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Lecture2英语专业教学课件

Lecture2英语专业教学课件
deserve. • 10. Cleanliness: Tolerate no uncleanness in body, clothes or habitation. • 11. Chastity: Rarely use venery but for health or offspring; Never to dullness, weakness,
➢ “Father of American Poetry” ➢ “Pioneer of the New
Romanticism” ➢ “A gifted and versatile lyric
poet”
1. Works
《美洲光辉的兴起》
• “The Rising Glory of America” (1772) • “The House of Night” (1779, 1786) • “The British Prison Ship” (1781) • “To the Memory of the Brave Americans” (1781) • “The Wild Honey Suckle” (1786) • “The Indian Burying Ground” (1788) • “The Dying Indian: Tomo Chequi”
• Philip Freneau: “The Wild Honey Suckle”
1. Benjamin Franklin (1706-1790)
1. Works
《自传》
• The Autobiography • Poor Richard’s Almanack
《格言历书》
2. Life
Benjamin Franklin came from a Calvinist background. He was born into a poor candle-maker’s family. He had very little education. He learned in school only for two years, but he was a voracious reader. At 12, he was apprenticed to his elder half-brother, a printer. At 16, he began to publish essays under the pseudonym “Silence Do good” . At 17, he ran away to Philadelphia to make his own fortune. He set himself up as an independent printer and publisher. In 1727 he founded the Junto club.

2021年商务英语写作高级培训模板辅导二

2021年商务英语写作高级培训模板辅导二

2021年商务英语写作高级培训模板辅导二（2021最新版）作者：______编写日期：2021年__月__日不过免费重读！2021年商务英语考试（BEC）全程课程火热开售中>>这是我们为你和你的朋友拟定的活动日程安排。

请过目一下，好吗? Here is a copy of itinerary we have worked out for you and your friends.Would you please have a look at it? 如果对某些细节有意见的话，请提出来。

If you have any questions on the details， feel free to ask. 我相信你在制定这个计划上一定花了不少精力吧。

I can see you have put a lot of time into it.我们真诚地希望你们在这里过得愉快。

We really wish youll have a pleasant stay here. 我想能否在我们访问结束时为我们安排一点时间购物。

I wonder if it is possible to arrangeshopping for us. 欢迎到我们工厂来。

Welcome to our factory. 我一直都盼望着参观贵厂。

Ive been looking forward to visiting your factory. 参观后您会对我们的产品有更深的了解。

Youll know our products better after this visit. 也许我们可以先参观一下设计部门。

Maybe we could start with the Designing Department. 然后我们再去看看生产线。

Then we could look at the production line.墙上的图表是工艺流程表。

BEC写作辅导上课讲义

BEC写作辅导上课讲义
写作时，考生首先要明白题目赋予写作者的身 写作时，考生首先要明白题目赋予写作者的身 然后确定短文中必须包含的题目指定的要求 要求； 份，然后确定短文中必须包含的题目指定的要求； 再后考虑语言是否流畅，是否有语法错误、 再后考虑语言是否流畅，是否有语法错误、拼写 错误等。 错误等。
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1. 便条（note） Alice Meeting with Maurice Varney cancelled. Could we meet on the 2 May. David
第七条原则：体谅(Consideration)
要把握书写时的“体谅”原则，首先要求 写信人持有“You-attitude”，而不是“WeYouattitude”，也就是要多站在对方的立场上措辞， 给予对方充分的体谅和照顾，始终考虑到对方 的愿望，要求以及读信时的感受。
商务英语写作要求既筒短扼要， 商务英语写作要求既筒短扼要 ， 又不失完整与清楚明白， 又不失完整与清楚明白 ， 还要包括必要 的礼貌。 的礼貌。
(2) 准确的措词和信息
商务英语写作一般使用常用的商业术语，应该特别 注意措词和信息的正确性。
(3) 正确的语法和标点符号
常见的语法错误一般出现在以下几个方面：①主谓 之间的一致关系②代词与先行词之间的一致关系③悬 垂句④修饰语与被修饰语之间的一致关系⑤状语的位 置
(4)正确的拼写 正确的拼写
第二条原则：清楚(Clearness)
示例2 [题目要求] telling him what furniture you need [答案] I need some furniture. [点评] 上面的写法没有真正回答what这个问题，即没 有告诉读者到底需要什么家具。这让读者无法为你采 购到你所需的家具。 [正确答案] I need an office chair, a desk and a filing cabinet. 示例3 [题目要求] asking for the price and the possibility of a bigger discount. [答案] I hope that you can give me a bigger discount since we place more adverts. [正确答案] In addition, I would be grateful if you could quote us a new price and offer us a 10% discount considering the larger number of issues in which we place the adverts.

