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绍兴二模英语读后续写•试题原题第二节：读后续写（满分25 分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Birthdays are typically the occasions for delight and feasting. Familyand friends get together on the occasion and convey their regards with thebeautiful presents they bring with themselves. I am personally a big fan of birthdays and wait for my birthday approximately a month prior to the day.This year, my birthday came off on last Monday. I didn’t know that my parents had arranged a special party for me. At eight o’clock in the evening of my lucky birthday, I was alone at home complaining and frowning, and pitying myself for my misfortune.I thought it was going to be a special day filled with presents and fun, but allI received was a “Happy Birthday”.All of a sudden, the electricity was cut off and there was a complete darkness in the house. I couldn’t do anything. Therefore, I decided to go to sleep and end this unlucky day.Out of the blue in that quiet night, I heard a sudden noise coming from downstairs. Startled and terribly shocked, I suspected that someone broke into the house. Immediately, I tried to phone my parents, but no one answered.After a couple of minutes of fear, I started to calm down. Although in the meantime I heard more noises of people talking, I summoned up some courage and started heading for the basement. As I slowly drew closer to the basement, I guessed there were more than one person, but I found it hard to believe. There coul dn’t be a lot of people in our basement!Courageously, I opened the door of the basement. There was a complete darkness. There wasn’t a single noise. However, as I approached, I heard some laughter and confirmed that there were people. Suddenly, the lights were on and there stood my parents and friends cheering at me with the beautiful presents they had carefully prepared for me. It was a surprise party! The room was beautifully decorated with colorful balloons. Tables and chairs were laid and covered with white and contrasting red sheets. A gigantic birthday cake was positioned on the innermost table.1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
近年浙江各重点中学优秀高考模拟英语试卷读后续写汇编(30页)(总32页)--本页仅作为文档封面，使用时请直接删除即可----内页可以根据需求调整合适字体及大小--近年浙江各重点中学优秀高考模拟英语试卷读后续写汇编英语读后续写1.【2017学年浙江省高三“五校联考”第二次考试】Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only alittle money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, thelandlord was breathing down their necks.One day, Ali took Zahra’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them onthe way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He wasafraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep itsecret. Zahra agreed and t he two decided to share Ali’s running shoes. Zahra’s school hourswere in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back andgive them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Althoughhe ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When helearned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran homeexcitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he beganto get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted he thought onlyof Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gavehim strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third.Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided (碰撞) with Ali from behindand he crashed to the ground.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
