高考英语短文改错训练(10)(1)

2015年全国卷I第一节短文改错（10分）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.短文改错：第一行：think改为thought 第二行：in与countryside中间加the第二行：or改为and 第三行：on改为with 第四行去掉been第五行：seriously改为serious airs改为air Much改为Many第六行：found改为find your改为our/the2015年全国卷II四、改错One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly2014年全国卷I第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

改错专项101.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;⒉只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I enjoy getting up early so I can have early start to the day.I don't like leaving my work until the last minutes.I always do the things I like least first and then do those I like them better.When I am freely, I read books or hang out with my good friends.I will tell him about it if something bothers me.To cheering me up, they often tell me jokes and help me to find a way out.I also use a good method of deal with stress.I try to go to places that I feel really relaxed, like lying on the grass on a warmth day.The method often work and makes me feel peaceful.【答案】①early前面加an ②minutes→minute ③them 去掉④freely→free ⑤him→them ⑥cheering→cheer ⑦deal→dealing ⑧that→where ⑨warmth→warm ⑩work→works【解析】①考查冠词。

《高考短文改错--专项训练30篇—-及答案解析》1。

短文改错1. 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉.修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2。

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分.Dear Peter，As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples。

One of the most popular words are Dianzan，which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing，you mean that they will do whatever they liked。

The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before other. But now it’s wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time。

If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao, you mean that he is very rich。

英语高考练习题第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。

专题10 短文改错高频考点TOP 10 状语从句考点一So...that...和such...that之间误用such…that…与so…that…都可以用来引导结果状语从句，意为“如此…以致…”。

（1）such是形容词，它所修饰的名词可以是可数名词，也可以是不可数名词；名词前面可以带形容词，也可以不带。

如果其后是单数可数名词，前面需加不定冠词a或an。

因此，such…that…的句型结构可分为以下三种：①such+a（n）（+adj.）+单数可数名词+that从句。

如：She is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.她是一位很好的老师，我们都敬爱她。

Table tennis is such an interesting game that people all over the world play it.乒乓球是一项很有趣的运动，以致全世界的人都参加这项运动。

②such（+adj.）+复数可数名词+that从句。

如：They are such interesting books that I want to read them once more.这些书非常有趣，我想再读一遍。

③such（adj.）+不可数名词+that从句。

如：It was such bad weather that I had to stay at home.天气太坏，以致我不得不呆在家里。

（2）so是副词，与形容词或副词连用，其结构是：so+adj.（adv.）+that从句。

如：He ran so fast that I couldn’t catch up with him.他跑得那么快，我赶不上他。

I am so sleepy that I can hardly keep my eyes open.我太瞌睡了，眼睛几乎睁不开了。

注意：①当名词前面有many，much，few，little等表示数量多少的限定词时，应该用so，而不能用such。

高考英语短文改错专项训练（含答案）1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.4.【2016·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）It is Mother’s Day today. Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest. At dinner, we said to her, “HappyMother’s Day！”Mom was grateful and moving.5.【2016·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there！My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.2015年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1.【2015·陕西】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2.【2015·四川】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch andafter school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdaysnow and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk tohim?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.【2015·浙江】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.4.【2015·新课标全国II 】One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.5.【2015·新课标全国I 】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we ’ll live to regret it .2014年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错1. Correction 1(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden. Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!2. Correction 2(2014课标全国Ⅱ)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.3. Correction 3(2014浙江)I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.4. Correction 4(2014辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hopingto settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose5. Correction 5(2014四川)Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.高考英语短文改错专项训练(答案解析)1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分）【答案】1. that →where 2. but去掉 3. had →have 4. honest→honesty5. or→and6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a9. our→his 10. stead→steadily【归纳总结】在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用；连词because不和so连用；此外，return不和back连用。

短文改错1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10个错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Since the digging of No.3 to No.8 sites begin in October last year, about 500 pieces of relics (文物) have been found at Sanxingdui Ruins in southwest China Sichuan Province. The relics, discovered at six new sites, include the golden masks. Many of them are unique shaped. The new finds have brought the total amount of the relics discovered at the ruins to nearly 2,000. The discoveries has shown that ancient China is far more developed we have expected.Sanxingdui was discovered in the early twenty century. It has been considering as one of the greatest archaeological (考古的) wonder in the world.2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

