高考英语一轮复习短文改错热点突破与真题跟踪练

第20讲短文改错（测）时间：45分钟满分：50分(每题1分)姓名__________ 得分________假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

（一）、（2022·全国·高考真题）We all know that cycling is a greatly exercise. A doctor tells me people who lives the longest are dancers and cyclists. Maybe it is because the combination of fresh air, smooth movement and exercise. Whether you ride a bicycle, you don’t use petrol. So they are not producing carbon dioxide and not cause air pollution. Just see how cars have been taken over our cities. They often run at high speeds, what may put our lives in danger. And there were traffic jams, too. Our cities will be better places if we replace cars with bicycle.【语篇解读】这是一篇议论文。

Exercise 25 (2)Exercise 26 (2)Exercise 27 (3)Exercise 28 (3)Exercise 29 (4)Exercise 30 (5)Exercise 31 (6)Exercise 32 (6)Exercise 33 (7)Exercise 34 (8)Exercise 35 (8)Exercise 36 (9)(建议用时9′)Exercise 25It was Monday.Li Ming was the first come to the classroom.When he came into his seat，therefore，he found his bench was broken.Seen there was nobody around，he decided to change it with Wang Gang's，and so he do.After a while，Wang Gang came.When he saw a broken bench，he carried it out of the classroom.Li Ming didn't know how he was going to do.So Li Ming came out of and found that Wang Gang has begun to repair the broken bench.Li Ming's face turned red.He said with Wang Gang，“Let's repair them together.”【答案】It was Monday.Li Ming was the first ∧to come to the classroom.When he came into his seat，therefore,however，he found his bench was broken.SeenSeeing there was nobody around，he decidedto change it with Wang Gang's，and so he dodid.After a while，Wang Gang came.When he sawathebroken bench，he carried it out of the classroom.Li Ming didn't know howwhat he was going to do.SoLi Ming came out ﹨o f and found that Wang Gang hashad begun to repair the broken bench.LiMing's face turned red.He said withto Wang Gang，“Let's repairthemit together.”Exercise 26Dear Susan，I am very glad to hear you are come to visit me next Friday.Unfortunately，I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.I won't find difficult to get to the city center.The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.I will take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.Having a pleasant trip and see you this Friday.Yours，Zhang Ming 【答案】Dear Susan ，I am very glad to hear you arecome coming to visit me next Friday.Unfortunately ，I won't be able to meet you at the airport although since/as/because I have classes in the afternoon.I Youwon't find ∧it difficult to get to the city center.The airport bus leaves every 30 minute minutesand will take you rightly right to the Friendship Hotel.My class will be over by then or andI will pick you ﹨together up there.I will take you to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talkwith aboutour plan for the weekend over dinner.Having Havea pleasant trip and see you this Friday. Yours ，Zhang MingExercise 27When I was a child ，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city ，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately ，on the development of industrialization ，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so ，we'll live to regret it.【答案】When I was a child ，I hoped to live in the city.I think thought I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city ，but I miss my home in ∧the)countryside.There the air is clean or andthe mountains are green.Unfortunately ，on withthe development of industrialization ，the environment has ﹨been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously serious problem.The airs air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much Manyrare animals are dying out.We mustfound find ways to protect your our/theenvironment.If we fail to do so ，we'll live to regret it.Exercise 28I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn't move. The young man didn't know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrive. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.【答案】I saw an accident happenedhappen on my way home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the streeton a zebra crossing whilewhen a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw thegirl andbut tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell offherhis motorbike.The girl wasbadbadly hurt and couldn't move. The young man didn't knowhowwhat to do. I ran to aphone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrivearrived. They sent her∧,to)hospital at once.One of the policemanpolicemen talked to the young man and wrote something down while talking. I thinkit is very dangerous to drive very fast.Exercise 29When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two American. I became their guide. First, we went to the Shouxi River. They wanted to look around the river by the boat. After buy the tickets, we got into a boat. We went around seeing the beautiful sight. After that, we went shopping. The sellers couldn't spoke English. Though it was very harder, I tried my best listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought some little things with their help. Next, we went to a small zoo but took some pictures. When we felt hunger, we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old house and learned more about Chinese history.