读后续写专题浙江省杭州地区(含周边)重点中学2021届高三上学期期中试卷第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It's not just your mom's arbitrary rule; across cultures and throughout history, elbows(手肘）on the table have long been considered unacceptable behavior. Indeed, the Bible warns of putting your elbows on the table, and in 1530, Dutch philosopher Erasmus repeated the same rule. Even the etiquette(礼节）experts don't advise it. So, why have elbows on the table always been considered rude?For earlier civilizations, this rule functioned to prevent possible violence at the table."Table manners prevented us from leaving our space and starting a" fight. It was important that people saw you-as considerate or trying hard," says Margaret Visser, author of The Rituals of Dinner. Our place setting's fork and knife already act as an imaginary boundary for bur space at the table, so ignoring" or breaking that border indicates that you have no regard for order and are therefore potentially mentally ill-who: knows what else you're capable of!Today,while keeping your elbows off the table can't be traced back' to a single culture or civilization, it more belongs to the universal language of principle, which expresses two ideas, that at mealtime one shouldn't do anything that inconveniences other diners, and that a meal is a formal occasion where' one shouldn't behave in a casual way.However,that's not to say that in the here and now leaving your' elbows on the" table will bring dishonor upon your family. Manners develop with the times to meet our needs and feelings. In fact,some body language now suggests that elbows on the table are a sign of appearing engaged and focused on the conversation at hand.Above all,being considerate, respectful, 'and honest is more important 'than knowing which fork to use. Whether it's a handshake or a hug, it's the sincerity behind and good intentions of the action that matter most第二节：概要写作（满分25分）Possible version IPutting elbows on the table is always considered a taboo in different cultures and historical periods.（要点一）In the past,the rule helped to avoid probable conflicts at table as it left people's space inviolate.（要点二）Today,as a universal principle, it conveys the message that one shouldn't trouble other diners but behave well.(要点三）Whereas,with manners developing, placing elbows on the table equals showing interest and concentration in some situations.(要点四）Anyway,what matters most is the underlying sincerity and consideration.(要点五）79 words Possible version IIIt has long been regarded improper to put elbows on the table.(要点一）Actually, for earlier civilizations,people did so to avoid possible violence during the meal.(要点二）Nowadays,as a universal principle, it indicates that one shouldn't bother others or behave casually at mealtime.(要点三）Nevertheless, it isn't always considered bad-mannered, but it means people are concentrated and engaged.（要点四）All in all, what matters most is people's good intention and genuineness.(要点五）73 words答案解析第二部分：阅读理解（共两节，满分25分）第一节：（共10个小题；每小题2.5分，满分25分）浙江省十校联盟2021届高三10月联考英语试题第二节：读后续写（满分25分）47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
10月浙江新高考10月真题卷--英语第一节（共5小题；每题1.5分，满分7.5分）听下面5段对话。
每段对话后有一种小题，从题中所给旳A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷旳对应位置。
听完每段对话后，你均有10秒钟旳时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。
每段对话仅读一遍。
例：How much is the shirt?A. ￡19.15.B.￡9.18.C.￡9,I5.答案是C。
1. What is the man planning to do?A, Make some cheese. B, Go on a trip, C. Find a job in Paris.2. What is the time now?A. 8 o’clock.B. 10 o’clock.C. 12 o’clock.3. What are the speakers talking about?A. A local artist.B. The man’s salary.C. An apartment to let.4. How does Dr. Heath spend most of his time?A. Giving lectures.B. Conducting research.C. Doing office work,5. Why does Elaine call Peter?A. To borrow his notes.B. To explain her absence.C. To discuss the presentation.第二节（共15小题；每题1.5分，满分22.5分）听下面5段对话或独白。
每段对话或独白后有几种小题，从题中所给旳A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷旳对应位罝。
听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟旳作答时间。
每段对话或独白读两遍。
