高考英语--读后续写2023年1月浙江卷(真题+范文)

续写原文素材第一段Going the Distance走完全程（坚持到底）Riya spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. She was overwhelmed by the huge building. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist. All the different hallways and wings were too much to think about, let alone commit to memory.丽亚在高中的第一周试图保持清醒。

她面对这栋巨大的建筑不知所措。

她决定记住她的课在哪里，然后假装这个地方的其他地方都不存在。

她很难去思考所有不同的走廊和大厅侧面，更不用说记住它们了。

第二、三段In P.E., Coach Wallace sent her reeling when he announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside.在体育上课上，当华莱士教练宣布每个人都必须在外面的跑道上跑一英里时，她都惊呆了。

Riya searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she dreaded more than having to run a whole mile. To Riya, a mile was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles to her grandfather's house, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car!丽娅在她同学的脸上寻找恐慌的迹象。

2021年1月浙江高考英语读后续写范文赏析阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成--个完整的故事。

Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage - I carried an 85 -pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year. Old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter,but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table,hole uppermost,I bent over and pressed my head against the opening.At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then,as I went on with my task,unwilling to quit,my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it，like a cork（软木塞）forced into a bottle.I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived.The pumpkin was heavy. "I'm going to set it down, now,"I said,and with Jason helping to support its weight,I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in.When I pulled hard,my nose got in the way.Igot into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle,but it was no use."I can't get it out!"I shouted,my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意∶1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2.至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

（注：根据全国卷读后续写的特点，删除了原题中的划线词及续写要求）（2021年1月浙江卷）Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage -I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately, we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. "I'm going to set it down, now," I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. "I can't get itout!" I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.__________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.__________________________________________________________________________________范文1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Sweating and nearly tearing, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （非谓语动词及宾语从句）With every angle tried in vain for myannoyance.（with复合结构）At last, Dad determined to break the pumpkin with the help of the sharp knife. "It's done!" the voice from my dad seemed to be the most beautiful melody, and a breath of fresh air eventually entered. With my head getting out of the pumpkin and my body straightening, what I had seen was a close-up-camera. My dearwhen her daughter was in suffering!That video was posted the day before Halloween. To our surprise, the video managed to catch much attention from people online, racking up（赢得、获得）hundreds of thousands of views. Neighbors and friends recognized the pulling head person was me and regarded me as a celebrity. It was when some reporters and TV stations called for interview that I truly realized how hot and popular this video became.（强调句）During Halloween, which was a festival of trick and treat, I tricked myself instead. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others. Undoubtedly, it became the most unforgettable Halloween even if I still had no idea of whose pumpkin was heavier yet.范文2I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The hard pumpkin weighed stubbornly upon my shoulder, not wanting to budge at all.（非谓语动词）Through the thick wall of the pumpkin's meaty shell, I could hear my dad and Jason struggling to hold back their laughter while supporting me to pull my oversized orange astronaut helmet off.（比喻）I attempted the artful removal of pumpkin head calling out all of my hidden gymnastic abilities in ways that I knew I never could have moved. To put it simply, my body was like an octopus （章鱼）crawling out of a borrowed conch shell（海螺壳）, and my mom captured all the tactful（机智的、圆滑的）escape on camera.That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. Never had I ever felt so embarrassed but never had I ever been so famous! （倒装句）Instantly, without a few hours, it became a hit that the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. My emotions were soconflicted between whether I should be happy or sad. As it turned out, my dad managed to hold on to the pumpkin and keep it steady so that I could perform my dance routine. Together, the choreography（编舞）appeared quite hilarious（滑稽的）. Until today, I am still unsure what to make of that unforgettable Halloween and super thankful for my dad's rescue.范文3I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Panicky though I was, my family found my foolish display more comical than dangerous.（倒装句）To my disappointment, instead of trying to help, Jason reached for his phone. While mom and dad was working hard to help calm me down in between fits of laughter, Jason recorded the whole ordeal（磨难、严峻考验）. He was determined to keep a video record of the events in its full entirety, surely to tease me with it for a long time to come. Pull as I might, my head couldn't budge（稍微移动）.（倒装句）Finally, after some olive oil to help ease the friction and a final pull with all my might, I stumbled back to the ground--my head free and the pumpkin firmly grasped by mom and dad.That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. If I didn't feel humiliated enough at home, I got to live with my foolishness in school as well. It was not long before I was given the nickname "Pumpkin Head", and it stuck. The nickname could not come at a better time; my friends begged me to seriously consider putting my head back in the pumpkin for our annual trick-or-treating adventures the next night. At this point, I could not do anything but smile and chuckle（轻声笑）along with the rest of my friends. Acts of foolishness can happen to anybody. After all, I would have done the same to Jason or my friends if they werethe ones stuck in the pumpkin.（虚拟语气）With the arrival of Halloween night, I went around my community with my friends,trick-or-treating with my head in another pumpkin that mom and dad had found for me. This time, I made sure to cut a big enough hole.。

