2017-2019高考真题分项汇编专题22短文改错(英语 解析版)
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This is all what I want to say.What is mentioned above, the number of the students in senior school is increasing.He won the game, what made us very happy.Which everybody knows, Taiwan belongs to China.Parents want to do everything for their children, which do no goodto them.We children should be encouraged to do all what we should do by ourselves.What he got the first place in this exam is a good piece of news.Beijing was quite different from which they had heard of.He will tell you his opinion which is usual as valuable as that ofthe adults.One of the surprising things about football in England is the great knowledge of the game which even the smallest boy seems to have it.A narrow bed is in the corner near the window that face south.Which I like most in my room is the tape recorder my parents gave meas my birthday present.It is the world of my own where I can do whichever I like.If you find any idioms that you can’t understand them, try to guessthe meaning from the context.As a beginner, you find difficult to learn English well.If you have difficulty in pronunciation, you should listen to someEnglish tapes every day.Why! I have nothing to confess. What is it you want me to say?We’ll do what we can mee t the needs of customers.There is no doubt whether we will win the game.He was very satisfied with that you have done.I feel an honor to have the chance to tell you something about our activities.We hope that we can have less homework and more time to join the activities.As soon as they know what to write about, they get down to work.All of us want very much to see these recommended m ovies, especially that you referred to just now.Having been told many times, but he still wouldn’t understand it.That worries his parents is that he often fails in the exams.America was where was first called “India” by Columbus.No matter who knows the truth will tell you about it.People in part of North China sleep on which they call “kang”.A new school has been built in which used to be a chemical factory.As is known to us all is that the earth is smaller than the sun.They reached which they thought was the place they’d been dreaming of.What is hard to get is that you will always treasure.Give this prize to who got the first place.The experts have decided to do all what they can to save the pictures.短文改错:(1)Most American businesses are open five days a week,and children attend school five days as well as. 1.____American families usually have two-day weekend, 2.____Saturday and Sunday. Over the weekends, people pay 3.____their time in many different way. Many families have 4.____a party at home. Many families take part in sports.Running, biking, playing the volleyball and swimming 5._____are popular with the summer. Skiing and skating are the 6._____favorite winter sports. Weekends are also a time 7._____for America families to work on something at home. 8._____Many families plant flowers and have vegetables 9.______gardens. Some families paint or repair our houses 10._____at the weekends.(2)Nowadays, watch TV has become part of people’s life 1._____in most families. Because there are excellent programs 2. _____for children, many people feel harmful to them. 3._____There are several reasons for this.Above of all, some programs are not good for 4. _____children to watch. Second, television can affect children’s 5. ____ eyesight. Third, if they watch TV too long each day, theywon’t be able to finish homework in time. Also, if they 6.____stay up too late at night watching TV, they will feel asleep 7._____ in class, and thus won’t be able to follow other. 8.______So watching television too much can be harmful tochildren, both mental and physically. Children must 9._____be under the control when they watch TV. 10.______(3).In the afternoon of last Sunday, my friend and I were 1.______taking a walk along a river near my home, suddenly we 2._____heard a boy calling in help in the river. We jumped into 3.______the river and pulled the boy out. Then we made him 4.______breathe use mouth-to- mouth way. After the boy 5._______came to him, we sent him to the hospital at once and 6.______telephoned to the boy’s parents. The boy was saved. His 7.______ parents were very thankful to us and the doctors think 8.______high of our first aid. 9.______We r ealized that know first aid is very important. 10._____ AnAmerican company wants to build a paper factoryin our city. But opinions are divided on the question. 1.______Some think we should build a paper factory. If we do, 2.______many new jobs can created for the local people, and it 3.______will sure push the development of the city’s economy. 4.______What’s more, the factory will bring modern ideas ofmanagement and new machines, include 5._____equipments for protecting the environment. 6.______On the other hand, others insist on not have it built 7._______in the city. They believe that the factory will be produce loud8._____noises, will disturb people’s peaceful life. Besides, poisonous9.____gases from the factory will dirty the air we breathe in. 10.______The rivers will also be polluted by the waste water from the factory.短文改错1 Dear Sue,Well, I am here in the Beijing! I'm staying at a1. .very comfortable hotel the same like ours in Britain and2. .enjoy Chinese food, though I miss my English break-fast.3. .It has been very kind and helpful for everyone to 4. .help me everywhere. Yesterday I visited the Summer 5. .Palace where the Emperors were used to go in the 6. .summers. Today I'm off to see the Great Wall, it is one 7. .of the wonders m the world. In a word, all are very 8. .interesting, so I do wish you could go to visit China.9. .Hope everyone home is well.10. .Dan2)There is a small island in the Pacific Ocean, that1. .is near 8 miles long and 8 miles wide. It was once 2. .called "The Pleasant Island" but now it's national name 3. .was Nauru, "the happy little nation" in English.4. .Nauru was once owned the Germans in history.5. .Later, the Australians ruled the island people. In 6. .World War Ⅱ, the Japan took Nauru away from the7. .Australians. Now Nauru do not belong to Germany,8. .Australia and Japan. On January 31, the island Nauru9. .became new nation and had a new name.10. .3)Bill and Harry met at school the first time1. .at the beginning of term. Bill said firstly, "Hello,2. .I'm Bill. What's your name, please?" "My name is3. .Harry," other answered. Bill continued to ask which4. .school he had been the last year. Harry answered,5. ."Centre School" "Really? So is my good friend Bob6. . White. Do you know him?" Harry answered glad,7. ."Surely, We were in the same class then. " Bill took a 8. .look at his watch and say," Well, it's getting late. I9. .must be leaving now. Nice to have met with you. "10. .4)Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school1. .sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6, which was a2. .fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers3. .attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the4. .100-metre race. He finish the race in 12..6 seconds5. .and broke in the school record. The sports meet6. .was really success. That was because we were7. .all trying to do my best.8. .Although I was not one of the winner,9. .I was proud of that we had done.10. .Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li Ping5)Dear Abby,How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.1. .I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my2. .further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam3. .for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However,4. .my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me5. .going them They say it is too far away that they will not see me6. .for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely.7. .They can't imagine a girl so young live alone They advise me to study8. .in the capital instead. Then I'II be able to continue living with9. .them How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?10. .Best wishes.Jane 6)Last week I wentto a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad 1. .movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little2. .boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich3.______family who had no child. The boy received a very good education4. .and twenty years later he became doctor. In his hospital, he had a5. .patient, who was an old lady. He did care too much about her,6. .for she could hardly afford for the medical care . One evening, the7. .lady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed the doctor found8. .a letter, in it he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great9. .mother. He had wanted to call her mother, but it was too late .10. .Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears. 7 Dear Li Xiaojun,I’m glad to receive your letter. I’d like to discuss the problem1. _______with you. It is true that some video games is good for your2. _______thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relaxed3. _______Therefore, you are spending too much time on that.4. _______You are not little boy any more. You should learn to control yourself.5.______Why not to try to finish your homework first every day6.________and then spend a little time play some video games. I think,7.________like a student, the most important thing is to study hard at school.8.________You should try your best to get good grade in your9. _______subjects and try to become a useful person for the future10. ______Yours, Editor 8 It was a long time since we last saw each other.You can 1. _______hardly imagine how I miss you. How are you getting with 2._______your first job? I remember you once tell me you were eager3.________to graduate and to become an English teacher. Now you must4.________have many first hand experience. How do you find your English5. _______ teaching? Is teaching kids English asinterested as you expected 6. _______in college? And do your student enjoy your classroom teaching?7.________Anyway, I believe you must be very popular with the kids, for8.________you are a born teacher. Hope y ou great success in your work! Yes, 9._______why not give me a call or come for get-together this weekend?10.________ 9 I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Everyevening then I am doing homework and at weekends 1.________when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs2. ________on tapes. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the3. ________colourfully world of music. Now and then I stop to follow the4. ________songs. Much often than not, my mother comes in, asking 5.________me to fix my attention on my work. She does 6.________not like pop music. Like the most grown-ups, she enjoys folk 7._______songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful8. ________life when she was young. It is true which people of different9. ________age understand music differently and enjoy different music 10._______ 10 During the summer holiday, I think I should dosomething 1. ________meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food2. ________restaurant and worked there as cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day3. ________for three weeks. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless.4. ________It made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway.5. ________After all, I stuck to it with determinations. Every day I started6. ________off for work early in the morning and went to home late in the7. ________evening. Finally, I finished the job after the new school term8. ________began. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really9. ________a successful experience, which is worth remembering for ever. 10.________ 2006届高考总复习英语专项训练短文改错参考答案(一)1.the去掉。
历年高考短文改错真题汇总Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way, ”my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.(2020全国1)Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.(2020全国2)My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.(2020全国3)I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. (2019全国1)Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.(2019全国2)I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it requireda lot of ideas and efforts. What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one. I want my cafe have a special theme such as like "Tang Dynasty". In the cafe, customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them. If I succeed in manage one, I will open more. I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city. Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.(2019全国3)During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.(2018全国1)When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.(2018全国2)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.(2018全国3)In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.(2017全国1)Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pickthe vegetables!(2017全国2)When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically.and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.(2017全国3)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.(2016全国1)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.(2016全国2)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. (2016全国3)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it . (2015全国1)One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,”How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.(2015全国2)Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then --- for all these year --- we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!(2014全国1)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.(2014全国2)。