专题06 读后续写（第01期）-2023届浙江高考模拟试题分项汇编【浙江省强基联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When school was over, the day was fading and it started to drizzle(毛毛雨). I stood at the school gate, with a loaded backpack on my shoulders. It was Friday again: a weekend of joy with unlimited sleeping hours and dinner courses specially made to my taste, a weekend at home. I waved goodbye to my friends as they jumped into their fathers’ warm and fortable cars. Curiously, this gave rise to a disturbing feeling in me. It was not exactly what they called jealousy, but something like dismay(沮丧). I knew all I could expect was an old bike Mom would ride along on, with the badly-oiled chain creaking(嘎吱作响) against the wheel to announce her arrival.Every Friday when Mom came to pick me up for the weekend, it was a moment full of great expectation and great unease. I always felt my face burning as we rode our way in and out of the numerous cars and saw my friends’ faces sticking out of the car windows. It was like stepping into a ballroom with beautifully dressed ladies and finding yourself in a smelly T-shirt.To tell you the truth, Mom is quite a headache once in a while. She just looks a homely middle-aged housewife. Being a practitioner of DIY, she knits most of my sweaters, chiefly in old styles. Whenever caught by some curious classmates asking what brand my sweaters are, I’d force a smile and reply in a half joking manner: homemade.I couldn’t remember when I started to find her such an embarrassment. As a little boy, I relied on her so much. She had been working at home, cooking in the kitchen, knitting by the lamp or riding across town to buy me a book I badly needed. It had always been much fun riding with mom. But just now there seemed to be something standing between us, something that made her so strange to me and me to her.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
读后续写练习写作指导讲义读后续写（浙江省Z20名校联盟2023届高三第二次联考英语试题）试题原题第二节（满分25分）第二节：续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Cathy, my mom, whose pet phrase（口头禅）was “Never give up”, was our family’s beacon of positivity. It was not a title she earned without concerted（一致的）effort, however. When she was only thirty years old, her husband was killed in a car accident and she was left to raise me alone.My mom could have lived under a black cloud. Instead, she challenged herself to find joy every day. Leading by example, Mom taught me just how much one could accomplish with a positive attitude. She has taken the same approach in her relationship with her grandchildren—Max and Charley.One hot summer aftern oon, my mom and her two grandsons, having spent two hours building sandcastles and collecting sea shells on the beach, sank into their beach chairs to have a rest. How they longed for delicious ice cream to cool themselves, especially the two kids!Suddenly, my mom heard the familiar loud clang（叮当声）of theice-cream man bell from her beach chair. She turned quickly and saw him briefly, spotting his distinctive green shirt and catching the gleam of his waving bell before he turned and disappeared over the dun es（沙丘）.Happily, the ice-cream man’s visit was a daily occurrence at the beach, although the lag time between the sound of his bell and the departure of his truck was not long. One must be quick enough to catch him to buy the ice cream.Max and Charley wer e in great disappointment when they didn’t catch him in time that day because they really wanted to have a taste of those coolice-creams. That was until my mom’s eyes sparkled and she said to the kids, “Never give up!” She explained to the kids that the t ruck might be gone, but they should be able to catch him up at its next stop. And the kids agreed immediately.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
