2019版高考英语二轮复习练酷版练习:专题五 习题讲评 课一 短文改错4步曲——先看词法(含解析)
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短文改错4步曲——再查逻辑two years, but he agreed.解析:but→and“我计划每两年回(乡下的爷爷奶奶家)一次”与“我父亲同意了”之间是顺承关系,不表示转折,故将but改为and。
2.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ) Everyone was silent, waiting to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.解析:and→or主语是Everyone,此处表示选择而非并列关系,因此应是“读他或她的段落”。
因此and改为or。
3.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank.解析:so→but/yet句意:上车之前,我以为我已经学会了教练的指令,但一旦我启动了汽车,我的大脑变得一片空白。
根据语境可知,前后内容之间表示转折含义,应该用转折连词but或yet。
4.(2018·石家庄检测)However, after a few days, I decided not to let one single loss keep me from doing what I love.But I cheered up and devoted myself to singing again.解析:But→So上一句说的是“我决定不让一次失败阻止我做自己喜欢做的事情”,下文是“我振作起来,重新投入唱歌中”,这两句话之间是因果关系,且为前因后果,故将But 改为So。
5.We’re on holiday in Spain now.We spent a few days in Barcelona first.It’s a great place but we had a good time though I didn’t feel well one day.解析:but→and此处表示:这是一个很棒的地方,而且我们玩得很开心。
2019届二轮复习短文改错解题指导第一、二课时题型简介新型高考改错题是在2013年首次出现在新课标全国二卷中的,它是继新课改以来,为了适应新课改的改革要求,灵活考察学生的英语语言知识水平,测试学生对语言词汇、语言习惯、固定搭配、惯有句型以及语法、整篇大意的理解和把握而新设的一道综合测试题。
这道新题型的特点具有起点高、开放性、灵活性强等特点,对学生的英语综合知识水平是一道较好的测试题。
教学目标(1)掌握改错题的出题方向和考察内容。
(2)学会有效的解题技能。
(3)正确、规范的答题。
教学重、难点1. 整体把握改错题的出题方向。
2. 观察新课标卷中近两年的改错题,并得出自己的努力方向。
3. 训练规范的答题。
教学步骤:Before class:先学任务&Warming up:假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs. Winthorp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in t he dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.Best,CarolDuring class:Step1: Discussion (group work)Work in your group and work out the key tested-points of this passage.Step2: 短文改错题命题特点1. 短文内容:与学生的学习或生活密切相关,以书信居多。
专题五短文改错短文改错4步曲——先看词法1.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)Last winter when I went there again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.解析:chicken→chickens短语dozens of“许多”,后面接可数名词复数,此处应用chicken的复数形式。
2.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.解析:sort→sorts all 修饰可数名词sort,应用其复数形式sorts。
3.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)At that moment, I remembered that my fathe r once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that includes learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”解析:mistake→mistakes根据语境可知,此处表示“从课本和错误中学习”,mistake 是可数名词,错误不止一个,因此用复数形式。
4.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turn left!”解析:word→words根据“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turn left!”可知,教练发出了三种指令,故用word的复数形式words。
5.(2016·6月浙江高考)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years later.解析:children→child根据主语I 和冠词a 可知,此处表示“当我是个孩子时”,故用child的单数形式。
2019届二轮复习短文改错解题指导教案第一、二课时一、学情分析短文改错题型相对于之前的类型有很大的变化,2013年之前新课标全国卷的短文改错将错误设置在每一行,缩小了学生完成的难度,但新题型出现之后,学生普遍觉得不适应,更有学生完全无法正确对待该题,基础较差的学生对短文改错经常是束手无策,甚至是放任不管,因为分值不是很高,但在高考中,多得一分也具有压倒性的优势,因此,让学生正确对待改错题,排除短文改错的心理障碍是提高该部分分值的直接推动力;本次课主要是在学生自己感受和体验高考改错新题型的基础上,总结改错当中有可能出现的错误,并经过小组讨论的形式,探究该题型的解题技巧,对答题规范进行训练,最后让学生用自己探索出来的解题方式解决改错中遇到的问题。
二、题型简介新型高考改错题是在2013年首次出现在新课标全国二卷中的,它是继新课改以来,为了适应新课改的改革要求,灵活考察学生的英语语言知识水平,测试学生对语言词汇、语言习惯、固定搭配、惯有句型以及语法、整篇大意的理解和把握而新设的一道综合测试题。
这道新题型的特点具有起点高、开放性、灵活性强等特点,对学生的英语综合知识水平是一道较好的测试题。
和过去的高考英语改错题相比较,新旧题型特点如下:1.旧题型要求在固定行中找出语言或语言错误,而新题型则要求在整篇中找出错误。
2.旧题型10行中可能有一处正确或全错,而新题型则在文章中有10处错误。
3.旧题型相对死板,新题型则相对灵活。
4.旧题型相对固定墨守成规和拘束,新题型相对新颖而开放式。
5.旧题型相对起点低,模式死板;新题型相对起点高,难度加大,测试效度更强。
三、教学目标1.知识与技能(1)让学生掌握改错题的出题方向和考察内容。
(2)让学生学会有效的解题技能。
(3)让学生正确、规范的答题。
2.过程与方法(1)自主学习(2)小组讨论(3)总结呈现3.情感态度价值观(1)排除解题障碍,树立解题信心。
