高中英语写作指导课课件

【审题谋篇】 体裁 说明文 人称 第三人称 时态 一般过去时 话题 亲子共读
第一段 引入话题:亲子共读的组织 框架 第二段 介绍细节:如何开展活动
第三段 简短评论
【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)组织 organize (2)推荐 recommend (3)号召 call on (4)在某人业余时间 in one’s spare time (5)激发了学生对……的兴趣 arouse students’ interest in (6)参加 participate in
4.Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse. 在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。 5.Let’s join our hands and take actions immediately. 让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。 6.It is essential that the authorities should work out and implement relevant laws and regulations to put an end to this trend. 很重要的是,当局应该制定和实施相关的法律法规来结束这一趋势。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】 为了号召大家多读书,你校于 9 月 25 日组织了一次“亲子共读(parentchild reading)”活动。假设你是校英文报的记者,请根据以下要点用英语写 一篇短文,报道此次活动。 1.地点:学校图书馆; 2.参加者:高二年级学生与家长; 3.活动内容:亲子共读一本书;分享读书体会;互相推荐优秀书籍; 4.简短评论。 要求:1.文章包含所有要点,可适当增加内容,以使行文连贯; 2.词数80左右。

示例写作步骤
【写作要求】 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Where are the bees? Bees are essential to the production of food we eat.Bees make honey,but they also pollinate large areas of crops,such as straw berries,apples and onions.About a third of the food we eat is a result of pollination of the bees.Unfortunately,bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate. In 2006,bee keepers started reporting about something called Colony Collapse Disaster (CCD).The main sign of CCD is the loss of adult honey bees from a hive.In October of 2006,some beekeepetween 30 and 90 percent of their hives.
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇 (1)顺序 firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally首先,第二,第三,最后;to begin with,then,furthermore,finally首先,然后,其次,最后;to start with,next,in addition,finally首先,其次,另外,最后。 (2)并列 as well as也;not only...but (also)...不仅……还……;including/included包括。

并用自己的话简单地写出来。（一句话） ➢ 写下每个主要想法的关键支持点，不要涉及小细节。 ➢ 以符合逻辑的顺序组织主要和相关的支持点，实现连贯性的必要过渡。 ➢ 校对语法、拼写和标点错误等。
概要写作（小作文）
把握文体特点
记叙文
六要素：what who when where why how
概要写作（小作文）
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如何获取一篇文章的要点信息
④Finally, the anxiety of dating is greatly lessened with cyber-dating. Traditionally, men take the lead in dating. They are the ones who have to ask a woman out on a date. They have to risk rejection. It’s no better for women, however. Many women still wait for a man to ask them out first. Then, if they don’t want to go out with him, they have to let the man down gently. While it’s true that sometimes with cyber-dating men still get rejected and women still reject, you experience this in the privacy of your own home. Moreover, you never have to see the person again because you have never met! It’s the perfect solution.

4.The remarkable thing was they showed no signs of decomposition. 值得注意的是,它们没有腐烂的迹象。 5.He deducted that the pyramid shape was responsible for preserving these creatures. 他推断金字塔的形状是保护这些生物的原因。
scientific findings. ⑥人们给出了许多理由来解释这些令人不安的事件。
Some reasons have been given to explain the disturbing incidents
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⑦这些令人不安的事件发生在百慕大三角地区。
The disturbing incidents occurred in the area of
【妙笔成篇】 There are many unexplained mysteries in the natural world,of which the
Bermuda Triangle is a particular one.This is an area of the western Atlantic between Bermuda and Florida,where some strange incidents happened.Since 1945,hundreds of ships and planes and over a thousand people have disappeared,leaving no chance for them to make a getaway.
1.出现地点:喜马拉雅山; 2.相关信息: (1)传说它们体型巨大,全身长毛,能像人一样行走。 (2)科学家曾发现“雪人”的毛发和脚印,猜想它们是古老北极熊的后代 (descendant)。 3.研究结论:尚无科学证据证实其真实存在。 注意:请在相应位置作答。