这些信息，而不是更快的掌握了这些信息。
一个最能说明问题的例子就是我在香港数字图书馆的经历，这个图书馆几乎储藏了所有我喜欢的书。
最初，我喜欢从数据库下载这些信息。
但是，一个月后，当数百本书被储存在我的硬件里，但是没有任何一本书被读完甚至都没有被点击过之后，我就终结了我的行为。
无老师平庸范例：Also, when we face plenty of information, students would easily lost their direction. Although the modern technology helps us get more information, so much information will distract us. So we just collect these information, but we do not absorb these information. The best example is the my experience in the HK digital library, this library almost have all the books that I like. At first, I liked to download these information. However, after a month, when hundreds of books were stored in my hardware and none of them were opened or even were clicked, I stop stopped this behavior.首先第一句：优秀范例Also, students would easily become disoriented in the huge sea of information.对比平庸范例Also, when we face plenty of information, students would easily lost their direction.我们就会发现人家优秀范例明明几个词就可以搞定的事情，平庸范例竟然用了一个从句！真是啰嗦！这里的优秀范例显然首先是become disoriented这里的disoriented这个合成词写的很形象，orient本身就是有“指引方向”的意思，前面加上了dis 表示方向的迷失，然后再接下来有用了huge sea of，还真有一点mountain people，mountain sea的赶脚。
O(∩_∩)O哈哈~平庸范例虽然写的都没错，但是语言拖沓，而且plenty of和lost their direction也只能是中规中矩，比起优秀范例，显然不在一个档次上。
接下来优秀范例说了Although modern technology could equip us with easy access to information, the huge amount of resources would actually leave us discombobulated.对比平庸范例Although the modern technology helps us get more information, so much information will distract us.显然优秀范例的equip和easy access to是最明显的亮点，这里equip是“装备某人”的意思，自然也就“使得某人有了XXX能力”，然后access to也是中国学生很少用到的固定搭配，这两个两点放在一起，真的是双剑合璧，光芒万丈！不过在接下来优秀范例的discombobulated显得略生僻了，不如平庸范例distract来得简单粗暴，还是让人有些遗憾的。
第三句：优秀范例Therefore, it is only left to possess information more quickly rather than learn it more quickly.对比平庸范例So we just collect these information, but we do not absorb these information.这里显然优秀范例的亮点是rather than这个固定搭配，使得平庸范例but，显得十分的罗嗦。
但是反过来，平庸范例的两个动词collect与absorb，却是比优秀范例的动词possess与learn用的准确，这个点要仔细体会。
下面，优秀范例An illustrating example is my experience with a HK digital library which stores almost all the books I desire.对比平庸范例的The best example is the my experience in the HK digital library, this library almost have all the books that I like.优秀范例的前2大亮点在于illustrating example、HK digital library这两个部分，显示出作者的词汇量储藏很丰富，而且例子很具体，特别令人信服！然后的which从句与前一句链接很紧密，一气呵成，让人读起来颇有很顺畅的感觉。
但是反观平庸范例的翻译只是在邯郸学步而已。
best example是大家都知道的，HK digital library是直接复制过来的，this library单独成句，显然没有which从句的连贯性好。
倒数第二句，优秀范例At first I enjoyed downloading them from the database.对比平庸范例At first, I liked to download these information.，显然优秀范例的database显示出作者词汇量不错。
最后一句，优秀范例However, one month later I ended up with hundreds of books stored in my hardware yet none of them finished or ever clicked.对比平庸范例However, after a month, when hundreds of books were stored in my hardware and none of them were opened or even were clicked, I stop stopped this behavior.显然平庸范例写的也没错，但就是总让人感觉十分的笨拙。
而且在这里，之所以感觉平庸范例与优秀范例差别不是特别大，主要是因为优秀范例哪怕翻译成中文，其实也是写得很好的，想想我们自己的中文，我们很有可能干巴巴的写的是“我下载了很多书，但是都没看”，但是这样就远没有，优秀范例的“一个月后，当数百本书被储存在我的硬件里，但是没有任何一本书被读完甚至都没有被点击过之后，我就终结了我的行为。
”写得生动。
因此，有些时候，优秀的作文不仅仅涉及到表达方式的丰富，而且还涉及到作者本身的文学素养或者说语言素养，如果本身中文就想不到这么写，那么自然英文写就无法流淌出精妙的语句。
2013年2月无老师满分范例: Another discomfort of our age is that we are experiencing interpersonal alienation. With the development of communication technology, people in fact become alienated with friends and relatives, since they could be merely accessed via phone or email. Too often we feel that few of our friends are true friends, without the traditional feeling of mutual affection which could only be created by longtime apart. But several decades ago, people treasured their friends and maintained relatively close interpersonal relations, which is much more enjoyable than the estrangements we are experiencing.无老师优秀中文翻译:我们这一代的另一个不舒服的点，是我们经历了人际之间的冷漠.随着通讯技术的发展,人们实际上是于自己的朋友和亲戚越来越陌生,因为他们只通过电话和电子邮件进行交流.很多时候我们感觉到很少再有朋友是真正的朋友,这都是因为长时间的分开,是我们缺少了那种传统的互相珍爱的感觉.但是几十年之前，人们会珍视他们的朋友，并且维持很亲密的人际关系，这比我们现在正在经历的疏远的人际关系更令人喜欢。