(2)端正学习态度,认真对待考试。
专题五短文改错短文改错4步曲——先看词法(一1.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)Last winter when I went there again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.解析:chicken→chickens短语dozens of“许多”,后面接可数名词复数,此处应用chicken的复数形式。
2.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.解析:sort→sorts all 修饰可数名词sort,应用其复数形式sorts。
3.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)At that moment, I remembered that my fathe r once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that includes learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”解析:mistake→mistakes根据语境可知,此处表示“从课本和错误中学习”,mistake是可数名词,错误不止一个,因此用复数形式。
4.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turn left!”解析:word→words根据“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turn left!”可知,教练发出了三种指令,故用word的复数形式words。
5.(2016·6月浙江高考)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years later.解析:children→child根据主语I 和冠词a 可知,此处表示“当我是个孩子时”,故用child的单数形式。
短文改错4步曲——后思时态visit my grandparents. I find a big change there.解析:find→found根据前一句中的时间状语“During my last winter holiday”可知,本句讲述的是去年寒假的事情,所以此处应用一般过去时,故把find改为found。
2.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.解析:are→were根据主句的谓语“didn’t realize”和until引导的时间状语从句的谓语“entered”可知此处说的是过去的事情,应用一般过去时。
3.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin.解析:begin→begun根据语境可知,此处是过去完成时,故begin应用过去分词形式。
4.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)When summer came, they will invite their students to pick the fresh vegetables!解析:came→comes主句为一般将来时,when引导的时间状语从句中要用一般现在时表示将来;summer 为可数名词单数,故用comes。
5.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)I had grown not only physically, but also mentally in the past few years.解析:had→have由时间状语in the past few years可知,此处应用现在完成时。
6.This summer, I attended a journalism-themed summer camp, where I learn a lot.解析:learn→learned/learnt根据“This summer”和“attended”可知,learn所表示的动作发生在过去,故把learn改为learned或learnt。
2019届高三高考(全国卷)英语二轮复习专题05 高考英语短文改错专题短文改错型简介英语短文改错是高考英语第四部分写作的第一节,共1篇文章,主要考查考生在阅读理解的基础上发现并纠正短文中的词法、句法、时态、固定搭配和行文逻辑等不同类型错误的能力,特别是考查考生使用英语的熟练程度。
该题型考查形式是假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处;每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
考生还需要注意修改的格式。
知识讲解——直接重点★短文改错考生需要考虑修改的地方☆冠词1. 定冠词、不定冠词和零冠词的使用2. 固定搭配中冠词的使用☆动词1. 短文中动词的时态使用不一致2. 特定语境中时态的使用(虚拟语气、主将从现)3. 语态的使用(主动或被动)☆名词1. 可数名词与不可数名词的使用2. 固定词组中名词的使用☆代词1. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致2. it作形式主语或宾语或从句中的使用3. 不定代词或反身代词的使用☆形容词和副词1. 形容词和副词的使用:形容词修饰名词;副词修饰形容词、动词2. 比较级和最高级固定句型的使用☆非谓语动词1. 谓语动词与非谓语动词的使用2. 非谓语动词之间的使用(to do; doing; done)3. 并列结构中非谓语动词的使用☆主谓一致问题1. 主谓的人称或单复数2. 包含定语从句或强调结构中的主谓一致的使用3. 非谓语动词短语作主语或从句作主语时主谓一致的使用【例题】2016年高考英语全国Ⅱ卷假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
专题五短文改错短文改错4步曲——先看词法技法一注意可数名词单复数,不可数名词要记清,谨防名词所有格(一)1.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)Last winter when I went there again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.解析:chicken→chickens短语dozens of“许多”,后面接可数名词复数,此处应用chicken的复数形式。
2.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.解析:sort→sorts all 修饰可数名词sort,应用其复数形式sorts。
3.(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)At that moment, I remembered that my fathe r once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that includes learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”解析:mistake→mistakes根据语境可知,此处表示“从课本和错误中学习”,mistake是可数名词,错误不止一个,因此用复数形式。