高考英语二轮复习：短文改错（1）一、改错题（共10题；共50分）1. ( 5分) （2021高三上·安徽开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2）只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Today I'll talk a little bit about Italian culture. Music plays a important role in the culture of Italy. Italian music is heavy influenced by its history. And the piano and the violin are said have been invented in Italy. Italians are fond of spend time with their families. In the old days, Italian families were used to be large. However, they are smaller in size now. Family member always get together at every festival. As for sports, one of the most popular sports in Italy are football. The Italian national team is one of the better in the world. Another popular sports include volleyball, basketball, boxing or bike riding.2. ( 5分) （2021高三上·蚌埠开学考）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

(一)Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busytaking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at（二）Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.According to studies, many children spend more time watching televisionthan they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may notbe develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can bevery noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, allplanned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of 第四行：删去be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really（三）I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow playerswe’ve won several games. There will an important game next month.But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’tplay basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more timepreparing for the college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sportsand college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend hadno choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player 改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his (四)When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese andtried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised meto keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paperas I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrotea little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much andreads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their wordwere a great encouragement to me.(4)第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything 第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed 后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）Dear Ralph,I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself asshy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for meto do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me asa fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talkedto each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger atonce. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’tseem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?Yours,Xiao Wei(5)第一行：of改为from 第二行：quietly改为quiet 第三行：well 后加as；to改为at 第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk 第六行：stranger改为strangers 第七行：since改为but第八行：去掉about（六）On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museumand some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even goout of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concertcost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to meas birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.All right. That’s how I' m going to do.(6)第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（七）Dear Susan,I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class willbe over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together toa hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekendover dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as 第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together；第六行：with 改为about第七行：Having 改为Have(八)You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all information are good to society. For example, you can find such informationlike how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes 第二行：have改为having 第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is 第七行：what改为how（九）Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby whichis both interested and fun. And every year more and more people starta stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which caneven last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy becausethey are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and lettersfrom friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So onceyou’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in theStamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.9）第一行：age改为ages 第二行：interested改为interesting第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere 第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in第八行：exist改为exists（十）Though a great progress has been made in science these years, thereare still many people live in poor conditions. They make their livesby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoolbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there.Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living 第三行：thing改为things 第四行：去掉第二个to 第五行：在you前加do 第六行：on改为in第七行：us改为we 第八行：child改为children 第九行：tthis----these 第十行：clear改为clearly。

2020届高考英语专题十：短文改错记叙类专练（含解析）短文改错（每题1分，共40分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

A（考点27易）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on考点03 a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks 考点08 at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where考点11 his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun 考点09 to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling考点05 him to wait outside a考点01 shop. Five minutes later,Tony saw考点02 parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible 考点06 worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.B（考点27易）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take考点08 a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but考点12 there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about 考点01 world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your考点02 view and gain knowledges考点04 we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought 考点09 that it is a good idea. It does not cost many考点02, yet we can still learn a lot.C（考点27中难）Last night, I had a strange but interesting dream. On the way back to 考点06 home, I came across a child from another planet. His clothes seem考点09 to be shining and looked beautiful. As I got closely考点06 to him, he looked frightened and turned his back to me. Though I couldn’t speak her考点02 language, I used hand gestures to talk about 考点03 him. A while later, he told me lots of amazing thing考点04 on his planet, which made me laugh. But all of sudden, he began to cry, and then he explained he had lost his way but考点12 couldn’t find his home. Seen考点08 that, I offered to help him. His family had a telephone number like ours, so I asked him to call his parents using my phone. Soon before考点13 making the call he disappeared.D（考点27中难）On a storm考点06 night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following考点08 by thunderstorms. I was so scared that I ran to my bed but 考点12 hid myself under the blanket. To make matters bad考点06, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thought考点04. After some time passed, I fall考点09 asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that考点11 I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever考点06 leave me at home alone.语法填空（每题1.5分，共60分）阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

