高考英语一轮复习 短文改错练习5
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(一)、(2022·全国·高考真题)We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.【语篇解读】这是一篇议论文。
2020高考英语第一轮复习短文改错专题短文改错(一) Dear EditorI used to being a happy little girl but now I amshy 1.And say a few words.When I was eleven. I lost one2.of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one.3.No one knows about it except two of my friends. 4.However, I find that it hard to face them because5.they know my secret. When I spoke to them, they 6.often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel 7.uncomfortable. I am afraid of making new friend asI 8.think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even 9.want to kill me indeed. What should I do?Yours,Lily(二)Breakfast is too important when you’re tryingto lose 1.excess weigh. When y ou’re asleep, the boby switches 2.from an acuive energy producer to an almost motionless 3.service and repair factory. When you sleeping, most4.bodily repairs and renewals take the place. Food eaten 5.during the day is broken down and digest, nutrients6.are passed round the body and used whatever need.7.Try to get up early and to eat something, eithercereal 8.And fruits. Whatever it is, sit down to eat and tryto 9.enjoy it ! Soon you’ll feel much healthy.(三) If there are much more people in the world, thenthere 1.must have more food to feed the people. But food is2.already serious problem today. One-third of the world’s population are 3.starving, because there is not any enough food. Tenthousand 4.people die of hunger everyday in some parts of theworld. But 5.in others parts of the world, people become ill ordie 6.because they eat too much food, and they are too fat. Some 7.countries have no food, but others have too many, and they 8.throw them away. How can tomorrow’s world feed its people? 9.The world needs to produce more food than it is now.10.(四) Last year was my first Thanksgiving of our ownhouse. I have never cooked Thanksgiving dinner 2.before, so Iwanted to be specisl. I spent what 3.seemed like forever cooking, and to my surprised it4.came out looking perfectly! I realized that I had5.forgotten soft drinks at the store but I ran out to6.get it before guests arrived.7.I was away for no more than 15 minutes. When8.I returned back, I found my turkey on the floor9.Surrounding by a greedy cat and a dog with turkey10.bits in their mouths.(五) Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 1.sisters-in any other words, I am an only child. Myparents 2.love me dearly of course and will do all they can makesure 3.that I ger a good education. They did not want me todo 4.any work at family ; they want me to devote all my timeto 5.my studies so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.We 6.may be one family and live under a same roof, but wedo 7.not seem to get much time to talk about together. Itlooks 8.as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 9.really understand their own daughter ? What things arein other homes, I wonder. 10.(六) I started learning English at an age of six yearsold. 1.For 8 years I learned English the way in that everybody 2.does – by going to English classes. However I wasalways 3.one of the best student in class, reading English texts 4.spent me a long time . I made lots of mistakes in mywritten 5.English and my pronunciation was bad , either. Later ,I began 6.reading books in English , almost novels. I would learna lot 7.of new words from these books. At first , I had terribletrouble 8.remember them . I never gave up . In two years , myvocabulary 9.has grown from 1,000 English words to 3 ,500 Englishwords . 10.(七) Jack was a excellent student at school. Whateverhe 1.did , he is always the best one in class. He could get 2.full marks every time even he didn’t listen to theteacher. 3.Some people found it surprised that he was always ready 4.to help the others with a smile. He helped his classmates 5.with his homework ; he helped the teachers answer the6.difficult questions risen by the students ; he was goodat 7.ball games … In the whole , he was a perfect boy.Everybody 8.liked him. He lived a peacefully life until one daywhen he 9.got up he found a gray hair on his head .10.(八) I am worried about McDonald’s building a restaurant in 1.my hometown . I am not sure about if McDonald’s foodis as 2.healthy as they say in their advertisement . When scientists 3.study it carefully they find high levels of fat , sugaror salt . 4.Today , too many people were getting fat through eatingfatty 5.food . To my opinion , McDonald’s is not giving young people 6.a good idea of wherher a healthy diet should be . Ata McDonald’s 7.restaurant , the food is always same . although it isfreshly 8.cooked , it is more healthy than our local Chinese food .9.Therefore , I suggest people not to go to McDonald’s often . 10.(九) The former White House cook stopped working . Hecookedin a traditional French way . His food tasted well ,but contained a 1.lot of fat . Doctors say this is not healthier . Welter Scheib , 2.the new chief cook , will have a medical doctor saadviser . 3.Dr . Dean Ornish is a heart specialist and writer .He says food 4.can be low in fat still delicious . The President’s wife 5.Hillary Clinton chose Mr . Scheib after tasted hiscooking . She 6.wanted fewer fat in the food she ate in the White House .7.She wanted to eat more fresh vegetables , and including vegetable 8.pies without the use of chemical . The First Lady wouldalso 9.like the White House to serve more America food .10.(十) In United States , the school holidays are1.longer than Britain .Rich American families 2.often go out of a town to the country for the 3.summer months . Many fathers stay at works 4.in the cities and visit his families at weekends .5.When some people are on holiday , they liked 6.just sit in the sun , but others want a bit 7.more . “Special interest”holidays is very 8.popular , and you can find 100 interesting things 9.to do in the United States in a week and two . 10.(十一) When I was a junior high school student , I think English 1.was very difficult . However I kept myself away 2.from it . In each of test , I got less than 60 marks .3.But my English teacher encouraged me . Who said 4.English was not so hard as they appeared . He 5.asked me the first to build up confidence and 6.then improved my pronunciation . When a lesson was7.given , he taught me read and wrire English . Under8.his tirelessly instruction I made surprisingly fastprogress 9.At the final exam , I got over 90 points .10.(十二) Not only Madame Curie but Captain Cook were1.world-famous . Marie had very little money to live bybut worked 2.day and night .She had to wear an overcoat to keepherself be warm 3.Even after her husband’s death , she didn’t give away working . 