4.(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turn left!”解析:word→words根据“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“Turn left!”可知,教练发出了三种指令,故用word的复数形式words。
5.(2016·6月浙江高考)When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years later.解析:children→child根据主语I 和冠词a 可知,此处表示“当我是个孩子时”,故用child的单数形式。
6.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.解析:year→years根据“from 13 to 19”可知,year用其复数形式。
7.(2018·太原阶段测评)It is one of the official language of the United Nations to develop more effective communication.解析:language→languages“one of+可数名词复数”为固定用法,故此处应用language的复数形式。
8.My favourite sport is swimming, so I decided to go swimming in the sea one afternoon with my friend, Wang Fei and Li Lei.解析:friend→friends根据该句中的“Wang Fei and Li Lei”可知,作者和两个朋友一起去游泳了。
friend为可数名词,故用复数形式。
(二)熟记不可数名词不可加-s或-es9.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.解析:informations→information information为不可数名词,没有复数形式。
10.(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.解析:knowledges→knowledge knowledge意为“知识”,为不可数名词,没有复数形式。
11.(2018·山西八校第一次联考)What’s more, I’d like to do some houseworks so that my parents can have a good rest.解析:houseworks→housework housework意为“家务”,是不可数名词,没有复数形式。
12.(2018·赣州十四县市联考)Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far, I really appreciate your support.解析:progresses→progress progress意为“进步,前进”,是不可数名词,没有复数形式。
(三)注意名词所有格13.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night.解析:Friday’s→Friday名词Friday修饰night,意为“星期五晚上”。
14.(2018·福州质量检测)But with my teammates encouragement, I was able to communicate smoothly with them.解析:teammates→teammates’由语境“在我的队友们的鼓励下”可知,teammates作定语修饰encouragement,故用其所有格形式。
15.(2018·江西五校第一次联考)In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.解析:hostess→hostess’这里指女主人的厨艺,应用名词所有格。
(一)1.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)As a kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watch them, my parents would not let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain.解析:us→me根据语境可知,谈话的宾语是“我”,故us应改为人称代词的宾格me。
2.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school.解析:all→both或去掉all Mr.and Mrs.Zhang是两个人,应用both作同位语或去掉all。
all指三者或三者以上。
3.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.解析:yourself→myself指代关系不一致,根据语境可知表示“我自己”,反身代词应该与I一致,故把yourself 改为myself。
4.(2016·四川高考)Dad cleaned the house, and then went shopping.When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.解析:her→his句意:爸爸打扫了房子,然后去购物。
当他回来时,我发现他的手里拿了一束花。
这里指爸爸的手里拿着花,故将her改为his。
5.(2018·合肥市第一次质量检测)But when I saw many people enjoying myself in the water, my fear was reducing.解析:myself→themselves enjoy oneself为固定搭配,意为“玩得开心”。
此处反身代词代指“many people”,故把myself改为themselves。
(二)仔细分析句子成分)I had done myself homework, but I was shy.解析:myself→my/the此处意为“我的作业或这次作业”,homework应用形容词性物主代词my或定冠词the修饰。
7.When kids are confused about their problems or difficulties, parents’active involvement in growth can make a great difference.解析:growth前加their此处表示父母积极参与他们(孩子)的成长过程有很大作用,故要在growth前加their(代替kids’)以使语意更加明确。
8.(2018·石家庄检测)I just kept feeling sorry for me.However, after a few days, I decided not to let one single loss keep me from doing what I love.解析:第一个me→myself句子的主语是I,“我”为“我自己”感到难过,故要用反身代词。
(三)牢记两组代词区别many代替可数名词,much代替不可数名词;表示“别的;另外的;其他的”用other,表示“(三者或三者以上)另外的一个”用another。
9.(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals.解析:another→other another“又一,再一”,后接单数可数名词;复数可数名词前用other“其他的,别的”,此处表示“有狗、鸭子,还有其他的动物”,所以应该用other。
10.(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.解析:many→much此处应用代词much指代much money,作动词cost的宾语;many通常指代可数名词复数。