bec高级武大培训班—写作第二讲

bec高级武大培训班—写作第二讲

Golden Rules
Do write in full sentences and use a range of structures to avoid repetition. Do include figures in Part 1. Do use the correct format for Part 2 and think about the target reader. Do write in pen. This enables you to edit your work more carefully. Don’t write your answer on the question paper(only use this for your plan).
Outline for Today’s Talk
1. What is a proposal? 2. Useful Expressions & Sentence Patterns 3. Writing Steps 4. Model Practice 5. Authentic tests and their evaluation 6. A Review of BEC Writing Higher 7. Language guide
BEC Writing Higher
Proposal
Part Two Description

Candidates choose from three options: a report, a proposal or a piece of business correspondence. The task is supplied by the rubric, which provides an authentic reason for writing, and indicates for whom the piece of writing is being produced. For this task the candidate has to produce an extended piece of writing, presented either as a letter or as a report. The rubric is therefore more detailed and specific, with up to 120 words in length for each option.

BEC高级写作作业精讲2课件

BEC高级写作作业精讲2课件
3)recommendations concerning the company’s participation in the conference in future years. 关于公司未来几年参加会议的建议 continue to participate in…
美森教育
Report on annual conference Report on annual conference and its usefulness
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会议期间可以展示自己公司的产品 All the companies can display their best‐selling products and hi‐ tech innovation(技术创新) at the conference. Attendees may capture the developing trend of industry. 抓住机会提高公司的业内知名度 It was a valuable opportunity to know influential leaders in the industry. Companies which seized/grasped this opportunity may raise their corporate profile. 小公司能从年会中学到很多 Some start‐up(起步的，刚办的) companies can learn the most advanced technology and operation principle/concept(经营理念) at the conference which were hard to gain/obtain elsewhere.
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简单总结一下以上几位的发言： All the participants/atendees/representatives benefited a lot from those lectures and experience. All the participants/atendees/representatives considered these lectures and experience were practical and useful/beneficial. All the themes of these lectures were the hottest issues in our industry.

Lecture2business_writing

Lecture2business_writing
是写给同一请求的两封回信,内容相同 例1-2是写给同一请求的两封回信 内容相同 是写给同一请求的两封回信 ,但写作风格截然不同 前者采用的是以自我 但写作风格截然不同.前者采用的是以自我 但写作风格截然不同 表现为中心的协作风格,后者采用的是以对 表现为中心的协作风格 后者采用的是以对 方为中心的写作风格.后者简明 亲切. 后者简明、 方为中心的写作风格 后者简明、亲切
How do you think of the following sentences? Positive or negative? 1) You cannot visit the plant except on Sunday. 2) Do not walk on the grass. 3)Your misunderstanding of our lettetr caused you to make such a mistake.
Focus on “You” instead of “I” and “we” “I”or “We” oriented 1)I am happy to tell you… 2) We are pleased to have your new account. 3) We have shipped the two dozen Crown desk sets you ordered. 4) We make Willet razor in three weightslight, medium and heavy. “You” viewpoint 1) You will be happy to know… 2) Your new charge account is now open for your convenience. 3) Your two dozen Crown desk sets should reach you with this letter. 4) Willet makes razors for you in three weight-light, medium and heavy.

BEC(H)Writing Lecture III


p. 50
• A female dominance is shown in both the age ranges of 24-29 and 30-40, with a female to male ratio of 3:1 and 4.3:1 respectively. Statistically, compared with 10 male executives, there are 42 female executives before the age of 40. • However, the number of male executives increases gradually as opposed to a steady fall in the number of female executives after the age of 40.
Writing task I
p. 32
• The bar chart below shows the forecasts of unit sales by Toller Electrical Ltd for the four quarters of next year in each of its three main product areas. • Using the information from the bar chart, write a short report describing and comparing the sales forecasts for the three product areas for next year. • Write 120-140 words.
p. 50
• The male to female ratio is 1:1, 2:1 and 2.1:1 in the age ranges of 40-50, 50-60 and 60-70, with 89 males holding top positions in contrast to 57 females in total. • The greatest contrast occurs in the age group of 70-80, where there are 4 male executives but none female.