1997-2019年高考全国卷短文改错真题汇编(后附参考答案)建安区三高Peter2019年高考英语短文改错真题【2019·全国卷I】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.【2019·全国卷II】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
三年(2017-2019)高考真题英语分项汇编专题22 短文改错一、2019年高考真题1. 【2019·全国卷I】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.2. 【2019·全国卷II】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
·三年(2017-2019)新课标卷高考英语试题研究短文改错高考短文改错题是在给出一篇约100词的短文,文中有10处错误,要求考生对每个句子进行判断,如有错误将其改正。
错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等方面的错误。
每句中最多有两处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
高考短文改错着重考查考生的语言基本功和正确使用英语进行表达的能力。
此题型不仅要求考生牢固的掌握一定的词汇和语法知识,还要求考生具有一定的阅读理解和逻辑推理能力。
它针对考生平时学习英语过程中,尤其是在写作中常犯的错误而设计的,考生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。
2016-2019年新课标卷高考英语短文改错试题分析:年份试卷类型体裁词数考点分布2019年新课标卷I记叙文95 形容词;定语从句;冠词;连词;副词;固定搭配;名词的数;现在分词;固定搭配;固定搭配新课标卷II记叙文105 名词的数;形容词的用法;序数词;副词;介词;连词;there be句型形容词;形容词比较级;一般过去时新课标卷III说明文108 不定式;动词的时态;形容词固定搭配;介词;代词;定语从句动词的固定搭配;名词的数;冠词2018年新课标卷I 记叙文113 冠词;动词时态;不定代词;副词;名词复数定语从句;非谓语动词;形容词;介词;连词新课标卷II 记叙文108 名词;名词单复数;冠词;非谓语动词情态动词;代词;固定搭配;介词;时态宾语从句的连接词新课标卷III 记叙文102 时态;非谓语动词;连词;固定搭配;代词;固定结构;比较级;主谓一致;副词2017年新课标卷I 记叙文114 数词;冠词;连词;时态;单复数;非谓语动词;固定句型;副词;形容词;介词新课标卷II 记叙文92 不定代词;冠词;形容词;定语从句;副词;动词搭配;连接词;名词;时态;非谓语动词新课标卷III 记叙文110 介词;动词时态;连词;非谓语动词;动词时态;限定词;定语从句;形容词;形容词最高级;代词2016年新课标卷I 记叙文93 定语从句;连词;时态;词性;连词;非谓语动词;介词;冠词;代词;副词新课标卷II 记叙文106 特殊结构;情态动词;并列结构;连词;冠词;代词;名词单复数;虚拟语气;时态;代词。
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)71.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.【答案】job→jobscoolly→coolfive→fifthtoo→very/sochemistry后面加上in/ator→andThey→Thereamazing→amazed去掉moreis→was【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。
2019年高考英语短文改错真题汇编(名师剖析解题技巧+真题实战练习,建议下载练习)专题一:短文改错满分六步法第一步必须熟悉设错方式1. 必须熟悉设错方式:多词、少词、错词。
⑴多词现象大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。
⑵少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。
⑶错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、连词、词形。
2. 平时应加强基本功训练,用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出现的错误归纳一下,以便考前复习。
短文改错与书面表达一样,最能反映一个人的语言功底。
大家在该题上失分最厉害,因为此题而影响英语总成绩的占大多数。
第二步对全文宏观把握大家应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解,这样能对短文有个宏观把握,对上下文有全面的了解。
在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读,分析判断,上下兼顾,把明显的、拿的准的题先做完,这样可以缩小包围圈,也有助于对全文的进一步理解。
第三步从语法角度审查1. 查看时态是否一致。
My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. 全文都是用的一般现在时,此句中的was显然与上下文语境不符,应改为am。
2. 查看主谓是否一致。
Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. cost应改为costs,因其主语是it(为形式主语),且上下文均为一般现在时。
3. 查指代是否一致。
The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语the Smiths表的是Smith一家人,因此指示代词his应改为their。
4. 查平行结构是否平行一致。
由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。
2019年高考英语全国卷改错题汇总(含答案)第一篇II became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school,I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground。
To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net。
All the football player on the playground cheered loudly,say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now。
第二篇IISince I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do。
First,I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly。
Then, when I was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much。
When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor。
短文改错2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ,10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember howhard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ,10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about ahour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetablesin their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ,10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1[2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)]My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurantis popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had towait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2[2016·甲卷(全国Ⅱ)]The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortablebut there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on atrip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3[2016·丙卷(全国Ⅲ)]The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. Atone time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4[2016·四川]It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. Iasked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving.Correction 5[2016·浙江]When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living ina city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lotsof studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.Theairs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into theshop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,"I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, wouldyou talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace浙江]Correction10 [2015·My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I couldeasy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the backof the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right sideof the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!新课标全国卷Ⅱ]Correction12 [2014·My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more timewith after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sportsfor one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.浙江]Correction13 [2014·I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise andfilled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't findhis ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.陕西]Correction14 [2014·My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today,I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stayclose to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tellyour teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose 新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Correction17 [2013·I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others inour small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handlesto suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.陕西]Correction19 [2013·My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let hercopy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day,he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him veryill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picturewe had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one."His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love inthe world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good nightand remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It isin the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accidenton the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, wedrove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearlygot knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina offat her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2017年Correction 1①考查序数词。