【答案】When I was ten years old, I went to Yangzhou with two AmericanAmericans. I became their guide.First, we went to the Shouxi River. They wanted to look around the river by boat. Afterbuy buyingthe tickets, we got into a boat. We went around seeing the beautiful sight. After that, we wentshopping. The sellers couldn't spokespeak English. Though it was veryharderhard，I tried mybest∧,to)listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought some little thingswith theirmy help. Next, we went to a small zoobutand took some pictures. When we felthungerhungry，we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old househouses) and learned more aboutChinese history.Exercise 30Dear Sally，Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation，of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for money，but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's worse，I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my future.In a word，I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.Yours，Li Bing 【答案】Dear Sally，Yours，Li BingExercise 31My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【答案】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothatwhere I live.Though not very big, therestaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some peopleeven hadhave to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success ishonesthonesty.Every day hemakes sure that fresh vegetablesorand high quality oil areusingused for cooking.My uncle says thathe never dreams ∧of becoming rich inthea short period of time.Instead, he hopes thatourhisbusiness will growsteadysteadily.Exercise 32John，a little boy living next door to me，liked fast food very much.His parents was so busy that they had a little time to cook for him at home.So they often took him eat fast food.That's because John became overweight.My mother had always told his parents that too much fast food was harmful，and they ignored my mother's advices.Recently，the doctor warned him never to eat fast food any more after the poor boy has a physical examination.Her parents came to realize whata terribly mistake they had made.Now John's mother often comes to ask my mother for advice in how to make healthy food.【答案】John ，a little boy living next door to me ，liked fast food very much.His parents was were so busy that they had little time to cook for him at home.So they often took him ∧to eat fast food.That's because whyJohn became overweight.My mother had always told his parents that too much fast food was harmful ，and but they ignored my mother's advices advice.Recently ，the doctor warned him never to eat fast food any more after the poor boyhas had a physical examination.Her His parents came to realize what aterribly terrible mistake they had made.Now John's mother often comes to ask my mother for advicein on/about how to make healthy food.Exercise 33My dream school starts at 8：30A ．m. and ends at 3：30 p ．m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore ，we have more time with after-school activities.For example ，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest ，and sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers and also our friends.【答案】My dream school starts at 8：30A ．m. and ends at 3：30 p ．m.They There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.Wedidn't don't need to do so many much homework.Therefore ，we have more time with for after-school activities.For example ，we can do reading for one and a half hour hoursand play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look looks like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers and treesaround the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，and sit by the lake listening ∧tomusic.The teachers here are kind and helpfullyhelpful.They are not only our teachersandbut also ourfriends.Exercise 34Thank you very much for invite me to your birthday party in Saturday morning.I'd like to come and I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.They were very old and unluckily they are not in a good health recently.My mother has already made a telephone calling to them and promised visit them with me this Saturday.My mother said we will stay at my grandparents' home the whole weekend.So I'm real sorry I can't attend your party.I do hope you will understand all this.Here I wish you a lot of fun on your birthday and much happy returns of the day.【答案】Thank you very much forinviteinviting me to your birthday partyinon Saturday morning.I'd liketo come andbut I have to go to my hometown to see my grandparents.Theywereare very old andunluckily they are not in good health recently.My mother has already made a telephonecallingcall to them and promised ∧to visit them with me this Saturday.My mother said wewillwouldstay at my grandparents' home the whole weekend.So I'mrealreally sorry I can't attend your party.Ido hope you will understand all this.Here I wish you a lot of fun on your birthday and much manyhappy returns of the day.Exercise 35People often come up across the word “SOHO” in the newspaper or magazine.But not every one knows how it means.As the matter of fact, “SOHO” means “Small Office/ Home Office”．Now many people use computer, so it is possible for you to work at their homes.They needn't go to offices.They can usually work fast and better at home.By work at home, they save a lot of time and energy.They needn't spend time on the road but they won't feel tired or angry because the bad traffic.Maybe in the future, more and more people would be “SOHO” workers.【答案】People often come across the word “SOHO” in the new spaper or magazine.But not everyone knows it means.As matter of fact, “SOHO” means “Small Office/Home Office”．Now many people use , so it is possible for to work at their homes.They needn't go to offices.They can usually work and better at home.By at home, they save a lot of time and energy.They needn't spend time on the road they won't feel tired or angry because the bad traffic.Maybe in the future，more and more people be “SOHO” workers.Exercise 36At the age of thirteen，I take my first trip alone.I went to Xi'an and paid visit to my grandparents.I felt very nervous about travel so far，but my mother said，“Don't worry.You'll be fine.” I got off the airplane and talked for a long time with a kind woman which sat next to me.My grandparents met me at the airport and took me to his home.I stayed at there for two weeks，and I had so many fun with them！It was my first time in Xi'an，and I visited many place of interest.It was quite an interested experience!【答案】At the age of thirteen，I my first trip alone.I went to Xi'an and paid visit to my grandparents.I felt very nervous about so far，but my mother said，“Don't worry.You'll be fine.” I got the airplane and talked for a long time with a kind woman sat next to me.My grandparents met me at the airport and took me tohome.I stayed there for two weeks，and I had so fun with them！It was my first time in Xi'an，and I visited many of interest.It was quite anexperience!。