4.Instead , she worked even harder and became the firstwoman 5.receive the Nobel Prize . Cook ordered large quantities 6.of things to be stored their expedition . But once heasked the 7.sailors to throw away a lot of things to rise the boatin the water . 8.Cook’s proper dier kept the rest of the sailors healthand his 9.Quickly thinking saved a lot of people .10.(十三) In Oct.17,2005, Shenzhou-VI successfully returned 1.to the earth, that is another great achievement inChinese 2.space history . As all the Chinese people, I feel proudof 3.our great country . From now on, I will devote myselfto work 4.hard at science . However, I have made up my mind notto 5.lose my heart whatever difficulty I may have with mystudy. Also, 6.I will spend some time every day improving my abilityto use 7.computers because they are now playing important part 8.in many fields. Only in this way could I make a contribution 9.for the development of our great country. I hope thatstudents 10.of my age will also think so.(十四) This year summer vacation was most enjoyable.Ispent fifteen days 1.helping my grandparents do farm work in countryside , where 2.I saw mountains and fields covering with green plants .I often 3.went to swimming in the river to the west of the village , the water 4.in it was quite clear . I kept a diary every day .Besides doing farm 5.work , I helped the children in the neighborhood withhis lessons . 6.All of them showed much interest in English . They can read and 7.write well , and they could hardly say simple Englishsentences . So every 8.day in the morning I spent about two hours helping themimprove 9.their listening and spoken English . They all made m uch progresses . 10.(十五) Tom was only seven year old , so when he wentoff 1.camp with a lot of other small boys one summer , his2.mother thought that he may be unhappy , and she asked3.all his relatives to write to her , so that he wouldget 4.the letter every day while he was away from home.5.Well , of course he did not write to somebody while 6.he was at the camp . One day before he came back 7.to home , his mother saw him reding at the table and8.asked him what he was reading . “Oh ,” he said , “theyare the 9.letters I got them while I was at the camp . I did nothave 10.time to look at them while I was there .”(十六) This summer vacation my parents brought me tovisit my 1.uncle , whom lives in the coutryside . This was thefirst time for 2.me to stay in the countryside but I felt quite excited . My uncle took 3.me to the fields to irrigation the vegetables everymorning . 4.He told me t hat irrigation is very easier for them now . Besides , 5.the produce of crops has increased a lot . My unclewas proud 6.to tell me that the peasants are most living a happyand rich 7.life . Many families have bought computers , searching for the 8.Interner for the tseful informations they need . Inthis way , the 9.vegetables can be sold out in time at reasonable values instead 10.of going bad in the fields .(十七) I am an active boy and I talk much than listen . When I 1.talk with my friends , I’m always ready to expressme . 2.I’m n ot afraid to tell others how I think . I am u suallythe 3.Focus lf attention because of I often have lots ofideas 4.that interests everyone . In my opinion , people should share 5.and exchange each other’s ideas . But when I am withthe 6.quiet people . I felt as if the air were frozen . I’m always trying 7.to find a topic and start a conversation . By this way , people 8.will like me and feel happy . In word , I am friendlyand 9.active and I can make everybody so happy as me .10.(十八)Last week , we had a picnic in the Forest Park .We 1.found out a place by the river . As soon as we sat down , 2.Tom stdden got up and shouted , “Someone has falleninto 3.The river!” It is true . A boy was struggling in thewater , 4.and all the child in a boat looked hopeless . Tom and5.Jack took on their shoes when running to the water .6.They jumped into the river and swam to the boy and7.who was sinking down fast . Tom and Jack got hold8.of the boy by arms and lifted his head above the water .9.Together they pushed the boy to the shore .10.(十九) A few months after returning to the U.S. fromGermany 1.I took part in a college course in the French . SinceI had 2.learned to speak German well in Germany , I thoughtthat 3.might be interested to begin studying another larrguage . 4.At the first class , the teacher asked them to do apronunciation 5.exercise , in which he would speak a word or two inFrench , and 6.each student would do his or her best to copy . Whilemy turn 7.came , he kept having me say more word , and I finally 8.asked him why . “I find it a great fun ,” he explained .“In 9.25 years teaching at school , it’s the first time I’ve heard 10.an American speak French with a German accent.”(二十) This is a story told by my father : “When I was boy , 1.the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2.Festival . My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3.but could make the most delicious dishes . One time ,I just 4.couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner . As Iwas 5.about take a piece from a cooked dtck , I saw Grandmain 6.the kitchen looking at me .Shake her head , she said ,‘It 7.isn’t a good time to do that , dear .’At once I apologize 8.and controlled me a t my best till the dinner started .You 9.know , that was a dinner we had waited for severalmonth .” 10..(一)1.being改为be2.去掉a3.在it后加was4.√5.在it后加is6.spoke改为speak7.what改为which8.friend改为friends9.sometime改为sometimes10.me改为myself(二)1.too改为so2.weigh改为weight3.√4.在you后面加are5.去掉the6.digest改为digested7.whatever改为whenever8.去掉to9.and改为or10.healthy改为healthier(三)1.much改为many2.have 改为be3.在serious后面加 a4.去掉any5.everyday 改为every day6.others改为other7.√8.many 改为much9.them 改为it10.is 改为does(四)1.of改为in2.have 改为had3.在wanted后面加it4.surprised 改为surprised5.perfectly 改为perfect6.but 改为so7.it 改为them8.√9.去掉back10.surrounding 改为surrounded(五)1.√2. 去掉any3. 在can后面加to4. did改为do5. family 改为home6. subject 改为subjects7. a 改为the8. 去掉about9. and 改为or11.What 改为How(六)1.an改为the2.that 改为which3.However 改为Although4.student 改为students5.spent 改为took6.either 改为too7.almost 改为mostly8.√9.remember 改为remembering10.has 改为had(七)1.a 改为an2.is改为was3. 在even后面加if4.surprised 改为surprising5. 去掉the6.his 改为their7.risen 改为raised8.In 改为On9.peacefully改为peaceful10.√(八)1. √2. 去掉about3.advertisement 改为advertisements4.or 改为and5.were改为are6.To改为In7.whether 改为what8. 在always后面加the9.more 改为less10.去掉to(九)1.well 改为good2.healthier改为healthy3.在as 后面加an4.√5.在fat 后面加but6.tasted 改为tasting7.fewer 改为less8. 去掉and9.chemical 改为chemicals10.America 改为American(十)1.在In 后面加the2.在than 后面加in3.