2023年1月高考英语试题（浙江卷）+听力+答案+作文第一节(共 5 小题;每小题 1.5 分,满分7.5 分)听下面 5 段对话。

每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项。

听完每段对话后，你都有10 秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。

每段对话仅读一遍。

1.What will the speakers do next?A. Visit a friend.B. Pick up Billy.C. Buy some beans.2.Who is Andy Clarks?A. A public librarian.B. A TV actor.C. A famous lawyer.3.What are the speakers talking about?A. Gifts for Jason.B. A baseball game.C. The woman's retirement.4.What went on at Cooper's last night?A. A movie show.B. A birthday party.C. A sales promotion.5.What problem do the speakers have?A. They are late for work.B. They get stuck in traffic.C. They have lost their way.第二节(共15 小题:每小题 1.5 分,满分22.5 分)听下面5 段对话或独白。

每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项。

听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题 5 秒钟：听完后，各小题将给出5 秒钟的作答时间。

每段对话或独白读两遍。

听第6 段材料，回答第6、7 题。

6.Where are the speakers?A. At home.B. At the office.C. At the airport.7.How does Sara sound?A. Anxious.B. Surprised.C. Grateful.听第7 段材料，回答第8 至10 题。

高考真题读后续写132022年1月浙江卷:傲娇学霸与迷糊学渣一、试题呈现第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

When Dr. Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate(命运) would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I weren’t there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn’t mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to say, I didn’t look forward to an entire team of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn’t say anything for fear that I would make things worse.The project required each team to develop a hypothesis(假设), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn’t sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.Para.1We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Para.2Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease.二、参考范文Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. As expected, my ideas were completely eclipsed by his intelligence during our first few meetings and it seemed that there was no way that I could make a contribution to the project. However, my self-esteem wouldn’t allow me to yield to the challenge and I took a more active part in the test of the hypothesis. Days and nights witnessed my devotion to observing teenagers around us and interviewing them patiently and logically. My dedication gradually melted my teammate’s heart and his attitudes towards me began to change. He was no more an ice cube unwilling to discuss, and instead he listened attentively to my ideas and adopted some from time to time. It was the first time that I had perceived that we could be called a team. Everything seemed to go on so smoothly. Paragraph2:Then one day I got word that he was admitted to the hospital for a serious disease. The moment I arrive at his ward, his pale face and tired look told everything. What surprised me even more was that he still inquired about the progress of our project and begged me to finish it alone. At the sight of this pitiful boy’s pleading look, I bet no one would refuse. It was exactly at that moment that I made up my mind I would spare no effort to achieve a satisfying shared grade. In the following days, my teammate’s single-minded pursuit of academic excellence supported me in checking the statistics and having a rehearsal for a thousand times. Finally the moment to present our findings came. From Dr. Gullickson’s expression, I could tell our project was a huge success. When asked about the secret of our successful project, I grinned, exposing a set of amazingly white teeth and answered without hesitation,“Cooperation!” I just couldn’t wait to tell my teammate our shared triumph!三、故事理解①When Dr. Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate(命运) would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.当亨德森博士为他的心理学课分配项目伙伴时，我暗自希望他能把我和我最好的朋友配对，或者至少是一个能让我玩得开心的同学。

