2019版高考英语一轮复习精选题辑写作专练(一) Word版含解析
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写作专练(一) 写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，
满分10分) (2018·辽宁省五校协作体高三上学
期联合模拟) Challenges of life are of great
importance in our grow.They remind me my
days in senior high school which I joined in the
military training.It was the first time I have
lived away from my home，so I found it
difficult to fit in.And the training officer was
strict in me.I once thought I couldn't stick to
the end.But anyway，I was succeeded.The
trials made it much easy for me to adapt to life，
but the difficulties I came across have now
become a precious memory in my life.In short，
learning to regard the challenges of life as the
stepping stone to future success and make the
best of them. 【答案】 Challenges of life are
of great importance in our grow.They remind
growth
me ∧ my days in senior high school which
I joined in the military ofwhen training.It was
the first time I have lived away from my home，
so I had found it difficult to fit in.And the
training officer was strict in me.I once
withthought I couldn't stick to the end.But
anyway，I succeeded.The was trials made it
much easy for me to adapt to life，but the
difficulties I easierandcame across have now
become a precious memory in my life.In short，
learning to regard the challenges of life as the
stepping stone to future learna success and
make the best of them. 第一处：grow改为
growth。考查名词。根据空前的形容词性物
主代词our可知，应将grow改为growth。
第二处：在me后加of。考查固定搭配。此
处remind sb.of sth.意为“使某人想起某事”，
为固定搭配。 第三处：which改为when。考
查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，senior high
school后为定语从句，先行词为days且从句
中不缺少成分，故应将which改为when，在
句中作时间状语。 第四处：have改为had。
考查时态。在It was the first time(that)句型中，
从句中谓语动词用过去完成时，故将have改
为had。 第五处：in改为with。考查固定搭
配。此处be strict with sb.意为“对某人严格”，
为固定搭配。
第六处：删除was。考查语态。此处
succeed为不及物动词，没有被动语态，故将
was删除。 第七处：easy改为easier。考查
形容词比较级。根据语境及句中much可知，
此处表示更加容易，故用形容词比较级。 第
八处：but改为and。考查连词。根据语境可
知，上下文之间是顺承关系，故将but改为
and。 第九处：learning改为learn。考查祈使
句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个祈使句，
与下文中的“make the best of them”构成并列
结构，故将learning改为learn。 第十处：the
改为a。考查冠词。此处表示一个垫脚石，表
示泛指，且stepping的发音以辅音音素开头，
故将the改为a。 第二节 书面表达(满分25
分) (2018·临沂模拟) 假定你是李华，你在学校
举行的主题为“My Dream”的英语演讲比赛中
获得了一等奖，并即将参加颁奖典礼。请你
用英语写一篇获奖感言，内容包括： 1．获奖
感受； 2．表达谢意； 3．你的打算。 注意：
1.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi，
everyone，
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_____________ 【范文赏读】 Hi，everyone，
I feel so honored to have won the first prize in
this English speech contest.It's really a big
surprise for me as there are so many excellent
speakers. Standing here，I first owe my success
to my dear teacher，Ms.Li.It