读后续写原题目：When I was in middle school, my family moved to Seatle, where my parents started their new businessa small grocery store downstairs my house. As a girl of shy and reserved nature, I had to take a fresh start to fit into the sophisticated city life.One sunny day, my school announced an exciting event, a talent show for the local food bank.Students were encouraged to showcase their unique talents in front of the public in the city hall on National Day. A buzz of excitement filled the school as everyone began preparing for the big day.Deep down, I felt a spark of curiosity and a desire to participate. However, my selfdoubt held me back, “I don't have any special skills to share.”Days turned into weeks, and the talent show drew closer. I couldn't shake the upsetting feeling until one day Emma, one of the most popular girls in my class, came to me while I was helping in the grocery store after class.“How about singing together in the talent show?”She grinned, “I heard you singing a tune, along the way back home. I can't help following you here. Gosh, I couldn't believe my ears. Emma, with personality and popularity, acknowledged my little talent. Since Emma had the world's prettiest voice, I felt like being favoured by fortune.“You two? The talent show for the food bank?”My mum bent towards us and her face lit up.“A big occasion.Then a light bulb seemed to go in her head. “Why not practise right now upstairs? I bet you'll be a perfect match.”Winking at us, she seemed to know we were thinking alike.Emma and I embarked on rehearsing almost every single day after school. We brainstormed.exchanged ideas and rehearsed the scene. As the days rolled by, I was feeling pretty good about our act. But the day before the performance, Emma called that she had an acute stomachache and was not in any shape to perform.Paragraph 1: I was pletely knocked out by the news.Paragraph 2: Finally came the big moment.故事概要:我想参加talent show却缺乏自信同学Emma发现了我的才华，于是邀请我一起参加。
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Living in the shadow of my two elder sisters at college who already had their lives planned out since they were little, I was always undecided about everything. As a teenager, I was fickle（反复无常的). I would like one thing for a week and then hate it the next. But I was constantly searching for the beginning of the rainbow. Changing my dream from a vet to an astronaut, I thought there were various options available to me. However, my parents would shake their heads and repeatedly asked me such questions as,“ why can’t you be more like your sisters ?What are you going to do with your life ?Aren’t you interested in anything at all ?”After a couple of shrugs（耸肩）, my parents usually stopped talking. I was not sure if they gave up or anticipated my dull reactions. I often responded,“ I couldn’t answer all of your questions now. ”Actually, my parents just had high expectations that never seemed to be fulfilled. Plus, like other parents, they just wanted to give the best to me and expected me to achieve success. The arguments with my parents seemed childish. One day, my mother made her thoughts clear,“ your grades aren’t high enough. No schools are going to want you, dear. We didn’t pay so m uch money for nothing. ” Hesitating for a while, I said,“ No matter what you say, I believe I will enter a good coll ege. ”still, I let my emotions control myself.Certainly, I had never planned not to go to college. After another debate with my mom, I decided to make a change. No longer would I sit back and let my parents mistake me for a bad boy. It was time to take action.I knew it was a crucial year at high school. Releasing my feelings, I began to collect all the knowledge I had learned and review it with all my heart. I didn’t argue with my parents anymore, but instead turned to my sisters for help and tried my best to study. Finally, I took the national college entrance examination with ease and confidence.【译文】生活在我大学时的两个姐姐的阴影下，她们从小就已经计划好了自己的生活，我总是对一切都犹豫不决。
阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
阅读下面短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold yet sunny saturday morning in February. Dad’s New Year’s resolution had been to get fit. Mum pushed him out of bed and told him to go jogging by the river. Later, after a nice liein, she went downstairs in her dressing gown and found the kids watching TV. She turned it off and said she was going to do something really special for Dad’s birthday. If they overheard anything, just promised to keep it secret.二月的一个寒冷但阳光明媚的星期六上午。