2 Lecture Two英汉译汉教程


Monday, July 08, 2013
English College
Monday, July 08, 2013
English College
Monday, July 08, 2013
English College
What is translation?
Part 1
Eg. Caesar was right. Thin people need watching.
English-Chinese Translation Lecture Two
Lecturer：Tracy （童洁萍）
Monday, July 08, 2013
English College
Chapter I General PrTranslation
Contents
Translation Criteria
Competence of the Translator
Translation Strategies
Basic Processes of Translation
Monday, July 08, 2013
English College
General principles
Monday, July 08, 2013
English College
Example explanation
≠对等翻译：translate word by word
back
3） Find yourself. Be yourself. 【Popularity】 will come—with the people who respect you for who you are.
n) 多半时间都在注意他们，但所看到的情况让我很 不喜欢。细瘦的人冲我走来时，我连脚趾都哆嗦 。虽然瘦人的性格各异，但多数让人望而生畏。

BEC高级写作讲义 2

Part One写作（概述与方式）问题共点概述：●Write a Short Report●Write 120-140 Words●Describe the movements (Charts or graphs)At least one chart (Line, Bar and Pie) 解题总思路：(Accomplish In Four Steps) I.Reading ......................... ..........读题（归纳图表主要内容）anizing ...................... .........订框架（根据模板、例句完成文章主要部分）III.Conclusion ..................... ..........客观总结（仅归纳最显而易见的客观联系）Checking ............................ ......检查（拼写、语法及其他错误）文章基本框架：（Basic Structure）●Introduction ...................... ........简要介绍题目，归纳图表主要内容●Findings .......................... .........说明图表中数据走势，趋势和变化Conclusion .......................... .....图表、数字简最客观联系写作要点：●直接了当进入主题●抓住数据特点，突出变化趋势，进行对比建议写作中使用小标题，增强各段落写作方向，条理更加清晰分步解题：1．如何读题：●学会节省时间,速读●只挑不同的内容读归纳图表的主要表达内容，先中文后英文例：Book2， Test1， Part One （以下例题部分均为此题，简称如上题）Question1:●The graphs below (Page 28) show theperformance of a European country’s manufacturing and agricultural sectors in terms of exports andimports between 1991 and 2001.Using the information from the graphs, write a short report describing the general movements in exports, imports and the resulting balance of trade.1.Write 120-140 words.2.词语不多，难度不大，阅读时间尽量缩短3.斜体字部分基本为Part One惯例，可基本忽略阅读4.下划线部分为题目“不同内容”所在，亦是表格的主要内容5.根据题目要求和图表内容“再造”下划线部分2．如：表格描述的是欧洲某国工业和农业在1991到2001年间进出口情况，而后将此句子翻译为英文即可。

商务英语写作 第2次课


Old-fashioned expressions Popularly used expression Acknowledge receipt of thank you for I am writing to inform you 删除 According to our records our records show Please be advised that 删除 Under separate cover separately We apologize we are sorry Would you be kind enough would you please At your earliest convenience as soon as you can/as soon as possible Awaiting your prompt reply we look forward to hearing from you
4. Write naturally and sincerely自然而真诚地写作 Do not write Should change to I have pleasure in I am pleased to tell/inform informing you… you…
We do not anticipate We do not expect prices to any increase in prices. rise. I should be grateful if Would you please let me you would be good know… enough to advise us…
Let’s
get more active 多用主动语态
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4) The company is losing staff to its competitors because many staff are unhappy about their career paths.
Problems
Suggestions
1) Demand for our product is extremely high at the moment.
动词
We can reimburse your receipt.
预测建议会产生的影响
This
The policy
The change
will/would/
should/may/might
result in
mean
lead to
allow for
along-term improvement in productivity.
agreater level of customer satisfaction.
aperiod of low revenue in the short term.
ashortage of trained staff.
Exercises
Problems
Suggestions
1) Demand for our product is extremely high at the moment.
4) The company is losing staff to its competitors because many staff are unhappy about their career paths.
Asystem of staff development should be introduced.
正式
非正式
被动语态
The payment is made by IBM.
主动语态
IBM made the payment.
复杂的商务词汇
The new system incorporates many visual templates.
口语化用词
The new system includes many visual templates.
It is recommended that production be stepped up.
2) The company is in danger of being prosecuted for infringement of copyright law.
A change of staff attitude is recommended. A more professional attitude will need to be encouraged through training.
3) We need to improve our staff’s ability to communicate with foreign customers.
We should provide more language training opportunities for front-line staff.
准确的Байду номын сангаас字
The net loss is $1,195,000.
概数
The net loss is more than $ 1 million.
长、复杂句
They offer refrigerated shipping service and accept small orders, which would be of use for us.
短句
They offer refrigerated shipping service and accept small orders. Their service would be useful for us.
名词化短语
The reimbursement can be made on the receipt.
2) The company is in danger of being prosecuted for infringement of copyright law.
3) We need to improve our staff’s ability to communicate with foreign customers.