高考英语一轮复习课时跟踪检测试题51（含答案解析）课时跟踪检测51(代词)Ⅰ.单项填空1．—YouranintoMr.Li!Howdidthathappen?—Well,________ofuswaslookingwhereweweregoing.Wecamearoundthecorneratthesametime.A．neither B．eitherC．both D．none答案与解析：A句意：——你撞上了李先生！怎么搞的？——哎，我们俩当时都没有看路，又同时到达了那个拐角。

根据问句中的you和Mr.Li可知，代词指的是两者且表示否定意义，故用neither。

either“(两者中)任何一个”；both“(两者)都”；none“(三者或三者以上)没有一个”。

2．Thethievesfledthetownseparately,________carryingabag.A．all B．eachC．every D．both答案与解析：B句意：那些贼分头逃出了城镇，每个人都带着一个包。

由abag判断用each“每个人”，强调个体。

all表示全部；every只能修饰名词，不能单独使用；both“(两者)都”。

3．Iftheprojectshouldbedelayedforaday,________wouldmeanwewouldbefined$100,000.A．that B．asC．which D．andit答案与解析：A句意：假如这项工程延迟一天，那就意味着我们被罚100,000美元。

代替上文已提到的事情用that。

as与which无此用法；if引导条件句，逗号后是主句，D项中的连词and多余。

4．It'scertainlynotanewidea,andI'veusedthistechniquein________wayoranotherforseveralyears.A．any B．oneC．every D．either答案与解析：B句意：这确实不是一个新想法，我已经以这样或那样的形式使用这种技术好几年了。