去掉a4.works 改为 work5.his 改为their6.liked 改为like7.sit 改为sitting8.is 改为are9.√10.and改为or (十一)1.think 改为thought2.However 改为And3.去掉of4.Who 改为He5.they 改为it6.去掉the7.improved 改为improve8.在me后面加to9.tirelessly 改为tireless10.√(十二)1.were 改为was2.by 改为on3.去掉be4.away 改为up5. √6. 在receive前面加to7. 在stored后面加for8.rise 改为raise9.health 改为healthy10.quickly 改为quick(十三)1.In改为On2.that 改为which3.As 改为Like4.work 改为working5.However 改为beside6.去掉my7.√8.在playing后面加an9.could 改为can10. for 改为to(十四)1.去掉year2.在in后面加the3.covering 改为covered4.去掉to5.it 改为which6.his 改为there7.can改为could8.and 改为but9.√10. progresses 改为progress (十五)1.year 改为years2.在camp前面加to3.may 改为might4.her 改为him5.the 改为a6.somebody 改为anybody7.before 改为after8.去掉to9.√10. 去掉them(十六)1.brought 改为took2.whom 改为who3.but 改为and4.irrigation 改为irrigate5.very 改为much6.√7.most 改为mostly8.去掉forrmations 改为information10.values改为price(十七)1.much 改为more2.me 改为myself3.how 改为what4.去掉of5.interests改为interest6.√7.felt 改为feel8.By 改为in9.在word前面加 a10.so 改为as(十八)1.√2.去掉out3.sudden 改为suddenly4.is 改为was5.child 改为children6.on 改为off7.去掉and8.去掉down9.在arms 前面加the10.pushed 改为pulled(十九)1.√2.去掉the3.that 改为it4.interested 改为interesting5.them 改为us6.speak 改为say7.While 改为When8.word改为words9.去掉a10.在teaching 前面加of (二十)1.在boy前面加 a2.去掉when3.cooker 改为cook4.but 改为and5.√6.在take 前面加to7.Shake 改为Shaking8.apologize 改为apologized9.me 改为myself10.month 改为months。
Unit 5 Canada—“The True North”李仕才【短文语法填空】She looks like any other schoolgirl, fresh-faced and full of life. Sarah Thomas is looking forward to the challenge of her new A-level course. But unlike her school friends, 16-year-old Sarah is not spending half-term 61 (rest). Instead, she is earning £6500 a day as 62 model in New York.Sarah 63 (tell) that she could be Britain’s new supermodel earning a million dollars in the next year. Her father Peter, 44, wants her to give up school to model full-time. But Sarah, 64 has taken part in shows along with top models, wants 65 (prove) that she has brains as well as beauty. She is determined to carry on with her 66 (educate).She has turned down several 67 (invitation) to star at shows in order to concentrate on her studies. After school she plans to take a year off to model full-time before going to university to get a degree 68 engineering or architecture.Sarah says, "My dad thinks I should take the offer now. But at the moment, school 69 (come) first.I don’t want to get too absorbed in modeling. It is 70 (certain) fun but the lifestyle is a little unreal. I don’t want to have nothing else to fall back on when I can’t model any more."【文章大意】本文主要介绍了Sarah Thomas在学业和诱人的职业面前所做出的选择,她认为在青少年时期要把学业放在首位。
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Why should mankind explore space? Why should money, time and effort be spent exploring and researching something with so few apparent benefits? Why should resources be spent on space rather than on conditions and people on Earth? These are questions that, understandably, are very often asked.Perhaps the best answer lies in our genetic makeup(基因构成) as human beings. What drove our ancestors to move from the trees into the plains, and on into all possible areas and environments? The wider the spread of a species, the better its chance of survival. Perhaps the best reason for exploring space is this genetic tendency to expand wherever possible.Nearly every successful civilization has explored, because by doing so, any dangers in surrounding areas can be identified and prepared for. Without knowledge, we may be completely destroyed by the danger. With knowledge, we can lessen its effects.Exploration also allows minerals and other potential(潜在的) resources to be found.Even if we have no immediate need of them, they will perhaps be useful later. Resources may be more than physical possessions. Knowledge or techniques have been acquired through exploration. The techniques may have medical applications which can improve the length or quality of our lives. We have already benefited from other spin-offs including improvements in earthquake prediction, in satellites for weather forecasting and in communications systems. Even nonstick pans and mirrored sunglasses are byproducts(副产品) of technological developments in the space industry!While many resources are spent on what seems a small return, the exploration of space allows creative, brave and intelligent members of our species to focus on what may serve to save us. While space may hold many wonders and explanations of how the universe was formed or how it works, it also holds dangers. The danger exists, but knowledge can help human beings to survive. Without the ability to reach out across space, the chance to save ourselves might not exist.While Earth is the only planet known to support life, surely the adaptive ability of humans would allow us to live on other planets. It is true that the lifestyle would be different, but human life and cultures have adapted in the past and surely could in the future.1.Why does the author mention the questions in Paragraph 1?A.To express his doubts.B.To compare different ideas.C.To introduce points for discussion.D.To describe the conditions on Earth.2.What is the reason for exploring space based on Paragraph 2?A.Humans are nature-born to do so.B.Humans have the tendency to fight.C.Humans may find new sources of food.D.Humans don’t like to stay in the same place.3.The underlined word “spin-offs” in Paragraph 4 probably refers to ________.A.survival chances B.potential resourcesC.unexpected benefits D.physical possessions4.What makes it possible for humans to live on other planets?A.Our genetic makeup.B.Resources on the earth.C.The adaptive ability of humans.D.Byproducts in space exploration.[解题导语] 本文是一篇谈论文,向我们阐述了人类进行太空探究的缘由。
高三英语短文改错练习题Dear students,In order to improve your English writing skills, I have prepared a short passage for you to identify and correct the errors. Please read the following passage and make the necessary corrections. Pay attention to grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure.It was raining hardly outside when I suddenly realized that I have forgotten to bring my umbrella. Desperate, I decided to make a dash through the rain and hope to get to the nearest bus stop as quick as possible. But as soon as I had step outside, I regretted my decision. The rain seemed like it was pouring cats and dogs, and I was immediately drenched to the bone.I continued to move forward, even though my shoes were squeaking and my clothes sticking to my body. Finally, I reached the bus stop where several other people have been already waiting. Looking around, I noticed a lady who was clutching her umbrella tightly and seemed unwilling to share it with anyone.Feeling disappointed, I saw that a man next to me has no umbrella too but was not bothered by the rain at all. Instead, he took off his jacket and hand it to the lady, saying, "Please take my jacket. I'll be alright without it."Witnessing this act of kindness, a warm feeling spread thorough my heart. I realized that it can be the small gestures that make a big difference in someone's day. It made me consider about our own actions and how we can help others in their time of need.Suddenly, the bus arrived, and we all hurried to get on board. As I took a seat, I couldn't stop thinking about the man's selfless act. It inspired me to be more mindful of others and to always be willing to lend a helping hand.In conclusion, this experience showed me the importance of kindness and compassion. It reminded me that even in the most challenging situations, a simple act of kindness can create positivity and bring people together. Let's strive to make the world a better place by caring for one another.Good luck with your corrections!。