高考英语改错经典十篇（附答案）一、（大纲卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。

All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…，这是单个的动名词定语，做主语的时候，谓语动词要使用单数形式。

2022高考英语：短文改错练习题（1）及解析第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。

对标有题号的每一行作出判定；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情形改正：此行多一个词：把余外的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一个横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, 76._______I should try to save electricity in our daily life. For example, 77._______if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, 78._______I will always remember to turn on the lights. In order to 79._______protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try 80._______to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I would 81._______not use things like paper cup and disposable chopsticks 82._______because they are made of wood. I believe that by doing all 83._______these small things will improve our environment but help 84._______make our world the much better place to live. 85._______答案与解析76. √77.our→my。

课下练习10一、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 .文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最|||多有两处 .每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 . 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词 .删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉 .修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词 .注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 .This morning I got up early and went to school as usually,only to find there were nobody in the classroom because it was Sunday. "How a bad memory I have!〞 I couldn ,t help laughing.Stand in front of the school gate,I began to wonder what to do next.Suddenly a good idea occurs to me. "Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?〞 I immediately telephoned some of my best friends,but they all agreed to join me.About two hours late,we finally arriveda pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there.We really enjoyed us greatly.二、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 .文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最|||多有两处 .错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 .增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词 .删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉 .修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词 .注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 .There are a lot of unforgettable thing in our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year. When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation. I was determined to win the first prize. I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally, I do a good job. When I heard I got the first prize, my heartwas filled in joy and tears rolled down. Through this speech competition, I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.三、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 .文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最|||多有两处 .每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 . 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词 .删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉 .修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词 .注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 .When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.四、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 .文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最|||多有两处 .每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 . 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词 .删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉 .修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词 .