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中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)

中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)

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Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:

中考英语作文讲评课(精品)PPT课件

中考英语作文讲评课(精品)PPT课件

The following points are for your reference: (所给
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy".
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
The best way to make me happy is achieving good marks. I think this way is the best one to make me happy because it is the easiest ways and it can improve my ability so I think it is the best way. In this way, I can get some prizes, so I will feel happy, what’s more it can also make my parents happy.

【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)

【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.

2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)

2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
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河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank

初中英语作文讲评课件(PPT18张)

初中英语作文讲评课件(PPT18张)
injured. When we do sports, do not get ourselves injured. 3. School hallways is always not wide, so don't crowded
when you up and down stairs. School hallways are always not wide enough, so don't
In short, follow what you learnt at school. You can be safe and you can also help save others.
书面表达
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is very important to us students.
1.When we do sports, don't get ourselves injured. 2.School hallways are too narrow, so don't crowd
when we go upstairs or downstairs. 3.Don't quarrel or fight with classmates. 4.Keep clear of fires and don't play with fire. 5.Don't eat junk food.
____________________________________________________人____称______：____第____一______人____称____w____e__，______I________

中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)

中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)

2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…

中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)

中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)

看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
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2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)

2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)

Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.

国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件

国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件

国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件Winning a national first prize in the high school entrance examination English composition is a great achievement for any student. It requires not only excellent language skills but also creativity and critical thinking.在中学升学考试英语作文中获得国家级一等奖是任何学生的伟大成就。

这不仅需要出色的语言技能，还需要创造力和批判性思维。

When I received the news that I had won the national first prize, I was overjoyed and felt a sense of accomplishment. It was a recognition of the hard work and dedication I had put into improving my English writing skills.当我得知自己获得国家级一等奖时，我感到无比高兴，也感到一种成就感。

这是对我提高英语写作技能所付出的努力和奉献的认可。

Writing a winning English composition requires not only proficiency in English grammar and vocabulary but also the ability to expressone's thoughts and feelings clearly and creatively. It is a blend of technical skills and artistic talent.撰写一篇获奖的英语作文不仅需要精通英语语法和词汇，还需要清晰、富有创造力地表达自己的思想和感情。

2023年中考英语作文课件(共30张PPT).ppt

2023年中考英语作文课件(共30张PPT).ppt
一、外貌：1. 描述让My你难fa忘v（or帮i助te过你te）a的ch一e件r 事i情s 、M感r.想（Wa体n会g.）、He祝福is（祝ha愿n）dsome and of medium build. 2. My best friend is Linda. She is a beautiful girl with
- instead of/ rather than junk food diet
同类话题： Survey of Pocket Money Spending
§ buy books --- （课余生活、兴趣爱好、减压）§ buy snacks ---
全国中考英语写作真题之健康类 谈“关爱健康” 话题：中学生健康其他真题案例：河南 长沙； 成
都；大连；潍坊 等健康一直是人们关注的问题，你校要举行“关爱健康” 为题的主题班会。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。保持健康的重要性； 保持健康的方法：1. 多吃水果蔬菜；2. 每天锻炼一小时；3. 早睡早起； 4. 勤洗手；自己的看法（至少一条）
第三档：(8~5分)部分内容符合题目要求，要点 不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺， 表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：(4~0分 )与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所 写内容难以理解。
10字原则：结构 要点 逻辑 语法 亮点
官方范文是个宝 --叙事汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩 （Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7小时到达安全地点。
was XXX who encouraged me. With his help, I can play
basketball as well as he does now.
六、感想（体会） I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend. He always holds on to achieve his dream. That is his best quality I should learn from him. -----I feel lucky to have such a good teacher / friend who always holds on to achieve his dream, which is his best quality that I should learn form him.感 想 / 体会 / 感受 模板：

国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件

国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件

国家级一等奖中考英语作文公开课课件National First Prize Junior High School English Essay Public Class PPTGood morning, everyone! Today, I am honored to present to you our National First Prize Junior High School English Essay Public Class PPT. In this presentation, we will cover the key points of writing an outstanding English essay, as well as provide you with tips and techniques to improve your writing skills.1. Introduction:- Brief introduction of the importance of English writing skills.- Overview of the topics covered in the presentation.2. Structure of an English Essay:- Introduction: The opening paragraph that introduces the topic and sets the tone for the essay.- Body: The main part of the essay where the arguments and supporting evidence are presented.- Conclusion: The closing paragraph that summarizes the main points and provides a final thought.3. Tips for Writing an Outstanding Essay:- Develop a clear thesis statement that conveys the main idea of the essay.- Use proper grammar, punctuation, and spelling to enhance readability.- Organize your thoughts and ideas coherently to ensure a logical flow of information.- Use varied vocabulary and sentence structures to make your writing more engaging.4. Techniques for Improving Writing Skills:- Practice writing regularly to build fluency and confidence.- Read quality English literature to expand your vocabulary and improve your writing style.- Seek feedback from peers and teachers to identify areas for improvement.- Revise and edit your work to refine your writing and eliminate errors.5. Conclusion:- Recap of the main points covered in the presentation.- Encouragement to apply the tips and techniques learned to enhance your English writing skills.In conclusion, mastering the art of English essay writing is a valuable skill that can benefit you both academically and professionally. By following the tips and techniques outlined in this presentation, you can improve your writing skills and achieve success in your English assignments. Thank you for your attention, and best of luck with your writing endeavors!。