高考英语改错题及答案【篇一:高考英语短文改错练习及答案】s=txt>(1)my parents live in the country. they keep a dog calling ah fu. one day my parent went to work in the fields taking my little sister with ah fu along. while they working, my sister walked to the river nearby. ah fu followed her there. she was trying topick a flower while she fell into the river. ah fu barked and jumped to the water immediate. when my parents heard ah fu barking they ran to the river. they saw ah fu swimming towards the bank carried my little sister. my parents praised ah fu warm. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister.(2)may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement make.the student union is going to hold a party in saturday evening, august 15, to welcome my friends from the united states. the party will be hold in the roof garden of the main building. it will begin at 7:30 p.m. there will have music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gift. everybody may bring a small gift on this purpose. remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wish.don?t forget: 7:30, saturday evening, roof garden, main building. there is sure to be a lot of fun. everybody is welcomed.(3)dear peter,were so glad youre coming to join us on sunday. here is what you can find us. well have our picnics in the peoples park. you know where that is, isnt you? after you entered the park by the main gate, walk straightly on till you come to a stream. cross the stream and turning right. after walking in a while youll come to a hill. walk around to other side of the hill. there youll see a lake. well have our picnic here in the small wood by the lake. im sure youll have no trouble finding us. do come!yours.(4)a few days before my brother and i went to the cinema by bicycle. my brother was riding with me seating on the seat behind. as we came to the crossroad, a young man and a girl came up and stopped us. ?weve found you long last,? they said. and we dont know them. point to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, ?he stopped us about half hour ago and made us to catch the next offender. so come on, stand here. hoping you dont have to wait as long as we did . good luck.?may 3rd, sunday fine(5)dear mr smith,i was so please to hear from you and im writing to tell you something about my school. you are right, quite few changes have been taken place. on the one side of the road, there has a new classroom building. on the other side which a playground used to be now stand another new building, our library. in it there are all kind of books, newspapers or magazines. the playground is now in front of school. weve also plant a lot of trees in and around the school. i hope you come and see for yourself some days.best wishes!yours,(6)li hua my name is li hua. i was born in dalian, liaoning province on february 1977. i started school in 1984 while i was seven. i studied in guangming primary school 1984 to 1990. after that i went to no.6 middle school of dalian and graduate this summer. the main subjects i studied at school including chinese, maths, english, physics, chemical and computer. i like english and computer best but i am very good at them. last year i had won first prize in the school computer competition. in my spare time i enjoy listening to popular music and collect stamps. my favourite sport are swimming in summer and skating in winter.(7)dear dick,how nice to hear from you again! you want to know what is going on in schools in china. in short, things have begun to improve since we called on school to reduce learning load. idon?t know about the others, but i used to have to do works even on weekends by doing endless homework and attending classes as well. now, i have more free time. i can follow my own interests, such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. in the evenings, i can watch news on tv or read newspapers. what?s more, i can go to bed earlier. as far as i know, everyone is happy about the new arrangement of things.best wishes!yours.(8)almost all of us heard the story “here comes the wolf” when we are little kids. what we can learn from the story is we must be honest. therefore, there?re lots of phenomenon of dishonesty nowadays.being honest does great harm not only to other people and also to yourself. take the case of fake milk powder for an example. after drinking this kind of milk, the babyhad big heads while their legs and arms were still thin, what badly affected their health. to my great relief, the producers got accused and punished net all the serious consequences in the end.(9)dear bob,i?m so glad to learn that you are come in september. i found a place for you. it?s a small flat of 25 square metre, with a bedroom, a bathroom or a kitchen. in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and the chair. the rent is 500 yuans per month. the flat is in a building on fangcao street, it is not far from jianxin chinese school. bus no. 11 can take you straightly to the school. in fact, it?s only one stop way. do you think you?d like it? if so , i can try and find another place for you. just let me know.yours.(10)it is well-known that we exist in the dynamic world with various difficulties. when we are faced them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. with confidence, we can find sometime the question is not as “huge”so we imagine.take most of our for example, the entrance exam to college seem to be a horrible monster. according, some people give up, some persist. in my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as good as full preparation, try and exert your strength, but then we will overcome all problems and challenges. on the whole, i believe we youngster should facethe difficulties in right manner. and nothing is impossible,brave it out and just do it![(1)答案]【解析】1. 此处是过去分词作短语作定语,因此,将calling 改为called。