注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 .Dear Ben,As graduation is draw near, I ,d like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind.In the last three years, you had shared my joys and sorrows, making my school life unforgettable. I remember very much that you sent me to hospital when I hadmy left leg break. During the days when I had to stay in the bed, you comforted me and helped me my lessons. It is your friendship which fills my life with sunshine.I hope my friendship will last forever and I also hope all your dreams will come truly in the future.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua 五、短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最|||多有两处错误 .每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 .增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词 .删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉 .修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词 .注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 .While take a walk with my pet dog this morning, I met a middle -aged man who was shouting on his phone. Obviously, he bound to have a bad day. Before he left, I noticed his keys were on the ground. So I immediately picked it up and walked around to look for the man. Several minute later, it was near a mailbox in the park where I found the man. He was still shouting on his phone. I drag my dog and walked to him. He turned around and was annoying about my interruption. I showed him the keys and explained to the whole thing. Then he became aware of what had happened and said he was awful sorry.六、短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最|||多有两处错误 .每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改 .增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词 .删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉 .修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词的下面写出修改后的词 .注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分 .Failure is part of our life. Somebody has ever achieved great success without lots of failures. One experience left lasting impression on me. I ,ve been fond of playing the piano since my childhood. Last year there was a piano competition for teenager in my city and I take part in it. I couldn ,t wait to show off. The day finally came. However, when I was on the stage I was very nervous that I made several mistakes while playing. My performance was a completely failure!It was only after the competition when I realized my failure resulted in my lack of practice. From then on, I devoted more time to play the piano because I firmly believe that practice make perfect.答案一、答案：This morning I got up early and went to school asusually usual,only to find there were was nobody in the classroom because it was Sunday. "How What a bad memory I have!〞 I couldn ,t help laughing. tan Stand S dingin front of the school gate,I began to wonder what to do next.Suddenly a good ideaoccurs occurred to me. "Why not get together with some good friends for a picnic in such a fine weather?〞 I immediately telephoned some of my best friends, but andthey all agreed to join me.About two hours late later,we finally arrived at a pleasant park with trees and flowers here and there.We really enjoyed us ourselvesgreatly. 二、答案： There are a lot of unforgettable thing thingsin our life. The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competitionholding held last year. When my English teacher told me that I had been chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me myselfto the preparation. I was determined to win the firstprize. I was suchsonervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything. Notuntil I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down. Finally, I dodida good job.When I heard I got the first prize, my heart was filledinwithjoy and tears rolleddown. Through this speech competition, I understand that it is confidence which thatmakes people successfully successful.解析：1.第|一句:thing→things考查名词 .a lot of许多,修饰可数名词复数或不可数名词 .thing是可数名词 .故thing改为things .2.第二句:holding→held考查过去分词 .此处的held作后置定语,修饰前面的competition .两者是被动关系,过去分词表被动 .故holding改为held .3.第三句:在had后加been考查语态 .本句是过去完成时的被动语态 .句意为 "我已经被选中去参加演讲比赛 .〞故在had后加been .4.第三句:me→myself考查代词 .主语是 "我〞,动词的宾语还是 "我〞 .所以此处用反身代词 .故me改为myself .5.第五句:such→so考查连词 .