2024年浙江卷1月续写(路痴的自我救赎)SelfRedemption of a Person with Poor Sense of Direction（路痴的自我救赎）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a sixstory building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers’ offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone mit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn’t exist.In her first PE class, Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva, “a mile” was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car!When Coach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind. ” It’s just the beginning, “she thought.” I’ll e in last for sure. “Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick on herself. She stopped thinking about the word” mile. “Instead, she focused on reaching the shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up ahead. Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried to see if she could plete her first lap. One lap turned into two, then three, then four.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2, 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

2022年1月浙江高考（首考）英语试题第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第二节读后续写（满分 25 分）阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。

When Dr. Gullickson was assign ing project mate s for his introduction to experimental psychology class, I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the intense, fiercely competitive, singularly serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate would have it, Dr. Gullickson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announce d that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new lab mate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I weren't there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably cause his grade-point average to take a nosedive. He wasn't outright mean or abusive. He just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything, lest I make things worse.The project required each lab team to develop a hypothesis, set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, run the tests, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students. When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades - the exact opposite of me. I was outmatch ed. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out.After lengthy discussions, we somehow agreed to do a study on the tactile-kinesthetic perception of space. I wasn't sure what it meant, but at least we had a topic.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右：2. 至少使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好;4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2023年1月浙江高考英语真题「救助小鸟」读后续写思路分析第二节读后续写(满分25 分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering(悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car whena hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good-bye.”注意：1.续写词数应为150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

浙江23年一月高考英语作文续写全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: A Journey of GrowthAs the last student finished their exam paper and handed it in, the tension in the air dissipated. The room was filled with sighs of relief and the sound of papers shuffling as students gathered their belongings. The three-hour ordeal of the English exam was finally over. Some students were confident in their performance, while others worried about their answers. But for all of them, the month-long preparation and stress had come to an end.As they stepped out of the exam room, the students were greeted by the familiar sights and sounds of their school campus. The sun was shining brightly, the birds were chirping, and the gentle breeze rustled the leaves of the trees. It felt like a weight had been lifted off their shoulders, and they could finally breathe easy.The months leading up to the high school entrance exam had been a whirlwind of emotions and hard work. Countlesshours were spent studying and reviewing, going over past exam papers and doing practice questions. There were moments of frustration and self-doubt, but also moments of breakthroughs and achievements.For some students, the journey had been a smooth one, with consistent effort and dedication paying off. They had pushed themselves to their limits and had come out stronger and more confident. For others, there were setbacks and challenges along the way, but they had persevered and never given up.As they looked back on the past month, the students realized that it wasn't just about the exam itself. It was about the growth and learning that had come from the process. They had learned the value of hard work and perseverance, the importance of time management and organization, and the power of believing in themselves.As they walked out of the school gates, the students knew that whatever the outcome of the exam, they had come out as better and stronger individuals. They were ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead, knowing that they had the knowledge and skills to overcome them.The sun was setting in the distance, casting a warm glow over the campus. The students smiled as they said theirgoodbyes to each other, knowing that they had shared a journey of growth and transformation. They walked away, ready to embrace the next chapter of their lives with confidence and determination.篇2Title: The Journey Back HomeIt was a bright and chilly January morning in the bustling city of Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province. The streets were buzzing with activity as students made their way to the exam center for the highly anticipated 23-year January high school entrance examination.As I sat in the exam room with my heart pounding and my hands shaking, I couldn't help but think back to the months of preparation and hard work that had led up to this moment. The hours spent pouring over textbooks and practice exams, the sleepless nights spent memorizing vocabulary and grammar rules - it had all come down to this one test.The proctor's voice cut through my thoughts as he announced the beginning of the exam. With a deep breath, I dove into the sea of questions before me, determined to give it my all.Hours passed in a blur of pencil scratches and eraser marks. I pushed through fatigue and doubt, drawing on all my knowledge and skills to tackle each challenge that came my way.Finally, the last question was answered and the exam was over. As I walked out of the exam room, a sense of relief washed over me. I had given it my best shot, and now all that was left to do was wait for the results.Days turned into weeks, and the anticipation grew. Finally, the day arrived when the results were to be announced. With bated breath, I scanned the list of names posted outside the school gates.And there it was - my name, shining brightly among the top scorers. A wave of elation swept over me as I realized that all my hard work had paid off. I had passed the exam with flying colors.As I made my way back home, I couldn't help but feel a sense of pride and accomplishment. The journey had been long and challenging, but in the end, it had been worth it. I had proven to myself that with determination and perseverance, anything is possible.And so, as I walked through the familiar streets of Hangzhou, I knew that this was just the beginning of a new chapter in my life.With the high school entrance exam behind me, I was ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead, armed with the knowledge that I could achieve anything I set my mind to.篇3The clock was ticking as she anxiously flipped through the pages of her English exam paper. This was the moment she had been dreading for months - the results of the Zhejiang 23-year January high school entrance exam. The stakes were high, and every question seemed to hold the key to her future.As the minutes ticked by, she focused on each question with laser-like precision, determined to give it her best shot. The room was filled with the sound of scratching pens and shuffling papers as her classmates worked feverishly to complete their exams.Finally, the moment of truth arrived. The papers were collected, and she waited with bated breath for the results to be announced. The tension in the room was palpable, but she tried to remain calm and composed.As the teacher read out the names of the students who had scored top marks, her heart sank. Her name was not amongthem. Disappointment washed over her like a tidal wave, threatening to engulf her in its icy grip.But then she heard her name called out for an honorable mention, and a wave of relief flooded through her. She had done it - she had passed the exam and secured a place in one of the top high schools in Zhejiang!As she left the exam hall that day, a sense of pride and accomplishment filled her heart. She knew that this was just the beginning of a new chapter in her life, and she was ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead with determination and resolve.。