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
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Dear Mary,How is everything going? Thanks for your last letter. I am delightful to know that you will come China to learn Sichuan Opera in my school. Our opera teacher, Mr. Chen who is in his thirties is such patient and professional that I believe we can make progress with Mr. Chen guides us. Actually, I was started to learn Sichuan Opera when I was six years old, so we can practise together. There are many colorful activity planned at weekends, that can bring us lots of fun. I am surely you will fall in love with it sooner.I am looking forward to yours learning Sichuan Opera in China.Yours,Li Hua 42.下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
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高考英语单句短文改错专项练习一.单句改错.(下列句子各有一处错误,请改正)1.Now people get a lot of informations from TV.2.German is a European country.3.They didn’t want me to do any work at family.4.Yesterday I met an old friend of my father.5.Boys and girls, don’t lose hearts. Do better next time.6.They are of different size.7.It is so beautiful place that you must visit it.8.What a terrible weather we have been having!9.It took place in France, an European country.10.Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.11.What good time we had last night!12.We shall spend three-day holiday together.13.I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.14.Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.15.When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place.16.One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.17.It’s important that we should think over before doing anything.18.The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldn’t control.19.I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.20.We must take part in the social practice to prepare us well for our future.21.The teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.22.Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.23.There was a five-pound note in the pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it.24.People can hardly do some fishing there.25.I visited a place where is surrounded by mountains.26.I am sure you will find one you like it.27.It was yesterday when he broke the window.28.He had lost his glasses without them he couldn’t see.29.Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan.30.It starts with choosing a tree from neither a farm or a store.31.She never has enough time for that she wants to do.32.I find what I have one shortcoming in my character.33.What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits .34.It didn’t matter that I would win or not.35.People in the US drink more coffee than people in any country.36.The development will bring us much more hopes and chances.37.The Olympics are held each four years.38.A summer, Fane traveled abroad.39.I hope you think about my request as soon as possibly.40.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.41.As there is no air or water, there can be no life , too.42.There were too many nice things that I did n’t know what to choose.43.He decides to travel a lot and visit such many new places as possible.44.I couldn’t see as clear as before.45.The water in it is so dirty that it smells terribly.46.I appreciate your help very well.47.You always gave me specially attention and inspired me.48.It was until midnight that it stopped raining.49.People both at home and abroad have been great helped by the new computer.50.He has to work if he wants to live comfortable.51.She is a brave and honesty girl.52.It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.53.It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before.54.He gave me an order worthy 15 million dollars.55.The tree was put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up straightly.56.Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college?57.We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.58.We are all very much active and the activities are enjoyable.59.If you won’t want to take a taxi, you can go by bus.60.Our city is a modern city. It set up in the early 1980s.61.Bad habits not come suddenly.62.I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it.63.Following the road and you will find the store.64.I rush over without delay, jumped into the water and swam towards him.65.You must do everything you can help them.66.When a rabbit see something dangerous, it runs away.67.Its tail, which is white, moving up and down as it runs.68.Think perhaps I was too tired, I stood up and was going to sleep.69.I was often tired and watch TV demands little effort.70.The little girl hurried home with the remained money.71.His young patient was soon able to get up and ran about again.72.It was kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home.73.She liked it very much and reads it to the class.74.There were over 1000 students attend it.75.Is it likely to be any food at the party on Saturday?76.Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you.77.He spends hours on the telephone, talks to his friends.78.Filling with many people, the room is crowded.79.At the interview there are many people who wait to interviewed for jobs.80.It will cost a rocket a hundred thousand years to reach it.81.There used to have a church in front of the school.82.Hope you great success in your work!83.All you can do is encouraging him, show him understanding and offer him advice.84.In Friday afternoon, some students took part in a speech activity.85.In a few weeks the story was returned to her.86.It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning.87.I rushed out the house as quickly as I could.88.It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice.89.I had difficulty in grammar after I entered into the school.90.She could hardly afford for the medical care.91.But we don’t seem to have much time to talk about together.92.He was punished because what he had done.93.The ice isn’t thick enough for us to skate.94.I gave you my luggage at a quarter of an hour ago.95.I am writing to thank you with your kind help.96.He means to come no earlier as that time.97.We must return back to school this afternoon98.Child as he is, but he knows a lot.99.Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates.100.Thinking he happened to have no work to do, and he came back home.二.单句改错(下列句子各有两处错误,请改正)1.If you close your eyes, you can’t see something, because your eyelids prevent the lightenter your eyes2.For our joy, Li Ding, monitor of our class, who was among the winners.3.The only thing I can think is when I am going to get home listen to my music.4.All my classmates are busy prepare for the exam except myself.5.