在so... that…和such…that…句型中,such +a/an +形容词 +名词 +that;so +形容词/副词 +a/an +名词 +that .故such改为so .6.第六句:删去a考查冠词 .catch sight of是固定表达,意思是 "看见〞 .故删去a .7.第七句:do→did考查时态 .本文讲述的是过去的事情,所以用一般过去时 .故do改为did .8.第八句:in→with考查介词 .be filled with =be full of是固定表达 .意思是 "充满了〞 .故in改为with .9.第九句:which→that考查连词 .本句是个强调句 .去掉 "it is that,剩下的是个完整的句子 .强调句中不用which .故which改为that .10.第九句:successfully -successful考查形容词 .此处作宾语的people需要形容词作宾语补足语 .故successfully改为successful .三、答案：When talked talking about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which whenI started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest that led me to sing. Hard /although though asI learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually realized sing singing is my whole life. I like it or andenjoy it. I want to stand on an even big bigger stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transferhappy happiness and encouragement to the audience by singing, lettingus themcheer up. 解析： 1. 句意:当谈到我的梦想时,我回忆起我的童年,那个时候我开始学习唱歌 .分析句子可知,talk 的逻辑主语是I,二者是主动关系,故要用talking about,作状语 .故把talk 改为talking .2. 句意:我回忆起我的童年,在那个时候我开始学习唱歌 .分析句意可知which,指代前面的先行词my childhood,而My childhood 在定语从句中作时间状语,而which 不能作状语 .故把which 改为when .3. 句意:是我的兴趣引导我唱歌 .分析句子可知本句是强调句型It was +被强调局部 +剩余局部 .如果把被强调局部去掉句子完整 .如 it was my interest that led me to sing. .因此要添加上that .4. 句意:虽然我学得很苦,但是我很开心 .本句是局部倒装,只有though/as 才能倒装,而although 只能用于陈述句:although I learned hard, I was happy then.故把although 改为though/as .5. 句意:随着时间的推移,我逐渐意识到唱歌是我的全部生活 .sing 是个动词不能作主语,因此要用singing 作主语,故把sing 改为singing .6. 句意:我喜欢而且享受音乐 .分析句意可知喜欢和享受是并列关系,故要用并列连词and .7. 句意:我想站在一个更大的舞台上唱歌 .big前有一个副词even,even修饰的是比拟级|||,且根据句意可知是一个更大的舞台,故把big改为bigger .8. 句意:我想站在一个更大的舞台上唱歌,不仅我的梦想会成真,而且我可以把我美丽的歌声送给所有的听众 e true实现,是不及物动词,不能用被动语态,故要用主动语态 .故把be去掉 .9. 句意:我要传递快乐 .Happy是形容词,不能作transfer的宾语,要用名词happiness作宾语,故把happy改为happiness .10. 句意:我想通过唱歌把快乐和鼓励传递给观众,让他们振作起来 .分析句意可知是把快乐传递给观众,让他们(观众) 振作起来,而不是我们,故把us改为them .四、答案： Dear Ben,As graduation is near, I ,d like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your .In the last three years, you shared my joys and sorrows, making my school life unforgettable. I remember very that you sent me to hospital when I had my left leg. During the days when I had to stay in the bed, you comforted me and helped me my lessons. It is your friendship fills my life with sunshine. I hope friendship will last forever and I also hope all yourdreams will come in the future.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua五、答案： While a walk with my pet dog this morning, I met a middle -aged man who was shouting on his phone. Obviously, he bound to have a bad day. he left, I noticed his keys were on the ground. So I immediately pickedup and walked around to look for the man. Several later, it was neara mailbox in the park I found the man. He was still shouting on his phone.I my dog and walked to him. He turned around and was about my interruption. I showed him the keys and explained to the whole thing. Then hebecame aware of what had happened and said he was sorry.六、答案： 1.Somebody -Nobody3.teenager -teenagers4.take -took5.very -so6 pletely -complete7.when -that8.in -from9.play -playing10.make -makes解析：1.Somebody -Nobody 考查不定代词 .somebody 某人;nobody没有人 .此处是说,失败是生活的一局部 .没有人不经历失败就能取得成功的 .故Somebody -Nobody .2.在lasting前加a 考查冠词 .impression为可数名词,故前面要用a 修饰,泛指一次深刻的印象 .故在lasting前加a .3.teenager -teenagers 考查名词的复数 .此处是指为青少年举办的一次钢琴比赛,teenager要用复数形式 .故teenager -teenagers .4.take -took 考查时态 .根据时间状语last year可知该处应为一般过去时,谓语动词要用过去式took,故take -took .5.very -so 考查固定结构 .此处是说,当我站在舞台上,我如此紧张以致于演奏时出现了几处错误 .so ...that...如此……以致于……,that引导结果状语从句,是固定结构,故very -so .6 pletely -complete 考查形容词 .failure是名词,要用形容词修饰,故completely -complete .7.when -that 考查特殊结构 .本处为强调句结构,该结构为It is/was +被强调的局部 +that/who(指人),故when -that .8.in -from 考查短语 .result from 由于;result in 导致 .此处是说,我的失败源于我的耐心缺乏,谓语动词要用result from,故in -from .9.play -playing 考查短语的搭配 .devote ... to sth./to doing sth. 为固定短语,to 为介词,其后跟名词或动名词,故play -playing .10.make -makes 考查主谓一致 .分析句子结构可知,practice 是句子的主语且为不可数名词,该句的时态是一般现在时,谓语动词要用makes,故make -makes .。