父亲的新年决心是要健身。
妈妈把他推下床，告知他去河边慢跑。
后来，在睡了个好觉后，她穿着晨衣下楼，发觉孩子们在看电视。
她关掉了它，说她要为爸爸的生日做些特殊的事。
假如他们无意中听到什么，就容许保守隐秘。
Jenny looked at Mum with a puzzled expression on her forehead and promised they wouldn’t say anythingwhatever happened. But Jenny reminded Dad’s birthda y was in June and it might be a little too early to get all steamed up about it.Silent for a moment, Mumsaid she was not getting everything ready but just wanted to spare enough time for preparation as this year it’s a bigger deal than usual. Dad was going to be 50.“50! Gosh, that’s half a century,〞spluttered Gerry. “I knew he was old, but I didn’t realize he was ancient!〞珍妮看着妈妈，额头上带着困惑的表情，容许他们不管发生什么事都不会说。
《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》专题04 2023浙江首考卷读后续写(蜂鸟奇遇记)讲义及满分语料7类60句背默（原卷版）目录真题呈现 1 答案解析 2 研读材料 3 思维拓展 3 谋篇布局 5 满分语料分类背诵7类60句 5 满分秘诀一、无灵主语（时间、地点、情感、自然现象、动作行为类名词作主语） 5 满分秘诀二、动作链（A and B型，A, B and C 型） 6 满分秘诀三、独立主格结构/w i t h复合结构 6 满分秘诀四、非谓语短语（作主语、宾语、状语、定语、宾语补足语等） 6 满分秘诀五、介词短语位于句首7 满分秘诀六、环境描写8 满分秘诀七、主题升华句8 范文背诵9walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escap e. She was covered in spiderwebs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spiderwebs that covered her head and wings. Still, s he made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberrylined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment,this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then s omeone said, “She must have e to say goodbye.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
2023高考英语读后续写范文一、概述近年来，高考英语作文题目中的读后续写题型越来越受到考生的关注和重视。
读后续写要求考生在阅读一篇短文之后，根据短文内容和主题，进行进一步的发挥，完成一篇与原文内容相关但又具有自己观点和想法的文章。
本文将从读后续写的考查内容、考生应该注意的重点以及写作技巧等方面展开阐述，以期为考生提供一些参考和指导。
二、考查内容读后续写这一题型旨在考察考生的语言综合运用能力、逻辑思维能力以及表达能力。
考生需要在短文的基础上做合理推测并进行进一步的拓展，同时要求语言表达流畅自然，内容连贯丰富，思路清晰明了。
在读后续写题型中，考生需要在深入理解原文的基础上，对其有所发挥，不仅要在语言表达上有所创新，更要在内容上有所延伸。
三、应该注意的重点1.深入理解原文在完成读后续写的任务前，考生首先要将所给的原文进行深入仔细的阅读，并对其主题、内容和观点有一个准确全面的了解。
只有在全面理解了原文的基础上，考生才能对其进行合理的推测和发挥。
2.合理推测和发挥读后续写的关键在于考生对原文的合理推测和发挥。
在进行续写时，考生可以适当发挥自己的联想，对原文中未涉及的内容进行适当的拓展，增加文章的深度和广度。
但同时也要保持与原文的内在通联，不要脱离原文的主题和内容范畴。
3.语言表达的流畅自然除了在内容上要有所发挥外，考生在表达上也要力求流畅自然。
要注意句式的多样化和连贯性，同时也要注重词汇的选择和使用，尽量使语言表达更加准确地表达出考生自己的思想和观点。
四、写作技巧1.把握主题思想在进行读后续写时，考生要始终把握原文的主题思想，不要离题，保持文章的内在通联性，同时又能进行合理的延展和发挥。
2.注意语言表达的准确性在进行续写时，考生应该注意语言表达的准确性。
要尽量避免表达中的语病和谬误，力求表达的准确和地道。
3.保持连贯性在文章的整体结构上，考生要保持文章的连贯性，题材转换的地方要注意过渡的自然性，尽量使文章结构紧凑而不显得生硬。
2023高考英语读后续写随着时间的推移，2023年高考英语考试正在逐渐接近。
其中，阅读理解作为英语考试中的关键部分，对于考生来说尤为重要。
本文将从一步步的思考角度，详细描述2023高考英语阅读理解的读后续写方法，帮助考生更好地应对此部分的考试。
一、仔细审查题目阅读完给定的文章后，首先考生应该仔细审查题目，确保自己对问题的理解没有偏差。
阅读理解题目通常有多种形式，如填空、选择题等，因此考生需要明确答题的形式和要求。
对于选择题，考生还应注意选项之间的差异，以便进行正确的匹配。
假设文章中提到一个科学研究发现了某种植物的新用途，并且要求考生推断作者想要表达的主旨。
在审查题目时，考生应该明确题目是否为选择题，并且要看清选项之间的细微差别。
可能的选项包括：A.揭示该植物的实际价值 B.讨论该植物的研究方法 C.介绍该科学研究团队 D.描述该植物的生长环境。
通过仔细审查，考生可以明确正确答案为A，选择A选项作为答案。
二、定位答案在阅读理解中，考生需要通过文中已给出的信息来回答问题。
为了有效定位答案，考生需要掌握一些定位技巧，如关键词和转折词。
假设题目要求考生找出作者提到的地理区域，而在给定的文章中并没有直接给出。
在这种情况下，考生应该寻找关键词，如地名、人名或者特定事件等。
同时，转折词也非常有助于定位答案。
在本例中，转折词“然而”后的几句话可能会提及到地理区域。
三、分析答案选项在阅读理解中，正确答案通常是通过排除错误选项来获得的。
因此，考生需要对答案选项进行逐一分析，找出不符合文章内容的选项，并将其排除。
假设题目要求考生推断作者对某个观点的态度，并给出了四个选项。
在分析选项时，考生应该将每个选项与文章中的相关段落进行对比，看是否能够找到对应的论据。
通过此种对比，考生可以逐渐排除不符合的选项，最终选择最符合的答案。
四、检查答案在完成阅读理解后写读后续写之前，考生应该仔细检查答案。
这包括检查语法错误、拼写错误等。
（新高考1卷适用江苏、河北、福建、山东、湖北、湖南、广东、浙江、辽宁、海南、重庆、北京、天津、上海等省市）读后续写原文When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher encouraged me to enter for a writing contest. I did not love writing and my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of theTitanic as an oral report — a one-act play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he. So, why to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. And if you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at有机会this.”I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. The story wouldcome straight from the horse’s mouth绝对可靠. Not abrilliant notion/ idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice. What