高考英语【短文改错题】专题训练(一)One day when I went to the theater to listen to classical music, and in the middle of a performance, someone’s cell phone rang. It was very annoyed. I found it disturbing. The lady who gets a call left the concert hall right away, but I could still hear her chat loudly outside the theater. So I could not pay attention at the nice music. Therefore the use of cell phones in public place like restaurants, libraries and buses can unpleasant and impolite. I think it is acceptable to use it, but at the same time it is a good idea to avoid disturb other people.(二)One day, I saw the boy living next door with a new scar on his forehead. I became shocked as he was just 10 year old and the scar was horrible. I went to him and asked about his injure. At first he remains silent, but after while he started to sob and said, “My mother threw a plate to me.” I asked her with surprise the reason which his mother did so. He replied, "I asked for food to eat, so there was no food in the house." Then sud den my mother came and said, “Your lunch is getting up cold. Immediately, I felt embarrassed, with my face go red.(三)Last week our school hold a sports meeting. Realize it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various event such as running, the high jump and the long jump. They cheered for the athletes, so some raised their cameras to capture the exciting moments. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! With the cup in hand, we took a picture together proud.（四）Now I’d like to say something about myself. I am the Senior 3 student and I will graduate senior high school this June. In my spare time, I like to do some interested sports with my father, who usually teach me to play basketball and table tennis. But now, as the National College Entrance Examination is coming, he can't spend too many time on sports. Every day, I am busy prepare myself for the examination. Although I don’t have a lot of free time, but the busy life hastaught me how to effective make a balance between study and entertainment. Of all the subject, I love English best.（五）My parents and I went to Beishan Park to play on last Saturday. First, we watched the flowers and then we fly the kite. Honestly spoken, we played for a whole morning. And at noon, we had lunch at KFC, there the food was tasty. In the afternoon, we went to my grandparents’ house visit my grandparents. Except I, other family member talked a lot. I played outside. In the evening, my parents and I took a train to go to Yanji to take part in an English contest hurried. I felt happy from the bottom of my heart since I was tired.改错（六）Recently our English club has had a heating discussion about online shopping. Some people are in the favor of online shopping. They think it is very conveniently and time-saving. It allows people to buy all kinds of thing without leaving their homes. Beside, people can compare prices among different online shops before make decisions. However, others think online shopping isn’t reliable as traditional shopping. People can’t touch and try the things th at they want to buy. They may get unsuitable things or even get cheat by receiving goods of poor quality. In my opinion, online shopping had more advantages than disadvantages but people should think carefully before placing orders.改错（七）The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday happy. We can choose among staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home，it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we should go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.（八）Life is always full of something you can’t expect. Bob missed the first two lesson this morning. He got up early as usually, but when he was ready to leave he find his bicycle’s front tyre (轮胎) flat. He wanted to take taxi to school, and he did n’t have any money on him. He had tofind a place where he could get his bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So she had to walk to school, carry his bicycle all the way. That was the reason how he was late for school.（九）Last week, a football match is held between Class One and Class Two. The player from both sides are very good, so the match went on fierce at first. Finally Class Two won when we lost. They didn’t win the match, and didn’t lose heart. For one thing, we think friendship comes first, and the match comes second. For the another thing, since we all tried our best, there was no need to regret. Furthermore, we should analyze the reasons of the failure so as to succeeding next time. In brief, failure is important that it's the mother of success.改错（十）Recently our class have had a heating discussion on if people should keep pets at home in cities. There’re two differently opinions. Some students thought it's a good idea to ke ep pets because many old people who will live alone can get some comfort from them. Besides, get along well with animals will make their life interesting. However, other students are for the idea for the reason that pets may attack people or make too much noise. As for me, it's good for them to keep pets at home but we must take measure to make them behave well.改错（十一）Our family, consist of 6 adults and 4 children aged 1 to 8, want to travel in abroad to see Castle Neuschwanstein. We will be doing this in December on a weekday and wondered if there will be long queues at the ticket office. If they purchase online tickets in advance, can we go direct up to the castle? If each of us use a Bayem pass, we cannot travel before 9 am, that means we cannot arrive until about 11:30 am. It will be cold but young children will not want to stand in line for long time. Can you give me some advices as to the best way to enjoy this trip? Many thanks.改错（十二）I am Daisy. My last weekend was very busy. On Saturday, I got up at 6:00. Then I did exercises in the park at 7:00. Eventual I practiced reading English. I studied math after eat breakfast because we would have a math test on next Monday. I went to take piano lesson in the afternoon. Beside, I went to the movies with my classmates in the evening. And I sleep at 9:00. On Sunday, I had to do lots of homework, after that I went to the zoo with my classmates. The zoohad much animals such as elephants, monkeys, tigers, pandas and so on. The monkeys were very clever. Look! How a busy weekend I had!改错（十三）A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happy. But how can we make friends? First, to make friends, you must be friendly at others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in the return. You should try to make a stranger feeling at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than yourself. Second, friends should negotiate instead quarrelling. Finally, never believe in those who leaves you when you are in trouble. But never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Friends should be faith to each other. So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of your, you will have a lot of good friend.改错（十四）I am deep sorry to hear that you could not enter the final of The V oice of China of this year. I’m writing to convey my sympathy you, hoping to help you go through the difficulty. You have been doing well and I’m convinced that your failure is not my own fault. However, it’s universally acknowledge that failure is a mother of success. I d id hope you won’t lose your heart. Still you have many more chance to try for you are so young. Only by work hard can your fate be changed, but if you go on practising singing, you will succeed next year.改错（十五）I am writing to express my thank for your helping me improve my English. With your help, I would not be a freshman studied in South China Normal University now. I still remember the days when you teach me English in Grade 3. My English was once poor, and you didn’t laugh at me. Instead, you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was great improved because your encouragement. Without your help, I wouldn’t have realize my dream. I wish more and more of my students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you a healthily body and a happy life!改错（十六）I am Li Hua, a frequent customer of your restaurant. I have been pleasing with your excellent service for years but now I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about the poor service of one of your waiter. Last Saturday, I had a awful experience. When have beef noodles, I suddenly found there were two flies in them, that disgusted me a lot. So I asked the waiter to change it but he sayssomething rudely instead changing it. Needless to say, so a way of treating customers is unacceptable. I sincerely hope you can investigate it the matter seriously and make a formal apology with me.答案解析短文改错(一) 解析：1.第一句中的when删除。