2021高考英语短文改错解密根底训练〔10〕及答案制卷人：歐陽文化、歐陽理複；制卷時間：二O二二年二月七日下面是一段文章，请你对其进展修改。

文中一共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或者修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号〔∧〕，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者〔从第11处起〕不计分。

S u D a o q u a n,a g e d65,w a s a r e t i r e d m a n i n H e c h u a n o f C h o n g q i n g.H e g o t a l o t o f a t t e n t i o n t o l o c a l p e o p l e e a r l i e r t h i s m o n t h d u r i n gt h e f i r s t p u b l i c a p p e a r a n c e o f h i s s p e c i a l l y i n v e n t i o n—a w a t e r b i k e.T h e o p e n i n g p e r f o r m a n c e o f h i s p e d a l b o a t g i v e n o n n e a r b y F u j i a n g R i v e r i n f r o n t o f a c r o w d o f m o r e t h a n 100 o n l o o k e r s.T h e p e d a l b o a t i s2.6m e t e r s l o n g a n d 1.4m e t e r s w i d e r.I t h a s e m p t y m e t a lc o n t a i n e r s o nb o t h s i d e s. T h e p e d a l s a r e u s e d t o t u r n t o a p e d a l w h e e l. T h e d r i v e rc a nr i d e i t i n t h e c e n t e r o r t h e r e i s r o o m f o r t w o o t h e r a d u l t. H e s a i dt h a t i n v e n t e d i t b r o u g h t h i m a l o t o f j o y a n d t h a t o u r c r e a t i o n i s n o th a r m i n g t h e e n v i r o n m e n t a n d i s s u i t a b l e f o r t o u r i s m.【参考答案】4.S u D a o q u a n,a g e d 65, a r e t i r e d m a n i n H e c h u a n o f C h o n g q i n g.H e g o t a l o t o f a t t e n t i o n l o c a l p e o p l e e a r l i e r t h i s m o n t h d u r i n gt h e f i r s t p u b l i c a p p e a r a n c e o f h i s i n v e n t i o n—a w a t e r b i k e.T h e o p e n i n g p e r f o r m a n c e o f h i s p e d a l b o a t g i v e n o n n e a r b y F u j i a n gR i v e r i n f r o n t o f a c r o w d o f m o r e t h a n 100 o n l o o k e r s.T h e p e d a l b o a t i s2.6m e t e r s l o n g a n d 1.4m e t e r s.I t h a s e m p t y m e t a lc o n t a i n e r s o nb o t h s i d e s.T h e p e d a l s a r e u s e d t o t u r n a p e d a l w h e e l. T h e d r i v e rc a nr i d e i t i n t h e c e n t e r t h e r e i s r o o m f o r t w o o t h e r.H e s a i dT h a t i t b r o u g h t h i m a l o t o f j o y a n d t h a tc r e a t i o n i s n o th a r m i n g t h e e n v i r o n m e n t a n d i s s u i t a b l e f o r t o u r i s m.短文改错〔一共10小题；每一小题1分，满分是10分〕下面短文中有10处语言错误。