did the horse think, as he ripped/ got through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. Igot tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s fabled/ imaginary horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. With a dictionary. I enlisted/ asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the finished essay, my teacher read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again. And no name. Entries are anonymous匿名的.” I wrote it again. And again and again. If I didn’t win, I didn’t care.Paragraph 1:When I almost forgot the contest, the news came. Paragraph 2:I went to the teacher’s office after the award presentation.续写原文梗概：我对写作文没有信心，老师却鼓励我参赛，我在努力的过程中获取了信心和乐趣，而不在意比赛本身。
阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
标注：黄色为非谓语动词，绿色斜体为从句，红色为并列句A high---pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger. Instead, Cassie was knee---deep in flowers that covered the meadow (草地) like a quilt.“Cassie! You scared me to death!” Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow. “I am sorry,” Cassie, absorbed in her photography, didn’t notice the thick fog rolling in, consuming the nearby mountains. “Not again!” Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds. “We gotta go!”Cassie’s focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, “Let’s go back to the campsite.” The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain. The road turned slippery, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down.“It’s dangerous! We need shelter now!” Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm’s strength increasing rapidly. Laura’s keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches. It wasn’t much,but it offered a chance to escape the rain.“Cassie, over here!” Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind.Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura’s voice.As she approached, she could see the shelter. It wasn’t perfect,but it was better than nothing.“Smart thinking, Laura,”Cassie said, her teeth chattering (打颤) with cold as she pressed her backpack close to her chest. The backpack, a tough and waterproof (防水的) model, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies. Little did they know, his advice would prove invaluable on this day.注意：1. 续写词数应为150 左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
2022年10月浙江十校联盟高三英语考试读后续写解析讲义-2023届高考英语一轮复习【题目展示】Charles Rose lived in the country with his father, who taught him to read and to write. Mr. Rose told his son that, when his morning lessons were over, he might amuse himself for one hour as he pleased.There was a river nearby. On its bank stood the hut of a poor fisherman, who lived by selling fish. His careful wife kept her wheel going early and late. They both worked very hard to keep themselves above want. But they were greatly troubled for fear that their only son should never learn to read and to write. They could not teach him themselves, and they were too poor to send him to school.Charles called at the hut of this fisherman one day, to inquire about his dog, which was missing. He found the little boy, whose name was Joe, siting by the table, on which he was making marks with a piece of chalk. Charles asked him whether he was drawing pictures.“No. I am trying to write,” said little Joe, “but I know only two words. Those I saw upon a sign, and I a m trying to write them.”“If I could only learn to read and write,” said he, “I should be the happiest boy in the world.”“Then I will make you happy said Charles.” I am only a little boy, but I can teach you that.”“My father gives me an hour every day for myself. Now, if you will try to learn, you shall soon know how to read and to write.”Both Joe and his mother were ready to fall on their knees to thank Charles. They told him it was what they wished above all things.So, on the next day when the hour came, Charles put his book in his pocket, and went to teach Joe. Joe learned very fast, and Charles son began to teach him how to write.Sometime after, a gentleman called on Mr. Rose, and said, “Charles did not always amuse himself. I often see him go to th e house of the fisherman. I fear he goes out in their boat.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Paragraph 1:The moment the gentleman left, Mr. Rose went in search of his son.Paragraph 2:The next day, his father took him to town, and gave him books for himself and Joe, with writing paper, pens, and ink.【文本解读】主要人物：Charles Rose；Joe人物分析：Charles Rose：父亲教会他读书和写字，有一定学识能力，善良，乐于助人，有爱心。