高考英语一轮复习短文改错训练题（含答案）1．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Yesterday, when I complained with my mom about too little entertainment, she share the story of her youth with me. In the 1980s, neither iPads nor smartphones were invented. Each time when evenings approached, the children around would crowd into the only house where had a television. We stared at the small screen until the program ended. Parent would make every effort to drag their children to bed when it was getting lately. But now, iPads and smartphones have taken place of televisions. No wonder my mom always says we are the generation growing up in a honey jar. After listen to my mom's story I felt lucky to live so a happy and comfortable life. 2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

高考英语一轮复习课时跟踪检测试题36（含答案解析）课时跟踪检测36(B6Unit2)Ⅰ.单项填空1．Inonly30years,thecountryhasbeen________intoanadvancedindustrialpower.A．translated B．degradedC．declined D．transformed答案与解析：D在仅仅30年的时间里，这个国家已经成为一个发达的工业强国。

transform“改变；转变”，常与介词into连用。

trans late“翻译”；degrade“降级；退化”；decline“下降”。

2．Isthisreason________youexplainedatthemeetingfornotarrivingontime?A．theone B．/C．why D．theonehow答案与解析：A thisreason是主语，theone是表语，youexplained...是定语从句，本题中主句缺少表语成分，同时作表语的词theone又充当定语从句的先行词。

3．PremierWensaid,“Io nceagainemphasizethatitisabsolutelyunacceptabletosacrificepeople' slifeandhealth________theeconomicdevelopmentinanycase.”A．inthehopeof B．inreturnforC．inthefaceof D．inexchangefor答案与解析：D句意：温总理说：“我再强调一次，无论如何我们绝对不能牺牲人民的生命和健康来换取经济发展。

”inexchangefor“换取；作为……的交换”，符合题意。

inthehopeof“怀着……的希望”；inreturnfor“作为回报”；inthefaceof“面对”。

4．Thelocalgovernmenthasbeenaccusedofnotresponding________totheneedsofthehomeles sinthefloods-trickenarea.A．hopelessly B．appropriatelyC．needlessly D．constantly答案与解析：B句意：当地政府被指责没有对受洪灾地区无家可归人们的需求做出恰当的反应。

练习50 短文改错＋七选五＋完形填空Ⅰ.短文改错wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.Ⅱ.七选五You choose to be a winner!The Winners Club is a bank account specially designed for teenagers. It has been made to help you better manage your money.__1__●No account keeping fees.You're no millionaire so we don't expect you to pay large fees. In fact, there are no accounts keeping or transaction fees!● __2__You want your money to grow. The Winners Club has a good rate of interest which gets even better if you make at least two deposits(储蓄) without taking them out ina month.●Convenient.Teenagers are busy—we get that. __3__ With the Winners Club you can choose to bank from home using the phone or the Internet. You can have money directly deposited into your Winners Club account. This could be your pocket money or your pay from your part­time job!●Magazine included.Along with your regular report, you will receive a FREE magazine full of good ideas to make even more of your money. __4__The Winners Club is a great choice for teenagers. __5__ Simply fill in an application form and get permission from your parent. It is not so hard. It's the best way to choose to be a winner!A．Perfect Service Systems.B．Excellent interest rates.C．And it is so easy to join.D．You may never need to come to a bank at all.E．The winners Club is set up for you to save money.F．It's a club with impressive features for teenagers.G．There are also fantastic offers for Winners Club members.Ⅲ.完形填空doctors __1__ that he had only three to six months to live.The other day, when my father was sitting up in bed, I __2__ him and said, “Dad, I feel __3__ sorry for what has happened to you. You never know how much I really love you.〞 I leaned over to give him a hug, __4__ he became tense.“Come on, Dad，〞 I said. I knew showing __5__ was not our usual way of relation. I asked him to sit up some more and I tried again. This time, however, he was __6__ more tense. I was a little impatient and I could feel the old resentment (不满) starting to __7__ . For years our greeting had been a cold and formal handshake that said, “Hello, how are you？〞 My father had always been very Germanic. In his childhood, his parents must have taught him how to __8__ his feelings in order to be a __9__.Letting go of my long­held __10__ to blame him for our distance, I was actually looking forward to the __11__ of giving him more love. I said again, “Come on, Dad, put your arms around me.〞 I again leaned up close to him at the __12__ of the bed with his arms around me. __13__ happened. For an instant, a feelingof “I __14__ you〞 filled my heart. Now, both he and I waited for that momentary__15__ to happen again.1．A.advised B．apologized C．urged D．concluded2．A.supported B．encouraged C．approached D．reminded3．A.widely B．deeply C．mainly D．mostly4．A.then B．so C．and D．but5．A.affection B．responsibility C．generosity D．excitement6．A.almost B．hardly C．even D．quite7．A.pick up B．build up C．keep up D．give up8．A.shut off B．put off C．take off D．get off9．A.teacher B．son C．father D．man10．A.ability B．desire C．experience D．plan11．A.difficulty B．adventure C．challenge D．memory12．A.end B．middle C．bottom D．edge13．A.Something B．Nothing C．Everything D．Anything14．A.miss B．love C．hate D．oppose15．A.kindness B．goodness C．closeness D．happiness答题策略短文改错——名词练习50 短文改错＋七选五＋完形填空Ⅰ.短文改错答案：Since I was a kid, I've considered different jo b ①jobsI would like to do. First,I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly ②cool. Then, when I was in thefive ③fifth grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too ④very/so much. When I studied chemistry ∧⑤in/at high school, I reconsidered my goal or ⑥anddecided to be a doctor. They ⑦Therewere two reasons for the decision. One was that Iwas amazingat the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing⑧amazedthat I wanted to help people in need.a doctor. And the other is⑩was①考查名词的数。