上海市高考英语阅读短文改错训练（1）阅读理解。

In the more and more competitive service industry, it is no longer enough to promise custome r satisfaction. Today, customer “delight” is what companies are trying to achieve in or order to keep and increase market share.It is accepted in the marketing industry, and confirmed by a number of researches, that customers receiving good service will promote business by telling up to 12 other people: those treated badly will tell their tales of woe to up to 20 people, 80 percent of people who feel their complaints are handled fairly will stay loyalNew lunges for customer care have come when people can obtain goods and services through telephone call centers and the Internet. For example , many companies now have to invest(投资)a lot of money in information technology and staff training in order to cope with the “phone rage”—caused by delays in answering calls ,being cut off in mid-conversation or left waiting for long periods.“Many people do not like talking to machines,” says Dr . Storey Senior Lecturer in Marketing at City University Business School. “Banks, for example, encourage staff at call centers to use customer data to establish instant and good relationship with them .The aim is to make the customer feel they know you and that you can trust—the sort of comfortable feelings people have during face-to-face chats with their local branch manager.”Recommended ways of creating customer delight inc lude: under-promising and over-delivering (saying that a repair will be calmed out wit hin five hours ,but getting it done within two );replacing a faulty product immediately : throwing in a gift voucher(购物礼卷)as an unexpected “thank you” to rental customers ;and always returning calls ,even when they are complaints.Aiming for customer delight is all very well , but if services do not reach the high level promised , disappointment or worse will be the result . This can be eased by offering an apology and an explanation of why the service did not meet usual standards with empathy (for example,” I know how you must feel”), and possible solutions (replacement , compensation or whatever fames suggests best meets the case).Airlines face some of the toughest challenges over customer care. Fierce competition has convinced them that delighting passengers is an important marketing tool, while there is great potential for customer anger over delays caused by weather, unclaimed luggage and technical problems.For British Airways staff, a winning telephone style is considered vital in handling the large volume of calls about bookings and flight times. They are trained to answer quickly, with their name, job title and a “we are her e to help” attitude. The company has invested heavily in information technology to make sure that information is available instantly on screen.British Airways also says its customer care policies are applied within the company and staff are taught to regard each other as customers requiring the highest standards of service.Customer care is obviously here to stay and it would be a foolish company that used slo gans such as "we do as we please”. On the other hand, the more customers are promised, the greater the risk of disappointment.( ) 1. We can learn from Paragraph 2that .A. complaining customers are hard to satisfyB. unsatisfied customers receive better serviceC. Satisfied customers catch more attentionD. well-treated customers promote business( ) 2. The writer mentions “phone rage”(Paragraph 3) to show that .A. customers often use phones to express their angerB. people still prefer to buy goods onlineC. customer care becomes more attentionD. customers rely on their phones to obtain services( ) 3. What does the writer recommend to create delight?A. Calling customers regul arlyB. Giving a “thank you” note.C. Delivering a quicker serviceD. Promising more gifts.( ) 4. If a manager should show his empathy (Paragraph6), what would he probably say?A. “I know how upset you must be.”B. “I appreciate your understanding.”C. “I’m sorry for the delay.”D. “I know it’s our fault.”( ) 5. Customer delight is important for airlines because .A. their telephone style remains unchangedB. they are more likely to meet with complaintsC. the services cost them a lot of moneyD. the policies can be applied to their staff( ) 6. Which of the following is conveyed in this article?A. Face-to-face service creates comfortable feelings among customers.B. Companies that promise more will naturally attract more customers.C. A company should promise less but do more in a competitive market.D. Customer delight is more important for airlines than for banks.【参考答案】1—6、DCCABC阅读理解It is probably the strangest sport anyone has ever invented. And at first sight, it looks like the easiest. Competitors have to do two things. The first is to stand still.The second is to place their hands anywhere on the body of a car,and keep it there.This is where things start getting difficult. Lots of people are doingthe same thing. And the winner of the“handathon”contest is theperson who can carry on doing it for the longest time. That persongets to own the car.It still seems to be an easy thing to do. At the beginning it is.Anyone can stand still. But when the contest has been going for four or five days, standing still seems like the most difficult job in the world. And keeping the hand in place over this time becomes an act of serious attention. After a few days, the hand seems to belong to someone else—someone who wants to go home and get some sleep.Competitors are allowed to take a five-minute break every hour to eat, drink or do whatever else isnecessary. No one is allowed to lean on the car for support. Winners need to be able to show great powers of attention. They also need to be able to develop special skills.Maybe the popularity of the handathon is due to the fact that it is not necessary to be a trained athlete to enter. Entrants in the Longview handathon certainly don’t seem to do much preparatio n. Most say they will prepare by“getting lots of sleep”. Others say they will“eat healthy food”or“pray for success”. The whole event gives ordinary people the chance to do something interesting and win something in the end.Handathons are competitions, but there is little rivalry(敌对)between competitors. They help each other out and keep each other’s spirits up. People who drop out early return with food, drink and encouragement.【文章大意】双手放在车身任何部位, 静立不动, 你能坚持多久? 本文介绍了一项看似简单, 实则类似于马拉松的运动形式“handathon”。