2023届高三英语二轮复习读后续写送给父母的结婚周年蛋糕讲义Times were hard in the United States during the 1930s. My family could hardly make a living on our farm. Even so, I was determined to help my parents celebrate their anniversary in a special way.Three days before their anniversary, Mother took out her old dr esses. They were wrinkled. Sighing, Mother said, “Men’s clothes don’t change that much,but my dresses are just not in style.” I didn’t want Mother to give up the anniversary celebration. Daddy would be disappointed. Also, I knew now what I was going to do for them and they would have to be away for me to do it. I persuaded Mother to changeher dress, and by Friday night, she had finished the dress and pressed it.On Saturday, Daddy went to borrow Mr. Smit h’s pickup truck, and Mother went to get dressed. By that time I could hardly wait for them to leave so I could start making the cake! Keeping my plan secret had been hard, but I’d decided not to tell my younger brothers, Bill and David, until Mother and Daddy were gone. I was afraid they would get excited and let it slip out.Bill, David and I went out to wave good-bye until the truck was far down the road. We started backto the house. “I have a wonderful surprise,” I told them. “While Mot her and Daddy are out, we are goingto make a cake for them. An anniversary cake.”Bill looked at me skeptically.“A fancy three-layer cake and we’re going to decorate it.”“We’ve never made a cake before,” Bill said.“We’re probably going to make a mess and Mother will be upset.”I told them I was the oldest and I was in charge. I got the milk and four eggs and the sugar. The hardest part would be breaking the eggs on the edge of the bowl. I sifted( 筛 ) the flour and baking powder togetherfirst. And salt. I particularly remembered that because it seemed strange to put salt in a cake. I put all ingredients together and mixed them. It looked creamy and delicious.P1：I poured it into the baking pan and put it into the oven.P2：We took their hands and led them to the kitchen.续写思路1. 确立主旨：本文以第一人称展开叙述，主要围绕主人公“我”想给父母庆祝结婚周年庆，所以打算亲自做蛋糕作为惊喜的故事。
读后续写原文Sally’s birthday was approaching, and the excitement that usually filled her heart was now replaced with disappointment and stress. Turning eleven was a big deal, and she had always celebrated it with a grand party surrounded by her friends. However, this year was different. The burden of excessivehomework and her parents’ struggling business weighed heavily on her, forcing Sally to make the difficult decision of not having a birthday party, even though it was an event she enjoyed dearly every year.One day, during break, her best friend, Jane, with a curious look in her eyes, approached. “Are you going to have a birthday party this year?” Jane asked, sensing Sally’s sadness.“No,” Sally sighed and replied sadly, “There’s just too much going on and my parents are going through financial difficulties.”She smiled weakly, trying to conceal her immense disappointment and stress, but Jane saw through her pretence (假装) easily. Jane nodded thoughtfully and did not say anything. After the break, Sally saw her talking to one of their classmates, Sarah, secretively. Curious, Sally went over to them, but as soon as Jane saw her, she quickly walked away. Sally was startled by Jane’s strange actions and turned towards Sarah.