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（注：根据全国卷读后续写的特点，删除了原题中的划线词及续写要求）（2023年1月浙江卷）I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering( 悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to thecenter of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say good- bye.”注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.__________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.__________________________________________________________________________________范文1A few weeks later, I visited the farm again.The same dilapidated (荒废的) house, the same gigantic (巨大的) spider web, the same green blackberry path.（排比）“Will the hummingbird be the same? Will this lovely and humanistic creature be trapped in the web again? Not likely, since the hole in the window had been fixed.”These questions and thoughts popped into my head like strands of spider thread.(比喻) With smell of roasted food wafting in the air,(with复合结构) my friends and I chatted and laughed merrily around the picnic table. It seemed the hummingbird was temporarily thrown to the back of my mind. Soon, the sun began to set and it was time for home.I was about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. It perched on a small twig just an inch before me and studied me with the same sparkling and pleasant eyes. (拟人) In an ecstasy of delight, I held out my fingers for it to rest and we communicated with our half-human, half-bird language. My teary friends were all deeply struck by the profound bondthis world,(虚拟条件句的倒装) it must be the universal love that surpassed beyond any species(定语从句), as was the case with my sacred范文2A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. When I walked past the milking house, I cast an unconscious glance at it. Then mixed feelings came over me. Maybe another little creature was trapped? Or maybe Iwould meet “her” again? Whatever the reason, every nerve in my body was screaming at me to step inside for a closer look.(夸张) But nothing happened. “Forget it, it was just a bird,” I let out a deep sigh and made my way out.I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. There she was, flapping her wings and approaching me.（非谓语动词做状语）A cry of joy escaped my throat. “Hey, old girl! How is everything goin g?” I called softly. Then she landed in my cupped hands and stared into my eyes. I stroked her feathers gently. Moments later, she uttered aleft with me will remain, reminding me that there are things in nature(宾语从句) that exist outside the laws and understanding of man (定语从句). (主题升华句)。