短文改错专练（一）假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。

增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下边写出该加的词。

删除：把剩余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

改正：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下边写出改正后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；2. 只同意改正10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over andasking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said“ Yes,please! Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push h er car into it. We weren very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offeredhis help as well as! Together we got the woman’ s car into the parking lot, was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.”’ t which sheBOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, ayoung foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare,and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driverwhether he could change a 50- yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible,as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’ t have enough change the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. Hewas relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted ongiving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to meand directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier wasallowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’ d have got served much quick if I’ d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up myitems. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, hadlost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came toreturn the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In thelast class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepare I had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “ Although as a new learner I don ’playt well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes. ” Lucky,g wenteverythinallright. But the teacher commented, “ Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself. His” words are stillreminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a headstart every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I doit. Look back on which I ’ vedone will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies withoutany difficult. However, it ’nevers easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learnnew words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, becausewe can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to readat least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store,I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man,and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like h isbabies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she ishis angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children ’ooksb regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to thebed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour ata time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案：A1. ... slow down sudden ...sudden→ suddenly2. ... came to stop ...stop 前加 a3. ... asking the woman ...asking→ asked4. ... needed any helps.helps→ help5. ... right next by ...by→ to6. ... it is a heavy ...is→ was7. ... offered his help ...his→ their8. ... as well as!去掉第二个 as9. ... which she was ...which→ where或 which前加 in10. We both smiled ...both→ allB1. One morning when ...去掉 when2. ... rushed catch the ...catch 前加 to3. I pay my fare ...pay→ paid4. ... looking for the ...the→ a5. ... it was possible ...possible→ impossible6. ... as it was writing ...writing→ written7. ... enough changes ...changes→ change8. ... very disappointing.disappointing→ disappointed9. Dig in his ...Dig→ Digging10. ... giving it to myself.myself→ meC1. ... the member of staff ...the→ a2. ... where had just ...where→ which / that3. ... served much quick ...quick→ quicker4.Eventual it was ...Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn.去掉 of6. ... she explained me ...me 前加 to 或去掉 me7. ... a few days ago ...ago→ before8. ... like a cashier ...like→ as9. ... paid for his ...his→ her10. ... but volunteered to ...but→ andD1. ... the piano class.the→ a2. ... required play ...play 前加 to3. ... according to that ...that→ which4. ... all the prepare ...prepare→ preparation5.I say at ...say→ said6. ... but I want to ...去掉 but7.Lucky, everything ...Lucky→ Luckily8.Therefore, I will ...Therefore→ However9. ... hopes that you ...hopes→ hoping10. His words are ...His→ HerE1. ... wait no man.wait 后加 for2.This is everything ...everything→methingso3.I have spent ...have→ had4. ... fool around that ...fool→ fooling5. ... time to changing.changing→ change6. ... my time wise.wise→ wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ...去掉 been9. Look back on ...Look→ Looking10. ... which I've done ...which→ whatF1. ... any difficult.difficult→ difficulty2. ... it's never easier ...easier→ easy3. ... learn about a ...去掉 about4. ... English is exception.is 后加 no5. ... new words are ...are→ is6. ... use it as ...it→ them7. ... seeing every day.seeing→ seen8. ... I had decided ...had→ have9. ... with English ...with→ in10. ... end of a year.a→ theG1. ... it have been ...have→ had2. ... the last time I ...the 前加 since3. ... store sells ...sells→ selling4. ... I was surprising ...surprising→ surprised5. ... so much singing ...much → many6. ... noticed there had ...had → were7. ... what amazing ...what→ how8. ... said delighted ...delighted→ delightedly9. ... open for it.it→ them10. ... at anytime they ...去掉 atH1. ... which name ...which→ whose2. ... two year old.year→ years3. Her name is ...is→ was4. ... is his angel.his→ her5. Read children's books ...Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ...sleeping→ sleep7. ... to the bed!去掉 the8. ... very impatient ...impatient→ patient9. ... fond playing ...fond 后加 of10. ... so a lovely ...so→ such短文改错专练（二）假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下作文。

高考英语短文改错新题型下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分Passage 1It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．Passage 2I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allo wed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for u s to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.Passage 3Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.CustomerLi MingPassage 4I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place.We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Si nce then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.Passage 5I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.Passage 6Dear Susan,I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours,Zhang Ming Passage 7Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by dayI learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.Passage 8If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.Passage 9Dear Mary,I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news fr om you.Yours,Li HuaPassage 10Dear Ralph,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last oneto move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I findthey are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’vebecome cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how Ifelt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall thissadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?Key for reference:Passage 1It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the oneast while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a when sideyellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next momentmakethe car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stopheand drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was∧young woman ∧wore a pair drove a who/改为wearingof glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed carpassingand took the old man to the nearest hospital．Passage 2I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV afterwithschool. She holds∧ view that senior three students have to make fully use ofthe fullevery minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I amherallowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about mybestudy. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.eyesIn my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.watching work Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at\has 删除at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.Passage 3Dear sir,Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like∧shape of the bought the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it But∧turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matteris(或去it) becomesworse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to askdisappointedfor help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will ∧at home this weekend.Pleaseman/ person be/staycall me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you veryThankmuch.CustomerLi Ming Passage 4I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in myfriend’s to place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s listenedparents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summerme a weeksholiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill butbeautiful and had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming cam e ∧see me every day. Then his father hastochanged jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. butseenwe’ve kept writing to each other.Passage 5I feel quite sure∧the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. 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