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anythinginto English.6.I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness.7.I was great delighted to learn that you do very well in the mid-term examination.8.If you learning English, it is not enough only to keep in minds the rules of grammar.9.I get up very early this morning to go to the airport to meet Mr. White, a expert fromthe USA.10.One and a half year later, I now think English a fun to learn.11.I went through the test for many times but I can only answer three out of the twentyquestions.12.For instance, on one night, the played strong and loudly music till 4 o’clock in themorning.13.Thinking he had no work to do, and my father came back home, quickly finishing his supperand left for the cinema.14.Men have been interesting in the stars ever since they first looked up into sky.15.That is difficulty to say how many people are learning English.16.Three years ago, he was picked out and send to study in abroad.17.Sometimes, I wish I can stay in a quiet place lonely, away from this city for a long time.18.Many years ago, I step into a bookstore for some books I wanted them.19.Having learned why he wanted the book, and the bookseller gave him some writing papersand a new pencil as a gift.20.you can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the internet.21.I got know that they were college students travel in china.22.Under the help of him and my classmates, I made some progresses.23.We went to the zoo on last Sunday. There were a lot of visitors stood in front of theticket window.24. With development of mobile phones, the short message service is becoming more and morepopular for us nowadays.25.On the night before my first day, I was much excited to go to sleep and as a result, Igot up lately in the morning.26.Three years ago, I was studying to abroad in Japan. It was there where I began readingcomic books.27.Have they ever thought of plastic bags do harm our environment?28.It is certainly that Zhang Village will built into a better modern village.29.On the ceremony we made a statement which as grown-ups we should have sense of duty toour society from now on.30.Though the city is modern, but there are still some problems, such as air pollutioncrowdedness and noisy.三.短文改错.1. Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong. Together 76. with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four. In the early 77. 1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78. prize. The song “Bad Girl” made her famous. The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records. Some of her songs 80.were very popular. She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends. When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82. organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83. Kong people to bravely face the disease. Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003. The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85. remembered by people.2. When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory. 76.But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77.to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78.saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79.like to have. One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80.was looking for a job, too. This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81.when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82.address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83.a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84.he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish. 85.3. Every day John goes to work by trains. He always 76.___________buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________that the time pass more quickly. One day on the train he 78.___________was reading a report about important football match. 79.___________The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________at his station. He didn’t know it until he saw the sea. 81.___________He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________a train to go back. He arrived very lately at the office. 83.___________His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________was late. “Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________4. In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76.___________restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77.___________people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78.___________the restaurant. After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79.___________I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80.___________meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81.___________else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My 82.___________meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch :32 minutes 83.___________passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84.__________reasons why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about 85.___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5. Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a littledog. There are not many children of her age there we live, 76.and we thought a dog would make her less alone. We were 77.right. They play together happily all days. Our daughter now 78.smiles and laughs a lot more than she used. In a way it 79.is like having two children in the house. All of them are 80.very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81.want. The dog is easy to look after than my daughter. 82.He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83.dirty clothes to wash. My wife is also happy because of 84.I have given up smoke. The dog doesn’t like the smell.85.6. I went shopping with my wife. We have a lot of things to 1. _________buy them. We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2. _________our car in front of the shop. An hour late, we came back 3. _________to the car. But it was strange that we couldn't open 4. _________the door. So we asked policeman for help. He was 5. _________glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. 6. _________Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. "How are 7. _________you doing with my car " We were surprising and went to 8. _________see the number of the car. What you think we did then 9. _________We had to speak sorry to the man again and again. 10. _________7. To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______traveling both by plane and by train. Travel by plane is 77.