高中英语作文写作指导:如何介绍文明古迹

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介绍文物古迹
【写作任务】
某英文报的“Cultural Relics”栏目正面向中学生征文。

请根据提示信息,用英语写一篇短文介绍莫高窟(the Mogao Caves)。

1. 位于中国西部甘肃省敦煌市东南;
2. 始建于公元366年, 后不断增补直至元代;
3. 现存洞窟492 个, 壁画(mural)约45000 平方米, 彩塑(painted sculpture)2415 尊, 展示了四到十四世纪伟大佛教(Buddhist)艺术成就;
4. 1987 年被列入《世界遗产名录》(World Heritage List)。

注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

【写作指导】
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求介绍莫高窟,体裁属于说明文,故语言要简洁、准确、条理清楚又要突出特色。

时态多用一般过去时和一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。

二、谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分:
第一部分:介绍其位置和修建时间;
第二部分:描写其规模;
第三部分:说明其地位及影响。

三、就本写作而言, 可围绕以下内容组织语言。

1. 第一部分:介绍其位置和修建时间。

2. 第二部分:描写其规模。

3. 第三部分:说明其地位及影响。

【参考范文】
◀普通范文▶
The Mogao Caves are located in the southeast of Dunhuang City, Gansu Province of China. They were started in the year of 366 AD and finished in the Yuan Dynasty. There are 492 caves now, which contain about 45,000 square meters of murals and 2,415 painted sculptures. They show the great achievement of Buddhist art from the 4th to the 14th century. Because of their great artistic and cultural values, the Mogao Caves were added to the World Heritage List in 1987. Every year, a lot of tourists from all over the world come to see this old mysterious place.
◀高级范文▶
Located in the southeast of Dunhuang City,Gansu Province of China, the Mogao Caves have a long history dating back to 366 AD. They were generally accomplished in the Yuan Dynasty. Now 492 caves are preserved, housing about 45,000 square meters of murals and 2,415 painted sculptures. They represent the outstanding achievement of Buddhist art from the 4th to the 14th century. They have such an important place in human culture that UNESCO included the Mogao
Caves on the World Heritage List in 1987. Every year, tourists from all over the world flock to this amazing land to admire the wisdom of ancient Chinese people.。