练习45 短文改错＋阅读理解Ⅰ.短文改错I have a older and smart, with long black hair and big eye. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially that she was with family members only. Once I talked to her this problem. Feeling terrible sorry, she agreed with me but promised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She had made huge progress on that bad habit so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have so a great sister.Ⅱ.阅读理解AIn a Institute of Technology(MIT)said that they have joined forces to offer free online courses in an effort to attract millions of online learners worldwide.Beginning this fall, a number of courses developed by teachers at both universities will be offered online through a new $60 million program, known as edX. “Anyone with an Internet connection anywhere in the world can use our online courses，” Harvard President Drew Faust said during a meeting to announce the plan.MIT has offered a program called Open Course Ware for ten years that makes materials from more than 2,000 classes free online. It has been used by more than 100 million people. In December, the school announced it also would begin offering a special certificate, known as MITx, for people who complete certain online courses. Harvard has long offered courses to a wider population through a similar program.The MITx will serve as the foundation for the new learning platform.MIT President Susan Hockfield said more than 120,000 people signed up for the first MITx course. She said Harvard and MIT hope other universities will join them in offering courses on the open­source edX platform.“Fasten_your_seatbelts，” H ockfield said.Other universities, including Stanford, Yale and Carnegie­Mellon, have been experimenting with teaching to a global population online.The Harvard­MIT program will be monitored by a not­for­profit(非盈利的)organization based in Cambridge, to be owned equally by the two universities. Both MIT and Harvard have provided $30 million to start the program. They also plan to use the edX platform to research how students learn and which teaching methods and tools are most successful.1．According to this text, edX is ________.A．a part of the free MIT OpenCourseWareB．a free computer program by MIT and HarvardC．a Harvard­MIT platform of free online coursesD．a free program online for universities worldwide2．What is said about online education in the text?A．Universities have been trying online courses.B．About 2,000 online courses have been offered.C．Over 100 million people have finished courses online.D．Stanford and Yale together have courses similar to edX.3．The underlined part in the text probably m eans “________”．A．Get ready for the difficulties B．Get ready for this educational change C．Get prepared to complete the online courses D．Get prepared to make materials for the edX courses4．What can be said about MITx according to the text?A．It is first offered as part of the edX learning program.B．It is another free MIT­Harvard online learning program.C．It is a standard to recognize online learners' achievement.D．It is a new kind of free online course of Harvard and MIT.BHas it been a while since your last visit to a public library? If so, you may be surprised to learn that libraries have changed for the better. It's been years since they were dusty little rooms with books. They have transformed themselves into places where you can develop your love of knowledge, meet interesting people, or find out how to start a business.Check out a book. While libraries still loan out (出借) books, you'll find it easier to get a copy of whatever you're looking for, thanks to a cooperative network of area libraries. Via such networks, libraries share their books with each other through the use of delivery vehicles. Once the book you've requested is delivered to the nearest branch, they will inform you by e­mail, so you can pick it up.Check out other items. The library is now a multimedia zone, loaded with information in many formats (载体形式). You can borrow movies on DVDs, music on CDs, and popular magazines. Some libraries even loan out toys and games. If a popular magazine you want isn't offered and the library keeps a list of such requests, they may bring it in when enough interest is shown.Join targeted reading groups. Libraries will ofte n hold reading­group sessions targeted to various age groups. Perhaps you'd like to learn a language or improve your English. The library may sponsor a language group you could join. If you have difficulties reading, ask about special reading opportunities. Your library might be able to accommodate you. And you might find it relaxing to bring your small kid to a half­hour Story Time while you sit quietly in a corner with a good book.Start a business using the help of your local library. If you want to have a business of your own, your local library can become a launch space for it. In library books and computers, you can find information on starting a business. Many libraries will help you with locally supplied information about business management shared through chambers of commerce (商会) and government agencies, and they will offer printing, faxing and database services you need.5．Public libraries connected by a cooperative network benefit readers by________.A．sharing their books on the InternetB．giving access to online reading at a library branchC．sending a needed book to a library branch nearbyD．making the checkout procedures diverse6．According to Paragraph 3, what items may be checked out from a public library?A．A magazine and an e­book.B．A game and an oil painting.C．A music CD and a kid's toy. D．A DVD and a video player.7．As is described in Paragraph 4, taking a small kid to a half­hour Story Time allows ________.A．the kid to learn a new language B．the parent to enjoy quiet readingC．the kid to overcome reading difficulties D．the parent to meet their programsponsor8．Your local library can help you start a business by ________.A．providing relevant information and supporting servicesB．offering professional advice on business managementC．supplying useful information of your potential buyersD．arranging meetings with government officials9．What is the purpose of the passage?A．To point out the importance of public libraries.B．To encourage people to work in public libraries.C．To introduce the improved services of public libraries.D．To call for the modernization of public library systems.答题策略练习45 短文改错＋阅读理解Ⅰ.短文改错答案：I have aan older sister. Her name is Monica. H eSheis very pretty and smart, withlong black hair and big ey eeyes. She is always ready to help me and look after me. But she was used to be easy to get angry, especially tha twhenshe was with familymembers only. Once I talked to her ∧about this problem. Feeling terribl eterriblysorry,she agreed with me bu tandpromised to make a change. She also thanked me for making her aware of her problem. She ha dhasmade huge progress on that bad habit so far. Now I like her even more and I am glad I have s osucha great sister.Ⅱ.阅读理解A1．答案与解析：C 第一段中提到，Harvard和MIT联手向全球免费提供网上课程。