______time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______on the trip. but it is too expensive. Unless you travel by 79.______train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______railway. However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______and we can take a good rest. So you can see every 83.______coin has two sides. You'd better to choose either of 84.______them depending on your own interest or economy. 85.______8. Dear Worried,I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76. __________suggestions. First in all, don't be disappointed. Many students 77. __________ find it difficulty to write well. In my opinion, if you want to 78. __________ improve your writing, and you can do several things. First, 79. __________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures. Second, 80. __________ read as much as possible. There are many things can't be 81. __________ learnt. You must see it in books many times. Then you'll 82. __________ be able to use them correctly yourself. But, in order to write 83. __________ well, you must learn to read much. Finally, you'd better to 84. __________ recite some good passages. Good luck for you in your writing. 85.9. My cousin and I usually stay out late with somefriends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home. 71.___It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____to suffer from the frozen wind outside. So after dinner we 73.____stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____tell his experiences in Second World War. In fact they 75.____sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____so as to make him be happy. Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____some questions, that he answered in a humorous way. We 78.____burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too. 79.____Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening. 80.____10. As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________a more and more important part on our daily life. 77________On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________but also get much information as possible. For instance, 79_________we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______to our families as well as our friends. However, 81 _______we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______kind of books and even teach ourselves English. We 83 _______can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer 84 ________games. We can even do shopping without left our homes. 85 _______11. Dear Xiaohua,It is four days since Mother accepted the operation. 76.__________She is feeling much more better. The doctors told me 77.__________the operation was successful, but because her old age 78.__________she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The 79.__________doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to 80.__________do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three 81.__________days. Please tell the good news to the rest of family 82.__________as fast as possible. You needn't come here. I'm 83.__________able to look after Mother by myself. You'd better 84.__________send flowers to Mother. She will feel happily. 85.__________Yours,Xiaohui12. Dear Li Xiaojun,I'm glad to receive your letter. I'd like to discuss the problem 76.with you. It is true that some video games is good for your 77.thinking ability and they can sometimes make you felt relaxed 78.Therefore, you are spending too much time on that. 79.You are not little boy any more. You should learn to control yourself. 80.Why not to try to finish your homework first every day 81.and then spend a little time play some video games. I think, 82.like a student, the most important thing is to study hard at school. 83.You should try your best to get good grade in your 84.subjects and try to become a useful person for the future 85.Yours,Editor13. I have a very embarrassing experience this evening. 76 . ________I saw a man at a bus stop when I was on my way back 77 . ________home. Though I saw him from behind, but I was sure he was 78 . ________a friend of mine whom I hadn' t seen him for a long time. I gave 79 . ________him a tap on the shoulders with my umbrella and shouted to 80 . ________him at the same time. He turned round, completely taking by 81 . ________surprise. Unfortunately, he was my friend but a complete 82 . ________stranger. He was terribly embarrassed, for I didn't know 83 . ________how to explain him. I could only say in a low voice, "I'm so 84 . ________sorry, sir." After that I walked away as quickly as possibly. 85 . ________14. One cold winter day in 1900, a small boy calling 1.________Charlie Chaplin walking along the street in London. 2.________He did not have breakfast and lunch. He wanted to 3.________buy some bread, and he didn't have any money. 4.________His father dead when he was very young. His 5.________mother was often very sick, so she could not take 6.________care of Charlie or his brother. All of them had to 7.________work to help their sick mother.He was a small boy but his dream was not very big. 8.________He wanted to be great man in the world of film. So 9.________he worked very hard to sing and danced well. 10.________Answers:1-5 informations-information; German-Germany; family-home; father-father’s; hearts-heart; 6-10 size-sizes; a place; 删除a; an-a; 删除a11-15 a good time; a three-day; that后加it; think后加it; them-it;16-20 showed后加it; think后加it; control后加it; me-myself; us-ourselves;21-25 punish后加me; that-which; 删除it; some-any; where-which;26-30删除it; when-that; them-which; 删除he; neither-either;31-35 that-what; what-that; What-How; that-whether; any后加other;36-40 much-many; each-every; A-One; possibly-possible; particular-particularly;41-45 too-either; too-so; such-as; clear-clearly; terribly-terrible;46-50 well-much; specially-special; was后加not; great-greatly; comfortable-comfortably; 51-55 honesty-honest; easy-easier; is后加more; worthy-worth; straightly-straight;56-60 interested-interesting; ago-before; 删除much; won’t-don’t; It后加was;61-65 habits后加do; caught-had Following-Follow; rush-rushed; can后加to;66-70 see-sees; moving-moves; think-Thinking; watch-watching; remained-remaining;71-75 ran-run; drove-drive; reads-read; attend-attending; it-there;76-80 not后加being; talks-talking; Filling-Filled; to后加be; cost-take;81-85 have-be; Hope-Wish; encouraging-encourage; In-On; In-After;86-90 删除on; out后加of notice后加of; 删除into; 删除for91-95 删除about; because后加of; skate后加on; 删除at; with-for;96-100 as-than; 删除back; 删除but; 删除so; 删除and;单句改错(下列句子各有两处错误,请改正)1. something-anything; enter-entering;2. For-To; 删除who;3. think后加 about; home后加to;4. prepare-preparing; myself-me;5. 删除in; anything-everything;6. myself-my; to-for;7. great-greatly; do-did;8. learning-learn; minds-mind;9. get-got; a-an; 10. year-years; 删除a; 11. 删除for; can-could; 12. 删除on; loudly-loud; 13. 删除and; finishing-finished; 14. interesting-interested; into后加the; 15. That-It; difficulty-difficult; 16. send-sent; 删除in; 17. can-could; lonely-alone; 18. step-stepped; 删除them; 19. 删除and; papers-paper; 20. kinds后加of; minute-minutes; 21. got后加to; traveling; 22. Under-With; progresses-progress;23. 删除on; stood-standing; 24. With后加the; for-with; 25.much-too; lately-late; 26. 删除to; where-that; 27. 删除of; harm后加to; 28. certainly-certain; will后加be; 29. which-that; have后加a; 30. 删除but; noisy-noise三.短文改错.⑴ 76. √ 77.in---at78. but---and 79. see---saw 80. made---make 81. ∧and/so 82 they—she 83. concert—concerts 84. Sadly 85. the⑵76.job 77.去掉been 78. a 79.experience 80. received 81.去掉was/加who 82.your-my 83.√ 84. read 85. really⑶76. trains 改为 train 77. 去掉 piece。