“What did she say?” Sally asked.However, Sarah simply shrugged and walked away with Jane, leaving Sally standing there, feeling left out and anxious.What is happening? Sally wondered anxiously. Are they keeping something from me?As Sally’s birthday drew nearer, Jane was often found c hatting softly with her other classmates. Whenever Sally went over to them, they would just walk away or tell her that they were talking about a secret which Sally was not allowed to know. Jane has never kept secrets from me before, Sally thought. Her heart fell. Even hersadness with each passing moment, desperately trying to figure out what wasthey hiding?续写段首句：P1:On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.P2: Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile.解题思路step1:根据读原文时所划关键信息确定故事问题/矛盾（通常有两层：①事情本身；②通过事情所表达的情感/思想）读原文时需划的关键信息主要包括：①负面否定信息②与前者形成对比的信息③反复出现信息④问题信息⑤转折信息本文主要问题/矛盾：1 浅层：生日派对是否举办；朋友为何有那些行为举动是否疏远我2 深层：关于友情的感悟step2:根据题目已给的段首句与主要矛盾确定每段发展到什么程度P1: Sally 惊喜地看到朋友们为其精心准备的生日派对P2: 事情层面的矛盾在第一段都已解决，为了突出中心主旨，可以在第二段聚焦描写Sally与文中具体描写过的Jane或Sarah 之间的互动，最后引出对友情的感悟step3：每段具体设计：确定描写对象，从行为动作/语言、心理感受/神态表情两大方面交替描写各个对象，必要处添加环境等其他描写设计示例：P1：描写对象——Sally、朋友同学们Sally：好奇困惑，走进教室试图开灯同学们：亮起灯欢呼从角落窜出表达祝福拍手唱歌拿着蛋糕走进Sally 环境：教室精心布置生日蛋糕放在桌上Sally：明白了一切P2: 描写对象——Sally、JaneSally：激动惊讶语塞Jane：走进拥抱说话（具体语言内容结合文章线索设置，最好能突出文章中心主旨）Sally：感动；通过语言+动作（鞠躬等）表达感谢感悟: 对友情的感悟谨记：1. 必写高级句式：非谓、独立主格、定从、名从、倒装、强调2. 多从原文找线索，利用相关词汇，提高与原文的契合度英文写作示例P1:On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.Captured by infinite curiosity and confusion（利用非谓结构将情绪描写与行为动作描写结合到一句话）, she gently opened the door and attempted to reach the light switch. However, before she touched the switch, the darkness and silence were broken by rays of flashlight and cheers from her classmates who were just hiding in the corners of classroom.“Happy birthday to you! Sally.” “Wish you a memorable birthday!” They were clapping, singing and approaching to her with candles and presents in hands. What further amazed her （疑问词引导的名从）was that the classroom was elaborately decorated and a big cake of multiple layers was on her table. At this moment, all confusion and sadness were erased .P2: Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smil e.So shocked was Sally that（倒装）she even couldn’t speak anything for a short moment. Then, Jane stepped forward and hugged her tightly, whispering in Sally’s ear,“I know you are going through a lot recently, but you have us, your friends, on your birthday a nd everyday.”（突出友情凸显中心主旨的语言内容）“Thank you, Jane. Thank you, dear friends. This is undoubtedly the most precious birthday party I’ve ever had.” Sally bowed and expressed her sincere appreciation to everyone, extreme warmth overflowing in her heart（独立主格结构）. It was on this birthday that （强调句）she became convinced her friends had never distanced themselves from her and they were even the most forting sunshine on those chilling tough days.下水文：P1:On the day of Sally’s birthday, she went to school and found her classroom in total darkness.When she hesitated to enter the room due to fear, a wave of fear and nervousness swept over her, and her heart pounded. She groped to turn on the light switch, but before her hand could find it, a chorus of cheers broke the silence. It's amazing, it's unbelievable! "The students, led by Jane, jumped out of various hidingplaces. The room was well lit, and Sally's eyes widened in surprise, incredulous. The classroom is decorated with balloons and ribbons, there is a very exquisite cake on the table, and there is a pile of gifts waiting to be opened in the corner.P2: Tears sprang from Sally’s eyes and her face broke into a radiant smile.She turned to Jane, who couldn't close her mouth at the moment. We know you can't hold a party this year, so we've decided to give you the party as a big surprise. Don't blame me for deliberately hiding you, "Jane said, her eyes full of pranks. This is indeed a grand birthday party, just like the ones she held before, which will be unforgettable for her whole life.。