1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(﹨)画掉。

修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I always dream life in the future. What will it be like?Perhaps some people will go to a moon for a holiday, and some people may live under the sea and in space. Beside, probably there'll be more educational program on the Internet. And therefore, students will be able to study at home instead of go to school every day. What's more, maybe in the future each family will have a robot, that will be able to do whatever it is told, such as going to shopping, doing housework and so on.With the breakthrough of technology, I believe that their life will certainly become easier, happy and more colorful.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

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1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I’m glad to recommend my student Li Ming to you. Dur ing middle school years, he did well in several subject, including math, physics and chemistry. Later, his efforts paid off when he admitted into Beijing University majoring in physics. After that, he went to abroad for further education. Because for his excellent work and performance, he gets a doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. Today that attracts him most is our country’s great succeed and he hopes to come back home to do something for our country. I will be most gratefully if you consider his recommendation and offer him a job in your company.Looking forward to receive your early reply.Yours truly,Wang Lin 2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

精品基础教育教学资料，仅供参考，需要可下载使用！ 高考英语短文改错一轮练习及答案短文改错Dear Peter ，I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful a girl in her early twenty, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she issomeone who is interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share her our traveling experiences, and whatever we have in common. And I believe I would improve my English by doing so and learn more about his country.I look forward to hear from you soon.Yours ，Susan【参考答案：】Dear Peter ，I'm writing to ask whether you can do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopeful hopefully a girl in her early twenty twenties， and with interests similar to mine. In my mind ，she is someone who is interesting interestedin traveling, swimming ，and playing table tennis. Beside Besides ， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept that oneat home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share ∧with her our traveling experiences, and or whatever we have in common. And I believe I would willimprove my English by doing so and learn more about his hercountry. I lo ok forward to hear hearing from you soon.Yours.Susan短文改错Dear Li Lei，I am writing to provide my sincere congratulations on your graduation from senior high school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effort get rewards. I am sure your parents are great proud of you.I just want you to know how pleasing I am to witness your success. Being admitted by Peking University is a new start for you, who will bring you a good chance to learn of top professors. However, it's good for you to study with such many excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four years.Sincerely Yours，Han Meimei【参考答案】：Dear Li Lei，I am writing to provideoffermy sincere congratulations on your graduation fromsenior high school and enrollment by the Peking University. I know you ∧have worked very hard in the past years, so I am truly happy to see that all your effortget gets rewards. I am sure your parents are greatgreatlyproud of you. I just want you toknow how pleasingpleasedI am to witness your success. Being admitted by PekingUniversity is a new start for you, who which will bring you a good chance to learn of from top professors. However Besides ， it's good for you to study with such somany excellent students who of course will give you motivations to study hard. I wish you a greater success in university and live a happy and fruitful life in the next four ye ars. Sincerely Yours ，Han Meimei短文改错Dear David ，I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely apologies to you for lose the book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me. In order to give it back to you as soon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also borrow some other books in the library after I left. Unluckily, when I arrived my dormitory, I couldn't find my book. I searched all the my dormitory or the road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book. I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago. But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive my apologies.Yours Sincerely,Li Lei【参考答案】：Dear David ，I'm writing this letter to express my sincerely sincere apologies to you for lose losingthe book you lent to me. I'm very grateful you lent it to me.In order to give it back to you assoon as possible, I took it to the library yesterday. I also borrow borrowed some other books in the library after before I left. Unluckily, when I arrived ∧at /arrived reachedmy dormitory, I couldn't find my your book. I searched all the my dormitory or andthe road from the dormitory to the library. The next day I also looked for it in the library. However, I couldn't find your book. I'm sorry I can't give it back to you on time as I promised ago before . But I will buy a new one for you later. Hope you can receive acceptmy apologies. Yours Sincerely,Li Lei短文改错When it came to city and country life ，I think they all have their own advantages and disadvantages.For city life ，y ou know ，the traffic is too convenient that you can arrange your life flexible and easily.At the same time ，there are many gr eat opportunity for you when looking for jobs.Also ，there is no doubt the quality of life is fantastic.Fortunately ，living in cities ，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution.For country life ，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment isbeautiful ，which is both good for your health.However ，it is inconvenient for people to go out.Besides ，the communication is easy.【参考答案：】When it came comes to city and country life ，I think they all bothhave their own advantages and disadvantages.For city life，you know，the traffic is toosoconvenient that you can arrange your lifeflexible flexibly and easily.At the same time，there are many great opportunityopportunitiesfor youwhen looking for jobs.Also，th ere is no doubt ∧thatthe quality of life is fantastic.FortunatelyUnfortunately，living in cities，you will suffer much stress and heavy air pollution. For country life，as we all know it, the life is peaceful and the environment isbeautiful，which isareboth good for your health.However，it is inconvenient forpeople to go out. Besides，the communication isisn'teasy.短文改错Dear David，I read your message on the website coolworld say you would like to make friend witha Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect theenvironment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am a student at HongxiangHigh School. I am also interesting in the environment and would very much like toyour friend. My dad work for the local government department，which is responsiblefor things like cleaning up rivers and improving on pollution in our area.I wouldalso be happy to host you for a guest in my house so that you can find out aboutChina and the environment here for myself.Let me know that you are interested. I look forward to hear from you soon.Best wishes!Li Hua【参考答案：】Dear David，I read your message on the website coolworld saysayingyou would like to makefriendfriendswith a Chinese student who can help you understand how China is trying to protect the environment at the moment. My name is Li Hua and I am astudent at Hongxiang High School. I am also interestinginterestedin the environment andwould very much like to ∧be your friend. My dad workworksfor the local governmentdepartment，which is responsible for things like cleaning up rivers andimproving on pollution in our area. I would also be happy to host you forasa guest in my house so that you can find out about China and the environmenthere for myselfyourself.Let me know thatif you are interested. I look forward to hearhearingfrom you soon.Best wishes! Li Hua。