练习50 短文改错+七选五+完形填空Ⅰ.短文改错wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.Ⅱ.七选五You choose to be a winner!The Winners Club is a bank account specially designed for teenagers. It has been made to help you better manage your money.__1__●No account keeping fees.You're no millionaire so we don't expect you to pay large fees. In fact, there are no accounts keeping or transaction fees!● __2__You want your money to grow. The Winners Club has a good rate of interest which gets even better if you make at least two deposits(储蓄) without taking them out ina month.●Convenient.Teenagers are busy—we get that. __3__ With the Winners Club you can choose to bank from home using the phone or the Internet. You can have money directly deposited into your Winners Club account. This could be your pocket money or your pay from your parttime job!●Magazine included.Along with your regular report, you will receive a FREE magazine full of good ideas to make even more of your money. __4__The Winners Club is a great choice for teenagers. __5__ Simply fill in an application form and get permission from your parent. It is not so hard. It's the best way to choose to be a winner!A.Perfect Service Systems.B.Excellent interest rates.C.And it is so easy to join.D.You may never need to come to a bank at all.E.The winners Club is set up for you to save money.F.It's a club with impressive features for teenagers.G.There are also fantastic offers for Winners Club members.Ⅲ.完形填空doctors __1__ that he had only three to six months to live.The other day, when my father was sitting up in bed, I __2__ him and said, “Dad, I feel __3__ sorry for what has happened to you. You never know how much I really love you.〞 I leaned over to give him a hug, __4__ he became tense.“Come on, Dad,〞 I said. I knew showing __5__ was not our usual way of relation. I asked him to sit up some more and I tried again. This time, however, he was __6__ more tense. I was a little impatient and I could feel the old resentment (不满) starting to __7__ . For years our greeting had been a cold and formal handshake that said, “Hello, how are you?〞 My father had always been very Germanic. In his childhood, his parents must have taught him how to __8__ his feelings in order to be a __9__.Letting go of my longheld __10__ to blame him for our distance, I was actually looking forward to the __11__ of giving him more love. I said again, “Come on, Dad, put your arms around me.〞 I again leaned up close to him at the __12__ of the bed with his arms around me. __13__ happened. For an instant, a feelingof “I __14__ you〞 filled my heart. Now, both he and I waited for that momentary__15__ to happen again.1.A.advised B.apologized C.urged D.concluded2.A.supported B.encouraged C.approached D.reminded3.A.widely B.deeply C.mainly D.mostly4.A.then B.so C.and D.but5.A.affection B.responsibility C.generosity D.excitement6.A.almost B.hardly C.even D.quite7.A.pick up B.build up C.keep up D.give up8.A.shut off B.put off C.take off D.get off9.A.teacher B.son C.father D.man10.A.ability B.desire C.experience D.plan11.A.difficulty B.adventure C.challenge D.memory12.A.end B.middle C.bottom D.edge13.A.Something B.Nothing C.Everything D.Anything14.A.miss B.love C.hate D.oppose15.A.kindness B.goodness C.closeness D.happiness答题策略短文改错——名词练习50 短文改错+七选五+完形填空Ⅰ.短文改错答案:Since I was a kid, I've considered different jo b ①jobsI would like to do. First,I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly ②cool. Then, when I was in thefive ③fifth grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too ④very/so much. When I studied chemistry ∧⑤in/at high school, I reconsidered my goal or ⑥anddecided to be a doctor. They ⑦Therewere two reasons for the decision. One was that Iwas amazingat the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing⑧amazedthat I wanted to help people in need.a doctor. And the other is⑩was①考查名词的数。
2015高考英语:短文改错练习(5)【英语卷(解析)·2015届广西桂林十八中高三上学期第一次月考(201409)】第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)(注:本题为新课改内容)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线(___),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the first day when I went to work in a very famous restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in the restaurant. After ordered two French dishes and some food, I began to look frequently at their watch timing the serving of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main reason why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about my findings and presented it the boss. 【答案】【知识点】E1短文改错记叙文【答案解析】71. 第一句第一个in改为on。
在具体的某一天用介词on。
72. a few 改为few。
老板抱怨没几个人来餐馆吃晚饭。
73. 第二句 am改为was。
讲述过去的事情,用一般过去时。
74. 第三句 ordered改为 ordering。
Order的逻辑主语是主句的主语I, I和order是逻辑上的主谓关系,所以用ordering。
75. their改为my。
本句的主语是I ,它的形容词性物主代词是my。
76. 第四句that改为whether。
我环顾四周看看是否还有别的不对的地方。
77. 第五句 secret改为secretly 修饰动词短语write down,要用副词。
78. 第六句 serving改为served。
Meal 和serve是被动关系,饭还没有被端上来。
79. 第八句 wait改为waiting。
动名词短语作主语。
80. 第九句 the boss前加to。
present sth to sb 将某物呈献给某人【英语卷(解析)·2014届西藏自治区高三最后一次模拟统一考试(201405)】E1第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:1.在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to havea pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.【答案】1.把for去掉ask for意为“请求”。
这里是“问询”之意,故去掉for2.the改为her in one's twenties在某人二十几岁的时候3.similarly改为similar similar to是后置定语修饰interests。
要用形容词形式。
4.he改为she 这里指代的是a girl,所以要用she。
5.interesting改为interested be interested in对……感兴趣。
这里同第3题,interested作后置定语。
6.Beside改为Besides beside adv.旁边地。
besides adv.除此之外。
这两个为易混词,应特别注意。
7.such 后加asuch a pen pal 这样一个笔友。
such a 如此一个。
8.whichever 改为whateverwhatever 无论什么,强调不明什么对象。
whichever 无论哪个,强调在明确的对象中不知要选哪个。
9.believed 改为believe根据后面的从句的时态可知这里是一般现在时。
10.learning 改为learnlearn 是will 的宾语所以用原形。
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