2017高考英语二轮复习与策略讲练：专题3 应用文写作 类型2 建议信 含解析
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类型2| 建议信
1．写作目的：建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
2．写作方法
(1)首段：
a．简介自己，不要啰嗦；
b．说明目的，注意语气。
(2)主体：
a．提出具体建议；
b．首先肯定优点，再写需改进内容，否则变成投诉信；
c．经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提升你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。
(3)尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，盼望回复。
假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复：
1．建议骑自行车上学；
2．自行车是学生常用的交通工具；
3．骑自行车的一些好处；
4．骑自行车需注意的问题。
注意：词数80左右。
[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文
Dear Andrew，
As for the question about the transportation to and
from school，I'd like to recommend your riding ①
bicycle.Here are some reasons. 1.避免词汇搭配错误
④处careful改为carefully
⑤处By改为In
2.杜绝语法错误 ② (骑自行车上、下学在学生中是很常见的。)As is well-known，buying or repairing a bicycle
doesn't cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our
school.Bicycle-riding is also a way to do ③exercises
and protect the environment.What you should do
④careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while
riding and lock it after you're off it.⑤By this way，you'll feel it simple and ⑥relax to ride a bicycle
while you're here.
Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua ①处添加冠词a
③处exercises改为exercise
⑥处relax改为relaxing
3.要点一定不要遗漏
补上②处要点：Riding a bike
to
and from school is very
common among the students.
[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进
Dear Andrew，
As for the question about the transportation to and from school，I'd
like to recommend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons.
Firstly，①riding a bike to and from school is very common
among the students，for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost
a lot.Next，parking a bicycle is easy and ② (便利的)in
our school.③ (事实上)，bicycleriding is also a ④
(实用的)way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you
should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding
and lock it after you're off it.In this way，you'll feel it simple and
relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.
Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua 1.高级词汇
②convenient
③Actually/As a
matter of fact
④practical
2.高级句型
用it is common
practice to do...改写句①加黑部分：it is
common
practice for the
students to ride
a bike to and
from school