高中英语短文改错——一轮复习1、（2011·浙江省诸暨中学高三12月月考）下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain at that mom ent, but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return. In this way, we can get along each other happily and peacefully.答案：短文改错Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot. I was in great pain atwhen hurtthat moment, but I tried to act as if nothing ^ happened until the class was over. Though I hadhaddifficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even refused the offer of walkinghelp from my classmates. As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse. Now I know I ama in was wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him inthem return. In this way, we can get along ^ each other happily and peacefully.with2、（2011·浙江省温州市十校联合体高三上学期期末联考）On Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity, in which children and their parents play the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge(粥). Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner. Now many people on the earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. The activity was held make the families understand the differences from the poor and the rich and also to make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.答案3、（2011·浙江省温州市高三上学期五校联考）A boy who was cleaning the shoes in the street said to a young man passed by,“Let me clean your boots. It just spends you only a penny.”But the man refused. Then the boy told him that h e will clean his boots for nothing. The man agreed, and soon one of the boot shone brightly. Then he put the other boot on the box, and the boy refused to clean it if he was paid two pence for his work. The young man refused pay anything and went away. But the well-cleaning boot made the dirty one so bad that he could not walk on. He returned back and gave the boy two pence.答案1. 将第一个the去掉2. passed→passing3. spends→costs4. will→would5. boot→boots6. and→but7. if → unless8. 在pay前加to9. well-cleaning→well-cleaned 10. returned→turned或将back去掉4、（2011·浙江省温州八校高三上学期期末联考）My car just wouldn’t move any farther. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided walk around a little before accepting I’d have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn’t have to walk far before I found the small ho use standing in a field with a ligh t shone from the sitting room. I knocked at the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door but listened to my storycarefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn’t any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.答案5、（2011·浙江省嵊州二中高三12月月考试题）In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew Kennedy Airport. When he reached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, h e discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at theairport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, butwith much luck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he caught a next plane back to England.答案短文改错（满分10分）In March 1984, Dr John Fellows, who lived in England, and decided to visit his married daughter in the USA. He bought a return air ticket to New York and flew/\ Kennedy Airport. When hetoreached, however, he realized that he had forgotten his daughter’s address. Worse even, he arrived still discovered he can’t remember her family name too! Dr Fellows spent several hours at thecouldn’t eitherairport tried to think what his daughter’s name was and where it was which she lived, but trying thatwith much lu ck. Eventually, he decided that he would have to give up his plan to visit her and he nocaught a next plane back to England.the6、（2011·浙江省宁波市八校高三联考）When Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to theatre, they left their German dog to guard his home. When two burglars broke into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and he quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing, but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth over $10,000, from a safe, the dog laid down in his basket and went to sleep. When the police arrived at twenty minutes later, the burglars had gone. The dog was proud guarding the empty safe. When the first policeman entered into the room, it immediately attacked him, tearing his trousers and bit him in the leg.答案7、（2011·浙江省宁波市高三上学期期末试题）I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. I use my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course I will be very carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to bookstore on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing. Now I have two strong lock.答案：I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find∧ veryitconvenient to go anywhere with a bike. Riding gives me not only exercises but also pleasure. Iexerciseuse my bike almost in summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can be very pleasant in mostly can’t ( 或unpleasant) winter when it is cold and rain is pour down. It can also be very dangerous. Of course I will bepour ingvery carefully on my bike. In fact, accidents are not the only problem. Once I went to ∧careful a bookstore on my mother’s bike to buy some books and come out to find the bike missing. Now Icamehave two strong lock.locks8、（2011·浙江省杭州市萧山三校高三上学期期中联考）Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university ? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. Ho wever, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion , the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is agood major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.9、（2011·浙江省杭州市高级中学高三上学期第三次月考）It would be difficult to imagine modern life with the telephone. It has become an useful instrument of communication, save much time and travel b y enabling people to talk one another over great distances. Nowadays it is so easy to talk cross a continent or even overseas as it is to talk to one's next-door neighbor. Therefore, it is in emergencies which the telephone really proves its usefulness. When there is a fire , and when someone is s uddenly ill , the first thing one thinks of it is " Where is the nearest telephone?"答案1. with—without2. an –a3. save—saving4. talk—talk to或with5.so—as6. cross—across7. Therefore—However8. which—that9. and—or 10. 去掉it10、（2011·浙江省杭州二中高三11月月考试题）Dear Abby ,How are you? Today I’ve got wonderful news to tell you. I has been offered a scholarshipat a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty student tookexams for it, but only few were chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents don’tsubscribe it. They strongly against me going there. They say it is too far away that they willnot see me for a whole year. Besides, they are afraid of that I will feel lonely. They can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I can be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up? Best Wishes!Jane答案：短文改错1.has →have2. student→ students3. few → a few4. subscribe to5. are strongly6. too→ so7. 去掉of8. live→living9. can → will 10. fact that11、（2011·浙江省杭州二中高三10月月考试题）Looking at the map of the world, and we can see that three quarters of the earth are covered by water. However, we are short of water, it sounds strange to you. But it is true. You see, 97% of the total water in the world is sea water, which is so salt that man can drink it. So only 3% of the water can be drunk or used for man. And the drinkable water comes from rivers, lakes and underground. Man even can’t use them completely, because the water contains icebergs and glaciers. All what is the worst is that water in some parts has been polluted or is being polluted. How can we drink? So something must be done to protect water from polluted.答案1. and --- /2. are --- is3. it --- which4. salt --- salty5. can --- can’t / ^ not6. for--by7. them --- it8. what --- that9. drink^it 10. from ^ being12、（2011·浙江省2011届高三第一次五校联考试题）More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family. They turn to “strangers”. While they need advice, they don’t usually go to people they know. Instead many of them wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice on many different subjects included family problems, the use of language, health, cooking, child care, clothes, and even on how to buy a house or a car. Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems. Along with letters there are answers written by people who are supposed to know what to solvesuch problems. Some of these writers are doctors, others are lawyers and educators. But two of the most famous writers of advice are women who without special training for this kind of work.答案改错：More than one American child dislike getting advice from members of their family. They turn to dislikes“strangers”. While they need advice, they don’t usually go to people t hey know. Instead many of Whenthem wrote letters to newspapers and magazine that give advice on many different subject s write magazinesincluded family problems, the use of language, health, cooking, child care, clothes, and even on includinghow to buy a house or a car. Most newspapers regular print letters from readers with problems.regularlyAlong with ∧letters there are answers written by people who are supposed to know what to solve the howsuch problems. Some of these writers are doctors, others are lawyers and educators. But two of theor﹨most famous writers of advice are women who without special training for this kind of work.13.【河北省易县第二高级中学2013三模】One day, I got a full mark in maths exam and only got 50 marks in the Chinese exam．On my way home, I was in low spirits．When I arrived at home, my mother kissed me on the cheek as soon as she knew the result of maths and said she would bring me to have a nice meal in KFC as the praise．Seen her so happy ，I quick took out of my Chinese exam paper．But quite contrary to her behavior just now, he slapped me on my face heavily．At that moment, I couldn’t help cry．I understood my mother cared much for my scores than me and I felt sad．But as matter of fact, I needed my mother’s help when I have difficulty with my study rather than her slaps．14. 【贵阳市2013高考英语】Once l waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minute, no bus came.I couldn't wait any longer but decided to walk to school. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived.I thought if I had waited for one more minute,1 would have caught. If l wanted to take to the next bus,1 would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realized the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patient also plays the important part in our study and work, With it we can achieve greater.Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, we will think of the experience of wait for a bus.【参考答案】短文改错Once I waited for the bus at the stop for 30 minute , no bus came. I couldn’t wait any longer but decided to walk to my school. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught ∧. If I wanted to take to the next bus, I would have to wait for another 30 minutes. Only then did I realized the importance of patience. Being impatient will waste all the efforts that we have made. Patient also plays the important part in our study and work. With it we can achieve greater. Now, whenever I am to lose my patience, we will think of the experience of wait for a bus. 15 Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, andminutes anditthan realizePatience anwaitingIpulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself.I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character.16Dear Brad,I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last.As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future.Li Hua17Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents a re checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it.Thank you!18We spend two weeks in London last year. We went there in the autumn .We think it is the bestseason to visit England. The weather is usually good but there aren’t too many tourists in October. We stayed in a small hotel in the West End .It was convenient as we did most of our traveling by foot. We went to look at the places where all tourists see. We saw Buckingham Palace and the National Gallery.We went to shopping in Oxford Street and spent too many money .What we liked most, though, was going to theatre. We don’t have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home .A lot of people say English food is very badly. We didn’t think so. It’s true that most of the restaurants are French or Italian or Chinese, but we had some very good meal.19Tom is a senior two students who devotes himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses. In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, Tom was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they had a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Tom enjoyed fly the kite himself. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Tom was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only why he had a better weekend.答案1.1. was—were2. 去掉over3. stopped—stopping4. slows—slowed5.在pull 后加up6. immediate—immediately7. where—which/that8.them—it9. help—helping 10. but—and2.1.ask__asked 2. the__a3. Comparing__Compared4. hard___harder5.expensively___expensive6.删with7.Therefore__However8.house__houses 9.we__us 10.efforts后加to3.4.5.。