中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)

中考英语写作指导优质课件(共38张PPT)
要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 80词左右。
健康的身体和保持愉悦的心情就变得尤为重要。请
Bad sample（0-3分）
• Students healthy is important. Even though have a good hard. But haven't healthy is not good. • Have a good fit is very important.
I want to have a mountain bike There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows. First of all, a mountain bike can be very useful because riding it to school can save a lot of time. I needn’t worry about being late any more. Besides, it’s also helpful for me to take some exercise. I believe I will lead a healthier life. What’s more, when I go out with friends, it will be more convenient to ride a mountain bike than taking the bus.
3.转折关系 but, while 4.因果关系 for, so,

中考英语作文指导课件(7PPT)

中考英语作文指导课件(7PPT)

04
Student essay ments and revision suggestions
Response to…
Adherence to the given topic or task.
Common Problems in English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
01
02
03
04
Lack of Development
Frequent errors in grammar or spelling detract from the overall quality.
Lack of support or evidence to back up claims or arguments.
05 Weaktransit…
Lack of smooth transitions between ideas or paragraphs.
Body
Develop your main ideas and论证details with clear explanations and examples.
Conclusion
Summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader.
• Writing Skills and Strategies • Analysis of Common Themes and Model
Writings
目录
CONTENTS
• Student essay ments and revision suggestions

中考英语作文指导教学优秀课件(共46张PPT)【完美版】

中考英语作文指导教学优秀课件(共46张PPT)【完美版】
开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 开门见山式
回忆式开头
疑问式开头
倒叙式开头

中考英语作文指导教学优秀课件(共46 张PPT) 【完美 版】
三、 加.
加首尾，使结构完整。 • 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，
开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 自然结尾，点明主题 首尾呼应，升华主题 反问结尾，引起深思
一、掌握正确的写作技巧非常重要
Exa据mp报le 1道韩国将用电子课本取代学校的纸质课本。某英文报 “学生习作”专栏正就“Paper Books or E-books?”这一话 题征文。请你根据下面提供的信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投 稿，并谈谈你的看法。
E-books 1. Easy to take 2. Protect environment 3. Look up easily
河北省中考作文评分标准
第一档（13-15分） 信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响
意思表达。 第三档（7-9分） 能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子
基本可读。 第四档（4-6分） 只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量
Paper books
1.Take notes 2.Practice handwriting 3.Bad for eyes
注意：1.短文应包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使行 文连贯；2.词数不少于80。题目和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 It’s reported that all schools in Korea will use e-books instead of paper books at school.

中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)

中考英语作文指导优秀课件(共27张PPT)

高级词汇替换 1．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 2．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.
我们应该保护环境。
A
B
We should protect the environment.
It’s our duty to prot词
• Dear Daddy, • It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it. • I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the At first mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. Unluckily ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to so you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted However to give that up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not Finallyand to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain enjoyed the beauty of the nature there. • Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up! • Happy Father’s Day! • Yours, • Mike

(精选幻灯片)中考英语作文讲评课(优秀课件)

(精选幻灯片)中考英语作文讲评课(优秀课件)

a way to make me happy. Everyday we
have PE lesson. These are a lot of interests
in it. So I feel happy in this way.
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The following points are for your reference: (所给
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
there are a lot of ways to make me happy.
The best way to make me happy is to play
basketball. To play computer games is also
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
3
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
4
Free talk
What should we write about? What shouldn’t we (only) write about?
1. My school life 2. My dream teacher 3. The thing I hate to do 4. My opinions of keeping pet dogs 5.The best way to make me happy
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people cross the road and play with small children.
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
make me happy is achieving good marks. I think this way is the best one to make me happy because it is the easiest ways and it can improve my ability so I think it is the best way. In this way, I can get some prizes, so I will feel happy, what’s more it can also make my parents happy.
The following points are for your reference: (所给
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy".
The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)
1. 与生活相关 2. 与“我”相关
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". ( 以“最能使 我快乐的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的 短文，标点符号不占格) The following points are for your reference: (所给提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy?
Leaving school（毕业时分） Growing pains and gains（成长的烦恼与欢乐） I have a dream（我有一个梦想） Things I hate to do（我不喜欢。。。） Love around me（我身边的爱) I want to do something for my school(我为学校做件事） I’m proud of myself（我为自己感到自豪）
The following points are for your reference: (所给
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to
make you happy?
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容（7分）+语言（8分）+文采（3分） 一、认真审题，结构合理
The following points are for your reference: (所给
提示仅供参考)
1. What are the ways to make you happy?
2. Which way do you think is the best one to make
you happy?
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
the best way to make me happy is to help
another. When I feel sad, I can help another,
because I hope the others happy. I can help old
*写什么 (题目，参考问题）
Free talk
What should we write about? What shouldn’t we (only) write about?
1. My school life 2. My dream teacher 3. The thing I hate to do 4. My opinions of keeping pet dogs 5.The best way to make me happy
3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at
least two reasons)
内容不全
there are a lot of ways to make me happy. The best way to make me happy is to play basketball. To play computer games is also a way to make me happy. Everyday we have PE lesson. These are a lot of interests in it. So I feel happy in this way.